1. Advanced (2.6 stars, 134 notes)
2. Easy (1.36 stars, 52 notes)
3. Hard (2.92 stars, 161 notes)
4. Normal (2.11 stars, 101 notes)

gottagof4ast wrote:

NM from queue

General

Lower hitsound volume to 40-50% ok

add some tags so people can find it more easily ok

Use some shades of yellow/orange?/black as combo collors as the default ones don't fit ok i put some

Just googled it quickly and here is a better Background (1080p) http://blog-imgs-100.fc2.com/n/o/g/nogizaka46tte/zahVggU.jpgthx

Easy

Lower AR/OD/HP a bit ok

00:01:047 (1,2) - The timing gap here is larger than the one between 00:02:640 (2,3), so it should be bigger ok

00:04:233 (5) - NC (new combo) ok

00:06:091 add note here ok

00:07:419 (10,1) - curved sliders will look better here ok

00:10:074 (3,2) - overlap ok

00:12:463 (1,1) - Easy maps need more time after spinners moved slider for more time

00:14:853 (1) - You are skipping an important sounds here at the white tick (middle of the slider) ^ moved that thing here

00:19:631 (3,4) - Don't leave a gap here, if you want to leave a gap somewhere leave it between 00:20:693 (4) and 00:23:348 (1) ok changed it and made a short break

00:23:348 (1,2,3,4,1) - reduce spacing for an easy map ok

00:25:471 (1) - Let this sldier end on the white tick ok

00:26:534 add a circle here ok

00:29:189 (3,5) - Overlap ok

00:34:499 (3,4) - Put this at the end of the slider not on the side ok

00:37:154 (3,4) - Overlap ok

00:39:278 (5,6) - ^ ok

00:43:526 (9,1) - ^ ok

00:49:366 (2,3,4,5,1) - skipping alot of important sounds added some stuff

00:54:057 (2) - should start on a white tick ok

00:55:207 (3,4) - Overlap ok

00:56:800 (4) - This should be a short slider since the word "mouse almost end imediately and there is no sound after that ok

00:20:693 (1) - remove NC and add NC here 00:21:224 (2) ok

Insane

00:06:490 (2,3,1,2) - Overlap

This pattern is also too hard as you need to alternate or singletap 226bpm for a couple of notes i've changed it completely

00:14:322 (1,3) - Overlap changed it all1!!

00:15:649 (4,2) - ^

00:17:508 (5,2) - stack 2 on top of 5 ok

00:23:348 (2,5,6) - 2 overlaps with both of these ok

00:25:472 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - same as my 226 bpm comment yeah

00:28:127 (5,6) - space this a bit as a perfecct stack is mostly used for 1/1 gaps ok

00:31:224 (6,3) - Overlap ok

00:32:906 (7,8,1) - ^ ok

00:34:499 (3,5) - ^ ok

00:36:623 (3) - Put 3 to the left so its more consistent moved

00:43:791 (7) - If you curve 5 and 6 also curve 7i also brought them a bit closer

00:55:738 (5,6,7) - stack properly fixed

00:56:800 (8) - Slider goes on too long changed into a short slider

You do listen to the music and place notes/sliders to the beat but you have to work on your patterns alot.

Gl with the map

DendyMudak wrote:

H e l l o T h e r e!

Insane

00:02:906 (3) - put note on red tick and slider on white, remember red tick less important, white more important i will remember this
00:03:437 (4) - ^ ok
00:05:826 (7) - slider is breaking structure of the map, make it simple ok
00:09:808 (7) - ^ ok
00:28:127 (5,6,7) - ^ ok
00:06:357 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - very, very, very uncomfortable to read, make them linear, also, you can't increase spacing in 1/4 gaps if your difficulty is under 5 stars i changed it completely
00:25:472 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (unacceptable) yeah same
00:26:534 (1,2,3) - ^ CHAnged!! all of this
00:27:596 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:31:844 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:40:340 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
00:48:835 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:52:552 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:05:826 (7,6) - sounds are different, don't make them similar ok
00:11:932 (7,1) - don't stack them, also there is sound on blue tick, stack it with 1 ok
00:18:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix this star ok
00:22:817 (1) - make it circular ok
00:24:145 (5) - replace red tick with note and add slider on white ok
00:28:127 (5,6) - do not stack them fully ok
00:56:800 (8) - sound on blue tick, not white ok
00:55:738 (5,6) - fix this stack ok

I recommend you to check ranking criteria for specific difficulties
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Insane
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

Also, check pishifat's videos about "mapping"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8F ... GGoLIrQtOx

HazKitten wrote:

Fix sliders that have unusual bends that dont flow with map ;3

• The mp3 is INSANELY quiet. Take it into an audio editing program like audacity and amplify it.
  Check AiMod.

• 
  00:01:047 (1) - The gap after this is too hard for beginners to judge how long to wait before clicking the next object. Make this repeat and remove the circle.
  00:03:171 (3,2) - Beginners will not know that (2) does not come next. Please make (1) closer to the tail of (3) instead of (2) so beginners can read this.
  [list:1337]00:16:446 (2,4) - ^

• 00:34:499 (3,4) - ^ Also this one feels really random and makes no sense.

• 00:27:066 (1,2) - ^ Move the head of (1) to the right.

• 00:18:569 (1,2) - ^ Except just make this a 1/1 slider.

• 00:29:189 (3) - ^
  00:30:782 (5) - ^
  00:33:436 (2) - ^
  00:50:428 (3,4,5) - ^
  00:54:144 (2) - ^

PolkaMocha wrote:

[General:]

• The mp3 is INSANELY quiet. Take it into an audio editing program like audacity and amplify it.
  Check AiMod. I amplified it a bit, not sure if it's too loud or still quiet
  
  For AiMod, it said that some slider ends were not snapped. I tried searching how to fix this problem, but I'm not sure I understand the process of doing this. I have to edit the .osu file? if you have time could you tell me how to do this snapping

[Easy:]

• 
  00:01:047 (1) - The gap after this is too hard for beginners to judge how long to wait before clicking the next object. Make this repeat and remove the circle. ok
  00:03:171 (3,2) - Beginners will not know that (2) does not come next. Please make (1) closer to the tail of (3) instead of (2) so beginners can read this. ok, i reversed their positions
  [list:1337]00:16:446 (2,4) - ^

same
00:05:295 (3,4) - Beginners can't handle this short slider. Make it a repeat slider and remove the circle, as it will play the same length as a 1/1 slider. ok

• 00:34:499 (3,4) - ^ Also this one feels really random and makes no sense.

i put a repeating slider instead
00:06:357 (5,1) - Scoot (1) up so players can find the head of it easier. ok

• 00:27:066 (1,2) - ^ Move the head of (1) to the right.

ok
00:10:605 (1,2,3) - Make this a 1/1 repeat slider, as this slider pattern is too complicated for beginners. ok

• 00:18:569 (1,2) - ^ Except just make this a 1/1 slider.

ok
00:15:383 (1,2) - These are not spaced right. fixed with distance snap
00:23:348 - Dont skip this important whole beat. i put a circle
00:27:066 (1) - Make this start on the whole beat, as the beat is important and players should be able to click it. You can scoot it forward a beat and add a circle where it used to start if you'd like. ok, fixed all the ones you mentioned

• 00:29:189 (3) - ^
  00:30:782 (5) - ^
  00:33:436 (2) - ^
  00:50:428 (3,4,5) - ^
  00:54:144 (2) - ^

For these fixes above, do I need to change the length of the sliders as well? Since I moved them one tick forward

00:30:251 (4,5) - This flow isn't very good. Perhaps you can curve (5) the other way. ok curved the other way
00:37:154 (3,4) - This overlap is kind of unattractive. Lessen the curve on (4) maybe? yes
00:38:216 (4) - New combo. ok
00:52:552 - Why did you not map this? Place a circle here. ok
00:54:675 - Make a spinner and end it where 00:56:932 (4) - starts, as beginners will not be able to read or play this last slider properly. ok i put a circle at 00:54:277 (2) - then added the spinner where you said. is that fine

Over all, you have a lot of issues of emphasis. Circles emphasize better than sliders do, and slider has emphasize better than slider tails do. Think carefully about which parts of the song you want players to feel are important and click on.

I can tell you're just beginning. If you have questions comments or concerns, feel free to message me! I'll be happy to help.

Bananafish1 wrote:

thx for helping me. i am learning a bunch of stuff from this mod and will definitely try to apply what you taught me to other difficulties. i will try to improve my emphasis on certain notes.
thank you for the offer for help, ill keep you in mind if i need something

cooldude4232 wrote:

NM from mod queue

modded both diffs because it's a pretty short map

the timing for this map sounds really off, 54 offset seems way better IMO, if more people say the timing is off I'd suggest changing it
Thanks so much for this, yes 54 offset does seem much better, i have changed the timing and re-positioned all the notes on all difficulties, sounds better! also reverted some changes from PolkaMocha's mod because i found that the whole beat was on the white tick now (like this one - 00:27:066 (1) - Make this start on the whole beat, as the beat is important and players should be able to click it. You can scoot it forward a beat and add a circle where it used to start if you'd like. )

Advanced

00:07:487 (3) - redo this slider to make it a normal curve ok
00:15:717 (4) - put a circle on the white tick right after this i made the slider 1/4 and then put circle on white tick, is that what you were meaning?
00:19:699 (3,4) - you should use a slider for this 1/6 section like here 00:32:974 (5,6) it just makes it a bit more readable and nicer to play because the 1/6 section is so short ok, added sliders in 1/6 time signature for all of these you mentioned

• 00:28:726 (3,4,5) - ^
  00:49:434 (3,4,5) - ^
  00:53:682 (3,4,5) - ^

00:21:823 (4) - use 1/6 snapping on this ok, snapped to 1/6 for all of these

• 00:24:478 (4,5,6) - ^
  00:30:850 (5) - ^
  00:55:806 (3) - ^

00:46:116 (4,5) - use sliders here instead of just repeaters, they don't really make sense for this section ok
00:57:000 (5) - just a normal straight slider here seems kinda boring i put this shape that looks like a M

Normal

00:09:543 (3,4) - you should replace these with something more like this 00:07:419 (3,4,5) because it's the exact same sound ok i put the same thing
00:15:915 (5) - I think this should be a 1/2 slider yes you're right it seems better, i changed all three of them

• 00:18:038 (5) - ^
  00:20:162 (5) - ^

00:25:207 (1,2,3,4,5) - move this to the right 1/2 beat and add more to the end of this 00:23:348 (1,2,3) because you're missing a lot of sounds thx, moved and added a slider before it
00:29:189 (5) - make this a half slider and then put something on the white and red ticks after it ok i put a slider
00:30:782 (3,1) - feels like something should go between these i put a circle on the red tick
00:44:322 (4) - move this mote further away, right now it's kinda ambiguous whether or not it's a 1/4 gap or a 1/2 when you're playing spaced it out
00:44:322 (4,1) - make the blanket on this a little cleaner spaced it out
00:45:384 (2) - space this more evenly spaced it out
00:56:932 (4) - slider is also kinda boring made some kind of M shape

samosita wrote:

HELLOOOO FROM MY MOD Q

mods

[General]
-Timing for this whole mapset should be 226 bpm I think it would be easier for you to map once you change the bpm
ok, 226 is kinda fast but i will consider changed the bpm to 226 later on and remapping the entire song if everyone thinks the timing is really off and the beatmap is bad
-Same sentiments with other people. consider getting a new mp3 file because the music is too soft
ok, i have amplified the music by +6dB again, and it is quite loud on my end now. but i am wondering if i am replacing the audio file correctly : i amplified it, and then overwrote the audio.mp3 in the osu folder by the amplified version named the same thing. i think thats right. i will try to look for a new mp3 to use if this doesnt work, but it seems very loud already on my computer

[Normal]

1. Generally, I think that CS 4 and AR 7 for this difficulty is a hard read for beginners. For a normal difficulty, you should try to use a CS ranging from 3-3.5 and an AR ranging from 4-5 (this is what i use personally) ok, i put CS 3 and AR 5
2. Don't be afraid of using overlapping notes here! This is to increase the difficulty spread

00:01:047 (1) - a kickslider for this would sound better perhaps yes it does sound better
00:09:808 - consider adding a note here since i see you're mapping by the vocals ok i added slider at that yellow tick you pointed out and ended it where they stop singing
00:11:932 - ^same here for this one i put a 1/4 slider and then two circles overlapped. i also moved 00:12:664 (7) - a bit earlier to fit with the grill starting to say "laaa"
00:15:384 (3,4,5) - you could try to spice things a little bit by changing this from a line to a triangle ok i have changed all of these patterns you mentioned into a triangle like formation
00:17:508 (3,4,5) - ^
00:19:631 (3,4,5) - ^
00:21:755 (5) - end this slider at 00:22:286 look down
00:22:286 - clickable sound, i suggest using a kickslider i am a bit confused, since you said to end the slider at this time as well. I have put a kickslider at this time and instead, i made the previous slider end one tick before. i am not sure that this is what you meant.


[Advanced]
00:15:914 - circle ok
00:19:631 (3,4) - this could be a slider instead ok
00:41:136 (1) - this slider kind of breaks the flow made it follow direction of flow
00:31:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice pattern here haha. for this difficulty, i think you can improve it further by incorporating patterns with slight jumps like these. ok i will try to improve this difficulty with things such as these later on.

[Hard]
00:01:047 (2) - instead of a sixteenth kickslider, make this an eighth. same for 00:01:578 (4) ok, sounds better
00:01:578 (4) - consider putting this in another place cos i think it's awkward that it overlaps with 00:01:047 (2) changed place of notes
00:15:384 (3) - stack with 00:15:649 (4) ok
00:32:640 (4,5) - fix the distance here. this needs to be consistent with the distance of 00:31:844 (1,2,3) ok

Note that you don't have to follow everything i said!
Goodluck with this map

PolkaMocha wrote:

Bananafish1 wrote:

thx for helping me. i am learning a bunch of stuff from this mod and will definitely try to apply what you taught me to other difficulties. i will try to improve my emphasis on certain notes.
thank you for the offer for help, ill keep you in mind if i need something

Yeah! PM me if you have any questions. I'd love to help.

To answer your questions, unsapped notes mean your notes are not on a tick in the timeline. Simply jiggle the note on the timeline a bit, and it should snap. Also jiggle the slider END in the EDITOR to make sure THAT is snapped too.

Keep your sliders on the white ticks. Only change the length if it doesn't fit the song with the white tick it's on.

-Aqua wrote:

Hello from #modreqs.

[Easy]

1. 00:01:115 (1) - This rhythm feels off, try making it a 1/1 repeat slider.Will feel better. ok
2. 00:05:364 (3,4) - Blanket. ok i moved these notes
3. 00:07:488 (1,2) - ^ ok
4. 00:04:832 (2,4) - Stack ok
5. 00:12:531 (1) - Spinner appeared to fast i moved it one measure ahead
6. 00:18:638 (1,2) - Blanket. ok i moved all these notes
7. 00:25:009 (4,5) - ^
8. 00:30:851 (5,6) - You can align these. made the slider straight and is aligned with 6
9. 00:41:469 (3) - You can fix this slider. thx
10. 00:42:531 (4,5) - Ugly overlap tbh. fixed
11. 00:50:497 (3,4,5) - Why the sudden change of rhythm? you're right, nothing in the music really justifies this pattern, because it is the same melody as before. i have removed this and put a slider and circle instead

1 diff only because lazy lmfao. its ok im happy for any mod and help

Goodluck!

direday wrote:

Hello! From my Queue.

General

• 
  As usual I will recommend watching pishifat's mapping videos.
  
  Soooo the music genre is definetly electro-swing and this genre is defined by weird division of beat. You can find more info here. Point is - you map as if it has only 1/2 snappings and it is wrong. Generally speaking - change your Beat Snap Divisor to 1/3 and watch out for sounds that are on 1/3 ticks. There are plenty, in every beat. Important thing is - vocals follow simple 1/2 division and it conflicts with music.
  
  I don't know if that'd be of any help but I've made a mockup diff just for the sake of showing how timeline could look. Ignore object placement, just timeline is what matters. I've taken into account that you need to skip some sounds in order to make easier diff. I've priotarized vocals when possible.
  
  00:12:664 hear how this sound a bit off-rythm? That's because its snapped to 1/2 unlike the rest of the music. It's very intense and vocals starts on it too. Well, w/o score v2 it's easy to just vaguely hit slider and score 300 since sliders don't take accuracy into account right now, but I'm sure you have problems with it if you'll ever reach the point to call BNs. There is also a sound here 00:06:292 but it's skippable.
  
  Hope you can deduce how the map should be mapped after the break.
  
  To be honest I would not recommend swing music to new mappers, consider gaining more xperience beforehand.

Hope that helped! Good luck!

direday wrote:

To be honest I would not recommend swing music to new mappers, consider gaining more xperience beforehand.

direday wrote:

Damn, something went terribly wrong with the file. And have deleted it already too. Hold up, I'll make another one.

Edit: okay, this one should be working. I have bookmarked places where "swing" part is actually showing. It''s not just 1/3 snapping, but a mix of 1/3 and 1/2 snapping. Actually, usually most of the swingg tracks is mostly snapped to 1/2. Here's better link for it if you are interested.

2nd Edit: To be honest, I'm not sure. Contact someone who's better at this stuff. There is definetly something off in my map but I'm not sure if it is bad offset of the map, or I'm wrong with snappings =\

• SV-1.40 it's so many for easy pls use 1.20 or 1.00
  Use 1 spacing all over the map
  00:01:115 (1) - Do not use reverse slider more than 1 times, it's so hard for beginners
  00:07:488 (1,2) - Why is this spacing different from this00:09:610 (3,4) - ?
  00:12:797 (1,1) - Spinner recovery time should be at least 4 beats. This is to ensure adequate time to click a hitobject following a spinner.
  00:23:416 (1,2,3) - Do it like this, it looks better.
  00:28:196 (2) - Do curve slider
  00:34:567 (3) - Do not use reverse slider more than 1 times

• Use 1.2-1.4 spacing all over the map
  00:09:810 (4) - this slider start here 00:09:877 -
  00:12:664 (7) - Make the slider look prettier
  00:20:761 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this spacing different
  00:21:823 (5) - end slider here 00:22:089 -
  00:29:788 (1,3) - Avoid overlap, it's not reading
  00:46:513 (1,1) - Spinner recovery time should be at least 2 beats. This is to ensure adequate time to click a hitobject following a spinner.

• 00:05:363 (5,6,7) - Maybe not stack