Electoz wrote:

Sorry to say this but it's unlikely for me to check it again cuz I have to mod/check other sets too. Also if I mod this again then it won't be different from my last mod so at this point I would suggest either get more mods or ask more opinions from other BNs/QATs and probably see if they're willing to icon this (but iconing is not like something you should rushed for generally because that way you prioritize ranking process over quality of the mapset)
Anyways let me make some quick points again so you can get the general idea of what I think:

[Normal]

1. 03:01:031 (3,4) - My point on this still remain the same, could've either used a bigger DS or change this to something else cuz overlapped 1/2 sliders don't look really appealing.
2. 03:21:325 (1) - I don't really understand the idea of this shape, like in kiai your slider shapes are either curved ones or the ones with a red note like 03:24:855 (1) -03:31:913 (1) etc. So 03:21:325 (1) will be pretty much stood out cuz it's not either one of the shapes you're commonly using. So basically it's more like, what's the purpose of this slider shape? Why it isn't the same as other sliders? Does the song provide anything to be mapped differently? Or does this slider shape reflect of express anything from the song? You should have reasons behind these things otherwise things would look too random.
   ^Oh yeah this thing is really important and can be applied with a lot of patternings, rhythms, and things you do while mapping not just slider shapes so please take note of that.

[Hard]

1. 00:08:972 (1,2,3) - Not sure why this is less dense than 00:12:502 (1,2,3) which has a similar rhythm.
2. Rhythms in kiai is my concern, from what I see you used things like [4 circles + 2 sliders] which is, well I guess you might have your reasons but these rhythms are really ambiguous and honestly I don't know what you're following in kiai. More like, I don't know if you're following vocals, or if you're following the instruments. And I don't know either if these things are being followed consistently.
   Tldr; I don't understand your concept on how you used circles and sliders so it would be either you convince me the reasonings or fix what I just pointed out above.

[Wiejska Inba]

1. 00:18:016 (2,3,4,5) - This is similar to what I mentioned in Normal. Does this pattern reflect anything from the song? Or do you have reasonings behind these placements?
2. The way you pulled off symmetric patterns in kiai could be improved too, like for instance anyone could tell 01:40:737 (1,2) - 01:41:619 (3,4) are the same pattern. But did you do the same thing on 00:26:619 (1,2) - 00:27:502 (3,4,5,6) ? From what I see I'll assume it's not unless you have your reasonings. So this is more like how you should be more consistent on where you used patterns. Are the patterns used according to the song? Are they being used consistently when the song gives out a similar/same rhythm? Do these patterns reflect or express the song? Well what I mentioned here is pretty much similar to what I mentioned in Normal though.

So yeah I hope my points are clear enough and these are more like the general ideas from my side which you can apply to the rest on your map, good luck~

-Nya- wrote:

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Kirkoma wrote:

nawet się nie waż dawać tego na graveyard

Kirkoma wrote:

za chwile będziesz balował frajerze

najgorszy mod

20:53 Kirkoma: TA MALUTKA BLONDYNKA
20:54 Kirkoma: ZAWRUCILA W GLOWIE MIIIIIIIIIIIIII
20:58 Kirkoma: ej w sumie
20:58 Kirkoma: czy moge to
20:58 Kirkoma: zmodowac
20:58 Kirkoma: ?_?
20:58 deadpon3: oczywiście
20:58 deadpon3: moduj
20:58 Kirkoma: a to
20:58 Kirkoma: jestem chujowym moderem
20:58 Kirkoma: so
20:58 Kirkoma: lego
20:59 Kirkoma: boże kurwix volume 0%
20:59 Kirkoma: dobra
20:59 Kirkoma: juz
21:00 Kirkoma: 00:23:752 (1) - nie lepiej ctrl + G?
21:00 Kirkoma: a nie chwika
21:00 Kirkoma: chwila
21:00 Kirkoma: no poprostu
21:00 Kirkoma: zeby to stacknac
21:00 deadpon3: który to diff
21:00 Kirkoma: iakos
21:00 Kirkoma: a no
21:00 Kirkoma: imba papaja
21:01 deadpon3: na ctrl G brzydko, to jest stacknięte strzałką
21:01 Kirkoma: aaaaaa
21:01 Kirkoma: okej
21:01 Kirkoma: nie zauwazylem
21:02 Kirkoma: ale to ma tyle modow ze nie wiem czy cos znajde x-DD
21:03 Kirkoma: znaczy wiesz
21:03 Kirkoma: no ni mo brzyckich slidereo
21:03 Kirkoma: 01:43:825 (4) - to tez moglobybyć ctrlg
21:04 deadpon3: psuje się flow, nie chcę jechać w kiai cały czas na 1.1x xd
21:07 Kirkoma: e tam psuje sie
21:07 Kirkoma: dla mnie jest lepiej
21:07 Kirkoma: no cusz
21:10 Kirkoma: kurwix
21:10 Kirkoma: serio
21:10 Kirkoma: nic nie potrafie znalesc
21:10 Kirkoma: aaaaaaaaaaa-aa
21:11 Kirkoma: no ale co
21:11 Kirkoma: angery
21:11 Kirkoma: jak tu
21:11 Kirkoma: consistency niby nie ma znaczenia
21:13 Kirkoma: tu jest wszystko ok z spacingiem
21:13 Kirkoma: ?_?
21:14 Kirkoma: o dobra mam jedno
21:14 Kirkoma: 01:42:060 (4) -
21:14 Kirkoma: fix
21:16 deadpon3: ok juz poprawiam!!
21:16 Kirkoma: !!!
21:16 Kirkoma: ale wiejska inba jest tak bardzo moded ze arr
21:16 Kirkoma: moze hard cos guwniak bedzie miau
21:18 deadpon3: maybe
21:18 Kirkoma: 02:03:678 (1) - wiejska inba czemu nagle z prostego i kulistego jest taki aesthetic fiji bottle ktory niszczy
21:18 deadpon3: tam zmieniłem slider shape
21:18 Kirkoma: slico
21:18 Kirkoma: Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide.
21:18 Kirkoma: 1 sec
21:19 deadpon3: tutaj jest taki fajny myk że on na chwilkę stopuje flow, nie zajmuje dużo miejsca i jest dużo miejsca na jumpu
21:19 deadpon3: zostawiam tego bydlaka
21:19 Kirkoma: jebany skurwiel odmieniec
21:19 deadpon3: zwłaszcza ża ma blanket z 02:03:237 (7) -
21:19 Kirkoma: dobra
21:19 Kirkoma: i see
21:19 Kirkoma: 02:14:046 (1,2) -
21:19 Kirkoma: ??????????????????????????????????????????????co
21:19 Kirkoma: 02:14:046 (1) - nc ok
21:20 Kirkoma: znaczy
21:20 Kirkoma: nie tu
21:20 Kirkoma: kurwasdnjifnweipfnaio[f
21:20 deadpon3: o fuck
21:20 Kirkoma: 02:14:267 (2) -
21:20 deadpon3: fixed
21:20 Kirkoma: yea
21:20 Kirkoma: full legal alchemist[
21:21 Kirkoma: 02:23:090 (1) -
21:21 Kirkoma: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194
21:21 Kirkoma: beat blanket
21:21 Kirkoma: moze
21:21 Kirkoma: ??
21:21 deadpon3: psst to są techniki z 2011
21:21 deadpon3: xd
21:22 Kirkoma: psst no i
21:22 deadpon3: zostawiam ^-^
21:29 Kirkoma: 02:51:325 (1,1) -
21:29 Kirkoma: o chuj chodzi z tymi zielonkami
21:29 Kirkoma: czemu one tam są
21:29 Kirkoma: ???
21:29 Kirkoma: znaczy
21:29 Kirkoma: jeden ok
21:29 Kirkoma: ale
21:29 Kirkoma: dwa
21:29 Kirkoma: pomiedzy niczym
21:29 Kirkoma: co
21:30 deadpon3: pierwszy wycisza spinner, drugi podgłaśnia kółko
21:30 Kirkoma: a
21:30 Kirkoma: a no tak
21:30 Kirkoma: ja przeciez nie mam effectow
21:30 Kirkoma: ani volume
21:33 Kirkoma: `03:13:384 (3) -
21:33 Kirkoma: 03:11:840 (3) -
21:33 Kirkoma: stack
21:33 deadpon3: ej to jest nazi
21:33 deadpon3: xD
21:34 Kirkoma: co jest nazi
21:34 Kirkoma: co jakie nazi
21:34 Kirkoma: ??
21:34 deadpon3: no że taki stack nazi
21:34 Kirkoma: co to nazi?
21:34 deadpon3: tak jak grammar nazi
21:34 Kirkoma: no i w czym problemo
21:34 deadpon3: no mam star pattern i symetrie
21:34 Kirkoma: mnie boli
21:34 deadpon3: muszę to psuć
21:34 Kirkoma: a
21:34 Kirkoma: aa
21:34 Kirkoma: ko
21:34 Kirkoma: ok
21:34 Kirkoma: np
21:35 Kirkoma: ale wiesz
21:35 Kirkoma: ;;;;)))))
21:35 Kirkoma: 03:12:061 (4) -
21:35 Kirkoma: 03:12:502 (1) -
21:35 Kirkoma: ale tu jest dobrze chociazby
21:35 Kirkoma: ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;)
21:35 deadpon3: ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
21:35 deadpon3: (
21:36 Kirkoma: 03:16:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - tu cos mi nie pasuje z tym chociaz nw co

Kirkoma wrote:

czes czes potwurata buble gun pls

Shinju wrote:

Hard

01:13:825 (6) - Zrób tu jakiś normalny kształt Zwykły slider dałem.

01:47:355 (4) - Czemu to jest tak daleko? Poprawione :I

Wiejska Inba

01:11:178 (3,5,6) - Te kółka siedzą na sobie i mógłbyś je trochę przesunąć kk

01:44:266 (1) - Daj ten slider trochę niżej bo brzydko wygląda nie

02:07:208 (1,1,1) - Obróć to wszystko o parę stopni dobra masz

02:27:502 (4) - Daj to kółko na lewo trochę po co

03:19:119 (4) - Za blisko to jest jest git

1. rythm
2. patterns

Shmiklak wrote:

we made irc mod, but my pc has died so I didn't save the log, but we talked about insane diff a bit. we fixed:

1. rythm
2. patterns

Shmiklak wrote:

we made irc mod, but my pc has died so I didn't save the log, but we talked about insane diff a bit. we fixed:

1. rythm
2. patterns

Electoz wrote:

Shmiklak wrote:

we made irc mod, but my pc has died so I didn't save the log, but we talked about insane diff a bit. we fixed:

1. rythm
2. patterns

If the mapper can bring me the log then I'll give you back, denied for now.

2017-03-24 21:10 Shmiklak: 00:03:678 - this
2017-03-24 21:10 Shmiklak: should be emphasised
2017-03-24 21:11 Shmiklak: 00:08:311 (5) - move it a bit down
2017-03-24 21:11 deadpon3: okay
2017-03-24 21:11 deadpon3: moved to Y:190
2017-03-24 21:13 Shmiklak: https://puu.sh/uWYQl/005a1188bd.jpg
2017-03-24 21:13 Shmiklak: 00:20:002 (2,3,4,5,6) - 
2017-03-24 21:13 Shmiklak: make these more interesting
2017-03-24 21:14 Shmiklak: i don't see reasons for these 1/1 sliders in kiai 00:35:443 (1) - 00:42:502 (1) - 00:44:266 (1) - etc
2017-03-24 21:15 Shmiklak: they are just random
2017-03-24 21:15 deadpon3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7643647 did this
2017-03-24 21:16 Shmiklak: so now this mod is kinda legit
2017-03-24 21:16 deadpon3: well I didn't want to spam 1/2
2017-03-24 21:16 deadpon3: so I'll keep them

Silverboxer wrote:

what the heck this map so fun, great song too

Shmiklak wrote:

Gratulacje facet!

Kiciuk wrote:

Gratki (ʘ‿ʘ)