1. uncheck widescreen support in all diffs except easy
2. BG should be 1366x768
3. your soft-hitclap seems not really fit it's a bit "heavy"
4. timing is a bit late imo you should have more opinons about that

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

more naruto

general

1. uncheck widescreen support in all diffs except easy fixed
2. BG should be 1366x768 resize
3. your soft-hitclap seems not really fit it's a bit "heavy" i think it's alright
4. timing is a bit late imo you should have more opinons about that trying right now :'>

easy
00:14:436 (2) - what about copy/paste 00:13:780 (1) - and replace it ? it's better aesthetically imo it'll overlap with 00:15:952 (4) , but i'll try it with different way
00:57:073 (3) - improve this shape D: fixed
01:26:616 (4,3) - stack ? fixed

hard
00:06:239 (2,3) - 00:06:895 (4,1) - spacing should be the same a bit as 01:19:730 (2,3) - 01:20:386 (4,1) - fixed
00:08:862 (2,3) - 00:09:518 (4,1) - ^
00:32:059 - it's better to not skip because it feels a bit weird i think its alright
00:37:397 (1) - needs a bigger spacing than that, since there's a loud finish sound to emphasize i think i don't need it since it's a hard diff
00:59:074 (2,3) - spacing fixed
01:16:287 (3,4) - why a huge spacing only here ? i try to make it looks good and...
01:22:353 (2,3) - 01:23:009 (4,1) - spacing consistency fixed

insane
00:06:239 (2,3) - 00:08:862 (2,3) - consistency as designed
[]
good luck !

• [Easy]

1. 00:34:442 (4,1) - Inconsistent spacing
2. 00:57:073 (3,1) - ^

• [nyu's Normal]

1. I prefer CS 3,5 because for new players it's a lot better and more easy.
2. 00:31:819 (5,6,1,) - For a Normal diff, that could look like a little stream for the new players and it's a little difficult maybe so I suggest to put here 00:31:819 a 1/2 slider, like this 00:59:731 (1,2,3)
3. 00:40:836 (2) - This slider should be here 00:40:672
4. 01:15:140 (3,4,1) - As I said on the top just read
5. 01:18:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - Omg .-. ^

• [Hard]

1. 00:31:655 (4,5,6,1) - You can blanket this:
   
   Like this

   
2. 00:40:672 (4) - Ctrl+G?

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!
NM from my Queue~

• [Easy]

1. 00:34:442 (4,1) - Inconsistent spacing
2. 00:57:073 (3,1) - ^

Fixed all

• [Hard]

1. 00:31:655 (4,5,6,1) - You can blanket this:
   
   Like this

   
2. 00:40:672 (4) - Ctrl+G?

not suitable with the flow


That's all for me!
GOOD LUCK!

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Normal]
better to change circle size to 3 since your rhythm is already a little hard,the gap between E&N may be a little big.and even hard is using a bigger circle size since everyone is complaining, fixed.
better to change NC set to "two long white line one NC",your present combo is short k
00:25:584 (3,4) - I know you want to stress the long effect for vocal,but in fact you missed two strong snares and the tick sounds bad there it fits still pretty well.
00:31:485 (4,5,6) - should be snare drum huh?
01:29:567 (1) - better to make here slider end,the sound here is just a extention of last sound,not good to put a circle here
some rhythms contains many 1/2s like 01:15:141 (3,4,1,2,3) - ,01:18:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - .It's not good in normal imo fixed

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

more naruto

nyu
CS3 ?
00:07:223 (1) - (1) should start at 00:07:059 - since there is nothing on the downbeat k
00:08:534 (1,2,1) - ^
00:13:452 (1,2,3) - I think you should make as you did for 00:16:075 (4,1) - it's the good way imo
00:14:928 (5,1) - really hard for beginners, what about stack them? fine here.
00:19:682 (2,3,1) - ^ stacking them would mess up everything tbh.
00:25:584 (3) - No necessary to follow vocal here, I think it makes the diff more harder than it should be k
00:29:518 (1,2,3) - ^ yo
00:31:485 (4,5,6) - too hard what about two 1/2 sliders ? k
00:59:731 (1,2,3) - you should make as you did for the first kiai, for consistency the cool thing is, its supposed to be like that.
01:18:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - okay why there's a stream in this kind of diff what stream

good luck !

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!
NM from my Queue~

• [nyu's Normal]

1. I prefer CS 3,5 because for new players it's a lot better and more easy. 3
2. 00:31:819 (5,6,1,) - For a Normal diff, that could look like a little stream for the new players and it's a little difficult maybe so I suggest to put here 00:31:819 a 1/2 slider, like this 00:59:731 (1,2,3) ya
3. 00:40:836 (2) - This slider should be here 00:40:672 lol
4. 01:15:140 (3,4,1) - As I said on the top just read intense part
5. 01:18:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - Omg .-. ^ less intense

GOOD LUCK!

SolariS wrote:

From your queue for m4m,

Had free time now to mod yours first, hope you don't mind

Mod

nyu's normal

Why not CS 3? yes
00:40:836 (2) - Misplaced fix
01:29:567 (1) - Remove circle changed 01:29:238 (7) - to slider
01:29:239 (4) Make into a slider? lol


Good luck!

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239,221,78747,2,0,L|284:258,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,216,79075,2,0,L|379:254,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,193,79403,6,0,P|425:167|444:100,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,67,79895,2,0,L|329:89,1,100
285,96,80387,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,112,80715,2,0,P|144:118|72:97,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,35,81370,2,0,L|-7:145,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,229,82026,6,0,P|53:249|112:238,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,209,82518,2,0,L|238:151,2,100
109,239,83338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
54,143,83665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,61,83993,2,0,P|182:49|235:74,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,127,84649,6,0,P|366:139|419:114,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,89,85141,2,0,L|455:197,1,100
459,243,85633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,310,85960,2,0,P|337:323|264:302,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,228,86616,2,0,P|169:215|96:236,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,258,87108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,208,87272,6,0,L|19:155,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,159,87600,2,0,L|82:97,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,0,88092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
183,67,88419,2,0,P|215:79|287:67,1,100,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,42,88911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,89075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,42,89238,2,0,P|470:113|465:168,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

SolariS wrote:

From your queue for m4m,

Had free time now to mod yours first, hope you don't mind

Mod

Extra

00:47:721 (1) - Remove this circle vocal's voice here
00:50:433 (5) - Misplaced, place on red tick nope, it use 1/3 rhythm

Insane

00:14:764 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it should fully be hitsounded fixed some hitsound
00:16:731 (2) - Hitsound ^
00:18:698 (4) - Hitsound ^

Easy/Hard difficulties looks all good to me.

Good luck!

1. 00:04:436 (3,4,1) - Fix blankets
2. 00:22:967 (2,1) - Improve the shape of the slider (2) to make a better blanket (2-1)
3. 00:38:704 (3) - Curve it less for a better blanket
4. 00:55:761 (1,2,3) - Good pattern but it can be confusing for newbies
5. 01:09:567 (2,3) - Fix blanket (end reverse of 3)
6. 01:23:993 (4,1) - Fix blanket
7. 01:26:616 (4,1) - Fix blanket (more space enter (4&1))

1. 00:01:813 (1,2,3) - The flow here is harsh, and your triangle is a bit failed.
2. 00:12:469 (4) - Move it bit upper for a better look with 00:11:157 (1) -
3. 00:21:656 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Fix blankets
4. 00:28:213 (3,4) - A blanket could look better
5. 00:30:180 (2,3) - Fix blanket
6. 00:36:737 (6) - You SHOULD move this slider a bit upper
   
   Screenshot in fullscreen

   
7. 01:22:518 (2,5,1) - Looks a bit weird

1. 00:00:666 (1,4) - Overlap
2. 00:21:656 (1,2) - Fix blanket
3. 00:23:786 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:26:901 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:41:327 (1) - The shape looks weird
6. 00:54:778 (4,5) - Fix blanket
7. 00:59:566 (4,1) - ^
8. 01:04:648 (4,1) - ^
9. 01:11:041 (4,5) - ^
10. 01:12:190 (3,1) - ^
11. 01:23:173 (1,2) - Parallel lines ?
12. 01:27:763 (3,1) - Fix blanket
13. 01:29:238 (5) - You can improve this slider, the end looks really ugly.

1. 00:21:656 - 00:58:419 - you have a stacked red and green lines here on every diff with different hitsound volumes, which is unrankable. pick one volume and set them both to that value~
2. 00:03:944 (3) - 01:28:418 (5) - unsnapped in the insane diff

1. Maybe bump the OD up to 8?
2. 00:00:829 (2,4) - blanket
3. 00:01:649 (5) - give some more space between 00:01:157 (4,5) these two
4. 00:01:813 (1,2) - maybe make these parallel?
5. 00:01:813 (1,3) - overlap here is kinda ew
6. 00:03:780 (1) - nc spam starting here is unnecessary, I would just keep it all one combo and then nc 00:04:600 (2) here
7. 00:06:403 (3,2) - try to make this look cleaner by centering the 2 inside of the slider some more
8. 00:07:059 (1,3) - space these out some?
9. 00:09:026 (4) - why is this 1/1? the rhythm you were using earlier was better
10. 00:12:141 (5,2) - space these out more? you might have to rotate your 1/1 slider
11. 00:12:469 (1,2,3) - also I think here a rhythm like this works better for the held vocal and for the drums
12. 00:13:780 (1,2,3,4) - stacking all of these makes the drum kick on 00:14:108 (3) - feel very underwhelming
13. 00:15:092 (1) - i would move this further away from the circle behind it
14. 00:15:420 (2) - i know why you did this but what do you think about making this 2 circles on the white and red tick? I think it makes this more fun to play instead of just straight following the vocals
15. 00:16:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all of a sudden the spacing here is enormous so I would nerf this
16. 00:18:043 (2,6) - center the circle inside of the slider better?
17. 00:20:010 (5,1) - blanket could be better
18. 00:20:665 (2) - same here at my 2 circle suggestion
19. 00:20:993 (3,4,5) - equalize visual distance between these?
20. 00:21:983 (2,5) - blanket could be better
21. 00:26:901 (1) - i would suggest breaking flow here, because it's the start of a new section and the music is resetting
22. 00:27:557 (2) - either stack this on the end of the previous slider or move it farther away, because the current distance could be easily misread as a 1/2 gap instead of a 1/1 gap
23. 00:27:885 (4,1) - blanket
24. 00:28:868 (2) - same as 00:27:557 (2)
25. 00:29:032 (3,4) - you don't have to change this if you don't want, but i find this motion into the curve of the slider to be pretty uncomfortable when the song isn't doing anything crazy yet
26. 00:30:180 (2) - again
27. 00:31:164 (3,1) - overlap here could be fixed
28. 00:31:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is there a reason for this stream thing to be uneven from circle to circle?
29. 00:32:147 (1,2) - 00:34:770 (1,2) i think you're being too conservative with your 3/4 spacing here, especially because this is the kiai and people expect stuff to get more difficult here. This is more or less the same as the rest of the map, spacing wise

Lexis wrote:

M4M from my queue (I mod first)

In reply of my mod, you can choose one of these maps

Inside

Map for M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479701
Name : Hundred Miles (Sombury Remix)
Artist : Yall ft. Gabriella Richardson
Length : 1:29 (1:25 drain) [This is a cut ver]
Diffs to mod : nyu's Farewell in priority
Special things : I love this map :p

Map for M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/526952
Name : Astronomia (Laeko Cover)
Artist : Tony Igy
Length : 1:10 [This is a cut ver]
Diffs to mod : No priority for now
Special things : I made this mapset in 2 days.

NYU -, you're EVERYWHERE I GO xD

[Easy]

1. 00:04:436 (3,4,1) - Fix blankets fixed
2. 00:22:967 (2,1) - Improve the shape of the slider (2) to make a better blanket (2-1) fixed
3. 00:38:704 (3) - Curve it less for a better blanket fixed
4. 00:55:761 (1,2,3) - Good pattern but it can be confusing for newbies i think it's alright since the star rating is 1.49
5. 01:09:567 (2,3) - Fix blanket (end reverse of 3) fixed
6. 01:23:993 (4,1) - Fix blanket fixed
7. 01:26:616 (4,1) - Fix blanket (more space enter (4&1)) fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:00:666 (1,4) - Overlap fixed
2. 00:21:656 (1,2) - Fix blanket all blanket fixed
3. 00:23:786 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:26:901 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:41:327 (1) - The shape looks weird it's alright
6. 00:54:778 (4,5) - Fix blanket
7. 00:59:566 (4,1) - ^
8. 01:04:648 (4,1) - ^
9. 01:11:041 (4,5) - ^
10. 01:12:190 (3,1) - ^
11. 01:23:173 (1,2) - Parallel lines ? fixed
12. 01:27:763 (3,1) - Fix blanket
13. 01:29:238 (5) - You can improve this slider, the end looks really ugly. fixed

I'll shoot a star because nyu -

Logic Agent wrote:

hi from my queue

[General]

1. 00:21:656 - 00:58:419 - you have a stacked red and green lines here on every diff with different hitsound volumes, which is unrankable. pick one volume and set them both to that value~ thanks!
2. 00:03:944 (3) - 01:28:418 (5) - unsnapped in the insane diff fixed

[Extra]

1. Maybe bump the OD up to 8? fixed
2. 00:00:829 (2,4) - blanket fixed
3. 00:01:649 (5) - give some more space between 00:01:157 (4,5) these two fixed
4. 00:01:813 (1,2) - maybe make these parallel? fixed
5. 00:01:813 (1,3) - overlap here is kinda ew fixed
6. 00:03:780 (1) - nc spam starting here is unnecessary, I would just keep it all one combo and then nc 00:04:600 (2) here no change..
7. 00:06:403 (3,2) - try to make this look cleaner by centering the 2 inside of the slider some more fixed
8. 00:07:059 (1,3) - space these out some? fixed
9. 00:09:026 (4) - why is this 1/1? the rhythm you were using earlier was better earlier?
10. 00:12:141 (5,2) - space these out more? you might have to rotate your 1/1 slider
11. 00:12:469 (1,2,3) - also I think here a rhythm like this works better for the held vocal and for the drums nope
12. 00:13:780 (1,2,3,4) - stacking all of these makes the drum kick on 00:14:108 (3) - feel very underwhelming fixed
13. 00:15:092 (1) - i would move this further away from the circle behind it fixed
14. 00:15:420 (2) - i know why you did this but what do you think about making this 2 circles on the white and red tick? I think it makes this more fun to play instead of just straight following the vocals fixed
15. 00:16:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all of a sudden the spacing here is enormous so I would nerf this fixed
16. 00:18:043 (2,6) - center the circle inside of the slider better? big change from this part
17. 00:20:010 (5,1) - blanket could be better
18. 00:20:665 (2) - same here at my 2 circle suggestion
19. 00:20:993 (3,4,5) - equalize visual distance between these?
20. 00:21:983 (2,5) - blanket could be better
21. 00:26:901 (1) - i would suggest breaking flow here, because it's the start of a new section and the music is resetting
22. 00:27:557 (2) - either stack this on the end of the previous slider or move it farther away, because the current distance could be easily misread as a 1/2 gap instead of a 1/1 gap
23. 00:27:885 (4,1) - blanket
24. 00:28:868 (2) - same as 00:27:557 (2)
25. 00:29:032 (3,4) - you don't have to change this if you don't want, but i find this motion into the curve of the slider to be pretty uncomfortable when the song isn't doing anything crazy yet
26. 00:30:180 (2) - again
27. 00:31:164 (3,1) - overlap here could be fixed
28. 00:31:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is there a reason for this stream thing to be uneven from circle to circle?
29. 00:32:147 (1,2) - 00:34:770 (1,2) i think you're being too conservative with your 3/4 spacing here, especially because this is the kiai and people expect stuff to get more difficult here. This is more or less the same as the rest of the map, spacing wise

gonna stop here because i'm nitpicking hard. cool song and i wish you the best of luck!

-Latias- wrote:

from my modding q

Insane

00:07:879 (3) - you should nc here as you did nc at 00:08:534 (1) which is the same part of music nope, i follow the big white thick
00:11:157 (1,2) - make 1/1 here ? cause there really isnt any sound to justify a circle at 00:11:485 i think it will better to keep it like that
00:12:305 (6,1) - imo repeater would sound better here
00:16:403 (1,4) - too close but it's not overlap
00:17:059 (4) - nc here to keep it consistent with 00:16:403 (1) and 00:17:715 (1) fixed
00:18:370 (3) - ^^ fixed
00:25:591 (1,2) - spacing just a little to high, just move 00:26:082 (2) little closer to 00:25:591 (1) slider and cirlce spacing? better to keep it
00:31:492 (4) - i feel that 4 doesn't belong here. maybe move to around x:290 y:273 ? ^
00:33:786 (2,4,5) - would look more aesthetically pleasing if you did something like this fixed
00:35:426 (3,4,5,6) - 00:35:753 (5,6) isn't the same as 00:35:426 (3,4) . maybe make a slider at 00:35:753 better to keep it like this
00:42:967 (3,4) - maybe make it something like 00:38:377 (6,3) nope
00:50:188 (4) - maybe turn this into a slider as leaving 00:50:188 (4) without anything is under mapping circle follow the vocal correctly
01:08:255 (4,5,1) - any reason for the difference of the overlap of sliders ? if not fix i have reason
01:18:746 (5,6,1) - imo better if you made it consistent overlap of sliders. kind of like ^^^

good map, gl !

karazou121 wrote:

I wish this gets ranked ;_;

Janpai wrote:

Please send a vote on my queue to improve my modding =w=)y

DISCLAIMER:

1. The following things will be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.

General

1. Why Insane uses more HP and OD than Extra? shouldn't it be Extra has more denser settings than Insane? Fixed

Easy

1. 00:01:485 (2,3) - The cursor movement is so edgy lol. Maybe you could place 00:00:666 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/tjv62/05ecbf891d.jpg (Ctrl+H then Ctrl+J then adjust accordingly) fixed with different way
2. 00:06:731 (2,4) - These flows are kinda uncomfortable to play with beginners. I don't know what to suggest cuz there are so many objects would be ruined no change
3. 00:09:682 (3) - Add some slight curve for better playablity? fixed
4. 00:21:656 (4,1) - Improve the blanket by placing middle node to 351|326 fixed
5. 00:44:606 (4) - Place at 143|251 ? plays better imo nope
6. 00:47:229 (1) - NC is unnecessary here i don't notice it lol XD
7. 01:19:403 (1) - Make the edgy part more obvious. Beginners might not predict what track are they following in this type of slider. no change
8. It's a nice diff and you have a good instinct where to use blankets but most of the time, the flow is edgy specifically like this 00:58:420 (1,2) - sth like creates a zigzag movement feels so uncomfortable to play. Just a nitpicky opinion and hope you'll consider this one in the future. i'll try my best

Hard

1. 00:00:666 (1,3) - Improve blanket? fixed
2. 00:02:305 (2,3,4) - Confusing rhythm. A simple rhythm like this http://puu.sh/tjwdT/5bb0bcf2b1.jpg will follow the guitar more efficiently fixed
3. 00:10:174 (2,3,4) - Weird flow because 00:10:502 (3,4) - plays like compressed notes in one place. Ctrl+G'ing 00:10:502 (3,4) - would be much better imo
4. 00:12:469 (1) - This is better in 1/1 slider than 1/2 because vocals is on-hold maybe no, i can't let the red thick alone
5. 00:41:000 (5) - Ctrl+G? for 00:41:327 (1) - 's vocal to have more emphasis fixed
6. 01:29:238 (5) - Slider is lol'ed xD looks like a .... nvm. Could you have a better shape? i'm bad at this XD

Insane

1. 00:00:993 (3,5) - Stack fixed
2. 00:08:206 (5,1) - Too close if you're considering the slider leniency. Move a bit? fixed
3. 00:21:321 (4,3) - Stack fixed
4. 00:50:406 (5) - This could be just snapped to 1/2 than having the literal start of the vocal because it might be tricky to play, reading like it's a 1/4 rhythm when it's not. keep it cause i like it
5. 01:09:238 (2,5) - Stack again xD uggh.. fixed

Map is not bad, you have good sense of flow but there are some small things needed to improve.
Goodluck!

iYiyo wrote:

Just passing by to remind you that you should give kudosu to Janpai if her mod was useful!