aaaaaaa
[General]
with the hitsounds at the start, 00:06:592 - sound more like kick drums than snares so u could use normal sampleset claps on 00:06:592 - 00:06:774 . same with stuff like 00:09:501 (4,5) - 00:12:410 - 00:12:592 (4) - and so on
sounds like a few claps are missing too 00:17:501 (2) - 00:19:683 (6) - 00:20:410 - 00:23:319 - etc. would be good to include these
03:44:047 - sounds more like normal addition clap
05:00:047 - slider end whistles here arent really following anything here
[Take Control!]
00:26:592 (1) - dont think u need the 1/2 slider here. a circle would work better so 00:26:956 (2,3) - stands out more, also cus 00:26:592 (1) - is pretty much the same as 00:25:865 (1,2)
00:30:228 (1) - melody picks up on red tick 00:30:410 - so u prob shouldnt ignore it
00:35:319 (1) - this doesnt really need to be a kickslider or nc'ed, thers no sound on the blue tick and it isn't really emphasising anything either
00:40:410 (1) - flow kinda gets ruined by the placement here, making it smooth with 00:40:047 (6,7,8,9) - would look and play nicer imo :d
00:44:410 (3,4) - 1/2 slider works better? to differentiate these sounds from 00:43:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - since theres only 1 sound here
01:03:319 (5) - 01:06:228 (4,5) - 01:09:138 (5) - any reason you decided to skip most of the 1/4 melodies here? the section sounds really similar to 00:38:956 - yet are mapped quite differently
01:29:138 (3) - 01:40:774 (3) - 3/4 extended sliders work a lot nicer here imo to keep the pacing and intensity of the song. same for other kiais i gues
01:51:319 (6) - using different slider shapes makes the pattern a little messy, maybe copy 01:50:683 (3) - and ctrl h?
02:04:228 (6,7,8) - emphasis seems quite awkward here, the strongest beat 02:04:410 - is mapped so its not clicked, while everything else is. u could probably use a better rhythm
02:17:865 - yea i think it'd be worthwhile if you payed more attention to the 1/4 melodies here
03:48:319 (2) - 03:48:774 (4,5) - some of the 1/4s in this section seem like they come out of no where, i rly think u should try stick to sounds that are really noticeable to the player while ignoring the much weaker sounds. stuff like 03:49:774 (2,4) - doesnt seem necessary either cos if u compare it to 03:55:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the latter one is much more dominant.
03:49:138 (5,6,7,8) - and here it might be better to use two 1/4 sliders to stress the individual 1/2 sounds like u did for 03:50:956 (1,2)
04:08:228 (1,2) - 04:09:683 (1,2) - spacing seems rly small, slider leniency makes this super easy to hit so u should try space it much more
04:31:501 (2) - ehh the slider overlaps can catch ppl off cos u normally had these spaced out :s
[Kalitarks' Insane]
00:42:410 (1) - 00:48:228 (1) - i dont rly think these need nc's, theyre structured in the same was as 00:42:047 (1,2) - so it would make more sense if it were in the same combo..
00:49:865 (1,2) - swap nc? seperates the snares from the kick drums better
01:03:319 - u probably need to put some of ur own whistles in this section to be consistent with the hitsounding at 00:27:319 . since linada didnt map the 1/4s here :v
01:25:047 - lower volume pls, sound is really audible cos there isn't any music playing
02:14:956 (1) - ctrl shift s and centre that bend so it doesnt look crap
02:20:956 (3,4,5) - wrong emphasis, all the strong beats r on sliderends. try a rhythm like 01:05:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
02:26:774 (3,4,5) - ^
02:28:774 (1,2,3,4) - 1 isn't a snare, so i dont think you should put it in the same pattern as 02:28:956 (2,3,4) . also swapping the nc's 02:28:774 (1,2) - to emphasise the snares is nice
03:04:410 - why do you have some weird drum finish hitsound going on, but then stop it at 03:10:228 - ? the sections sound identical imo
03:14:592 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - there isn't really much coherence behind this pattern, you pretty much have to guess when u should be clicking. having 03:15:047 (1) - clicked but 03:14:956 - on a slider end is really confusing. same with 03:15:410 - 03:15:501 . i really think you should reconsider the rhythm to have similar sounds clicked, and less important ones ignored or on slider ends 03:14:683 (2) - 03:15:138 (2)
03:57:683 (4) - nc?
04:54:956 (6) - ^
thx for kds
let me kno when u replied