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ChouCho - Elemental World (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Winnie
Fixed and applied all. I also rearranged my pattern that Jonathan mentioned to something different. :) I'll try to ask Shad0w for a video
Shad0w1and
set without an i icon.
bad set

http://puu.sh/tW58Y/1d330fcaee.flv
Topic Starter
Winnie
GRACIAS EVERYTHING GOOD
Karen
Kibb's Insane
  1. 00:13:888 - the break is kinda weird at least make 00:15:294 - this clickable? or add a spinner like insane diff
  2. 00:29:122 (2,3) - this should be a jumps instead of 00:28:888 (1,2) - , or something like this http://puu.sh/u5Qqd/f11323904f.jpg
  3. 00:33:575 (3,4) - a bit too far, move (3) to left a bit
  4. 00:46:466 (2,3) - pattern is nice but doesn't fit, 00:46:700 - needs to be emphasized, so example: http://puu.sh/u5QBi/565966b1f2.jpg
  5. 00:52:443 (4,5,6,1) - cancer, the flow kills me, how about moving 00:52:794 (6) - this to another place like around (278,72)
  6. 01:12:482 (2,3,4) - this never appears in any other places :( just stack them like 01:07:091 (3,4,5) -
Insane
  1. 00:09:669 (7,1) - this jump is too harsh, and the straight flow makes it much harder, nerf it?
  2. i don't understand most of your rhythm choices, especially some 3/4 slider usages like 00:34:513 (1,2,5,1,2) - and many other places, i know there's something on the blue lines but drums and pianos on the red lines are much more important in my opinion
  3. 00:43:888 (1,2,3,4) - and it's not consistent with what you did 00:40:607 (2,3,4) -
try ar5 on Normal?
also the gap of Normal -> Hard is kinda big, Hard has some quite hard jumps while Normal is just a 'normal' Normal

gl!
Topic Starter
Winnie
Changed most of my stuff
nextplay
Hai Just checking Blankets

[Easy]
00:09:201 (2,3) - Blanket (yellow thing)

[Normal]
00:43:888 (4,5) - Blanket (Yellow Thing)
01:05:216 (3,4) - Blanket (Yellow Thing)
01:20:919 (3,4) - ^ (Not the Yellow thing)

[Hard]

Isn't the HP a bit high for a difficulty under 3*? what about HP5 or 5,5?

00:05:216 (4,5) - Blanket
01:06:154 (1,2) - ^ (Yellow thing)
01:13:888 (3,5) - ^

With Diffs over Insane I'm not sure anymore with Stacks and Blankets...
GL~!
Nao Tomori
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[kibb's extra]
00:05:567 - don't really see purpose of ignoring this, the note you end the triple on is not that strong imo
00:08:966 (3) - should probably just be a triple lol
and 00:13:536 - you could just map the burst triple thingy or w/e cuz it's like a build up to 00:13:653 -
i also think a spinner would fit pretty well here
00:20:919 (3,4) - feels like 3 should have more spacing than 4 to me
00:37:091 (4) - if u like minorly adjust the head down a little then you can make the follow points line up with the slider path
00:41:076 (3) - nice diagonal slider LUL
01:18:809 (7) - this feels like should be 2 circles, pretty strong drums on slider end imo

[insane]
00:18:107 (2,3) - this is a really big jump and doesnt really have strong vocal or piano or anything. imo should be smaller
00:55:607 (2) - nice blanket
01:04:279 (9,1) - this is a really weird motion to me, like a sharp angle into a wide one. besides i think 1 should have more spacing cuz it's the one you're emphasizing up to.
[hard]
00:08:263 (3) - this thing looks kinda ugly to me cuz the red point is so far down the slider lol
01:04:044 - quint might be too hard, but i think it would fit a lot better here
also imo nc on 3 is better cuz it's where the new section starts
[normal]
aimod said something about ds in some places when i removed all new combos, check those out
[easy]
00:15:763 (1) - this blanket sucks
00:45:763 (1) - this isn't actually symmetrical

k tell me whenever u respond
Battle
.1 to .2 differences in ai mod so yeah, not a big difference there with snapping
Topic Starter
Winnie

Nao Tomori wrote:

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[kibb's extra]
00:05:567 - don't really see purpose of ignoring this, the note you end the triple on is not that strong imo Though I do agree it might make sense to not ignore it. I don't think there would be a problem with it. Since rhythm choices and the way he used sliders to skip particular beats like that is used a lot around here. Also if he did I think having a glaring 5 note stream here doesn't fit rhythm consistency and would just be a weird factor to have in.
00:08:966 (3) - should probably just be a triple lol I will actually do that. Kibb likes making spicy triplets anyways. Reverse wouldn't make sense
and 00:13:536 - you could just map the burst triple thingy or w/e cuz it's like a build up to 00:13:653 i also think a spinner would fit pretty well here I don't think he cared about that. I believe with the hitsounds already implemented he wanted to make it stand out more than just having a double burst like that. But I will add a spinner
00:20:919 (3,4) - feels like 3 should have more spacing than 4 to me 00:20:919 (3,3) - Both are practically the same. Keeping it 1.4 spacing makes it consistent as well. Plus you're too into music correction and how they sound to one another not bad but it still plays well.
00:37:091 (4) - if u like minorly adjust the head down a little then you can make the follow points line up with the slider path. Nah too much work it's already blanketed
00:41:076 (3) - nice diagonal slider LUL
01:18:809 (7) - this feels like should be 2 circles, pretty strong drums on slider end imo Sure I'll add some spice to it

[insane]
00:18:107 (2,3) - this is a really big jump and doesnt really have strong vocal or piano or anything. imo should be smaller True
00:55:607 (2) - nice blanket Probably one of my best in this map
01:04:279 (9,1) - this is a really weird motion to me, like a sharp angle into a wide one. besides i think 1 should have more spacing cuz it's the one you're emphasizing up to. That's true but the way you play this part is moving just to the left. You don't have to move with the 1/4 so playing it is rather simple if it was like this then I'd question it http://puu.sh/uKdjS/e9676f35b7.jpg

[easy]
00:15:763 (1) - this blanket sucks You german
00:45:763 (1) - this isn't actually symmetrical Close enough

k tell me whenever u respond
Answered for Kibb using my hardcore intellectual mindset
I've read for hard as well but I don't think they are things xChippy would want changed since they are all doable to the beginners. I'll call you back
Nao Tomori
changed a slider in hard a little bit
Yuii-
IRC mod, will qualify tomorrow as Kocari wants to make some adjustments!

2017-03-18 02:30 Yuii-: hey you there
2017-03-18 02:31 Kocari: ye
2017-03-18 02:31 Yuii-: k let's discussu mapping
2017-03-18 02:32 Yuii-: why 00:02:638 (6) - 3/4 when 00:05:919 (5) - 00:09:669 (7) - 00:11:544 (7) - arent
2017-03-18 02:32 Kocari: uh ok
2017-03-18 02:32 Yuii-: also too muchy spacing here 00:08:732 (2,3) -
2017-03-18 02:32 Kocari: Ive had the first parts before
2017-03-18 02:32 Kocari: it was removed
2017-03-18 02:32 Yuii-: 00:15:294 - can you decrease volume to 60%?
2017-03-18 02:33 Kocari: decrease volume to 60%
2017-03-18 02:33 Kocari: what do you mean
2017-03-18 02:33 Yuii-: of the spinner
2017-03-18 02:34 Kocari: oh its 100%
2017-03-18 02:34 Kocari: can I just make this whole part 60%
2017-03-18 02:34 Yuii-: 00:20:802 - you forgot a triplet here cause 00:26:427 (4) - hehe xd
2017-03-18 02:34 Yuii-: hmm
2017-03-18 02:34 Yuii-: 70% for the intro sounds nice
2017-03-18 02:34 Kocari: or 70%
2017-03-18 02:34 Kocari: to even it out
2017-03-18 02:34 Yuii-: spinner 40% then
2017-03-18 02:34 Kocari: k done
2017-03-18 02:34 Yuii-: nice anti
2017-03-18 02:34 Yuii-: 00:29:122 (2,3) -
2017-03-18 02:35 Yuii-: i'll just list things out as i keep on seeing the map
2017-03-18 02:35 Yuii-: feel free to apply
2017-03-18 02:35 Yuii-: 00:47:638 (4) - drum sampleset please koca
2017-03-18 02:36 Yuii-: break is awkward cause it's not done anywhere else on the map so it feels really inconsistent and unpleasent to read this 00:36:388 (1) -
2017-03-18 02:36 Yuii-: 00:48:810 (3) - i'd just extend it tbh
2017-03-18 02:37 Kocari: I dont want to extend that
2017-03-18 02:37 Yuii-: 00:50:216 (3,4) - ctrl+g'ing for vocals seems like a better way to go in my opinion
2017-03-18 02:37 Kocari: its really bad if I do
2017-03-18 02:37 Yuii-: really bad
2017-03-18 02:38 Yuii-: 01:03:810 (7,8,9,1) - yo nig what is this structure
2017-03-18 02:39 Kocari: my osu! just crash
2017-03-18 02:39 Kocari: can you resned
2017-03-18 02:40 Yuii-: 01:05:216 (3,4,5,6) - this rhythm is also very weird if you ask me, vocals are in the middle of these notes when they really are more emphasized on the bgm, what about http://i.imgur.com/jaERK7F.jpg
2017-03-18 02:40 Yuii-: what did you not get?
2017-03-18 02:40 Yuii-: last messages were: 01:03:810 (7,8,9,1) - yo nig what is this structure
2017-03-18 02:40 Yuii-: and the one i just sent you
2017-03-18 02:41 Yuii-: 01:19:513 (1) - i can't really understand this, such a long slider, rip consistency tbh
2017-03-18 02:42 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1176282 Choucho - Elemental World [xChippy's Hard]]
2017-03-18 02:42 Yuii-: 00:30:294 (5,1) - scrubs can't read this if it's fully stacked, consider unstacking please
2017-03-18 02:42 Yuii-: 00:36:154 (4,1,2,3) - e
2017-03-18 02:43 Yuii-: 00:58:888 (2,3,4) - a more balanced distance would be appreciated a lot
2017-03-18 02:46 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1174738 Choucho - Elemental World [Battle's Normal]]
2017-03-18 02:46 Yuii-: 01:12:716 (2,3) - ctrl+g'ing sounds better imo, right? idk i feel like (2) is covering a lot of vocals things as of rn
2017-03-18 02:47 Kocari: you're telling me they cant read that?
2017-03-18 02:47 Kocari: lel
2017-03-18 02:47 Yuii-: they really can't
2017-03-18 02:47 Yuii-: they misread the second repeat
2017-03-18 02:49 Kocari: did everything but the ctrl G
2017-03-18 02:49 Yuii-: ok don't call me back then!!
2017-03-18 02:49 Yuii-: jk
2017-03-18 02:49 Yuii-: is there anything you can do about that rhythm?
2017-03-18 02:49 Yuii-: also hp of easy 3 or lower pls
2017-03-18 02:50 Kocari: which one
2017-03-18 02:50 Yuii-: battle's
2017-03-18 02:50 Kocari: what rhythm
2017-03-18 02:50 Yuii-: 01:12:716 (2,3) -
2017-03-18 02:51 Kocari: thats fine to me tbh
2017-03-18 02:52 Yuii-: but it's not to me
2017-03-18 02:52 Yuii-: wait let me ask a professional modder
2017-03-18 02:52 Kocari: because why question that
2017-03-18 02:52 Kocari: when you can question this
2017-03-18 02:52 Kocari: 01:14:591 (5,6) -
2017-03-18 02:52 Yuii-: that's following vocals though
2017-03-18 02:53 Kocari: but its also the same as
2017-03-18 02:53 Kocari: 01:13:419 (3) -
2017-03-18 02:53 Kocari: for drum beat
2017-03-18 02:53 Yuii-: if you were to add a 1/2 slider there
2017-03-18 02:53 Yuii-: you would make
2017-03-18 02:53 Yuii-: a REALLY dense pattern
2017-03-18 02:53 Yuii-: and scrubs need to rest
2017-03-18 02:54 Kocari: beacuse if you want to follow a rational vocal it should extend to the white tick
2017-03-18 02:55 Yuii-: idk tbh http://i.imgur.com/zvgsQsS.jpg this is much better
2017-03-18 02:55 Yuii-: maybe by making 2 a circle
2017-03-18 02:55 Yuii-: you can actually add a 1/2 slider
2017-03-18 02:55 Kocari: you can move this to the white tick as well 01:15:529 (6) -
2017-03-18 02:55 Yuii-: 01:15:294 - there
2017-03-18 02:56 Yuii-: or just 1/2 slider if you use my pattern!!
2017-03-18 02:56 Kocari: but then that wouldnt make sense
2017-03-18 02:56 Kocari: because you cover vocals here
2017-03-18 02:56 Kocari: 01:14:591 (5) -
2017-03-18 02:56 Kocari: why not then have it cover vocals the same way here 01:12:716 (2) -
2017-03-18 02:57 Kocari: optimal
2017-03-18 02:57 Kocari: http://puu.sh/uO7lU/a91ec140fe.jpg
2017-03-18 02:57 Yuii-: alright i'm ok with that actually
2017-03-18 02:57 Yuii-: https://puu.sh/uO7lU/a91ec140fe.jpg
2017-03-18 02:57 Yuii-: use that one
2017-03-18 02:57 Yuii-: it's sexy
2017-03-18 02:57 Kocari: alright I'll talk to battle about it
2017-03-18 02:57 Yuii-: sure
Topic Starter
Winnie
Ok everything that I wanted changed is changed. As long as Battle's Rhythm. Everything should be good now
Yuii-
Fixed two stacks on Insane and added a hitsound. Other things have been fixed too, but they are minor ;)

Metadata can be found in: http://i.imgur.com/D0PnZLg.jpg and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8yd3irQJTY

Qualified!

Happy birthday, Koca~
Kalibe
happy birthday kocari!!!

and grats d
Gaia
ayy gratz and hbd
Agatsu
grats and happy birthday kocari :D
IamKwaN
you could choose to have Elemental World(TVサイズ)as the title, according to http://masamune-tv.com/music/

let me know if you want to change it
alacat
I think it's better to use ”Elemental World(TVサイズ)” to this map for discriminate between full and tv size.
Topic Starter
Winnie
Gonna ask to rerank it. I'm down to changing the title to distinguish stuff. Patience is my forte 8-)
alacat
Disqualify for fix the title

alacat
ok, Back~
Yuii-
Shouldn't it be "TVSize" instead of "TV Size"?

Regz
Gaia
nah it's fine, melo said the same thing to me on my hishoku no sora 2 years ago p/3657301

regrats!
HeatKai
congrats :)
Kinomi
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Frozen Chicken
i love this <3 <3 <3
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