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Dea ex machina
Thanks based Dunois :)
Sing
m4m:

might want to consider flipping the bg, its fine as it is but if u flip it the girl will b even more visible from the song select
00:06:057 (1) - i think ur better off just making this 1/3 since its really only like 1/12 at the very end of the arpeggio so unless u want to separate it and put a 1/12 slider at the end, having it be 1/6th which it is atm isnt rlly following the music as well as it cud b if it was just 1/3
01:00:540 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - kinda same as above, plays fine but rhythmically is kinda off, in reality it would look something like this: https://puu.sh/vdEZR/16c04b8598.png so maybe u cud just replace 01:00:540 (1,1,1,1) - from 1/8 to 1/4
02:06:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - y r these increasing idk wot ur following xd in other parts ur following the vocal chops so why not here
02:17:781 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - same here too ^
02:19:678 (1,2,3) - every 3 slider nc you've had so far was a pattern so for consistency id make this a pattern too; maybe something like this https://puu.sh/vdFjW/77e5c0f895.png and then just ctrl+g 02:20:195 (1) - so it would flow into it better
03:14:850 (3,4,5) - again u might want to change this so its consistent with the other parts that r in the same in this section (03:09:333 (3,4,5) - 03:20:367 (3,4,5) - 03:25:885 (3,4,5) -) so that 03:15:022 (4,5) - stack
04:19:160 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 02:06:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and 02:17:781 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
04:30:195 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
04:36:402 (2,3,4,5,1) - i think u shud space these more from 04:36:057 (1) - because it is the end of the final kiai and for a transition like this with the big rhythm gap it has https://puu.sh/vdFCP/591cbad736.png , larger spacing would better emphasize this
04:56:057 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tbh it wud be better to prioritize mapping to the rhythm of the drums rather than the synth melody you've already been mapping to for the entire section; the drums highlight the end of this section and come in to be far louder than the synth now

gud map
Topic Starter
Girl

Sing wrote:

m4m:

might want to consider flipping the bg, its fine as it is but if u flip it the girl will b even more visible from the song select done lol
00:06:057 (1) - i think ur better off just making this 1/3 since its really only like 1/12 at the very end of the arpeggio so unless u want to separate it and put a 1/12 slider at the end, having it be 1/6th which it is atm isnt rlly following the music as well as it cud b if it was just 1/3 this follows the music best i guess
01:00:540 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - kinda same as above, plays fine but rhythmically is kinda off, in reality it would look something like this: https://puu.sh/vdEZR/16c04b8598.png so maybe u cud just replace 01:00:540 (1,1,1,1) - from 1/8 to 1/4 did the latter
02:06:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - y r these increasing idk wot ur following xd in other parts ur following the vocal chops so why not here different from the other parts cuz its within the kiai and its increasing cuz the pitch of the vocals is increasing
02:17:781 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - same here too ^
02:19:678 (1,2,3) - every 3 slider nc you've had so far was a pattern so for consistency id make this a pattern too; maybe something like this https://puu.sh/vdFjW/77e5c0f895.png and then just ctrl+g 02:20:195 (1) - so it would flow into it better done
03:14:850 (3,4,5) - again u might want to change this so its consistent with the other parts that r in the same in this section (03:09:333 (3,4,5) - 03:20:367 (3,4,5) - 03:25:885 (3,4,5) -) so that 03:15:022 (4,5) - stack o shit ur write
04:19:160 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 02:06:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and 02:17:781 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
04:30:195 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ ^
04:36:402 (2,3,4,5,1) - i think u shud space these more from 04:36:057 (1) - because it is the end of the final kiai and for a transition like this with the big rhythm gap it has https://puu.sh/vdFCP/591cbad736.png , larger spacing would better emphasize this ok i flipped it horizontally and moved some things
04:56:057 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tbh it wud be better to prioritize mapping to the rhythm of the drums rather than the synth melody you've already been mapping to for the entire section; the drums highlight the end of this section and come in to be far louder than the synth now fUCK i really liked the sliders at the end ))): ok i replaced it with this

gud map thanks for the mod!!
Ascendance
yea

WIP (need to finish std and do a little on the ctb)

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General
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  1. Difficulty Spread : Why OD9? Seems a bit high for a slider heavy map. I'd go for 8.5 I think
  2. Background Size : Good
  3. Unsnapped objects : None
  4. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : Good
  5. Metadata Issues : dook
  6. Timeline Issues :
  7. Combo Colors : Combo 1 is a bit light, causing it to blend into the background a bit too much. Maybe make it slightly darker?
  8. Unused Hitsounds : soft-hitclap8.wav is unused, and needs to be removed.
  9. Hitsounds Issues : The following hitsounds are not in .wav format and are recommended to be changed:
    - soft-hitwhistle10.mp3
    The following hitsounds have possible delay of over 5ms. Please fix them accordingly by trimming off the delay time if necessary
    - soft-hitwhistle9.wav
    - soft-hitfinish9.wav
  10. Unused Files / Other : I seek death

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Sentimental
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General



  1. 00:04:506 (2,1) - this overlap feels a bit weird considering that the other patterns are spaced out a bit. Maybe try something like this?
  2. 00:06:057 (1) - 99% sure the end of this slider is unsnapped.seems like the 1/8 starts on 00:06:229 - , refer to our difficulty for the snapping. Also, you should really have a note on 00:06:402 - . It's strong enough to have a circle. You can just push the spinner back.
  3. 00:27:781 (1) - I think this honestly sounds pretty bad as an extended slider, and would sound better as a 1/2 like in the ctb diff. You can hear the vocal on 00:27:953 - so it would be best to end there.
  4. 00:51:402 (2,3,4) - aes
  5. 00:53:988 (4,5) - same could be applied here
  6. 01:06:057 - not emphasizing these chimes is gay
  7. 01:38:816 (3,4) - this sharp flow doesnt really fit this section as there's no sound that calls for something like that. try something like this
  8. 01:39:333 (2,3) - same
  9. 01:48:471 (1) - you know what to do
  10. 02:01:574 (1) - bububububu is a iconic part of the song yet u have a boring repeat slider. maybe turn it into sliders that slowly get lower sv or something memorable
  11. 02:54:160 (6) - cancer extension sound ends on 02:54:505 -
  12. 02:57:953 (2,3) - what the hell is this overlap
  13. 03:26:574 (2) - for aes put it in between 03:25:885 (3) - and 03:26:229 (5) - cuz rn it looks like an ugly overlap
  14. 03:27:781 (1) - please stop, the sound ends on 03:28:126 -
  15. 03:57:436 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - curve these down and up respectively? the sounds here are more dynamic than you represent them to be
  16. 04:14:678 - gotta say this kiai needs a rework. you're representing the vocals here, which worked really well in the first kiai, but this kiai has a ton of background that's prominent and you're skipping them in a large majority of places.
  17. 04:23:988 (3) - ctrl g? the current flow is a bit weird imo
  18. 04:24:333 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is an aesthetic abomination. u could just make it a cut stream like youve done before or specifically increase the spacing of the stream as it goes on
  19. 04:36:229 - missing
  20. 04:36:747 (1,2) - weird how only this is stacked, I'd just unstack here cuz it plays a bit d coming out of such a spaced stream
  21. 04:43:643 (1) - u dont do the weird circle + 3/4 slider on this one, intended?
  22. 04:45:022 (1) - the red tick should be part of the stack at 04:45:281 (2,3) -
  23. 04:53:298 (1,2) - anime
Topic Starter
Girl

Ascendance wrote:

yea

WIP (need to finish std and do a little on the ctb)

[
General
]

  1. Difficulty Spread : Why OD9? Seems a bit high for a slider heavy map. I'd go for 8.5 I think
  2. Background Size : Good
  3. Unsnapped objects : None
  4. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : Good
  5. Metadata Issues : dook
  6. Timeline Issues :
  7. Combo Colors : Combo 1 is a bit light, causing it to blend into the background a bit too much. Maybe make it slightly darker?
  8. Unused Hitsounds : soft-hitclap8.wav is unused, and needs to be removed.
  9. Hitsounds Issues : The following hitsounds are not in .wav format and are recommended to be changed:
    - soft-hitwhistle10.mp3
    The following hitsounds have possible delay of over 5ms. Please fix them accordingly by trimming off the delay time if necessary
    - soft-hitwhistle9.wav
    - soft-hitfinish9.wav
  10. Unused Files / Other : I seek death
OK I FIXED ALL OF THE ABOVE

[
Sentimental
]

General



  1. 00:04:506 (2,1) - this overlap feels a bit weird considering that the other patterns are spaced out a bit. Maybe try something like this?
  2. 00:06:057 (1) - 99% sure the end of this slider is unsnapped.seems like the 1/8 starts on 00:06:229 - , refer to our difficulty for the snapping. Also, you should really have a note on 00:06:402 - . It's strong enough to have a circle. You can just push the spinner back.
  3. 00:27:781 (1) - I think this honestly sounds pretty bad as an extended slider, and would sound better as a 1/2 like in the ctb diff. You can hear the vocal on 00:27:953 - so it would be best to end there. yes
  4. 00:51:402 (2,3,4) - aes dook
  5. 00:53:988 (4,5) - same could be applied here nah
  6. 01:06:057 - not emphasizing these chimes is gay ok i emphasized them now
  7. 01:38:816 (3,4) - this sharp flow doesnt really fit this section as there's no sound that calls for something like that. try something like this meh i'll just swap 3 and 4
  8. 01:39:333 (2,3) - same ^
  9. 01:48:471 (1) - you know what to do :b:
  10. 02:01:574 (1) - bububububu is a iconic part of the song yet u have a boring repeat slider. maybe turn it into sliders that slowly get lower sv or something memorable that is a subjective opinion, i'll keep it as a repeat slider :d
  11. 02:54:160 (6) - cancer extension sound ends on 02:54:505 - ye
  12. 02:57:953 (2,3) - what the hell is this overlap moved it to the right so it doesnt overlap now
  13. 03:26:574 (2) - for aes put it in between 03:25:885 (3) - and 03:26:229 (5) - cuz rn it looks like an ugly overlap OK
  14. 03:27:781 (1) - please stop, the sound ends on 03:28:126 - okokok
  15. 03:57:436 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - curve these down and up respectively? the sounds here are more dynamic than you represent them to be
  16. 04:14:678 - gotta say this kiai needs a rework. you're representing the vocals here, which worked really well in the first kiai, but this kiai has a ton of background that's prominent and you're skipping them in a large majority of places.
  17. 04:23:988 (3) - ctrl g? the current flow is a bit weird imo it's fine
  18. 04:24:333 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is an aesthetic abomination. u could just make it a cut stream like youve done before or specifically increase the spacing of the stream as it goes on actually the music's intensity grows every 4 beats and is depicted by the increase in spacing of each stream segment. The jumps are there to emphasize the intensity on every 1's and it all turns counter clockwise because the music is the same throughout 04:24:333 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) but with a growing intensity
  19. 04:36:229 - missing sheit
  20. 04:36:747 (1,2) - weird how only this is stacked, I'd just unstack here cuz it plays a bit d coming out of such a spaced stream It's to stay consistent with every other circle into slider separated thingy in this whole section it also plays fine
  21. 04:43:643 (1) - u dont do the weird circle + 3/4 slider on this one, intended? oops not intended
  22. 04:45:022 (1) - the red tick should be part of the stack at 04:45:281 (2,3) - having a 3 note 1/4 stream into the slider after plays very awkwardly, and it is fine as is so I won't be changing it
  23. 04:53:298 (1,2) - anime
anime
dunois
sb
Topic Starter
Girl

Dunois wrote:

sb
sb
Storyboarder

Adore wrote:

Dunois wrote:

sb
sb
sb
Arusamour
Sentimental (5.78 stars, 1399 notes)

hitsounds: bwooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg tseuuuuuuuueueueueueuueueueu blu blu blu blu blu blu tong

  1. 00:06:186 (2,3) - this is 1/6, not 1/8. listen to it.
  2. 00:13:643 (8,9) - shouldn't this be overlapped like 00:12:609 (3,4,5,6) ?
  3. 00:21:747 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - the nc pattern seems odd.
    seems unnecessary to nc on 00:21:919 (1) and if you nc 00:22:264 (1), you need to leave 00:22:609 (1) the same combo. i think you could actually exaggerate 00:22:609 (1,1,1,1,1) with nc spam.
    you could do one of two things: example 1 or example 2 (prefer example 1)
  4. 00:24:678 (8,9) - same question as i asked before.
    shouldn't this be overlapped like 00:12:609 (3,4,5,6) ?
  5. 00:26:747 (3,4) - geez, where is your inner-aethethics? UNLEASH YOUR INNER RLC
  6. 00:29:333 (4,5,6) - make this more interesting. there splits 2 paths, the wannabe hollow wings, but you're actually axarious or example 2
  7. 01:31:747 (3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - best pattern of your map
  8. 01:42:953 (2) - uneven slider, please fix ty.
  9. 01:44:850 (2) - the intention of the flow is weak. i don't see the significance in this slider placement, it seems as if you just threw it there cuz y nought. try
  10. 02:00:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - best stream i have seen you make
  11. 02:06:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - inconsistent spacing within the pattern
    02:06:747 (1,2) - these two have the highest distance
    02:07:436 (1,2) - these two have the smallest distance
  12. 03:09:678 (5) - stack this unto 03:09:333 (3)
  13. 03:29:850 (1,2,3,4) - asstheterically unpleasing to :eyes: at, please curve more curve more curv more
  14. 04:01:919 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think you need to gap the stream for the effect.
  15. 04:26:574 (1) - this gap is no good idk how to exaplainerin. bring closer to 04:26:229 (1) (you can stack/underlap it).
  16. 04:30:195 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - im depressed that you didn't do the spacing thing like you did on 04:19:160 (1,2,1,2,1,2). cmonbruh
  17. 04:49:850 (1,2,3,4) - bigger spacing please
  18. 04:50:195 (1,2,3,4) - smaller spacing please
  19. 04:51:488 (4) - shouldn't this be stacked on top of 04:51:574 (1) ??
  20. 04:55:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spooky stream. i swear somebody is not going to notice this pattern and shitmiss here
Arusamour
whree my sb at tho? ?
Topic Starter
Girl

Arusamour wrote:

Sentimental (5.78 stars, 1399 notes)

hitsounds: bwooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg tseuuuuuuuueueueueueuueueueu blu blu blu blu blu blu tong

  1. 00:06:186 (2,3) - this is 1/6, not 1/8. listen to it. wrong
  2. 00:13:643 (8,9) - shouldn't this be overlapped like 00:12:609 (3,4,5,6) ? no, but I un-overlapped 00:12:609 (3,4) cuz the music was different for the two beats as opposed to 00:13:126 (5,6) where it was the same
  3. 00:21:747 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - the nc pattern seems odd.
    seems unnecessary to nc on 00:21:919 (1) and if you nc 00:22:264 (1), you need to leave 00:22:609 (1) the same combo. i think you could actually exaggerate 00:22:609 (1,1,1,1,1) with nc spam.
    you could do one of two things: example 1 or example 2 (prefer example 1) indeed, i made it a new nc only every 8 notes now cuz it was a bit spammy before
  4. 00:24:678 (8,9) - same question as i asked before.
    shouldn't this be overlapped like 00:12:609 (3,4,5,6) ?
    same response
  5. 00:26:747 (3,4) - geez, where is your inner-aethethics? UNLEASH YOUR INNER RLC oops xddddd
  6. 00:29:333 (4,5,6) - make this more interesting. there splits 2 paths, the wannabe hollow wings, but you're actually axarious or example 2 i think its fine the way it is tbh
  7. 01:31:747 (3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - best pattern of your map .
  8. 01:42:953 (2) - uneven slider, please fix ty. ok nibba
  9. 01:44:850 (2) - the intention of the flow is weak. i don't see the significance in this slider placement, it seems as if you just threw it there cuz y nought. try nah
  10. 02:00:885 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - best stream i have seen you make anime
  11. 02:06:747 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - inconsistent spacing within the pattern i swear i fixed this like 5 mods ago but now i did again
    02:06:747 (1,2) - these two have the highest distance
    02:07:436 (1,2) - these two have the smallest distance
  12. 03:09:678 (5) - stack this unto 03:09:333 (3) the reason 03:09:505 (4,5) - are stacked on top of each other in the first place is because the vocals are the same sounds. It would make less sense to stack 3 and 5 if they are the same sounds :ddddddd
  13. 03:29:850 (1,2,3,4) - asstheterically unpleasing to :eyes: at, please curve more curve more curv more ok lo
  14. 04:01:919 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think you need to gap the stream for the effect. yes i do you can hear the split in the music
  15. 04:26:574 (1) - this gap is no good idk how to exaplainerin. bring closer to 04:26:229 (1) (you can stack/underlap it). It's fine the way it is since the slider before it leads into this slider so there wouldn't feel like a big jump for the player. Also 04:26:574 (1) - is also deliberately placed under 04:27:091 (1) -
  16. 04:30:195 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - im depressed that you didn't do the spacing thing like you did on 04:19:160 (1,2,1,2,1,2). cmonbruh sori
  17. 04:49:850 (1,2,3,4) - bigger spacing please ok
  18. 04:50:195 (1,2,3,4) - smaller spacing please ok
  19. 04:51:488 (4) - shouldn't this be stacked on top of 04:51:574 (1) ?? if it was stacked then there the spacing would be inconsistent and it wouldn't represent the split in the music
  20. 04:55:367 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spooky stream. i swear somebody is not going to notice this pattern and shitmiss here


Thanks for the mod!!!
Storyboarder

Arusamour wrote:

whree my sb at tho? ?
i sb urs b4 is bs emotional
Topic Starter
Girl
wheres sb
LowAccuracySS
where's sb
dunois
sb
Dea ex machina
Dunoi:sb:
Topic Starter
Girl
not ranking till i have my sb
Topic Starter
Girl

Ascendance wrote:

04:14:678 - gotta say this kiai needs a rework. you're representing the vocals here, which worked really well in the first kiai, but this kiai has a ton of background that's prominent and you're skipping them in a large majority of places.
ye remapped it
Topic Starter
Girl
welcome to hanamura
Dea ex machina

Adore wrote:

welcome to hanamura
Markham way
Topic Starter
Girl
bu-bu-bu-bu-bu-bu-bu-bu
emilia
F UC K
honne
free iphone 4? I want to smash~

NC here

I'm too noob to mod this so I'll throw something at the map instead
Kibbleru
mario hitsounds

as expected of gIRL
Topic Starter
Girl

Kibbleru wrote:

mario hitsounds

as expected of gIRL
dont forget runescape ice barrage hitsound
Topic Starter
Girl
ctb
LowAccuracySS
standard
strickluke


edit: naitoshi's is better
snyviper
Offset sounds way too far ahead (885). The perfect offset seems to be 871 when listening on 25%, but it also seems to not work on actual gameplay, so I would change it to something in between, maybe something close to 875. Be aware of the Inherited Points, you'll have to fix them all once you change your offset.
Topic Starter
Girl

snyviper wrote:

Offset sounds way too far ahead (885). The perfect offset seems to be 871 when listening on 25%, but it also seems to not work on actual gameplay, so I would change it to something in between, maybe something close to 875. Be aware of the Inherited Points, you'll have to fix them all once you change your offset.
sounds fine
Exifea
Hey Girl! Would you be able to tell me which colours you used for the Slider Border and Slider Track Override?
Topic Starter
Girl

Exifea wrote:

Hey Girl! Would you be able to tell me which colours you used for the Slider Border and Slider Track Override?
Look in .osu
Exifea

Girl wrote:

Exifea wrote:

Hey Girl! Would you be able to tell me which colours you used for the Slider Border and Slider Track Override?
Look in .osu
Thank you!
defiance
@everyone
Topic Starter
Girl
yeah
Stoof
first
Monstrata
I already bubbled the ctb diff but Ascendance is now restricted so the diff was moved here. Giving meaningless icon to show ctb is fine.

Poke Xexxar to check the standard set, then poke me for bubble and call him back :).
Ideal
sb's sb
Topic Starter
Girl
monstrata
Topic Starter
Girl
pls redl
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