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00:03:649 (2,3) - would move both of these lower because lines + length = not that aesthetic ( (1) slider suggests more downward movement)
00:21:544 (4) - move to 398|349 more clean
00:23:649 (1,2) - i'd do
instead for cleanliness and representation
00:28:912 (3) - would move to 173|259 and move 00:29:439 (4) - to 82|323 for vertical variation
00:36:807 (1) - you can do better D: this could at least be a solid M or something
00:49:965 (3,4) - would do something like
this for cleanliness and emphasis
01:06:281 (1) - no nc
01:07:596 (2) - nc here instead
01:23:123 (1) - no nc
01:23:123 (1) - move the first big red node to 137|229
01:31:544 (1) - no nc
01:33:123 (1,2,3,4) - doesnt look that good, would remap
01:35:754 (1) - no nc
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00:11:807 (4,5,6) - would do something like
this instead because clean stuffs
00:13:649 (2) - make the two sides of the slider more equal
00:15:228 (1) - would do something like
this instead because flows better and aesthetics better
00:15:754 (2,3,4,5,6) - voice goes down, spacing goes up?
00:17:860 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:25:228 (6,1) - im pretty sure 1/12 rhythms are illegal
00:28:781 (4) - maybe move it a little top right for readability
00:29:438 (6,7,1) - hard rhythm owo
00:33:649 (6,1) - spacing suggests 1/4 but it's a 1/2 :think:
00:39:965 (5,1) - spacing too high, reduce (5) by one reverse or something
00:46:807 (1,2) - make the two sides a little more equal (cleaner)
00:51:017 (1) - would do something like
to half-blanket with 00:50:491 (4) - and look clean
00:54:175 (4) - /me vomits into a trash can || eww
01:05:754 (1) - this break/spinner thing isnt really providing that much zzz
01:18:386 (1) - end one beat earlier so you can provide some context to 01:21:281 (1,2) -
01:35:754 (2) - move to 174|129 looks cleaner and better flows
idk how to mod cs5 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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00:04:175 (9) - line please b0ss
flows better and cleaners
00:12:991 (1) - move closer to 00:12:596 (3) - because misleading rhythm
00:25:228 (2,3,4,1) - time space equality boss, same distance different rhythm
00:27:772 (1) - could be circle-slider like you do previously
00:32:596 (1) - is this supposed to be an asscrack or a set of boobs? what the fuck voli
00:36:807 (1) - sp ooky snake
00:38:254 (1,2,3) - should be circle-slider on a blue tick like you've done before
00:39:965 (1,2,3) - all NCs please boss different rhythm (maybe do triangle so it looks kol)
00:42:070 (3) - move to 294|117 for playability, readablity, and aesthetic (blankets with wavy thing)
00:44:614 (1) - ktg ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
00:48:561 (2) - would do something like
because looks better
00:52:465 (3) - move a little more up and move 00:52:728 (4) - up a little to compensate because aesthetic and flow with 00:52:333 (2) -
00:56:807 (1,2,3) - all NCs please boss different rhythm (maybe do triangle so it looks kol)
00:57:860 (1) - notch hell modo?!?!?!?!?!?! (the bottom circle is a bit small and the top circle's node by the [Circle] button on the left could be moved a little more to the right)
01:02:070 (1) - copying blissfulyoshi smh (fix top blanket)
01:28:781 (1,2,3) - make this circle-slider on blue tick because readability
01:35:754 (1) - move sliderhead a bit up, not equal rn
01:39:438 - maybe place note here under sliderend :^)
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