^Quite a language ya got there :thinking:
M4M via in-game req
[Hell Oni]
00:09:913 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - Suggestion, instead of making it all kat keep it relatively similar to the other patterns you've used before and add some dons where appropriate, for instance 00:09:994 (80) - and 00:10:320 (84) - if you disagree, then one thing I definitely think is worth point out is you skipped a snare hit on 00:10:483, as it's rankable to end streams with a finisher in cases where the color of the note before it is opposite to the finisher color, I HIGHLY recommend putting a kat on 00:10:483.
00:25:564 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230) - The guitar sounds are holding over here with no other hits occuring on relatively the last half of this pattern, I'd suggest removing ONLY 00:25:890 (228) - or ALL 00:25:890 (227,228,229) - .
00:48:062 (452,453,454,455) - Keep it the same as the 1/6 plet you had before, kkkd or change the one before to dkkd as well. It's the exact same sound, so keep it consistent.
00:52:301 (499) - This sounds the same as 00:47:084 (442) - , and 00:48:388 (456) - , and 00:49:693 (470) - which are all kat. Consistency.
00:53:714 (514,515,516) - I don't see any sound here that needs 1/3 plotting. I'd much rather it be a continuation of 7-plet patterns, and the one I'd recommend after 00:53:116 (507,508,509,510,511,512,513) - would be ddkkdkD.
00:56:323 (537,538) - I get the 1/3 sounds cool and everything, but again they're not needed. I suggest continuing to emphasize the vocal and just simply get rid of these 2 notes (and replace them with a 1/2 note on a red tick if you see it fit.)
00:58:931 (556,557) - Same as above^
Quite frankly I do see why you're mapping them as 1/3 but actually a more accurate representation of the guitar you're mapping is dkkkD, and because you already have a pattern going is the reason I'm suggesting vocal emph. and continuing with 7-plet patterns.01:01:540 (578,579,580) - Now this is correct 1/3.
01:23:522 - You skipped another snare hit here
02:07:215 (1233) - I recommend taking this note out to stick with the 5-plet patterns that are before this.
02:09:171 - I recommend adding a note here to fit the 7-plet pattern here
03:17:075 (1932,1933,1934,1935,1936,1937,1938,1939,1940,1941,1942,1943,1944,1945,1946,1947,1948) - I highly recommend changing this to the following:
(Cursor at 03:19:890) Although I understand that the ~30 second stream is standard for difficulty, there's a hit that's worth being emphasized on 03:18:379 (1948) - and because you can't have finsher notes in the middle of the streams, it'll require a 1/2 break to keep it clean.
04:01:750 (2366,2367,2368,2369) - :thinking: I'm really struggling with this, I think it works as both 1/4 and 1/3. I'll let other people decide on this one >.<
04:53:600 (2866,2867,2868,2869,2870,2871,2872,2873,2874,2875,2876,2877,2878,2879,2880,2881,2882) - Same thing I mentioned iat 03:17:075 - ^^
And that will rap things up. Cool song, good luck w/ rank~