PizzarollMC wrote:

Conclusion

SPOILER

overall, i think this is a really nice mapset! i love how bouncy the song is, and your maps reflect it pretty well. keep working on mapping to improve yourself though! ask me if you don't understand anything i brought up, i've been told i phrase things weird lol

also are you open for gd's hehe

[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:

Crissaegrim's Swiftness

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Version:Crissaegrim's Swiftness
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:制作決定記念 オリジナル楽曲コンテスト Production Confirmation Commemorative Original Song Contest SDVX
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134,108,102056,1,12,0:0:0:0:
316,320,102272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
337,173,102380,2,0,P|248:188|188:244,1,170.000006484986,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,356,102704,5,12,0:0:0:0:
337,173,102921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
134,108,103029,2,0,L|88:136,4,42.5000016212464,10|2|10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,36,103353,5,12,0:0:0:0:
4,196,103569,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,32,103677,1,12,0:0:0:0:
184,336,103894,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,172,104002,2,0,B|244:220|244:220|276:288|276:288|276:348,1,170.000006484986,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,172,104326,5,12,0:0:0:0:
56,248,104542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,336,104650,1,12,0:0:0:0:
204,105,104866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,249,104975,2,0,B|198:249|198:249|266:281|266:281|326:281,1,170.000006484986,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,105,105299,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105407,5,2,0:0:0:0:
306,104,105515,5,2,0:0:0:0:
254,16,105623,6,0,P|160:12|100:84,1,170.000006484986,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,184,105948,6,0,B|156:192|156:192|192:280,1,170.000006484986,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,256,106272,2,0,P|177:191|250:217,1,170.000006484986,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,292,106596,2,0,L|216:116,1,170.000006484986,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,4,106921,2,0,P|140:24|104:64,2,85.0000032424928,14|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,0,107245,5,14,0:0:0:0:
264,292,107461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,242,107569,2,0,P|364:173|288:140,1,170.000006484986,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,127,107894,2,0,P|224:172|280:212,2,85.0000032424928,14|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,4,108218,1,14,0:0:0:0:
412,242,108434,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,291,108542,6,0,B|324:291|324:291|356:247|356:247|432:239,1,170.000006484986,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,312,108866,2,0,P|352:280|392:172,1,170.000006484986,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,112,109191,1,14,0:0:0:0:
400,56,109299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,75,109407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,158,109515,2,0,B|244:200|244:200|256:256,1,85.0000032424928,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,340,109731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,56,110056,5,2,0:0:0:0:
400,56,110164,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,158,110380,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,160,110488,6,0,B|188:172|124:140|124:140|124:208|92:260|92:260|20:212|20:212|44:172|40:104,1,425.000016212464,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,130,111137,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111245,12,0,114380,0:0:0:0:

❤

c418vgytre wrote:

i love this song hype lol.

[-Crissaegrim-] wrote:

como se modea aqui? -.--------- uwuwuwu

GRAVITY

00:01:677 (3) - creo q este podria ser un kickslider, como en el 4 no hay un beat muy fuerte no se siente del todo bien representado
yo lo veo bien, lo dejare asi por el momento owo
00:03:785 (5) - si silencias la colita creo q quedaria mejor ovo (00:05:407 (5) - 00:08:975 (5) - etc) verdad, thanku<3

00:12:218 (6,7) - encuentro q quedaria mejor reemplazar estos 2 con un slider, el 7 no tiene un sonido fuerte como para tener un circulo, algo asi
verdad x2, thanku<3


00:13:839 (1,2,3,4) - podrias hacer q se vea un poquito mas ordenado, una linea recta o curva quedaria mejor done

00:16:434 (1) - aqui el beat de la cola tiene la misma intensidad, podrias probas como queda con 2 sliders cortos se vee un poco raro, pero lo dejare con sliders cortos igual.

00:20:326 (9,1) - algo parecido a lo de mas arriba, podrias reemplazar estos 2 por un slider q cubra el 1 con la cola, creo q quedaria mejor queda mejor <3 thanku

00:22:596 (4) - intenta acortarlo un poquito al tick azul y reemplazar la cola con un circulo done

00:23:083 (5,6,7,1,2) - podrias empezar todos estos sliders en el tick rojo en vez del blanco, ahi es donde empieza el sonido mas fuerte, puedes mantenerlo asi como esta si quieres, no esta mal tampocouwu

lo dejo asi entonces uwu

00:27:137 (1,1) - podrias quitar estos nc, no son necesarios casi nunca me fijo donde cambio el combo xD ,thanks<3

00:32:002 (1) - y si subes un poquito el sv aqui? para enfatizar los gritos done!, aunque siento que queda igual.

00:41:083 (1) - quedaria mejor si lo reemplazas con jumps creo yo, la intensidad de la cola es la misma q la cabeza lo dejare como esta por el momento

00:43:677 (9) - podrias dejar este un poco mas cerca del 8, no tiene la misma intensidad q el jump 7-8 cierto, done

00:56:326 (8,1,3) - NC al 8, le sacas el NC al 1 y NC al 3, creo q quedaria mejor asi lo mismo.. casi nunca me fijo donde cambio el combo qwq, thanku<3

01:03:137 (1,2) - podrias intentar esto aqui, el angulo actual de 01:03:623 (4,5,6) - es un poco incomodo por ser tan abierto <3

01:06:380 (4,1) - podrias hacer q la transicion fuera un poquito mas fluida visualmente, algo asi, rote por 50 y movi un poco hacia abajo verdad, thanku <3. le baje un poco el audio en esa parte tambien

01:17:407 - hay muchas inconsistencias de ritmo en esta seccion
01:18:704 (2,3,4) - 01:20:001 (2,3) - 01:21:542 (2,3,4,5) - 01:24:866 (5) - 01:25:839 (3,4,5) - 01:26:488 (1,2,3,4) - 01:29:245 (2,3,4) -
recuerda q TODOS tienen q estar snapeados a 1/3

uuuh habria jurado que estaban en 1/3 ,por eso se veia extraño ;;
done!

01:32:650 (3) - siento q quedaria mejor como 1/6 done

01:36:866 (3) - se siente un poco fuera de lugar, como has usado todo el rato sliders curvos simples en este tipo de sonidos, podrias cambiarlo para q sea igual q los otros done

01:40:758 (1,2,3) - el wub wub quedaria mejor representado con un reverse, 01:41:731 (1) - como lo hiciste aqui

me gusta como esta, lo dejare asi

01:43:029 (3) - lo mismo del 1/6 done

el 2do kiai es como tu jj q? xDDDDDD

EXHAUST

00:01:515 (1) - quedaria bien un nc done

00:01:677 (3) - podrias aplicar lo mismo q dije en la GRAVITY del kickslider se ve un poco raro, lo dejo como esta, como hice en el anterior

00:09:948 (4) - nc, cambio de sv y sonido prominente, podrias quitarle el nc a 00:11:569 (1) - este igual si se lo pones al primero ovo done

00:16:677 (2) - podrias borrar este circulito y 00:16:758 (3,4,5) - poner estos un poco mas lejos, el 2 se siente un poco raro de jugar como no hay ningun sonido soportandolo done

00:20:650 (1) - intenta reemplazar este con 2 circulos, siento q quedaria mejor asi done

00:20:975 (1,1) - estos nc no son necesarios done

00:22:596 (4) - nc uwu done

00:50:812 (1,2) - creo q es un poquito fome este patron para representar estos sonidos, recomendaria hacer lo mismo q haces el resto de veces para mantener la consistencia (00:48:218 (1,2,3) - ) done

voy a dejarte unos patrones de nc q creo q quedarian bien igual, ahi ves si quieres usarlos
00:48:866 (4) - nc 00:51:461 - nc si aplicas lo que te dije antes 00:56:975 (1) - nc y quitas 00:57:299 (1) - este 00:58:758 (5) - nc 01:01:353 (7) - nc
y asi, marque con nc los sonidos de los repeats, mas que nada para dar enfasis y ser mas consistente los usare, creo que debo aprender mas sobre el combo ;; ,gracias<3

01:06:380 (1) - podrias hacer q cambiara de direccion en el tick blanco, se escucha como un cambio en el sonido sostenido .

01:19:894 (1) - los nc nunca van en lineas q no sean rojas o blancas, podrias ponerlo en el slider q viene sip, pero aqui esta en 1/3

01:22:596 (2,1,1) - demasiado spam de nc :c me gusta harto como se ve, pero es muy innecesario y no estan justificados, asi q te recomendaria usar un nc por cada 4 sliders nomas (01:22:488 (1) done

- acuerdate de arreglar este nc igual) lo mismo ;; esta en 1/3

01:29:407 (3) - creo q quedaria mejor si fuese recto, el sonido q representa siento q no soporta un shape asi done, me cuesta hacer sliders lol ;;

01:32:975 (3) - lo mismo con el kiai anterior sobre los nc, podrias enfatizar estos sonidos con nc cortos done

01:43:677 (4) - un ctrl+g para el flow quedaria bien ;o done

01:50:488 (3,4) - esta feito u,w,u podrias hacer el slider un poco mas abierto para q caiga bien el circulo done<3

ADVANCED

00:00:867 (1,1,1,1) - nc uwu uwu

00:03:461 (7) - podrias hacer lo mismo q hiciste mas adelante, 00:05:894 (4,5,6) - queda algo raro, lo cambie de otra forma

00:13:839 (1) - nc done

00:21:461 - podrias poner un circulo aqui, es igual de fuerte el sonido q los 2 anteriores
00:22:110 (3) - igual done

00:29:407 (5,7) - prueba mover el 7 un poquito mas abajo, queda un poco raro con ese overlap done

00:39:623 (5,2) - se chingo el stack xD

00:58:921 (2) - te falto un clap aqui <3

01:05:407 (6,7) - podrias stackearlos con el 4 done

01:05:894 (1) - con 2 circulitos creo q quedaria mejor es un poco raro al jugarlo, lo dejare como esta por el momento

01:20:975 (4,2) - stackstackstackstack done

01:27:461 (5) - podrias terminarlo en el tick anterior y poner un circulito al final
done
01:44:002 (5) - stack doneeeeeuwuwuwu

no me gusta moddear diffs bajas x-x como siempre po xd

pero podrias usar los mismos colores de SliderTrackOverride owo

Suerte ❤ ❤ uwu

-CerealBox- wrote:

sorry to say that I don't want to mod this but It hurts knowing this.

Check AI mod on Gravity, Advanced, Novice and Basic.

no kds

Ai mod checked ty!

Rougoku wrote:

rojo = unrankable, azul = propuestas menores
¡me gusta este mapa!

[General]

- no puedes tener dos TM en el mismo punto : 01:53:407 cambiado! y listo

[BASIC]

- el Distance Snap es inconsistente en todo el mapa. Creo que tal vez quieras evitarlo porque es un BASIC. lo dejare asi por el momento

por ejemple

- 00:12:866 (1,2,3) - no suficiente variación para justificar un jump tan grande entre 00:13:191 (2,3) me gusta el patron que tengo, pero lo cambiaré de todas maneras
- 00:20:975 (2,3,1) - ritmo confuso porque tenemos la misma distancia entre 00:20:975 (2,3) - y 00:21:461 (3,1) fixed
- 00:40:758 (4,5) - nerf lol
- 00:42:704 (3,4,5) - estéticamente, 00:42:704 (3,4,5) - es demasiado incómodo fixed
- 00:43:029 (4,5,6) - ^, puedes quedarte con esto si quieres resaltar el crescendo, pero en este caso, haz que la distancia crezca poco a poco. fixed
- 00:46:921 (2,3) , 00:49:515 (2,3) - , 00:52:110 (2,3) - mismo sonido, diferente Distance Snap fixed and done!

cambiar la distancia puede funcionar en la segunda parte porque es más intensa, pero no me gusta en la primera. intentaré arreglarlo y usar más el DS

el mapa es casi perfecto. puede que quieras añadir algunos círculos, pero creo que tu relación de objetos representa la música

buena suerte