22:38 <Jarby> : 00:33:582 (5) - One to the right
22:38 <ztrot> : hold one
22:38 <ztrot> : I'm fixing copypasta
22:38 <Jarby> : 00:56:211 - Also drag the start of the break to the 1/1 beat here
22:40 <Jarby> : Same with most of those breaks actually
22:41 <Jarby> : Maybe lower the HP drain as well?
22:41 <Jarby> : Considering it's a Marathon and all...
22:43 <Jarby> : 05:11:297 (9) - New combo
22:43 <Jarby> : 05:11:982 (3) - Try as a horizontal flip of 1, I'd say
22:43 <Jarby> : 05:12:325 (1) - And remove new combo here
22:45 <Jarby> : 05:43:011 (1) - Remove new combo consistency blah blah
22:45 <ztrot> : hp drain is really low allready
22:45 <ztrot> : it's almost at normal
22:45 <Jarby> : Oh well.
22:45 <Jarby> : Not like it really matters.
22:45 <Jarby> : 05:45:582 (1) - Remove new combo 05:46:954 (9) - New combo.
22:46 <ztrot> : I just changed some the copy pasted patters if you update
22:46 <Jarby> : Okay, one moment.
22:46 <Jarby> : What do you mean by change anyway
22:46 <ztrot> : like changed the pattern
22:47 <Jarby> : I'll just assume they're okay since you're the one mapping here.
22:47 <Jarby> : 05:52:439 (6) - Do the ends really have to overlap here? It's so unsettling.
22:47 <Jarby> : 06:01:525 (1) - Remove new combo.
22:48 <Jarby> : 06:25:354 (9) - Same new combo and flipping stuff I suggest before
22:48 <Jarby> : 06:33:754 (6) - New combo 06:34:439 (1) - Remove new combo and rearrange this pattern so it looks better in
22:48 <Jarby> : relation to this.
22:49 <Jarby> : 07:17:468 (9) - New combo 07:18:497 (1) - Remove new combo.
22:50 <Jarby> : In addition to that, the three circles stacked at 07:17:811 (2,3,4) - seem a little...random? You can use a better
22:50 <Jarby> : pattern, right?
22:50 <Jarby> : 07:25:868 (6) - New combo blah blah
22:50 <Jarby> : 08:06:498 (4,5,6) - HIDEOUS
22:51 <Jarby> : 08:16:441 (6,7) - Stretch these out further like the rest
22:52 <Jarby> : 08:21:412 (5) - This slider is just a weird shape in general. Could you try something else?
22:53 <Jarby> : 09:32:555 (1) - Remove new combo.
22:53 <Jarby> : 09:52:098 (1) - Remove new combo.
22:54 <ztrot> : dude
22:54 <ztrot> : you do rellize this takes alot more time because my editor is laggin
22:54 <Jarby> : I wouldn't know, it's fine here.
22:54 <Jarby> : I'm posting it in the thread anyway
22:54 <Jarby> : 10:02:727 (1) - Remove new combo.
22:55 <Jarby> : 10:44:213 (1) - Remove new combo.
22:55 <Jarby> : 10:54:841 (1) - Remove new combo.
22:56 <Jarby> : 11:14:213 (1) - Remove new combo.
22:56 <Jarby> : Oops
22:56 <Jarby> : 08:46:098 (1) - Remove new combo as well.
22:57 <Jarby> : 11:32:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use sliders or something. This isn't very interesting.
22:58 <Jarby> : 12:47:127 (1) - Remove new combo.
22:58 <ztrot> : sliders sound like shit right there
22:58 <Jarby> : Well, do something.
22:58 <Jarby> : You don't have to follow that instrument.
22:59 <Jarby> : 12:47:127 (5,6,7) - Line up with the 1
22:59 <Jarby> : As in lower it
22:59 <Jarby> : 12:58:098 (1) - Remove new combo, line up
23:00 <Jarby> : 13:32:898 (1) - Remove new combo.
23:00 <ztrot> : I can't
23:00 <ztrot> : or i can't used that pattern
23:01 <Jarby> : I really, really don't like it the way it is.
23:01 <Jarby> : That's about all I can say.
23:01 <Jarby> : 14:46:270 (2) - This is particularly asymmetrical
23:02 <Jarby> : 14:52:784 (1) - Remove new combo.
23:02 <Jarby> : 14:56:213 (2) - Remove new combo, lining up
23:03 <Jarby> : 15:07:013 (1) - See above
23:03 <Jarby> : 16:13:527 (1,1) - Remove new combos.
23:04 <Jarby> : 16:23:813 (1) - Remove new combo.
23:05 <Jarby> : 17:11:127 (1,4) - Remove new combos
23:05 <Jarby> : Er, that was odd.
23:05 <ztrot> : what?
23:05 <Jarby> : Just the first one then
23:05 <Jarby> : Temporary brain damage.
23:06 <Jarby> : Ah, yes, this is what I mean
23:06 <Jarby> : 17:22:098 (1,1) - Remove new combos.
23:06 <Jarby> : 17:29:298 (1) - Remove new combo.
23:06 <ztrot> : okay
23:06 <Jarby> : 17:32:385 (1) - Remove new combo.
23:07 <Jarby> : 18:08:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - What the fuck is this spacing
23:07 <Jarby> : 18:17:641 (1) - Remove new combo.
23:08 <Jarby> : By the way, this is the new best map you've ever made.