[rumi's extra]
00:09:216 (5) - this one feels weirdly overspaced
00:10:383 (5,1) - blanket pls
00:17:383 (1) - here you skipped following the vocal hold bu 00:19:883 (1) - here you didn't it should be consistent
00:22:716 (1,2) - following 1/1 held sounds with circle slider is pretty bad imo, there isn't anything on on these red ticks..
00:27:383 (5,6,7,8) - would be nice to distinguish these in some way from the previous 4 circles since the vocal comes back in
00:29:883 - putting vocal on slider end in section that you followed vocals in feels kinda bad
00:32:883 (5) - overmapping onto this one feels hella weird cuz there isn't anything strong on the red tick.
00:42:883 (1,2,3) - i think leaving the vocals as a short break here is better to highlight the change in instruments
00:48:716 (4,5,6) - so big in the calm part =(
00:54:044 (4,5,6,7) - you never used kicksliders for vocals before, why start now?
00:59:377 (1,2,3,4) - these and 01:00:709 (1,2,3,4) - just feel massively overspaced, there isn't any instruments it's just vocals and you have giant fullscreen jumps D=
01:04:377 (1,2,1,2) - these aren't different from the previous ones in a distinguishable way, why did you put sliders on them
i think most of the kiai and the section after is super overspaced. 01:12:876 (5) - why is stuff like this a fullscreen jump into a backwards movement?
01:23:709 (3,1) - this is clearly a calmer moment, but you have a giant jump here
01:24:709 (1,2,3) - this is an echo of the calmer moment and you have a fullscreen jump pattern
this repeats a lot so i won't point out all the massive jumps, but i think you need to remake a lot of them to better reflect the actual intensity of the song.
[pentori's extra]
00:12:876 (4,5,1) - having this much spacing contrast is kind of weird imo. 1 definitely feels pretty underspaced compared to 345 in gameplay to me. same here: 01:14:367 (5,1) -
00:16:876 (4,5) - this feel a little big to me, same with the next instance of the pattern, since it's larger jumps than the drum part at the end of this section at 00:22:042 - .
00:37:709 (1) - could be cool to make this into 2 circles and add a clap to the 1 to mimic the previous time
00:50:542 (4,1) - maybe blanket?
01:18:033 (1,2,3) - it seems like the drums get a bit quieter here but making a jump pattern makes it more intense imo, maybe reduce the spacing on this?
01:26:367 (4,5) - this also feels a tad overspaced since this large jump is onto a vocal only
[meep's extra]
00:06:042 (1,2) - i think the effect of following this slidy guitar sound is kinda ruined by putting a circle here, making a slider with lowered sv fits better imo.
00:07:542 - weird to skip this cuz its same as 00:08:042 (1,2) -
00:17:376 - i know you're being consistent and following the vocals but this is so loud ;w;
00:25:876 (2,3) - weird rhythm to follow the vocals here imo. cuz 00:26:376 - doesn't really have one on it. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7737746 something like this seems better to me
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this next part feels a bit disorganized, like the slider shapes dont really relate to each other that much. 00:28:042 (1,2) - for example you could put 2 in the corner thingy of 1
00:30:709 (1,2) - you could put that tail part of 2 into the curve of 1
etc
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00:32:876 (3,1) - feels pretty small
00:42:376 (6,1) - imo jump to 1 should be a big bigger, comparable to 4-5
00:54:042 (1,2,3,4) - first off can you line these up with 1 but also you never really used kicksliderss for vocals and you don't do it anywhere else either, why here?
01:02:876 (1,1) - cmon these r so lame lol
01:06:375 (3,1) - this feels hella overspaced
01:41:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you didnt really use this kind of pattern for jumps earlier in the song, you mostly used triangles with rotational motion or normal back and forts, so why so different here
[phyloukz's insane]
add s for grammar
raise ur od to like 8
i think this diff suffers from trying to follow as many sounds as possible, so the rhythm is pretty inconsistent and weird in a lot of places. here's some examples
these intro hitsounds (like pre 8 seconds) are hella loud =/
00:01:376 (2,3) - using a 1/1 slider fits better here since it's a calm part and the overmapped slider end is hella noticeable
00:04:542 (3) - same here tbh
00:06:376 (4) - wtf is this thing on
00:06:709 - this section has the same clicking density as your kiai almost
00:11:459 (3,4,5,6) - shouldnt the burst be where the slider is to follow the violin sound
00:39:042 (2,3) - ctrl g here follows the vocals a bit better
ideally youd make 3 into a 1/1 slider too
00:57:376 (1,2,3,4) - sudden density decrease
01:00:042 (1) - you have a full stream section on a nearly inaudible piano sound that none of the extras mapped here
01:11:200 (2,3,4) - ctrl g on this rhythm seems a lot better for following the vocal
01:27:867 (1) - this appears to be the only time you use a 1/1 slider here, why is that? it fits a lot better than circle+1/2 slider btw
there's also a bunch of general concerns
00:08:876 (4,5,6,1) - this is kind of awkward t o play imo
00:14:709 (1) - this just looks ugly
00:15:876 (5,6) - the sound you're following 00:16:542 - has note here as well
00:18:709 (7) - same here
00:19:876 (4,5) - the 5 isn't in thee same vocal part but it has higher spacing and an angle change?
00:21:876 (2,3,4) - isn't this really small and also 123 wide angle is kinda awkward
00:29:042 (5,1) - strong vocal on slider end is pretty meh here imo
00:41:209 (6,1) - this is basically an antijump, i think it plays rather poorly
00:42:376 (7) - the note here is missing the melody, so i think it should have much less spacing
00:48:209 (5,6) - why randomly overmap a triple here o.o
01:02:876 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the jump pattern changes here for some reason, first time you need to go back but 2nd onwards you don't
01:38:033 (3,4,5) - eek wide angle
[pyro's insane]
your hitsounds are wholly inaudible, please raise the volume significantly, imo this is actually unrankable in terms of feedback lol
00:05:876 - imo should start clicking here cuz thats where the vocal you're following starts
00:52:709 (3,4,5,6) - this seems entirely unnecesarily overmapped
tbh i don't like the overmapping at all but it's decently consistent and the patterning is fine
[hikan's light insane]
00:24:626 (3) - pretty sure this should be on the blue tick.
00:35:042 (5) - imo having 2 circles for the claps is better here, plus the vocal becomes clickable
00:42:876 (2) - 2 circles for 2 melody notes is better imo
00:49:376 (1,2) - this sounds hella weird, imo ctrl g is a lot better since the red tick is where the vocal that you followed is
00:59:709 (4) - ctrl g here to put more spacing + angle change on 1 for emphasis is better i think
01:09:200 (1,2) - these look way too close together imo, can you bend 2 to blanket 1?
for some reason your entire 2nd kiai from 01:18:700 - to like 01:32:367 - is counter clockwise rotation, can you change it up a bit?
[hard]
00:43:209 (3,4,5) - imo ctrl g on this rhythm is better, even though you followed vocals i feel like the instrument is super loud and more important here
00:48:376 (1,2,3,4) - the vocals are a bit quieter here but the click density is super high o.o
01:02:876 - might wanna mute these slider ends
maybe break up some of these 8 9 combos in the kiai?
01:43:534 (3) - imo shouldnt be mapped cuz it isn't in melody at all
not gonna bother with easy or normal cuz they're probably fine lo
00:09:216 (5) - this one feels weirdly overspaced
00:10:383 (5,1) - blanket pls
00:17:383 (1) - here you skipped following the vocal hold bu 00:19:883 (1) - here you didn't it should be consistent
00:22:716 (1,2) - following 1/1 held sounds with circle slider is pretty bad imo, there isn't anything on on these red ticks..
00:27:383 (5,6,7,8) - would be nice to distinguish these in some way from the previous 4 circles since the vocal comes back in
00:29:883 - putting vocal on slider end in section that you followed vocals in feels kinda bad
00:32:883 (5) - overmapping onto this one feels hella weird cuz there isn't anything strong on the red tick.
00:42:883 (1,2,3) - i think leaving the vocals as a short break here is better to highlight the change in instruments
00:48:716 (4,5,6) - so big in the calm part =(
00:54:044 (4,5,6,7) - you never used kicksliders for vocals before, why start now?
00:59:377 (1,2,3,4) - these and 01:00:709 (1,2,3,4) - just feel massively overspaced, there isn't any instruments it's just vocals and you have giant fullscreen jumps D=
01:04:377 (1,2,1,2) - these aren't different from the previous ones in a distinguishable way, why did you put sliders on them
i think most of the kiai and the section after is super overspaced. 01:12:876 (5) - why is stuff like this a fullscreen jump into a backwards movement?
01:23:709 (3,1) - this is clearly a calmer moment, but you have a giant jump here
01:24:709 (1,2,3) - this is an echo of the calmer moment and you have a fullscreen jump pattern
this repeats a lot so i won't point out all the massive jumps, but i think you need to remake a lot of them to better reflect the actual intensity of the song.
[pentori's extra]
00:12:876 (4,5,1) - having this much spacing contrast is kind of weird imo. 1 definitely feels pretty underspaced compared to 345 in gameplay to me. same here: 01:14:367 (5,1) -
00:16:876 (4,5) - this feel a little big to me, same with the next instance of the pattern, since it's larger jumps than the drum part at the end of this section at 00:22:042 - .
00:37:709 (1) - could be cool to make this into 2 circles and add a clap to the 1 to mimic the previous time
00:50:542 (4,1) - maybe blanket?
01:18:033 (1,2,3) - it seems like the drums get a bit quieter here but making a jump pattern makes it more intense imo, maybe reduce the spacing on this?
01:26:367 (4,5) - this also feels a tad overspaced since this large jump is onto a vocal only
[meep's extra]
00:06:042 (1,2) - i think the effect of following this slidy guitar sound is kinda ruined by putting a circle here, making a slider with lowered sv fits better imo.
00:07:542 - weird to skip this cuz its same as 00:08:042 (1,2) -
00:17:376 - i know you're being consistent and following the vocals but this is so loud ;w;
00:25:876 (2,3) - weird rhythm to follow the vocals here imo. cuz 00:26:376 - doesn't really have one on it. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7737746 something like this seems better to me
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this next part feels a bit disorganized, like the slider shapes dont really relate to each other that much. 00:28:042 (1,2) - for example you could put 2 in the corner thingy of 1
00:30:709 (1,2) - you could put that tail part of 2 into the curve of 1
etc
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00:32:876 (3,1) - feels pretty small
00:42:376 (6,1) - imo jump to 1 should be a big bigger, comparable to 4-5
00:54:042 (1,2,3,4) - first off can you line these up with 1 but also you never really used kicksliderss for vocals and you don't do it anywhere else either, why here?
01:02:876 (1,1) - cmon these r so lame lol
01:06:375 (3,1) - this feels hella overspaced
01:41:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you didnt really use this kind of pattern for jumps earlier in the song, you mostly used triangles with rotational motion or normal back and forts, so why so different here
[phyloukz's insane]
add s for grammar
raise ur od to like 8
i think this diff suffers from trying to follow as many sounds as possible, so the rhythm is pretty inconsistent and weird in a lot of places. here's some examples
these intro hitsounds (like pre 8 seconds) are hella loud =/
00:01:376 (2,3) - using a 1/1 slider fits better here since it's a calm part and the overmapped slider end is hella noticeable
00:04:542 (3) - same here tbh
00:06:376 (4) - wtf is this thing on
00:06:709 - this section has the same clicking density as your kiai almost
00:11:459 (3,4,5,6) - shouldnt the burst be where the slider is to follow the violin sound
00:39:042 (2,3) - ctrl g here follows the vocals a bit better
ideally youd make 3 into a 1/1 slider too
00:57:376 (1,2,3,4) - sudden density decrease
01:00:042 (1) - you have a full stream section on a nearly inaudible piano sound that none of the extras mapped here
01:11:200 (2,3,4) - ctrl g on this rhythm seems a lot better for following the vocal
01:27:867 (1) - this appears to be the only time you use a 1/1 slider here, why is that? it fits a lot better than circle+1/2 slider btw
there's also a bunch of general concerns
00:08:876 (4,5,6,1) - this is kind of awkward t o play imo
00:14:709 (1) - this just looks ugly
00:15:876 (5,6) - the sound you're following 00:16:542 - has note here as well
00:18:709 (7) - same here
00:19:876 (4,5) - the 5 isn't in thee same vocal part but it has higher spacing and an angle change?
00:21:876 (2,3,4) - isn't this really small and also 123 wide angle is kinda awkward
00:29:042 (5,1) - strong vocal on slider end is pretty meh here imo
00:41:209 (6,1) - this is basically an antijump, i think it plays rather poorly
00:42:376 (7) - the note here is missing the melody, so i think it should have much less spacing
00:48:209 (5,6) - why randomly overmap a triple here o.o
01:02:876 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - the jump pattern changes here for some reason, first time you need to go back but 2nd onwards you don't
01:38:033 (3,4,5) - eek wide angle
[pyro's insane]
your hitsounds are wholly inaudible, please raise the volume significantly, imo this is actually unrankable in terms of feedback lol
00:05:876 - imo should start clicking here cuz thats where the vocal you're following starts
00:52:709 (3,4,5,6) - this seems entirely unnecesarily overmapped
tbh i don't like the overmapping at all but it's decently consistent and the patterning is fine
[hikan's light insane]
00:24:626 (3) - pretty sure this should be on the blue tick.
00:35:042 (5) - imo having 2 circles for the claps is better here, plus the vocal becomes clickable
00:42:876 (2) - 2 circles for 2 melody notes is better imo
00:49:376 (1,2) - this sounds hella weird, imo ctrl g is a lot better since the red tick is where the vocal that you followed is
00:59:709 (4) - ctrl g here to put more spacing + angle change on 1 for emphasis is better i think
01:09:200 (1,2) - these look way too close together imo, can you bend 2 to blanket 1?
for some reason your entire 2nd kiai from 01:18:700 - to like 01:32:367 - is counter clockwise rotation, can you change it up a bit?
[hard]
00:43:209 (3,4,5) - imo ctrl g on this rhythm is better, even though you followed vocals i feel like the instrument is super loud and more important here
00:48:376 (1,2,3,4) - the vocals are a bit quieter here but the click density is super high o.o
01:02:876 - might wanna mute these slider ends
maybe break up some of these 8 9 combos in the kiai?
01:43:534 (3) - imo shouldnt be mapped cuz it isn't in melody at all
not gonna bother with easy or normal cuz they're probably fine lo