1. 00:08:289 (1,1) - the kicks are landing on the slider ends, and i don't think the measures those two objects are in sound any less intense than the previous measures
   
2. 00:15:146 (1,2,3,4) - this feels very empty (and has different spacing for some reason) compared to everything else from 00:11:032 - to 00:22:003 - i'd consider reworking this part to get the triples in as well
   
3. 00:20:461 (8,1) - find a way to increase the spacing on this
   
4. 00:23:718 (2,3) - move this a bit farther away from 1
   
5. 00:29:375 (3,4) - increase spacing
   
6. 00:40:175 (2) - move to the left a bit
   
7. 00:48:746 (3,4,5,6,7) - no SV change? compare with 00:37:775 (1,2) -
   
8. 00:59:718 (6) - move it somewhere around 8's slider end maybe (or stack it if you want lo)
   
9. 01:02:546 (7) - a double could work i think
   
10. 01:15:489 (1,2,3) - blanket uwu
    
11. 02:06:232 (1,2) - i'd change this like this so that the spacing is similar with 02:00:746 (2,3) - and 02:03:489 (1,2) -
    
12. 02:06:918 (1,2,1) - this needs to be moved farther away
    
13. 02:11:032 (1) - increasing the SV here so that the slider end lands on the red tick would be cool
    
14. 02:19:946 (1) - misses the vocal at 02:20:118 -
    
15. 02:44:289 (1) - remove NC
    
16. 02:57:489 (1,2) - ^

Fser wrote:

[deetz' Insane]
00:27:489 (1) - this mite b better if u ctrl+g it but why
00:57:661 (1) - i would prob misread this if i were at this skill level cuz of the overlaps n shit moved a little? idk
01:09:661 (1) - idk this slider is kinda random and doesnt fit consistently u could prob no, the vocal is held out for a long time at this part

place more stuff around that time
01:20:632 (1) - ^ ^
01:27:489 (1,2) - make (1) flow directly into (2) but why
01:42:061 (3,4,5,6) - kinda boring u could try switching up the rhythm here maybe like this no im following piano because its new and sounds nice
01:44:803 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:07:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tbh i would make (5) repeat 1 less time and stack another circle with (7) and (8) like this adding a blue tick circle is silly but i removed one repeat for the finish sound
02:26:975 (6,7) - u could space these out and make a zigzag jump or smth, example but why
03:17:632 - u should add a spinner that ends at 03:21:661 - or something for top50 purposes lol did it for the winding down sound

Fser wrote:

[Mega Collab]
01:10:861 (7) - wot flip this around and align it like u did with 01:10:518 (5,6) - changed the whole thing anyway, the drums were too faint to support the old pattern
01:16:689 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - boring pattern u could prob make some nice jumps with this made something a little bit more difficult

transcendental wrote:

[collab]
01:10:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really cool pattern but the intensity implied by kicksliders isn't warranted by the music. 01:10:689 (6,7) could be circles instead. basically i've changed it whole, felt a little bit too out of place
01:11:032 (1,1) - this hold and accelerate cursor movement is really cool. why not use it at 01:11:718 (2,3) as well to give it some context? right now it's a little odd on its lonesome. also that would let you make 01:12:061 (3) a 1/2 beat slider and map the drum hit at 01:12:232. ehhh i don't really want to do that, for how i see it 01:11:032 (1,1) - has sightly more impact than 01:11:718 (2). I'm not basing this only on lyrics. Listen carefully on 01:11:032 (1) - , the background noise stops here and restarts at the next white tick, 01:11:375 (1) - . I don't think recreating the same pattern in 01:11:718 (2) - is worth, having it be supported only by lyrics.

revurii wrote:

01:15:489 (1,2,3) - blanket uwu fixed

Fser wrote:

[Mega Collab]
02:54:232 (1,2) - tbh its prob really easy to miss a slider end here try to flow (1) into (2) lolxd I reworked a lot of patterns so this got fixed at the same time.
ending doesn't need a spinner cuz there already is one and it doesn't sound like it fits lol

transcendental wrote:

hullo from shitmapping discord
just a quick mod on top diff, some stuff i noticed while playing

[collab]


02:45:318 (6) - skips drum at 02:45:489. mapping to vocals is cool but a rhythm like this would still emphasize vocal while also mapping the drum.
02:50:803 (5) - same as above. I tried to follow your examples and change the rhythm but I disliked the end result, so I decided to keep the rhythms. Fits better imo
love this song. good luck!

1. why is normal and hard tick rate 2, it doesn't make much sense with the music and it's inconsistent with higher diffs lol

1. can you add a spinner
2. 02:00:746 (1) - could avoid this type of shape because it might be too tricky xdxd
3. 03:13:775 - missing clap

1. 01:42:918 - missing whistle
2. nice

1. 01:01:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you decrease rhythm density here? considering this is just a hard, it's too dense for a calm part like this
2. 02:27:661 - missing whistle

1. this is insane

1. 02:59:718 (1,2,3) - would be better to keep a bit of consistency around this section, while it's true that variety is acceptable, using a custom stack, then normal stacks 03:01:089 (1,2,3) - then no stacks at all 03:02:461 (1,2,3) - is kinda confusing i'd say

VINXIS wrote:

no i dont ;/

IamKwaN wrote:

Do you have reference site stating Negoto as the romanised artist? I found their facebook stating NEGOTO instead.

IamKwaN wrote:

Do you have reference site stating Negoto as the romanised artist? I found their facebook stating NEGOTO instead.

Kagetsu wrote:

http://lineblog.me/negoto/

Liiraye wrote:

yeah I never thought about that actually, says with all caps on their official youtube upload as well... Have we still made meta changes possible without DQ? xd...