Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hello, this map has been disqualified for some general quality issues in Futsuu and Muzukashii.

• [General]

1. Please consider alacat's post for a more proper way of title romanisation: p/6004047 fixed with formal site.
2. Kiai should start more naturally at 01:05:556 - for all difficulties. fixed, and oni kiai also fixed same.
3. The green line at 01:05:727 - in Oni is unused, so you may remove it. fixed

• [Futsuu]

1. From 00:27:156 to 00:49:099 - pattern arrangement in this session sounds a bit out of place and does not accompany the song well since you followed the background bass guitar at 00:28:356 (4,5,6) - while mapping the main rhythm at 00:27:156 (1,2,3) - , resulting in a loose structure. You may refer to Skylish's post for a fix. refer with his post, fixed
2. 00:32:641 (12) - consider adding finish to cohere with 00:27:156 (1) - ? ok
3. 00:43:613 (34) - same as ^ ok

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:13:527 (28,32) - these notes could be deleted for a better spread considering that there are only 1/1 notes in Futsuu and the current density is quite similar to that in Oni. fixed
2. 00:16:270 (39,43) - 00:19:013 (50,54) - 00:21:756 (61,65) - same as ^ ^
3. From 00:23:556 to 00:24:070 - maybe try ddd k k to reduce its gap with Oni ? fixed
4. From 00:27:156 to 00:49:099 - same as Futsuu same with his post, fixed focusing on vocal melody.

Please reply to Skylish's (and Charlotte's) suggestions as well. You may call me back after that.

Charlotte wrote:

Hi via game-in chat.

quick suggestion.

OD spread -> 3-3.5-4-5 or 3-4-5-5.5 or 3-4-4.5-5 How about you think? I think more good spread. 3 3.5 4 5 fixed. looks better spread now

Oni 00:02:470 - 00:11:899 - hmm...I think excessive finish.not strong part & This finish is Oni only. wanna emphasize vocal sound in this part, and wanna big emphasize, so keep.

alacat wrote:

If that is not the official title, The title should be "Okashi na Yume o Ohitotsu Douzo"

Volta wrote:

alacat wrote:

If that is not the official title, The title should be "Okashi na Yume o Ohitotsu Douzo"

'Yume' and 'Douzo' use Uppercase in first letter

*runs*

Skylish wrote:

Previous check: p/6004071

Final check before qualification:

[Futsuu]

> 00:37:270 - It is K in other difficulties, how about considering again to change it to K in Futsuu? Another reason of change is that, although it is empty at 00:36:927 - , players can still feel the strong vocal pitch flow. (00:36:584 - K D K; High Low, A bit higher) 00:37:270 - has the same pitch with 00:38:127 - . both K and D all looks good, and looks better K cause of your reasons. fixed

[Oni]

> 01:25:784 - I still prefer having a kat here consistently because you end the section with kat in most cases, like 00:48:755 - / 01:02:470 - .
01:25:784 (115,1) - double drum kick sound, so for more emphasized 01:25:955 (1) - this spinner, fixed

Call me back when you are ready, when you see me online at night. (you can give me KDS in this post)

Skylish wrote:

Re-Qualify~

Re-Gratz to your 1st ranked map!

Lokidoki wrote:

I think the metadata could be wrong here, in the Artist's name should be CHINO[CV.MINASE INORI] according to http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/GNCA-456
The japanese Artist's name is also in brackets


correct me if I am wrong here

Skylish wrote:

Lokidoki wrote:

I think the metadata could be wrong here, in the Artist's name should be CHINO[CV.MINASE INORI] according to http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/GNCA-456
The japanese Artist's name is also in brackets


correct me if I am wrong here

In any possible circumstances, official meta is confirmed as the most accurate and correct information of the music or songs.

You may refer to my mod at p/6004071 / go to the official website to check the info. out (http://www.gochiusa.com/contents/cd/index03440000.html). The current metadata was confirmed by me and alacat. It should be the correct one.

Surono wrote:

regratz, now this even better.

toara_fict wrote:

GJ #1 :3

Hitsu wrote:

nice first ranked~
congrats!

gaston_2199 wrote:

First ranked \:D/
Congrats my friend~

World Fraction wrote:

this song is amazing, both the map and the song itself