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Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP - Youkoso Japari Park e [Taiko]

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Ozu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 4월 26일 수요일 at 오후 9:37:03

Artist: Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP
Title: Youkoso Japari Park e
Source: けものフレンズ
Tags: opening KEMONO FRIENDS tanoshi sugoi AsukaLangley asuasu_yura
BPM: 100
Filesize: 2576kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. AsuLan's Oni (3.47 stars, 459 notes)
  2. Futsuu (2.21 stars, 212 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.58 stars, 147 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.8 stars, 319 notes)
  5. Oni (3.76 stars, 471 notes)
  6. Yura's Inner Oni (4.4 stars, 563 notes)
Download: Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP - Youkoso Japari Park e
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たーのしー!
now fixing to follow rank criteria. really sorry GDers ;w;

Kantan by me
Futsuu by me
Muzukashii by me
AsuLan's Oni by AsukaLangley
Oni by me
Yura's Inner Oni by asuasu_yura

ddm
m4m
general
Title : ようこそジャパリパークへ(TVサイズver.)
Romanised Title : Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (TV size ver.)
스탠 랭맵에서 그대로 태그 들고 오신 것 같은데 불필요한 태그 지워주세요
kantan
오디오 프리뷰타임 다른 난이도랑 같게 수정해주세요

HP7 로 올려주세요

두번째 키아이에서 대부분의 패턴이 3/2로 되어있는데 2/1로 바꾸시는걸 추천합니다.
01:04:746 (2) - 01:04:922 로 이동
01:06:158 (4) - 01:06:334 로 이동 - 이런 식으로요
이게 난이도 상승의 주요 원인이 되고, 2/1로 해도 문제 없어보이네요
futsuu
HP6.5 로 올려주세요

00:08:099 (14) - d
00:08:805 (16) - k

01:02:804 (22) - 지우고 스피너 시작을 여기로?

노트 넣기 진짜 애매하네요 노래가...
muzu
OD5 HP6 으로 올려주세요

00:08:099 (14) - d
00:08:805 (16) - k

개인적으론 00:22:040 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - 여기 빼고는 3연타를 넣을 필요성을 못 느끼겠네요

00:26:628 (4,5) - ctrl + g
00:27:334 (8) - delete

00:35:628 (44) - delete

00:43:040 (18,19,20,21,22) - d d k k d

00:50:099 ~ 00:59:981 - 그냥 제가 음이 없는곳을 빈 공간으로 두는걸 좋아해서 그럴지도 모르겠지만 상당히 어색해 보이는 부분이 많았습니다
타노시이
너는 큰동캇이 특기인 프렌즈구나!

OD6 으로 올려주시고 수정 후에 오브젝트 수가 많이 적어지면 HP5.5로 올려도 될것같네요

00:17:628 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 패턴을 조금씩 바꿔보심이...? 앞부분이랑 너무 겹치는 것 같네요

00:25:393 (64) - d

00:26:099 ~ 00:28:216 - 무즙이랑 똑같이 하셔도 될듯요, 3연타 넣을 소리를 못잡겠네요
00:28:481 - d 추가 (1/4)

00:37:746 - d 추가
00:38:099 - ^

00:50:099 ~ 00:55:393 - 피아노 음에 맞춰서 3연타를 넣어보는건 어떨까요?
슥ㅡ고이
Karee Pan
Hey there :)

Hope we don't overlap with our mods too much with DDM

These are all just my opinions if you feel it changes your maps too much just ignore them.



Kantan
00:43:040 (8) - maybe k cause the next note is significantly lower
00:51:510 (3,4) - ctrl -g
00:54:334 (8,9) - ctrl -g and make all these 00:55:746 (1,2) doubles kd
01:10:393 (11) - k, like the others
01:21:687 (2) - ^
01:28:393 (4) - I like this more at 01:28:569
Futsuu
00:06:334 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Please consider dkkddkkkd ( 00:43:569 too)
00:41:628 (9,10,11,12) - ^ if you applied that we should stay consistent here too
00:43:569 (15) - move triplet one note left and kkd
00:50:805 (3) - delete and move 00 :51:158 (4) to 00:50:981
00:54:334 (11,12) - ctrl -g
01:06:687 (7) - d and 01:07:746 (10) - k
01:13:746 (25,26,27) - kdk and delete 01:14:452 (28)
01:17:981 (7) - d
01:25:040 (11,12,13) - kdkd and 01: 25:922 (14,15) dd
Muzukashii
00:06:334 - What is said in Futsuu about the pattern
00:23:628 (38,39,40,41,42) - Too hard for muzukashii
00:42:334 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - reverse all these notes
00:47:981 (16,17) - ctrl -g
00:51:863 (8,9,10,11,12) - dkdkd ?
00:52:922 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - could go dkkkddk
00:55:569 (23,1) - ctrl -g
01:11:275 (33) 01:11:805 (36) - k's and 01:12:158 (37,38) - ctrl -g
01:16:922 (7) - k
01:23:452 (11,12) - ctrl -g
Tanoshi Oni
00:37:040 (65) - d
00:42:334 (16,17) - i would reverse this again like in muzu and make the next triplet kkd
00:47:981 (16,17) - and here
00:54:158 (28,29) - kkk for the "bell sound" like the 2 before in this pattern ?
00:54:863 (33,34,35) - here too
01:11:275 (39,43) - k's and 01:12:158 (44,45) - ctrl -g

Great mapset! Good luck!
Topic Starter
Ozu
언제나 테스트플레이 및 모딩에 친절하게 응해주시는 점 감사드립니다!


DDM wrote:

m4m
general
Title : ようこそジャパリパークへ(TVサイズver.)
Romanised Title : Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (TV size ver.)
스탠 랭맵에서 그대로 태그 들고 오신 것 같은데 불필요한 태그 지워주세요 넵! 들켰네요 ㄷㄷ
kantan
오디오 프리뷰타임 다른 난이도랑 같게 수정해주세요 같아요!

HP7 로 올려주세요

두번째 키아이에서 대부분의 패턴이 3/2로 되어있는데 2/1로 바꾸시는걸 추천합니다.
01:04:746 (2) - 01:04:922 로 이동
01:06:158 (4) - 01:06:334 로 이동 - 이런 식으로요
이게 난이도 상승의 주요 원인이 되고, 2/1로 해도 문제 없어보이네요 확실히 1/2 로 해도 이상하지 않고 오히려 더 간단 답네요!
futsuu
HP6.5 로 올려주세요 6이 적당할 것 같아요.

00:08:099 (14) - d
00:08:805 (16) - k
이렇게 하니까 지루함도 방지되고 좋네요!

01:02:804 (22) - 지우고 스피너 시작을 여기로? y

노트 넣기 진짜 애매하네요 노래가... 타노시-
muzu
OD5 HP6 으로 올려주세요 y

00:08:099 (14) - d
00:08:805 (16) - k
y

개인적으론 00:22:040 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - 여기 빼고는 3연타를 넣을 필요성을 못 느끼겠네요 사운드 뒤에 원숭이?가 우끼끼 거리는거같은 부분 있는데 거기를 모델로 썼어요.

00:26:628 (4,5) - ctrl + g y
00:27:334 (8) - delete 멜로디가 이어지는 부분이라 섣불리 지우지를 못하겠네요...

00:35:628 (44) - delete y

00:43:040 (18,19,20,21,22) - d d k k d kdddk 로 했습니다!

00:50:099 ~ 00:59:981 - 그냥 제가 음이 없는곳을 빈 공간으로 두는걸 좋아해서 그럴지도 모르겠지만 상당히 어색해 보이는 부분이 많았습니다 음... 제가 매핑해서 그런지는 모르겠는데 제가 보기에는 어색하지는 않은거같아요.
타노시이
너는 큰동캇이 특기인 프렌즈구나! 스-고이-

OD6 으로 올려주시고 수정 후에 오브젝트 수가 많이 적어지면 HP5.5로 올려도 될것같네요 y

00:17:628 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - 패턴을 조금씩 바꿔보심이...? 앞부분이랑 너무 겹치는 것 같네요 몇몇 패턴을 수정하고 중간에 1/2 박자를 넣었습니다.

00:25:393 (64) - d y

00:26:099 ~ 00:28:216 - 무즙이랑 똑같이 하셔도 될듯요, 3연타 넣을 소리를 못잡겠네요 멜로디가 이어지는 부분인데 제가 생각하기에 이부분을 1/2로만 구성하면 어색해질것 같아 넣었습니다.
00:28:481 - d 추가 (1/4) 위의 것을 수정하지 않으면 어울리지 않는 것 같습니다.

00:37:746 - d 추가
00:38:099 - ^ 이부분은 빈부분으로 남겨두고 싶네요

00:50:099 ~ 00:55:393 - 피아노 음에 맞춰서 3연타를 넣어보는건 어떨까요? 이부분이 뭔가 애매하긴 한데 종소리(?) 가 너무 커서 거기에 포인트를 뒀습니다.
슥ㅡ고이 타노시-
Topic Starter
Ozu
Thanks for Modding <3

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey there :)

Hope we don't overlap with our mods too much with DDM it occured..... ;w;

These are all just my opinions if you feel it changes your maps too much just ignore them.



Kantan
00:43:040 (8) - maybe k cause the next note is significantly lower looks better!
00:51:510 (3,4) - ctrl -g y
00:54:334 (8,9) - ctrl -g and make all these 00:55:746 (1,2) doubles kd look so hard in kantan
01:10:393 (11) - k, like the others use this to avoid same pattern
01:21:687 (2) - ^
01:28:393 (4) - I like this more at 01:28:569 so hard in kantan. i moved this to 01:28:569
Futsuu
00:06:334 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Please consider dkkddkkkd ( 00:43:569 too) have more hit power so, sorry
00:41:628 (9,10,11,12) - ^ if you applied that we should stay consistent here too not applied above part, but this seems good in this part :)
00:43:569 (15) - move triplet one note left and kkd look so good!
00:50:805 (3) - delete and move 00 :51:158 (4) to 00:50:981 y
00:54:334 (11,12) - ctrl -g sorry
01:06:687 (7) - d and 01:07:746 (10) - k y
01:13:746 (25,26,27) - kdk and delete 01:14:452 (28) kdk ok ;)
01:17:981 (7) - d y
01:25:040 (11,12,13) - kdkd and 01: 25:922 (14,15) dd sorry but i think present is better
Muzukashii
00:06:334 - What is said in Futsuu about the pattern ^
00:23:628 (38,39,40,41,42) - Too hard for muzukashii eazy 5 stream pattern looks good for me in Muzu
00:42:334 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - reverse all these notes y but kdddk is remain!
00:47:981 (16,17) - ctrl -g y
00:51:863 (8,9,10,11,12) - dkdkd ? kkddk
00:52:922 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - could go dkkkddk dkkkdkk
00:55:569 (23,1) - ctrl -g y
01:11:275 (33) 01:11:805 (36) - k's and 01:12:158 (37,38) - ctrl -g sorry
01:16:922 (7) - k
01:23:452 (11,12) - ctrl -g
Tanoshi Oni
00:37:040 (65) - d y
00:42:334 (16,17) - i would reverse this again like in muzu and make the next triplet kkd y
00:47:981 (16,17) - and here y
00:54:158 (28,29) - kkk for the "bell sound" like the 2 before in this pattern ? nice advice!!! txs~
00:54:863 (33,34,35) - here too changed kkk
01:11:275 (39,43) - k's and 01:12:158 (44,45) - ctrl -g want to diffrence both same part

Great mapset! Good luck! thanks a lot!!!
Akemi_Homura
M4M 입니다~

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [General]
  1. 'Kantan'의 'Preview time'이 다른 난이도들과 달라요~!
  2. 개인적인 생각으로 중간중간에 0.9배속으로 떨어졌다가 다시 1배속으로 돌아오는걸 없애고 1배속으로 계속 가셔도 될 것 같아요~
  • [Kantan]
  1. HP 7로 설정해주세요.

  2. 00:47:981 (7) - (6)과 같은 음이니까 k로 바꿔서 dkk dkk로 같은 패턴을 쓰면 좋을 것 같아요.
  3. 01:09:863 (10,11,12,13) - k d d k가 좀 더 보컬변화에 맞지 않을까요~? 이렇게 바꾸면 01:04:216 (1,2,3,4)와 반대 패턴이 되니까 일관성도 있어보여요.
  4. 01:21:158 (1,2,3,4) - 마찬가지로 k d d k.
  5. 01:25:393 (8) - 01:26:099 (9)와 음이 거의 같거나 약간 더 높기 때문에 k가 좋을 것 같습니다.
  • [Futsuu]
  1. HP 6.5로 설정해주세요.

  2. 두번째 'kiai'가 도입부에 비해서 약간 노트가 적고 쉬는 타임이 많다보니 심심한 느낌이 드는 것 같아요. '-'
  3. 00:07:040 (11,12) - 보컬을 따라서 kd로 바꿔주세요~
  4. 00:18:334 (7,8,9) - (7)과 (9)의 드럼 사운드가 거의 같기 때문에 ddk로 만들어서 k리듬을 일정하게 하는게 더 쉬울 것 같아요.
  5. 00:19:746 (12,13,14) - 위와 마찬가지로 ddk로 바꿔주세요.
  6. 00:34:216 (23) - 드럼사운드가 있으니 k로 바꿔서 ddk로 만들어 주세요.
  7. 00:34:922 (25,26) - dk~! '츠,나이!'
  8. 00:35:805 (28) - 보컬이 계속 올라가고 있으니 k로 해주세요.
  9. 00:36:158 (29,30) - 여기서는 올라간 보컬이 내려가는 지점이니 kd가 좋을 것 같아요.
  10. 00:43:216 (14) - 00:43:569 여기로 옮기는게 좀 더 보컬을 따르는 것 같아요.
  11. 00:43:393 (14) - k로 바꿔주세요~!
  12. 00:47:099 (7) - d로 바꿔서 kkdd 패턴을 만들어주세요.
  13. 01:05:275와 01:10:922와 01:16:569와 01:22:216 - 여기에 k를 추가해서 'Kiai'의 속도감을 높여주세요.
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:23:628 (38,39,40,41,42) - 무즈카시에서 앞에서 연속된 노트가 나온후에 kkddk 패턴은 어렵지 않을까요~?
  2. 00:26:099 (1) ~ 00:28:569 (15) - 콤보가 너무 긴 것 같아요. 00:27:334 (8)를 삭제해서 7,7콤보로 만드는 편이 좋을 것 같아요.그런데 7,7도 긴 콤보끼리 붙어있기 때문에, 중간에 노트를 더 지워서 1,5,1,5콤보나 1,1,3,1,1,3 콤보로 나누셔도 될 것 같아요~! 개인적으로 나누는걸 추천합니다.
  3. 00:34:216 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - kdkkdk 로 바꾸는게 좀 더 보컬이나 k 사운드 일관성에 맞는 것 같아요.
  4. 00:43:216 (19) - (18)이랑 거의 같은 음이고,같은 가사이니 k가 더 맞는 것 같아요.
  5. 00:50:628 (2) - 드럼 사운드가 있으니 k.
  6. 00:50:805 (3) - 00:50:628 (2)의 연장되는 소리말고는 없으니까 지워도 될 것 같아요.
  7. 00:56:628 (4) ~ 00:59:099 (17) - 여기도 7,7 콤보를 좀 더 작게 나눠도 될 것 같아요~!

  8. 두번째 'Kiai' 구간에서 01:07:040 (13) ~ 01:08:981 (24)와 같은 긴 콤보가 보이는데, 무즈카시에서는 너무 길다고 생각됩니다.
    그리고 도입부분에서 kkkddk 같이 연타를 사용하셨는데, 오히려 키아이는 단조로워서 변화가 필요할 것 같아요~!
    그래서 이렇게 바꾸면 좋지 않을까 제안해봅니다.
  9. 우선 삭제 해야하는 노트들 입니다~
  10. 01:07:216 (14) - 삭제.
  11. 01:08:275 (19) - ^
  12. 01:12:863 (38) - ^
  13. 01:13:216 (39) - ^
  14. 01:14:275 (44) - ^
  15. 01:18:510 (14) - ^
  16. 01:19:569 (19) - ^
  17. 01:24:158 (14) - ^
  18. 01:24:510 (15) - ^
  19. 이 상태에서 적당한 곳에 3연타를 섞어주면 완벽한 'Kiai'파트가 될 것 같습니다.
    아래는 개인적으로 제안하는 3연타 추가 장소입니다.
  20. 01:07:834 - 노트를 추가하셔서 k k ddk d 패턴이나, k k ddd k 를 쓰면 좋을 것 같아요.
  21. 01:14:187랑 01:14:275 - 노트추가 하셔서, d d k d kkk d k d 로 만드는 것도 나쁘지 않은 것 같습니다.
  22. 01:19:218 - 01:07:834의 제안과 마찬가지로 노트 추가하셔서, k k ddk dk k ddd k를 쓰면 될 것 같아요.
  23. 01:14:187랑 01:14:275 - 두번째 제안과 마찬가지 입니다.
  24. 01:19:128 - 첫번째와 같은 제안 입니다! 같은 패턴..!
  25. 01:25:481랑 01:25:569 - 두번째 제안과 같습니다.
  • [Tanoshi Oni]
  1. 00:43:040 (18,19,20,21) - kkd k로 바꿔서 보컬을 살려줍시다.
  2. 01:12:687 (46) ~ 01:26:099 (32) - 콤보가 너무 긴 것 같아요~ 중간에 쉬는 부분이 있으면 좋을 것 같아요.

    오니에서 dk로 바꾸라는 자잘한 제안들을 더 쓰다보면 너무 길어질 것 같아서 여기서 마치겠습니다. ._.

노래도 좋고, 전체적으로 잘 만들어진 맵이라고 생각합니다~
랭크되길 바랄게요! 화이팅~ '-'
Topic Starter
Ozu
언제나 친절한 m4m 고마워요~!

Akemi_Homura wrote:

M4M 입니다~

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [General]
  1. 'Kantan'의 'Preview time'이 다른 난이도들과 달라요~! 수정했습니다.
  2. 개인적인 생각으로 중간중간에 0.9배속으로 떨어졌다가 다시 1배속으로 돌아오는걸 없애고 1배속으로 계속 가셔도 될 것 같아요~ 배.속.조.아
  • [Kantan]
  1. HP 7로 설정해주세요. 7로 수정했습니다!

  2. 00:47:981 (7) - (6)과 같은 음이니까 k로 바꿔서 dkk dkk로 같은 패턴을 쓰면 좋을 것 같아요. dkd dkd 로 바꿨습니다.
  3. 01:09:863 (10,11,12,13) - k d d k가 좀 더 보컬변화에 맞지 않을까요~? 이렇게 바꾸면 01:04:216 (1,2,3,4)와 반대 패턴이 되니까 일관성도 있어보여요. 허걱 완전 좋아요!!
  4. 01:21:158 (1,2,3,4) - 마찬가지로 k d d k. ^
  5. 01:25:393 (8) - 01:26:099 (9)와 음이 거의 같거나 약간 더 높기 때문에 k가 좋을 것 같습니다.

  • [Futsuu]
  1. HP 6.5로 설정해주세요.

  2. 두번째 'kiai'가 도입부에 비해서 약간 노트가 적고 쉬는 타임이 많다보니 심심한 느낌이 드는 것 같아요. '-' 마지막줄을 참고해 조금 더 기아이 느낌이 나게 수정했습니다.
  3. 00:07:040 (11,12) - 보컬을 따라서 kd로 바꿔주세요~
  4. 00:18:334 (7,8,9) - (7)과 (9)의 드럼 사운드가 거의 같기 때문에 ddk로 만들어서 k리듬을 일정하게 하는게 더 쉬울 것 같아요.
  5. 00:19:746 (12,13,14) - 위와 마찬가지로 ddk로 바꿔주세요.
  6. 00:34:216 (23) - 드럼사운드가 있으니 k로 바꿔서 ddk로 만들어 주세요.
  7. 00:34:922 (25,26) - dk~! '츠,나이!'
  8. 00:35:805 (28) - 보컬이 계속 올라가고 있으니 k로 해주세요.
  9. 00:36:158 (29,30) - 여기서는 올라간 보컬이 내려가는 지점이니 kd가 좋을 것 같아요. 34초부터 여기까지 말씀하신 사항들을 보완해 수정 완료했습니다!
  10. 00:43:216 (14) - 00:43:569 여기로 옮기는게 좀 더 보컬을 따르는 것 같아요. 그렇네요
  11. 00:43:393 (14) - k로 바꿔주세요~! ddk가 앞뒤 패턴을 고려하면 조금 더 나은 것 같습니다.
  12. 00:47:099 (7) - d로 바꿔서 kkdd 패턴을 만들어주세요. kk d 로 수정했습니다
  13. 01:05:275와 01:10:922와 01:16:569와 01:22:216 - 여기에 k를 추가해서 'Kiai'의 속도감을 높여주세요.
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:23:628 (38,39,40,41,42) - 무즈카시에서 앞에서 연속된 노트가 나온후에 kkddk 패턴은 어렵지 않을까요~? 앞의 k 를 삭제했습니다.
  2. 00:26:099 (1) ~ 00:28:569 (15) - 콤보가 너무 긴 것 같아요. 00:27:334 (8)를 삭제해서 7,7콤보로 만드는 편이 좋을 것 같아요.그런데 7,7도 긴 콤보끼리 붙어있기 때문에, 중간에 노트를 더 지워서 1,5,1,5콤보나 1,1,3,1,1,3 콤보로 나누셔도 될 것 같아요~! 개인적으로 나누는걸 추천합니다. 1 5 5 1 로 나누었습니다.
  3. 00:34:216 (37,38,39,40,41,42) - kdkkdk 로 바꾸는게 좀 더 보컬이나 k 사운드 일관성에 맞는 것 같아요. 말씀하신 패턴 등을 참고하여 이부분의 노트수를 줄이고 패턴을 조금 바꿨습니다.
  4. 00:43:216 (19) - (18)이랑 거의 같은 음이고,같은 가사이니 k가 더 맞는 것 같아요.
  5. 00:50:628 (2) - 드럼 사운드가 있으니 k.
  6. 00:50:805 (3) - 00:50:628 (2)의 연장되는 소리말고는 없으니까 지워도 될 것 같아요. 6 스트림이 정말 신경쓰였었는데 명쾌하게 해결됫습니다!!!
  7. 00:56:628 (4) ~ 00:59:099 (17) - 여기도 7,7 콤보를 좀 더 작게 나눠도 될 것 같아요~! 5 1 4 2 로 바꿨습니다.

  8. 두번째 'Kiai' 구간에서 01:07:040 (13) ~ 01:08:981 (24)와 같은 긴 콤보가 보이는데, 무즈카시에서는 너무 길다고 생각됩니다.
    그리고 도입부분에서 kkkddk 같이 연타를 사용하셨는데, 오히려 키아이는 단조로워서 변화가 필요할 것 같아요~! 밑의 부분 많은 참고가 되었습니다!!!! 감사합니다!!!!!
    그래서 이렇게 바꾸면 좋지 않을까 제안해봅니다.
  9. 우선 삭제 해야하는 노트들 입니다~
  10. 01:07:216 (14) - 삭제.
  11. 01:08:275 (19) - ^
  12. 01:12:863 (38) - ^
  13. 01:13:216 (39) - ^
  14. 01:14:275 (44) - ^
  15. 01:18:510 (14) - ^
  16. 01:19:569 (19) - ^
  17. 01:24:158 (14) - ^
  18. 01:24:510 (15) - ^
  19. 이 상태에서 적당한 곳에 3연타를 섞어주면 완벽한 'Kiai'파트가 될 것 같습니다.
    아래는 개인적으로 제안하는 3연타 추가 장소입니다.
  20. 01:07:834 - 노트를 추가하셔서 k k ddk d 패턴이나, k k ddd k 를 쓰면 좋을 것 같아요.
  21. 01:14:187랑 01:14:275 - 노트추가 하셔서, d d k d kkk d k d 로 만드는 것도 나쁘지 않은 것 같습니다. 조금 긴거같아서 d d k kkk d d k 로 하였습니다.
  22. 01:19:218 - 01:07:834의 제안과 마찬가지로 노트 추가하셔서, k k ddk dk k ddd k를 쓰면 될 것 같아요.
  23. 01:14:187랑 01:14:275 - 두번째 제안과 마찬가지 입니다.
  24. 01:19:128 - 첫번째와 같은 제안 입니다! 같은 패턴..!
  25. 01:25:481랑 01:25:569 - 두번째 제안과 같습니다.
  • [Tanoshi Oni]
  1. 00:43:040 (18,19,20,21) - kkd k로 바꿔서 보컬을 살려줍시다. kkd k 로 바꾸고 이어지는 뒤의 스트림을 치기 쉽도록 몇몇 패턴을 변경하였습니다.
  2. 01:12:687 (46) ~ 01:26:099 (32) - 콤보가 너무 긴 것 같아요~ 중간에 쉬는 부분이 있으면 좋을 것 같아요. 기아이 후반 부분이라 조금 빡세게 가려고 생각하고 찍었었는데 지금보니 너무 길군요... 중간중간 쉴 구간을 만들었습니다.

    오니에서 dk로 바꾸라는 자잘한 제안들을 더 쓰다보면 너무 길어질 것 같아서 여기서 마치겠습니다. ._. 넵! 모딩에 담긴 정성이 어마어마하다는게 느껴질 정도로 좋은 모딩이었습니다! 감사합니다~~~

노래도 좋고, 전체적으로 잘 만들어진 맵이라고 생각합니다~
랭크되길 바랄게요! 화이팅~ '-'
Sylphi
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HomieLove
Hey, M4M from PM.
Note: I mod according to my opinion / bias, so sorry if it isn't good.

messy mod thingy
blue = comment
black = actual modding / suggestion

[General]
Disable Widescreen Support on all difficulties since there's no SB.
Change the hitsound sampleset at 00:50:099 - from Soft -> Normal in all difficulties.
Open the .osu for each difficulty and change the background coordinates so you can see the girls better when playing. Test around with it a little to find out what's best. Change the second coordinate after the filename.
0,0,"1.jpg",0,110
^my suggestion

HP Spread is a bit too forgiving for the song's length. Try 8/7.5-7-6-6

[Kantan]

I don't know that much about Kantan mapping but I'll try
Maybe try 1.3x SV so it is easier to read for beginners?

This map uses a lot of 3/2 spacings. I'm not sure if beginners can handle these rhythms well. For example,
00:29:628 (6,7,8,9) - here you could delete the first kat to give players a short break and to make the rhythm easier to understand.

00:20:452 (11) - add a finish to emphasize the cymbal like you did 00:24:687 (17,18,19) here.

00:21:687 (13) - ^

00:26:099 (1) - ^

00:38:452 (19) - delete this one, it's better to start the kiai without an 1/1 spacing imo. You didn't map the "ONE-TWO" too, so making the "THREE" stand out too much isn't necessary.

01:01:393 (8,9,10,11,1,1) - this might be too hard for beginners, I'd suggest to delete 01:02:451 (11) - to give them a break before the spinner. And make the spinner end at 01:03:510 like it does in the Futsuu

01:28:569 (4,5) - change this to d K or k K. Since 01:28:040 (3) - is a kat finisher and emphasises the cymbal, 01:28:922 (5) - should do so too. Also, there's no cymbal sound on 01:28:569 (4)


[Futsuu]

00:04:746 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - this pattern is very long for a Futsuu, you should delete some notes to give players a small break. I don't really know where it would be good tho, so it's up to you.

00:22:569 (20,21,22,23) - a 3/4 snapping is pretty hard for a Futsuu (I think?), maybe you can try something else?

can't really find things here, seems alright to me.

[Muzukashii]

there are actually a lot of ddk triplets for a Muzu, but I guess it's fine.

00:13:746 (48,49,50) - make these 1/2, triplet is out of place here.

00:22:040 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - too hard for a Muzu, this is more appropiate for an Oni. Remove the first triplet.

00:23:628 (37,38,39,40,41) - I highly recommend you to change this to something different, pattern is too hard for a Muzu (5-plets rarely appear around this difficulty at all too. Again, more appropiate for an Oni)

00:35:805 (40) - make this a K finish, and

00:36:158 (41,42) - ctrl+g this. Sounds a lot better to me.

00:43:569 (21) - change this to a kat, fits the vocal pitch better.

00:52:040 (8) - I don't know what you're following with a kat, so change to don?

01:07:834 (16) - unnecessary triplet, remove this note to have a normal 1/2 spacing

01:11:452 (32) - change to kat for better vocal emphasis.

01:12:158 (35) - ^

01:14:099 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - I don't like how this is mapped, you have a triplet where it doesn't fit the song and you're completely ignoring the drums at 01:14:805 here. My suggestion would be to change 01:14:099 to 01:15:158 to this pattern. (well that's the way how I would've mapped it, so again, it's up to you.)

[Tanoshii Onii]

00:06:334 (14) - finish for the cymbal?

00:37:746 and 00:38:099 - just an idea from my side: add kats on both timestamps and make 00:38:452 (67) - a finisher so you can emphasize the "ONE TWO THREE" as usual and make the "THREE" along with the piano still stand out from the others.

01:20:010 - add a don here, like you did at 01:08:628 (25,26,27) here, since it is the same melody and therefore would be more consistent.

01:26:010 - add a don here too?

Not that much to say about this diff, I'm not a fan of the pattern flow but it seems fine.

Alright that should be it.
You don't need to give kds and mod my map in return if it wasn't helpful.
Anyway, good luck with ranking this! :)
Topic Starter
Ozu
OMG i write fixed and unfixed part and reason but osu server is broken so all is removed..... :O
But your modding is really helpful and fixed a lot cause of you! thanks for nice modding~

Greenshell wrote:

Hey, M4M from PM.
Note: I mod according to my opinion / bias, so sorry if it isn't good.

messy mod thingy
blue = comment
black = actual modding / suggestion

[General]
Disable Widescreen Support on all difficulties since there's no SB.
Change the hitsound sampleset at 00:50:099 - from Soft -> Normal in all difficulties.
Open the .osu for each difficulty and change the background coordinates so you can see the girls better when playing. Test around with it a little to find out what's best. Change the second coordinate after the filename.
0,0,"1.jpg",0,110
^my suggestion

HP Spread is a bit too forgiving for the song's length. Try 8/7.5-7-6-6

[Kantan]

I don't know that much about Kantan mapping but I'll try
Maybe try 1.3x SV so it is easier to read for beginners?

This map uses a lot of 3/2 spacings. I'm not sure if beginners can handle these rhythms well. For example,
00:29:628 (6,7,8,9) - here you could delete the first kat to give players a short break and to make the rhythm easier to understand.

00:20:452 (11) - add a finish to emphasize the cymbal like you did 00:24:687 (17,18,19) here.

00:21:687 (13) - ^

00:26:099 (1) - ^

00:38:452 (19) - delete this one, it's better to start the kiai without an 1/1 spacing imo. You didn't map the "ONE-TWO" too, so making the "THREE" stand out too much isn't necessary.

01:01:393 (8,9,10,11,1,1) - this might be too hard for beginners, I'd suggest to delete 01:02:451 (11) - to give them a break before the spinner. And make the spinner end at 01:03:510 like it does in the Futsuu

01:28:569 (4,5) - change this to d K or k K. Since 01:28:040 (3) - is a kat finisher and emphasises the cymbal, 01:28:922 (5) - should do so too. Also, there's no cymbal sound on 01:28:569 (4)


[Futsuu]

00:04:746 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - this pattern is very long for a Futsuu, you should delete some notes to give players a small break. I don't really know where it would be good tho, so it's up to you.

00:22:569 (20,21,22,23) - a 3/4 snapping is pretty hard for a Futsuu (I think?), maybe you can try something else?

can't really find things here, seems alright to me.

[Muzukashii]

there are actually a lot of ddk triplets for a Muzu, but I guess it's fine.

00:13:746 (48,49,50) - make these 1/2, triplet is out of place here.

00:22:040 (28,29,30,31,32,33) - too hard for a Muzu, this is more appropiate for an Oni. Remove the first triplet.

00:23:628 (37,38,39,40,41) - I highly recommend you to change this to something different, pattern is too hard for a Muzu (5-plets rarely appear around this difficulty at all too. Again, more appropiate for an Oni)

00:35:805 (40) - make this a K finish, and

00:36:158 (41,42) - ctrl+g this. Sounds a lot better to me.

00:43:569 (21) - change this to a kat, fits the vocal pitch better.

00:52:040 (8) - I don't know what you're following with a kat, so change to don?

01:07:834 (16) - unnecessary triplet, remove this note to have a normal 1/2 spacing

01:11:452 (32) - change to kat for better vocal emphasis.

01:12:158 (35) - ^

01:14:099 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - I don't like how this is mapped, you have a triplet where it doesn't fit the song and you're completely ignoring the drums at 01:14:805 here. My suggestion would be to change 01:14:099 to 01:15:158 to this pattern. (well that's the way how I would've mapped it, so again, it's up to you.)

[Tanoshii Onii]

00:06:334 (14) - finish for the cymbal?

00:37:746 and 00:38:099 - just an idea from my side: add kats on both timestamps and make 00:38:452 (67) - a finisher so you can emphasize the "ONE TWO THREE" as usual and make the "THREE" along with the piano still stand out from the others.

01:20:010 - add a don here, like you did at 01:08:628 (25,26,27) here, since it is the same melody and therefore would be more consistent.

01:26:010 - add a don here too?

Not that much to say about this diff, I'm not a fan of the pattern flow but it seems fine.

Alright that should be it.
You don't need to give kds and mod my map in return if it wasn't helpful.
Anyway, good luck with ranking this! :)
AsukaLangley
겟난입니다! 타-노시-! BG는 일단 그대로.
조만간 모딩도 해 드릴 수 있을 것 같네요.
참 그리고 곡명이나 태그같은 내용은 스탠에 랭된 맵 참고하시면 도움이 됩니다 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1218888

AsuLan's Oni
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38805
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
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TitleUnicode:ようこそジャパリパークへ
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Creator:404 AccNotFound
Version:AsuLan's Oni
Source:けものフレンズ
Tags:opening KEMONO FRIENDS tanoshi
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CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
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katacheh
Hi~ For M4M<3

Kantan
This diff should have more 4/1 break? but idk where can do that...xD
just for suggestion, maybe you can ask modder who has more experience.
00:09:510 (10,11) - delete?
00:13:393 (18,19,20) - change to slider?
00:26:805 (2) - delete?
00:50:805 (2) - delete?
01:14:805 (18) - delete?

Futsuu
00:32:628 (13) - move to 00:32:275 -
00:34:040 (17) - move to 00:33:687 -
01:08:099 - add d
01:13:746 - add k
01:28:393 - add d

Muzu
I think you should use with less ddk/kkd
00:09:510 (25) - change to d?
00:12:334 (41) - change to d?
00:17:981 (8) - ^
00:22:040 (28,29,30) - change to kkk and add d at 00:22:393 - ?
00:23:716 (36) - del?
00:23:716 (36) - add d
00:27:687 (8) - move to 00:28:393 -
00:33:334 - del?
00:34:216 (33,34) - ctrl+G
01:01:745 (23) - change to d?
01:13:569 (39) - move to 01:13:922 -
AsuLan's Oni
00:27:158 - add d bucs drum sound?
00:35:100 (92,93,94) - change to kkd ?
00:37:217 (105) - change to k?
00:57:159 (208) - k?
00:58:570 (217) - k?
00:59:453 (222,223,224) - k k k?
00:46:041 (148,149,150) - change to kdd or kkd?
00:47:100 (155) - change to k
01:26:806 (377) - missed finisher?

Tanoshi Oni
00:10:481 (35) - del
00:13:305 - del
00:14:452 - del?
00:33:246 - del? feel weird.
00:54:158 (28,29,30,31) - kkk d

no.... the BG xD? School-Live... are you mean to do that xD?

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Ozu

katacheh wrote:

Hi~ For M4M<3

Kantan
This diff should have more 4/1 break? but idk where can do that...xD
just for suggestion, maybe you can ask modder who has more experience. i feel so too, and fixing everytime, but it's very difficult to find break point ;w;
00:09:510 (10,11) - delete?
00:13:393 (18,19,20) - change to slider?
00:26:805 (2) - delete?
00:50:805 (2) - delete?
01:14:805 (18) - delete?

Futsuu
00:32:628 (13) - move to 00:32:275 -
00:34:040 (17) - move to 00:33:687 -
01:08:099 - add d
01:13:746 - add k
great xD
01:28:393 - add d

Muzu
I think you should use with less ddk/kkd
00:09:510 (25) - change to d?
00:12:334 (41) - change to d?
00:17:981 (8) - ^
00:22:040 (28,29,30) - change to kkk and add d at 00:22:393 - ?

00:23:716 (36) - del?
00:23:716 (36) - add d
00:27:687 (8) - move to 00:28:393 -
00:33:334 - del?

00:34:216 (33,34) - ctrl+G
01:01:745 (23) - change to d?
01:13:569 (39) - move to 01:13:922
-
AsuLan's Oni
00:27:158 - add d bucs drum sound?
00:35:100 (92,93,94) - change to kkd ?
00:37:217 (105) - change to k?
00:57:159 (208) - k?
00:58:570 (217) - k?
00:59:453 (222,223,224) - k k k?
00:46:041 (148,149,150) - change to kdd or kkd?
00:47:100 (155) - change to k
01:26:806 (377) - missed finisher?

Tanoshi Oni
00:10:481 (35) - del
00:13:305 - del

00:14:452 - del?
00:33:246 - del? feel weird.
00:54:158 (28,29,30,31) - kkk d

no.... the BG xD? School-Live... are you mean to do that xD? time to say goodbye to japari park :)

Good luck! Thanks for nice modding xD
Surono


I will point some problem spread in this mapset

* on muzukashii 00:03:687 - 00:04:569 - 00:06:158 - you can delete these bcus its close with Oni density and far with Futsuu density.
* 00:13:393 (14) - why this slider on kantan, not on futsuu? kantan need simple pattern right than slider that hit like stream
* futsuu from 00:19:040 - until 00:24:334 - here, it seems the density notes are a bit close with kantan and far with muzukashii. you can add notes more in Futsuu but you could reduce the density notes on muzukashii to safe the spread between oni diffs
* Muzukashii 00:38:805 - until 00:42:687 - here its same density with your Tanoshii Oni density, should be reduced on muzukashii notes density
* 00:44:452 - same above

sorry for my mod because Im not interested to point out the emphasize sounds of this mapset and lower diffs are really simple mapped. on Futsuu still have problem spread density with Muzukashii because its far and a bit close with Kantan, you can add notes mores on Futsuu and adjust the density of kantan too.

GL
AsukaLangley

katacheh wrote:

Hi~ For M4M<3

AsuLan's Oni
00:27:158 - add d bucs drum sound?
00:35:100 (92,93,94) - change to kkd ?
00:37:217 (105) - change to k?
00:57:159 (208) - k?
00:58:570 (217) - k?
00:59:453 (222,223,224) - k k k?
00:46:041 (148,149,150) - change to kdd or kkd?
00:47:100 (155) - change to k
01:26:806 (377) - missed finisher? I missed :lol: ty.
AsuLan's Oni V0.2
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256,192,44100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44276,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44364,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,45335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,45688,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,46217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46394,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,46835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,47100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,47629,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,49041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,49217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,49570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,52570,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,53276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,53629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54159,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,57688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,61747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,62100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,62806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,63335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63600,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64570,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64746,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65276,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65982,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66159,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66688,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69159,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69334,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70923,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71276,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72158,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74806,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75159,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75511,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76570,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76923,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77276,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,77982,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78688,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80717,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80805,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81159,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82569,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,83099,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Ozu
Thanks for modding spread problem!
i haven't thought the spread of this map.
Really nice advice xD


Surono wrote:


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I will point some problem spread in this mapset

* on muzukashii 00:03:687 - 00:04:569 - 00:06:158 - you can delete these bcus its close with Oni density and far with Futsuu density.
* 00:13:393 (14) - why this slider on kantan, not on futsuu? kantan need simple pattern right than slider that hit like stream
* futsuu from 00:19:040 - until 00:24:334 - here, it seems the density notes are a bit close with kantan and far with muzukashii. you can add notes more in Futsuu but you could reduce the density notes on muzukashii to safe the spread between oni diffs
* Muzukashii 00:38:805 - until 00:42:687 - here its same density with your Tanoshii Oni density, should be reduced on muzukashii notes density
* 00:44:452 - same above


sorry for my mod because Im not interested to point out the emphasize sounds of this mapset and lower diffs are really simple mapped. on Futsuu still have problem spread density with Muzukashii because its far and a bit close with Kantan, you can add notes mores on Futsuu and adjust the density of kantan too.

all of this is fixed and now Futsuu looks more "Futsuu" !

GL Thanks~
Quizmaegi
심심풀이 모오딩
안 타노시 모딩
[General]
  1. 태그 수정
    Tags:opening kemono friends oishi masayoshi 大石昌良 オーイシマサヨシ iyasine サーバル serval cat フェネック fennec アライグマ common raccoon 尾崎由香 yuka ozaki 本宮佳奈 AsukaLangley -tanoshi
  2. BG 바꾸는 거 추천드림
[타노시이 오니이]
  1. 00:14:805 (1,2,3) - 큰 노트들 중간에 뭐 좀 넣어야 할 듯 ㅇㅅㅇ?
  2. 01:15:510 - 큰 캇
  3. 00:22:569 (45,46,47) - kkd로 바꾸고 피니셔
  4. 00:35:805 - 큰 동
  5. 00:37:746 - 1,2,3 하는 거 맞춰서 ddk 이나 kdk 넣으시면 좋을 듯
  6. 00:38:805 - (음이 다음 노트보다 높은 듯)캇으로
  7. 00:55:569 - 큰 동 넣으실 거 아니면 ddd로 일관되게
  8. 01:00:687 - 캇
  9. 01:04:216 ~ 01:26:805 - 키아이 전체가 난이도가 갑자기 낮아진 느낌이랄까 ㅇㅅㅇ... 난이도 상향 좀
Topic Starter
Ozu

Quizmaegi wrote:

심심풀이 모오딩
안(x) 타노시 모딩
[General]
  1. 태그 수정
    Tags:opening kemono friends oishi masayoshi 大石昌良 オーイシマサヨシ iyasine サーバル serval cat フェネック fennec アライグマ common raccoon 尾崎由香 yuka ozaki 本宮佳奈 AsukaLangley -tanoshi tanoshi 수정했습니다
  2. BG 바꾸는 거 추천드림 적당한 bg 찾기가 힘들어요 ㅜ
[타노시이 오니이]
  1. 00:14:805 (1,2,3) - 큰 노트들 중간에 뭐 좀 넣어야 할 듯 ㅇㅅㅇ? 음이 아예 없고 보컬만 있어서 드럼만 큰놋들로 따라갔습니다.
  2. 01:15:510 - 큰 캇 스고-이!
  3. 00:22:569 (45,46,47) - kkd로 바꾸고 피니셔 타노시-!
  4. 00:35:805 - 큰 동 스고-이!
  5. 00:37:746 - 1,2,3 하는 거 맞춰서 ddk 이나 kdk 넣으시면 좋을 듯 123은 일부러 뺐어요! 종소리 띠링을 강조하려구요 헤헤/color]
  6. 00:38:805 - (음이 다음 노트보다 높은 듯)캇으로
  7. 00:55:569 - 큰 동 넣으실 거 아니면 ddd로 일관되게 큰캇을 넣었습니다
  8. 01:00:687 - 캇 스고---이!
  9. 01:04:216 ~ 01:26:805 - 키아이 전체가 난이도가 갑자기 낮아진 느낌이랄까 ㅇㅅㅇ... 난이도 상향 좀 난이도는 일부러 낮췄어요! 그다음 같은 부분 반복되는 부분에서 분위기를 더 고조시키려고 일부러 조금 쉽게 만들었어요


랜덤모딩 감사합니다!
별까지 쏴주시고 진짜 고마워요 (つ﹏<。)
Diva Days
From Queue (forgot to make img for this..)


[Muzukashii]

00:22:393 (31),(32) - swap this. the following voice (28),(29),(30) finish at here.
00:23:628 (36),(37),(38) - change to kdd or kkk. those triples not recommend for muzukashii.

00:36:158 - better change to this than 1/2 streams.


00:57:334 (8) - better delete than than 1/2 streams. the vocals don't need to follow always.

[Tanoshi Oni]

00:09:158 - i think use dons more than kats at here like this for play. the followed voice isn't require to follow.


00:17:805 - ^
00:22:393 - change to kkd, the following voice start at (42) and end at (44).

00:41:628 (14) - forgot finish that u did.
00:42:334 (16) - ^
00:47:275 (14) - ^
00:47:981 (16) - ^

00:53:099 (19) - there's no sound for this note, delete.
00:59:452 - kkkkkkd isn't match on song, better change to ddddddk. also the following one(33) lost consistency cuz of u did d on (32).

that's all.

gl for rank
Labyr
Hi~, mod via M4M.

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. 00:05:275 - change k high pitch of the voice.
  2. 00:05:806 - change k keep consistency 00:41:100 -
  3. 00:18:863 - move to 00:18:422 -
  4. 00:35:453 (95,96,97) - reverse a color follow vocal.
  5. 00:48:334 - add finish
  6. 01:07:040 - from here, add note in this way. follow vocal.
  7. 01:18:334 - ^
  8. 01:12:688 - similarly, add note in this way.
  9. 01:23:981 - ^
[Tanoshi Oni]
in kiai time from 00:38:805 - , there are few notes even if I look overall.
  1. 00:21:334 (36,37) - swap follow Vocal.
  2. 00:31:922 - add d follow drum.
  3. 00:41:628 (14,16) - add finish keep intro and consistency.
  4. 00:43:393 - change k follow vo.
  5. 00:43:922 (24,25) - add k there isn't 2/1 break along a flow, and follow drum.
  6. 00:44:628 (2,3,4) - reverse a color. prevent monotone.
  7. 00:47:275 (14,16) - add finish
[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:04:747 - change D
  2. 00:05:188 - delete, 00:05:100 (4,5) - swap, 00:05:452 - change K and 00:05:806 - change k
    これらはkiai timeと配色を揃える意図の提案です。曲の〆の部分はそれらとは違う(主にvocal)ので変更しません。
  3. 00:09:070 - delete, and 00:09:158 - add finish vocalもmelodyも強めになってるため
  4. 00:14:100 - remove finish, 00:14:717 - move to 00:14:187 - and change d, 00:14:806 - add finish 00:15:511 (81,82) - これらと同様にBIGをフォローする提案
    or
  5. 00:14:276 (74,75) - change d, and 00:14:628 (78,79,80) - kkd → kkkd (1/6)? 00:14:100 - ここをBIGでどうしても拾いたいなら、後に続くグリッサンドを1/6でフォローする提案です。
    modderの私から言うと前者を勧めますが好みな気がします
  6. 00:20:982 (119,120) - swap color?
  7. 00:21:423 (122,123) - swap follow Vo.
  8. 00:49:482 - move to 00:49:305 -, 00:49:394 - change k, 00:49:570 - change d. 1/2リズムで言う d k k d d k k d のパターンが単調すぎて違和感を感じたので、vocal(とdrum)を意識した提案です。
  9. 01:01:394 - イントロ(00:11:982 - ~)と比較しても勢いが落ちてる間が否めないので、最低でも1/1リズムでキック音を拾ってもいいのではと思いました
I will do the Kantan ~ Muzu check tomorrow. :o
sakebi
from my modding queue

[muzukashii]
01:03:510 (1) - spinner is too short and makes it hard to read

my shortest mod ever
sorry this mod is so short, i can't play above muzukashii cause i suck and i didnt see anything wrong with the kantan and futsuu diffs
Sylphi
늦은 등장, 죄송합니다.

[General]
  1. 현재 Kantan난이도만 태그가 다릅니다. 본 바로는 Kantan 난이도에만 수정한 태그 적용시키고 나머지엔 안한것 같은데 똑같이 적용시켜주세요.
  2. 배경 이미지의 해상도를 고정하라는 소리는 없지만, 되도록이면 와이드스크린의 경우엔 :9나 :10 으로 맞춰주는게 좋을거라 봅니다.
  3. 난이도명에 대해서입니다만, 최고 난이도가 아닌 이상엔 난이도명 변경을 특이하게 하는건 안되는걸로 알고있습니다. 현 시점에서 제일 높은 난이도는 asuasu_yura님의 난이도라서, Tanoshi Oni가 허용될지는 잘 모르겠네요.
  4. 볼륨이 100%로 되있는데, 개인적으로는 이거 소리 너무 큰것같습니다. 한 70%정도가 적당하지 않을까 싶네요.
  5. 오니 난이도랑 하위 난이도랑 난이도 차이가 좀 크게 나는것 같습니다. 그부분 고려하고 어느 한쪽 난이도를 조금더 내려주는게 좋지 않을까 싶습니다.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:03:511 (1,2,3,4) - 원래는 박자랑 엄청 잘 맞는 부분도 있어서 안잡으려고 했던 부분입니다만 (키아이에도 있긴 하지만 흐음...), 이게 생각보다 초보자들에게는 리딩이 힘들수도 있을것 같습니다. 보컬이 위치한 부분 자체가 1/2에 대부분이 집중되있고 그 거리도 지속적으로 변하다 보니, 이 난이도에서는 난이도가 좀 있지 않나 싶습니다.
  2. 00:35:099 (11) - 개인적인 생각으로는 키아이가 아닌 다른 부분에 비해서 패턴이 살짝 길어지는듯한 느낌이 드는것 같습니다. 일단 제일 쉬운 난이도라는걸 고려해서 여기정도는 비워줘도 되지 않을까 싶긴 합니다.
  3. 00:36:687 (13,14) - 각각 k, d 혹은 k, k 적용시키는게 전체적인 곡과 더 잘맞는다고 봐요. 이 두개는 확실하게 비슷한 음이고, 앞에있는것을 d으로 둘만큼 임팩트가 모자라다고는 보기 힘드네요.
  4. 00:41:628 (5,6,7) - 00:47:275 (5,6,7) - 실질적으로 살짝 밀도가 높아지는듯한 느낌이 듭니다. 키아이라 괜찮을거라는 생각이 들긴 하지만, 바로 다음 난이도에서도 저부분만 잘라서 보면 완전히 같은 패턴을 가지고 있고요. 그러니 가운데 있는 노트는 제거해주는게 좋지 않을까 싶기도 합니다.
  5. 00:43:393 (9,10) - 보컬에 맞춘다면 kd이 훨씬 나을겁니다. 나중에 뒤에 나오는 dkk하고 패턴이 매칭되기도 하고요.
  6. 00:55:746 - 이 구간에서는 은근 노트 2개를 3/2 간격으로 두는 경우가 자주 나오는데, 솔직하게 말해서 인식하기 좀 힘듭니다. 여기는 01:04:216부분이랑은 다르게 확실하게 보컬이나 멜로디쪽이 강하게 들리는건 아니라...
  7. 01:26:099 (8) - 바로 앞쪽에 비슷한 파트랑은 패턴을 다르게 하려는 의도는 알겠지만, 이건 오히려 패턴이 살짝 길어지게 만들어서 역효과라 봅니다. 이부분은 그냥 전과 똑같에 노트 없는쪽으로 유지하는게 낫지 않을까 싶습니다.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:06:334 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 정말 개인적인 생각입니다만, 이거보다는 dkd dkk과 비슷한 식으로 찍는게 더 자연스럽게 넘어갈수 있지 않나 싶습니다.
  2. 00:18:687 (8) - 지금 상황대로라면, 00:23:275 부분과는 일관성에 좀 안맞는게 될수도 있겠네요.
  3. 00:31:569 - 이쪽은 키아이보다도, 아니 전체적으로 상당히 높은 밀도를 가지게 되버리는 상황이 되네요. 패턴 개선이 필요하지 않을까 싶습니다.
    1. 00:32:099 (12) - 00:33:510 (17) - 사실상 많이 어색해지기야 하겠지만, 보컬이 없는 이쪽 노트만 지워도, 밀도 자체가 그나마 낮아보이는 효과는 줄수 있을거라 봅니다.
    2. 00:32:452 (14) - 00:33:863 (19) - 바로 위의 방식을 적용시켰다면 이거 두개도 색을 바꾸는게 하기는 편할거라 생각합니다. (전자는 k, 후자는 d)
  4. 00:41:981 (8,9) - 하위 난이도나 상위난이도에서는 8번에 위치한 노트는 확실하게 k이네요. 실질적으로 보컬, 멜로디도 저쪽이 더 높은음이니 개인적으로는 kd 추천합니다.
  5. 01:15:510 (1) - 일관성을 위해 피니시 제거, 앞쪽에서는 없었습니다.
  6. 01:19:393 (12) - 좀 길어지는 느낌이 있으니 이건 지워줘도 되지 않나 싶습니다. 지운다고 해도 충분히 앞쪽이라는 차이가 있다고 보기에...
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:746 (15,16,17,18) - ddd k쪽으로 나누는것보다는 d kdk쪽으로 나누는게 전체적으로 좋다고 봅니다. 실제로 자세히 들어보시면 좀더 다양한 음을 가지고 있는건 00:07:922 보다는 00:08:275 이기에...
  2. 00:09:158 - 이쪽 파트는 왠지 이전 난이도에 비해서는 밀도가 꽤 높아서, 좀더 심플하게 가도 될것같다는 생각이 드네요. 패턴은 글쎄요, 제일 비슷한 예로 01:01:393 부분하고 비슷한 식이네요.
  3. 00:23:275 (35,36,37,38,39) - 아무래도 멜로디쪽 스트림에 맞춰서 찍은것 같긴 한데, 00:17:628와 비슷한 느낌을 가지고 있음에도 불구하고 전체적으로 비어있으니 어색하다고밖에 말하기가 힘드네요. 아예 변화를 줘서 다음 스크린샷처럼 만들어버리는것도 답중 하나라 봅니다 e.g. http://sylphi.s-ul.eu/4IevTRoW or http://sylphi.s-ul.eu/Hic81sG0
  4. 00:26:981 (5) - 이부분을 지워서 왠지 점점 노트밀도가 늘어나는듯한 느낌을 주는것도 나쁘진 않다고 봐요. 어짜피 이 파트 자체도 좀 다른부분에 비해서 텐션이 낮은 느낌도 있고...
  5. 00:37:393 (46) - 멜로디가 좀 내려가는걸 표현하기 위해서 d?
  6. 00:52:922 (11,12,13) - 보컬 느낌만으로 보면 dkd이 더 잘 어울리는것 같네요.
  7. 00:55:569 - 힛사 샘플 바꾸는건 확실하게 느낌 자체가 달라지는 부분인 00:55:746 부터 적용하는게 좋지 않나 싶습니다.
  8. 00:57:334 (8) - 이부분 느낌으로 봤을땐 이 노트는 좀 억지라는 느낌이 강하네요. 제거해주는게 좀더 자연스럽게 플레이가 될거라 믿습니다.
  9. 01:03:334 - 사실 이쪽에도 노트 놔도 언랭요소가 되진 않습니다. 단지 어느쪽이든간에 다음에 나오는 스피너가 너무 갑갑하게 나온다는 느낌이 강하네요.
  10. 01:11:452 (31) - 바로 이전 노트에 비하면 높은 멜로디긴 해서 k 두고 dkkd 해주는것도 괜찮을것 같네요.
  11. 01:15:510 (1) - 하위 난이도에서 설명했다시피, 일관성을 위해 피니시 제거 필요하다 봅니다.
  12. 01:18:510 (14) - 마찬가지로 너무 앞쪽 패턴하고는 다르게 두려고 노트를 늘린듯한 느낌이 강하네요. 이거정도는 지워주는게 느낌상으론 좋을것 같아요.
[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 太鼓ではあまり意味ない機能なので、Widescreen Support解除お願いします。
  2. 00:11:806 (53) - 俺にはこれ、次の54番と似た音に聞こえますが…k使ってみるのはどうですか?
  3. 00:23:100 (131) - 周りと比べ、けして弱い感じの音じゃないと思いますので、そのままK使ったほうが自然じゃないかと…
  4. 00:38:409 (209,210) - (色んな意味で困惑)まあ、リズムも合ってるし、問題無いんですけど…楽しいから多分大丈夫…でしょ、たぶん…
전체적으로 나쁘지는 않았는데, General쪽에서도 말했다시피 후반부 무즈랑 오니쪽의 난이도 격차가 좀 신경이 쓰이기에, 오니쪽은 모딩을 안했습니다.
그래도 신경쓰였던걸 말하자면 AsukaLangley님 난이도의 변속은 줄이는게 좋다고 생각합니다. 특히 스트림쪽에서의 변속은 난이도를 올리는 요소가 될수 있으니 고려해보시면 좋겠습니다.
asuasu_yura

Labyr wrote:

Hi~, mod via M4M.

[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:04:747 - change D
  2. 00:05:188 - delete, 00:05:100 (4,5) - swap, 00:05:452 - change K and 00:05:806 - change k
    これらはkiai timeと配色を揃える意図の提案です。曲の〆の部分はそれらとは違う(主にvocal)ので変更しません。
  3. 00:09:070 - delete, and 00:09:158 - add finish vocalもmelodyも強めになってるため
  4. 00:14:100 - remove finish, 00:14:717 - move to 00:14:187 - and change d, 00:14:806 - add finish 00:15:511 (81,82) - これらと同様にBIGをフォローする提案
    or
  5. 00:14:276 (74,75) - change d, and 00:14:628 (78,79,80) - kkd → kkkd (1/6)? 00:14:100 - ここをBIGでどうしても拾いたいなら、後に続くグリッサンドを1/6でフォローする提案です。
    modderの私から言うと前者を勧めますが好みな気がします
  6. 00:20:982 (119,120) - swap color?
  7. 00:21:423 (122,123) - swap follow Vo.
  8. 00:49:482 - move to 00:49:305 -, 00:49:394 - change k, 00:49:570 - change d. 1/2リズムで言う d k k d d k k d のパターンが単調すぎて違和感を感じたので、vocal(とdrum)を意識した提案です。
  9. 01:01:394 - イントロ(00:11:982 - ~)と比較しても勢いが落ちてる間が否めないので、最低でも1/1リズムでキック音を拾ってもいいのではと思いました
    全て変更しました!

Sylphi wrote:

[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 太鼓ではあまり意味ない機能なので、Widescreen Support解除お願いします。解除しました
  2. 00:11:806 (53) - 俺にはこれ、次の54番と似た音に聞こえますが…k使ってみるのはどうですか?kに変更しました
  3. 00:23:100 (131) - 周りと比べ、けして弱い感じの音じゃないと思いますので、そのままK使ったほうが自然じゃないかと… 変更しました
  4. 00:38:409 (209,210) - (色んな意味で困惑)まあ、リズムも合ってるし、問題無いんですけど…楽しいから多分大丈夫…でしょ、たぶん… これは自分でも微妙だと思ったけどこれ以上の良い配置が思いつかなかったので;_;
Q____X
Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my modding queue

[General]

> Tags conflic on kantan.


[Muzukashi]

> 00:10:040 (26,27) - You can add kkk here to follow the rhythm, you can keep this with d 00:10:746 (29,30,31) - for variety but if you do the first suggestion, add other kkk triplet here 00:11:452 (34,35) - and here 00:12:863 (42,43) - to keep the consistency.
> 00:17:628 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Do the same as I suggested earlier
> 00:23:628 (36,37,38) - not sure about this. I suggest this
> 00:25:746 - 00:25:922 - d

[Tanoshi Oni]

> 00:21:422 (37) - change to k, I think sounds better
> 00:23:628 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) -
> 00:25:922 - add d
> 00:26:099 (1) - If you do the previous suggestion, change this to k.
> 00:26:452 (3) - k
> 00:26:628 (4,5,6) - change to dkd.
> 00:27:334 (9,10) - ctrl+g
> 00:28:481 - here's a drum sound, so add d here.
> 00:43:922 - 00:44:099 - add d and add k here 00:44:275 - to follow the background music.
> 00:47:010 - add d, drum sound.
> 00:47:099 (13) - change to k.
> 00:49:305 (22) - ^
> 00:49:658 - add d.

[Yura's Inner Oni]

> 01:15:776 (97) - move to 01:15:687 - It sounds more fluid to me.
The rest it's fine, good diff.

Nice mapset :)
Good luck with rank.
Topic Starter
Ozu
Diva Days

Diva Days wrote:

From Queue (forgot to make img for this..)


[Muzukashii]

00:22:393 (31),(32) - swap this. the following voice (28),(29),(30) finish at here.
00:23:628 (36),(37),(38) - change to kdd or kkk. those triples not recommend for muzukashii.

00:36:158 - better change to this than 1/2 streams.


00:57:334 (8) - better delete than than 1/2 streams. the vocals don't need to follow always.

[Tanoshi Oni]

00:09:158 - i think use dons more than kats at here like this for play. the followed voice isn't require to follow.


00:17:805 - ^
00:22:393 - change to kkd, the following voice start at (42) and end at (44).

00:41:628 (14) - forgot finish that u did.
00:42:334 (16) - ^
00:47:275 (14) - ^
00:47:981 (16) - ^

00:53:099 (19) - there's no sound for this note, delete.
00:59:452 - kkkkkkd isn't match on song, better change to ddddddk. also the following one(33) lost consistency cuz of u did d on (32).

that's all.

gl for rank


Labyr

Labyr wrote:

Hi~, mod via M4M.

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. 00:05:275 - change k high pitch of the voice.
  2. 00:05:806 - change k keep consistency 00:41:100 -
  3. 00:18:863 - move to 00:18:422 -
  4. 00:35:453 (95,96,97) - reverse a color follow vocal.
  5. 00:48:334 - add finish
  6. 01:07:040 - from here, add note in this way. follow vocal.
  7. 01:18:334 - ^
  8. 01:12:688 - similarly, add note in this way.
  9. 01:23:981 - ^
[Tanoshi Oni]
in kiai time from 00:38:805 - , there are few notes even if I look overall.
  1. 00:21:334 (36,37) - swap follow Vocal.
  2. 00:31:922 - add d follow drum.
  3. 00:41:628 (14,16) - add finish keep intro and consistency.
  4. 00:43:393 - change k follow vo.
  5. 00:43:922 (24,25) - add k there isn't 2/1 break along a flow, and follow drum.
  6. 00:44:628 (2,3,4) - reverse a color. prevent monotone.
  7. 00:47:275 (14,16) - add finish
[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:04:747 - change D
  2. 00:05:188 - delete, 00:05:100 (4,5) - swap, 00:05:452 - change K and 00:05:806 - change k
    これらはkiai timeと配色を揃える意図の提案です。曲の〆の部分はそれらとは違う(主にvocal)ので変更しません。
  3. 00:09:070 - delete, and 00:09:158 - add finish vocalもmelodyも強めになってるため
  4. 00:14:100 - remove finish, 00:14:717 - move to 00:14:187 - and change d, 00:14:806 - add finish 00:15:511 (81,82) - これらと同様にBIGをフォローする提案
    or
  5. 00:14:276 (74,75) - change d, and 00:14:628 (78,79,80) - kkd → kkkd (1/6)? 00:14:100 - ここをBIGでどうしても拾いたいなら、後に続くグリッサンドを1/6でフォローする提案です。
    modderの私から言うと前者を勧めますが好みな気がします
  6. 00:20:982 (119,120) - swap color?
  7. 00:21:423 (122,123) - swap follow Vo.
  8. 00:49:482 - move to 00:49:305 -, 00:49:394 - change k, 00:49:570 - change d. 1/2リズムで言う d k k d d k k d のパターンが単調すぎて違和感を感じたので、vocal(とdrum)を意識した提案です。
  9. 01:01:394 - イントロ(00:11:982 - ~)と比較しても勢いが落ちてる間が否めないので、最低でも1/1リズムでキック音を拾ってもいいのではと思いました
I will do the Kantan ~ Muzu check tomorrow. :o


lilligantEX

lilligantEX wrote:

from my modding queue

[muzukashii]
01:03:510 (1) - spinner is too short and makes it hard to read

my shortest mod ever
sorry this mod is so short, i can't play above muzukashii cause i suck and i didnt see anything wrong with the kantan and futsuu diffs

Sylphi

Sylphi wrote:

늦은 등장, 죄송합니다.

[General]
  1. 현재 Kantan난이도만 태그가 다릅니다. 본 바로는 Kantan 난이도에만 수정한 태그 적용시키고 나머지엔 안한것 같은데 똑같이 적용시켜주세요.
  2. 배경 이미지의 해상도를 고정하라는 소리는 없지만, 되도록이면 와이드스크린의 경우엔 :9나 :10 으로 맞춰주는게 좋을거라 봅니다.
  3. 난이도명에 대해서입니다만, 최고 난이도가 아닌 이상엔 난이도명 변경을 특이하게 하는건 안되는걸로 알고있습니다. 현 시점에서 제일 높은 난이도는 asuasu_yura님의 난이도라서, Tanoshi Oni가 허용될지는 잘 모르겠네요.
  4. 볼륨이 100%로 되있는데, 개인적으로는 이거 소리 너무 큰것같습니다. 한 70%정도가 적당하지 않을까 싶네요.
  5. 오니 난이도랑 하위 난이도랑 난이도 차이가 좀 크게 나는것 같습니다. 그부분 고려하고 어느 한쪽 난이도를 조금더 내려주는게 좋지 않을까 싶습니다.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:03:511 (1,2,3,4) - 원래는 박자랑 엄청 잘 맞는 부분도 있어서 안잡으려고 했던 부분입니다만 (키아이에도 있긴 하지만 흐음...), 이게 생각보다 초보자들에게는 리딩이 힘들수도 있을것 같습니다. 보컬이 위치한 부분 자체가 1/2에 대부분이 집중되있고 그 거리도 지속적으로 변하다 보니, 이 난이도에서는 난이도가 좀 있지 않나 싶습니다.
  2. 00:35:099 (11) - 개인적인 생각으로는 키아이가 아닌 다른 부분에 비해서 패턴이 살짝 길어지는듯한 느낌이 드는것 같습니다. 일단 제일 쉬운 난이도라는걸 고려해서 여기정도는 비워줘도 되지 않을까 싶긴 합니다.
  3. 00:36:687 (13,14) - 각각 k, d 혹은 k, k 적용시키는게 전체적인 곡과 더 잘맞는다고 봐요. 이 두개는 확실하게 비슷한 음이고, 앞에있는것을 d으로 둘만큼 임팩트가 모자라다고는 보기 힘드네요.
  4. 00:41:628 (5,6,7) - 00:47:275 (5,6,7) - 실질적으로 살짝 밀도가 높아지는듯한 느낌이 듭니다. 키아이라 괜찮을거라는 생각이 들긴 하지만, 바로 다음 난이도에서도 저부분만 잘라서 보면 완전히 같은 패턴을 가지고 있고요. 그러니 가운데 있는 노트는 제거해주는게 좋지 않을까 싶기도 합니다.
  5. 00:43:393 (9,10) - 보컬에 맞춘다면 kd이 훨씬 나을겁니다. 나중에 뒤에 나오는 dkk하고 패턴이 매칭되기도 하고요.
  6. 00:55:746 - 이 구간에서는 은근 노트 2개를 3/2 간격으로 두는 경우가 자주 나오는데, 솔직하게 말해서 인식하기 좀 힘듭니다. 여기는 01:04:216부분이랑은 다르게 확실하게 보컬이나 멜로디쪽이 강하게 들리는건 아니라...
  7. 01:26:099 (8) - 바로 앞쪽에 비슷한 파트랑은 패턴을 다르게 하려는 의도는 알겠지만, 이건 오히려 패턴이 살짝 길어지게 만들어서 역효과라 봅니다. 이부분은 그냥 전과 똑같에 노트 없는쪽으로 유지하는게 낫지 않을까 싶습니다.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:06:334 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 정말 개인적인 생각입니다만, 이거보다는 dkd dkk과 비슷한 식으로 찍는게 더 자연스럽게 넘어갈수 있지 않나 싶습니다.
  2. 00:18:687 (8) - 지금 상황대로라면, 00:23:275 부분과는 일관성에 좀 안맞는게 될수도 있겠네요.
  3. 00:31:569 - 이쪽은 키아이보다도, 아니 전체적으로 상당히 높은 밀도를 가지게 되버리는 상황이 되네요. 패턴 개선이 필요하지 않을까 싶습니다.
    1. 00:32:099 (12) - 00:33:510 (17) - 사실상 많이 어색해지기야 하겠지만, 보컬이 없는 이쪽 노트만 지워도, 밀도 자체가 그나마 낮아보이는 효과는 줄수 있을거라 봅니다.
    2. 00:32:452 (14) - 00:33:863 (19) - 바로 위의 방식을 적용시켰다면 이거 두개도 색을 바꾸는게 하기는 편할거라 생각합니다. (전자는 k, 후자는 d)
  4. 00:41:981 (8,9) - 하위 난이도나 상위난이도에서는 8번에 위치한 노트는 확실하게 k이네요. 실질적으로 보컬, 멜로디도 저쪽이 더 높은음이니 개인적으로는 kd 추천합니다.
  5. 01:15:510 (1) - 일관성을 위해 피니시 제거, 앞쪽에서는 없었습니다.
  6. 01:19:393 (12) - 좀 길어지는 느낌이 있으니 이건 지워줘도 되지 않나 싶습니다. 지운다고 해도 충분히 앞쪽이라는 차이가 있다고 보기에...
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:746 (15,16,17,18) - ddd k쪽으로 나누는것보다는 d kdk쪽으로 나누는게 전체적으로 좋다고 봅니다. 실제로 자세히 들어보시면 좀더 다양한 음을 가지고 있는건 00:07:922 보다는 00:08:275 이기에...
  2. 00:09:158 - 이쪽 파트는 왠지 이전 난이도에 비해서는 밀도가 꽤 높아서, 좀더 심플하게 가도 될것같다는 생각이 드네요. 패턴은 글쎄요, 제일 비슷한 예로 01:01:393 부분하고 비슷한 식이네요.
  3. 00:23:275 (35,36,37,38,39) - 아무래도 멜로디쪽 스트림에 맞춰서 찍은것 같긴 한데, 00:17:628와 비슷한 느낌을 가지고 있음에도 불구하고 전체적으로 비어있으니 어색하다고밖에 말하기가 힘드네요. 아예 변화를 줘서 다음 스크린샷처럼 만들어버리는것도 답중 하나라 봅니다 e.g. http://sylphi.s-ul.eu/4IevTRoW or http://sylphi.s-ul.eu/Hic81sG0
  4. 00:26:981 (5) - 이부분을 지워서 왠지 점점 노트밀도가 늘어나는듯한 느낌을 주는것도 나쁘진 않다고 봐요. 어짜피 이 파트 자체도 좀 다른부분에 비해서 텐션이 낮은 느낌도 있고...
  5. 00:37:393 (46) - 멜로디가 좀 내려가는걸 표현하기 위해서 d?
  6. 00:52:922 (11,12,13) - 보컬 느낌만으로 보면 dkd이 더 잘 어울리는것 같네요.
  7. 00:55:569 - 힛사 샘플 바꾸는건 확실하게 느낌 자체가 달라지는 부분인 00:55:746 부터 적용하는게 좋지 않나 싶습니다.
  8. 00:57:334 (8) - 이부분 느낌으로 봤을땐 이 노트는 좀 억지라는 느낌이 강하네요. 제거해주는게 좀더 자연스럽게 플레이가 될거라 믿습니다.
  9. 01:03:334 - 사실 이쪽에도 노트 놔도 언랭요소가 되진 않습니다. 단지 어느쪽이든간에 다음에 나오는 스피너가 너무 갑갑하게 나온다는 느낌이 강하네요.
  10. 01:11:452 (31) - 바로 이전 노트에 비하면 높은 멜로디긴 해서 k 두고 dkkd 해주는것도 괜찮을것 같네요.
  11. 01:15:510 (1) - 하위 난이도에서 설명했다시피, 일관성을 위해 피니시 제거 필요하다 봅니다.
  12. 01:18:510 (14) - 마찬가지로 너무 앞쪽 패턴하고는 다르게 두려고 노트를 늘린듯한 느낌이 강하네요. 이거정도는 지워주는게 느낌상으론 좋을것 같아요.
[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 太鼓ではあまり意味ない機能なので、Widescreen Support解除お願いします。
  2. 00:11:806 (53) - 俺にはこれ、次の54番と似た音に聞こえますが…k使ってみるのはどうですか?
  3. 00:23:100 (131) - 周りと比べ、けして弱い感じの音じゃないと思いますので、そのままK使ったほうが自然じゃないかと…
  4. 00:38:409 (209,210) - (色んな意味で困惑)まあ、リズムも合ってるし、問題無いんですけど…楽しいから多分大丈夫…でしょ、たぶん…
전체적으로 나쁘지는 않았는데, General쪽에서도 말했다시피 후반부 무즈랑 오니쪽의 난이도 격차가 좀 신경이 쓰이기에, 오니쪽은 모딩을 안했습니다.
그래도 신경쓰였던걸 말하자면 AsukaLangley님 난이도의 변속은 줄이는게 좋다고 생각합니다. 특히 스트림쪽에서의 변속은 난이도를 올리는 요소가 될수 있으니 고려해보시면 좋겠습니다.

Q____X

Q____X wrote:

Hi ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ from my modding queue

[General]

> Tags conflic on kantan.


[Muzukashi]

> 00:10:040 (26,27) - You can add kkk here to follow the rhythm, you can keep this with d 00:10:746 (29,30,31) - for variety but if you do the first suggestion, add other kkk triplet here 00:11:452 (34,35) - and here 00:12:863 (42,43) - to keep the consistency.
> 00:17:628 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Do the same as I suggested earlier
> 00:23:628 (36,37,38) - not sure about this. I suggest this
> 00:25:746 - 00:25:922 - d

[Tanoshi Oni]

> 00:21:422 (37) - change to k, I think sounds better
> 00:23:628 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) -
> 00:25:922 - add d
> 00:26:099 (1) - If you do the previous suggestion, change this to k.
> 00:26:452 (3) - k
> 00:26:628 (4,5,6) - change to dkd.
> 00:27:334 (9,10) - ctrl+g
> 00:28:481 - here's a drum sound, so add d here.
> 00:43:922 - 00:44:099 - add d and add k here 00:44:275 - to follow the background music.
> 00:47:010 - add d, drum sound.
> 00:47:099 (13) - change to k.
> 00:49:305 (22) - ^
> 00:49:658 - add d.

[Yura's Inner Oni]

> 01:15:776 (97) - move to 01:15:687 - It sounds more fluid to me.
The rest it's fine, good diff.

Nice mapset :)
Good luck with rank.



all fixed to refer your advice xD
really sorry to not reply each other, because suddenly many advice so i can't apply each ;w;
Thanks for mod~
asuasu_yura

Q____X wrote:

[Yura's Inner Oni]

> 01:15:776 (97) - move to 01:15:687 - It sounds more fluid to me. fixed :)
The rest it's fine, good diff.

Nice mapset :)
Good luck with rank.
Alwaysyukaz
M4M req! :D


[Kantan]

hhhmmm.... All of ur kantan is a little bit weird in snap, its too many note in 1/2 snap but its still good because each note diff still in 1/1 or 2/1
consider to check ur offset or BPM. example like this 00:39:334 (2,3,4) - and 00:30:158 (4,5,6) -

00:13:393 (11) - this slider is weird I think,instead put kat in 00:12:687 (10) -

00:36:687 (10) - delete this,the sounds is too low

01:02:805 (8) - ^same like the slider issues but just delete the slider

[Futsuu]

00:41:452 (7) - its better to put don here since the duplet in 00:41:099 (5,6) - too weird when u make a gap in 00:41:452 (7) -

00:47:099 - ^

00:55:040 (9) - delete this,don't follow the vocal sounds

01:02:805 (1) - I little bit confuse when u used spinner here. but in 00:13:393 (20) - u use slider maybe change to note more better like this


[Muzukashii]

00:09:422 (22) - delete this, u must look over in 1/4 note Muzukashii. its very hard for Muzukashii players because of 1/4 at the same time here 00:09:334 (21,22,23,26,27,28) -

00:12:952 (43) - ^

00:18:599 (12) - ^

00:21:687 (27) - put the fnisher more better I think *it have more loud sounds

00:22:040 (28,29,30) - wtf ddk lol XD . change this to kkk, u can only put the 1/4 note ddd and kkk (just triplet or duplet) in Muzukashii

00:27:510 (6) - change to kat? its like cymbal sound and prefer to change it in kat

00:28:481 - u can put the note here like this

00:36:599 (42) - ^

01:02:805 (1) - change the over from the spinner to 01:03:510 -

01:13:481 (39) - delete this note, its not fit when u used it into triplet lol

01:24:687 (16) - ^

01:14:452 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - this one more better i think

01:25:746 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - ^

[AsuLan's Oni]

00:48:775 (161,164) - delete this more better, I only found the triplet drum in 00:49:394 (164,165,166,167,168,169) -

00:09:335 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - I think u must make a gap here,the triplet is too long and I assume this is for the beginner players in basic oni :/


[Yura's Inner Oni]

00:06:952 (13) - delete this, its't fit I think to make a note here *feels weird when I test it

00:41:893 (228) - ^

00:47:540 (270) - ^

01:12:952 (76) - ^

01:24:246 (165) - ^

01:02:805 (364) - make this one more better than using slider

Good Luck :D//

Edit: Sorry for forget to upload the image :(
Topic Starter
Ozu

Kayano- wrote:

M4M req! :D


[Kantan]

hhhmmm.... All of ur kantan is a little bit weird in snap, its too many note in 1/2 snap but its still good because each note diff still in 1/1 or 2/1
consider to check ur offset or BPM. example like this 00:39:334 (2,3,4) - and 00:30:158 (4,5,6) - thanks (*´∀`)

00:13:393 (11) - this slider is weird I think,instead put kat in 00:12:687 (10) - stream length is more long then, so keep

00:36:687 (10) - delete this,the sounds is too low same piano melody is main in here, so keep

01:02:805 (8) - ^same like the slider issues but just delete the slider same reason

[Futsuu]

00:41:452 (7) - its better to put don here since the duplet in 00:41:099 (5,6) - too weird when u make a gap in 00:41:452 (7) - 4 stream and no rest pattern seems so harsh so keep now

00:47:099 - ^ same reason

00:55:040 (9) - delete this,don't follow the vocal sounds yes right but if i do so, became empty space, and it looks more worse.

01:02:805 (1) - I little bit confuse when u used spinner here. but in 00:13:393 (20) - u use slider maybe change to note more better like this [img] no image ;w; prevent boring, put slider. fixed both to all slider


[Muzukashii]

00:09:422 (22) - delete this, u must look over in 1/4 note Muzukashii. its very hard for Muzukashii players because of 1/4 at the same time here 00:09:334 (21,22,23,26,27,28) - i don't think this is difficult. star rating is nearly 3, and not suitable in Oni.

00:12:952 (43) - ^

00:18:599 (12) - ^

00:21:687 (27) - put the fnisher more better I think *it have more loud sounds more better!

00:22:040 (28,29,30) - wtf ddk lol XD . change this to kkk, u can only put the 1/4 note ddd and kkk (just triplet or duplet) in Muzukashii ddd

00:27:510 (6) - change to kat? its like cymbal sound and prefer to change it in kat fixed

00:28:481 - u can put the note here like this [img] i think this is more harder than 00:09:422 .

00:36:599 (42) - ^ [img]

01:02:805 (1) - change the over from the spinner to 01:03:510 - fixed

01:13:481 (39) - delete this note, its not fit when u used it into triplet lol keep

01:24:687 (16) - ^

01:14:452 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - [img] this one more better i think pointed in "hai! hai! " so keep

01:25:746 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - ^



Good Luck :D// Thanks~ xD


Thanks for modding~
AsukaLangley

Labyr wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. 00:05:275 - change k high pitch of the voice.
  2. 00:05:806 - change k keep consistency 00:41:100 -
  3. 00:18:863 - move to 00:18:422 -
  4. 00:35:453 (95,96,97) - reverse a color follow vocal.
  5. 00:48:334 - add finish 00:47:276 (158,159,160) - とはvocalとvolume的に区別したいと思ったので、次に同じmodがあれば変えたいと思います。
  6. 01:07:040 - from here, add note in this way. follow vocal. 曲と合うかに関しては、たーのしー!ですが、この単純な4拍子のリズムも捨てがたい(主に 00:41:628 - のパターンとおなじ意味で)のと、また難しくなるのでバランス面も考慮して、このmodを受けてから全体的に難易度を見直すか、もしくはそのままにするかもう少し考えてみます。
    Edit: 全体を少し見直してから例より少々簡単なものにしました

  7. 01:18:334 - ^ ^
  8. 01:12:688 - similarly, add note in this way. ^
  9. 01:23:981 - ^ ^

Kayano- wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]

00:48:775 (161,164) - delete this more better, I only found the triplet drum in 00:49:394 (164,165,166,167,168,169) -

00:09:335 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - I think u must make a gap here,the triplet is too long and I assume this is for the beginner players in basic oni :/ I agree for that, I'll try it 8-)
> AsuLan's Oni V0.3 <
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38805
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Youkoso Japari Park e
TitleUnicode:ようこそジャパリパークへ
Artist:Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP
ArtistUnicode:どうぶつビスケッツ×PPP
Creator:404 AccNotFound
Version:AsuLan's Oni
Source:けものフレンズ
Tags:opening KEMONO FRIENDS tanoshi sugoi AsukaLangley asuasu_yura
BeatmapID:1256541
BeatmapSetID:592668

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Topic Starter
Ozu
AsukaLangley

AsukaLangley wrote:

Labyr wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. 00:05:275 - change k high pitch of the voice.
  2. 00:05:806 - change k keep consistency 00:41:100 -
  3. 00:18:863 - move to 00:18:422 -
  4. 00:35:453 (95,96,97) - reverse a color follow vocal.
  5. 00:48:334 - add finish 00:47:276 (158,159,160) - とはvocalとvolume的に区別したいと思ったので、次に同じmodがあれば変えたいと思います。
  6. 01:07:040 - from here, add note in this way. follow vocal. 曲と合うかに関しては、たーのしー!ですが、この単純な4拍子のリズムも捨てがたい(主に 00:41:628 - のパターンとおなじ意味で)のと、また難しくなるのでバランス面も考慮して、このmodを受けてから全体的に難易度を見直すか、もしくはそのままにするかもう少し考えてみます。
    Edit: 全体を少し見直してから例より少々簡単なものにしました

  7. 01:18:334 - ^ ^
  8. 01:12:688 - similarly, add note in this way. ^
  9. 01:23:981 - ^ ^

Kayano- wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]

00:48:775 (161,164) - delete this more better, I only found the triplet drum in 00:49:394 (164,165,166,167,168,169) -

00:09:335 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - I think u must make a gap here,the triplet is too long and I assume this is for the beginner players in basic oni :/ I agree for that, I'll try it 8-)
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asuasu_yura

asuasu_yura wrote:

Q____X wrote:

[Yura's Inner Oni]

> 01:15:776 (97) - move to 01:15:687 - It sounds more fluid to me. fixed :)
The rest it's fine, good diff.

Nice mapset :)
Good luck with rank.


both updated~♪(*´∀`)
Labyr
continuation of last time. (no kudosu)
Futsuu need some 1/2notes?, I think that a spread with Muzukashii opens too much :?
[Kantan]
  1. 00:24:687 (12,13) - remove finish and 00:25:040 - add note. fit a guitar and vocal.
Because many notes are put in the RedLine, SR of Kantan is very high...
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:687 - change k? use a pattern unlike 00:32:099 (23,24,25) -
  2. 00:34:393 (32,33) - swap fit a vocal.
  3. 00:56:628 (4,5,6,7) - reverse a color.
  4. 00:58:040 (10,11,12,13) - ^
  5. 01:02:275 - add note?
  6. 01:07:746 (15,16,17) - change d d k? fit a vocal.
  7. 01:18:687 (14,15,16,17,18) - change k k d d k ^
Topic Starter
Ozu

Labyr wrote:

continuation of last time. (no kudosu) Thanks <3
Futsuu need some 1/2notes?, I think that a spread with Muzukashii opens too much :?
[Kantan]
  1. 00:24:687 (12,13) - remove finish and 00:25:040 - add note. fit a guitar and vocal. fixed
Because many notes are put in the RedLine, SR of Kantan is very high... this song has many offbeat, so this is my best present to make eazist ;w;
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:687 - change k? use a pattern unlike 00:32:099 (23,24,25) - present pattern looks little better to me. sorry
  2. 00:34:393 (32,33) - swap fit a vocal. fixed
  3. 00:56:628 (4,5,6,7) - reverse a color. fixed
  4. 00:58:040 (10,11,12,13) - ^
  5. 01:02:275 - add note? because of spinner after this stream, i delete it.
  6. 01:07:746 (15,16,17) - change d d k? fit a vocal. dkd fixed
  7. 01:18:687 (14,15,16,17,18) - change k k d d k ^ fixed kkdkd

Thanks for not-forgetting and nice modding~♪(*´∀`)
Smallwu
たのしー! (mod from in-game m4m request)
[General]
  1. Roma Title : Change to Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (It just a suggest, because the Ranked map uses that)

  2. I think your OD/HP set at Oni can change to 5.5/6 or 5.5/5.5
    Slowly rising is good. The map has 3 Onis, in my opinion u can let their OD/HP set become different
[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:21:334 (121,122,123) - kdk or ddk - (120) sounds higher than (122), so uses d. (121) can use d or k because the drum (Suggest you to use k, because seems you follow voice this part)
  2. 00:23:805 (137) - k - Although it's a little harder than before, the piano sounds same as (136) and (135) clearly
  3. 00:26:099 (150) - D? You also use Finisher at (155) and (163). Finisher it can keep consistency
  4. 00:26:099 - You dont need this green line, it's useless
  5. 00:28:216 (157,158,159,160,161) - ddkkk or dddkk - Follow drums pitches, they sound like that :3
  6. 00:32:452 (178) - d because the drum
  7. 00:32:805 (179) - k ^
  8. 00:33:510 (181) - k - The real pattern I think is "kdd", but seems you want to use it at next part, So it is compromise way : kkd. (181) is really good to use kat =w=
  9. 00:38:496 (210) - Move to 00:38:408 cuz the original place has no any sound
  10. 00:41:628 (228) - d - First reason is that the voice is the lowest at the part. Second is here is drum, not cymbals. Last, you use same pattern at 00:47:275
  11. 00:52:128 and 00:52:216 - Add something like 00:51:334 (296,297,298) to follow the rings. You follow they at the other three places, so why not?
  12. 01:02:805 (367) - Change to ddddd d? Just a suggest, because i hate Sliders >//>
  13. 01:08:716 (43,44) - Ctrl+G?
  14. 01:21:158 (141) and 01:22:569 (153) - K to keep consistency (K K D D)
[Oni]
  1. 00:14:275 - 00:14:628 - Add "ddk k" to fill the blank - This is Oni, the piano sounds is good theme for you to add something
  2. 00:20:452 (31) and 00:21:158 (35) and 00:21:687 (39) - Finisher - It sounds good ^q^
  3. 00:34:922 (51,52) - Ctrl+G? because (52) has loud drum sound, use k to highlight it
  4. 00:38:805 (1) - K - The voice same as 00:38:805 (1)
  5. 00:50:628 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, then remove don - 00:50:805 has no sound, shouldn't add anything, and the drum at 00:50:628 sounds higher than the others
  6. 01:28:393 (6,7) - d k to let the last D shows better effect

    I think you can let the first Kiai Time follow more music. (This is my though)
    Red=followVoice , Green=followMusic . You follow too much voice in this version (It just a suggest :3)
[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. All Volume change to 75%? Only your diff different the other diffs

  2. 00:04:747 (5) - K because the pitch of voice
  3. 00:09:158 - 00:13:393 - Good part, but you use too many notes - even more than Oni! I think you need to cut down some :3
  4. 00:21:159 (32,34) - Finisher to keep consistency
  5. 00:23:716 [and[00:23:893]?] - Add something to follow piano?
  6. 00:33:159 (86,92) - Finisher
  7. 00:38:100 (110) - d to follow voice pitch
  8. 00:46:217 (152) - d? Because i like <3
  9. 00:48:335 (162) - K? You also use K at 00:42:688 (131)
GL with Rank! >w<
Topic Starter
Ozu

Smallwu wrote:

たのしー! (mod from in-game m4m request)
[General]
  1. Roma Title : Change to Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (It just a suggest, because the Ranked map uses that) Um, is it diffrent.....? ;w;

  2. I think your OD/HP set at Oni can change to 5.5/6 or 5.5/5.5
    Slowly rising is good. The map has 3 Onis, in my opinion u can let their OD/HP set become different Changed 3 3 4 5 5.5 6
[Oni]
  1. 00:14:275 - 00:14:628 - Add "ddk k" to fill the blank - This is Oni, the piano sounds is good theme for you to add something add spinner like 01:03:510 (1)
  2. 00:20:452 (31) and 00:21:158 (35) and 00:21:687 (39) - Finisher - It sounds good ^q^ add finisher in 00:21:687 (39)
  3. 00:34:922 (51,52) - Ctrl+G? because (52) has loud drum sound, use k to highlight it followed vocal sound, and not BIG loud, keep
  4. 00:38:805 (1) - K - The voice same as 00:38:805 (1) Ummm, that's right and i put K previous ver, but i think it's little awkward so changed D.
  5. 00:50:628 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, then remove don - 00:50:805 has no sound, shouldn't add anything, and the drum at 00:50:628 sounds higher than the others this stream is following vocal line and bell sound only, so sorry
  6. 01:28:393 (6,7) - d k to let the last D shows better effect

    I think you can let the first Kiai Time follow more music. (This is my though)
    Red=followVoice , Green=followMusic . You follow too much voice in this version (It just a suggest :3)
GL with Rank! >w<

Thanks for nice modding >w<
because im sooooo lazy, really sorry to late modding, but i'll do it at first priority to your map!!!
AsukaLangley

Smallwu wrote:

[AsuLan's Oni]
  1. All Volume change to 75%? Only your diff different the other diffs

  2. 00:04:747 (5) - K because the pitch of voice
  3. 00:09:158 - 00:13:393 - Good part, but you use too many notes - even more than Oni! I think you need to cut down some :3
  4. 00:21:159 (32,34) - Finisher to keep consistency
  5. 00:23:716 [and[00:23:893]?] - Add something to follow piano?
  6. 00:33:159 (86,92) - Finisher
  7. 00:38:100 (110) - d to follow voice pitch
  8. 00:46:217 (152) - d? Because i like <3 <3
  9. 00:48:335 (162) - K? You also use K at 00:42:688 (131) I think this sound is lower than 00:42:688 (131).
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asuasu_yura

Smallwu wrote:

[Yura's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:21:334 (121,122,123) - kdk or ddk - (120) sounds higher than (122), so uses d. (121) can use d or k because the drum (Suggest you to use k, because seems you follow voice this part) keep
  2. 00:23:805 (137) - k - Although it's a little harder than before, the piano sounds same as (136) and (135) clearly keep
  3. 00:26:099 (150) - D? You also use Finisher at (155) and (163). Finisher it can keep consistency fixed
  4. 00:26:099 - You dont need this green line, it's useless fixed
  5. 00:28:216 (157,158,159,160,161) - ddkkk or dddkk - Follow drums pitches, they sound like that :3 fixed
  6. 00:32:452 (178) - d because the drum fixed
  7. 00:32:805 (179) - k ^ fixed
  8. 00:33:510 (181) - k - The real pattern I think is "kdd", but seems you want to use it at next part, So it is compromise way : kkd. (181) is really good to use kat =w= fixed
  9. 00:38:496 (210) - Move to 00:38:408 cuz the original place has no any sound fixed
  10. 00:41:628 (228) - d - First reason is that the voice is the lowest at the part. Second is here is drum, not cymbals. Last, you use same pattern at 00:47:275 fixed
  11. 00:52:128 and 00:52:216 - Add something like 00:51:334 (296,297,298) to follow the rings. You follow they at the other three places, so why not? fixed
  12. 01:02:805 (367) - Change to ddddd d? Just a suggest, because i hate Sliders >//> hmm i like sliders so keep c:
  13. 01:08:716 (43,44) - Ctrl+G? ok
  14. 01:21:158 (141) and 01:22:569 (153) - K to keep consistency (K K D D)fixed
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