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[bor]
00:05:714 (3) - 00:06:057 (4) - (tail) whistle
00:34:857 (3) - nothing is actually here maybe u wanna try to remove this and extend (2) by 1/2?
00:46:000 (4) - cuz polarity and there rly isnt much on the downbeat
00:52:686 (1) - idk bout this //overlap gimmick kinda late to introduce at this point so prob best to leave it out
00:56:114 (3,4) - mebe
00:58:172 (1,2,3) - y do u follow 2 different things with the same melody going on // 01:03:657 (1,2,3) - these all map to vocals so theyre gud but ya
01:20:800 (2) - drum finish on the end 01:22:172 (4) - on head 01:31:772 (2) - etc..
01:36:572 (1) - finish
02:01:257 (1,2) - dont really wanna ruin ur pattern but at least make the spacing more equal? lol
also mite wanna check some blankets
otherwise cool sliders
[normal]
00:11:543 (1) - ok but y tho
00:19:086 (4,1) - not rly a fan of this flow
00:34:857 (5) - if ur gunna do gimmicky stuff like above and 00:24:400 (3) - then Y not here too //actually i think leaving the circle out sounds better too cuz there isnt much there on the downbeat
00:46:514 (1) - doesn't really need an NC to emphasize this tbh, 2 1/2 sliders would prolly be more suitable for the diff too
00:56:286 (3) - maybe a 1/2 slider? missing the downbeat makes me sad
01:36:572 (1) - finish
01:39:143 (5) - 1/2 earlier for the snare plss
01:51:657 (5) - same as earlier
01:55:086 - 01:57:829 - this shouldnt be skipped tho imo
[hard]
00:16:943 - circle here too cuz 00:19:686 (7) - //00:22:172 (6,1) - 00:27:657 (6,1) - same here and maybe 00:33:143 (6,1) -
00:36:057 - y ignore? ;/
00:46:514 (2) - if ur following the vocals it's kinda odd that u don't map the last note
00:57:314 (3) - put it in the 4th quadrant cuz acute angles are cute??
01:21:314 (1,2) - 01:23:715 (4,5) - ik ur following vocals but it really feels empty to me when u completely ignore snares like this
01:28:172 (1) - but crash on the downbeat :s
01:30:400 (3,4,5,6,7) - kinda looks weird the way it's stacked, maybe manually stack it to go left? also the beat after still has the drum roll so it also feels pretty empty
01:34:172 (2) - maybe jump? u hsed the crash too
01:36:572 (1) - finish here
01:44:114 (5) - 01:46:857 (5) - (etc) nothing on the 1/4 here
01:44:714 - tho there is a sound here
[insane]
00:10:686 (1) - 01:39:828 (1) - y nc tho
00:18:743 (3) - clap
00:23:886 (1) - soft finish
00:46:772 (3) - dont rly think this is necessary, esp since the mutliple repeat slider is pretty hard to read already imo lol
00:54:743 (3,4,5) - switch places? the reverse is kinda covered up
01:01:257 (2,3,4) - switch in timeline sounds better to me imo, first 2 downbeats are essentially the same
01:29:714 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is pretty intense considering the stuff i've seen so far lol
01:36:572 (1) - finish
glhf!!