cooldude4232 wrote:

still has that great windows notification sound effect

gottagof4ast wrote:

The ranking criteria say that 2-4 measures is ok so this would be on the limit but still ok, I'm going to keep it like this as I also don't know how to map the part if I remove the spinner

Hytex wrote:

cooldude4232 wrote:

still has that great windows notification sound effect

yurika likes windows confirm btw im halfway done on the gd nvm im done, code on pm
its not 3.5 but meh, i still hope you enjoy it :p

gottagof4ast wrote:
The ranking criteria say that 2-4 measures is ok so this would be on the limit but still ok, I'm going to keep it like this as I also don't know how to map the part if I remove the spinner

but still, one beat isnt enough
00:25:042 (1,2) -
if i were you i would just delete (1) and shorten (2)

cooldude4232 wrote:

NM from my queue

Insane

00:18:649 (4) - I think you should have a clickable object where this slider ends to emphasize the sound I will maybe do this but it makes it so the sliderend stops on no sound at all which I don't really like
00:21:763 (1) - any specific reason you have two white anchors instead of just one? ~fixed~, Nope just me being bad at shaping sliders
01:08:812 (1) - ^ ~fixed~^
00:27:009 (1,2) - curve these sliders the same amount, it just looks nicer 00:27:009 (1) -
00:31:599 (4) - around this note you have the windows notification sound in your mp3... no joke, it's kinda faint but I made sure it was an mp3 thing and didn't have to do with osu bugging out Damn I actually bvelieved it for a while, I have the original full verion of the song and I checked there and it also had a windows notification sound, apparently Yurika likes windows like Hytex says
00:32:255 (1) - move this to the right a bit for a cleaner blanket ~fixed~
00:58:321 (1) - reverse this sliders curve so it better shows the change in direction of your flow ~fixed~, I said a couple of mods ago that if someone else sugests this I'll change it so I changed it now
01:16:845 (1,3) - you should blanket these 2 ~fixed~
01:21:927 (5,1) - also blanket these ~fixed~Don't want them too close but still added a blanket

Shining Chariot

00:39:468 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - blanket this stream and slider
00:47:337 (3) - NC here to make it a little easier to read ~fixed~,Don't really know how NC's exactly work but since it also go suggested another times ill implement it now
00:49:960 (5,6,7) - I think a stream here would work really well Don't want a stream as the drums get quieter
00:59:304 (6,1) - curve these the same amount ~fixed~
01:11:599 (1,2) - ^ ~fixed~
01:17:993 (1,3) - blanket this a bit better ~fixed~
01:26:353 (2,3) - space these 2 out a bit more, all the jumps leading up to it had larger spacing ~fixed~, increased spacing

still has that great windows notification sound effect

CraEZy wrote:

m4m from your q

Normal

00:05:370 (5) - maybe keep this the same curve as 00:06:353 (2,3) - for aesthetic purposes ~fixed~why not

00:07:009 (3,4) - you should keep the same rhythm as 00:04:386 (3,4) - This part feels different enough as there is a piano added in

00:08:976 (7) - maybe line it up with 00:08:321 (6) - better? ~fixed~

00:12:255 (3) - maybe add a 3rd of 00:11:271 (1,2) - ~fixed~

00:12:583 (4,5) - these could be visually improved. idk how to explain but I feel like this could be better ~fixed~, changed the pattern when editing for previous comment

00:13:239 (5) - when playing this slider touched the health bar ~fixed~

00:19:796 (2,3) - the stack here is out of place, you should space it like the other 1/1 gaps It's fine beacause the music stops for a while so I want there to be a differnce

00:53:239 (1) - you probably shouldnt do this as it could confuse new players, slider heads and tails should overlap on normals ~fixed~, I liked this slider

00:55:206 (1,2) - nothing wouldve really prepared players for this 1/2 stack, I would suggest changing it into a slider ~fixed~don't want 1/2 sliders in my map so I simplified it into 1 circle

In your Kiai, you increased the spacing between objects. I understand you're trying to show that this part is the kiai, but stuff like this shouldnt be done on a normal, it just isnt rankable ~fixed~chnaged all the spacing on the kiai

01:16:517 (4) - the emphasis is on the down beat. correct rhythm would be like this ~fixed~

01:24:714 (1,2,3) - im all for cool patterns, but this is confusing for players, especially on a normal ~fixed~

01:26:189 (4,5,6) - yea just dont do this on a normal. I would just put slider then circle ~fixed~Just put down a slider

you should work on visuals and rhythm The rhythm in this map is just really strange, depending on what everyone thinks is more important, there are some spots where I feel the red ticks are important enough for a 1/2 gap but other spots where it isn't. I'm also at the point where I can't notice any mistakes in rhythm I make without someone else telling me there is a mistake at xx:xx:xxx, So just telling me to improve rhythm is a mission impossible. visuals though, yeah those are bad


Insane

00:06:026 (1,2,3,4) - maybe do this instead? I don't like the awkward short jump

00:22:583 (1) - maybe silence the end of the spinner I want to fix hitsounds later but I have no clue how as I normally play with hitsounds off

00:35:534 (4) - have this slider actually flow into 00:35:862 (5) - ~fixed~

00:53:239 (1) - silence the end of this one too ^^

00:55:206 (1,2,1) - people could read this all as 1/2 beat gaps. stack 00:55:698 (1) - on 00:55:370 (2) - so people recognize that its a full beat gap not 1/2 I don't want a stack here and I already have a stupid amount of spacing here and an NC as hints

01:26:517 (3) - you should have this closer to the center, looks better aesthetically But this makes it look better in line with the previous jumps

you should work on aesthetics aswell yup, but I prioritize flow and spacing always


Shining Chariot

00:12:255 (1,2) - maybe have this like 00:11:271 (1,2,1,2) - Do you mean an NC here as I cant see what else this would be about, if so I put an NC down

00:43:403 (2) - nc or it will be unrankable I really don't see how this would prevent the map from ranking, It would just make it look worse

00:44:714 (2) - ^ ^

00:53:321 (1) - you should silence the end of the spinner ill fix hitsounds later

00:56:681 (5) - I would emphasize this with a slider instead of 00:56:845 (6) - I'll think about it

00:59:633 (1) - remove nc ~fixed~, oops forgot about that when when copying sliders

nc's should be on every downbeat, not randomly They aren't random and are on every downbeat -_-

speaking of random, your jumps feel random /Spaghetti/ and I think you should look at pishi's video on jumps here. The jumps, especially the 3 large ones, all use exactly the same pattern/style. Even if you think they jump random, I used this multiple times in the map to so it should be fine. I hace also watched the video quite a while ago even and think what I'm doing is fine looking at the points he made. My spacing stays the same/ gradually increases during intense parts and it reflects the music/tone increases

improve aesthetics also yup, especially the chorus


Great song choice!! GL on rank!

kanor wrote:

bad spread between hard(3.31) and insane(4.89), deeply advice to add a light insane Ill look for a GD as I'm not planning on mapping a song 5 times
[Easy]
00:27:665 (1,3) -would advice to blanket it better ~fixed~

00:53:075 (1,1,2) - deeply recommend to change the spinner into sliders cause there are too many notes in the screen for the low AR ~fixed~

[Normal]
00:08:321 (6) - would advice to add a NC ~fixed~, oops missed that one
01:08:976 (3,1) - change the NC Don't really get why I would do this
maybe NC is a small problem, deeply recommend to find some good mappers to have a check I tried to keep it consistent on downbeats as I have almost no knowledge on NC's

[Insane]
00:07:337 (1,2,3,4) - maybe we should find some reason for the spacing of these notes Most people don't like this part but I placed it like this beacause the piano becomes less prominent as the music goes on
the difficult between kiai and no kiai is almost similar.....like 00:24:386 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the part is not so exciting, but it was filled with some random jumps, doesnt give me a good feedback as it ought to be ~fixed~, nerfed the jumps a bit so the part feels more calm
GL

MBmasher wrote:

Hytex's Hard

00:03:403 (1,2) - blanket it already is blanket
00:06:026 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:10:780 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:15:534 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:22:419 (1) - Remove NC, why does this have NC? no, because after the slider it has a downbeat
00:23:403 (2) - This should have NC no
00:46:517 (2,1) - There is no sound at 2 and the beginning of 1. You could just put a circle where the slider 1 ends ok
00:49:140 (2) - No sound, remove this ^

Hytex wrote:

MBmasher wrote:

Hytex's Hard

00:03:403 (1,2) - blanket it already is blanket
00:06:026 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:10:780 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:15:534 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:22:419 (1) - Remove NC, why does this have NC? no, because after the slider it has a downbeat
00:23:403 (2) - This should have NC no
00:46:517 (2,1) - There is no sound at 2 and the beginning of 1. You could just put a circle where the slider 1 ends ok
00:49:140 (2) - No sound, remove this ^

thanks for mod!
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1. Don't Have Video or hitsounds ?

Easy

1. On 00:04:550 the slider start , sounds better
2. The Slider Speed don't need be 0,6 , 0,8 is a easy on 170 bpm + , use 0,88 or 0,90 , Remake all sliders after change to 1x

Normal

Normal

1. 00:32:583 (2)(3)(4)(5)(6) This transition isn't good , remake it to flow better is a normal not hard
2. Check aimod

MBmasher wrote:

from Q

Easy

00:14:222 (3) - This is a different segment of the song to 00:12:911 (1,2) do you should add a NC. ~fixed~
00:22:583 (1) - In my opinion this spinner is too short It was longer but i needed a larger break before placcing circles gain so that why its rather short
00:46:845 (4) - Dunno whats up with this slider. The first repeat doesnt land on any sound. Yup, the drum here is reallly weird but this was the closest I got to representing the drum with a slider
00:53:239 (3) - Why not end this at 54:878 when there's actually a sound? It feels like she stops here for me
00:55:698 (2) - NC, different segment of the song ~fixed~
00:59:468 (2,3) - Could be blanketed ~fixed~

Normal

Recheck your DS, some segments have 1.1x, some have 0.9x and some have 1.0x (All should be 1.0x) iill fix this later
00:58:485 (1,2) - could be blanketed ~fixed~
01:04:386 (3,4) - ^
01:06:189 (1) - This slider looks pretty bad, heres a better way you could do it ~fixed~
01:09:632 (5,1) - blanket ~fixed~
01:16:189 (3,4) - ^ ~fixed~

Hytex's Hard

00:03:403 (1,2) - blanket
00:06:026 (1,2) - ^
00:10:780 (4,5) - ^
00:15:534 (2,3) - ^
00:22:419 (1) - Remove NC, why does this have NC?
00:23:403 (2) - This should have NC
00:46:517 (2,1) - There is no sound at 2 and the beginning of 1. You could just put a circle where the slider 1 ends
00:49:140 (2) - No sound, remove this

Insane

00:07:665 (3,4,5) - This looks really weird and doesn't play well either. This is all i could think of but maybe you could do something better. Since I am getting so many complaints about this part ill change it somehow
01:21:927 (5,1) - blanket ~fixed~

Shining Chariot

00:39:468 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - There are no 1/4 sounds in the song, there is no reason for this burst This is also a controversial part, some say make normal jumps here, some say make a stream here and than you have a group who just wants a long slider here. I think a burst here fits but if more people don't like this I'll change it again as I also don't like bursts

Really like the map, good luck!

victorfernando wrote:

General

1. Don't Have Video or hitsounds ?Ill search for a video, and for hitsounds I'm in a bit of trouble as I don't have a clue how they exactly work even after watching some videos on them

Easy

1. On 00:04:550 the slider start , sounds better ~fixed~, i quite like this
2. The Slider Speed don't need be 0,6 , 0,8 is a easy on 170 bpm + , use 0,88 or 0,90 , Remake all sliders after change to 1x Should be good enough SV and remapping the entire spng for a 0.2 change in SV is not really somthing I'd like to do

Normal

Normal

1. 00:32:583 (2)(3)(4)(5)(6) This transition isn't good , remake it to flow better is a normal not hardThis should be fine as if it was a hard pattern the star rating would be a little higher. Also I use a triangle pattern like this later in the song. Then lastly, this pattern also makes the pianosounds clickable on some of the notes
2. Check aimod I'm aware of the spacing problems and will fix it later today

Insane

• Insane

1. 00:06:517 (1)(2)(3)(4) Flow better like this \; Tried it but don't realley like how 12 is a really short jump and 23 a much longer one
2. 00:31:574 (1)(2)(3)(4) ^ ~fixed~,Wasnt that large of a difference but OK
3. 00:33:894 (1)(2)(3)(4) ^

~fixed~

1. Arrange this better :
   I'd like to but don't know how so for now I only curved the slider for looks

victorfernando wrote:

I made hit sounds too http://www.mediafire.com/file/tbzsvsvbft88381/584389+YURiKA+-+Shiny+ray+%28TV+Size%29.rar
And I hit sounded easy :

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victorfernando wrote:

I made a video for you <3 obs : don't kive kudosu if you thanks and credit me just make me happy is medium quality if lag i make 360 p
http://www.mediafire.com/file/8rlfzorikod6j2x/315416053_mp4_h264_aac.mp4

samosita wrote:

from nm q~

neat map ooooo Thanks!

mods

[Hytex's Hard]

1. 00:21:108 (3) - maybe fix curvature since this is too close to the slider end of 00:20:780 (2) - . (and to be consistent to the next following spacings)
2. 00:24:386 (1,2) - blankerinno
3. 00:47:009 (3) - move this a bit up so it would look better

[Insane]

1. 00:49:304 (1) - remove this to give emphasis on the sound of 00:48:976 (3) - I can't delete this note as I still think the sound there from the drums is pretty strong
2. 00:50:124 (6,7) - would sound better if this were a triple since vocal starts to intensify at 00:50:288 (7) - As much as I love triples, I don't think I can get away placing a note on a blue tick without sound
3. 01:09:796 (4,5) - blankerinno ~fixed~
4. 01:26:189 (1,2) - make this a triple so finish at 01:26:517 (3) - would be more spiceyy Same as the second comment, Love triples but had to cut alot of them that werent on sounds q_q

[Shining Chariot]

1. 00:11:763 (1,2) - adjust spacing so it's consistent with 00:11:271 (1,2) - I want the jumps to scale so they get larger, thats why the spacing changes, that said there were some minor spacing inconsistencies here which I fixed
2. 00:50:124 (6,7) - same as what i said in the insane diff since vocal starts to intensify at 00:50:288 (7) - Same as the inasne also, can't place a triple without a sound or sound change
3. 00:51:435 (6) - separate into 2 hitcircles since there are no vocals here Possible but it would make the this part too jump-circle heavy also this slider is here to signify some sort of change that the spacing is going to go up
4. 00:51:927 (1) - make this slider because of of the "riii" vocal. That would mean i'd be locked to the vocal until it ends which is on 00:52:419 (4) and thats way too long of a slider
5. 01:14:058 (4,1) - i know you're trying to make this a jumpy part because of its building intensity, but i think you should make this a slider instead to map the really strong "kaaa" vocal of the song That would also make for a very long slider (3/2) in the middle of the jump section which doesn't fit
6. 01:26:189 (1,2) - same in insane. make this triple for a more spicey finish can't place a triple without sound

hope this gets ranked GL! I hope so too, I have put quite a bit of time into it and think I have a decent amount of mods now

samosita wrote:

[Hytex's Hard]

1. 00:21:108 (3) - maybe fix curvature since this is too close to the slider end of 00:20:780 (2) - . (and to be consistent to the next following spacings) lowered
2. 00:24:386 (1,2) - blankerinno no way, that would make a terrible blanket.
3. 00:47:009 (3) - move this a bit up so it would look better ok

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

Hytex's Hard

00:05:206 (3) - I personally don't perfer ending sliders on a important beat (like a strong sound). It's just my opinion, idk what other thinks
^ applies to all other sliders that end on strong sounds following the instrumentss ~~
00:11:271 (1) - Would make it end on red tick since the beat is quite strong there and feels a bit strange to be missed ^
00:16:354 (4,1) - why makes stacks like this when no other stacks like this exist on the map, it feels a bit unneeded imo fine, lowered
00:30:944 (1) - no sound here. why not start it on 00:30:780 - and make 00:30:616 (4) - a circle instead ok
00:39:386 - I know it will be strange to have a note here playablity wise, but this beat shouldnt be missed redid the part
00:42:747 (1) - why no end it on 00:43:403 - , making it a 2 white tick long slider like sliders before this on this part oh im so dumb

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Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

I can't make good maps
I cry

General stuff

Man please try to snap green lines on Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane diffs ~fixed~, I recently upped the offset by 10ms so some were off beacause I forgot to change it
Easy doesnt have video ~fixed~
Video offset on insane is 0 instead of 200 ~fixed~
soft-sliderslide.wav
soft-sliderslide2.wav unused I'm still figuring out hitsounding as you have probably noticed, there is none
Is it just me or audio seems shitty It is but finding a better source isnt that easy

insane

00:26:927 (7,1) - I don't suggest stacking, unless you stack all 3 notes ~fixed~, wanted to stack all 3 but made a mistake
00:45:370 (1,2,3) - mute sliderend or smth pls, sliderend sounds quite loud I'll keep this in mind when I eventually start hitsounding
p gud

shining carrot

00:05:616 - do something with this beat? ~fixed~, moved the triple here as the drum sound was stronger here
00:34:550 (6) - why not make this just a circle since the blue tick doesn't really have the drum sound (atleast not really clear, maybe because of the audio quality Everyone likes different things here. I prefer a 1/4 slider to reflect the drum completely stopping there
00:39:386 - try to do somthing with this beat? ~fixed~, flipped the stream and added a note on this timestamp
00:40:042 - would it be a bit strange if theres a tick unmapped here, since ppl with think the sliders starts right after the stream without any tick in between Well, after the previous change, the spacing here now is bigger so that won't be a problem
00:42:747 (1,2,1,2) - I know what you're trying to do here, but the buildup isnt really that big so Idk why that huge sv change It feels really samey if I don't up teh SV by much. If someone else also mentions this I'll change/lower it
01:11:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make the small>large spacing more clearer please (if it doesnt have this just add it ok) ~fixed~, Upped the spacing on the star jump right before this to signify larger jumps
not bad

gl on ranking this

Lefia wrote:

Hi from my queue

[box=mod][General]
- Disable Widescreen support because widescreen support will enabled when this map use storyboard ~fixed~

[Easy]

00:07:173 strong beat here, not at 00:07:337 (1) , just change the 1/1 slider into 3/2 slider ~fixed~
00:14:222 (1,2,3) how about like this don't really like it
00:16:517 it's a big white thick and it have strong beat here, you must make it clickable ~fixed~
00:17:501 (1) not suitable, try smth like this at 00:17:665 Doesn't work with your previous suggestion which I implemented
00:25:698 (2) not suitable, how about like this (start form 00:25:534) ~fixed~
00:27:665 (1,2) how about like this , it follow the vocal better The reverse slider is too long
00:29:632 (3) NC should be here
00:34:878 (3) ^
00:37:501 (3) ^
00:40:124 (3) ^ ~fixed~, fixed NC's in this part
00:45:370 (1,2,3) i suggest you to use 3/2 slider with reverse, because this is Easy diff, newplayer wil confuse about it ~fixed~
00:57:009 make it clickable I mainly follow the drums here
00:58:485 ^ shouldn't be necessary as I use a large gap between notes so this feeels natural
00:59:796 ^ ^

Good luck!

Lefia wrote:

Hi from my queue

[Hard]

Set HP into 5 oops forgot to hp 5

00:09:796 make it clickable just like you did at 00:04:550 ok
00:10:452 (3,4,5) how about you change the potition? 1/2 slider then 1/2 slider and cirlce, or maybe like this to follow the violin's sound better no thanks
00:12:225 make it clickable ???
00:15:042 make it clickable, try smth like this (start form 00:14:222) no thanks im following the vocals
00:57:009 make it clickable why there tho
01:25:534 (3,1,2,3) not suitable, how about like this? no the current one sounds better imo

• -Finishes: 00:03:403 (1) - so this starts good with a finish but then its goes a bit random afterwards, you generally want to place finishes for these loud cymbals in the song since thats what a finish sounds like, at the head of 00:03:403 (1) - you hear them but on the next musical sentence at 00:06:026 (3) - they come back aswell so a finish there would be good aswell instead of a whistle, here at 00:08:649 (3) - they're back again and this time theres no hitsound at all so a finish would be good, at 00:18:812 (3) - the finish just feels out of place with the rest theres nothing in the music here that represent a finish on that beat, at 00:29:632 (3) - loud cymbals coming back after the slower part => good to place a finish, etc..
  basicly usually you want to put these kind of soft finishes on the strongest cymbals in a song and 99% of the time this would be on downbeats (biggest white ticks) since they're the start/finish of a musical sentence
  -Whisles: basicly the most free to use hitsounds, if you don't want finishes spam on some sections you can go for whisles, got a piano part or bells? whisles are generally pretty good for that, like try listening to this part 00:03:403 (1,2,3,4,1) - in between and you hear clear stuff on 00:03:403 - 'finish1 + bell' 00:04:550 - 'finish2 + bell2 with slightly less priority in the song' and its repeated at 00:06:026 (3) - finish1 bell1' 00:07:173 - 'finish2bell2' so here you could put a finish on just the 'finish1's since they're more important in the music and add a whistle on the 'finish2' ones or you could also put a finish on both since the distance between them is long enough so its not that spammy but for the 'finish1' a finish is kinda a must and the other optional
  -Claps: are in a way connect to finishes a lot of times, while finishes are on the downbeats, claps are usually on onbeats and sometimes on downbeats/upbeats depending on the song, here they are on the onbeat aka the middle white tick take an example at 00:16:845 (4,1,2,1,1,2) - just delete the notes here for a sec and listen to music you hear these reoccurring clap sound at 00:17:173 - ,00:18:485 - 00:19:796 - 00:21:108 - and sometims on the downbeat aswell like at 00:19:140 - these are the beats that you usually want a clap hitsound on, the best way honestly for chill songs like this is to just clap along and you'll prob clap in a 4/4 rythm, the way the claps are placed in this section atm are really off try clapping to them its not that confertable atm -thats about for the basics of hitsounding, hope it was a bit helpful :

1. 00:14:222 (1,2,3,4) - weird rythm here your slider at (4) starts on a really weak beat and ends on a strong clap also not sure what your following here, for the part at 00:16:189 (3,4) - you could make the slider start at 00:16:517 - for a 2/1 slider, fits nicely with the vocal and soft guitar thingy
2. green lines at 00:14:048 - and 00:24:386 - don't really have a purpose atm so might aswell delete them
3. 00:18:485 (2,3) - downbeat is pretty strong here with the buildup vocal and guitar, so why not control + g the rythm here so its clickable
4. 00:22:583 (1) - honestly I'd delete this spinner and make 00:22:419 (3) - into something slider artsy so you can have a beat at 00:22:419 (3) - since thats a pretty huge transistion in the music on that beat so I really wouldn't leave it empty
5. 00:46:845 (4) - jsut a suggestion here but why not just delete this? the vocals and violin take break in this section and its an easy diff so having a similar 'break' here would fit and emphasizes those vocals/violin better (also that 5/4 returns feels rather out of place to me in this section)
6. 00:55:698 - why not start the kiai here since this seems to be the start of the instense part
7. 01:06:189 (1) - could start another kiai at this one since its still the chorus of the song until 01:16:845 -
8. Your NC pattern in general is a bit weird imo, you use a NC pattern every 2 downbeats in the kiai which fits nice, but outside of kiai its every 4 which doesnt really fit that well with the music, like take this section at every NC every 2 downbeat like at the kiai 00:24:386 - , you'd had NC's on 00:29:632 (3) - 00:34:878 (3) - 00:40:124 (3) - which would fit a lot better imo since at these places are the major musical shifts going on

1. 00:08:321 (1) - pretty strong downbeat here left unclickable, rythm wise this would be better clickable, you can hear those drums are all building up to that note
2. 00:18:649 (1) - 1/2 less slider => circle at the end instead so the downbeat is clickable since its pretty strong aswell
3. 00:23:239 (4) - that unique sound stops 1/2 earlier so why not end the slider there, since the current ending is kinda blank in the music
4. 00:31:927 (1,5) - minor stackign mistake
5. 00:33:894 (6,7) - control + g the rythm would work better here, currently starting slider on weak beat and ending on strong while control +g is strong-strong and fits nice with the first vocal being clickable
6. 00:55:206 (2) - could make this a 1/2 slider/stacked 2 notes if you want since these are pretty unique in the song as to not leave the second one empty
7. 01:00:780 (1) - strong downbeat here again with the finish and you have harder rythm in 01:10:616 (2,3,4) -
8. 01:26:189 (4) - these are kinda the 3 strongest drums in the song, so maybe use a 1/2 + circle as to not miss one of since they really deserve to be mapped

1. 00:05:370 (4,1) - could blanket these so its looks a bit better while playing the same
2. 00:07:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - really liked the beginning here with reducing spacing gradually but I wonder why you didnt do it for 00:08:321 (7) - the flow break and increased ds kinda make you loose a bit of impact on 00:08:649 (1) - which is where it all builds up to
3. 00:13:239 (4) - why not rotate this -40° so you have gradually increase in angles for the 3 sliders and a bit better flow
4. 00:17:173 (2) - ending seems to be the only vocal in this section not clickable so maybe better to just put 2 circles here instead
5. 00:29:632 (1,2) - since that red tick is so weak and you have the exteded sound here you could make this a 1/1 slider + circle instead it goes well with the intensity of this combo in 00:30:780 (5) - imo
6. 00:31:271 (6,7,8) - could look more structured with minor change by placing 7 at 248/91 so you have equal visual distance between them
7. 00:34:878 (1,3) - bit more space between these so tehy dont overlap
8. 00:47:665 (3) - would place this a bit more down for visual distance and a harder turn to 00:47:993 (1) - so its not mistaken for a 1/2 rythm gap since playability wise its kinda similar to 00:48:976 (3,1) - atm
9. 00:53:239 (9) - could place this into the middle of your circle since its far less intense then all the others in the music, makes this note stand out more from the rest rather then just continuing the circle
10. 00:57:993 (6,2) - could blanket this to make it look more structured
11. 00:58:976 (4,5) - looks like your followign the vocals here after with those 2 sliders so why not make this a slider aswell since there are those 3 strong vocal syllabyls here (ge-i-wa or smthing lol) also NC looks off
12. 01:03:894 (2) - if your gonna follow that sound make sure the first one on the downbeat of (1) is clickable since it starts there
13. 01:06:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - since its so low ds why not make them all the same ds, looks visually cleaner and plays a bit better or could have bit of jumps on 01:07:009 (4,1) - for emphasis
14. 01:16:681 - skipping some drums here on the red and blue tick that are kinda paired with these 01:16:353 (4,5,6) - in the music that gap also feels a bit off since its building towards 01:16:845 (1) - so denser rythm would fit better
15. 01:21:435 (4) - pretty strong drums here why not make them all clickable, goes well with the impact on 01:22:091 (1) - aswell

Moku_Hazushi wrote:

Hytex's Hard

00:11:271 (1) - Personnal feeling I'd go for a coming-back slider here to match with the rythm intensifying a bit. No thanks, this plays much better

00:19:140 (1) - Same remark than 00:18:649 (1) (Normal), I guess it has already been agreed before to do a NC here ^^' I dont understand...

00:28:649 (2) - I would move this slider just a bit, I think the overlapping is a bit hard to read for a hard diff I dont see overlaps :eyes:

01:05:698 (3,4,1) - Personnal feeling I'd space (3) from (4,1) a bit more here is why : (3,4) ends a musical phrase and (4,1) overlap with 1 tick far. What i want to say, is that you used the player doing fast overlap during the kiai with 00:58:157 (5,1), 01:02:747 (2,3) and 01:04:714 (4,1) so i'm pretty sure many players will fail by clicking too fast at 01:05:862 (4,1). Spacing them from 01:05:698 (3) will do a small pick of difficulty at the end of the kiai and usually you do not expect too fast circle after a jump longer than average (at least at hard level). Just personnal opinion that i wanted to point out. You mean stacks? But yea I did stacks on those parts but I assure you that people can spot the difference between 1/1 stacks and 1/2 stacks.

Nothing more to say, i had fun playing this difficulty, hope it will get ranked soon Wowie!

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YummyPichu wrote:

Hytex's Hard[/color]

00:12:419 (1) -
Feels really out of place. Could be removed and feels fine. there is a sound there.
Your call.

00:36:517 (2) -
Not sure why this one is sliding away from the rest of the notes. It does not flow well.
switching it around really? 00:36:026 (1,2,3) - forms a circular movement.
Your call.

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Title:Shiny ray (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Shiny ray (TV Size)
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:gottagof4ast
Version:Hytex's Hard
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:lwa, little witch academia, tv
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220,316,82091,6,0,B|156:292|156:340|84:316,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,82583,2,0,L|20:184,1,60
92,120,82911,2,0,L|104:48,1,60
196,40,83239,6,0,B|240:36|240:36|252:44|252:44|284:32|332:48,1,120,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,88,83730,2,0,P|400:128|396:172,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,216,84058,2,0,P|328:256|332:300,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,360,84386,2,0,L|224:368,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,316,84714,6,0,L|144:184,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,144,85206,2,0,L|220:60,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,24,85534,2,0,L|136:100,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,196,85862,6,0,P|196:248|263:255,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,162,86352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,254,86518,1,0,0:0:0:0:

YummyPichu wrote:

Thank you for visiting my modding service!

For you information, when I say "your call" I mean that it is your artistic opinion here and I leave the decision to you.

Easy

Looks great!Thanks

Normal

00:57:173 -

slider starts too late to be matched with singing. Needs to move to 00:57:009 - Yeah, this slider is a bit questionable so I'll think aobut it




I assume this is not done. Best of luck with the collab!

Aerith123 wrote:

Just a reminder
please put Hytex's name in the tag

Good luck on Ranking this map ( I like it very much!! )

Kudos ? (Just kidding) XD