from my modding queue
Kaori:
00:28:515 (2,2) - stack this two sliders
00:40:915 (5,1) - ^
00:45:315 (2) - I think your missing a note here
00:45:715 (3) - ^
00:46:115 (3) - ^
00:58:515 (2) - ^
00:58:915 (2) - ^
00:48:315 (1) - move this down a little bit
00:54:315 (2) - stack it properly
01:07:515 (5,6) - blanket? or overlap it at the end of the slider of (5)
01:07:515 (5) - nc
01:08:115 (1) - remove nc
01:08:515 (3,1) - -fix blanket
01:09:715 (2,3) - move the slider a bit to the left
01:10:515 (4) - put a note here?
01:15:115 (6,1) - improve blanket
01:20:715 (2) - ctrl+j?
01:09:115 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the rhythm you did here and here 01:21:915 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - is different make the rhythm same?
01:32:915 (2) - use ds
01:44:315 (1,2) - stack properly
02:03:915 - you're missing a note here
02:04:515 ^
02:06:315 (4) - move this a little higher?
02:09:515 (3) - ctrl+j?
02:33:915 (1,1,1) - you're missing the drums here
02:40:915 (2) - use ds
02:57:115 (2) - ctrl+g?
03:03:915 (1) - make this a slightly c shape slider?
03:22:915 (5) - you're missing a note here
03:23:515 (1,3) - overlap it?
03:25:915 (3,4) - blanket can be improved
04:01:848 (3) - you're missing a note here
04:14:710 (1,3) - stack it?
05:00:740 - lower the hitsounds here make it 5% I guess
That's all
I tried
Good luck in ranking it