Teras wrote:

Mr. rofl
Here I am with mah ninja mod. that made me laugh xD

Just some random suggestions for the hitsounding mainly. Duh.

[Hard]

00:53:505 Put the finish here. Not on the end of the slider.
00:56:838 Add finish.
1:01:838 Add whistle.

[Insane]

00:13:505 Add finish.
00:29:338 New combo? That stream is kinda long.
00:55:797 Remove new combo
00:56:838 I would put the finish on this slider here instead of the end of it. Also. I would recommend that you increase it's length by 1/2 tick.
1:27:255 I would move this spinner 1/2 tick forward and then put a note here. Note that you will have to shorten the spinner if you do this.

Leorda wrote:

Ahai

[General]
Delete OSB theres no osb in my folder o.o

[Easy]
Increase the HP Drain? ok

00:06:838 (1) - Remove clap?
00:07:255 (2) - Clap?
00:07:671 (3) - Remove clap?
00:08:088 (4) - Clap at start?
00:09:755 (1) - Clap?
00:10:172 (2) - Remove clap?
00:10:588 (3) - Clap?
00:11:005 (4) - Remove clap at start and add clap at end?
01:03:505 (1) - Remove clap?
01:03:922 (2) - Clap?
01:04:338 (3) - Remove clap?
01:06:838 (1) - ^
01:07:255 (2) - Clap?
01:07:672 (3) - Remove clap?
01:08:088 (4) - Clap at start?
01:09:755 (1) - Clap?
01:10:172 (2) - Remove clap?
01:12:255 (3) - Remove clap at end and add clap at start?
01:13:088 (4) - Clap?
01:16:838 (3) - Remove clap? all done except this one

[Normal]
Try add clap on 2nd and 4th white tick will try to

00:26:005 (4) - Make symetric? done
00:49:130 (3) - Extend to white tick?done
01:00:588 (3) - Not stack perfectly with 00:59:963 (2) at end fixed

[Hard]
Try add clap on 2nd and 4th white tick will try to

00:24:130 (2) - Not stack perfectly with 00:23:505 (1) at end fixed
00:50:171 (1) - Finish? ok

[Insane]
00:03:088 (2) - Not stack with 00:02:255 (4) fixed

I can't find something wrong ･ﾟ･(ﾉД`;)･ﾟ･
Great song
STAR

P.S It's okay if you mod some crappy mod

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi ninja sorry for the delay ;_; it's alright

[General]
- I don't like the custom clap, it's too sharp. The normal hitsound (non-costum) just like on Teras' diff, sounds good imo or maybe you can lower the volume of the soft-hitclap file hmm...
- Please add something on Teras' diff name, only Teras' as diff name feels like it lacking some impact
- Umm...the tags are too long and I'm too lazy to check it. Well, as long as Teras is on the tags it's fine might remove a few then

[Easy]
00:32:463 (4) - a note on 1/2 beat will confuse novice player especially if the majority of the notes before are on 1/1 beat, so I suggest to move this back 1/2 beat to white tick then lengthen the slider 1/2 beat to red tick ok
00:57:880 (1) - this is fine cause there are time for the player to pause and the song is there to guide them
01:04:338 (3) - same case as above, my suggestion is to delete this then move 01:04:963 (4) to where (3) was ^
01:16:838 (3) - NC done
01:27:255 (1) - remove finish ^

[Normal]
00:36:838 (4) - change to finish is better imo done
00:56:838 (3) - add finish on the start of the slider and remove the one on the end ^
01:03:505 (3) - NC ^
01:16:838 (2) - ^ ^
01:27:046 (1) - remove finish ^

[Hard]
00:17:255 (5) - this 0.5 slider is very too sloppy, try using 0.7x or 0.8x speed or a spinner ill keep this for now
00:36:838 (3) - finish is better :3 done
00:50:796 (3) - put the whistle on the start and the end only, this sound weird because of the whistle sliderslide ^
00:51:838 (6) - ^ ^
00:55:796 (6) - ^ ^
00:59:963 (3,4) - if possible please put the start of the (4) slider above the (3) slider ^
01:27:255 (1) - remove finish ^

[Insane]
00:17:255 (2) - same problem as in hard diff again, ill keep it for now
01:07:046 (3) - the jump is a little weird, most of your jump on the kiai time is a jump between slider on the end of every lyric. That's why I feel this is a little out of place ok,changed
01:27:463 (1) - remove finish done

Good map and Good Luck ninja

Sallad4ever wrote:

[Teras']
00:17:046 (1) - shorten this by 1/1 beat than add a note at 00:20:172 I prefer how it is right now
00:27:672 (3) - if you're following the music shouldn't this be a single note and 00:27:984 (4,5) - should be move back by 1/4 beat? Nah, I love my type of mapping. And I use these alot. So I will keep it as it is. Then about the diff name. I dunno what to call it.

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*mp3 sounds a bit strange (quality-wise). Starts out sounding great (perhaps 320kbps quality), but then for the rest of the song it's low and questionable. Can you try to find a higher bitrate (max of 256kbps) mp3 for this map? Ill look into is then
*Are all of the tags really necessary? o-o; not really
*The ending spots for kiai could be more consistent throughout the difficulties. Right now they end at different spots or in the middle of spinners. =s ok
*180 offset sounds better, but if you find a new mp3 it won't matter. :c changed for now

[Easy]
00:16:422 (1) - expected this to be a lower volume (or gradually decreasing towards silence). gradually decreased

[Normal]
*Difficulty settings are a bit low. I suggest raising drain, overall difficulty, and approach rate one tick each. ok
00:17:047 - expected a note here added
00:45:797 (1) - this is a bit too sudden for a Normal diff, so I suggest removing it. changed to a slider

[Hard]
00:23:088 (6,7,8,1) - (nazi) could you move 6,7,8 up and to the left a grid so that 8 doesn't overlap 1? Actually, do the same for 00:21:846 (1,2) too (since I thought they were a stream). done
00:32:463 (1) - Fine as opposed to Normal's.
00:40:171 (1) - A bit short (even for hard). leaving this one for now

[Insane]
00:39:130 (6,7) - Actually, I expected 6 to be the longer slider and 7 the shorter one o-o; ill think about that one

[Teras']
*Some evil streams near the beginning; mainly 00:15:588 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), but orz

Odaril wrote:

Teras'
Mind renaming this to Teras' Insane ? Nah
Also it's overmapped. None of the streams make sense, the ones that could have made sense being wasted by unneeded notes that were added for the sake of having streams. Since it's you modding i won't even take this comment seriously. Cuz from what i've seen in your posts. A lot of maps are overmapped huh.
00:15:621 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This plays terribly bad: sharp angles on a 1/4 stream Not really, not bad enough to make me change it.
00:23:225 (8,9,1) - This is not readable because of the hitburst from (7) Why can all the people i've watched play this not miss that note then?
00:56:871 (7) - This slow down is way too sudden and unexpected considering how the whole diff played fast so far, and nothing in the song calls for such a slow down Well, I do think something calls for a slow down here, thanks for your opinion though.. I'll keep that in mind if someone else complains.
01:11:246 (6,7,8) - nothing calls for these jumps, I consider it's a spacing error I suppose you're right, fixed.
01:27:288 (14) - Very confusing as well although not as unexpected as 00:56:871 (7)

CDFA wrote:

Teras

Shit's overmapped.

DiamondCrash wrote:

CDFA wrote:

Teras

Shit's overmapped.

Jarby wrote:

Resnap your inherited sections on all difficulties, you seem to have forgotten.

Normal:

00:13:121 (1,2,3) - Center these for bonus Jarby points.
00:16:246 (1,2) - This is not how we effectively use spacing. Distance snap, go.
00:52:496 (6,7) - These are not delicious. Please consult RandomJibberish's guide for delicious guidance.

Insane:

This difficulty is basically just a harder version of Hard, right? It's also far worse because of the poorly applied spacing changes and jumps. I don't think it's a good diea to keep this dead weight on your map.

Hard:

00:48:538 (5,6) - These are not delicious. Please consult RandomJibberish's guide for delicious guidance.

Jarby wrote:

Teras':

Overmapped Underhitsounded. Yeah, nothing is wrong with how you mapped it, but I find your usage of hitsounds to be particularly bland. Might want to use more than just the clap at the chorus, yeah. I do use other hitsounds, so I don't see the problem here. Although..yeah, I have absolutely no idea about what hitsounds I should use in the chorus.
00:40:204 (8) - This is an abomination of a slider. Try again without 21 red anchor points arranged in a misshapen zig-zag. Ugh, good point that. Fixing it
00:56:871 (7,1) - Increase spacing, that's confusing. It would help if the slowdowns were at around 75% as well. Fixed.
01:26:246 (10) - New combo for great justice. Done.