Hello from #modreqs.
I'm still kinda new to modding.
[General]
Hitsounds in all difficulty are very random and the volume isn't right. I suggest you add them 15%. And reading tutorial about hitsounding. Here's a great one.
They are seriously weird sliders placement on the map and tons of triplets that don't really emphasize the music. I suggest you look at maps with the same song or any map for inspiration.
If you need help in mapping in a certain situation, Pishifat and -Mo- have videos on their channel about things like pattern, spacing, overmap, etc.
Pishifat's Channel
-Mo-'s Channel
Ok, now that's that. Let's start with the song setup.
The artist and the title are is the wrong spot. They are romanised, which should be put in the romanised column. The artist and title column should be in Japanese characters.
Artist: 三月のパンタシア
Title: はじまりの速度
Same goes to the source. Japanese character: キズナイーバー
You can add Kiznaiver in the tag.
And maybe an anime tag?
[Normal]
01:27:600 (1) - Make spinner last until the next white tick. Also, remove finish hitsound, it seems out of place as the music is gradually fading out.
Bad at modding normal and easy (currently). Sorry.
[Hard]
00:06:423 (3) - It doesn't really suit landing in the blue tick. The white tick before is preferable.
00:10:659 (5,6) - Maybe made these as a slider as I think it follows the vocal.
00:11:894 (4,5) - Instead of slider starting from the red tick, it should start from the white tick. While the circle should be on the red tick instead. (And I don't mean just ctrl+G it lol)
00:12:776 (1,2) - Maybe make these two sliders into circles instead?
00:19:835 (1,2) - This two full beat sliders ruins the song dynamic (you can feel it louder than before), perhaps changing them to 3 1/2 sliders all starting on white tick.
00:21:247 (5,6,7,8) - This can be adjusted. Perhaps make it like this?
00:24:600 (2) - Instead of a full beat slider. Make it a circle and a 1/2 slider.
00:28:835 - A circle here, perhaps? Maybe overlapping either the slider before or after. Or just simply put between them.
00:29:541 - ^
00:36:247 (4,5) - Reverse this order. The slider is more suitable starting from the white tick where it landed. And the circle move the red tick before.
00:40:129 (2) - Instead of a full beat. Make it a repeating 1/2 slider instead.
00:42:776 (4) - ^
00:57:776 - Maybe a circle here?
01:05:718 (7,8) - Make slider before the circle. I think it suits more.
01:20:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps instead of this, you can delete circle 2-5, and make the 1/2 repeating slider into a 1/4 landing in the same tick as the 1/2 slider.
01:27:600 (1) - Spinner stops at the next white tick suits better.
[Insane]
00:02:188 (4) - This slider doesn't suit the instrument and nor the vocal. You can perhaps follow the vocal like this:
Which involve the slider before.
Or the beat:
00:09:953 (1) - Instead of a 1/4 slider, make it into 2 circles. Perhaps underlapping the next slider.
00:11:188 (5) - ^ Underlapping the next circle or wherever places you seems to be good.
00:12:070 (5) - This slider could use a little more spacing from the last circle.
00:14:188 (1) - Perhaps make this 2 circles instead of a slider.
00:14:718 (3,4) - Combine these to make a slider. I think it follows the vocal and beat.
00:18:070 (6) - Why is the spacing shorter than in 00:17:365 (2,4) - ? I think it should be the same thing as the two circles. So instead of it being on 352 on the x-axis, it should be on 384.
00:19:129 (3) - NC
00:19:129 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You can add another circle on 00:19:747 - . Make a stream that will continue until the next one. Like this, perhaps:
00:22:218 - The same issue like the one above. You can make a full beat stream here, ending the last one with a slider.
00:26:894 (1) - Instead of a 1/4 slider, how about make it just a circle or a 1/2 slider instead?
00:29:012 (2) - Is this supposed to be symmetry? If so, it's at the wrong angle and coordinates. You can copy the slider before and flip it horizontally for an identical angle and coordinate. You can adjust the y-axis to find your fulfill need.
00:29:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - Actually the drums start at 00:29:541 - , you can move the stream to start at that point instead. And in 00:29:806 (4) - , a little bit overmapped as they are no sound here. You may delete if you want.
00:30:423 (6) - This full beat slider is really weird, as the red tick in the middle indeed has a sound. I think a repeated 1/2 slider here is better.
Also, I think the section from 00:29:541 - to 00:31:129 - look better in this:
00:34:747 (6) - There's no sound here. 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - You can make this section a jump section.
00:35:806 - There's a sound here. You can continue the stream until the next slider.
00:37:218 (3) - No sound.
00:41:718 (5) - Maybe a little spacing from the last circle.
00:48:070 (1) - Maybe curve this slider as I think a sharp turn makes a bad flow from the one before to the after.
01:00:776 - You forgot a circle here.
01:15:247 (3,4,5) - These sliders aren't really suitable for this part. I suggest doing this:
With a higher slider velocity.
01:18:335 - Now you can add a circle here and make a triplet stream here.
01:18:953 - A sound here. You can either make a 1/2 slider from the circle before or just a circle here.Or you can leave it.
01:20:894 (4) - Slider head actually doesn't have a sound. 01:21:423 (5) - So is this. The only sounds that are available in this section are on 01:21:070 - and 01:21:247 - . I suggest you put a circle on both overlapping since it's a calm part (I guess).
01:22:129 (2,3,4) - Perhaps make the sliders start from a white tick rather than the red.
01:27:070 (5,6) - These feels wrong here as there's the drum sound. Since this is an insane difficulty, you can add the streams here, or at least a repeating 1/4 sliders.
If you agree, then the streams should start from 01:27:070 - to 01:27:600 - . You can make the spinner start from the blue tick, as spinners don't give out sound from the beginning.
01:27:600 (1) - Make spinner last until the next white tick. Also, remove finish hitsound, it seems out of place as the music is gradually fading out.
[Pain]
00:02:541 (6,1) - I think a bit of spacing from both is better.
00:18:423 (1) - and 00:18:688 (2) - feels not suitable. There isn't any sound on 00:18:512 - . And why does the slider start from the blue tick? Try to do something like this:
You can make a stream from 00:22:129 - to 00:22:659 - . You can make the stream end with the 00:22:659 (1) - slider.
00:36:953 (2,3) - Perhaps make these sliders start from the white tick they end with?
00:48:335 (4) - There's no sound here.
00:58:482 - Stream can start from here. It's an insane difficulty anyway.
01:10:129 (5) - Perhaps make this slider start on 01:09:953 - instead. You can add a circle later on 01:10:306 - .
01:14:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A bit of overmapped. The only sound here are:
01:27:247 (7,8,9) - Only three? You can start the stream from 01:27:070 - to 01:27:600 - . Spinner can start on the blue tick.
01:27:600 (1) - Meh, you probably know what I'm talking about anyway.
Hope this help!
Good luck on your mapset!
I'm still kinda new to modding.
[General]
Hitsounds in all difficulty are very random and the volume isn't right. I suggest you add them 15%. And reading tutorial about hitsounding. Here's a great one.
They are seriously weird sliders placement on the map and tons of triplets that don't really emphasize the music. I suggest you look at maps with the same song or any map for inspiration.
If you need help in mapping in a certain situation, Pishifat and -Mo- have videos on their channel about things like pattern, spacing, overmap, etc.
Pishifat's Channel
-Mo-'s Channel
Ok, now that's that. Let's start with the song setup.
The artist and the title are is the wrong spot. They are romanised, which should be put in the romanised column. The artist and title column should be in Japanese characters.
Artist: 三月のパンタシア
Title: はじまりの速度
Same goes to the source. Japanese character: キズナイーバー
You can add Kiznaiver in the tag.
And maybe an anime tag?
[Normal]
01:27:600 (1) - Make spinner last until the next white tick. Also, remove finish hitsound, it seems out of place as the music is gradually fading out.
Bad at modding normal and easy (currently). Sorry.
[Hard]
00:06:423 (3) - It doesn't really suit landing in the blue tick. The white tick before is preferable.
00:10:659 (5,6) - Maybe made these as a slider as I think it follows the vocal.
00:11:894 (4,5) - Instead of slider starting from the red tick, it should start from the white tick. While the circle should be on the red tick instead. (And I don't mean just ctrl+G it lol)
00:12:776 (1,2) - Maybe make these two sliders into circles instead?
00:19:835 (1,2) - This two full beat sliders ruins the song dynamic (you can feel it louder than before), perhaps changing them to 3 1/2 sliders all starting on white tick.
00:21:247 (5,6,7,8) - This can be adjusted. Perhaps make it like this?
00:24:600 (2) - Instead of a full beat slider. Make it a circle and a 1/2 slider.
00:28:835 - A circle here, perhaps? Maybe overlapping either the slider before or after. Or just simply put between them.
00:29:541 - ^
00:36:247 (4,5) - Reverse this order. The slider is more suitable starting from the white tick where it landed. And the circle move the red tick before.
00:40:129 (2) - Instead of a full beat. Make it a repeating 1/2 slider instead.
00:42:776 (4) - ^
00:57:776 - Maybe a circle here?
01:05:718 (7,8) - Make slider before the circle. I think it suits more.
01:20:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps instead of this, you can delete circle 2-5, and make the 1/2 repeating slider into a 1/4 landing in the same tick as the 1/2 slider.
01:27:600 (1) - Spinner stops at the next white tick suits better.
[Insane]
00:02:188 (4) - This slider doesn't suit the instrument and nor the vocal. You can perhaps follow the vocal like this:
Which involve the slider before.
Or the beat:
00:09:953 (1) - Instead of a 1/4 slider, make it into 2 circles. Perhaps underlapping the next slider.
00:11:188 (5) - ^ Underlapping the next circle or wherever places you seems to be good.
00:12:070 (5) - This slider could use a little more spacing from the last circle.
00:14:188 (1) - Perhaps make this 2 circles instead of a slider.
00:14:718 (3,4) - Combine these to make a slider. I think it follows the vocal and beat.
00:18:070 (6) - Why is the spacing shorter than in 00:17:365 (2,4) - ? I think it should be the same thing as the two circles. So instead of it being on 352 on the x-axis, it should be on 384.
00:19:129 (3) - NC
00:19:129 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You can add another circle on 00:19:747 - . Make a stream that will continue until the next one. Like this, perhaps:
00:22:218 - The same issue like the one above. You can make a full beat stream here, ending the last one with a slider.
00:26:894 (1) - Instead of a 1/4 slider, how about make it just a circle or a 1/2 slider instead?
00:29:012 (2) - Is this supposed to be symmetry? If so, it's at the wrong angle and coordinates. You can copy the slider before and flip it horizontally for an identical angle and coordinate. You can adjust the y-axis to find your fulfill need.
00:29:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - Actually the drums start at 00:29:541 - , you can move the stream to start at that point instead. And in 00:29:806 (4) - , a little bit overmapped as they are no sound here. You may delete if you want.
00:30:423 (6) - This full beat slider is really weird, as the red tick in the middle indeed has a sound. I think a repeated 1/2 slider here is better.
Also, I think the section from 00:29:541 - to 00:31:129 - look better in this:
00:34:747 (6) - There's no sound here. 00:33:953 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - You can make this section a jump section.
00:35:806 - There's a sound here. You can continue the stream until the next slider.
00:37:218 (3) - No sound.
00:41:718 (5) - Maybe a little spacing from the last circle.
00:48:070 (1) - Maybe curve this slider as I think a sharp turn makes a bad flow from the one before to the after.
01:00:776 - You forgot a circle here.
01:15:247 (3,4,5) - These sliders aren't really suitable for this part. I suggest doing this:
With a higher slider velocity.
01:18:335 - Now you can add a circle here and make a triplet stream here.
01:18:953 - A sound here. You can either make a 1/2 slider from the circle before or just a circle here.
01:20:894 (4) - Slider head actually doesn't have a sound. 01:21:423 (5) - So is this. The only sounds that are available in this section are on 01:21:070 - and 01:21:247 - . I suggest you put a circle on both overlapping since it's a calm part (I guess).
01:22:129 (2,3,4) - Perhaps make the sliders start from a white tick rather than the red.
01:27:070 (5,6) - These feels wrong here as there's the drum sound. Since this is an insane difficulty, you can add the streams here, or at least a repeating 1/4 sliders.
If you agree, then the streams should start from 01:27:070 - to 01:27:600 - . You can make the spinner start from the blue tick, as spinners don't give out sound from the beginning.
01:27:600 (1) - Make spinner last until the next white tick. Also, remove finish hitsound, it seems out of place as the music is gradually fading out.
[Pain]
00:02:541 (6,1) - I think a bit of spacing from both is better.
00:18:423 (1) - and 00:18:688 (2) - feels not suitable. There isn't any sound on 00:18:512 - . And why does the slider start from the blue tick? Try to do something like this:
You can make a stream from 00:22:129 - to 00:22:659 - . You can make the stream end with the 00:22:659 (1) - slider.
00:36:953 (2,3) - Perhaps make these sliders start from the white tick they end with?
00:48:335 (4) - There's no sound here.
00:58:482 - Stream can start from here. It's an insane difficulty anyway.
01:10:129 (5) - Perhaps make this slider start on 01:09:953 - instead. You can add a circle later on 01:10:306 - .
01:14:894 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A bit of overmapped. The only sound here are:
01:27:247 (7,8,9) - Only three? You can start the stream from 01:27:070 - to 01:27:600 - . Spinner can start on the blue tick.
01:27:600 (1) - Meh, you probably know what I'm talking about anyway.
Hope this help!
Good luck on your mapset!