1. There's no need to add "tv" in tags, it is already on title, consider removing it.
2. Why did you add "," between tags if it is not necessary? Just add spaces between all words.
3. Hytex's Hard seems to have different tags, while the rest of diffs have the same, check this and fix it soon.
4. Probably remove pink combo colour, it doesn't fit with the background imo.

1. 00:52:442 (1) - This spinner starts really soon and it doesn't fit well, move it to the vocal starts again.

1. 01:16:540 (2) - I think you can Ctrl+G this for a better flow.
2. 01:25:720 (2) - Maybe it is a bit hard to read, you can move it more to the center maybe, keeping the same spacing.

Nyukai wrote:

General:

1. There's no need to add "tv" in tags, it is already on title, consider removing it. ~fixed~, removed tv
2. Why did you add "," between tags if it is not necessary? Just add spaces between all words.~fixed~, I wasn't sure how it worked at first so I spaced them by using,
3. Hytex's Hard seems to have different tags, while the rest of diffs have the same, check this and fix it soon. ~fixed~
4. Probably remove pink combo colour, it doesn't fit with the background imo. maybe, I'll think about it

Light Insane Collab:

1. 00:52:442 (1) - This spinner starts really soon and it doesn't fit well, move it to the vocal starts again. ~fixed~

Shining Chariot:

1. 01:16:540 (2) - I think you can Ctrl+G this for a better flow. ~fixed~
2. 01:25:720 (2) - Maybe it is a bit hard to read, you can move it more to the center maybe, keeping the same spacing. ~fixed~

I'm ok with the rest of diffs, sorry for the late.

Cris_1 wrote:

Hi, random short help for you~

00:54:491 - Set this point at preview view pls (for follow lyrics better) I'l, take a look when im on my pc and not on mobile Edit: changed the preview point to 54:245 instead

The actual bg looks too expanded, you can find more backgrounds here congrats, you were the one who discovered i was lazy when someone said to make it 1920x1080, your prize is ... good fortune *not guaranteed*, but now seriously, I will cut a portion of the original wallpaper and then rescale it to fit as I really like this one

I don't know if this really needs kudosu xdd I also don't know owo

Anyway, good map and nice song, i hope this gets ranked

[ - Zekks - ] wrote:

From my queue

Not much I could find wrong with this mapset, it is timed nicely and snaps hitsounds correctly, it's a just a few uncomfortable flow parts that have my head tilt, I recommend you look over your maps and trap to more circular flow so you don't have much confusion in the flow of your maps, take the "mod" below as an example I always try to use circular flow or back and forth and there may be a couple of mistakes but it's fine

[Shining Carrot]

00:06:376 (4) - Uncomfortable flow, place this hitcircle in the same place as 00:05:884 (2) - Possibility, but this makes it look more like a triangle so I'll keep it like this

Since I couldn't find much I could mod in this mapset, I'll shoot a star instead
Good luck!

MadHypnofrog wrote:

hiya! m4m thing

extra
00:03:917 (1,4) - I'd stack those ~fixed~
00:04:737 (4,1) - blanket feels a bit off ~fixed~
00:05:884 (2,3,4) - ehh this flows weird Not really a probelm if not the whole map flows perfectly
00:06:868 (2,3,5) - placing 5 in the middle between 2 and 3 would look better I think, or you can just stack it with 00:06:048 (3) - (don't forget to move 00:07:196 (4,6,7) - as well) ~fixed~
00:13:097 (7) - might want to replace this with a circle It used to be a circle but someone suggested a slider so I tried it out, changed it back to a circle now
00:27:032 (3,5) - blanket plz, looks kinda messy rn blanket was really bad so I just used ctrl + j
00:28:015 (6,8) - stack (8) with (4) ~fixed~
00:36:868 (1,2) - (2) doesn't really have an important sound so a slider would fit better in there pattern would be messed up otherwise
00:50:638 (5,6) - weird flow yet again sharp angle, and it continues the back and forth 00:50:311 (3,4,5,6) -
01:02:933 (6,2) - stack plz ~fixed~
01:06:868 (6,1) - swap NCs ~fixed~
01:09:327 (5) - eh and then you're mapping the start of the new vocal line to a sliderend, which you haven't done before 01:09:655 (1) - feels way louder and I am stacking sounds like that on top of eachother
01:09:819 (2,4) - is this supposed to be a blanket not really, just back and forth jump
01:12:114 - tbqh this whole section is not supported by the music, there aren't even any 1/2 beats in the background, consider at least nerfing those jumps - for example, they are not even close to the jumps at 01:04:081 - which is probs the most intense part of the song 01:04:081 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - is really short and I didn't like that as the conclusion of the map but yeah, I was already planning on scaling these down quite a bit, not in the amount of jumps but only in the amount of spacing. After scaling the jumps down a bit the difficulty has gone from 5.9 -> 5.78 which actually was the original SR from before I remapped the jumps
Edit: after taking a second look I noticed that 01:12:442 (1) - is the only circle without a strong sound on it during the entire jump section but it should be fine to keep the pattern as is

insane
00:05:884 (2,4) - those two are just too close, space them a bit They don't overlap so it's not really a problem
00:08:343 (2,1) - ehhh same, looks messy af ~fixed~, blanketed now
00:14:409 (3) - I'd ctrl-h this ~fixed~, why not looks good
00:23:753 (1) - rip snapping ~fixed~, result of me not checking sliders
00:36:868 (1,4) - ^^ Would ruin circular flow
00:48:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why are they decreasing in spacing? The drums get quieter
00:58:835 (6) - putting it around 385 321 would look better I want to keep the same distance snap
00:58:343 (3) - or this around 285 246, choose one ^
00:59:327 (2,9) - you can stack those two ~fixed~

good diff overall, but visuals can be improved at some places I'm just bad at visuals and look mostly at patterns and flow

gl!

Hytex wrote:

i drop

1. Hytex (obvious reasons)
2. Zonthem (for giving the first actual really good mod)
3. Invertable (for taking a second look at the map IRC when he already finished the mod which was a huge help)
4. Xenochronicles (For helping fix rhythm and colabbing with me on the Light insane to finish the spread)
5. And thanks to anyone who favorited as without that I wouldn't be able to do this

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Hytex wrote:

did you submit here?
t/549835

1. 00:09:163 (6,1,2) - Aren't these supposed to be a 1/1 slider like 00:03:917 (1) ?
2. 00:10:228 - Can be mapped for consistency with 00:04:983 (5) .
3. 00:14:573 (1,2,3) - Not really worth breaking DS continuously for the sake of visuals, you should come up with something else.
4. 00:13:589 - Actually let's say I don't know what rhythm you're following on this part:
   
   1. 00:14:081 - There's nothing here to be mapped actually.
   2. 00:19:819 (1) - is clickable on nothing.
   3. 00:21:130 (1,2) - A 1/1 slider + circle would express vocal better like 00:31:622 (1,2) .
   4. 00:25:556 - Why do you land a slidertail on a beat that has a strong vocal + instrument?
   5. Yeah I could point more but my point is I'm disagree with your rhythm choice as I don't know what rhythm you're focusing on, you can disagree with these if you have a different mindset on rhythms in this section than me.

1. 00:02:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 00:08:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - These parts are rhythmically the same but you only did a pattern on the first timestamp and not the second one.
2. 00:08:343 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:09:655 (2,3,4) - Same as above, rhythms on blue tick 00:04:983 - 00:10:228 should be consistently mapped as well.
3. 00:15:065 (4,5) - You can just use 1 shape and then copy paste them through out the section/song so they don't look visually inconsistent zz
4. 00:23:755 - An unsnapped green line.

Electoz wrote:

Apparently I'm not very late but here I am

[Insane]

1. 00:02:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 00:08:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - These parts are rhythmically the same but you only did a pattern on the first timestamp and not the second one. ~fixed~, mapped the same now
2. 00:08:343 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:09:655 (2,3,4) - Same as above, rhythms on blue tick 00:04:983 - 00:10:228 should be consistently mapped as well. ~fixed~, mapped those blue ticks
3. 00:15:065 (4,5) - You can just use 1 shape and then copy paste them through out the section/song so they don't look visually inconsistent zz I just fixed these as at this point I'm not planning to respace alot of sliders if I won't rank it
4. 00:23:755 - An unsnapped green line.Wow, how did u even notice this, it was 2 ms off

You can keep a ticket as we discussed in game.

Xinying wrote:

m4m for a ticket as discussed in forum pm.

General

1. Disable widescreen support in Shining Chariot. ~fixed~
2. The video quality is quite bad I can't really add 4k super hd as that would increase filesize by a ton
3. Ending the kiai that early feels weird. Maybe re-enable it either 01:05:720 - here for the vocal or 01:10:966 - here for the instrument? i want to keep the kiai consistent over all diffs and on the higher ones there is a major slowdown there so thats why it stops

Easy

1. 00:08:016 (3,1,2,3) - Transition from 1/1 spacing to 1 1/2 and back into 1/2 again will feel really awkward and hard for beginners to play, also considering this is a 1.35 difficulty easy. You might want to revamp your rhythm abit. Also I think for an Easy, this is too circle-heavy. It's not the rules, but an ideal Easy imo is one with Slider > Circle and with easy 2/1 / 1/1 rhythm that follow the music as best as possible Its distance snapped here but probably there is still some confusion. Still, I don't want to sacrifice the rhythm for better playability
2. 00:10:638 (3) - Sliders like these emphasizes both the 1/1 and 1/2 sound so it's good to use here!
3. Also, I think your SV is too low lol, maybe 0.8 ~ 0.9 is ideal. Probably, but I'm not planning to remap large aprts at this point
4. 00:21:950 (1,1) - Spinner to note transition should have a 4 beat rest time for players to recover in Easy. it says 2-4 in the guidelines so 3 is fine
5. 00:44:737 (1,2,3) - These notes are better off as rebound slider I don't want a rebound slider here as 00:45:229 (2) - is a s strong as 00:44:737 (1,3) - and a rebound doesn't reflect that

Normal

1. you should probably use constant DS throughout a normal diff I tried to but probably messed up somewhere
2. first thing I noticed was inconsistency in rhythm. It consists of mainly 1/1 at first with some parts being 1/2, but you completely changed it from here 00:17:524 (1) - to 00:21:786 (3) - to follow the vocal. But once again you reverted it back to 1/1 00:23:753 (1) - here to the break, even though some vocal also lies on the 1/2 snap. Pick a rhythm and stick to it? It could be something like (in one bar, 1/1 and the next, 1/2 and repeat) This would require alot of work to remap large parts and since I submitted it for loved I don't know when it will be moved over
3. 00:39:491 - map up to this point? It feels unfinished. It's difficult to map a violin burst on a normal diff, I just don't now how without massively increasing note density
4. 01:17:852 (2) - Nazi but you should probably fix the x0.92 distance snap issue ai mod pointed out here ~fixed~
5. 01:24:081 (1,2,3) - spacing issue, make it similar to this 00:10:638 (1,2,3) - ~fixed~

Light Insane Collab

1. 00:59:491 (2,4) - they overlap a little, move (4) to the right abit.~fixed~

Insane

1. 00:21:950 (1) - right now, I think ending the slider here 00:23:261 - would be a better choice, to follow the instrument Something about long sliders here just doesn't fit for me, I'm also pretty bad at making sliders look good
   
   Not much complains about Light Insane & Insane, but you can really use some blankets to make some patterns look and play nicer. It's not really wrong to ignore blankets, but at least try to follow someThe insane doesn't have that many blankets but the collab has a ton

Shining Chariot

1. 00:12:606 (6,7) - surprised you didn't put circle jumps for these high pitched melody It feels more calm than the part with jumps right before it so I wanted some contrast
2. 00:27:524 (5) - nc? ~fixed~
3. 00:38:835 (6) - a rebound here is really boring, especially with the melody in the background. Try these sliders rhythm instead? They emphasize the melody well and at the same time are mapped to the drums. Some versions ago it actually was like that but it felt way to intense so I changed it back to this
4. 00:52:606 (9) - I don't think this note needs to be spaced that much. The intense part ends 00:52:442 (8) - here.~fixed~, placed it in the middle like alot of people suggested

that's all from me. major unrankable issues are mainly in the lower diffs (E/N) the rest are pretty ok. good luck!

Xinying wrote:

For loved, I think you need 100 kudosu and at least 30 favorites. After that submit your map to Ephemeral or Loctav for a check?

Hytex wrote:

applied everything in electoz
and xinying decline (cuz electoz already said the stuff, or something like that)

update owo

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Topsherman wrote:

Rank it, please

gottagof4ast wrote:

Topsherman wrote:

Rank it, please

It's going to be put into to loved so it will still have a leaderboard as ranking this map was a bit harder than expected.
Sorry, I can't rank this , It's not good enough

victorfernando wrote:

Hit sounds are bad ._.