Hey Rizen, finished my mod. Hope this helps!
[Normal]
00:02:916 (3) - if this is intentionally unsnapped, consider throwing in some red timing lines to avoid confusion to any modders. same applies to other diffs
00:01:794 – this note feels like a stronger note in the melody than 00:02:692 (2) - , so I felt like the current rhythm had an unclear speed up in rhythm. Consider moving that circle there.
00:05:609 (1) – I visually prefer sliders that aren't so curvy, so consider something more like
http://puu.sh/vfGvr/15455bae3e.jpg00:06:506 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) – my first play through I thought these two rhythm chains were somewhat dense for a new player. Now I don't feel as strongly, but reconsider your rhythm and see if you can put a 1/1 pause in one of these.
00:22:662 (3,1) – I have no perspective on what Normal players actually think or like, so this suggestion might be contrived, but this flow is kind of complicated and might throw off some people.
01:02:602 (4,2) – blanket could be better
01:04:846 (1) – I dislike not having the strong note be clickable at 01:05:294 – especially since 01:03:051 (1) – doesn't use its slider end as a strong note, so try slider → circle instead.
01:08:436 (1) - ^
01:12:026 (1) - ^
01:22:348 – was expecting this to be clickable because of the vocals, so consider two 1/1 circles here instead of a 1/1 slider.
[Hard]
00:26:701 (3,1,2,3,4) – all of these sliders have a flow change except (4). Consider recapturing that pizzaz with a flow change like:
http://puu.sh/vfHOQ/d08a959e0e.jpg00:33:432 (3,4) – I want to make sure my suggestion is understated because it's okay for us to have different opinions on stuff. I'm not a big fan of ¾ sliders and I think ½ sliders do a better job of getting the rhythm.
01:17:411 (1,2,3,4,5) – I was going with the singer who takes his last strong note at (1), so the increased spacing really conflicted with that since now the singer is resting. Even if we have a different perspective on which track of the music to follow, (2) is a weaker note than (1), so it shouldn't have stronger spacing into it, otherwise you get someone like me saying this increased intensity doesn't make sense.
01:21:899 (5) – this is what I see
http://puu.sh/vfJEy/7d802288ce.jpg . Try moving this down to avoid the overlap with the HP bar.
[Rebound]
00:14:584 (1,2,3,4) – something about your visual spacing doesn't look ideal. Try making these two distances the same:
http://puu.sh/vfJ31/fa67b455e7.jpg00:29:393 (3,4) – this is ds is really big for a really unclear reason, so I read this as 1/1 rhythm. Ctrl G the (3) slider?
00:33:432 (1) – I found the SV decrease to be disagreeable, but again different perspectives.
00:45:998 (1,2,3,4) – I don't share your feelings behind making this increasing DS since I can't find the changes in the intensity of the song.
00:48:690 (1,1) – avoid the overlap?
01:05:070 (2,3) – (3) is a strong note, but this was a weak DS. Consider increasing to add more emphasis?
01:10:680 (3,4) - ^
Cool mapset, have a star. Good luck!