No commend = applyArcherLove wrote:
hai~ sorry not reply message;;; thankss
coll=1~7
I focus on visual and playability, (playability = player feel when play)
but all only my point view, suggestion only :3
00:01:792 (1792|4) - to 7
00:04:792 (4792|0) - ^
00:08:023 (8023|1,8023|4) - to 1-3 (http://puu.sh/usa6k/792181021b.jpg)
00:12:869 (12869|4,13330|3) - ctrl+left arrow? 1x
00:16:792 (16792|6) - to 3 --> 00:17:023 (17023|1) - to 2 or 1
00:18:176 (18176|0,18407|1) - to 2-4
00:20:792 (20792|2) - I think, better to snap at 00:20:715 - ? snap to music (vocal is okay too but, it's a bit weird imo. IMO)
00:20:946 (20946|1) - to 1
00:26:023 (26023|2,26023|6) - add more note? (http://puu.sh/usapt/33651de36c.jpg)
00:26:253 (26253|4,26523|5) - ctrl+left arrow? 1x
00:26:523 (26523|2,26523|4) - I think better to snap in 00:26:484 - for music, than vocal? - hmm.. this part I think vocal is better
00:29:253 (29253|6,29484|4) - to 6-7 --> 00:29:715 (29715|1) - to 6
I think for 00:31:330 (31330|2,31330|0) - 00:32:253 (32253|4,32253|6) - 00:33:176 (33176|2,33176|4) - 00:35:023 (35023|4,35023|1) - 00:35:946 (35946|4,35946|1) - 00:36:869 (36869|6,36869|1) - 00:37:792 (37792|5,37792|1) - 00:38:715 (38715|5,38715|2) - 00:39:638 (39638|5,39638|1) - 00:40:561 (40561|6,40561|2) - 00:42:407 (42407|2,42407|5) - 00:43:330 (43330|3,43330|6) - 00:44:253 (44253|5,44253|0,44253|2) - add 1 note all, violin sound ... (because you add 1 more note at white line with same sound) if apply I will later message you for more mod 'w')b - keep
00:44:253 (44253|5,44253|2,44253|0,44369|3,44484|4,44484|1,44484|6) - http://puu.sh/usaGh/276daed393.jpg
00:46:676 (46676|0,46792|1) - ctrl+h
00:48:638 (48638|1) - http://puu.sh/usaWs/e3eb8da343.jpg (piano sound) - This part have slow sv so, I think better to use fewer notes
00:49:100 (49100|2) - http://puu.sh/usaY1/62cc0f45d9.jpg (or + 2)
00:51:638 (51638|0,51638|2) - add to 7 LN untill 00:51:869 - (piano)
00:53:023 - add to 6 --> 00:53:253 - add to 3 - I'm follow the drum sound
00:53:964 - add to 1 (piano) - This part have slow sv so, I think better to use fewer notes
01:07:561 (67561|1) - to 3 and add to 5 (or not add, your choice)
01:15:638 (75638|1,75638|2,75638|0) - hoiw about .. http://puu.sh/usbko/d3312e2454.png
01:16:215 (76215|1,76215|0) - add http://puu.sh/usbmb/e251d21315.jpg (for mini cymbal sound) - it's better not to put a note here --> 01:16:567 - add to 3
01:18:407 - add to 2? (I suggest cymbal sound have 3 normal note ..)
01:20:253 (80253|5) - to LN? untill 01:20:725 - or .. 01:20:715 (80715|6,80946|5) - http://puu.sh/usbte/731205134f.jpg .. (because it can continue to 01:21:176 (81176|4,81176|3) - pattern) - Add note 01:20:715 - and 01:20:946 -
01:22:330 - add to 4
01:23:946 - add to 6
01:25:792 (85792|4) - ^
01:29:946 (89946|0,89946|3,90061|1,90176|0,90176|5) - http://puu.sh/usbD8/115c6e853b.jpg
01:30:869 (90869|1,90869|5,90984|2,91100|1) - http://puu.sh/usbHe/4f24bf48e7.jpg
01:32:369 (92369|4,92484|6,92484|5,92715|4,92946|6,92946|4) - http://puu.sh/usbK4/4a71d3ccf1.jpg - keep
01:34:100 (94100|6) - to 4
01:34:446 (94446|5) - to 1
01:36:638 (96638|5,96753|4,96869|3,96984|2) - short note..? http://puu.sh/usbN8/82a31e1647.jpg
01:42:061 (102061|1,102176|0) - ctrl+j
01:42:523 (102523|6) - to 1 ...? (I don't know.. not sure) - keep
01:42:869 (102869|2,102869|0,103100|0,103100|2,103330|0,103330|2) - http://puu.sh/usbYM/73d6b55cd4.jpg
01:44:715 (104715|5,104830|1,104830|6,104946|5,104946|3,105061|1) - http://puu.sh/uscEg/23a836a6fe.jpg ( I think better playability )
01:45:523 (105523|2) - ..? move to 6
01:47:484 (107484|0,107484|6,107484|4,107600|2,107715|3,107715|4,107715|6,107715|5,107830|0) - http://puu.sh/uscJj/617d7800be.jpg - keep
01:47:946 (107946|3,108061|1,108176|0,108176|3) - http://puu.sh/uscLj/7c986c0609.jpg
01:49:446 (109446|1) - to 3 --> 01:49:561 (109561|2,109561|4) - http://puu.sh/uscYB/ded3802757.jpg
01:50:484 (110484|3,110600|4,110715|3,110830|4) - http://puu.sh/usd0S/c2dc44fea0.jpg - keep
01:54:523 (114523|3,114638|0) - ctrl+j
01:57:292 (117292|5,117407|6) - ctrl+j
02:02:946 - add more note? (cymbal finish)
02:03:638 (123638|5) - to 4
02:04:561 (124561|2) - to 5
02:14:253 - add to 3 (piano) - This part have slow sv so, I think better to use fewer notes
02:16:561 (136561|2) - http://puu.sh/usdc3/8a1d654890.jpg (or 2 only, at 3-7) (piano chord sound) - ^
02:17:253 (137253|5) - http://puu.sh/usddM/316a86e81f.jpg - ^
02:17:715 (137715|6) - http://puu.sh/usdfp/f22d8aaa09.jpg - ^
02:18:176 (138176|0,138292|1,138407|2,138407|3) - http://puu.sh/usdh0/10a43ffa48.jpg - keep
02:20:253 (140253|2) - http://puu.sh/usdhX/a6597b02e2.jpg - This part have slow sv so, I think better to use fewer notes
02:22:100 (142100|2) - http://puu.sh/usdDc/cb814b394f.jpg - ^
02:22:561 - add to 1 - ^
02:23:946 (143946|2) - add more to 1 - ^
02:25:100 (145100|3,145100|0) - add more to 2-6 - keep
02:26:946 (146946|6,146946|2,147176|5) - http://puu.sh/usdM4/26eef0389c.jpg
02:28:792 (148792|1,148792|0,148792|6) - http://puu.sh/usdRC/f5861ef97a.jpg
02:31:330 (151330|0) - to 2
02:32:253 (152253|0,152369|1,152484|2,152600|3,152715|4) - http://puu.sh/usdV7/0754c19f9e.jpg
02:35:369 (155369|5) - to 4? - keep
02:35:946 (155946|0,156061|1) - http://puu.sh/usdYP/3bf3772caa.jpg or http://puu.sh/usdZ6/54edb005ad.jpg
02:37:561 (157561|0) - to 2
02:39:638 (159638|6,159753|5,159869|4,159984|5,160100|6) - http://puu.sh/use2i/e319444ee3.jpg - keep
02:43:561 (163561|4,163561|6,163907|5,163907|3) - http://puu.sh/use8J/b937945635.jpg
02:45:638 (165638|6,165869|1,166100|5) - why 1? how about add http://puu.sh/useeR/50b5d3b1fe.jpg
02:50:715 (170715|3,170715|2) - http://puu.sh/usejb/2e660e8dad.jpg
02:51:638 (171638|2,171638|4,171638|0) - http://puu.sh/usel7/d841de341b.jpg
03:04:676 (184676|1) - change to 1/8?
03:17:253 (197253|4,197369|3) - ctrl+j
03:23:253 (203253|2,203369|3) - ctrl+j
03:19:676 (199676|2,199676|1,199676|3,199792|6,199792|0,199792|5,199907|3,199907|1,199907|4,200023|5,200023|6,200023|2,200023|0,200138|1,200138|4,200138|3,200253|6,200253|5,200253|1,200369|3,200369|4,200369|2) - http://puu.sh/useD4/bb8ce9d1e3.jpg
03:23:830 (203830|4,203946|1) - ctrl+j
03:45:176 (225176|2,225407|3,225869|4) - http://puu.sh/useJG/db436fe9da.jpg
03:58:330 (238330|4) - http://puu.sh/useMb/c7ef097242.jpg (piano) - I want only follow the voice
03:59:023 (239023|5) - http://puu.sh/useNf/115168bcd7.jpg - ^
04:00:176 (240176|4) - http://puu.sh/useO1/eb9c9dd642.jpg- ^
04:00:869 (240869|5) - http://puu.sh/useOR/f976df8043.jpg- ^
04:01:330 (241330|5,241792|5) - ctrl+h --> 04:02:023 (242023|4) - http://puu.sh/useQl/2a64d80986.jpg- ^
04:02:715 (242715|5) - http://puu.sh/useRD/3ec72250c0.jpg- ^
04:42:176 (282176|6,282407|5) - ctrl+h
04:46:561 (286561|1) - http://puu.sh/useXX/cd050574f0.png what ? LOL Look at that image
04:47:946 (287946|1,288176|0) - ctrl+right arrow? 1x --> 04:49:100 (289100|1) - to 1
04:50:023 (290023|3,290484|2,290715|4,290715|1,290946|2,290946|0) - http://puu.sh/usf2i/d44033e9fa.jpg
04:53:715 (293715|4) - to 6 - keep
04:54:638 (294638|5,294638|6) - swap collumn?
04:56:023 (296023|2,296023|0,296253|3,296253|1,296484|0,296484|6) - http://puu.sh/usf6y/648004046e.jpg
04:57:869 (297869|2,298100|1) - ctrl+j
05:03:869 - add more 2 LN at 1-3?
good luck:3
Thank you so much
big thanks !