Here is my M4M as promised, it will not be very long, since the map is already very nice!
[General]
[General]
- Why not putting some Kiai parts? That would be better, even if they are small, that could give some good effects to the song o:
- 00:15:317 (3) - Why not moving this not a bit more on the end of this slider: 00:14:536 (1) - so it would do a better effect with this slider? Or ou could even do symetrycal patterns with this slider too 00:15:473 (4) - !
- 00:25:786 (1) - I think I would mark a bit more this slider with spacing, due to the strong sound on the starting slider. Why not stacking it on this double note here: 00:25:161 (3,4) -
- 00:37:661 (5,6) - With the sound you're mapping, it feels weird to have two sliders that have different shapes, why not giving them same shapes on both of them? o:
- 01:32:992 (3) - I think that this beat should be marked differently as those two notes: 01:32:192 (1,2) - why not moving this circle: 01:32:992 (3) - on this one: 01:33:192 (4) - with using a NC on this note: 01:33:192 (4) - so it will be read easier for the player. That's just a personal taste!
- 01:53:792 (3,4,5,6) - Compared to the difficulty of some patterns in the song (not the map), I think it would be better to increase difficulty of this pattern, by increasing distance between them
- 02:08:992 (1) - I think that the angle between this pattern here can be changed: 02:09:592 (2,3,4) - because it's quite strange to have two patterns that go in different way. In other words, I think you should change the curve of this pattern here: 02:09:592 (2,3,4) - and moreover, there is not real reason to make a brutal angle here, because there is no beat that allow that o:
- 02:23:292 (1) - It's maybe just me, but it feels very strange when the spinner start on a song, and end on an other song... You should probably shorten this spinner so it will fit better! o:
- 02:41:544 (3,4,5) - A ryhthm like this https://puu.sh/uD4OI/160afa8f5f.png would fit better I guess, because I feel like the strong beat here, should be clickable: 02:42:013 -
- 02:45:200 (8,9,1) - I would place those part a bit down on the grid, so it will flow better with the previous moves on the jumps, like this: https://puu.sh/uD5KL/a9480ba945.png
- 03:27:627 (1) - That would be better if this slider would be at the center of this one: 03:28:146 (3) - (actually it's not really)
- 03:49:772 (1,2) - Why the distance between those two, and those two: 03:48:734 (2,3) - are different? They are the same sound, so why giving them such a strong difference between them? o:
- 03:54:617 (5) - Add a NC here, no, that would make it more easier to read, and that mark a new kind of beat here o: