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- 00:11:250 (1) - remove finish? doesn't really fit when finish was used recently at 00:06:562 (4) - . orr consider moving the finish to the slider head at 00:15:000 (1) - (don't forget to whistle because of that bell sound)
- 00:15:000 (1) - clap at slider end?
- 00:33:750 (1) - finish is a bit excessive since you used it again at 00:37:500 (1) -
- 00:41:250 (1) - remove finish for consistency with 00:18:750 (1) - ?
- need to be careful with DS. even though it's on, it can still cause aesthetics issues such as at 00:26:250 (1,2,3) - when the DS is at their extremities
- overall, look out with your finish usage as it is a bit inconsistent considering the song just loops itself twice
- consider revising the hitsounds here... they're a bit of a mess compared to the other two diffs
- 00:02:343 (2) - move this a little higher to give more visual spacing with 00:01:875 (1) - ?
- 00:05:625 (5,1) - consider ctrl+g the rhythm so it's circle then slider? this is due to me thinking the red tick should be clickable
- 00:06:328 (2,4) - consider reworking the pattern here so this overlap doesn't happen since it looks rather awkwardly placed
- 00:28:359 (1,2,3) - perhaps a 1/2 slider, 1/1 slider then circle would work better, similar to what you did at 00:05:859 (1,2,3) - . that held instrument at 00:28:827 - should be mapped with a 1/1 slider imo
- 00:39:375 (1,2,3) - keep visual spacing between the sliders the same?
- 00:10:078 (7) - forgot to hitsound this slider tick
- 00:22:265 (4,1) - reposition circle 4 so there is spacing emphasis to sldier 1? slider 1 is on a rather prominent large white tick so spacing emphasis for it would be nice
- 00:28:828 (4,5) - DS, maybe move slider 5 a bit so DS between the two is 1.2x
- 00:32:578 (3,4,1) - keep DS between the objects the same would be better imo, no reason to decrease it to circle 1
- 00:43:593 (3,4) - doesn't make sense to space circle 4 this far out imo, that sound intensity is basically the same as 00:43:359 (2,3) - which has smaller spacing. would make more sense to space circle 5 and/or circle 6 more