00:05:730 (2) - i figure that you should remove this note, and then add 00:05:355 (1) into the same combo color as 00:04:605 (1,2). listen quite closely to the music, there seems to be a consistent trifecta of piano notes all back to back.
there are piano notes for all of these notes and 12 12 combo is kind of a theme in the mapso further delving into this idea, listen carefully to what this slider's end is mapped to: 00:06:855 (3) - it really isn't mapped to anything, i'd just say touch up this section of the map a bit to make that piano really stand out!
fixedthis is completely optional but experiment setting the hitsounds to 5% on the notes overlaying the piano. it might bring out the natural integrity of the song just a bit more.
00:07:605 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - you did a really good job at bringing out the music here~
00:19:596 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - these kicksliders should be snapped to 1/12 instead of 1/8
1/8 sounds fine to me, and i want that slow deliberate feel to the sliders. i dont want true buzzsliders00:24:089 (3) - maybe experiment with what you can do with this note a bit. it's cool that you added this note here anyway despite not being an additive to a really strong part of the music, but maybe you can do something unique here like a x.10 slider.
not sure why this note warrants anything other than a hitcircle. besides i want those .2x "sighs" to be the slowest sliders in the map and the only ones loewr than .5x00:25:583 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 1/12 !!!
see above00:29:135 (4) - what is this sliderend mapped to?
it was mapped to something but doesnt matter now i removed it00:31:573 (3,4) - i really like this pattern here despite its simplicity. maybe fiddle around with its aesthetics a bit to bring out it's rhythmical charm
i agree it's not the most innovative pattern but i think it's fine, and i'm not sure what else to do with it anyway. if something better strikes me i'll fix it.00:32:698 (5,6) - 1/12 !!!!!!!!!
see above00:33:354 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - this spacing is really cool
00:38:698 (1) and 00:39:448 (3) - 1/12 !!!!!!!111!!1!!11!
00:39:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - loved what you did here
00:44:323 (2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - for this part here - just touching up the aesthetics - maybe consider something that looks like:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7674644https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7674649 for the first ss you're right that part is ugly i remapped it. the second ss i want a tiny movement from 2 to 1, while keeping those two combos symmetrical and balanced00:52:291 (3) - 1/12
i like the instantness of a single hitcircle00:54:823 (2) - with this slider here, maybe space it a bit further away from the note before it, kinda like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7674656 already remapped that part anyway but you're right that part was all off01:13:010 (2) - remove this note here to help the singer's GUAAAAAAA noise stand out more
i want a steadily building intensity to the string instrument in the backgroundas a side note; i really like how the whole singletap part plays. i won't tinker around with the aesthetics because you seem to have a great sense of the spacing notes should have from one another depending on the intensity. 01:16:573 (1) - although this note definitely could be spaced a bit further away.
01:18:073 (1) - same with this
01:19:573 (1) - and this too
i remapped most of the singletap part already but i kept your spacing tips in mind as i did01:27:073 (1) - NOW U GOT THE 1/12 :dd
01:27:823 (1,2,3,4) - this is really cool; maybe try adding some more noticable slowly increasing slider velocities to make it stand out even more. only because imo the steady increase from 1x to 1.4x just doesn't quite fit the part as well as it could.
increased sv of last 2 sliders a little bit01:28:573 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is cool!
01:45:073 (1,2) - make this a slider
ill consider it. it wont be as pretty and wont fit the pattern as well but it brings out the voice a bit more01:54:823 (5) - careful with this sliderend. it doesn't seem to be mapped to any particular sound.
it has to end sometime, and i want it to end late to emphasize the "sliding" quality of the voice at that part02:02:323 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - one of the coolest parts of the map.
sorry i had change it because a lot of the notes werent mapped to anything lul02:12:823 (1) - i like how you interpreted such a vivid moment of the song into a neat, slow slider. it really stands out.
thanks, one of my favorite parts02:14:980 (4) - i like what you did here, but this note isn't needed. it doesn't seem to fit any part of the song.
it's just to emphasize that part, but i will consider remapping that whole part02:16:573 (1,2,3) - maybe make this triple fade out in volume with each note.
it might be a cool effect ... affect?? ... efict*
all the notes in the background are the same volume02:31:573 (1) space this a little bit further away from the notes before it to bring out the music.
remapped the whole part to make it less boring02:39:073 (6) - awesome job bringing out the music here.
02:50:312 (3,4,5,6) - you nailed the 1/12s here, you get a big highfive from me.
03:11:499 (2) - remove this note here, and then maybe remap the notes around it a little bit to conform to this change.
same as above. even if i do remove it the other notes are still fine where they are03:15:062 (1) - space this a bit further away
03:16:562 (1) - space this a bit further away
03:18:062 (1) - .................space this a bit further away!!!! maybe this minimal spacing was all intentional, so feel free to ignore my suggestions about note spacing.
remapped this whole part03:26:312 (1,2,3,4) - same lil' slider velocity complaint as beforehand. the pattern is still super cool though! ]
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