hi im modder c:
ok that should be plenty enough for now, i have to cut this mod short since i have to go to class now, rip :C feel free to message me if something was unclear or you need help / guidance.
also i see that you're blowing a lot of kds on this map, which i recommend that you stop doing (not because the map is bad, that's not at all what im saying) but star priority only matters up until a certain point. past that point, throwing more kds at a map is like beating a dead horse (t/509382 this is one of the many examples of what i mean). i recommend you save your kds and spend it on things you want to get loved. 1 godlike mod does more to a map than 1 kds does, just an opinion c:
good effort, keep going!
[Doctor Priaa]
- 00:04:956 (5,7) - ill just link this one blanket and then recommend that you check all of your blankets so that the blanket mod is over and done with
- 00:10:074 (2,3) - placed on the wrong times. to be consistent with what you've been mapping, 00:10:074 (2) - should start 00:10:162 - here instead, listen on 25% if it helps. after fixing the rhythm, you should increase the distance between 00:09:897 (1,2) - so that the timing change is more obvious. also (depending on how you decide to fix the rhythm here), i recommend you use the same rhythm here as well 00:07:250 - .
- 00:18:368 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - keep your NCs consistent. considering that this song is entirely 4/4 timing, there is no reason you should have 6 1/4 elements in a grouping - i.e, 00:19:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (rhythmically thats 3 measures instead of 2, and this isn't 3/4 timing as previously mentioned)
On the same point, because these are currently being rhythmically grouped incorrectly, maybe group the sliders differently so that it's more obvious that there is a new measure? like this screen shot https://puu.sh/vnn4B/208549148d.png , notice how the elements show clear organization of rhythm both visually and functionally. - 00:33:191 (4,6) - unnecessary clutter
- 01:31:956 - starting in this section, i think the spacing between objects is overemphasized. take 01:33:368 (1,2) - for example, there is as much distance between these two notes as there are here 00:57:368 (3,4) - , even though the elements mapped in 01:31:956 - this section are much much more subtle. in the first place, 01:33:368 (1,2) - are notes used as stepping stones to keep the rhythm and are not actually emphasizing any one musical element in particular, so they should really be toned down especially considering the context of spacing from the previous section (which is much more intense)
- 01:52:162 (8,9) - i like the idea but again, the spacing is over emphasized for similar reasons as listed above. also, the slider should end here: 01:52:868 - so that 01:53:132 (10) - can begin on a downbeat, not an off beat
- 02:07:779 (1,2,3,4) - to be clearer that this rhythm is different than 02:07:074 (1,2,3) - this type of rhythm, use a different distance spacing. it can easily be confused that 02:07:779 (1,2) - will follow the same rhythm as 02:07:074 (1,2) - because the distance between objects are very similar.
- 02:28:956 (1,1,1,1) - these are all on heavy down beats (you even hitsounded them that way), imo they should get more cursor attention than they are currently receiving
- 02:35:309 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - again, the rhythm should not be broken up into 6/8 when the rhythm for 2 measures is 8/8 (4/4 rhythm)
ok that should be plenty enough for now, i have to cut this mod short since i have to go to class now, rip :C feel free to message me if something was unclear or you need help / guidance.
also i see that you're blowing a lot of kds on this map, which i recommend that you stop doing (not because the map is bad, that's not at all what im saying) but star priority only matters up until a certain point. past that point, throwing more kds at a map is like beating a dead horse (t/509382 this is one of the many examples of what i mean). i recommend you save your kds and spend it on things you want to get loved. 1 godlike mod does more to a map than 1 kds does, just an opinion c:
good effort, keep going!