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RoughSketch feat.Aikapin - Grimm (Kobaryo's FTN-Remix) [OsuM

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Wadu
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Wadu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on יום שלישי 01 אוגוסט 2017 at 11:45:06

Artist: RoughSketch feat.Aikapin
Title: Grimm (Kobaryo's FTN-Remix)
Tags: hanamushi distorted children speedcore hardcore electro burst hardstyle 花蟲 laughingcomet
BPM: 200
Filesize: 9731kb
Play Time: 03:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Comet's Hard - 4Key (3.26 stars, 1766 notes)
  2. Easy - 4Key (1.45 stars, 679 notes)
  3. Extra - 4Key (4.61 stars, 2618 notes)
  4. Grimmpossible - 4Key (5.29 stars, 3061 notes)
  5. Insane - 4Key (4.2 stars, 2201 notes)
  6. Normal - 4Key (2.09 stars, 1175 notes)
Download: RoughSketch feat.Aikapin - Grimm (Kobaryo's FTN-Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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He who foresees calamities, suffers them twice over

This is NOT a PP map

Difficulties Information
Easy - by me.
Normal - by me.
Hard - by laughingcomet.
Insane - by me.
Extra - by me.
Grimmpossible - by me.
Contributors
laughingcomet for his GD & modding.
CometicRush for modding & a star.
eyes for modding.
Protastic101 for modding.
Hydria for modding.
Etsu for modding.
BloowXv2 for modding.
Janko for modding.
DDMythical for modding.
FastYoshi for modding.
Another Lie for modding.
Rivals_7 for modding.
JesusMD24 for modding.
Nivrad00 for 3 stars.
Beomsan for a star.
Last edited by Wadu , edited 132 times in total.
PremiumShiny
24 posts
Joined June 2014
PremiumShiny
Lol RIP the jacks
Beomsan
1,878 posts
Joined November 2013
Beomsan
take my star
Allezard
208 posts
Joined December 2013
Allezard
O, nice)
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu
Thank you all for the support!
Jesuren
432 posts
Joined December 2015
Jesuren
hey oh~
Grimmpossible

00:32:655 (32655|0,32692|1) - Ctrl + G, it looks better, like 00:32:655 (32655|0,32692|1) - imo
00:37:155 (37155|0) - not necessary
00:37:305 (37305|3,37342|2) - Ctrl + G
00:37:305 (37305|3,37342|2) - Same^
00:46:905 (46905|0,46942|1) - ^
00:47:505 Add note here?
00:59:055 (59055|3,59205|3) - try this?
01:00:405 (60405|0) - mmmm, LN would be fine here imo
01:01:605 (61605|0,61642|1) - Ctrl + G
01:07:305 (67305|3,67755|1,68205|0,68655|3) - they should be 3 notes, or 2 imo
01:09:255 what happening here?
01:09:705 (69705|2,70155|1,70605|0,71055|2) - mmmmm same, 3 notes or 2
01:11:355 (71355|0,71392|1,71430|2,71467|3) - I think that these notes are not necessary
01:12:105 (72105|1,72555|2,73005|3,73455|0) - mmmm 3 or 2 notes
01:15:255 add note?
01:15:442 ^
01:15:855 ^
well, i'll check other diffs soon, that's all for today, GL~
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

JesusMD24 wrote:

hey oh~
Grimmpossible

00:32:655 (32655|0,32692|1) - Ctrl + G, it looks better, like 00:32:655 (32655|0,32692|1) - imo
done
00:37:155 (37155|0) - not necessary
i don't agree
00:37:305 (37305|3,37342|2) - Ctrl + G
done
00:37:305 (37305|3,37342|2) - Same^
done
00:46:905 (46905|0,46942|1) - ^
done
00:47:505 Add note here?
done
00:59:055 (59055|3,59205|3) - try this?
done
01:00:405 (60405|0) - mmmm, LN would be fine here imo
i don't agree
01:01:605 (61605|0,61642|1) - Ctrl + G
done
01:07:305 (67305|3,67755|1,68205|0,68655|3) - they should be 3 notes, or 2 imo
done
01:09:255 what happening here?
added double here 01:09:255
01:09:705 (69705|2,70155|1,70605|0,71055|2) - mmmmm same, 3 notes or 2
done
01:11:355 (71355|0,71392|1,71430|2,71467|3) - I think that these notes are not necessary
i don't agree, sound is unique
01:12:105 (72105|1,72555|2,73005|3,73455|0) - mmmm 3 or 2 notes
done
01:15:255 add note?
done
01:15:442 ^
done
01:15:855 ^
done
well, i'll check other diffs soon, that's all for today, GL~
Wow great mod, thanks!!!
eyes
601 posts
Joined January 2016
eyes
bad english mod

artist: RoughSketch feat.あいかぴん
romanised artist: RoughSketch feat. Aikapin
add tags 'hanamushi distorted children speedcore hardcore electro burst'

no one diff uses lns in the main kiai, it makes me sad.
also i think "Grimmpossible" is too much harder than "Insane", i'd recommend to make one more diff between them

Grimmpossible

00:27:367 (27367|3,27517|2) - I guess these are ghost notes, it applies to almost all burst. My suggestion: https://puu.sh/vvzeI/d7cdb68234.png
00:32:617 (32617|3,32767|3) - Delete this and make these doubles 00:32:580 (32580|2,32730|2)
01:28:605 (88605|1,88605|2,89055|1,89055|0) - same pitch, place on same columns
02:56:955 - The song gives you a chance to make map in more varied styles, don't you wanna change the style in the 3rd kiai?
Last edited by eyes , edited 1 time in total.
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

eyes wrote:

bad english mod

artist: RoughSketch feat.あいかぴん
sourse: 花蟲
romanised artist: RoughSketch feat. Aikapin
add tags 'hanamushi distorted children speedcore hardcore electro burst'
done
no one diff uses lns in the main kiai, it makes me sad.
also i think "Grimmpossible" is too much harder than "Insane", i'd recommend to make one more diff between them

Grimmpossible

00:27:367 (27367|3,27517|2) - I guess these are ghost notes, it applies to almost all burst. My suggestion: https://puu.sh/vvzeI/d7cdb68234.png
Actually i don't agree these are ghost notes! ^^"
00:32:617 (32617|3,32767|3) - Delete this and make these doubles 00:32:580 (32580|2,32730|2)
done
01:28:605 (88605|1,88605|2,89055|1,89055|0) - same pitch, place on same columns
done
02:56:955 - The song gives you a chance to make map in more varied styles, don't you wanna change the style in the 3rd kiai?
do you have a suggestion?
Thanks a lot :D
Comet_M
89 posts
Joined May 2014
Comet_M
Hello CHARGE! Here's the mod you've requested ;)

Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Easy


- 00:20:955 (20955|0) : Maybe extend this to 00:26:955 ? Just to follow the noise
- 00:28:155 (28155|3) : Add Finish sound
- 00:32:505 and similar parts : Add a note? For drumkick.
- 00:37:305 : Maybe add a note?
- 00:46:155 (46155|0,46455|1) : Extend to 00:46:455, 00:46:755 respectively; judges may be tricky for beginners
- 01:18:555 (47805|2) : Extend this to 01:20:955
- 02:08:655 : Add a note?
- 02:12:555 (132555|0,132780|2,133155|1,133455|3) : Differing timing (white->blue / white->white) maybe confusing for beginners
- 02:17:955 (137955|2) : Maybe extend to 02:18:555
- 02:22:455 (142455|1,142755|2) : Add notes? To follow 02:22:155 (142155|0,142155|3)
- 02:23:355 ~ 02:25:755 : Putting 2 notes seems unrealistic, maybe consider this; http://puu.sh/vvzYy/4bdb04f0eb.png
- 02:56:355 (176355|3) : Replace this to LN (until 02:56:655) and add a note (02:56:655).
- 03:01:605 (181605|3) : Maybe replace this to normal note?
- 03:05:355 (185355|2,185655|2,185955|2,186255|2) : Any specific reason to put all those note in one column?
- 03:35:355 : Add a note here?


Normal


Maybe consider buffing this difficulty. There's pretty big difficulty gap between Normal and Comet's Hard.

- 00:27:855 : Add note to 2?
- 00:34:905 (34905|3,35055|2) and similar parts : Maybe change this to this : http://puu.sh/vvA90/a6729abf47.png or change 00:30:105 (30105|0,30180|1,30255|2) this part?
- 00:55:155 (55155|2) ~ 00:56:655 : http://puu.sh/vvAcT/6b10c67f9d.png - This looks more smoothier.
- 01:10:830 (70830|3,70905|1) : Hmm?
- 02:13:380 : Add note to 3? A sound exists.
- 02:25:755 (145755|3,145905|0,146055|3,146205|0) : Add notes respectively? 2 notes sounds more powerful.
- 02:27:855 : Add note to 4
- 02:37:455 : Add note to 2
- 02:41:505 ~ 02:41:805 : https://puu.sh/vvAkr/2b8d0de927.png ?
- 02:47:055 : Add note to 2
- 03:06:255 : Add note to 3
- 03:34:155 : https://puu.sh/vvAog/5a27334e54.png / Followed the melody.


Comet's Hard


pretty surprised at first

- 00:27:555 ~ 00:27:855 : https://puu.sh/vvAs3/b5152dab66.png ?
- 00:37:155 : Add note to 2? Like this : 00:37:305 (37305|2,37305|3) -
- 02:27:855 and similar parts : Add note to 3?
- 02:36:555 (156555|3,156705|2,156855|1,157005|0) : Replace these note to LN?


Insane


- 00:51:705 : Add a note?
- 01:01:155 : Add a note to 3?
- 02:08:655 (128655|2,128805|1) : Replace these to LN?
- 02:25:755 ~ 02:26:955 : https://puu.sh/vvAM5/bdce8c5d0b.png ?


Grimmpossible


- 00:27:367 (27367|3,27517|2) : Kinda ghost notes? Actually there isn't a drumkick. Drumkick ends 00:27:330 and 00:27:480.
- 00:32:617 (32617|3,32767|3) : ^^^
- 00:37:267 (37267|0,37417|0) : ^^^
- 00:42:217 (42217|0,42367|1) : ^^^
- 00:46:867 (46867|3,47017|3) and other same parts : ^^^
- 00:46:867 (46867|3,47017|3) : Empty?
- 01:48:930 (108930|1) : Remove this?
- 02:26:355 ~ 02:26:955 : https://puu.sh/vvB0O/b0ae496e0e.png ? / This looks more interesting.
- 02:42:105 ~ 02:42:555 : https://puu.sh/vvB2I/e98e8f34ac.png ?
- 02:54:405 (174405|1,174555|2) : Remove these?
- 03:10:905 ~ 03:11:355 : Same as 02:42:105 ~ 02:42:555

Cool song, and funny patterns!

Hope this get ranked soon ;)
eyes
601 posts
Joined January 2016
eyes

CHARGE wrote:

eyes wrote:

02:56:955 - The song gives you a chance to make map in more varied styles, don't you wanna change the style in the 3rd kiai?
do you have a suggestion? LNs LNs LNs
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

CometicRush wrote:

Hello CHARGE! Here's the mod you've requested ;)

Column : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Easy


- 00:20:955 (20955|0) : Maybe extend this to 00:26:955 ? Just to follow the noise
done
- 00:28:155 (28155|3) : Add Finish sound
finish is at 00:27:855 (27855|0) -
- 00:32:505 and similar parts : Add a note? For drumkick.
There's a sound, but the structure is constant for easy diff. i don't want it to be too crowded.
- 00:37:305 : Maybe add a note?
same
- 00:46:155 (46155|0,46455|1) : Extend to 00:46:455, 00:46:755 respectively; judges may be tricky for beginners
done
- 01:18:555 (47805|2) : Extend this to 01:20:955
done
- 02:08:655 : Add a note?
done
- 02:12:555 (132555|0,132780|2,133155|1,133455|3) : Differing timing (white->blue / white->white) maybe confusing for beginners
it is following the music though, constant structure
- 02:17:955 (137955|2) : Maybe extend to 02:18:555
done
- 02:22:455 (142455|1,142755|2) : Add notes? To follow 02:22:155 (142155|0,142155|3)
done
- 02:23:355 ~ 02:25:755 : Putting 2 notes seems unrealistic, maybe consider this; http://puu.sh/vvzYy/4bdb04f0eb.png
waaaay to hard for easy!
- 02:56:355 (176355|3) : Replace this to LN (until 02:56:655) and add a note (02:56:655).
done
- 03:01:605 (181605|3) : Maybe replace this to normal note?
done
- 03:05:355 (185355|2,185655|2,185955|2,186255|2) : Any specific reason to put all those note in one column?
fixed
- 03:35:355 : Add a note here?
done

Normal


Maybe consider buffing this difficulty. There's pretty big difficulty gap between Normal and Comet's Hard.

- 00:27:855 : Add note to 2?
done
- 00:34:905 (34905|3,35055|2) and similar parts : Maybe change this to this : http://puu.sh/vvA90/a6729abf47.png or change 00:30:105 (30105|0,30180|1,30255|2) this part?
LN seems better imo
- 00:55:155 (55155|2) ~ 00:56:655 : http://puu.sh/vvAcT/6b10c67f9d.png - This looks more smoothier.
done
- 01:10:830 (70830|3,70905|1) : Hmm?
moved to 01:10:905 -
- 02:13:380 : Add note to 3? A sound exists.
it does exist, but i decided to omit it so it wont be too crowded.
- 02:25:755 (145755|3,145905|0,146055|3,146205|0) : Add notes respectively? 2 notes sounds more powerful.
added blue
- 02:27:855 : Add note to 4
done
- 02:37:455 : Add note to 2
done
- 02:41:505 ~ 02:41:805 : https://puu.sh/vvAkr/2b8d0de927.png ?
done
- 02:47:055 : Add note to 2
done
- 03:06:255 : Add note to 3
done
- 03:34:155 : https://puu.sh/vvAog/5a27334e54.png / Followed the melody.
done

Comet's Hard


pretty surprised at first

- 00:27:555 ~ 00:27:855 : https://puu.sh/vvAs3/b5152dab66.png ?
done
- 00:37:155 : Add note to 2? Like this : 00:37:305 (37305|2,37305|3) -
done
- 02:27:855 and similar parts : Add note to 3?
done
- 02:36:555 (156555|3,156705|2,156855|1,157005|0) : Replace these note to LN?
done


Insane


- 00:51:705 : Add a note?
done
- 01:01:155 : Add a note to 3?
done
- 02:08:655 (128655|2,128805|1) : Replace these to LN?
done
- 02:25:755 ~ 02:26:955 : https://puu.sh/vvAM5/bdce8c5d0b.png ?
done


Grimmpossible


- 00:27:367 (27367|3,27517|2) : Kinda ghost notes? Actually there isn't a drumkick. Drumkick ends 00:27:330 and 00:27:480.
fixed
- 00:32:617 (32617|3,32767|3) : ^^^
fixed
- 00:37:267 (37267|0,37417|0) : ^^^
fixed
- 00:42:217 (42217|0,42367|1) : ^^^
fixed
- 00:46:867 (46867|3,47017|3) and other same parts : ^^^
fixed
- 00:46:867 (46867|3,47017|3) : Empty?
fixed
- 01:48:930 (108930|1) : Remove this?
fixed
- 02:26:355 ~ 02:26:955 : https://puu.sh/vvB0O/b0ae496e0e.png ? / This looks more interesting.
changed
- 02:42:105 ~ 02:42:555 : https://puu.sh/vvB2I/e98e8f34ac.png ?
changed
- 02:54:405 (174405|1,174555|2) : Remove these?
doubles referring to the guitar sound
- 03:10:905 ~ 03:11:355 : Same as 02:42:105 ~ 02:42:555
changed
Cool song, and funny patterns!

Hope this get ranked soon ;)
AMAZING mod. Thank you SO MUCH!!
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

CHARGE wrote:

eyes wrote:

02:56:955 - The song gives you a chance to make map in more varied styles, don't you wanna change the style in the 3rd kiai?
do you have a suggestion? LNs LNs LNs
Updated, what do you think?
Janko
510 posts
Joined March 2013
Janko
Yo

Promised mod

mod
|1|2|3|4|

[Easy]
Uncheck "widescreen support"
00:04:155 (4155|2,4455|0,4755|1,5055|2,5355|3) - hmm I think that this pattern more fit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7918605?
00:21:255 (21255|0) - This LN should start here 00:20:955 - I think that this 1/1 pause isn't comfortable to play for novice players
00:32:805 (32805|0) - move to column 2 for balance
00:42:555 (42555|3,42855|0) - ctrl+H
02:03:555 (123555|0) - move to column 2
03:18:255 (198255|3,198405|2) - I propose 2 3
03:20:805 (200805|3,201255|2) - ctrl+G
03:23:055 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7918687
[Normal]
Uncheck "widescreen support"
00:00:555 - to 00:06:555 - I think that you can reverse several patterns. For example:
00:01:755 (1755|2,1905|1,2055|0) - ctrl+G
00:02:955 (2955|0,3105|1,3255|2) - ctrl+H
00:04:155 (4155|1,4305|2,4455|3) - move one column to the left and 00:04:755 (4755|0,4905|1,5055|2,5355|3,5505|2,5655|1) - ctrl+H this
A the end 00:06:555 (6555|2,6705|1,6855|0) - move one column to the right
00:08:955 (8955|1,9105|2,9255|3) - and ctrl+G
I think that this setting is more fun to play
---
00:32:505 (32505|3,32655|3) - 03:20:505 (200505|0,200655|0) - such LNs Are not welcome in Normal diffs I think
01:06:255 (66255|2,66555|1) - I propose 2 3
01:22:530 (82530|1) - Consider removing this note. It's not comfortable to play in Normal diff
01:30:405 (90405|2) - ghost note? remove
01:51:780 (111780|1) - the same situation as above. It's not comfortable to play in Normal diff. Similar moments are more.
01:59:805 (119805|1,119955|2) - 3 4
03:07:155 (187155|1,187230|0) - hmmm ctrl+G
[Comet's Hard]
Uncheck "widescreen support"
00:27:405 (27405|0,27480|1) - maybe 2 1?
01:35:805 (95805|0) - move to column 4
01:45:255 (105255|1,105405|2) - move one column to the right
01:48:855 (108855|2) - to column 1
02:47:055 (167055|2) - to column 2
------------------------------------------------
Other diffs: Uncheck "widescreen support"
I do not have the strength and motivation to mod other diffs

GL o/
Another Lie
Another Lie
Mod from pm
Easy
00:00:555 (555|3,855|1,1755|2,2055|0,2955|1,3255|3) - should be on same column because of they are same sound
00:04:755 (4755|1,5055|3) - move to 1 & 3, same sound with notes below
00:05:355 (5355|0) - move to 4
00:09:555 (9555|1,9855|2) - move to 3 & 1, same sound with notes below
00:06:555 (6555|2,6855|0,7755|1,8055|3) - change to 1 & 3
00:10:155 (10155|3) - move to 00:10:455 - at col 3
00:11:355 (11355|2,11355|3) - move 1 note to col 1 and the other note to this 00:11:655 - place https://puu.sh/vvKSk.png
00:12:555 (12555|3,12555|0,13755|0,13755|1,14355|2,14355|3,14955|3,14955|0,16155|2,16155|1,17355|2,17355|0,18555|0,18555|3,19155|2,19155|1) - make them same like beginning of the song, make sure you're consistent enough at easy diff
00:20:955 (20955|0) - delete. for replacement, 00:19:755 (19755|3) - move to 1st col & make it longer until 00:26:955 -
00:23:505 - add LN which end at 00:26:955 -
00:27:705 (27705|2) - delete or move it to 00:27:855 -
00:48:255 (48255|1,48405|2,48555|3) - delete or change with single LN which end at 00:48:705 -
00:48:705 - add note
01:20:955 (80955|0,82155|3) - delete, focus on main sound
01:23:355 (83355|1,84555|3) - ^
01:25:455 (85455|3,85755|1) - ^
01:26:955 (86955|1,88155|1) - ^
01:59:355 (119355|3,119355|2) - why 2 LN? you only got LN on previous "aaaaaaa~" sound. Be consistent
02:01:755 (121755|1,121755|0) - ^
02:04:155 (124155|0,124155|3) - ^
02:08:805 - add note
02:10:005 - add note
02:10:830 - ^
02:11:205 - ^
02:12:105 - ^
02:12:405 - ^
02:13:005 - ^
02:13:155 (133155|1) - move to blue line
02:13:605 - add note
02:14:430 - ^
02:14:805 - ^
02:15:630 - ^
02:16:005 - ^
02:16:830 - ^
02:17:205 - ^
02:17:805 - ^
Do not worry if your easy diff exceed E icon, few of ranked maps are same like that too.
I can't continue, so many to fix it. I prefer via .osu file than typing, but you didn't allow it. fine for me
Goodluck for your map
laughingcomet
251 posts
Joined October 2013
laughingcomet
Checking through the diffs~

Easy
00:04:455 (4455|1,4755|2) - maybe CTRL + H these because the sounds are "progressive"
^if applied 00:05:355 (5355|0,5655|1) - Flip direction for more variety
00:26:955 (26955|3,27255|2,27555|1,27705|2) - Make these into 1/1 LN's? i think that will play better
00:36:555 (36555|0,36855|0) - ^
00:37:155 (37155|2) - extend this one to 00:37:455 - ? also it seems out of place

Normal seemed fine in most places and the rest is over my capabilities sadly :c
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

Janko wrote:

Yo

Promised mod

mod
|1|2|3|4|

[Easy]
Uncheck "widescreen support"
00:04:155 (4155|2,4455|0,4755|1,5055|2,5355|3) - hmm I think that this pattern more fit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7918605?
00:21:255 (21255|0) - This LN should start here 00:20:955 - I think that this 1/1 pause isn't comfortable to play for novice players
00:32:805 (32805|0) - move to column 2 for balance
00:42:555 (42555|3,42855|0) - ctrl+H
02:03:555 (123555|0) - move to column 2
03:18:255 (198255|3,198405|2) - I propose 2 3
03:20:805 (200805|3,201255|2) - ctrl+G
03:23:055 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7918687
[Normal]
Uncheck "widescreen support"
00:00:555 - to 00:06:555 - I think that you can reverse several patterns. For example:
00:01:755 (1755|2,1905|1,2055|0) - ctrl+G
00:02:955 (2955|0,3105|1,3255|2) - ctrl+H
00:04:155 (4155|1,4305|2,4455|3) - move one column to the left and 00:04:755 (4755|0,4905|1,5055|2,5355|3,5505|2,5655|1) - ctrl+H this
A the end 00:06:555 (6555|2,6705|1,6855|0) - move one column to the right
00:08:955 (8955|1,9105|2,9255|3) - and ctrl+G
I think that this setting is more fun to play
---
00:32:505 (32505|3,32655|3) - 03:20:505 (200505|0,200655|0) - such LNs Are not welcome in Normal diffs I think
01:06:255 (66255|2,66555|1) - I propose 2 3
01:22:530 (82530|1) - Consider removing this note. It's not comfortable to play in Normal diff
01:30:405 (90405|2) - ghost note? remove
01:51:780 (111780|1) - the same situation as above. It's not comfortable to play in Normal diff. Similar moments are more.
01:59:805 (119805|1,119955|2) - 3 4
03:07:155 (187155|1,187230|0) - hmmm ctrl+G
[Comet's Hard]
Uncheck "widescreen support"
00:27:405 (27405|0,27480|1) - maybe 2 1?
01:35:805 (95805|0) - move to column 4
01:45:255 (105255|1,105405|2) - move one column to the right
01:48:855 (108855|2) - to column 1
02:47:055 (167055|2) - to column 2
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Other diffs: Uncheck "widescreen support"
I do not have the strength and motivation to mod other diffs

GL o/
Applied ALL notes, thanks!!
eyes
601 posts
Joined January 2016
eyes

CHARGE wrote:

Updated, what do you think?
Not bad, but keep it same difficult with 2nd kiai, I think it's a little bit easier
Also there is a lot of place for SV effects over all the map :)
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

laughingcomet wrote:

Checking through the diffs~

Easy
00:04:455 (4455|1,4755|2) - maybe CTRL + H these because the sounds are "progressive"
^if applied 00:05:355 (5355|0,5655|1) - Flip direction for more variety
00:26:955 (26955|3,27255|2,27555|1,27705|2) - Make these into 1/1 LN's? i think that will play better
00:36:555 (36555|0,36855|0) - ^
00:37:155 (37155|2) - extend this one to 00:37:455 - ? also it seems out of place

Normal seemed fine in most places and the rest is over my capabilities sadly :c
Applied all :) Thank you.
BloowXv2
BloowXv2
Hi charge! here leave my mod :)

Columns: |1|2|3|4|

Grimmpossible
I think you did not put minijacks here 00:28:380 - because the map is starting.
But if you want to add more difficulty then here I will show you where notes would be missing on this section.

ok, starting here 00:28:380 -
here you could follow the handstream adding a note 00:29:580 -
00:30:030 - missing note?
00:30:630 - ^
00:30:780 - ^
00:31:230 - ^
00:31:830 - ^
00:33:630 - add note in the ''end of the handstream'' ?
00:33:780 - missing note?
00:34:230 - ^
00:34:830 - ^
00:35:430 - ^
00:37:830 - ^
00:37:980 - ^
00:38:430 - add note for complete the handstream
00:38:580 - ^
00:38:580 - ^
00:39:630 - missing note?
00:40:380 - add for the handstream?
00:42:780 - add note?
00:43:980 - add for the handstream?
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ok, now, in these parts that follow, you could accommodate the notes as follows

To assimilate this 00:48:030 (48030|1,48105|2,48105|0,48255|1,48330|3,48405|1,48480|3,48555|1,48630|3,48630|0,48705|1,48780|0,48855|3,48855|2) - something like a dumpstream You can accommodate the notes in this form

add note here 00:48:180 - col 4
00:48:330 (48330|3) - this to col 3
00:48:405 (48405|1) - this to col 1
00:48:480 (48480|3) - to col 2
00:48:555 (48555|1) - to col 3

add other note here 00:48:930 - col 2

move this 00:49:005 (49005|1) - to col 1
00:49:080 (49080|0) - move to col 3
this 00:49:155 (49155|2) - to col 2
00:49:305 (49305|1) - to col 3
00:49:380 (49380|3) - to col 2
00:49:455 (49455|2) - to col 4
this notes 00:49:530 (49530|1,49605|2,49680|1) - you can use Ctrl+H

00:50:355 (50355|1) - to col 3
00:50:430 (50430|3,50505|2) - move two columns to the left

you can add a note here 00:50:580 - col 3 and move this 00:50:655 (50655|0) - to col 2
00:50:805 (50805|0) - to col 3 and this 00:50:880 (50880|3) - to col 2

now, here, move this 00:51:930 (51930|3) - to col 1. this 00:52:005 (52005|2) - to col 2. this 00:52:080 (52080|1) - to col 1 and this 00:52:155 (52155|0) - to col 2 feels more like
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ok, another section.

Here now the minijacks begin

missing note here for minijack 00:58:080 -
here 00:59:130 - feels good if you add one note in middle of the triples
01:00:780 - add here, missing note
01:03:930 - add note in middle of te triples

hum... add note here? 01:06:405 -

why no double or triple for the drum/bass sound here? 01:06:855 -
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hmm.... I do not think a double should go here 02:03:855 - delete this note 02:03:855 (123855|1) - is best

why here put one note 02:04:455 (124455|3) - and here 02:05:055 (125055|3,125055|1) - put a double in the same sound?

add note here? 02:06:105 -

add a note? 02:07:305 - pd: this notes 02:07:455 (127455|3,127455|2) - represents the same soft sound, delete one of these
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this feel more like as trills 02:47:805 (167805|2,167880|1,167955|2,168030|1,168105|0) -
02:51:405 (171405|1,171480|2,171555|3,171630|1,171705|2) - ^

add a LN here to the white line? 03:16:005 -
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emm..... this notes 03:25:155 (205155|3,205192|2,205230|1,205267|0,205305|3,205342|2,205380|1,205417|0) -
the sound starts here 03:25:155 (205155|3) - and end here 03:25:230 (205230|1) -
the sam in here 03:25:305 (205305|3,205342|2,205380|1) - delete this notes 03:25:267 (205267|0,205417|0) -

missing note here? 03:28:830 -

hum... and you can add other note more here 03:32:730 -

GL :)
Etsu
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Etsu
Hoi there mod request from game

Columns: 0|1|2|3


[General]
  1. -.
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:555 (555|3,855|1) - control + j? looks better and fits the sound well same in next diff similar
  2. 00:10:155 (10155|3,10155|0) - this note should be in diff NM and add LN here same next section.. considering spread
  3. 00:20:955 (20955|0) - LN is large... maybe remplace note and LN begin in 00:23:355 - for other effect imo or also NM
  4. 00:30:255 (30255|2,30405|3) - feel better with LN imo
  5. 00:39:855 (39855|0) - move column 2?
  6. 00:49:155 - missing note?
  7. 00:51:555 - ^
  8. 00:56:055 (56055|3) - i like column 2 and 00:56:355 (56355|0) - column 1
  9. 01:01:605 - add note sound similar like 01:01:455 (61455|3) -
  10. 01:15:355 (75355|3) - move column 2 is better for sound different column in 01:15:755 (75755|3,76155|3) -
  11. 01:26:955 (86955|0) - move column 0?
  12. 01:55:005 (115005|0) - move column 1 like 01:50:205 (110205|1) - ?
  13. 01:59:355 (119355|2,119355|3) - is better a just LN to easy
  14. 02:01:755 (121755|0,121755|1) - ^
  15. 02:22:455 - no double like 02:22:155 (142155|3,142155|0,142755|3,142755|0) - ?
  16. 03:05:955 (185955|0) - i like LN here
  17. 03:24:555 (204555|0) - there same end in 03:25:155 - and also in 03:25:155 (205155|0) - LN is better for this diff imo
  18. 03:26:055 (206055|3,206655|3,207255|3) - make control + h fits well for this sound
  19. 03:30:555 (210555|1) - this is bit hard for notes same so remove note?
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:555 (555|3,705|2,855|1) - control + j?
  2. 00:10:155 - although with note would not be..
  3. 00:23:355 - add LN?
  4. 00:26:955 - try this pattern. it look better imo
  5. 00:30:405 (30405|0) - move column 1?
  6. 00:32:055 (32055|0) - ^
  7. 00:42:405 (42405|0) - ^
  8. 01:23:205 (83205|2,83355|1) - this note does not make sense.. in the easy and hard diff do not have it?
  9. 01:25:455 (85455|3,85605|2,85755|1) - ^
  10. 01:26:505 (86505|3) - delete
  11. 01:27:705 (87705|1) - ^
  12. 01:41:055 (101055|2) - is better column 0
  13. 01:42:555 - add note for knock sound? like 01:44:955 -
  14. 01:49:455 (109455|3,109455|0,109755|2,109755|1) - This pattern does not look good for this diff imo so a only LN?
  15. 02:26:355 (146355|2) - delete? no is necessary
  16. 03:13:455 (193455|0) - ^
  17. 03:25:755 - same like diff easy since jack is strange here imo
[Comet's Hard]
  1. 00:49:080 (49080|3) - delete? considering spread next diff
  2. 00:51:855 - add note?
  3. 00:55:755 - a like jack like normal
  4. 00:56:955 - to 01:05:205 - follow with 1/2 this diff? in diff NM you map with 1/2 and 1/4.. is better NM map 1/2 only btw.. consider also diff insane this would damage the spread
  5. 01:06:855 - add note? in diff NM have but no here?
  6. 01:09:255 - ^
  7. 01:11:355 - add LN like diff nm
  8. 01:19:755 - add LN here?
  9. 01:26:655 - add fo double?
  10. 01:51:105 (111105|2) - move column 1 for balance
  11. 02:22:830 (142830|2) - should be in 02:22:905 - in other diff is 1/2 or /14?
  12. 02:36:555 (156555|3,156705|2,156855|1,157005|0) - maybe LN for effect imo
  13. 02:47:355 - add note since in diff nm have double note or i think is better LN in diff NM and notes to hard is better tbh
  14. 03:28:005 - add note? sound here
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:855 (855|2) - add LN since is similar like diff NM?
  2. 00:23:355 - add LN? like diff hard
  3. 00:27:630 - i m sure you can do stairs 1/4 is better for diff.. consider as hard diff xd
  4. 00:37:530 - why no map 1/4 there?
  5. 00:51:630 (51630|1,51705|2) - control + g?
  6. 00:54:405 - missing note
  7. 00:58:755 (58755|3) - move column 2?
  8. 01:08:655 - add note for drums?
  9. 01:12:105 - ^ similar section it look for this diff imo
  10. 01:32:655 (92655|2,92805|1,92955|2) - make control + h and 01:32:955 (92955|1) - move column 0
  11. 02:21:555 - add note fro triple? considering like 02:22:155 (142155|2,142155|0,142155|3,142455|0,142455|2,142455|3) -
  12. 02:25:455 (145455|1) - move column 0
  13. 02:27:480 (147480|1) - ^?
  14. 02:37:605 - missing note?
  15. 03:06:405 - ^
  16. 03:18:330 - i like stairs
  17. 03:25:530 - ^
[Grimmpossible]
  1. 00:27:255 - try this pattern. is better imo
  2. 00:50:580 - add note like insane diff?
  3. 00:55:755 - maybe add LN 1/2 for this diff because is similar diff previous
  4. 00:59:055 - same i like LN for that effect imo
  5. 01:03:855 - ^
  6. 01:11:355 (71355|0,71392|1,71430|2,71467|3) - note 1/8 instead LN?
  7. 03:06:405 - add note?
  8. 03:16:005 - is better add LN there work better for this diff imo
laughingcomet
251 posts
Joined October 2013
laughingcomet

Etsu wrote:

[Comet's Hard]
  1. 00:49:080 (49080|3) - delete? considering spread next diff Deleted to make it more consistent with the current part
  2. 00:51:855 - add note? Added
  3. 00:55:755 - a like jack like normal Done
  4. 00:56:955 - to 01:05:205 - follow with 1/2 this diff? in diff NM you map with 1/2 and 1/4.. is better NM map 1/2 only btw.. consider also diff insane this would damage the spread First of all it's my guest diff so i haven't mapped any other diff's secondly i don't think this would damage the spread at all and lastly every diff is underrated so i think we're fine with what we have atm
  5. 01:06:855 - add note? in diff NM have but no here? Fixed the section to match up with the note at 01:14:055 (74055|3) -
  6. 01:09:255 - ^ ^
  7. 01:11:355 - add LN like diff nm i didn't add a LN here because i think the pause makes the double feel more powerful
  8. 01:19:755 - add LN here? i like the break it creates before the slow part starts but i'll keep it in mind
  9. 01:26:655 - add fo double? Added
  10. 01:51:105 (111105|2) - move column 1 for balance Sure
  11. 02:22:830 (142830|2) - should be in 02:22:905 - in other diff is 1/2 or /14? it's the same sound as the notes in 02:21:555 (141555|0,141555|1,141630|3) - so i will keep it as it is
  12. 02:36:555 (156555|3,156705|2,156855|1,157005|0) - maybe LN for effect imo i guess?
  13. 02:47:355 - add note since in diff nm have double note or i think is better LN in diff NM and notes to hard is better tbh Errr i think LN's are harder because of release timings and such but i'll keep it in mind
  14. 03:28:005 - add note? sound here In the kaiais i focused on the kicks to as much as i could (meaning i only mapped the kicks and made them jump jacks instead) but i'll keep it in mind
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

Etsu wrote:

Hoi there mod request from game

Columns: 0|1|2|3


[General]
  1. -.
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:555 (555|3,855|1) - control + j? looks better and fits the sound well same in next diff similar Changed
  2. 00:10:155 (10155|3,10155|0) - this note should be in diff NM and add LN here same next section.. considering spread I'd rather leave it like that to emphasis the sound
  3. 00:20:955 (20955|0) - LN is large... maybe remplace note and LN begin in 00:23:355 - for other effect imo or also NM added LN at 00:23:355 -
  4. 00:30:255 (30255|2,30405|3) - feel better with LN imo would keep it that way for consistency
  5. 00:39:855 (39855|0) - move column 2? done
  6. 00:49:155 - missing note? emphasizing the snares
  7. 00:51:555 - ^ ^
  8. 00:56:055 (56055|3) - i like column 2 and 00:56:355 (56355|0) - column 1 done
  9. 01:01:605 - add note sound similar like 01:01:455 (61455|3) - done
  10. 01:15:355 (75355|3) - move column 2 is better for sound different column in 01:15:755 (75755|3,76155|3) - done
  11. 01:26:955 (86955|0) - move column 0? done
  12. 01:55:005 (115005|0) - move column 1 like 01:50:205 (110205|1) - ? done
  13. 01:59:355 (119355|2,119355|3) - is better a just LN to easy declined
  14. 02:01:755 (121755|0,121755|1) - ^ ^
  15. 02:22:455 - no double like 02:22:155 (142155|3,142155|0,142755|3,142755|0) - ? would be too hard for easy imo
  16. 03:05:955 (185955|0) - i like LN here done
  17. 03:24:555 (204555|0) - there same end in 03:25:155 - and also in 03:25:155 (205155|0) - LN is better for this diff imo changed 03:25:155 - to ln
  18. 03:26:055 (206055|3,206655|3,207255|3) - make control + h fits well for this sound done
  19. 03:30:555 (210555|1) - this is bit hard for notes same so remove note? done
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:555 (555|3,705|2,855|1) - control + j? done
  2. 00:10:155 - although with note would not be.. declined
  3. 00:23:355 - add LN? done
  4. 00:26:955 - try this pattern. it look better imo done
  5. 00:30:405 (30405|0) - move column 1? declined for consistency
  6. 00:32:055 (32055|0) - ^ done
  7. 00:42:405 (42405|0) - ^ declined for consistency
  8. 01:23:205 (83205|2,83355|1) - this note does not make sense.. in the easy and hard diff do not have it? hard isn't mine and in easy i wanted to avoid it
  9. 01:25:455 (85455|3,85605|2,85755|1) - ^ ^
  10. 01:26:505 (86505|3) - delete ^
  11. 01:27:705 (87705|1) - ^ ^
  12. 01:41:055 (101055|2) - is better column 0 declined for consistency
  13. 01:42:555 - add note for knock sound? like 01:44:955 - done
  14. 01:49:455 (109455|3,109455|0,109755|2,109755|1) - This pattern does not look good for this diff imo so a only LN? done
  15. 02:26:355 (146355|2) - delete? no is necessary done
  16. 03:13:455 (193455|0) - ^ done
  17. 03:25:755 - same like diff easy since jack is strange here imo i don't agree ^^
[Comet's Hard]
  1. 00:49:080 (49080|3) - delete? considering spread next diff
  2. 00:51:855 - add note?
  3. 00:55:755 - a like jack like normal
  4. 00:56:955 - to 01:05:205 - follow with 1/2 this diff? in diff NM you map with 1/2 and 1/4.. is better NM map 1/2 only btw.. consider also diff insane this would damage the spread
  5. 01:06:855 - add note? in diff NM have but no here?
  6. 01:09:255 - ^
  7. 01:11:355 - add LN like diff nm
  8. 01:19:755 - add LN here?
  9. 01:26:655 - add fo double?
  10. 01:51:105 (111105|2) - move column 1 for balance
  11. 02:22:830 (142830|2) - should be in 02:22:905 - in other diff is 1/2 or /14?
  12. 02:36:555 (156555|3,156705|2,156855|1,157005|0) - maybe LN for effect imo
  13. 02:47:355 - add note since in diff nm have double note or i think is better LN in diff NM and notes to hard is better tbh
  14. 03:28:005 - add note? sound here
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:855 (855|2) - add LN since is similar like diff NM? i'd keep it this way ^^
  2. 00:23:355 - add LN? like diff hard done
  3. 00:27:630 - i m sure you can do stairs 1/4 is better for diff.. consider as hard diff xd done
  4. 00:37:530 - why no map 1/4 there? wanted to give a break for the player as there are no bass sounds
  5. 00:51:630 (51630|1,51705|2) - control + g? declined to emphasis the bass
  6. 00:54:405 - missing note i don't hear a sound
  7. 00:58:755 (58755|3) - move column 2? declined cuz its the same sound
  8. 01:08:655 - add note for drums? declined because the jacks and double will make it too hard for insane imo
  9. 01:12:105 - ^ similar section it look for this diff imo ^
  10. 01:32:655 (92655|2,92805|1,92955|2) - make control + h and 01:32:955 (92955|1) - move column 0 done
  11. 02:21:555 - add note fro triple? considering like 02:22:155 (142155|2,142155|0,142155|3,142455|0,142455|2,142455|3) - done
  12. 02:25:455 (145455|1) - move column 0 done
  13. 02:27:480 (147480|1) - ^? done
  14. 02:37:605 - missing note? ignored for break to player
  15. 03:06:405 - ^ ^
  16. 03:18:330 - i like stairs ^
  17. 03:25:530 - ^ ^
[Grimmpossible]
  1. 00:27:255 - try this pattern. is better imo easier doesnt mean better
  2. 00:50:580 - add note like insane diff? removed this note from insane
  3. 00:55:755 - maybe add LN 1/2 for this diff because is similar diff previous SV emphasis does the job, SV is heavier in this diff
  4. 00:59:055 - same i like LN for that effect imo same notes to emphasis the same sound
  5. 01:03:855 - ^ ^
  6. 01:11:355 (71355|0,71392|1,71430|2,71467|3) - note 1/8 instead LN? unique sound
  7. 03:06:405 - add note? SV to compensate
  8. 03:16:005 - is better add LN there work better for this diff imo done
Hydria
1,229 posts
Joined April 2011
Hydria


1/2/3/4

Grimmpossible
00:00:555 (555|3,705|2) - try 1|4 instead for PR

00:27:030 (27030|3,27180|3,27330|3,27480|3,27630|3,27705|3,27855|3) - so basically you have a bunch of anchors and then a jack? harsh dude

00:40:455 (40455|2,40530|3,40605|2,40680|3,40755|2,41055|3,41130|2,41205|3,41280|2,41355|3) - why have both transitions on the right hand

00:59:055 (59055|1,59205|1) - should put these as small 1/4 LNs imo

01:04:530 - missing note

01:11:880 - ^

02:09:105 - ^

02:19:155 (139155|2,139230|2) - why is this random jack here?

02:50:655 (170655|2,170655|3,170805|3,170880|2,170955|3,171030|2,171255|3,171405|2,171480|3,171555|2,171630|3,171705|2,171780|3,171855|2) - again watch out with everything being on the right hand

not much else to say really
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

Hydria wrote:



1/2/3/4

Grimmpossible
00:00:555 (555|3,705|2) - try 1|4 instead for PR done

00:27:030 (27030|3,27180|3,27330|3,27480|3,27630|3,27705|3,27855|3) - so basically you have a bunch of anchors and then a jack? harsh dude changed

00:40:455 (40455|2,40530|3,40605|2,40680|3,40755|2,41055|3,41130|2,41205|3,41280|2,41355|3) - why have both transitions on the right hand fixed

00:59:055 (59055|1,59205|1) - should put these as small 1/4 LNs imo done

01:04:530 - missing note done

01:11:880 - ^ done

02:09:105 - ^ done

02:19:155 (139155|2,139230|2) - why is this random jack here? fixed

02:50:655 (170655|2,170655|3,170805|3,170880|2,170955|3,171030|2,171255|3,171405|2,171480|3,171555|2,171630|3,171705|2,171780|3,171855|2) - again watch out with everything being on the right hand fixed

not much else to say really
Thanks a lot!!
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu
double post by accident
Protastic101
Elite Nominator
1,160 posts
Joined July 2015
Protastic101
will be back, but irc discussing why the spread needs 2 git gud first
2017-05-18 18:45 CHARGE: Haii
2017-05-18 18:45 Protastic101: hey
2017-05-18 18:45 CHARGE: May i ask for bn check ? :D
2017-05-18 18:45 Protastic101: o
2017-05-18 18:45 CHARGE: for this: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597690
2017-05-18 18:46 CHARGE: its 100% ready..
2017-05-18 18:46 Protastic101: you already asked Q_Q
2017-05-18 18:46 CHARGE: what was the answer? i dont quite remember
2017-05-18 18:47 CHARGE: with the busy schedule of work &military
2017-05-18 18:47 CHARGE: i keep forgetting haha
2017-05-18 18:50 Protastic101: rip lol
2017-05-18 18:51 CHARGE: Haha :P
2017-05-18 18:51 CHARGE: i hope you will be able to make my dream come true :P
2017-05-18 18:51 CHARGE: first ranked map ,espcially kobaryo which i like a lot
2017-05-18 18:51 Protastic101: tbh, I think you might have too big of a gap between the grimpossible and insane
2017-05-18 18:51 CHARGE: you want another diff in between?
2017-05-18 18:51 CHARGE: is it neccessary?
2017-05-18 18:52 CHARGE: because the star gap is not big
2017-05-18 18:52 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8121429 like just in the first kiai, you can see that grimpossible is mostly 1/2 triple spam + 1/4 bursts which is super dense, but the insane only uses 1/2 jumps
2017-05-18 18:52 Protastic101: dont look at the sr, look at the patterns within the diff
2017-05-18 18:52 CHARGE: so you want a diff with triples and doubles
2017-05-18 18:52 CHARGE: like 4.7*
2017-05-18 18:52 Protastic101: plus 1/8 usage is introduced here when there's no 1/8 usage in the insane
2017-05-18 18:52 CHARGE: i mean, ofc i notice the patterns
2017-05-18 18:52 CHARGE: so little bit 1/8 on the diff between them
2017-05-18 18:52 CHARGE: and more triples?
2017-05-18 18:53 Protastic101: yeah, pretty much make a diff in between that either uses a ton of 1/2 triples but no 1/4, or use a mixture of hands and jumps with 1/4
2017-05-18 18:53 CHARGE: will work on it
2017-05-18 18:53 CHARGE: SC?
2017-05-18 18:53 Protastic101: Call it Extra or something to match the naming scheme of the set
2017-05-18 18:54 CHARGE: Then will u be able to check it?
2017-05-18 18:54 Protastic101: probs yeah
2017-05-18 18:54 Protastic101: assuming hitsounds are a-ok
2017-05-18 18:54 CHARGE: can u check them briefly?
2017-05-18 18:54 Protastic101: btw, in the background, where it says "noted by charge" you might wanna add something like, "guest difficulty by laughingcomet" or something to show that he was in the set too lol
2017-05-18 18:55 Protastic101: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1263478 RoughSketch feat. Aikapin - Grimm (Kobaryo's FTN-Remix) [Grimmpossible]]
2017-05-18 18:55 CHARGE: yeah
2017-05-18 18:55 CHARGE: i made this bg before he made the guest diff
2017-05-18 18:55 Protastic101: 00:30:405 (30405|2,30405|1,30555|2,30555|1,30705|1,30705|2,30855|2,30855|1) - yeah fam, stuff like this is pretty cancer because of how heavy it leans on col 2 and 3 but barely any weight on the outer columns
2017-05-18 18:56 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8121452 could do something like this where the weight shifts from right hand to left hand giving the opposite hand about a beat or two to rest
2017-05-18 18:56 Protastic101: 00:33:855 (33855|2,33855|1,33930|0,34005|2,34005|1,34080|3) - but basically, direction changes like this are annoying to hit because of all the unnecessary strain
2017-05-18 18:56 Protastic101: 00:33:855 (33855|2,34005|2,34155|2,34305|2,34455|2,34605|2,34755|2) - also, try to keep your stacks within like, 5 notes if possible else it gets too straining
2017-05-18 18:57 Protastic101: 00:30:105 (30105|1,30105|3,30142|2,30180|0,30217|1) - also, try making this more linear since 200 bpm is already kind of fast, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8121462
2017-05-18 18:58 Protastic101: 00:32:655 (32655|1,32692|0) - would control J so that it flows in the same direction as 00:32:505 (32505|0,32542|1,32580|3,32580|2) -
2017-05-18 18:58 CHARGE: fixed all of them.
2017-05-18 18:58 Protastic101: bet I could ht this actually :thinking:
2017-05-18 18:59 CHARGE: so another Extra diff and will u check it? :P
2017-05-18 18:59 CHARGE: are the hitsounds ok?
2017-05-18 19:01 Protastic101: dunno about hitsounds, lemme see
2017-05-18 19:02 CHARGE: kk
2017-05-18 19:02 Protastic101: I'd say the normal-hitclap is too quiet
2017-05-18 19:02 Protastic101: 00:48:705 (48705|1,49155|2) - missing claps
2017-05-18 19:03 Protastic101: 00:51:105 (51105|1,51555|2) - ^
2017-05-18 19:03 Protastic101: 00:53:955 (53955|1) - ^
2017-05-18 19:03 Protastic101: 00:54:255 (54255|1) - missing whistle
2017-05-18 19:04 CHARGE: fixed
2017-05-18 19:04 Protastic101: but ye, I can't actually hear the hitsounds very well even with music/effect at 10/100
2017-05-18 19:04 CHARGE: want me to turn the volume on?
2017-05-18 19:04 CHARGE: like, 55%? 60%?
2017-05-18 19:05 Protastic101: you could, but I think it's cause the samples are too quiet
2017-05-18 19:05 CHARGE: so what would you suggest?
2017-05-18 19:05 Protastic101: if you increased the vol of the samples in the map, the hitnormal would just be too overpowering at that point
2017-05-18 19:05 Protastic101: just increase the sample volume of the hitclap
2017-05-18 19:05 Protastic101: 02:47:055 (167055|0) - also, think this should be a whistle, not a clap lol
2017-05-18 19:05 CHARGE: how can i do it? audiocity?
2017-05-18 19:06 Protastic101: 00:47:055 (47055|1) - same thing, should be whistle
2017-05-18 19:06 Protastic101: and yeah, audacity
2017-05-18 19:07 Protastic101: https://puu.sh/vUpiw.wav
2017-05-18 19:07 CHARGE: fixed
2017-05-18 19:07 CHARGE: ill just change the bass sound..
2017-05-18 19:07 CHARGE: to something louder
2017-05-18 19:07 CHARGE: ohh amazing
2017-05-18 19:07 CHARGE: this is the increased clap?
2017-05-18 19:07 Protastic101: yeah
2017-05-18 19:07 CHARGE: thanks bro!
2017-05-18 19:07 CHARGE: switched
2017-05-18 19:07 CHARGE: what else?
2017-05-18 19:08 Protastic101: 00:47:355 - gonna ask why the snares like 00:47:655 - 00:48:105 - in this section are all doubles, but at the section in 02:47:355 - , they're all triples like at 02:47:655 - 02:48:255 -
2017-05-18 19:09 Protastic101: but yeah, so basically work on reducing your stacks and chord size consistency, then add another diff between insane and grimpossible and it should be 10/10
2017-05-18 19:09 CHARGE: they are now triples :)
2017-05-18 19:10 CHARGE: so i fixed your notes earlier
2017-05-18 19:10 CHARGE: the first notes u said about the stacks
2017-05-18 19:10 CHARGE: so another diff and we're ready for check?
2017-05-18 19:11 Protastic101: p much
2017-05-18 19:11 Protastic101: want me to post log in thread or nah?
2017-05-18 19:11 CHARGE: Sure man
2017-05-18 19:11 CHARGE: why not? :)
2017-05-18 19:12 CHARGE: added u to credits :)
Unlucky_w
312 posts
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Unlucky_w
sorry for breaking the first world record of being late :?
here's mod as request, didn't forget.

Easy
00:09:555 (9555|1) - to 4 and 00:09:855 (9855|2) - to 2.
01:11:505 (71505|2,71655|3) - ctrl+g
02:06:555 - Add a LN at 3
02:13:005 - Add a note here to 1? and move 02:13:155 (133155|1) - to blue tick.
02:36:855 (156855|2) - to 2, doesn't seem the sound is repeating here.
03:07:755 (187755|1) - to 4

Normal
00:00:855 (855|3) - to 1
00:02:055 (2055|0) - to 4
00:03:255 (3255|0) - to 4
00:06:855 (6855|1) - to 1
00:08:055 (8055|2) - to 4
^ trying to make different thing instead of just typical stair patterns.
00:32:655 (32655|3) - to 1, not really repetitive unless you also make 00:30:705 (30705|2) - to 1.
01:41:355 (101355|2) - to 1
01:41:955 (101955|1) - to 1, then 01:42:255 (102255|3) - to 2.
01:44:805 (104805|0) - to 2, too close to 01:44:805 (104805|0) - some players won't expect this since it's a normal diff.
01:44:805 (104805|1) - add a note somewhere?
01:55:455 (115455|3,115605|2) - add note to 4, it's dense.
02:32:055 (152055|2) - remove?
02:32:655 (152655|0) - change column

Hard
01:18:396 - break? why not just add a LN.
01:38:955 - add to 3

Insane
00:16:305 (16305|1,16455|0) - ctrl+g
01:59:355 (119355|3) - would move this to 1
02:01:755 (121755|0) - to 2, ^
02:05:055 (125055|3) - remove
02:06:555 (126555|2) - to 4

Note
And that's probably it.
Good luck
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

FastYoshi wrote:

sorry for breaking the first world record of being late :?
here's mod as request, didn't forget.

Easy
00:09:555 (9555|1) - to 4 and 00:09:855 (9855|2) - to 2.
01:11:505 (71505|2,71655|3) - ctrl+g
02:06:555 - Add a LN at 3
02:13:005 - Add a note here to 1? and move 02:13:155 (133155|1) - to blue tick.
02:36:855 (156855|2) - to 2, doesn't seem the sound is repeating here.
03:07:755 (187755|1) - to 4

Normal
00:00:855 (855|3) - to 1
00:02:055 (2055|0) - to 4
00:03:255 (3255|0) - to 4
00:06:855 (6855|1) - to 1
00:08:055 (8055|2) - to 4
^ trying to make different thing instead of just typical stair patterns.
00:32:655 (32655|3) - to 1, not really repetitive unless you also make 00:30:705 (30705|2) - to 1.
01:41:355 (101355|2) - to 1
01:41:955 (101955|1) - to 1, then 01:42:255 (102255|3) - to 2.
01:44:805 (104805|0) - to 2, too close to 01:44:805 (104805|0) - some players won't expect this since it's a normal diff.
01:44:805 (104805|1) - add a note somewhere?
01:55:455 (115455|3,115605|2) - add note to 4, it's dense.
02:32:055 (152055|2) - remove?
02:32:655 (152655|0) - change column

Hard
01:18:396 - break? why not just add a LN. Not my diff, laughingcomet will decide
01:38:955 - add to 3 ^

Insane
00:16:305 (16305|1,16455|0) - ctrl+g
01:59:355 (119355|3) - would move this to 1
02:01:755 (121755|0) - to 2, ^
02:05:055 (125055|3) - remove
02:06:555 (126555|2) - to 4

Note
And that's probably it.
Good luck
Accepted all notes except red notes, thank you very much !!
BloowXv2
BloowXv2
In game PM another request

Test + some details IRC
Grimmpossible
2017-05-29 18:05 CHARGE: Heyy
2017-05-29 18:06 BloowXv2: :v /
2017-05-29 18:09 BloowXv2: what happen? 
2017-05-29 18:12 CHARGE: uhh
2017-05-29 18:12 CHARGE: can u play grimm again? :D
2017-05-29 18:12 BloowXv2: eh :v ok
2017-05-29 18:12 BloowXv2: send np
2017-05-29 18:12 CHARGE: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597690
2017-05-29 18:18 BloowXv2: lol
2017-05-29 18:18 BloowXv2: feels more like commfortable
2017-05-29 18:19 BloowXv2: that last time
2017-05-29 18:19 CHARGE: :D
2017-05-29 18:20 BloowXv2: but
2017-05-29 18:20 BloowXv2: let me check some parts
2017-05-29 18:26 BloowXv2: Parts like these are very uncomfortable
2017-05-29 18:26 BloowXv2: 02:42:255 - 
2017-05-29 18:26 BloowXv2: hem... 02:55:680 - 
2017-05-29 18:26 BloowXv2: missing note?
2017-05-29 18:27 BloowXv2: another uncommfortable part
2017-05-29 18:27 BloowXv2: 03:11:055 - 
2017-05-29 18:28 BloowXv2: 03:11:055 (191055|2,191092|3) - i suggest put Ctrl+G in these patterns
2017-05-29 18:29 BloowXv2: 02:42:255 (162255|1,162292|0) - ^
2017-05-29 18:30 CHARGE: can  you post on thread?
2017-05-29 18:30 BloowXv2: oh. sure :) 
2017-05-29 18:31 BloowXv2: i can post the IRC?
2017-05-29 18:34 BloowXv2: oh
2017-05-29 18:34 BloowXv2: Btw, the map is not hard enough to make it uncomfortable. Increasing the playability makes it a little more fun.
2017-05-29 18:35 BloowXv2: :3
2017-05-29 18:35 BloowXv2: i like this map ;)
2017-05-29 18:35 CHARGE: Thx!

Good luck & Good map!
Rivals_7
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Rivals_7
1234

[G]

00:48:705 (48705|1) - why is this not doubled? the layering looks inconsistent with before

00:48:855 (48855|2,48855|3) - and why is this not tripled nor having any W hitsound?
pay attention to the consistency. you might ended up rearranging quite a lot for this

01:05:280 - forgot the jacking?

01:32:505 (92505|3,92655|1,92805|1) - this part got less notes than Extra did hmmm
consider this is being the last diff, it is recommended to make every sectio particularly hard. you can compare both diffs

01:50:580 (110580|0,110580|2,110655|1,110655|3,110805|3) - you also missing quite a lot of Hitsound refering your lower diffs and vice versa. make up your mind on how do you want to hitsounding it

02:50:130 (170130|2) - should've deleted that. refer others patterning you've made

[EX]

00:31:305 (31305|2) - there's somehow heavy on the right. move to 1

00:35:130 - could've added note to follow the 8-bit melody

00:39:930 - ^
and pretty much etc

00:53:505 (53505|0,53580|0) - wait i dont get the idea behind this minijack. if its a mistake pls separate them

01:15:155 (75155|2,75155|0,75155|3,75355|2,75355|1,75355|3) - the irony where the one without any additional sounds layered with triples, whilst - 01:15:555 (75555|0,75555|1) - are on doubles (you see my context of sound that i referring here)
tl;dr make - 01:15:555 (75555|0,75555|1) - a triple

02:42:105 (162105|3,162142|2,162255|3,162292|2,162405|3,162442|2,162555|3,162555|2) - lo this roll is utterly uncomfy. anyways just ctrl+h - 02:42:405 (162405|3,162442|2,162480|0,162517|1,162555|3,162555|2,162705|0,162705|1,162780|2,162855|0,162855|3) - to get a balanced patterning

02:48:480 - kinda sure you forget to add note around here. see - 02:49:680 (169680|1) - and etc for reference

03:05:655 (185655|2,185655|3,185805|2,185955|3,185955|2,186030|3,186255|3,186255|2) - compare how heavy this section with the left one. I'm also quite dont get the reason why are you triple-ing this - 03:05:655 (185655|3,185655|0,185655|2) - one despite being just a kick to cover. could've been better if its just double tho

03:20:505 (200505|3,200542|2,200580|1) - ctrl+h. seriously its too heavy to handle a two one-way-roll inside a trill fest pattern
Alternatively, you can do something similar to - 03:25:155 (205155|1,205192|2,205230|3,205305|0,205342|1,205380|2) - if you still want to keep them one-way-roll

will try to catch the rest later on. in the mean time, recheck all the hitsounds
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

Rivals_7 wrote:

1234

[G]

00:48:705 (48705|1) - why is this not doubled? the layering looks inconsistent with before

00:48:855 (48855|2,48855|3) - and why is this not tripled nor having any W hitsound?
pay attention to the consistency. you might ended up rearranging quite a lot for this

01:05:280 - forgot the jacking?

01:32:505 (92505|3,92655|1,92805|1) - this part got less notes than Extra did hmmm
consider this is being the last diff, it is recommended to make every sectio particularly hard. you can compare both diffs

01:50:580 (110580|0,110580|2,110655|1,110655|3,110805|3) - you also missing quite a lot of Hitsound refering your lower diffs and vice versa. make up your mind on how do you want to hitsounding it

02:50:130 (170130|2) - should've deleted that. refer others patterning you've made

[EX]

00:31:305 (31305|2) - there's somehow heavy on the right. move to 1

00:35:130 - could've added note to follow the 8-bit melody

00:39:930 - ^
and pretty much etc

00:53:505 (53505|0,53580|0) - wait i dont get the idea behind this minijack. if its a mistake pls separate them

01:15:155 (75155|2,75155|0,75155|3,75355|2,75355|1,75355|3) - the irony where the one without any additional sounds layered with triples, whilst - 01:15:555 (75555|0,75555|1) - are on doubles (you see my context of sound that i referring here)
tl;dr make - 01:15:555 (75555|0,75555|1) - a triple

02:42:105 (162105|3,162142|2,162255|3,162292|2,162405|3,162442|2,162555|3,162555|2) - lo this roll is utterly uncomfy. anyways just ctrl+h - 02:42:405 (162405|3,162442|2,162480|0,162517|1,162555|3,162555|2,162705|0,162705|1,162780|2,162855|0,162855|3) - to get a balanced patterning

02:48:480 - kinda sure you forget to add note around here. see - 02:49:680 (169680|1) - and etc for reference

03:05:655 (185655|2,185655|3,185805|2,185955|3,185955|2,186030|3,186255|3,186255|2) - compare how heavy this section with the left one. I'm also quite dont get the reason why are you triple-ing this - 03:05:655 (185655|3,185655|0,185655|2) - one despite being just a kick to cover. could've been better if its just double tho

03:20:505 (200505|3,200542|2,200580|1) - ctrl+h. seriously its too heavy to handle a two one-way-roll inside a trill fest pattern
Alternatively, you can do something similar to - 03:25:155 (205155|1,205192|2,205230|3,205305|0,205342|1,205380|2) - if you still want to keep them one-way-roll

will try to catch the rest later on. in the mean time, recheck all the hitsounds
Applied ALL suggestions & went over hitsounds.
Thank you Rivals!
Rivals_7
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Joined July 2014
Rivals_7
[I]



HS CONSISTENCY OR RIOT

00:28:455 - https://puu.sh/wkwCo/ac01eedd14.png
this might be more relevant to the pitch imo

00:53:505 (53505|0,53580|0) - dont stack this. see higher diffs

01:07:305 (67305|2) - etc etc you forgot W. pls be consistent with your higher diffs

01:09:255 (69255|3) - could be doubled since its snare

01:15:555 (75555|1,75955|0) - pls double. Extra have triple

02:47:805 (167805|3,167880|2,168030|3,168105|2) - dont really get why are you putting this on one hand while almost all the other similar use both hands

kinda lazy lol. i'll do the last three this weekend i guess
Wadu
Topic Starter
Wadu

Rivals_7 wrote:

[I]



HS CONSISTENCY OR RIOT

00:28:455 - https://puu.sh/wkwCo/ac01eedd14.png
this might be more relevant to the pitch imo

00:53:505 (53505|0,53580|0) - dont stack this. see higher diffs

01:07:305 (67305|2) - etc etc you forgot W. pls be consistent with your higher diffs

01:09:255 (69255|3) - could be doubled since its snare

01:15:555 (75555|1,75955|0) - pls double. Extra have triple

02:47:805 (167805|3,167880|2,168030|3,168105|2) - dont really get why are you putting this on one hand while almost all the other similar use both hands

kinda lazy lol. i'll do the last three this weekend i guess
Applied all :) Thank you.
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