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Meramipop - Saifu 'Kamiasobi no Uta'

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sahuang
Feels better now, continue your ranking process then, good luck :)
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General
  1. You make a lot pattern changes when mapping the same sounds, I think it upsets the flow of the song
  2. I'm being very pedantic sometimes but it's needed for consistency, sorry if it seems harsh
Mountain of Faith
  1. 00:50:585 - You map to the kicks but miss a beat
  2. 00:52:143 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't agree with mapping the triples to the guzheng suddenly
  3. 01:09:871 (1,2) - Sliders here seem like a poor choice since it ends on a significant beat
  4. 01:16:104 (1,2) - Same here
  5. 01:17:663 (1,2,3) - Change it to what you did before here 01:11:429 (1,2,3)
  6. 01:48:344 - You mapped to triple kicks before but not here
  7. 01:48:734 - Here too, then make so the slider is last beat
  8. 01:46:104 - Missed beat, or if you map to kicks instead change so matches 01:47:468 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) (missed triples)
  9. 01:52:922 (3,4,5) - Not a triple here, or do same as above
  10. 01:48:832 (1,2) - Make a kickslider instead then another repeat slider like 01:49:319 (3) so it matches 01:49:611 (4)
  11. 01:52:338 - Again
  12. 02:13:377 (3) - Make so the kicks are mapped like at 02:07:143 (3,4,5)
  13. 03:14:546 (1,2) - Ends on significant beat again, if you made changes at 01:09:871 (1,2) just copy paste here
  14. 03:22:337 (1,2,3) - But keep this how it is, seems fitting
  15. 03:50:781 - Missed beat again since you map to guzheng
  16. 03:57:013 - Here too
  17. 03:59:741 (1) - Kickslider instead (see before)
  18. 04:00:033 (2) - Then make this like 04:00:228 (3)
  19. 04:38:507 (8) - I think this note should be deleted for the effect you go for next
  20. 04:40:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these should be spaced more to highlight pitch changes and not just solid beats
  21. 04:41:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here too, like you did here 04:43:377 (2,3,4,5,6) but not that spaced
  22. 04:59:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I think this should be remapped, you ignore the symbols and just mix it in with the rest of the notes and it doesn't seem like a logical flow
Topic Starter
Mirash
thx Toehoe

Toehoe wrote:

General
  1. You make a lot pattern changes when mapping the same sounds, I think it upsets the flow of the song if i map same things here and there it wouldn't be that fun
  2. I'm being very pedantic sometimes but it's needed for consistency, sorry if it seems harsh
Mountain of Faith
  1. 00:50:585 - You map to the kicks but miss a beat intentionally
  2. 00:52:143 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't agree with mapping the triples to the guzheng suddenly i like it and it is kinda buildup for next section
  3. 01:09:871 (1,2) - Sliders here seem like a poor choice since it ends on a significant beat i map piano here and see no trouble if it ends on a strong beat
  4. 01:16:104 (1,2) - Same here
  5. 01:17:663 (1,2,3) - Change it to what you did before here 01:11:429 (1,2,3) lol no listen carefully to piano. it ends on first and continuous on second case you mention
  6. 01:48:344 - You mapped to triple kicks before but not here again i do piano here
  7. 01:48:734 - Here too, then make so the slider is last beat
  8. 01:46:104 - Missed beat, or if you map to kicks instead change so matches 01:47:468 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) (missed triples) just because there is a sound that does not mean that that sound has to be mapped. i like how it is now
  9. 01:52:922 (3,4,5) - Not a triple here, or do same as above nah this section plays and looks and represents music fine for me
  10. 01:48:832 (1,2) - Make a kickslider instead then another repeat slider like 01:49:319 (3) so it matches 01:49:611 (4) mm no
  11. 01:52:338 - Again
  12. 02:13:377 (3) - Make so the kicks are mapped like at 02:07:143 (3,4,5) i did same thing through that kind of sections 04:11:819 (3,4,5) - 05:07:728 (2,3,4) - and think it matches song if i skip that beats on where you mentioned
  13. 03:14:546 (1,2) - Ends on significant beat again, if you made changes at 01:09:871 (1,2) just copy paste here
  14. 03:22:337 (1,2,3) - But keep this how it is, seems fitting
  15. 03:50:781 - Missed beat again since you map to guzheng
  16. 03:57:013 - Here too
  17. 03:59:741 (1) - Kickslider instead (see before)
  18. 04:00:033 (2) - Then make this like 04:00:228 (3)
  19. 04:38:507 (8) - I think this note should be deleted for the effect you go for next no i want to keep this
  20. 04:40:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these should be spaced more to highlight pitch changes and not just solid beats maybe, but i think its fine how it is, i like it
  21. 04:41:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here too, like you did here 04:43:377 (2,3,4,5,6) but not that spaced
  22. 04:59:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I think this should be remapped, you ignore the symbols and just mix it in with the rest of the notes and it doesn't seem like a logical flow i think i hit sounded it well and it plays naturally
thank you for suggestions but i think my way of placement is better
Strategas
when it came to 1/4 sliders having weird flow was mostly fine, but when it comes to 1/2 and above stuff like 02:56:039 (2,3,4) - doesn't really play well so would be good to change the flow so that transition into and out of slider would be better. 02:56:234 (4) - ctrl j and bringing it back up would be enough, but you might want to adjust 02:56:624 (5) - afterwards to look a bit better

03:52:143 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - could rearange object placement here a bit so it wouldn't looks so messy by avoiding unncessary overlaps

04:25:065 (3,4,1,2) - I guess something similar as the first point but this is even harder cuz you have linear movement until a harsh flow break at 04:25:552 (2) -

04:39:091 (2,1) - this empty space is kinda awkward, you can avoid it by placing sliders on 04:38:507 (8) - 04:41:819 (5) - and 04:39:091 (2) - it would still follow the piano and passively follow the drums

04:57:598 (2,1) - can avoid irregular rhythm by making 04:57:598 (2) - a slider that ends on 04:57:793 - to be more intuitive to play

04:58:962 (7,1) - can avoid this 3/2 again for same reason if you start the slider at 04:58:962 (7) - and add a reverse

05:12:890 (7) - 05:14:448 (7) - overmapping both notes like this doesn't work that well imo, it doesn't look that well either, could just stack 05:12:793 (6,1) - or smth else if you wish

05:48:442 (4,1) - well I get that you want emphasis but this seems too harsh, it's almost a guaranteed 100 from the slider there

not really sure what the quality issues were before but I'm assuming it had something to do with object placement/aesthetics cuz there's a lot of messy stuff, but the map seems to execute another idea which makes up for it and I like it, feel free to call me back
Topic Starter
Mirash
thx Strategas

Strategas wrote:

when it came to 1/4 sliders having weird flow was mostly fine, but when it comes to 1/2 and above stuff like 02:56:039 (2,3,4) - doesn't really play well so would be good to change the flow so that transition into and out of slider would be better. 02:56:234 (4) - ctrl j and bringing it back up would be enough, but you might want to adjust 02:56:624 (5) - afterwards to look a bit better

03:52:143 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - could rearange object placement here a bit so it wouldn't looks so messy by avoiding unncessary overlaps

04:25:065 (3,4,1,2) - I guess something similar as the first point but this is even harder cuz you have linear movement until a harsh flow break at 04:25:552 (2) -

04:39:091 (2,1) - this empty space is kinda awkward, you can avoid it by placing sliders on 04:38:507 (8) - 04:41:819 (5) - and 04:39:091 (2) - it would still follow the piano and passively follow the drums

04:57:598 (2,1) - can avoid irregular rhythm by making 04:57:598 (2) - a slider that ends on 04:57:793 - to be more intuitive to play

04:58:962 (7,1) - can avoid this 3/2 again for same reason if you start the slider at 04:58:962 (7) - and add a reverse

05:12:890 (7) - 05:14:448 (7) - overmapping both notes like this doesn't work that well imo, it doesn't look that well either, could just stack 05:12:793 (6,1) - or smth else if you wish

05:48:442 (4,1) - well I get that you want emphasis but this seems too harsh, it's almost a guaranteed 100 from the slider there

not really sure what the quality issues were before but I'm assuming it had something to do with object placement/aesthetics cuz there's a lot of messy stuff, but the map seems to execute another idea which makes up for it and I like it, feel free to call me back
applied all!
Strategas
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evth
как же это долго
Ksardas
ранкай
PandaHero

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jonathanlfj
#2
Topic Starter
Mirash
wooo thank you!
Liiraye
hype
Nao Tomori
place
Topic Starter
Mirash
: )
Kyubey
I wasn't sure about the title romanization, and asked Delis for help, he told me that first two kanji should be romanized as Matsufu instead of Matsu fu, but he wasn't sure, therefore I asked Mirash to ask someone reliable for romanization confirmation. If the romanization is corrent, I will push it to qualified.

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22:12 Kyubey: я извиняюсь за то, что нихера не делал всё это время, у меня с мотивацией какая-то совсем задница
22:12 Kyubey: тебе всё ещё надо помоддить карту?
22:12 Kyubey: а то у меня появилось настроение моддить сейчас
22:13 Mirash: да!
22:13 Kyubey: ну тогда сейчас и займусь
22:13 Kyubey: протестировать правда надо сначала
22:13 Mirash: я правда еще одного бна нашел, но он тянет резину
22:13 Kyubey: хм
22:13 Kyubey: ну тогда сам думай как лучше
22:14 Mirash: думаю лучше, если ты помодишь
22:14 Kyubey: окей
22:14 Kyubey: ты ещё будешь онлайн?
22:14 Kyubey: а то я ирк могу сделать
22:15 Mirash: да
22:20 Mirash: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7634955 у некоторых почти выходит
22:20 Mirash: кстати, тот бн плейсхолдер поставил, это не помешает?
22:20 Kyubey: я и играть разучился
22:21 Kyubey: ну раз он держит этот плейсхолдер уже неделю, то смысл его ставить
22:21 Kyubey: бесполезно
22:21 Mirash: мне кажется он забыл, с тех пор уже две страницы постов написал
22:21 Mirash: да
22:21 Kyubey: могу удалить его В)
22:21 Kyubey: хотя не буду
22:21 Mirash: ха-ха
22:22 Kyubey: мету тебе чекали?
22:22 Mirash: джонатан и лассе
22:22 Kyubey: ссылки есть на посты?
22:22 Mirash: на 2 странице
22:22 Kyubey: отличн
22:22 Kyubey: а то самому лень искать
22:22 Mirash: p/5679591
22:23 Kyubey: а романизацию кто делал?
22:24 Mirash: хм, я вроде с ютьюба скопировал
22:24 Mirash: никто не комплейнил на этот счет
22:24 Kyubey: меня скобочки в оригинал мете смущают
22:26 Kyubey: и первая кандзя должна быть не Matsu а Matsuri, судя по всему
22:27 Kyubey: попробую у японца спросить
22:27 *Mirash is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/978236 Meramipop - Matsu fu Kami Asobi no Uta]
22:27 Mirash: не знаю можно ли доверять китайцу
22:27 Kyubey: ты там теги видел
22:27 Mirash: но у него так же
22:27 Kyubey: лол
22:27 Mirash: хд
22:30 Mirash: http://www.rd-sounds.com/reitai13.html
22:30 Mirash: шестой
22:30 Mirash: думаю скобочки стоит оставить
22:30 Kyubey: да я больше про то как оно романизируется
22:31 Mirash: ну, все же
22:31 Kyubey: думаю и так сойдёт
22:38 Kyubey: в общем, делис считает, что романизация должна быть не Matsu fu а Matsufu
22:38 Kyubey: но он и сам не уверен
22:38 Kyubey: поэтому я в треде упомяну то что есть сомнения
22:39 Kyubey: и надо будет подождать пока кто-нибудь, кому можно доверять, проверит это
22:39 Mirash: ага, мне искать кого-то?
22:39 Kyubey: можешь попробовать алакат написать
22:39 Kyubey: или кван
22:42 Kyubey: а я в треде напишу что так и так, есть сомнения
22:42 Kyubey: а пока моддить начну
22:42 Mirash: окей, отправлю кван пм
22:45 Kyubey: эх, аккуратности бы карте
22:45 Kyubey: а то столько оверлапов некрасивых
22:45 Mirash: ну, при игре не особо заметно
22:45 Kyubey: для первого раза прокатит, но потом старайся меньше оверлапать без причины
22:45 Kyubey: ну при игре оно иногда путает тоже
22:45 Mirash: я уже понял это, да
22:46 Mirash: я и в ней старался, иногда не выходило
22:47 Kyubey: 01:48:832 (1,2,3) - спейсинг между ними рандомный, это выглядит некрасиво
22:47 Kyubey: сделай ровнее
22:47 Mirash: да
22:51 Kyubey: 02:47:078 (1,2) - нк по вокалу не на двойке разве должно быть?
22:51 Kyubey: или у тебя тут свой нк паттерн?
22:52 Mirash: верно
22:52 Mirash: поправил
22:52 Kyubey: хотя тут во всей части непонятный нк паттерн
22:52 Kyubey: поэтому я хз даже
22:52 Kyubey: 02:54:481 (2,3) - троечка плохо читается тут под двоечкой, выдвинуть луччше
22:52 Mirash: я уберу ее вообще
22:54 Mirash: подвинул
22:56 Kyubey: 04:08:507 (2,1) - вот этот оверлап вообще глаза режет
22:58 Mirash: подвигал
22:59 Kyubey: 05:27:013 (1,1,1,1) - ну в другую сторону ты их хотя бы убери, а то выглядит как прямой копипаст с 02:24:676 (1,1,1,1) -
23:00 Kyubey: и на этом всё
23:00 Mirash: хм
23:01 Mirash: тяжело их в другую сторону убрать
23:01 Kyubey: весь кусок отрази по горизонтали например
23:01 Mirash: в смысле, налево? или ctr h?
23:01 Kyubey: налево, да
Topic Starter
Mirash
Yohanes
qualify hype?
Delis
I actually told qubee that it might be Saifu and I'll immediately join qat if I was right. soonTM jk srsly
jonathanlfj
do we start from #1 again? I thought we can qualify directly if only a title change is needed... or is that not a thing anymore?
Topic Starter
Mirash
Yea you need to redo this 1 2 3 thing, wrong metas unrankable
Strategas
1st thing
jonathanlfj
ok then i guess #2 from me
caren_sk
good luck !
Kyubey
Let's goo.
Topic Starter
Mirash
THANK Kyubee <3
and caren!
Natteke desu
Грачую
PandaHero

EvilElvis wrote:

Грачую
Смотри, Мираш, грачи прилетели

Lama Poluna

PandaHero wrote:

EvilElvis wrote:

Грачую
Смотри, Мираш, грачи прилетели

не грачи, а гречиха
Namki
поздравляю
Topic Starter
Mirash
спасибо, парни и девахи!
Asaiga
oh wow gratzzz!!
My turn, soon™ :(
Yohanes
Grats!!!! :)
Shmiklak
грац
alacat
hi hi
sorry, forgot to check other points when i checked about Saifu.



"神遊び" should be "Kamiasobi", not necessary to use a space between.

Then, discussed with KwaN about quotes. The quotes should be romanised to '

so The romanised title should be : Saifu 'Kamiasobi no Uta'

Let me know after fixing for re-qualify
09kami

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妖怪山最高领导人泄矢诹访子和守矢神社巫女东风谷早苗紧紧握手,天狗记者射命丸文不断拍照,镁光灯闪烁不停。

记者文: 诹访子大人,请问东风谷小姐连任好不好啊?

诹访子: 吼啊!

记者文: 中央也支持他哈?

诹访子: 当然啦!

记者文: 那为什么这么早就决定了,而不考虑别的人选了?

诹访子正在落座,没有回答。

记者文: 博丽神社呢,最近发表了一个报告说呢,土著神会透过一些渠道去影响、干预守矢神社的法治。 你对这个看法有什么回应呢?

诹访子: 没听到过!

记者文: 这是灵梦说的。

诹访子: 灵梦说的就是真的了? 你们媒体千万要注意了,不要见着风是得雨,接到这些消息,媒体本身也要判断,明白这意思吗? 假使这些完全无中生有的东西,你再帮他说一遍,你等于——你也没节操吧?!

记者文: 现在那么早,你们就说支持东风谷小姐,会不会给人一种感觉——就是内定呀——是钦点呀?

诹访子张了张嘴,似乎没太弄懂文文提的问题,旁座的神奈子忙给他解释。诹访子听懂后,举起双手辩解。

诹访子: 没有,没有任何这样的意思! 任何事情,都是要按照按照神社的、按照基本法、按照宗教的法——去产生……

记者问: 但是你们能不能……

诹访子从座位上跳起来

诹访子:刚才你们问我呀,我可回答你说“无可奉告”。但是你们又不高兴,那怎么办?!

记者文: 可……

诹访子: 我讲的意思,不是钦点他(用手指着座位上的早苗)当下一任。 你问我支持不支持,我说支持。 我就明确给你、告诉你。

记者文: 诹访子大人..…

诹访子: 但是你们吧,你们——我感觉你们天狗呀,还要学习一个—— (走上前,走到拦绳前面对文文) 你们非常熟悉博丽神社的那一套理论,你们毕竟还too young!——明白这意思吗?! (激动地挥舞着双手)我告诉你们,我是身经百战了!(高声)见得多了! (大手一挥)东方的哪个神社我没去过?!你们要知道,东方的ZUN(伸出双手大拇指作称赞状),那比你们不知要高到哪里去了! 嗯,我跟他谈笑风声。 就是说天狗呀,还是要提高自己的知识水平。 识得唔识得?(文文笑)

诹访子: 唉,我也替你们着急呀,真的。 你们就——我以为整天的—— 你们天狗记者就有一个好——全世界跑到什么地方,你们比八云紫跑得还快! (不停地摆手)但是问来问去的问题呀,都毕竟too simple!啊~ sometimes native! (倾身向前,张大嘴斥问)懂了没?!

记者文: 可诹访子大人……哦……

诹访子转身往座位上走。

记者文: 能不能说一下,为什么要支持东风谷小姐?

诹访子: (没走到座位又急转身回走,边走边挥动着手臂) 我很抱歉,我今天是作为一个长者,跟你们讲的! 我不是新闻工作者,但我也是身经百战、见得多了…… 我不……(做长者谆谆教诲状)有这个必要告诉你们一点,人生的经验。(早苗笑)

(诹访子回座坐下,旋即又很快起身走向前)

诹访子: 刚才我很想啊,就我每次碰到你们,我就想到——东方有句话叫“闷声作大死”。

记者文: 那叫什么话?一句……

诹访子: 我甚么也不说——这是最好的! 但是我想我见到你们这样热情呀,一句话不说也不好。 所以刚才你一定要…… 在宣传上,将来如果你们报道上有偏差,等于说....你也有责任的吧! (回身又指早苗)我没有说要钦定,没有任何这个意思。 但是你问——一定要问我——对东风谷小姐支持不支持。 我们不支持他?他现在当巫女,我们怎么能不支持巫女?!对不对?(文文笑)

记者文: 但是说连任呢?

诹访子: 哎,连任也按照神社的信仰呀,对不对? (挥下双手,用指头指着文文)要、要按着神社的——当然啊,我们的决定权,也是很重要的! 守矢神社、这个神社啊也是属于妖怪山、属于土著神信仰的,啊?! 到那个时候,我们会表态的!

记者文: 但是呢……

诹访子: 明白这个意思吗?! 你们呀,不要想喜欢,啊,(手臂转圈挥舞)弄那么个大新闻,说现在已经钦定了—— (用手指着自己的帽子)——就把我批判一番!

记者文:但是……

诹访子:Native Native(天真)。你们呀……I Am Angry(我愤怒了),你们这样子不行 的。我今天算得罪了你们一下。
alacat
ok, Back~
Topic Starter
Mirash
thank! wish i could read Chinese
IamKwaN
究竟是故意把天真寫成native還是不懂naive才是天真的意思?

我可以回答你說「無可奉告」
Kaifin
congrats god map
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