hello
overall this map is very fun but it might not be suited for rank due to some consistency issues. the approach and general structure of the map is good its just that sometimes i think you vary things too much just for the heck of it
00:05:195 (4) - no need to end on yellow tick, artificial difficulty combined with SV
00:12:095 (3) - no need for SV change
00:12:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - like this stream shape
00:13:895 (1,2,3,4) - why random change in hitsounding for this one? either do this for all previous ones or dont do it
00:14:795 (4) - no need for SV change
00:17:195 (4) - ^
00:18:695 (1) - excessive SV change
00:20:495 (5) - i think this would be better as a stream or kickslider since 1/4 rhythm here
00:21:995 (4) - if you keep the low SV for the last sliders of the 4 slider combos (00:14:795 (4) and others, make this one low as well)
00:26:495 (1,2,1) - nothing in the music would indicate this should be a slider this time instead of stream
00:28:895 (1,2,3) - stack first 3 notes for consistency maybe?
00:30:095 (4,5,1,2,3) - why change to kicksliders all the sudden? this is the same guitar part as 00:25:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - which was mapped as stream. also, 1 doesnt need a NC since you NC every 2 beats (and here: 00:33:695 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
00:33:845 (3,4,5) - again dont see why you switch to kicksliders randomly
00:34:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no reason for 1 to be a slider as it is. if you keep this, make this combo and 00:26:495 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - comboing consistent. i'd recommend removing NC on 00:26:795 (1) -
00:35:495 (1,2) - dont think these should be kicksliders, you used slider into 2 circles last time for the same part (00:25:895 (1,2,3) - )
00:37:295 (4) - NC here instead of 00:36:695 (1) - and make this rhythm consistent with the past measures (stream starting on 00:37:295 (4) - or kicksliders if you keep them)
00:38:495 (3,1,2,3) - ^ same rhythm suggestion
00:41:495 (1) - section starting here has really inconsistent use of triples or 00:41:495 (1) - rhythm. seems random which is chosen. clean it up a bit. also, NCing is a mess here. i'd recommend doing it every 2 beats starting with 00:41:495 (1) -
00:46:295 (1,2,1,2) - this rhythm choice is vastly different to 00:41:495 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - which have the same rhythms.
00:51:095 (1,2,3) - ^ but also inconsistent to that one as well
01:02:345 (4) - this is the only slider that ends on a white tick in this section, sticks out
01:02:645 (5) - NC for consistency
01:06:095 (5) - ^
01:09:695 (3) - ^
inconsistency between 01:11:045 (1,2,3) - and 01:01:445 (1,2,3) -
01:15:845 (1,2,3) - ^
01:16:595 (1) - unnecessary NC
01:16:895 (4) - NC
01:17:195 (1) - remove NC
section starting at 01:18:695 (1) - has VERY inconsistent NCing.
01:23:495 (1) - // 01:18:695 (1) - // 01:19:595 (2) - use either 1.5x or 1.0x in this section, not both
01:27:095 (1) - // 01:29:945 (1) - ^
01:45:995 (4) - unnecessary SV change
01:48:095 (3,4) - ^ + 3 wasn't slow last time but is this time
01:50:495 (3,4) - no need for 3 different SVs for these four sliders // ^
01:59:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - NC spam these use a 1/3 slider to introduce this rhythm, extremely hard to read
02:12:695 (1) - 1/4 stream makes way more sense here, or at least 1/4 buzz slider
02:13:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why are these triples and not a stream (compare to 02:03:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - )
02:14:495 (1,2) - spacing implies 1 ends on blue tick, space more.
02:15:695 (5,6) - rhythm misses a lot of important drum sounds
02:23:195 (1) - remove NC
02:23:495 (2) - NC
02:24:095 (1) - remove NC (this plus last 2 are for consistency with last 2 measures, NCing every 4 beats)
02:27:095 (3) - NC
02:29:495 (5) - NC
02:33:095 (4) - NC
02:36:395 (1) - remove NC
03:02:495 (9) - NC
03:02:795 (1) - remove NC
03:08:495 (5) - NC for consistency with 02:58:295 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
03:08:495 (5,6,7) - inconsistent rhythm with 02:58:895 (1,2,3,4) -
03:34:295 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - jumps feel excessive when the red ticks have no strong sounds
03:38:120 (4,5,6) - this sharp of an angle emphasizes 5 in a way that doesn't relate to the music at all
04:02:345 (1,2) - swap NC
04:08:495 (5) - NC and consider switching 04:08:495 (5,6,7) - rhythm around so that its 2 circles then slider and not opposite for consistency
04:12:695 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these should be 2 circles then slider like the rest of the map
good luck!