Hello there!
[General]
the "cv" should be capitalized so it's "CV"
[Easy]
00:41:396 (3,4) - i honestly think you should curve these a little more or just leaving them straight
00:48:896 (1,4) - i feel like these two should be somewhat similar, they might not be expressing same sound, but it doesn't look that great aesthetically
02:02:958 (5,1) - the entry to 5-1 could be better and more linear imo
[Normal]
00:27:333 (6,1) - this looks realllly ugly, i would ctrl + > and fix ds
00:34:458 (2) - i would make this a 1/2 slider because you are missing the important sound on the white tick
00:36:896 (1,2,3) - this still kinda looks ugly imo, maybe move 3 around x:469 y:37 to make it have like a diagonal flow downwards, it looks better
01:41:208 (3,4) - i would just make 4 go along with the flow of 3
[Hard]
lemme start off with some ds errors
01:07:083 (2,3) -
01:07:646 (3,4) -
02:20:958 (3,4) -
onto the actual map
00:12:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - all of this is very confusing. you start off with drums then do the vocals and then back to drums? 00:14:396 - is an important beat i think you should map and overall the rhythm should be more clear
00:23:677 (2,3) - i'd probably just stack these on the end of 1 cause that's very irregularly spaced for a hard
00:33:802 - there's a note here
00:51:427 - and here
01:07:083 (2) - you seem to be mapping vocals here? but i think a reverse slider would work better
01:18:521 (5,6,7) - reverse slider because hard players aren't very good at playing somewhat awkward rhythm
01:37:271 (3,4) - this overlap would look a lot better if you curved 4 some more
02:03:802 - a note here
i'm not very good with light insanes so i'll just skip it
[Insane]
00:12:521 (2,3,1) - the flow here is very weird, i understand you are trying to do a different type of flow, but introducing it like this isn't very intuitive
00:14:583 (1,2,3) - i would try and make these as equal as you can
00:57:521 (5) - i was expecting this slider to be ctrl+g
01:44:677 (2) - overmapped?
02:10:083 (2,3) - this distance is WAYYYYYYYYY too far and it's at a very awkward angle, i'd reduce the distance and make the flow more comfy
good luck
[General]
the "cv" should be capitalized so it's "CV"
[Easy]
00:41:396 (3,4) - i honestly think you should curve these a little more or just leaving them straight
00:48:896 (1,4) - i feel like these two should be somewhat similar, they might not be expressing same sound, but it doesn't look that great aesthetically
02:02:958 (5,1) - the entry to 5-1 could be better and more linear imo
[Normal]
00:27:333 (6,1) - this looks realllly ugly, i would ctrl + > and fix ds
00:34:458 (2) - i would make this a 1/2 slider because you are missing the important sound on the white tick
00:36:896 (1,2,3) - this still kinda looks ugly imo, maybe move 3 around x:469 y:37 to make it have like a diagonal flow downwards, it looks better
01:41:208 (3,4) - i would just make 4 go along with the flow of 3
[Hard]
lemme start off with some ds errors
01:07:083 (2,3) -
01:07:646 (3,4) -
02:20:958 (3,4) -
onto the actual map
00:12:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - all of this is very confusing. you start off with drums then do the vocals and then back to drums? 00:14:396 - is an important beat i think you should map and overall the rhythm should be more clear
00:23:677 (2,3) - i'd probably just stack these on the end of 1 cause that's very irregularly spaced for a hard
00:33:802 - there's a note here
00:51:427 - and here
01:07:083 (2) - you seem to be mapping vocals here? but i think a reverse slider would work better
01:18:521 (5,6,7) - reverse slider because hard players aren't very good at playing somewhat awkward rhythm
01:37:271 (3,4) - this overlap would look a lot better if you curved 4 some more
02:03:802 - a note here
i'm not very good with light insanes so i'll just skip it
[Insane]
00:12:521 (2,3,1) - the flow here is very weird, i understand you are trying to do a different type of flow, but introducing it like this isn't very intuitive
00:14:583 (1,2,3) - i would try and make these as equal as you can
00:57:521 (5) - i was expecting this slider to be ctrl+g
01:44:677 (2) - overmapped?
02:10:083 (2,3) - this distance is WAYYYYYYYYY too far and it's at a very awkward angle, i'd reduce the distance and make the flow more comfy
good luck