1. Easy - 4Key (1.41 stars, 304 notes)
2. Hard - 4Key (2.85 stars, 789 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (2.14 stars, 550 notes)
4. Virtue's HIME - 4Key (3.42 stars, 911 notes)

L A U R A wrote:

hey hey~~~

hard

SPOILER

00:09:888 (9888|3) - i think the ln can be longer can be made longer til the next ln since long sound goes that long or you can make it to represent that spammy synth sound I didnt really want it to be mapping anything specific. Making it longer removes emphasis from the next one as well
00:11:237 (11237|1,11237|0) - here too same like above ln til 00:12:248 - \
00:33:315 - 00:33:315 - make it 2 notes and delet 00:33:400 (33400|3,33484|2,33568|1) - since theres no sound to be represent there done!

Virtue's Hime

SPOILER

00:05:843 (5843|3) - end the ln 00:06:012 - here i think
00:26:237 (26237|0,26237|1,26405|0,26405|2,26574|3,26574|0,26742|0,26742|1) - the ln on the left side just way to heavy probably better balance it or like
00:27:585 (27585|2,27585|3,27754|1,27754|3,27922|3,27922|0,28091|3,28091|2) - same like above
00:30:113 (30113|1,30113|0) - delete the ln and make it stairy i think
00:32:810 (32810|3,32810|2) - same like above
00:38:372 (38372|0,38372|3,38540|2,38540|0,38709|1,38709|0) - i think make it like my suggestion screenshot in this part
01:19:327 (79327|3,79411|2,79495|0,79579|1) - make it like i think
01:31:124 (91124|0) - move it to 2
01:31:630 (91630|1) - move it to 1

This is sooong waay to cute to be missed >.< i give a star for it and make it ranked please

dudehacker wrote:

Very good hitsound, and very fun map, if I was BN I would insta rank this.
Good job

Add this hitsound at this place:
01:22:866 (82866|0,83540|0) -
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/yu07tma4ip1ocof/AABQcFNCWrlpsbRUO3Oyags5a?dl=0&preview=LR_CymbalCCR.wav

And maybe change your current hitfinish to this?
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/yu07tma4ip1ocof/AABQcFNCWrlpsbRUO3Oyags5a?dl=0&preview=LR_CymbalQST.wav

Murumoo wrote:

Hi modding Hard and GD

(1/2/3/4)

Hard

00:20:169 - ctrl + h
00:25:563 -
00:30:956 - same issue ^
01:10:394 -
01:29:945 (89945|0) - ctrl + h
good level

Accepted all except the 3rd one cause its meant to be uncomfortable on purpose

thanks!

L A U R A wrote:

hey hey~~~

Virtue's Hime

SPOILER

00:05:843 (5843|3) - end the ln 00:06:012 - here i think yeah i know, but i wanna variation on it. so i make it like that
00:26:237 (26237|0,26237|1,26405|0,26405|2,26574|3,26574|0,26742|0,26742|1) - the ln on the left side just way to heavy probably better balance it or like nope, it's quite easy to play. sorry
00:27:585 (27585|2,27585|3,27754|1,27754|3,27922|3,27922|0,28091|3,28091|2) - same like above same like above
00:30:113 (30113|1,30113|0) - delete the ln and make it stairy i think nope, i wanna keep those LNs
00:32:810 (32810|3,32810|2) - same like above same like above
00:38:372 (38372|0,38372|3,38540|2,38540|0,38709|1,38709|0) - i think make it like my suggestion screenshot in this part nope, sorry
01:19:327 (79327|3,79411|2,79495|0,79579|1) - make it like i think 10/10 looks nice owo
01:31:124 (91124|0) - move it to 2 nope
01:31:630 (91630|1) - move it to 1 nope

Adiopulse wrote:

Quick Mod

Virtue's Hard

00:50:338 - definitely not overmapped
re-arrange

This is sooong waay to cute to be missed >.< i give a star for it and make it ranked please

Murumoo wrote:

Hi modding Hard and GD

(1/2/3/4)

Virtue's HIME

00:05:169 - suggest nope, i don't like those somehow :/
01:07:360 (67360|1) - move 3 oki :3
01:10:394 - sure, thanks
i cant find anymore

good luck

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

as requested in Crumpey's modding queue

Hard

Hard(Mod)

00:01:799 - 00:06:518 - basically every double in here should be a single disagree, bass and snare are mapped by doubles
00:11:574 (11574|2) - delete this Why this one and not any of the other hi hats?
00:13:933 (13933|3,13933|1,13933|0) - make a double measure
00:40:057 (40057|3,40731|2,41068|0,41405|1) - 00:42:585 (42585|1) - these are mapped to nothing very clearly is bass there
00:49:327 (49327|1,49327|0,49495|2,49664|1,49664|0,49832|2,50001|1,50001|0) - repetitive that's the point

Im not a fan of your easy, normal and hardest diff (imo the hardest is a bit overmapped and the others are overly easy) so i just modded the one i can efficiently mod

Vortex- wrote:

Requested mod from cpotfangirl and Vortex- 4k o!mania modding queue

Normal

00:07:192 (7192|0,8540|1,9888|3,11237|2) - Extend these sliders to each other meh, added notes in between though

00:28:428 (28428|2) - Make this LN kk

00:44:270 - Add note here
00:49:158 - ^
00:56:405 - ^
00:56:574 - ^meh x 4

00:58:428 - Maybe add drum notes here? inconsistent

01:19:327 (79327|3) - Extend slider to next section vocal stops

01:22:866 (82866|1,83034|2,83540|1,83709|2) - Maybe make these LN? too complicated

Sorry for short mod, but I realize how bad I am modding lower starrating diffs lol

Anyways, nice little mapset you have there, good luck with rank!

od3x wrote:

Yo

I wanted to do something again but not start another mapset, so here I am nitpicking (ง ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ง

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Easy

00:05:506 (5506|0) - move to 1 since all other drum hits in the intro were on the two middle columns too. looks better. done
00:06:855 (6855|3) - move to 2 ^ OR
move 00:06:518 (6518|0) - to 1 and make these both 1 beat LN. dont move the latter one in this case did this one
00:28:428 (28428|1) - maby LN? ye

I remember saying similiar to this when I first modded one of your maps way back when but 00:28:428 (28428|1) - and 00:28:428 (28428|1) - dont add up. 01:12:922 - 01:17:304 - you got everything in here. If you plan to emphasize measures, just have it mean something. Especially when you have kiai on both parts. If thats not your cup of kangaroo, just double up the cymbals.fixed

Also, there is a hole in the kiai. Water is already pouring in. ᕕ(⚆‿‿⚆)ᕗ

INTENTIONAL REEE

Normal

00:04:495 (4495|0) - looks/plays better on 2 imho kk
00:06:855 (6855|3) - maby LN? reduces impact of next thing
00:25:563 (25563|2,25731|1) - you could move these to one col to the left and get rid of the double. just for the looks. or maybe mirror earlier pattern.
00:30:956 - mirroring here would look good too. The doubles at the start of measure work well so I thought this would keep that concept cleaner.
But tis' but a suggestion. intentional

00:52:023 - brainfart or really fought against your snare obsession? [ ͠° ͜ʖ °] it took a while but i decided the vocal was more important

01:06:518 - Maybe make the kiai have just doubles on every other beat instead of this. whatever this is. Plays fine but feels weird. yeah

01:25:394 - you had the lovely jingles mapped in the intro but not the outro. only pointing this out, no action required. hmmm, unsure if i should change

>make map
>make a hole in the kiai
>????
>profit ( ͠° ³ °)

As for Hard, I didn't pick up on anything weird. Just that on this diff, the emphasis on measures doesn't really work imo.
Also, Kiaiface 乁(ꗞ‿ꗞ)ㄏ

Virtue's

00:05:506 (5506|1) - Most likely not LN since you made 00:04:158 (4158|1) - a single too
00:06:855 (6855|1) - maby LN?
00:30:113 - and 00:32:810 - would play better with just a stream, but are fine as is
00:49:495 (49495|2,49832|1) - necessary?
01:01:293 - suggestion for the echo "hime". make namirin's vocals as they are, single LN and the echo with double LN. Both syllables.
Aka adding another LN next to 01:01:293 (61293|0,61967|0) - etc etc.
01:26:237 (86237|3,86574|1,87585|0,87922|2,89102|1,89270|3) - I'm not convinced that these are LN worthy so give them some thought. fine as is.
01:33:147 (93147|3,93147|2) - LN these bad boys plzxx

You know what time it is? ヽ(꘠ ͜つ꘠)ﾉ Kiai hole time ヽ(꘠ ͜つ꘠)ﾉ

Solid map. pretty sure song was about him or something. 10/10 would mod again.

Todestrieb wrote:

Triumph and

This mod can be heavily biased, feel free to reject.

0|1|2|3

Hard

00:05:169 (5169|0,5506|0,5843|0,6181|0,6518|0,6855|0,7192|0) - Nitpicky af, but there is a 5 anchors here (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025660). Maybe try to move it a bit (would also break the right/left here) (suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025696 ).

00:17:978 (17978|1,18315|1,18652|1,18990|1,19327|1) - 5 anchors again, try to move it around a bit. Also the pattern feels a bit repetitive. (suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025763 ).

00:20:338 (20338|3,20675|3,21012|3,21349|3,21686|3,22023|3) - Anchors again, this one is a bit longer (suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025795 ).

00:22:866 (22866|0,23203|0,23540|0,23877|0,24214|0) - You should move them too (even more if you applied my previous suggestion) (suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025821 ).

00:29:439 (29439|2,29607|2) - This "mini-jack" feels a bit random compared to the rest, you should re-arrange it (suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025830 ).

00:30:450 (30450|2,30956|2,31293|2,31630|2,31967|2) - I don't get why these two LNs are on the same columns (you didn't the previous time at 00:25:057) and It might just be me but you could move it a bit to flow better (specially for the 3rd column) (suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025869 ).

00:33:821 (33821|2,34158|2,34495|2,34832|2,35169|2,35506|2,35843|2) - Try to re-arrange a bit, this anchor could also be forgotten (suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025908 ).

01:02:136 (62136|1,62304|1,62473|0,62641|0,62978|0,63147|0) - You should try to handbalance these "mini-jacks" a bit, move one or two the right hand, especially considering the next one (01:04:832 (64832|1,65001|1) - ) is also on the left hand (suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025940, now you have one on every columns with the one at 01:04:832 (64832|1,65001|1) - ).

01:13:091 (73091|1,73259|1,73428|1,73765|2,73933|2,74102|2) - I don't get what these longer jacks are accentuating, feels a bit wonky to me.

01:20:843 (80843|1,81012|1,81181|1,81349|1) - Same here, I would move 01:21:181 (81181|1) - to 3.

Litharrale wrote:

od3x wrote:

Yo

I wanted to do something again but not start another mapset, so here I am nitpicking (ง ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ง

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Virtue's

00:05:506 (5506|1) - Most likely not LN since you made 00:04:158 (4158|1) - a single too o, okay
00:06:855 (6855|1) - maby LN? sure, good enough there. since there's sound there
00:30:113 - and 00:32:810 - would play better with just a stream, but are fine as is i wanna put those LNs too
00:49:495 (49495|2,49832|1) - necessary? i guess there's a sound there
01:01:293 - suggestion for the echo "hime". make namirin's vocals as they are, single LN and the echo with double LN. Both syllables.
Aka adding another LN next to 01:01:293 (61293|0,61967|0) - etc etc. that would be nice, but..... okay, keep this
01:26:237 (86237|3,86574|1,87585|0,87922|2,89102|1,89270|3) - I'm not convinced that these are LN worthy so give them some thought. fine as is. owo? it's same as the beginning
01:33:147 (93147|3,93147|2) - LN these bad boys plzxx oki 'w')b

You know what time it is? ヽ(꘠ ͜つ꘠)ﾉ Kiai hole time ヽ(꘠ ͜つ꘠)ﾉ

Solid map. pretty sure song was about him or something. 10/10 would mod again.

Tofu1222 wrote:

Virtue's HIME

00:05:843 (5843|1,6012|0) - 00:06:349 (6349|2) - delete them only leave 00:06:181 - to have double notes because u did this before

00:11:237 (11237|2) - suggest this LN stops here 00:12:248 - so you can add a note 00:12:585 - on this line to emphasize the sound

00:52:192 (52192|0,52192|2,52192|3) - make this double instead, volume is weaker than sound on triple notes (and no hihat sound)

00:56:911 (56911|0,56911|3,56911|1) - ^

01:09:214 (69214|1,69214|3,69214|0) - i dont find any need to triple this, make this double because no hihat sound here

01:15:956 - 01:16:293 - add a note to keep your double notes pattern

01:30:787 (90787|2,90956|1,91124|0) - 01:31:461 (91461|2,91630|1,91798|0) - ok for u to make such on one column, like in hard difficulty

Hard

00:01:799 - 00:02:473 - 00:03:147 - 00:03:821 - 00:04:495 - 00:05:169 - 00:05:843 - 00:06:518 - make this just single note plz, refer to the HIME diff, and these double notes are not necessary and not effective here. You should emphasize those with the most obvious volume like 00:02:136 - 00:02:810 - in this part since double notes are only available here kick/snare/kick/snare

from 00:30:113 - to 00:31:124 - you should catch those sound like u did from 00:32:810 - 00:33:821 - make them consistent variety

00:38:372 (38372|0,38372|1,38540|0,38540|1,38709|1,38709|0,38877|0,38877|1) - this jack.. hmm though i know what u intend here but considering the difficulty maybe u should rearrange them aint too hard

00:49:832 (49832|2) - ghost note？its not

00:52:950 - u can consider adding one here done

00:59:607 (59607|2,59607|1,59607|3,59945|0,59945|2,59945|1,60113|3,60113|1,60113|2) - make them in the same column may be better tried and meh

01:32:388 (92388|2) - wrong time? I dont think so but ill ask virtue

That's it. Nice song and mostly well-done map.

hime hime hime hime suki suki daisuki hime hime kira kira

Tofu1222 wrote:

Virtue's HIME

00:05:843 (5843|1,6012|0) - 00:06:349 (6349|2) - delete them only leave 00:06:181 - to have double notes because u did this before well, is it a problem if i put those notes? i don't think so, it just a variation that i wanna put

00:11:237 (11237|2) - suggest this LN stops here 00:12:248 - so you can add a note 00:12:585 - on this line to emphasize the sound oki,
applied

00:52:192 (52192|0,52192|2,52192|3) - make this double instead, volume is weaker than sound on triple notes (and no hihat sound) nope,
it's a crash

00:56:911 (56911|0,56911|3,56911|1) - ^ ^

01:09:214 (69214|1,69214|3,69214|0) - i dont find any need to triple this, make this double because no hihat sound here oki, change it to double
01:15:956 - 01:16:293 - add a note to keep your double notes pattern okay, re-arrange

01:30:787 (90787|2,90956|1,91124|0) - 01:31:461 (91461|2,91630|1,91798|0) - ok for u to make such on one column, like in hard difficulty is it a problem?

hime hime hime hime suki suki daisuki hime hime kira kira

Syadow- wrote:

mod mod uwu)//

uwu

[General]

dont forget to uncheck widescreen in ez

[Easy]

00:17:978 - should be double for cymbal

00:27:079 - add note, consistency with 00:25:057 - 00:22:360 - etc

00:28:765 - double for cymbal

00:39:551 - move to col 4 cuz seems empty or add note for cymbal in col 4

00:41:911 (41911|1) - how about change it to short note ? similar with 00:44:607 -

00:44:607 - add note here for clingg sound

00:48:821 (48821|1) - extend the LN to 00:49:664 -

00:52:697 - double plz, this is cymbal !!1!!11 *sparta sound

01:06:518 - cymbal, make double

01:23:034 (83034|2) - lol lol move it to 01:22:866 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057231

[Normal]

00:03:147 (3147|1) - move to col 4 n 00:03:315 (3315|0,3400|1) - move to right side 1x avoid https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057235

00:04:158 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057240 *speechless*

00:14:607 (14607|2,14945|1) - move to col 2 3

00:39:214 (39214|1) - move to col 4 for balance

00:47:641 - maybe double here

01:02:136 (62136|1,62473|1,62810|1,63147|1,63484|1,63821|1) - this isn't good ._.
01:02:810 - i suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8057271
01:04:495 - 01:01:798 - why all in white tick are double except this ???

01:10:394 - add note col 3 for empasis n cymbal sound

01:15:282 - 01:12:585 - same

01:32:136 (92136|0,92304|1,92473|2) - hmm ?? change to 1/3

[Hard]

00:30:197 - 00:32:894 - why different pattern owo ?? i think they have a same sound

00:49:495 (49495|2) - move to col 4, idk the reason :vvv like this 00:50:169 (50169|3) -

00:54:888 - double for symbal

01:10:394 - ^

Vircoeg

2017-05-11 10:59 Syadow-: woe mas :v
2017-05-11 10:59 Syadow-: mao irc ga
2017-05-11 10:59 Syadow-: HIME HIME HIME SUKI SUKI DAISUKI HIME
2017-05-11 11:00 Virtue-: bntr
2017-05-11 11:00 Virtue-: osu w lg masalah njay
2017-05-11 11:00 Syadow-: :'vv yha aaaaa
2017-05-11 11:01 Virtue-: mari
2017-05-11 11:03 Syadow-: sek sek
2017-05-11 11:06 Virtue-: =W=
2017-05-11 11:09 Syadow-: yok
2017-05-11 11:10 Syadow-: 00:02:810 (2810|1,2978|3) - napa ini 00:04:158 (4158|2,4327|0) - note biasa ?
2017-05-11 11:10 Syadow-: kan suaranya sama
2017-05-11 11:10 Virtue-: udh lu update blm? =w=
2017-05-11 11:10 Syadow-: uda
2017-05-11 11:11 Virtue-: o
2017-05-11 11:11 Virtue-: ok
2017-05-11 11:11 Virtue-: knp itu w buat note biasa, pitchny beda
2017-05-11 11:11 Virtue-: 00:03:821 (3821|0,3990|3) - 00:04:158 (4158|2,4327|0) - beda
2017-05-11 11:11 Syadow-: oh i see
2017-05-11 11:12 Syadow-: 00:06:770 - 00:06:813 - 1/8
2017-05-11 11:12 Virtue-: bntr
2017-05-11 11:12 Virtue-: cari pattern yg pas :v
2017-05-11 11:12 Syadow-: eh ini synth nya ga di map ?
2017-05-11 11:13 Virtue-: dah
2017-05-11 11:13 Virtue-: synth paan
2017-05-11 11:14 Syadow-: 00:07:276 - 1/4 beat mulai dari sini suara synth
2017-05-11 11:15 Virtue-: then?
2017-05-11 11:15 Syadow-: 00:30:197 - kek ini
2017-05-11 11:15 Virtue-: ya g harus ikut jg kali
2017-05-11 11:15 Virtue-: wait
2017-05-11 11:15 Virtue-: mulainy kn dari 00:30:113 (30113|1) -
2017-05-11 11:15 Syadow-: iya
2017-05-11 11:16 Virtue-: pls mulai dah bener dari sini 00:07:192 (7192|3,7192|2,7192|1) -
2017-05-11 11:16 Virtue-: volume hs matiin, volume master sm song jadiin 100% trs jadiin 25%
2017-05-11 11:16 Virtue-: pasti kedengeran
2017-05-11 11:18 Syadow-: woki wes
2017-05-11 11:20 Syadow-: 700:26:742 - triple
2017-05-11 11:21 Virtue-: dat timesnap
2017-05-11 11:21 Virtue-: ggwp
2017-05-11 11:21 Syadow-: 7 nya kepencet plz :v
2017-05-11 11:21 Virtue-: hmmm
2017-05-11 11:21 Syadow-: 00:28:091 - sama
2017-05-11 11:21 Virtue-: biar kan aku berpikir
2017-05-11 11:21 Syadow-: tik tik tik tik
2017-05-11 11:22 Virtue-: ok
2017-05-11 11:22 Virtue-: looks nice
2017-05-11 11:23 Syadow-: ku tanya 00:18:652 - ini ena di double apa single aja ?
2017-05-11 11:24 Syadow-: feelnya menurutku dpt kalo dobel
2017-05-11 11:24 Syadow-: soalnya duk duk deg
2017-05-11 11:24 Virtue-: menurut w sih single, soalny itu hihat
2017-05-11 11:24 Virtue-: dan klo mw double jg paling ikut vocal
2017-05-11 11:24 Syadow-: nah
2017-05-11 11:25 Syadow-: sumpa ena dobel >:vvvv
2017-05-11 11:26 Syadow-: 00:42:248 - triple buat agak empasis
2017-05-11 11:26 Virtue-: 00:18:652 (18652|1) - ini kn?
2017-05-11 11:26 Virtue-: mana ena double pls
2017-05-11 11:26 Virtue-: nope
2017-05-11 11:26 Virtue-: itu kick
2017-05-11 11:26 Syadow-: yha :'vv
2017-05-11 11:27 Syadow-: 00:49:495 - dobel tuk kick
2017-05-11 11:28 Virtue-: oki
2017-05-11 11:29 Syadow-: 01:00:787 (60787|2) - gmana kalo ini di panjangin ke 01:01:124 -
2017-05-11 11:31 Syadow-: how ?
2017-05-11 11:31 Virtue-: looks god
2017-05-11 11:31 Virtue-: *gud
2017-05-11 11:32 Syadow-: oiya itu yg panjang di col 4 terus 3 biar ena
2017-05-11 11:33 Virtue-: =W=
2017-05-11 11:34 Virtue-: http://puu.sh/vMmAk/da8326a7ef.jpg
2017-05-11 11:35 Syadow-: sadis anjuu :vv
2017-05-11 11:35 Virtue-: jeh
2017-05-11 11:35 Virtue-: ez itu
2017-05-11 11:35 Syadow-: 01:10:057 (70057|0,70225|1) - swap col impact ke 01:10:394 -
2017-05-11 11:35 Syadow-: susah w;
2017-05-11 11:36 Virtue-: TYDAC
2017-05-11 11:36 Virtue-: ha?
2017-05-11 11:36 Virtue-: w g mudeng
2017-05-11 11:38 Syadow-: col 1 -> 2, col 2 -> 1
2017-05-11 11:38 Syadow-: biar 01:10:394 - lebih ena
2017-05-11 11:38 Virtue-: oooo
2017-05-11 11:38 Virtue-: tp di jari w g ad problem :v
2017-05-11 11:39 Syadow-: 01:30:956 (90956|1,91124|0,91630|1,91798|0) - buat jack
2017-05-11 11:39 Syadow-: biar ena :VVVV
2017-05-11 11:40 Virtue-: ok"
2017-05-11 11:40 Virtue-: jack
2017-05-11 11:40 Virtue-: YWDH
2017-05-11 11:41 Syadow-: dah itu aja :vvvv
2017-05-11 11:42 Virtue-: ok oc
2017-05-11 11:42 Virtue-: map ku indah
2017-05-11 11:42 Virtue-: HAHA
2017-05-11 11:42 Virtue-: H3H3
2017-05-11 11:42 Virtue-: HUHU
2017-05-11 11:42 Virtue-: H0H0
2017-05-11 11:43 Syadow-: :VVVVV
2017-05-11 11:43 Syadow-: ga icon I :vvv ga zeeb
2017-05-11 11:44 Virtue-: how to I icon
2017-05-11 11:44 Virtue-: teach me senpie
2017-05-11 12:09 Syadow-: :v
2017-05-11 12:09 Syadow-: rip me too
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HIME HIME HIME SUKI SUKI DAISUKI HIME HIME KIRAKIRARIN :VVVVV YOLOOO

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3

General

MP3: PASS

1. Is 128Kbps so pass... But i rather increase it to 192Kbps, up to you.

BG: PASS
Video: PASS

1. Not needed!

BPM & Offset: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS
Diff.Name: PASS

1. h i m e

HP & OD: MISS

1. Suggestion:
   
   1. Normal: HP=7 -> HP=7.5

Hitsound: PASS
Hitsound Volume: MISS

1. Except the start and the end, i think that 40% will be better instead of 30%.

Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: MISS

1. It was fun to search the origin of this *insert word here* Links: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm23776757 and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hPSQ23NRED8
   
   1. Title (Unicode): "Koi no Hime Hime Pettanko" -> "恋のヒメヒメぺったんこ" (There are two places to put the Title. The First one is for the unicode title and the second one will be unlocked for the non-unicode.)
   2. Artist (Unicode): "*namirin" -> "＊なみりん" (Same thing here, explained above.)
   3. Tags: "utaite" (? I recommend to erase this, because i don't see the connection. That's all.)

Widescreen Support: MISS

1. Uncheck Widescreen Support on Normal and Virtue's HIME.

Preview Point: PASS
AiMod Things: PASSFixed all thanks! i didnt know it was 128kbps shame there seems to be no alternative

Mod!

[Easy]

00:04:832 (4832|1,5169|3,5506|1,5843|3) - Isn't a bit repetitive? I rather spread them like before.

00:08:372 - Kick missed, you map it on 00:11:068 (11068|1).

00:09:888 (9888|3,11237|2) - I think these two longnotes needs to be in the same column, like 00:07:192 (7192|1,8540|1). I prefer both patterns on |1| and |2|.

00:26:911 - Kick missed? But for better rest is ok to not add a note... i suppose. Up to you.

00:27:079 (27079|1,27248|2,27585|2,27754|1,27922|0,28091|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099193 <- Ctrl+H. Less repetitive and better rest for |2| column. (take care of HS while you do Ctrl+"key") eh ill keep for PR

00:28:428 (28428|1,28765|3,28765|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099216 Looks better.

00:38:372 (38372|2,38540|1,38709|2,38877|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099228 Ctrl+H, Seems better.

00:54:720 (54720|1,55394|2) - to |2| and |3| respectively, Spaced for a column is better for the snare.

01:10:394 - Cymbal. I recommend chord here.

01:05:843 (65843|0,66181|1) - I rather move that Longnote and the note: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099266 also ... 01:05:843 (65843|1) - This Longnote is necessary? I think note will be good. i like it, its unexpected and exciting

01:08:877 (68877|2) - Move to |3|. I can't figure why is close to the last on 01:08:203 (68203|2). not an issue imo

01:10:225 (70225|2,70394|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099292 <- Ctrl+H, Less repetition of Longnotes. ^

01:14:607 (74607|2,75282|2,75956|2,76461|2,77304|2,77978|2) - Too filled in my opinion... 01:15:282 (75282|2) - Move to |1| instead.

01:24:888 (84888|3) - I don't think this Longnote fits right here, seems ankward, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099340 and Move 01:26:742 (86742|3,87079|0) - to |2| and |1| respectively if you want.

I usually don't recommend using chords so frecuently like in this diff, only for cymbals.

[Normal]

00:04:495 (4495|2,4832|2,5085|2,5338|2,5675|2,6012|2,6349|2) - This is more hard, but i think you can spread them better in my opinion.

00:07:192 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099386 I already say this in the Easy diff. So here is more clear. This needs to be more repetitive. does it though? :thinking:

00:12:248 (12248|0) - ...and the drums? If you are limiting at least 3 notes on 1/4 snaps ok, but you in the start mapped the 1/4 notes for those whistles. Seems odd. If you replace that Longnote then: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099416 Start was an exception, I dont think its too much of a diff spike

00:25:900 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099428 <- This part seems odd when you compare it with the Easy one. Also, i don't know what sound you want to be chord or not there: 00:27:079 (27079|1) - Is a snare, 00:26:742 (26742|3,26742|2) - Also snare, 00:27:248 (27248|2,27248|3) - Cymbal/hihat. Skipping this from now on... Relative intensity, you are correct in that its inconsistent but the sound right after is a lot stronger and for sake of avoiding consecutive doubles in this set, I opted to only make the second one a double

00:38:877 (38877|1,38877|0,39214|1) - This is more hard than this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099460 Try to use |2||3| columns more frecuently than |1| in this case. same sound so eh

00:56:068 (56068|3) - to |2| If you want to be less repetitive there.

01:01:124 to 01:20:001 - Like 00:25:900 but all this section. I think you wanted to map the snares with chords, but here the kicks also get mapped like chords too, is inconsistent. Here are the snares if you are interested: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099501 The repetition is almost the same always. So the next ones also are like this. Its vocal emphasis

01:24:888 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099340 Like the Easy one, if you want replace some note with Longnote up to youkept.

[Hard]

00:29:439 (29439|2) - I prefer spread like before, move it to |1| a n c h o r also i think it fits with the vocal

00:49:495 (49495|2) - to |3|, it isn't to be so repetitive. super intentional

00:53:709 (53709|1,53877|3,54046|3) - Like before but changed to the left hand: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099571 <- Highlighted! Good idea but it creates an uber anchor

01:00:113 (60113|2,60113|3,60113|1) - If you repeat these ones too will be great: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099589

01:01:124 to 01:25:394 - You really catch the ryhthm of the song here. Comparing with the last diff, this was really good! b-baka

01:24:888 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099633 Fits in my opinion. i agree but it means i cant map the first sound of the next part

01:32:136 (92136|0,92248|1,92360|2,92473|1,92641|0,92810|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099626 eXperimental? I guessI liked the idea but it played weird cause of the spacing.

[Virtue's HIME]

00:12:079 (12079|3) - Erase this note. Seems odd for the LN pattern so clean that you used before.

00:44:607 (44607|3) - Move to |2|. I rather evade that 4-stack and you get balance to three notes there.

00:47:473 (47473|3) - Move to |0|. This time, i rather have the right hand pressing the LN more than LN pressing + notes at the same time so frecuently.

00:59:607 (59607|0,59945|0,60113|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099691 <- This way you skip another 4-stack on |0|.

01:11:237 (71237|0,71405|0,71574|0,71742|0,71911|0) - 5-stack so: 01:11:405 (71405|0) - Move to |1|.

01:24:888 (84888|3,85057|3) - Both to |2|. To be opposite to 00:59:607.

01:30:787 (90787|2,90956|1,91124|0,91461|2,91630|1,91798|0) - Can you repeat these notes in one column? (only exception for |2| column.)

01:32:136 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099719 <- I don't mind this. (i want that! xD)

Thanks for melting my brain after so many "HIME". Talking about "HIME", I think this is the "TRUE HIME".

Good HIME Luck to both!

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3

General

MP3: PASS

1. Is 128Kbps so pass... But i rather increase it to 192Kbps, up to you.

BG: PASS
Video: PASS

1. Not needed!

BPM & Offset: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS
Diff.Name: PASS

1. h i m e

HP & OD: MISS

1. Suggestion:
   
   1. Normal: HP=7 -> HP=7.5

Hitsound: PASS
Hitsound Volume: MISS

1. Except the start and the end, i think that 40% will be better instead of 30%.

Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: MISS

1. It was fun to search the origin of this *insert word here* Links: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm23776757 and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hPSQ23NRED8
   
   1. Title (Unicode): "Koi no Hime Hime Pettanko" -> "恋のヒメヒメぺったんこ" (There are two places to put the Title. The First one is for the unicode title and the second one will be unlocked for the non-unicode.)
   2. Artist (Unicode): "*namirin" -> "＊なみりん" (Same thing here, explained above.)
   3. Tags: "utaite" (? I recommend to erase this, because i don't see the connection. That's all.)

Widescreen Support: MISS

1. Uncheck Widescreen Support on Normal and Virtue's HIME.

Preview Point: PASS
AiMod Things: PASS

[Virtue's HIME]

00:12:079 (12079|3) - Erase this note. Seems odd for the LN pattern so clean that you used before. there's a very very clear sound there

00:44:607 (44607|3) - Move to |2|. I rather evade that 4-stack and you get balance to three notes there. nope, i wanna make it the same...
'cause it's the same sound :/

00:47:473 (47473|3) - Move to |0|. This time, i rather have the right hand pressing the LN more than LN pressing + notes at the same time so frecuently. is it problem if there's jacks?

00:59:607 (59607|0,59945|0,60113|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099691 <- This way you skip another 4-stack on |0|. rejected the suggestion, re-arrange it somehow

01:11:237 (71237|0,71405|0,71574|0,71742|0,71911|0) - 5-stack so: 01:11:405 (71405|0) - Move to |1|. if i move it, it become more harder than before

01:24:888 (84888|3,85057|3) - Both to |2|. To be opposite to 00:59:607. nope

01:30:787 (90787|2,90956|1,91124|0,91461|2,91630|1,91798|0) - Can you repeat these notes in one column? (only exception for |2| column.) what?

01:32:136 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8099719 <- I don't mind this. (i want that! xD) no, i think D:

Thanks for melting my brain after so many "HIME". Talking about "HIME", I think this is the "TRUE HIME".

Good HIME Luck to both!