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Warptech & Soulfy - Peace

posted 2016-07-11T16:17:02+00:00

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CernTheLion

165 posts

Joined February 2015

CernTheLion 2017-02-20T21:01:47+00:00

IRC

2017-02-20 21:18 -Bumblebee-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1025736 Warptech & Soulfy - Peace [Enjoy The Peace]]
2017-02-20 21:19 -Bumblebee-: Okay then :))
2017-02-20 21:19 -Bumblebee-: Mmmm I'm seeing your starting NCs
2017-02-20 21:20 -Bumblebee-: You placed a NC here 00:00:901 (1) - 
2017-02-20 21:21 -Bumblebee-: So the other one shoulda stay here 00:03:343 (2) - 
2017-02-20 21:21 -Bumblebee-: 00:06:134 (2) - same
2017-02-20 21:21 -Bumblebee-: If you're disappointed just tell me that, okay? xD
2017-02-20 21:22 Invertable: oki
2017-02-20 21:22 -Bumblebee-: Also, keep in mind that when you change SV, you MUST change the combo
2017-02-20 21:23 -Bumblebee-: http://puu.sh/uc5Ze/7684c7df26.jpg 00:02:994 (3) - 
2017-02-20 21:23 -Bumblebee-: That's how it supposed to be
2017-02-20 21:24 Invertable: 00:02:994 (1) - i put NC here just cause of drastic change of SV
2017-02-20 21:24 -Bumblebee-: 00:02:645 (1) - put it here
2017-02-20 21:24 Invertable: i would leave that place with 2 NCs00:02:994 (1,1) -
2017-02-20 21:24 -Bumblebee-: It's better to being consistent with 00:00:204 (1) - 
2017-02-20 21:24 Invertable: nice
2017-02-20 21:25 -Bumblebee-: There's no need to put 2 NCs near, at the moment ;)
2017-02-20 21:25 -Bumblebee-: 00:05:436 (4) - NC here and 00:06:134 (2) - here (remove also NC from 00:05:785 (1) - here)
2017-02-20 21:26 -Bumblebee-: Ah, I forgot 1 NC, 00:04:390 (1) - remove this
2017-02-20 21:26 Invertable: done
2017-02-20 21:26 -Bumblebee-: Nice
2017-02-20 21:27 -Bumblebee-: Everything okay until now?
2017-02-20 21:27 Invertable: ye
2017-02-20 21:27 -Bumblebee-: 00:08:576 (1,2,3) - this sliders are with different SV
2017-02-20 21:28 -Bumblebee-: My suggest is to change them with the same lenght, otherwise you can spam the NC
2017-02-20 21:28 -Bumblebee-: But there's no need to reduce the slider lenght in that precise point, since the song's flow is barely the same lol
2017-02-20 21:30 Invertable: hmm
2017-02-20 21:30 -Bumblebee-: 00:11:017 (1) - NC spam isn't so necessary imo
2017-02-20 21:30 Invertable: i didn t want them the same speed
2017-02-20 21:30 -Bumblebee-: Okay, but why? lol
2017-02-20 21:30 Invertable: idk when i was making it felt like that part was a little bit slower than all the other parts
2017-02-20 21:31 -Bumblebee-: Mmmm okay :)
2017-02-20 21:31 Invertable: wait
2017-02-20 21:31 Invertable: just a sec
2017-02-20 21:31 Invertable: let me think about it
2017-02-20 21:31 Invertable: you can write the rest of th emod
2017-02-20 21:32 -Bumblebee-: 00:11:191 (2) - put this between 00:10:669 (1,2) - these, like [https://puu.sh/uc6G7/6bf688621a.jpg this]
2017-02-20 21:34 -Bumblebee-: 00:12:064 (4) - NC
2017-02-20 21:34 -Bumblebee-: 00:12:762 (1) - no NC
2017-02-20 21:35 -Bumblebee-: well, you can do the rest on your own, don't you? 
2017-02-20 21:37 -Bumblebee-: once you're done tell me rofl
2017-02-20 21:41 Invertable: done
2017-02-20 21:41 Invertable: did some of them later too
2017-02-20 21:41 -Bumblebee-: 00:22:180 (1) - NC spam D:
2017-02-20 21:42 -Bumblebee-: mmm
2017-02-20 21:42 Invertable: yeah allready removed it xd
2017-02-20 21:42 -Bumblebee-: 00:21:483 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - you can do a penthagon here
2017-02-20 21:42 -Bumblebee-: it would be great!
2017-02-20 21:43 Invertable: are you a devil xd
2017-02-20 21:43 Invertable: Done
2017-02-20 21:43 -Bumblebee-: ahahahaha
2017-02-20 21:43 -Bumblebee-: mine are just suggestions :P
2017-02-20 21:44 Invertable: i know just making stupid jokes
2017-02-20 21:44 Invertable: wait
2017-02-20 21:44 Invertable: i didnt understand
2017-02-20 21:44 Invertable: pentagon
2017-02-20 21:44 Invertable: with what circles
2017-02-20 21:44 -Bumblebee-: wait, let me show you
2017-02-20 21:44 Invertable: oki
2017-02-20 21:47 -Bumblebee-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7380563
2017-02-20 21:47 -Bumblebee-: well, you can improve it ofc
2017-02-20 21:47 -Bumblebee-: maybe with less DS
2017-02-20 21:49 Invertable: yeah when i clicked on circles that you pasted here i got random circles on 30 sec of the map
2017-02-20 21:49 Invertable: i was like wtf
2017-02-20 21:50 -Bumblebee-: 01:28:459 (3,3) - stack
2017-02-20 21:50 -Bumblebee-: ahahahahah
2017-02-20 21:50 -Bumblebee-: if you don't want to, don't do it :P
2017-02-20 21:51 -Bumblebee-: 01:49:041 (1,9) - same
2017-02-20 21:52 -Bumblebee-: 02:12:762 (1,3) - ^
2017-02-20 21:52 -Bumblebee-: mmm never mind about the last one
2017-02-20 21:52 Invertable: yeah
2017-02-20 21:52 Invertable: xd
2017-02-20 21:52 -Bumblebee-: 02:43:808 (1,3) - STACK THIS
2017-02-20 21:53 -Bumblebee-: MUAHAHAHA
2017-02-20 21:53 -Bumblebee-: (that's the laughing of a devil :P)
2017-02-20 21:54 -Bumblebee-: the rest seems good, nice work, i love it!

Hope it helped

MikasaSerket

520 posts

Joined December 2014

MikasaSerket 2017-02-24T04:50:52+00:00

Finished with the hitsounds, to be honest, the hitsounds remain consistent throughout so I just copied them down from the final difficulty. The same samples were used.
https://puu.sh/uhlhb/324b6adad0.osz
You can delete your version and replace it with this one, Then update the beatmap (Nothing has changed about it except the hitsounds)
or
https://puu.sh/uhlph/84d7bdb872.zip
You can individually replace the .osu with the ones in this .zip folder.

Please call me back if there is anything that needs to be fixed, I did this rather quickly and did not have time to double check everything.

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2017-03-02T16:42:07+00:00

Insane : http://puu.sh/ur19J/e6a5dd715f.txt
deppy collabed with me
he mapped first half , i mapped the seccond half

Rad-

595 posts

Joined June 2011

Rad- 2017-03-10T04:06:27+00:00

Hello, from my queue.

General:
- You should change mp3, 128kbps isn't really acceptable when you can find better ones: here's one from Vell's mapset http://puu.sh/uC0l8/b995768ce0.mp3 Offset is 113
- You can't use 2 combo colors the same, it's confusing, specially that bright, and also the ranking criteria says this: ''Avoid using combo colors with ~220 luminosity or higher during kiai times. They create bright pulses which can be unpleasant to the eyes.''
- Also make sure to either disable countdown or enable on all difficulties.
- Disable widescreen support on all difficulties
- Add all the mapper's names as tags on all difficulties

Shidz's Easy

01:10:320 (4) - NC for consistency
01:11:366 (1,2) - Switch these NC's
01:14:157 (1) - Remove NC
01:15:901 (4) - NC
01:23:924 (3,1) - Switch these NC's
01:26:715 (3) - NC
01:28:110 (1) - Remove NC
01:29:506 (5) - NC
01:30:901 (1) - Remove NC
01:32:297 (5) - NC
01:33:692 (1) - Remove NC
01:50:436 (1) - This angle seems to be a bit too sharp for an Easy imo
03:49:041 (1) - Too sharp as well
04:00:204 (1) - Sharp as well
I'm just pointing these because these are short sliders with close objects in between them, cuz the rest is fine.

Ataraxia's Normal

Reduce OD to 4
02:22:529 (4) - NC for consistency
04:07:180 (3,1) - Switch these NC's just like you did in 02:25:320 (1,2) -
04:39:971 (2,1) - Switcg these NC's too

Bumblebee's Hard

Increase OD to around 6.5, it felt super easy for me even if i was playing with DT, and also because it balances better between hard and insane
Sorry that's it really D:, this difficulty is already really well done. (and fun too!)

Ren vs. Deppy's Insane

00:42:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1) - Sorry but what is this, how can you even explain this randomness of a pattern that's not even on the hardest difficulty mind you, and the fact that it doesn't even fit the rest of the map as well, definately needs a remap
01:10:058 (1) - This spinner fits so badly here, the fact that whoever started mapping the right before it and then just cut to this mood killer long spinner should continue just mapping the rest.
01:40:669 (1) - make the end of slider one very low volume.
01:42:064 - I know this is a collab and all but this first kiai is so different from the second one (even from the second part of the kiai) that it really doesn't fit, it's like you tried too hard to make it innovative or whatever that it fails to be amusing to play, specially when these 2 sliders are the same 01:49:041 (2,1) - just copy pasted.
02:01:512 (3,1) - Off putting spacing, its just too big and causes easy combo breaks, after such a high velocity slider anyway.
02:03:692 (2) - If you are going to change slider velocity like this then you have to give it a new combo to warn the player of a difference in the incoming pattern. and also why not NC this 02:04:041 (2) - as well.
02:14:506 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't do this, it's a horrible pattern to play and it looks 2010 as well, but it's mostly the spacing that makes it uncomfortable
02:15:552 (1,2) - Not good spacing, just delete circle 2
02:18:954 (3) - Again, this is supposed to be an Insane and you are mapping like an Extra, delete this object
02:21:483 (2,3) - Very bad spacing, delete circle 3
02:23:140 (3) - This spacing would be ok but since i said to delete previous object, you have to delete this one too for consistency
03:21:134 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4) - Nope, don't do it like this, these sudden jumps are absolutely horrible to play, specially on insane when it should be above hard and easier than extra, make it more consistent and avoid these stream jumps.
04:27:238 (2,3,4) - The spacing even for short sliders is too high compared to the rest of the section of the map, consider reducing it or just replacing with a 5 circle stream.

Invellable's Extra

My biggest complain on this map is the fact that this section 00:00:204 - is actally way harder than the rest of the map, in fact the spacings and the velocities are so high that it looks like this is the kiai time for this diff, please consider in reducing it and overall make it easier to fit more to the song, there's really no necessity in mapping all those red ticks here.
02:40:320 (1,2) - It's actually better to switch these combos instead, and you can do it to the rest as well.
03:18:343 (4) - NC
03:20:436 (1) - Instead of this, make this circle the last one so that the jump isn't too awkward and it also helps transitioning to the next pattern.

Plz Enjoy Game

00:44:157 (9) - NC
00:44:855 (1) - Place in a spot a bit less awkward, like a little more above so it doesn't a weird turn on the end of a somewhat straight stream.
01:44:855 (1) - This slider doesn't flow right like this, flipping horizontally and rotating it better could make it work, but i would prefer a different slider shape tbh.
01:50:959 (1) - Remove NC
01:52:529 (1) - Remove NC
01:52:965 (9) - Remove this circle as it has no clear sound to it on the music, it would become just overmap, and then fix spacing
03:13:808 (2) - If you are going to make these sliders have different speeds, add a NC to them to prepare for a difference in the patterns
03:14:855 (3) - Same as before
03:16:599 (6) - Same as before
03:32:820 (1) - Remove NC
03:33:343 (1) - ^
03:34:390 (1) - ^

Hope it helps!

CernTheLion

165 posts

Joined February 2015

CernTheLion 2017-03-10T07:37:27+00:00

Rad- wrote:
Hello, from my queue.

Bumblebee's Hard
Increase OD to around 6.5, it felt super easy for me even if i was playing with DT, and also because it balances better between hard and insane Okay, feels good to me, thanks
Sorry that's it really D:, this difficulty is already really well done. (and fun too!) <3

Hope it helps!

Yeah, it helped. Thanks for modding

Updated diff

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 102064
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:Peace
TitleUnicode:Peace
Artist:Warptech & Soulfy
ArtistUnicode:Warptech & Soulfy
Creator:Invertable
Version:Bumblebee's Hard
Source:
Tags:bass chill calm enjoy happy sleep DnB melodic drum and bass
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CircleSize:4
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Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-03-10T08:16:33+00:00

Q

[Enjoy the peace]
00:03:343 (1) - should be emphasized than 00:02:645 (1,2,3) -
00:21:831 (1,2,3,4,1) - make pentagon?
01:15:901 (3,4,3) - looks bad overlap
01:26:715 (1) - avoid overlap for emphasize
03:01:948 (3,2) - looks bad overlap, too
03:16:599 (6) - ctrl g for better reading.

GL

Vell

359 posts

Joined October 2013

Vell 2017-03-10T09:00:09+00:00

changed all @rad
https://0paste.com/11991
thx

Invertable

522 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Invertable 2017-03-10T13:53:11+00:00

Rad- wrote:
Hello, from my queue.

General:
- You should change mp3, 128kbps isn't really acceptable when you can find better ones: here's one from Vell's mapset http://puu.sh/uC0l8/b995768ce0.mp3 Offset is 113 I did change the MP3 before but idk why it didn t apply offset is the same
- You can't use 2 combo colors the same, it's confusing, specially that bright, and also the ranking criteria says this: ''Avoid using combo colors with ~220 luminosity or higher during kiai times. They create bright pulses which can be unpleasant to the eyes.''Done
- Also make sure to either disable countdown or enable on all difficulties.Done
- Disable widescreen support on all difficultiesDone
- Add all the mapper's names as tags on all difficultiesDone

My biggest complain on this map is the fact that this section 00:00:204 - is actally way harder than the rest of the map, in fact the spacings and the velocities are so high that it looks like this is the kiai time for this diff, please consider in reducing it and overall make it easier to fit more to the song, there's really no necessity in mapping all those red ticks here. I changed first part completely lower the DS and Velocity but second part will stay since im building the tensions plus for that part I'm going for the flow and its easy to play

Plz Enjoy Game
00:44:157 (9) - NC No need for that
00:44:855 (1) - Place in a spot a bit less awkward, like a little more above so it doesn't a weird turn on the end of a somewhat straight stream.Its a 6* map with 172 BPM stream its easy to ss that even for me
01:44:855 (1) - This slider doesn't flow right like this, flipping horizontally and rotating it better could make it work, but i would prefer a different slider shape tbh. Changed
01:50:959 (1) - Remove NC NC here is fine
01:52:529 (1) - Remove NC^
01:52:965 (9) - Remove this circle as it has no clear sound to it on the music, it would become just overmap, and then fix spacing Hitsounds are suporting that stream it fits perfectly
03:13:808 (2) - If you are going to make these sliders have different speeds, add a NC to them to prepare for a difference in the patterns
03:14:855 (3) - Same as before
03:16:599 (6) - Same as beforeChanged it but idk if it was what u thought but i think its fine now
03:32:820 (1) - Remove NC No
03:33:343 (1) - ^Yes
03:34:390 (1) - ^no

Hope it helps! It did

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Enjoy the peace]
00:03:343 (1) - should be emphasized than 00:02:645 (1,2,3) - I Increased the Slider Velocity should be fine i guess
00:21:831 (1,2,3,4,1) - make pentagon? It is a pentagon xd
01:15:901 (3,4,3) - looks bad overlap Changed
01:26:715 (1) - avoid overlap for emphasize Changed
03:01:948 (3,2) - looks bad overlap, tooStacked them
03:16:599 (6) - ctrl g for better reading.Done

GL TY

Ty 4 the mods!!!!!

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2017-03-11T05:12:48+00:00

offset sounds wrong

Invertable

522 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Invertable 2017-03-11T08:08:00+00:00

Shiratoi wrote:
offset sounds wrong

yeah changed MP3 will change it later

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2017-03-11T08:33:01+00:00

@Rad- 03:21:134 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4) -Plays horrible? If you look at streams in deppy's part they are hard also , this is'nt even that much compared to 00:43:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . The maker of the mapset asked for a gimicky diff tho so it is fine . Try to come up with a better argument instead of just saying "plays horrible" next time thanks
04:27:238 (2,3,4) - How does this look high to you . Does http://puu.sh/uDQ7V/a85369986a.jpg look too big to you? not to me , the players dont even have to move their cursor till the end of the sliders and judging by the "visual" spacing, Even normals use higher spacing than this

Ty for checking

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-03-11T08:36:08+00:00

Rad- wrote:
[Ren vs. Deppy's Insane]00:42:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1) - Sorry but what is this, how can you even explain this randomness of a pattern that's not even on the hardest difficulty mind you, and the fact that it doesn't even fit the rest of the map as well, definately needs a remap its not even spaced that bad compared to how big the 1/2sin this map are
01:10:058 (1) - This spinner fits so badly here, the fact that whoever started mapping the right before it and then just cut to this mood killer long spinner should continue just mapping the rest. ya made spinner start at the first downbeat of verse now
01:40:669 (1) - make the end of slider one very low volume. sure
01:42:064 - I know this is a collab and all but this first kiai is so different from the second one (even from the second part of the kiai) that it really doesn't fit, it's like you tried too hard to make it innovative or whatever that it fails to be amusing to play, specially when these 2 sliders are the same 01:49:041 (2,1) - just copy pasted. hello as said in the diff name the mapping style of me and ren are supposed to be distinct and you should be able to tell who mapped which parts. its a gimmick thats perfectly reasonable since this instrumental song is basically looping itself twice so making patterns more variable on 4min song with same rhythm over 2 minutes is better than 1/2 spam then 5x 1/4s over again so its fine
02:01:512 (3,1) - Off putting spacing, its just too big and causes easy combo breaks, after such a high velocity slider anyway. no it wont,
usual 1/4 usage in ranked map are just too low, compared to the 1/2 jumps they use 1/4 can be the same ds as well( or even higher!) but they just make it so u ppl can farm pp off it but thats not how i intended my part to be in this case
02:03:692 (2) - If you are going to change slider velocity like this then you have to give it a new combo to warn the player of a difference in the incoming pattern. and also why not NC this 02:04:041 (2) - as well. in this case the sliders are the same shape and its pretty obvious that u dont have to move cursor much differently from the last slider so in this case nc is pretty much useless here, and the 1/4 after it is pretty much readable since u know, come on now its not that hard to play
02:14:506 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't do this, it's a horrible pattern to play and it looks 2010 as well, but it's mostly the spacing that makes it uncomfortable that doesnt mean its unrankable, also it fits very well with the building up instrument melodies pitch imo
02:15:552 (1,2) - Not good spacing, just delete circle 2 u dont have to follow the slider til very end, its the same with 1/4 kickslider jumps
02:18:954 (3) - Again, this is supposed to be an Insane and you are mapping like an Extra, delete this object thats because extra is just a harder insane diff, the basic structures are pretty much same
02:21:483 (2,3) - Very bad spacing, delete circle 3 what
02:23:140 (3) - This spacing would be ok but since i said to delete previous object, you have to delete this one too for consistency no

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hi-mei

784 posts

Joined June 2014

hi-mei 2017-03-17T01:36:09+00:00

hello, since i got some health problems i wont write too much. basically the map looks clean, you got the thing about basic aesthetics and i wont really focus on that.
i can say that you dont really know what is emphasis and some parts are lacking it and the structure inclined to increase the SR rather than emphasize the music accordingly.

ok sooo
Enjoy the peace
00:06:043 (1,3) - i guess these are too close, uhhh well aesthetics can be improved here as well...
00:08:136 - i dont this this is clickable, i think it shud be the continuation of 00:07:787 (6) - ... you mapped that sound properly here 00:12:322 -
so i think that might be a problem^
uh... i just realized theres another problem... so regarding these whisting sounds i can recommend u to make it as a part of previous slider with changed direction
00:12:496 - this is a pure overmap, i mean, huh, u can overmap some intensive parts rhythm wise, but for calm parts its not ok

00:19:299 (7) - mentioned above
00:20:694 (4,1) - i honestly dont like overlaps, tho the ones u use are kinda acceptable
00:21:740 (1,2,3,4,1) - make this as star? make equal 72 degrees jumps, would be better
00:22:438 (1,2) - i dont like the distance here, should be wider in comparison with prev part
00:25:578 (1,3) - these are too slow, should faster, 1.3x at least. ... 00:21:392 (6) - u are using much high sv here, i dont really understand ur logic with these reverse sliders
00:27:998 - the actual beat start here, lol i was thinking wtf im hearing 2 bets instead of 1
i think it continues in the next sections as well lol
00:30:810 - yea... ;w;
00:34:647 - mentioned slider issue
00:35:345 (4,5,1) - this distance isnt euqal, i mean, the distance between 4,5 shud be like,15% lower than 5,1, but not 160% higher.
yea man, theres some really huge problem with timing in ur map
00:41:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the thing is, the sounds between these notes are euqal, i mean, maybe not precisely equal, but not that much so you are making overmapped jumps, i mnea, huh remove the notes and listen to the music, its so obvious that its fucked up
yea i know everything about structure, emphasis, difficulty spikes etc
honestly, nerf this place
00:43:019 (7,8) - it should not be cross screen
01:09:880 (1,2,3,4) - you know that this stuff plays really hard right? i mean, its really hard for ~15k player to keep it without missing the sliderend.
i think you can make it a bit easier if u ctrl+g each of it 01:10:229 (3,4) -
01:15:461 (1,2,3,4) - same with this, its huh... a bit too spaced

it doesnt make your SR higher if u put sliders wider, sr rises from normal notes, not sliders
maybe i just dislike kicksliders but huh its up to u
01:18:252 - i dont really like this part, cuz 01:18:950 - it shudnt be stream here lol, ij think u can add some reverse sliders. some jumps
you dont have to be 100% precise to music to fuck up the emphasis, cuz the more u emphasise in calm part, the less space u have for emphasis in intense parts

01:20:345 (1,2,3,4) - the diff spread here is bad, the 1,2 are much harder to keep the combo rather than 3,4
01:21:043 - shudnt be stream here
01:22:438 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why its so wide? ;w;
its not kiai, its calm part with increasing tempo
01:25:229 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these are cool, why didnt u mapp them before...
01:31:857 - i dont think it shud be slider end on the drop tick. honestly its undermap
it shud be either slider start or a note.
ok so the following parts are full of emphasis issues:
01:33:950 (3) - strong sound, the spacing 01:33:775 (2,3) - shud be wider than 01:34:124 (4,5) - or 01:33:950 (3,4) -
01:34:299 (5,6,7) - this is fine

01:45:985 (7) - i think stuff like this is overmapped, honestly distance between 01:45:810 - and 01:45:985 - is almost equal to 01:45:985 (7,1) - which is not ok.

so what is emphasis
Emphasis: is a notion that describes how you manipulating the distance between objects, the volume levels, the slider speed and the hitsounds u use.
Consider that distance between strong sound and its previous sound should be big, the opposite shud be applied for weak sounds.
So lets say you have 3 notes, 2 of them are weak and one of them is strong.
1 - weak
2 - strong
3 - weak

the distance between 1,2 should be big (or stacked in some cases)
the distance between 2,3 should be small (or stacked in some cases)

It also aplies to the contrast of the sections with intense movement/melody, and calm movement/melody. So intense parts should have wide spacing between the notes, and calm parts obviously shud have the low spacing between the notes.
thats the logic of emphasis.
It doesnt apply to every map/songs but usually its like that^

01:49:821 (7,8,9) - same applies to this
01:53:135 (1,2,3) - this
etc...

i mean huh this stuff isnt subjective, its basically objective flaws that taking place thru entire map.

and since i cant really write much cuz my hands hurt ill stop here, you can poke me for irc check tomorrow if ill get better

uh im scared to mod more diffs cuz eventually ill be write another book

Invertable

522 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Invertable 2017-03-17T11:12:32+00:00

-himei wrote:
hello, since i got some health problems i wont write too much. basically the map looks clean, you got the thing about basic aesthetics and i wont really focus on that.
i can say that you dont really know what is emphasis and some parts are lacking it and the structure inclined to increase the SR rather than emphasize the music accordingly.

ok sooo
Enjoy the peace
00:06:043 (1,3) - i guess these are too close, uhhh well aesthetics can be improved here as well... Did move it a little bit
00:08:136 - i dont this this is clickable, i think it shud be the continuation of 00:07:787 (6) - ... you mapped that sound properly here 00:12:322 -
so i think that might be a problem^ I think its clickable cause even tho what you are saying makes sence i still won t change that part cause it will ruin the consistency
uh... i just realized theres another problem... so regarding these whisting sounds i can recommend u to make it as a part of previous slider with changed direction
00:12:496 - this is a pure overmap, i mean, huh, u can overmap some intensive parts rhythm wise, but for calm parts its not ok Changed it

00:19:299 (7) - mentioned above ^
00:20:694 (4,1) - i honestly dont like overlaps, tho the ones u use are kinda acceptable Fixed didn t even notice lmao
00:21:740 (1,2,3,4,1) - make this as star? make equal 72 degrees jumps, would be better Ty for the degrees looks perfect now
00:22:438 (1,2) - i dont like the distance here, should be wider in comparison with prev part Its the start of a new pattern that won t affect anything it has planty of time
00:25:578 (1,3) - these are too slow, should faster, 1.3x at least. ... 00:21:392 (6) - u are using much high sv here, i dont really understand ur logic with these reverse slidersChanged that part
00:27:998 - the actual beat start here, lol i was thinking wtf im hearing 2 bets instead of 1
i think it continues in the next sections as well lol
00:30:810 - yea... ;w;Yeah its the timing problem waiting for Fort to come online so he fix it
00:34:647 - mentioned slider issue Same
00:35:345 (4,5,1) - this distance isnt euqal, i mean, the distance between 4,5 shud be like,15% lower than 5,1, but not 160% higher. Fixed it
yea man, theres some really huge problem with timing in ur map I know im waiting for Fort to come online x.x
00:41:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the thing is, the sounds between these notes are euqal, i mean, maybe not precisely equal, but not that much so you are making overmapped jumps, i mnea, huh remove the notes and listen to the music, its so obvious that its fucked up
yea i know everything about structure, emphasis, difficulty spikes etc
honestly, nerf this place Did nerf them but not to much its a lot easier but still i wan t jumps there
00:43:019 (7,8) - it should not be cross screen Its not now
01:09:880 (1,2,3,4) - you know that this stuff plays really hard right? i mean, its really hard for ~15k player to keep it without missing the sliderend.
i think you can make it a bit easier if u ctrl+g each of it 01:10:229 (3,4) - Ok
01:15:461 (1,2,3,4) - same with this, its huh... a bit too spaced This is not too spaced its easy to hit
it doesnt make your SR higher if u put sliders wider, sr rises from normal notes, not sliders
maybe i just dislike kicksliders but huh its up to u I wasnt going for higher SR and i never went for that in this map
01:18:252 - i dont really like this part, cuz 01:18:950 - it shudnt be stream here lol, ij think u can add some reverse sliders. some jumps
you dont have to be 100% precise to music to fuck up the emphasis, cuz the more u emphasise in calm part, the less space u have for emphasis in intense parts Ok i agree with that

01:20:345 (1,2,3,4) - the diff spread here is bad, the 1,2 are much harder to keep the combo rather than 3,4 Its a good flow idk why it would be hard in any way
01:21:043 - shudnt be stream hereDunno why
01:22:438 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why its so wide? ;w; Because music is getting more and more intensier plus even tho its so spaced its easy to read
its not kiai, its calm part with increasing tempo I know but its not that hard
01:25:229 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these are cool, why didnt u mapp them before... They are even harder than the ones before xd
01:31:857 - i dont think it shud be slider end on the drop tick. honestly its undermap Changed
it shud be either slider start or a note.
ok so the following parts are full of emphasis issues:
01:33:950 (3) - strong sound, the spacing 01:33:775 (2,3) - shud be wider than 01:34:124 (4,5) - or 01:33:950 (3,4) -
01:34:299 (5,6,7) - this is fine Done

01:45:985 (7) - i think stuff like this is overmapped, honestly distance between 01:45:810 - and 01:45:985 - is almost equal to 01:45:985 (7,1) - which is not ok. Changed

so what is emphasis
Emphasis: is a notion that describes how you manipulating the distance between objects, the volume levels, the slider speed and the hitsounds u use.
Consider that distance between strong sound and its previous sound should be big, the opposite shud be applied for weak sounds.
So lets say you have 3 notes, 2 of them are weak and one of them is strong.
1 - weak
2 - strong
3 - weak

the distance between 1,2 should be big (or stacked in some cases)
the distance between 2,3 should be small (or stacked in some cases)

It also aplies to the contrast of the sections with intense movement/melody, and calm movement/melody. So intense parts should have wide spacing between the notes, and calm parts obviously shud have the low spacing between the notes.
thats the logic of emphasis.
It doesnt apply to every map/songs but usually its like that^

01:49:821 (7,8,9) - same applies to this
01:53:135 (1,2,3) - this
etc...

i mean huh this stuff isnt subjective, its basically objective flaws that taking place thru entire map.

and since i cant really write much cuz my hands hurt ill stop here, you can poke me for irc check tomorrow if ill get better Hope it will get better soon and yes i will poke you in fue days when il have time so you can finish the rest of the mod but only for this diff cause i think this one will have most of the problems in it

uh im scared to mod more diffs cuz eventually ill be write another book

Ty for the amazing mod and hope you get better soon

PandaHero

662 posts

Joined November 2011

PandaHero 2017-03-18T12:21:57+00:00

HS check as you requested

I decided to pick last diff, analyze it and give you some suggestions.

Enjoy The Peace

1. First of all, I would like to add some soft whistles in this part: 00:00:091 - 00:22:417
You can add it on each clickable object (note or slider head), it will follow guitar sound. Also you may continue add whistles in the next part.
00:22:417 (1) - add finish here.
00:24:160 (4) - I suggest you to add finish here
00:25:904 (5) - add clap on slider's head?
00:26:602 (1) - finish
00:26:951 (2) - finish on slider's head and clap on the slider's end.
00:27:649 (3,4) - add finishes here.
00:28:695 (2) - why you add clap on slider's body? o.o
00:29:393 (3) - I would like to add finish on slider's end.
00:32:532 (2) - add finish
00:33:230 (3,4) - add finishes here
00:34:277 (1) - add finish on slider's head
00:37:067 (2) - ^
00:37:765 (5) - ^
00:34:974 (3,5) - add finish on these notes
00:36:021 (1,2) - ^
00:38:463 (7,1,2) - ^

2. 01:07:067 - 01:29:393
In this part you can add whistles on each 1/2 note. It will follow side melody (I don't know what instrument it is)

01:09:160 (1) - add finish here
01:11:951 (9) - ^
01:18:928 (1) - ^
01:21:718 (1) - add finish on slider's head
01:26:428 (4) - ^
01:26:951 (3) - ^
01:27:300 (4) - ^
01:27:648 (6) - ^
01:27:997 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - finihses party, yay

3. In the next part:
01:30:265 (4) - add finish on slider's head
01:31:660 (6) - ^
01:32:184 (1) - ^ (why you forgot about it :c)
01:35:323 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - finishes party again
01:37:939 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and again
01:39:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I guess you know what you can make here

4. Kiai:
01:42:648 (6) - I would like to remove finish from here, it sounds strange
01:45:439 (4) - ^
01:48:230 (4) - ^
01:53:811 (6) - ^
01:56:602 (4) - ^
01:59:393 (6) - ^
01:50:672 (4) - add clap here
01:51:195 (4) - add finish here
02:14:742 (1) - remove whistle from here
02:14:916 (2) - add whislte here

5. 02:37:765 - 03:00:091
In this part you can add whistles on every clickable object again.
02:38:288 (3) - except this note

6. 03:11:253 - 03:16:835
Here you can add whistles on sliders' head:
03:11:951 (3,4) -
03:13:346 (5,6) -
etc.

7. next kiai time:
Same as above, I dislike finishes on these notes:
03:24:509 (5) -
03:27:299 (4) -
etc.

03:25:207 (1) - add finish
03:28:346 (3) - add clap
03:33:404 (6) - I would like to remove finish from here
03:58:172 (2) - add whistle here

8. Last part:
04:19:625 (1) - add finish on slider's head
04:24:160 (2) - add clap on slider's head

Invertable

522 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Invertable 2017-03-18T12:59:13+00:00

PandaHero wrote:
HS check as you requested

I decided to pick last diff, analyze it and give you some suggestions.

Enjoy The Peace
1. First of all, I would like to add some soft whistles in this part: 00:00:091 - 00:22:417
You can add it on each clickable object (note or slider head), it will follow guitar sound. Also you may continue add whistles in the next part.
00:22:417 (1) - add finish here.
00:24:160 (4) - I suggest you to add finish here
00:25:904 (5) - add clap on slider's head?
00:26:602 (1) - finish
00:26:951 (2) - finish on slider's head and clap on the slider's end.
00:27:649 (3,4) - add finishes here.
00:28:695 (2) - why you add clap on slider's body? o.o
00:29:393 (3) - I would like to add finish on slider's end.
00:32:532 (2) - add finish
00:33:230 (3,4) - add finishes here
00:34:277 (1) - add finish on slider's head
00:37:067 (2) - ^
00:37:765 (5) - ^
00:34:974 (3,5) - add finish on these notes
00:36:021 (1,2) - ^
00:38:463 (7,1,2) - ^

2. 01:07:067 - 01:29:393
In this part you can add whistles on each 1/2 note. It will follow side melody (I don't know what instrument it is)
01:09:160 (1) - add finish here
01:11:951 (9) - ^
01:18:928 (1) - ^
01:21:718 (1) - add finish on slider's head
01:26:428 (4) - ^
01:26:951 (3) - ^
01:27:300 (4) - ^
01:27:648 (6) - ^
01:27:997 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - finihses party, yay

3. In the next part:
01:30:265 (4) - add finish on slider's head
01:31:660 (6) - ^
01:32:184 (1) - ^ (why you forgot about it :c)
01:35:323 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - finishes party again
01:37:939 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and again
01:39:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I guess you know what you can make here

4. Kiai:
01:42:648 (6) - I would like to remove finish from here, it sounds strange
01:45:439 (4) - ^
01:48:230 (4) - ^
01:53:811 (6) - ^
01:56:602 (4) - ^
01:59:393 (6) - ^
01:50:672 (4) - add clap here
01:51:195 (4) - add finish here
02:14:742 (1) - remove whistle from here
02:14:916 (2) - add whislte here

5. 02:37:765 - 03:00:091
In this part you can add whistles on every clickable object again.
02:38:288 (3) - except this note

6. 03:11:253 - 03:16:835
Here you can add whistles on sliders' head:
03:11:951 (3,4) -
03:13:346 (5,6) -
etc.

7. next kiai time:
Same as above, I dislike finishes on these notes:
03:24:509 (5) -
03:27:299 (4) -
etc.

03:25:207 (1) - add finish
03:28:346 (3) - add clap
03:33:404 (6) - I would like to remove finish from here
03:58:172 (2) - add whistle here

8. Last part:
04:19:625 (1) - add finish on slider's head
04:24:160 (2) - add clap on slider's head

Ty Changed everything u said

PandaHero

662 posts

Joined November 2011

PandaHero 2017-03-18T13:10:43+00:00

Invertable wrote:
Ty Changed everything u said

You can also copy your hs from last diff to others by using hs copier, if you want to make your life easier. You can find it here

no kd pls

Inversal

508 posts

Joined November 2014

Inversal 2017-03-18T16:38:47+00:00

NM From my Queue!

[General]

The first thing I have to say is https://puu.sh/uOFqC/4f5c0e98f9.png (This one is on the last diff) Please fix unsnapped objects and tags.

[Ataraxia's Normal]

https://puu.sh/uOFYr/9f7e6c4947.png Please check for the distance snap in normal. And also the unsnapped notes.

01:44:044 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - I don't know the reason why you stacked these notes in the kiai part while other parts don't.
02:52:416 (2) - Why you decided to skip sound at 02:52:765 - ? You should map this to keep consistency with others.
03:02:881 (3) - NC. 4 downbeats it too long for 172 bpm song.
03:08:463 (3) - ^

The rest looks fine

[Bumblebee's Hard]

I suggest you to lower the SV at the intro part. 0.9x rate doesn't make the difference between the intro and the more dense parts.

02:34:974 - This feels like something's missing. Please map this note before beginning the spinner.
03:10:904 (4,5,1) - Please space here like these 03:10:904 (4,5,1) - to be consistent.

This diff looks fine here.

Nice map. GL ranking this

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-03-18T21:00:21+00:00

Inversal wrote:
NM From my Queue!
[Ataraxia's Normal]

https://puu.sh/uOFYr/9f7e6c4947.png Please check for the distance snap in normal. And also the unsnapped notes. Thanks i fix

01:44:044 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - I don't know the reason why you stacked these notes in the kiai part while other parts don't. The reason is because I want to "get accustomed" to the player before putting spaced circles, and to vary my diff, I do not want a normal constant, I want several goals in it, several paths, and this helps the player to keep On the map very well, so he will not go wrong and will pass from the normal level without much effort.

02:52:416 (2) - Why you decided to skip sound at 02:52:765 - ? You should map this to keep consistency with others. if you hear, there as tick here, and its , And it is irrelevant if I were to put some "hitnormal" sound/b]

03:02:881 (3) - NC. 4 downbeats it too long for 172 bpm song. [b]I listen to the song and I feel nothing more than 1/1, if I were to map each sound of this map, I would have to use only 1/2 of it whole, in that part, I see, I feel only 1/1 and nothing more fair They put 1/1

03:08:463 (3) - ^ ^^

thanks for mod

eae men

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polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2017-03-21T05:41:28+00:00

[

General:]

ooo dn'b

[

Easy:]

00:19:277 (1) - this should be a 1/1 slider for better emphasis.
00:19:277 (1) - This goes right through the scorebar. Not a mandatory change but it is a quality issue.
00:22:416 - Some of the beats here could really use some circle emphasis.
[list:1337]00:33:579 (1,2) - ESPECIALLY HERE

00:29:393 (2,1) - Tail of (1) is closer to the tail of (2). Your target audience will be confused as to which side of the slider to play. This issue comes up a lot. Keep in mind helping the beginners' readability is key in Easy modes.

02:22:416 (2,1) - Especially here...

01:41:951 - Kiai is insanely repetitive and boring to play. There's more than one way to map this sounds. Vary it a bit. Those one or two repeat sliders aren't cutting it I'm afraid :/
04:19:625 (1) - Another issue of a riduculous amount of repetition. It's okay to vary every now and then! Branch out, show some creativity!

Overall I think there's a lot of issues with object choice. Circles could have played off some intense build ups to the chorus much better, and I feel they got a bit rejected here. Cricles can be harder to use, but so what? Challenge yourself!

Additionally, I would highly advise you to vary pattern choice. Beginners like consistency, but just like every other audience, they want to have fun. Considering this song has many sounds, I encourage you to go back through and try new things![

Normal:]

00:00:091 (1,2) - Blanket needs work.
00:04:974 (3,4,1) - Man getting cornered sucks. Im glad Im not the only one with this problem lmao
00:10:904 (5,6) - Confusing pattern choice for target audience. Go with another 1/2 slider here. Also, you map the guitar-esque noise here but skip it 00:11:253 (1) - here. Why? I feel this is a case where undermapping doesn't do justice.
00:21:718 (3,4) - I would change this to two half sliders altogether. But I can see that might be a burden. At least unstack these. I actually couldn't read that right away.
00:27:997 (1,3) - Not sure if you were aiming for it, but these aren't symmetrical. (3) is lower.
01:12:649 (1) - I don't like the finishes here. They detract from the slower part of the music. Default soft-hitwhistle sounds much better.
01:27:997 (1,2,3,4) - Sorry, but this is way too hard for your target audience. Simplify this with maybe some slider art, 1/1 slider 1/2 note 1/1 slider, something other than this.
01:30:265 (3) - I normally advise against a pattern like this. But you pulled it off really well! Considering players can click the main beat and land on the weaker snare. Excellent work here!
01:34:974 - Circles would do a far better job at showing increasing intensity here.
[list:1337]03:16:835 - Here too. If you really want to keep this, at least avoid copying and pasting your slider shapes.

01:41:951 - Like easy, your patterns become INSANELY repetitive during the choruses (both of them, yes). This detracts from the fun and makes the chorus boring to play. Go back through and vary your pattern choice. Try some 1/2 repeat sliders, three 1/2 circles, 1/2 slider 1/2 circle, mix it up and keep your player engaged!
01:47:532 (1) - This touches the HP bar. I would consider moving it down for the sake of neatness.
02:15:090 (3,4) - I advised against this earlier, but because the music is so intense, I think it works here. Just thought I'd... clarify... I guess.
02:42:300 (2,3) - Blanket needs work.
02:51:718 (1,2) - ^
03:01:486 (2) - This goes right through your HP bar. Unattractive and hard to read. Perhaps drag every post-break note down and see if that solves it.
04:19:625 (1) - Starts to get really repetitive again ono[

Afteword:]

This song has some amazing composition and all n all was a great listen. But instead of the map complimenting it, I feel it simply copied it. I know I'm being annoying about this, but the repetition of your patterns in easy and normal are really taking a toll on the quality of the map. Please go back through and try to be original and creative! I believe that there is an art to mapping, and I would rather someone try something new and have it not work than never try anything and always succeed. ouo b

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-03-21T17:28:31+00:00

Hi.~ M4M return from my queue.

Since your mapset is quite long, I will mod the top diff only since that's pretty much equal drain to my marathon.

[

General]

Triggered.
Only OD 8.5 on a 6* diff? Could turn it up tbh.
Insane doesn't need AR 9.2, could nerf it to 9.

[

Enjoy the Peace]

00:00:091 - Right off the bat I notice inconsistent overlapping with some of your objects, and it makes this section feel quite randomly placed. Some examples: 00:03:928 (3,4,5) - Only overlap in the pattern and the ones before and after do not overlap here. 00:14:393 (1,3) - Overlap here that is pretty random-looking because it's not done again for a long time, 00:17:881 (3,5) - same for this one except this one just looks quite messy because of how close 3 and 5 are. 00:18:579 (5,6,7) - This overlap is inconsistent in the amount of 7 is overlapped, etc etc.
00:00:614 (3,2) - d
00:11:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really cramped and messy compared to the rest of these sliders, you should use more consistent patterning because the sounds are all the same, the music hasn't changed, yet the patterning is extremely varied and sometimes hard to follow such as this one here. Also I don't think you need the NC on 00:11:951 (1). You seem to like 1>2 jumps so this NC pattern might work better.
00:13:870 (2,3) - d
00:33:928 (2,3,1) - Pretty sudden linear flow if you ask me. Especially considering that 00:34:277 (1,2,3) - is really clumped up together. I get that it's used for emphasis, but there's nothing to emphasize this heavily. The song only changes slightly.
00:39:509 (1,1,1) - Could line these up better.
01:07:067 - Starting from here the map's intensity is way too high for the music imo. Same goes for 03:00:091. The music is relatively soft so there's no reason to have an 8-note high-spaced jump pattern. Streams like 01:08:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be better off as repeats because the sound is quite weak and in the background. 01:09:858 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These sorts of things are used mainly for heavy emphasis, and stuff like this in a calm section of the song doesn't make sense to me. In general this section feels really overdone and you could simplify it a lot to better fit the feel of the music.
01:30:091 (3,4) - This flow is quite... er, unique, for this section as it doesn't seem to have been done previously for these sounds. The slider also creates a passive rhythm that covers the snare, which isn't too great imo.
01:32:881 (4) - Strong sound here also lands on the end - a sound that is clearly stronger than that which the slider starts on.
01:34:974 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam isn't too nice to read on sight because you have to guess where the next note is, which is fine in itself, but the reason I'm pointing this out is because the song is still in buildup, and suddenly you drop all your rhythm density to map the 1/1 drums like at 03:16:835 as well. What you could do instead is map with sliders which would be a lot more appropriate because the song is still at the same if not a higher intensity.
01:40:556 (1,2) - These could be the same slider, would look nicer tbh.
01:42:823 (8) - This rhythm is really weird to play, because holding a sound that ends, only for the slider to end on the start of another sound just really doesn't make sense to me. Uhh, it's also kinda weird because you do actually have the snare clickable in some areas of the map such as: 01:46:486 (3) - 01:49:974 (8) - 01:50:672 (4) - 01:51:370 (5) - 01:52:067 (3) - etc etc. I think having a more active rhythm like these notes support would better reflect the song intensity in the kiai.
01:51:108 - Skipping a 1/4 here, you could cover it with a kickslider if you wanted to.
01:51:718 (1,2,3,4) - Overlap could be cleaner. Try to overlap 1 and 3 the same way you do 2 and 4.
01:55:381 (8,9,1) - More weird flow that hasn't been done before also a slider head stacked under a slider tail which can be unexpected to some people. Not a massive problem, but the flow kind of is.
02:01:399 (8,1) - This will almost certainly be misread because of the sudden 2 tick gap between 02:01:137 (7,8). What might work better is if you made 7 a kickslider or something, just anything to make this gap a bit more readable. You could even stack 8,1 and it would work a bit better albeit isn't the most reliable method.
02:02:532 (1,1,1) - NC spam seems a bit unnecessary imo since nothing really is here to emphasize.
02:04:277 - So the pp jump section of the map. I have a couple of things to point out about this section in general. Let's start with the patterning. There are some areas with drastically different patterning for a generally similar set of sounds. For example: 02:07:067 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so this part is really distinctly patterned as opposed to other parts like 02:05:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). There's no musical change to really validate a change in patterning like this. Secondly, there's a major flow change in the map at around 02:11:253 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - where you map squares. This also seems quite random as you don't map squares anywhere else, and even if you did it wouldn't really make sense considering the song is quite repetitive here. I would recommend going over these patterns and reworking them so that they follow a more consistent concept - even if that concept is sharp angled jumps with comfortable flow at least it seems like there's something there. Lastly, 02:20:846 (4,5,1) - this kind of throws me off every time I listen to it. The song and sound that you're mapping are still going on but you decide to drop your rhythm density to map the 4/1 drums that really lowers the intensity really quickly and it seems very sudden when playing. For a visual representation of this decrease I suggest taking a look at this picture from this site. I would suggest mapping more sliders to at least keep the feeling that the song is still going on (which it is) and it would still provide a more reasonable decrease in intensity.
02:26:253 (1) - This isn't quaver. On a more serious note this is quite intense for such a soft section, I've gone over this type of stuff before, pretty much the same thing here. Would make more sense to map repeats instead because then at least you're covering all the sounds while still not clicking very much.
02:45:439 (6,7) - Kind of unfair jump tbh it's really big compared to the rest of them at 3.09x, would recommend nerfing.
03:11:253 - You map the same phrase 4 times with different rhythms, it feels very inconsistent and I would recommend keeping similar clicking emphasis for this phrase.
04:20:410 - Skipping this 1/4 for some reason - it's clearly audible yet you decided not to map it. It's consistently not mapped, but that doesn't really mean it's a good rhythm to use since it leaves the player expecting another 1/4, but it doesn't come. That said, you could easily fix this by changing the 04:20:323 (4) - to a kickslider in every case, and it will provide, at the very least, passive rhythm.
04:22:067 (6) - This could be a slider in every case as well, because the song keeps going on in intensity and there's no massive gap. It's not a huge deal, but if you want to have this pause, you should probably stack this note on the slider head of the next one to kill movement too.
04:34:451 (5) - You NC spammed all the other 4/1 things so you could at least do it here. If you un-nc spammed them, uh.. do what you did instead here then too. You could actually NC 04:40:556 (5) - this because the rhythm changes to 1/1.
04:41:777 - The song actually ends here, so you should probably move 04:41:951 (1) - to reflect that.
The issues I pointed out before pretty much cover the rest of the difficulty. I would recommend really looking over this and ironing out any inconsistencies - try making more consistent rhythms, patterning, flow, and the works. The top diff usually makes the set, so the standards for top diffs are a lot higher (as you can see because I only modded this diff)

Overall top diff can obviously be improved, that's fine tbh, just get more mods on it. I didn't really look at the rest of the diffs but for the most part they seem ok.

Good luck.~

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2017-03-22T00:46:29+00:00

PolkaMocha wrote:
[Easy:]
00:19:277 (1) - this should be a 1/1 slider for better emphasis. i think the little wave slider compliments the sound enough
00:19:277 (1) - This goes right through the scorebar. Not a mandatory change but it is a quality issue. did u highlight the wrong thing xD
00:22:416 - Some of the beats here could really use some circle emphasis. no i really think this is a good way to map it for an easy difficulty. the beats are being held here, so to represent it, i use sliders. all the sliders end and start on a specific beat so there shouldnt be problems with the rhythm, especially since this is one of the more prominent beats in this section
[list:1337]00:33:579 (1,2) - ESPECIALLY HERE
00:29:393 (2,1) - Tail of (1) is closer to the tail of (2). Your target audience will be confused as to which side of the slider to play. This issue comes up a lot. Keep in mind helping the beginners' readability is key in Easy modes. i dont think readability is problem with these things. beginners tend to hit the first note they see, so since the slider head appears first, theyll naturally aim for it (especially since there's a break in between)
02:22:416 (2,1) - Especially here...
01:41:951 - Kiai is insanely repetitive and boring to play. There's more than one way to map this sounds. Vary it a bit. Those one or two repeat sliders aren't cutting it I'm afraid :/ in my opinion, the kiai is more emphasized compared to the rest of the map. there is a more intense rhythm compared to the rest of the map and i think its mapped appropriately. the repeat sliders only appear once in every kiai part to show some variety so if there's an emphasis issue, it should be fine. its a bit hard to emphasize the easy difficulty with DS so im not too sure ;w;

Overall I think there's a lot of issues with object choice. Circles could have played off some intense build ups to the chorus much better, and I feel they got a bit rejected here. Cricles can be harder to use, but so what? Challenge yourself! guess im a slider person xD

Additionally, I would highly advise you to vary pattern choice. Beginners like consistency, but just like every other audience, they want to have fun. Considering this song has many sounds, I encourage you to go back through and try new things!

no changes from me, sorry, but thank you! the mod was descriptive and nice but this is just my personal opinion since the song is really repetitive imo (also, sorry if i sounded offensive, i really didnt mean anything)
gidz:
04:19:625 (1) - Another issue of a riduculous amount of repetition. It's okay to vary every now and then! Branch out, show some creativity!

Invertable

522 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Invertable 2017-03-22T13:53:50+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi.~ M4M return from my queue.

Since your mapset is quite long, I will mod the top diff only since that's pretty much equal drain to my marathon.

[ General]
Triggered.

Only OD 8.5 on a 6* diff? Could turn it up tbh.

Insane doesn't need AR 9.2, could nerf it to 9.
All done but I put Ar 9.1 I don t want it to be 9 cause its a 5.5* map

[ Enjoy the Peace]
00:00:091 - Right off the bat I notice inconsistent overlapping with some of your objects, and it makes this section feel quite randomly placed. Some examples: 00:03:928 (3,4,5) - Only overlap in the pattern and the ones before and after do not overlap here. 00:14:393 (1,3) - Overlap here that is pretty random-looking because it's not done again for a long time, 00:17:881 (3,5) - same for this one except this one just looks quite messy because of how close 3 and 5 are. 00:18:579 (5,6,7) - This overlap is inconsistent in the amount of 7 is overlapped, etc etc.

00:00:614 (3,2) - d

00:11:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really cramped and messy compared to the rest of these sliders, you should use more consistent patterning because the sounds are all the same, the music hasn't changed, yet the patterning is extremely varied and sometimes hard to follow such as this one here. Also I don't think you need the NC on 00:11:951 (1). You seem to like 1>2 jumps so this NC pattern might work better.

00:13:870 (2,3) - d

00:33:928 (2,3,1) - Pretty sudden linear flow if you ask me. Especially considering that 00:34:277 (1,2,3) - is really clumped up together. I get that it's used for emphasis, but there's nothing to emphasize this heavily. The song only changes slightly.

00:39:509 (1,1,1) - Could line these up better.

01:07:067 - Starting from here the map's intensity is way too high for the music imo. Same goes for 03:00:091. The music is relatively soft so there's no reason to have an 8-note high-spaced jump pattern. Streams like 01:08:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be better off as repeats because the sound is quite weak and in the background. 01:09:858 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These sorts of things are used mainly for heavy emphasis, and stuff like this in a calm section of the song doesn't make sense to me. In general this section feels really overdone and you could simplify it a lot to better fit the feel of the music.Imo this part is actually the only place in map that im sure its mapped right cause even tho they are streams and jumps they are not that hard the flow is nice and its easy to play and the second part is little bit harder since the music gets intense. I wont change this part

01:30:091 (3,4) - This flow is quite... er, unique, for this section as it doesn't seem to have been done previously for these sounds. The slider also creates a passive rhythm that covers the snare, which isn't too great imo.

01:32:881 (4) - Strong sound here also lands on the end - a sound that is clearly stronger than that which the slider starts on.

01:34:974 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam isn't too nice to read on sight because you have to guess where the next note is, which is fine in itself, but the reason I'm pointing this out is because the song is still in buildup, and suddenly you drop all your rhythm density to map the 1/1 drums like at 03:16:835 as well. What you could do instead is map with sliders which would be a lot more appropriate because the song is still at the same if not a higher intensity.

01:40:556 (1,2) - These could be the same slider, would look nicer tbh.No it wouldn t

01:42:823 (8) - This rhythm is really weird to play, because holding a sound that ends, only for the slider to end on the start of another sound just really doesn't make sense to me. Uhh, it's also kinda weird because you do actually have the snare clickable in some areas of the map such as: 01:46:486 (3) - 01:49:974 (8) - 01:50:672 (4) - 01:51:370 (5) - 01:52:067 (3) - etc etc. I think having a more active rhythm like these notes support would better reflect the song intensity in the kiai.Remapped

01:51:108 - Skipping a 1/4 here, you could cover it with a kickslider if you wanted to.

01:51:718 (1,2,3,4) - Overlap could be cleaner. Try to overlap 1 and 3 the same way you do 2 and 4. Didn t notice it was overlapped cause i wanted to avoid it for the emphasize ty for showing me

01:55:381 (8,9,1) - More weird flow that hasn't been done before also a slider head stacked under a slider tail which can be unexpected to some people. Not a massive problem, but the flow kind of is. I really don t see a problem here its a really good flow

02:01:399 (8,1) - This will almost certainly be misread because of the sudden 2 tick gap between 02:01:137 (7,8). What might work better is if you made 7 a kickslider or something, just anything to make this gap a bit more readable. You could even stack 8,1 and it would work a bit better albeit isn't the most reliable method.

02:02:532 (1,1,1) - NC spam seems a bit unnecessary imo since nothing really is here to emphasize.

02:04:277 - So the pp jump section of the map.Exactly I have a couple of things to point out about this section in general. Let's start with the patterning. There are some areas with drastically different patterning for a generally similar set of sounds. For example: 02:07:067 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so this part is really distinctly patterned as opposed to other parts like 02:05:672 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). There's no musical change to really validate a change in patterning like this. Secondly, there's a major flow change in the map at around 02:11:253 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - where you map squares. This also seems quite random as you don't map squares anywhere else, and even if you did it wouldn't really make sense considering the song is quite repetitive here. I would recommend going over these patterns and reworking them so that they follow a more consistent concept - even if that concept is sharp angled jumps with comfortable flow at least it seems like there's something there. Lastly, 02:20:846 (4,5,1) - this kind of throws me off every time I listen to it. The song and sound that you're mapping are still going on but you decide to drop your rhythm density to map the 4/1 drums that really lowers the intensity really quickly and it seems very sudden when playing. For a visual representation of this decrease I suggest taking a look at this picture from this site. I would suggest mapping more sliders to at least keep the feeling that the song is still going on (which it is) and it would still provide a more reasonable decrease in intensity.I won t put any sliders its the top diff and jumps are fine i look thro it again and fix fue jumps but I won t change everything

02:26:253 (1) - This isn't quaver.It isnt but i like this part if it becomes a big problem il change it but i think its not overmaped or anything i think its perfect On a more serious note this is quite intense for such a soft section, I've gone over this type of stuff before, pretty much the same thing here. Would make more sense to map repeats instead because then at least you're covering all the sounds while still not clicking very much.

02:45:439 (6,7) - Kind of unfair jump tbh it's really big compared to the rest of them at 3.09x, would recommend nerfing.

03:11:253 - You map the same phrase 4 times with different rhythms, it feels very inconsistent and I would recommend keeping similar clicking emphasis for this phrase. Its 2 different rhythms not 4 and i think it fits perfect

04:20:410 - Skipping this 1/4 for some reason - it's clearly audible yet you decided not to map it. It's consistently not mapped, but that doesn't really mean it's a good rhythm to use since it leaves the player expecting another 1/4, but it doesn't come. That said, you could easily fix this by changing the 04:20:323 (4) - to a kickslider in every case, and it will provide, at the very least, passive rhythm.There is no need for that its not important sound

04:22:067 (6) - This could be a slider in every case as well, because the song keeps going on in intensity and there's no massive gap. It's not a huge deal, but if you want to have this pause, you should probably stack this note on the slider head of the next one to kill movement too.To me that sounds weird plus it like it that way

04:34:451 (5) - You NC spammed all the other 4/1 things so you could at least do it here. If you un-nc spammed them, uh.. do what you did instead here then too. You could actually NC 04:40:556 (5) - this because the rhythm changes to 1/1.

04:41:777 - The song actually ends here, so you should probably move 04:41:951 (1) - to reflect that.

The issues I pointed out before pretty much cover the rest of the difficulty. I would recommend really looking over this and ironing out any inconsistencies - try making more consistent rhythms, patterning, flow, and the works. The top diff usually makes the set, so the standards for top diffs are a lot higher (as you can see because I only modded this diff)

Overall top diff can obviously be improved, that's fine tbh, just get more mods on it. I didn't really look at the rest of the diffs but for the most part they seem ok.

Good luck.~

TY for the mod

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,361 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2017-03-27T13:40:46+00:00

From my queue.

Sorry dont have much to say so not going to mod this.
Just feel the Normal is a bit too hard.

Anyway great song!

Good luck! (Ofc please do not kudosu this post.)

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2017-03-27T14:27:24+00:00

[Ren vs. Deppy]

00:43:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - as cool as this is, please dont use spaced streams in an insane lol
01:09:945 (1) - this spinner can start at 01:15:439 - as that's where the gradually increasing sound begins.
01:29:218 (4,5,1) - fix stack, its messed up
01:44:742 (1) - thats a penis

lol im not sure what's going on with these slider arts but it all feels pretty undermapped to me. Guess it's kinda cool tho

02:01:399 (3,1) - the spaced 1/4 here is pretty mean, it definitely tripped me up
03:21:370 (2,3,4,5,1) - whats with all these stream jumps its only an insane ;-;
04:27:125 (2,3,4) - literally the only time you use kicksliders for the hihats lol

nice diff tbh, I liked the use of ctrl+shift+s and the second set of kiais were fun.

[Bumblebee]

00:08:114 (6,1) - could have better visual flow here, just for aesthetics, this looks kinda bad atm
00:11:951 (3) - ctrl+j shape? for flow
00:41:951 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole thing feels a bet excessive for hard. Possible nerf the jump to 00:42:649 (1) -
i suggest nerfing some of these patterns with 8 or so hit circles in a row, that can be pretty challenging for a hard player to pull off. Also would fit the spread better that way
02:02:881 - circle? 03:44:742 - same
02:12:300 (5,6,1) - flow could be cleaner here
03:10:904 (4,5,1) - space normally, weird reduction of spacing here

[Ataraxia]

01:23:811 (1) - DS
02:15:090 (3,4,1) - could have smoother flow
02:42:300 (2,3) - blanket would look a lot better
03:02:881 (1) - DS

neat diff

[Shidz]

01:34:974 (1) - make this wave more symmetrical? looks kinda ugly to me
02:06:370 (4,1) - blanket? or at least make 1 symmetrical over 4's axis

nice job

gl!

Wishkey

774 posts

Joined September 2011

Wishkey 2017-03-28T16:39:27+00:00

Yow!

Easy

00:15:788 (3,1) - could control +g the rythm here so you catch those 3 strong sounds in a slider at this and before 00:16:660 - it goes well with your rythm choice at 00:13:346 (3) - imo since they're not empty aswell
can delete the green line here at 04:47:445 - since it serves no purpose atm
04:40:556 (2,3) - not really a fan of skipping the middle here since you mapped this in other parts aswell, if you want to end on a circle I'd recommend changing 2 into a return slider so you have all the drums mapped

Normal

00:44:742 - C3 finish would fit nice here with the cymbals, C1 finish sounds a bit too out of place here imo
02:03:928 (2,1) - flow could be improved here, its kinda harsh atm maybe something along the line of this to keep the blanket?
02:25:207 (1) - I think you can afford to make this 2 circles so its a bit more intense to reflect the music, since your prev rythms are harder then 5x 1/1 circles imo
02:26:602 (1) - thoughts about making this a C1 finish instead? it doesnt really have the cymbals unlike the prev white ticks so something different hitsounding wise to reflect that is an option here
03:38:637 (3,1) - for some smoother transition here
04:08:288 - kinda feel you could map this, its a pretty distuigishd drum towardds the end and you've harder rythms in the kiai aswell so, could go for a rythm like this for example
04:41:951 (1) - not really such a strong note, seems the song kinda 'ends' on the prev red note, so I think its better to either add a spinner or just delete this note so its mapped passivly, you're the only one that mapped it actively so stood out a bit

Insane

00:43:957 (8) - Personally I found the angles more confortable to play when this was mirrored with the placement of 00:43:172 (8) - when I tested, might be too much of jump tho for this diff, but just leaving it to see your thoughts
01:18:230 (1,2,1) - NC in sets of 3? the added NC at the second 1 seems kinda just there to make it more difficult for no reason tbh, the 1/1 is pretty readable and sets of 3 goes better with the music imo
02:03:579 (2) - could NC this, ealier you kinda introduced the sv changes with NC's for those 2 similar sliders so might be misread here
02:14:742 (4) - only one .1 difference compared to the rest .2 pretty hard pattern so maybe worth fixing for hr players
04:20:149 (2,3,4,5) - 04:27:125 (2,3,4) - could maybe bring something alogn the line of this back after 04:27:125 (2,3,4) - aswell since now it just seems a bit odd that these 2 standout while the final 6 streams are just streams unless theres a reason for it, dunno who did what in the collab so might be intentional
Cool stuff!

Invell extra

Intro; personally I liked what you did more in the Peace and mind diff, the intro is so chill yet in terms of playing/density the intro in this diff is quite high which contrasts a bit with the music, like take the movement and intensity from this 00:14:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - for example, doesnt really reflect the music thats still building up at a slow pace, If you see that part in the Peace and mind diff its less dense and a lot easier flow which fits the music alot better. I'd really get some more opinions on the intro since its what immidiatly stood out while playing for me
00:24:509 (3,4,5) - same visual distance yet no indication of that sudden rythm speed up, something NC wise like this could fix that for example without changin the placement
00:29:044 - Kinda odd to leave this unmapped while mapping 00:28:346 (2) - I'd either map it or delete 00:28:346 (2) - if you want to focus on the drum so its consistent rythm wise
00:44:742 (1) - could make a little flow break like you did at 00:43:956 (8,1) - to make it stand out more since its the finisher
01:07:067 (1,3,4) - minor but could you make the visual distance here equal with the rest, makes it look a lot cleaner and more connected with eachother like you can see for example 01:07:416 (3,4,1,4) - visual gap is bigger between 3-4
01:32:881 (3,4) - 01:30:091 (3,4) - since your jumps are quite similar in this section I kinda expected this rythm to be the same aswell, felt a little of to me to start the next jump section on an extra note
01:34:974 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Don't really see the need for NC spam here, for a 5.5 diff just 12341234 should do the trick
02:16:137 (1,2,3,4) - can you nerf this a bit, stood out from all the rest of the 'chiller' parts in terms of playability, unexpected speedup :d
02:23:811 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - again with the NC spam seems a bit odd, follow lines between them would really benefit
Pretty good diff, main point is definitly the rythm density of the intro tho rest seems good really liking the second half whoever made it!

Enjoy the Peace

00:22:765 (2,1) - can you make the visual ds here a bit bigger so its more noticable for the 1/2 gap compared to the 1/4, easy fix to move 00:23:114 (1,2,3) - up for instance so 00:22:765 (2,1,2) - these visual gaps are the same for aesthetics for example
00:25:904 (5) - why not place these here-ish so you dont have these direction changes so fast after eachother in a chill part of the song
01:29:393 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - had a hard time to figure out what you were really folllowing here while playing, main part of this 01:32:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like the sliders seems a bit random for the latter part like (3) starting on a relativly weak beat compared to the rest in the section, something along the lines of this rythm would be better for example imo
02:01:399 (8,1) - looks too much like a 1/2 gap (broke here rip), I'd either increase the ds here more or make it slightly out of flow so indicate a 'weird' rythm or you could amke 02:01:137 (7) - a 1/2 slider
02:26:602 (1) - awesome part!
02:45:091 (5,6) - could you make the visible blanket gap more in line with rest of the blankets, makes it look a lot cleaner and more connected
02:55:556 (3,4,5,6) - could clean this up a bit in terms of visual ds and these slight overlaps like 02:55:556 (3,5) -
03:10:468 (8,1,2) - might be hard to judge the ds increase when going for full overlaps, maybe rotate the circle scream slightly so (2) becomes more visible
03:22:328 (8,1) - reduce spacing a bit overlap is off with the rest of the stream
03:11:951 (3,2) - 03:15:091 (4,3) - could stack on the tails here similar to 03:15:614 (2,5) - since I noticed a lot in the diff is build around these types of stacks so why not do it here aswell

Nice job guys gl with ranked!

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2017-03-29T10:20:45+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
[Ren vs. Deppy]

03:21:370 (2,3,4,5,1) - whats with all these stream jumps its only an insane ;-; ya its close to 5 star tho and deppy asked me to make my part a bit gimicky at some parts
04:27:125 (2,3,4) - literally the only time you use kicksliders for the hihats lol mayb cuz i was bored of doing too many 5 circles. i will prolly change but keeping for now

gl!

Wishkey wrote:
Yow!
Insane
04:20:149 (2,3,4,5) - 04:27:125 (2,3,4) - could maybe bring something alogn the line of this back after 04:27:125 (2,3,4) - aswell since now it just seems a bit odd that these 2 standout while the final 6 streams are just streams unless theres a reason for it, dunno who did what in the collab so might be intentional same reply as hobbes , i wanted to have a lil variation cuz it can get boring sometime, but i will consider
Cool stuff!
Nice job guys gl with ranked!

ty guys~

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-03-29T17:13:36+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
[Ren vs. Deppy]

00:43:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - as cool as this is, please dont use spaced streams in an insane lol fine fixed xd
01:09:945 (1) - this spinner can start at 01:15:439 - as that's where the gradually increasing sound begins. ya i was just being lazy anyways
01:29:218 (4,5,1) - fix stack, its messed up yes
01:44:742 (1) - thats a penis its not LOL but if u see it like that other ppl might too so i guess fixed

lol im not sure what's going on with these slider arts but it all feels pretty undermapped to me. Guess it's kinda cool tho it wasnt even a kiai at first lol so and i wanna map this so it s a bit different than common 1/2 1/4 mapping xd

Wishkey wrote:
Insane
00:43:957 (8) - Personally I found the angles more confortable to play when this was mirrored with the placement of 00:43:172 (8) - when I tested, might be too much of jump tho for this diff, but just leaving it to see your thoughts lol changed it from hobbes mod
01:18:230 (1,2,1) - NC in sets of 3? the added NC at the second 1 seems kinda just there to make it more difficult for no reason tbh, the 1/1 is pretty readable and sets of 3 goes better with the music imo ya its techincal mistake fixed
02:03:579 (2) - could NC this, ealier you kinda introduced the sv changes with NC's for those 2 similar sliders so might be misread here fine goddammit ill change this
02:14:742 (4) - only one .1 difference compared to the rest .2 pretty hard pattern so maybe worth fixing for hr players nah this is fine tbh for the sake of aesthetics

thanks for mods

upd

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Tags:bass chill calm enjoy happy sleep DnB melodic drum and bass Vell Ataraxia Deppyforce DeRandom Otaku Bumblebee Shiratoi Gidz
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CernTheLion

165 posts

Joined February 2015

CernTheLion 2017-03-30T18:14:20+00:00

Inversal wrote:
NM From my Queue!

[Bumblebee's Hard]

I suggest you to lower the SV at the intro part. 0.9x rate doesn't make the difference between the intro and the more dense parts. Sorry, but I want to keep that part at 0.9x since it's a quiet part, I've increased it further on..

02:34:974 - This feels like something's missing. Please map this note before beginning the spinner. That spinner is actually emphasizing the BG sound, not the beats
03:10:904 (4,5,1) - Please space here like these 03:10:904 (4,5,1) - to be consistent. Ehm...what??

This diff looks fine here. Thank you!

Nice map. GL ranking this

Sorry for my huge delay, but I was busy irl, anyway, I didn't change my diff since it was good for me, except for the last note. I'll try to catch you in game further. Also thanks for modding

Hobbes2 wrote:
[Bumblebee]

00:08:114 (6,1) - could have better visual flow here, just for aesthetics, this looks kinda bad atm Ok
00:11:951 (3) - ctrl+j shape? for flow The flow isn't so bad imo
00:41:951 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole thing feels a bet excessive for hard. Possible nerf the jump to 00:42:649 (1) -
i suggest nerfing some of these patterns with 8 or so hit circles in a row, that can be pretty challenging for a hard player to pull off. Also would fit the spread better that way Reduced a bit
02:02:881 - circle? 03:44:742 - same No and no
02:12:300 (5,6,1) - flow could be cleaner here The flow is good .-.
03:10:904 (4,5,1) - space normally, weird reduction of spacing here Ok

gl!

Thanks for modding!
Here's the diff (applied as well your friend's mod)

Le Code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
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Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2017-03-31T17:19:03+00:00

PolkaMocha wrote:

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00:00:091 (1,2) - Blanket needs work. ok
00:04:974 (3,4,1) - Man getting cornered sucks. Im glad Im not the only one with this problem lmao so, i don't see any problem, its perfect playable and readable
00:10:904 (5,6) - Confusing pattern choice for target audience. Go with another 1/2 slider here. Also, you map the guitar-esque noise here but skip it 00:11:253 (1) - here. Why? I feel this is a case where undermapping doesn't do justice. switch to 1/2 , and in just follow the evident song moment, there's no reason to follow a guitar if a 1/1 represents this moment better
00:21:718 (3,4) - I would change this to two half sliders altogether. But I can see that might be a burden. At least unstack these. I actually couldn't read that right away. sure, i take this
00:27:997 (1,3) - Not sure if you were aiming for it, but these aren't symmetrical. (3) is lower. wow, done, now its symmetrical aim
01:12:649 (1) - I don't like the finishes here. They detract from the slower part of the music. Default soft-hitwhistle sounds much better. in not done the hitsound of my diff, so i will leave like the mapper want
01:27:997 (1,2,3,4) - Sorry, but this is way too hard for your target audience. Simplify this with maybe some slider art, 1/1 slider 1/2 note 1/1 slider, something other than this. this is suppose to be a "hard normal" so i will let this patten , i don't see why makes bezier in 1/2 ticks in a normal
01:30:265 (3) - I normally advise against a pattern like this. But you pulled it off really well! Considering players can click the main beat and land on the weaker snare. Excellent work here! hahaha thanks <3
01:34:974 - Circles would do a far better job at showing increasing intensity here. Sure, letting 2 slider 1/2 and 4 circles
[list:1337]03:16:835 - Here too. If you really want to keep this, at least avoid copying and pasting your slider shapes.if is a strong moment besides 01:34:974 (1) - in do 1 slider 1/2 and 6 circles
01:41:951 - Like easy, your patterns become INSANELY repetitive during the choruses (both of them, yes). This detracts from the fun and makes the chorus boring to play. Go back through and vary your pattern choice. Try some 1/2 repeat sliders, three 1/2 circles, 1/2 slider 1/2 circle, mix it up and keep your player engaged! its a good mention, but i will decline, because a normal diff its not a diff to "engage" a player, even if i want, its dangerous to make hards patten on a normal if the objective is to be a simple diff just for training to hard, if you mention this in a insane, there is more aceitable .
01:47:532 (1) - This touches the HP bar. I would consider moving it down for the sake of neatness. sure, lowed
02:15:090 (3,4) - I advised against this earlier, but because the music is so intense, I think it works here. Just thought I'd... clarify... I guess. hehe sure
02:42:300 (2,3) - Blanket needs work. ok done
02:51:718 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:01:486 (2) - This goes right through your HP bar. Unattractive and hard to read. Perhaps drag every post-break note down and see if that solves it. fixed
04:19:625 (1) - Starts to get really repetitive again ono music end, repetitve and simple pattens's end :p

thanks for mod

[quote="Hobbes2"
[Ataraxia]

01:23:811 (1) - DS fixed
02:15:090 (3,4,1) - could have smoother flow i have do something related
02:42:300 (2,3) - blanket would look a lot better ok done
03:02:881 (1) - DS done

neat diff

nice job

gl![/quote]

thanks for mod

[quote="Wishkey":1337]Yow!

Normal

00:44:742 - C3 finish would fit nice here with the cymbals, C1 finish sounds a bit too out of place here imo to be since i don't see so much diference :p, i will let the drum
02:03:928 (2,1) - flow could be improved here, its kinda harsh atm maybe something along the line of this to keep the blanket?
i switch the circle to a 1/2 and fix the blanket
02:25:207 (1) - I think you can afford to make this 2 circles so its a bit more intense to reflect the music, since your prev rythms are harder then 5x 1/1 circles imo i don't think the player will understand 5 circle like the flow i made, i let the slider just to "warning" the player to prepare for continuous beat (circles xd)
02:26:602 (1) - thoughts about making this a C1 finish instead? it doesnt really have the cymbals unlike the prev white ticks so something different hitsounding wise to reflect that is an option here it's just representation , its not necessary to use a different cymbal each moment, its only necessary a hitsound to be a cymbal for all music's cymbals
03:38:637 (3,1) - for some smoother transition here
not necesary
04:08:288 - kinda feel you could map this, its a pretty distuigishd drum towardds the end and you've harder rythms in the kiai aswell so, could go for a rythm like this for example
3 circles xd
04:41:951 (1) - not really such a strong note, seems the song kinda 'ends' on the prev red note, so I think its better to either add a spinner or just delete this note so its mapped passivly, you're the only one that mapped it actively so stood out a bit i see, okay its 1/2 circles now

Nice job guys gl with ranked!

thank for mod

3 mod in one post xdxd

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eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2017-04-01T09:38:07+00:00

nm from my queue

[Enjoy ~~Game~~ The Peace]
00:00:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:02:881 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - honestly i don't like these. way too excessive useage of extended sliders. but rhythm complaints aside, the SV and volume of these seem to be completely random and different from each other even throughout similar parts of the song like 00:03:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - compared to 00:06:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . also the volume changes are not done well, for example playing 00:09:160 (3,4) - sounds very jarring because 15% -> 30% when actually in the song they are similar in volume. And of course since you are using all these different SV's it becomes more difficult to correctly space the objects from each other (since DS changes with the SV) and many patterns can be improved aesthetically. i think you are making this way more complicated than it needs to be and it backfired lol.

00:06:021 (1,3) - watch out for overlapping
00:12:649 (3,4,5) - missing hitsounds
00:16:835 (3) - use a straight slider please like 00:14:044 (3) - 00:05:672 (3) - 00:02:881 (3) - etc.
00:18:928 (1) - dont use NC for consistency with pattern from before 00:07:765 (6,7) -
00:24:509 (5,1,2) - awkward flow due to the wide angle between these and the fact that they are using different timing
00:25:207 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - inconsistency in NC usage if you compare with before 00:23:114 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -
00:27:300 (3) - missing hs
00:28:695 (2) - missing hs
00:34:277 (4) - add finish
01:11:951 (9) - NC
01:14:742 (9) - ^
01:33:230 (6,1,2) - spacing does not make much sense, 2 has a very large spacing but no significant sounds that needed the emphasis
01:34:974 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - try to use 1/2 sliders instead of circles to fill the empty spaces here, as this part is still pretty intense compared to before but mapping it with just circles loses a lot of intensity
01:42:997 (9,1,2) - flow is not very good
01:43:870 (4,5,6,7,8) - slider to circle tool to would make a much neater curve
01:47:358 (10,1) - you can try to blanket by adjusting the shape a little http://puu.sh/v5ros/ad8ac2c795.jpg
01:48:404 (6) - missing finish
01:48:928 (1) - missing finish
01:52:242 (4,5,1) - should probably just stack them normally since manual stacking will look different with hr on
02:04:277 - you could try to make some more interesting pattern designs here, since the rhythm design is already very simple (all 1/2) theres really nothing unique about this section that makes it special for this song. this just feels like a huge chain of random notes aka jump practice map lol, i can slap this onto any 172 bpm song
02:10:032 (2,4) - overlapping

ok stopping here because after this a lot of stuff is repeated.

aesthetics and flow could be better. also check over hitsounds or re-apply them again because a lot of them are missing. you probably deleted some notes and forgot to redo the hitsounds afterward!

that's all from me, good luck!

Invertable

522 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Invertable 2017-04-01T10:42:26+00:00

eeezzzeee wrote:
nm from my queue

[Enjoy ~~Game~~ The Peace]
00:00:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:02:881 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - honestly i don't like these. way too excessive useage of extended sliders. but rhythm complaints aside, the SV and volume of these seem to be completely random and different from each other even throughout similar parts of the song like 00:03:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - compared to 00:06:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . also the volume changes are not done well, for example playing 00:09:160 (3,4) - sounds very jarring because 15% -> 30% when actually in the song they are similar in volume. And of course since you are using all these different SV's it becomes more difficult to correctly space the objects from each other (since DS changes with the SV) and many patterns can be improved aesthetically. i think you are making this way more complicated than it needs to be and it backfired lol. I redo the volume i think its fine now didn t chane anything else
00:06:021 (1,3) - watch out for overlapping
00:12:649 (3,4,5) - missing hitsounds
00:16:835 (3) - use a straight slider please like 00:14:044 (3) - 00:05:672 (3) - 00:02:881 (3) - etc.
00:18:928 (1) - dont use NC for consistency with pattern from before 00:07:765 (6,7) -
00:24:509 (5,1,2) - awkward flow due to the wide angle between these and the fact that they are using different timing
00:25:207 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - inconsistency in NC usage if you compare with before 00:23:114 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -
00:27:300 (3) - missing hs
00:28:695 (2) - missing hs
00:34:277 (4) - add finish
01:11:951 (9) - NC
01:14:742 (9) - ^
01:33:230 (6,1,2) - spacing does not make much sense, 2 has a very large spacing but no significant sounds that needed the emphasis
01:34:974 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - try to use 1/2 sliders instead of circles to fill the empty spaces here, as this part is still pretty intense compared to before but mapping it with just circles loses a lot of intensity
01:42:997 (9,1,2) - flow is not very good It is to me
01:43:870 (4,5,6,7,8) - slider to circle tool to would make a much neater curve
01:47:358 (10,1) - you can try to blanket by adjusting the shape a little http://puu.sh/v5ros/ad8ac2c795.jpg
01:48:404 (6) - missing finish
01:48:928 (1) - missing finish
01:52:242 (4,5,1) - should probably just stack them normally since manual stacking will look different with hr on
02:04:277 - you could try to make some more interesting pattern designs here, since the rhythm design is already very simple (all 1/2) theres really nothing unique about this section that makes it special for this song. this just feels like a huge chain of random notes aka jump practice map lol, i can slap this onto any 172 bpm song Will change it since a lot of mods want me to do that
02:10:032 (2,4) - overlapping there won t be overlap when i remap it xd

ok stopping here because after this a lot of stuff is repeated. :(

aesthetics and flow could be better. also check over hitsounds or re-apply them again because a lot of them are missing. you probably deleted some notes and forgot to redo the hitsounds afterward! True

that's all from me, good luck!TY for the mod and TY for luck xd

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2017-04-13T15:41:22+00:00

late

[Enjoy The Peace]

00:00:439 (2,3) - spacing is too large here imo, since is a calm part, using large spacing change isnt rly good
01:13:346 - missing hs
01:15:352 (8,1) - 01:21:631 (8,1) - inconsistent spacing
02:04:277 - 03:46:137 - u should emphasis every 4 notes from here
02:26:602 - isnt necessary to NC spam here, just NC long white tick is fine enough
lots of off stack object might need to do some polish

[Invellable's Extra]

00:06:370 (1) - 01:50:846 (1) - unnecessary nc
01:34:974 (1,2) - make the spacing larger here, player would misread this to 1/2 gap
03:22:067 (5) - stay consist spacing here, so need to make the spacing change here since the sound is mostly the same
03:56:602 - the sound here is pretty intense, shouldnt use such small spacing to express the music

just mention some big issue dat i think should be fixed
cuz id be writting a lng poost if im modding some minor stuff xd
would prob mod one more diff

Vell

359 posts

Joined October 2013

Vell 2017-04-14T13:34:06+00:00

[Invellable's Extra]
03:22:067 (5) - stay consist spacing here, so need to make the spacing change here since the sound is mostly the same letting the stream vary in spacing makes it a bit more fun to play. If you want a more rational answer there is clear pitch going up and halfway through I decided to make the spacing go shorter again to counterfollow the pitch instead of making the stream ridiculously spaced
03:56:602 - the sound here is pretty intense, shouldnt use such small spacing to express the music those 4 notes are the same pitchwise so I use the small spacing to buildup emphasize on 03:57:300 (1) -

thx

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2017-04-17T04:18:35+00:00

@hobbes : fixed
@wishkey : i want downbeat to be clickable so sorry

thanks !

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210,276,263811,2,0,B|289:244|264:151|264:151|286:192|324:213,1,225,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,233,265207,6,0,B|416:195|463:183|463:183|468:100|405:57,1,225,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,110,266602,2,0,P|232:142|111:118,1,225,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,31,267997,6,0,P|214:-1|335:23,1,225,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,110,269393,2,0,L|279:337,1,225,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,350,270788,6,0,L|420:131,1,225,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,56,272184,2,0,P|256:78|133:66,1,225,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,110,273579,6,0,P|58:221|80:331,1,225,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,349,274974,2,0,L|404:328,1,225,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,306,276370,5,4,0:0:0:0:
137,193,277765,1,4,0:0:0:0:
465,47,279160,6,0,B|393:66|393:66|316:50,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,154,280556,2,0,L|62:121,2,75
207,218,281602,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,281951,12,0,287532,0:0:0:0:

- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2017-04-20T05:00:36+00:00

[xtra]

00:02:881 (1,2) - not stack properly lmao
00:10:556 (5,6,7,8) - too near imo
00:11:079 (8,1) - ds between this is different from the others (00:10:556 (5,6,7,8))
00:19:277 (8,1) - not perfectly blanket. move (1) to x:422 y:25
00:20:323 (2,3,4) - ds here is pretty far compared to other notes that has the same rhythm (like 00:18:230 (5,6,7), which is ~0.9 but 00:20:323 (2,3,4) is ~1.3x) so consider make it same
00:22:416 (1,2) - overlap makes it looks bad.
00:25:556 (1,3) - not perfectly blanket. move (3) to x:177 y:222
00:30:439 (4,1) - not perfectly blanket. maybe curve (4)'s slider a little.
box of explanation
00:32:881 to 00:39:160 - you shouldn't make a big jump here since it's still a calm part, unlike 00:41:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1). So maybe you could make this part like low jump to high jump. << This can make the players easily prepared for hard jumps too!
01:07:067 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too nera xd
01:30:788 (1,3) - not perfectly blanket. move (3) to x:224 y:140
01:39:858 (9) - nc?
01:49:974 (8,1) - not perfectly blanket. move (8) to x:492 y:220
01:50:846 (2,3,4) - even you stack or not, it still the same xd
02:01:399 - There is a sound here so you should add it.
02:37:765 (1,2) - xd
03:10:904 (1,1) - not perfectly blanket. move second (1) to x:472 y:237
I saw lots of inconsistent streams in first (Invertable?) part. Don't you use ctrl+shift+f one?

[peace]

00:00:614 (3,2) - stack?
00:04:625 (5,6) - not perfectly blanket. maybe curve (6)'s slider.
00:09:858 (5,6) - ^ move (6) to x:196 y:4
00:14:742 (2,4) - stack?
02:26:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks like overmapped since it's calm part.
sorry but im lazy to mod

GL then~

Invertable

522 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Invertable 2017-04-20T12:54:58+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
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[xtra]
00:02:881 (1,2) - not stack properly lmao Lmao
00:10:556 (5,6,7,8) - too near imo Its a calm part
00:11:079 (8,1) - ds between this is different from the others (00:10:556 (5,6,7,8)) That is because im emphasizing it
00:19:277 (8,1) - not perfectly blanket. move (1) to x:422 y:25 kk
00:20:323 (2,3,4) - ds here is pretty far compared to other notes that has the same rhythm (like 00:18:230 (5,6,7), which is ~0.9 but 00:20:323 (2,3,4) is ~1.3x) so consider make it same oki
00:22:416 (1,2) - overlap makes it looks bad. How are they overlaping?
00:25:556 (1,3) - not perfectly blanket. move (3) to x:177 y:222 k
00:30:439 (4,1) - not perfectly blanket. maybe curve (4)'s slider a little. k
box of explanation
00:32:881 to 00:39:160 - you shouldn't make a big jump here since it's still a calm part Actually im trying to prepare people for the hard jumps that is why i didn t wan t to make from easy to hard jumps, unlike 00:41:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1). So maybe you could make this part like low jump to high jump. << This can make the players easily prepared for hard jumps too!
01:07:067 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too nera xd Changed a little bit
01:30:788 (1,3) - not perfectly blanket. move (3) to x:224 y:140 k
01:39:858 (9) - nc?k
01:49:974 (8,1) - not perfectly blanket. move (8) to x:492 y:220k
01:50:846 (2,3,4) - even you stack or not, it still the same xdstacked
02:01:399 - There is a sound here so you should add it.k
02:37:765 (1,2) - xd xd
03:10:904 (1,1) - not perfectly blanket. move second (1) to x:472 y:237 k
I saw lots of inconsistent streams in first (Invertable?) part. Don't you use ctrl+shift+f one? Im actually using it . Maybe there are some places that i didnt use it on so il check xd
[peace]
00:00:614 (3,2) - stack? xd
00:04:625 (5,6) - not perfectly blanket. maybe curve (6)'s slider.k
00:09:858 (5,6) - ^ move (6) to x:196 y:4
00:14:742 (2,4) - stack?xd
02:26:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks like overmapped since it's calm part. Its not overmapped at all if i put streams there it would be overmapped these are low DS slider jumps that are easy to play and it fits the music nicely. The lower the music and its intensity the more sliders combine and volume is getting lower xd my english ok
sorry but im lazy to modBetter something than nothing and this was nice!
GL then~

TY for the mod!

lit120

3,250 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-04-21T14:05:00+00:00

[enjoy the peace]

00:00:091 - 00:21:718 - check out the blankets pls
00:21:718 (1,2,3,4,1) - why such a huge spacing? i'd just make the spacing of 00:21:718 (1,2,3,4) - a bit lesser and make a jump emphasize on 00:22:417 (1) -
00:27:649 (1,2) - this sounds cool for ctrl+g it
00:41:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i could see that u're trying to do a neat pattern jump here, but i found out that it is kinda messy to look in editor view. try sth like http://puu.sh/vrtyz/dbe9d67443.jpg by copy paste the previous (1), (3), (5), and (7) note and turn it to 180 degrees, and moving it to somewhere
01:08:463 - 01:26:602 - it sounds like an overmap 1/4 notes here and it doesn't deserve a stream due to a calm slow part here, which doesn't deserve a hard part to play like this though
01:18:928 (1) - u missed a hitsound
01:46:312 (2,3,4) - why is this spacing look different from 01:44:916 (2,3,4) - by its emphasize note beat
01:52:242 (4) - there's nothing to emphasize this as a jump, even that it is a weak note here
02:01:486 (1) - 02:00:265 (2) - stack with 02:00:265 (2) - for a blanket
02:14:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - so where should i start... 02:15:091 (3,4,1) - why's (4) have a huge gap jump than 02:15:439 (1) - while this note has an emphasize beat, which makes no sense to make a jump feel from its emphasize, while i know that (4) there has a high pitch note there. then a second one is that 02:15:091 (3,4,1,2,3) - feels awkward for its flow and its play though
02:26:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - well... i kinda have a feeling that those 1/4 sliders are kinda messy to look, and they're overlaping on each slider's head and tails, even the bodies too. maybe u could try to look at the other maps for an inspirational idea to fix this mess. there are a lot of ways!
02:42:649 (6,1) - mind about a blanket?
02:43:172 (2) - fix the stack
02:53:114 (4,5) - mind about the slider body there for not having an overlap there?
03:00:091 - 03:11:253 - this is really an overlap note for those 1/4 notes after i tried to listen all over again, and this part doesn't deserve a stream too,
while this part isn't an intense play here, including the calm section part of the song
03:27:649 (8) - hitsounds pls
03:40:468 (11,1) - this
03:47:184 (7,8,1,2) - the play here is rly awkward though for its flow
03:55:032 (4) - the note is weak and that note pitch isn't rly that high, cuz this doesn't deserve a high gap spacing
03:56:951 (3,4,1,2,3) - i'd say that the reason from what i've mentioned from 02:14:916 - is the same as this
04:08:463 (1) - i'd set it to 192|256 for better start to have a break and for the flow too
04:20:672 (6) - 04:22:067 (6) - 04:23:463 (6) - etc - uh i can hear a note on that red line, so u should use a 1/2 sliders there

well tbh, after i reviewed this diff, all what u can improve is how the rhythm works based on its song and how u try to emphasize the beat well. some patterns that u used are kinda in a lack, but u can try to take a look at ur map and try to do sth on it though

[invellable]

00:30:439 (4,1) - this ain't blanketed
00:31:486 (2,3) - i'd ctrl+g it for emphasizing those notes rather than having (2) isn't emphasize rly well with the beat
00:32:881 (1,2,3,4,1) - this doesn't deserve a huge jumps due to a slow part here
00:38:986 (5,1) - u could even make a bit of spacing for (1)
00:44:742 (1) - well, this doesn't sound like a big clash cymbal ish sound, so i don't think it deserves a small gap of spacing streams here
01:08:463 - 01:26:602 - it sounds like an overmap 1/4 notes here and it doesn't deserve a stream due to a calm slow part here, which doesn't deserve a hard part to play like this though
01:59:742 (9,10,1,2) - the flow here is kinda funny and it's rly awkward to play it tbh
02:01:137 (9,10,1) - i don't rly get it why u intended to make a huge triplet spacing here, since it doesn't rly suit based on the emphasize beat here
02:07:765 (5,6,7,8) - u can just copy 02:07:067 (1,2,3,4) - and paste it, then try to adjust the scale by ctrl+shift+s (the origin should be in selection centre)
02:17:358 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - i'd totally say the same thing about the flow
02:23:811 (3) - i'd nc this since i kinda get what u did there on note breaks
03:20:846 (4,1) - i'd not set a spacing rly low based on the intense play from the song b4 the kiai part
03:48:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - oh, looks like u used a pattern here. but i found out that u literally did sth a bit of "copy pasting" ish, which i find it like boring to play all over again, like 03:53:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is literally copy pasted for example. i'd make a different pattern play for that if i were u
04:20:672 - 04:22:067 - 04:23:463 - etc - uh i can hear a note on that red line, so u should use a 1/2 sliders there
04:41:777 - here's the only last note u can add though

i'll just stop from here since it's kinda too long for the song, so i better mod an extra diffs here. the diffs can be improved a lot if u can learn more!

Invertable

522 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Invertable 2017-04-22T10:53:09+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[enjoy the peace]
00:00:091 - 00:21:718 - check out the blankets pls
00:21:718 (1,2,3,4,1) - why such a huge spacing? i'd just make the spacing of 00:21:718 (1,2,3,4) - a bit lesser and make a jump emphasize on 00:22:417 (1) - That is just a nice pentagram
00:27:649 (1,2) - this sounds cool for ctrl+g it
00:41:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i could see that u're trying to do a neat pattern jump here, but i found out that it is kinda messy to look in editor view. try sth like http://puu.sh/vrtyz/dbe9d67443.jpg by copy paste the previous (1), (3), (5), and (7) note and turn it to 180 degrees, and moving it to somewhere
01:08:463 - 01:26:602 - it sounds like an overmap 1/4 notes here and it doesn't deserve a stream due to a calm slow part here, which doesn't deserve a hard part to play like this though I said in so many mods that these streams are not even that hard its 172 bpm streams with easy nicely flow sliderjumps and its the hardest diff in the mapset ofc it will have some overmapped streams
01:18:928 (1) - u missed a hitsound
01:46:312 (2,3,4) - why is this spacing look different from 01:44:916 (2,3,4) - by its emphasize note beat
01:52:242 (4) - there's nothing to emphasize this as a jump, even that it is a weak note here Im actually emphasizing this note 01:52:416 (1)
02:01:486 (1) - 02:00:265 (2) - stack with 02:00:265 (2) - for a blanket
02:14:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - so where should i start... 02:15:091 (3,4,1) - why's (4) have a huge gap jump than 02:15:439 (1) - while this note has an emphasize beat, which makes no sense to make a jump feel from its emphasize, while i know that (4) there has a high pitch note there. then a second one is that 02:15:091 (3,4,1,2,3) - feels awkward for its flow and its play though
02:26:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - well... i kinda have a feeling that those 1/4 sliders are kinda messy to look, and they're overlaping on each slider's head and tails, even the bodies too. maybe u could try to look at the other maps for an inspirational idea to fix this mess. there are a lot of ways!These sliders are only part i didn t remap in this map xd so Il do it now. I was actually waiting for someone expirienced to tell me if they want to change it or remove it cause a lot of people said its overmapped and since you didn t say that i will definitely remap it
02:42:649 (6,1) - mind about a blanket?
02:43:172 (2) - fix the stack
02:53:114 (4,5) - mind about the slider body there for not having an overlap there?
03:00:091 - 03:11:253 - this is really an overlap note for those 1/4 notes after i tried to listen all over again, and this part doesn't deserve a stream too,
while this part isn't an intense play here, including the calm section part of the song Ithink you mean overmap but anyway i said it why i wont change the streams on that part
03:27:649 (8) - hitsounds pls
03:40:468 (11,1) - this
03:47:184 (7,8,1,2) - the play here is rly awkward though for its flow
03:55:032 (4) - the note is weak and that note pitch isn't rly that high, cuz this doesn't deserve a high gap spacing
03:56:951 (3,4,1,2,3) - i'd say that the reason from what i've mentioned from 02:14:916 - is the same as this
04:08:463 (1) - i'd set it to 192|256 for better start to have a break and for the flow too
04:20:672 (6) - 04:22:067 (6) - 04:23:463 (6) - etc - uh i can hear a note on that red line, so u should use a 1/2 sliders there Im not mapping that i think its piano sound
well tbh, after i reviewed this diff, all what u can improve is how the rhythm works based on its song and how u try to emphasize the beat well. some patterns that u used are kinda in a lack, but u can try to take a look at ur map and try to do sth on it though

[invellable]
00:30:439 (4,1) - this ain't blanketed
00:31:486 (2,3) - i'd ctrl+g it for emphasizing those notes rather than having (2) isn't emphasize rly well with the beat
00:32:881 (1,2,3,4,1) - this doesn't deserve a huge jumps due to a slow part here
00:38:986 (5,1) - u could even make a bit of spacing for (1)
00:44:742 (1) - well, this doesn't sound like a big clash cymbal ish sound, so i don't think it deserves a small gap of spacing streams here
01:08:463 - 01:26:602 - it sounds like an overmap 1/4 notes here and it doesn't deserve a stream due to a calm slow part here, which doesn't deserve a hard part to play like this though Its not overmapped
01:59:742 (9,10,1,2) - the flow here is kinda funny and it's rly awkward to play it tbh
02:01:137 (9,10,1) - i don't rly get it why u intended to make a huge triplet spacing here, since it doesn't rly suit based on the emphasize beat here
02:07:765 (5,6,7,8) - u can just copy 02:07:067 (1,2,3,4) - and paste it, then try to adjust the scale by ctrl+shift+s (the origin should be in selection centre) I actually did it that way idk xd
02:17:358 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - i'd totally say the same thing about the flow
02:23:811 (3) - i'd nc this since i kinda get what u did there on note breaks
03:20:846 (4,1) - i'd not set a spacing rly low based on the intense play from the song b4 the kiai part
03:48:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - oh, looks like u used a pattern here. but i found out that u literally did sth a bit of "copy pasting" ish, which i find it like boring to play all over again, like 03:53:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is literally copy pasted for example. i'd make a different pattern play for that if i were u
04:20:672 - 04:22:067 - 04:23:463 - etc - uh i can hear a note on that red line, so u should use a 1/2 sliders there
04:41:777 - here's the only last note u can add though
i'll just stop from here since it's kinda too long for the song, so i better mod an extra diffs here. the diffs can be improved a lot if u can learn more!

TY for the mod

PraviBackonja

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PraviBackonja 2017-04-22T10:58:27+00:00

This map is awesome

3* difficulty has great timing and when you play it you look cool

song is awesome

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