from 00:00:530 - to 00:08:930 - there's just background notes you have completely missed out that I think should be included, example screenshot:
LN part should prob look like this:
00:10:130 (10130|0,10130|3,10205|1,10205|2,10280|3,10280|0,10355|1,10355|2,10430|0,10430|3) - and other similar mini jumptrill patterns you can turn into a JS instead, see:
00:12:155 (12155|1,12155|0,12230|0,12230|3,12230|2) - stuff like this is really annoying as well because of the minijack
repeat those last two points until 00:19:730 -
00:21:530 (21530|1,21530|3,21530|0) - what sounds constitute the 3 note chord here because I can't hear them
00:28:055 - missing note, can be fixed by having something like this:
00:29:180 (29180|1,29255|3,29330|1) - ctrl-H and then move over 1 to the right and then move 00:29:480 (29480|3) - to 1 and 00:29:780 (29780|0) - to 3 I guess
00:38:180 (38180|1) - move to 4 to make that 1/3 jack section a bit less annoying to transition into
00:38:930 (38930|0) - move to 2 and then move 00:39:080 (39080|1) - to 4
00:39:905 - missing note
00:47:780 (47780|2) - move to 4
00:53:180 (53180|0,53180|3,53180|2) - this doesn't need to be a triple; move 00:53:030 (53030|2,53105|1) - to the right and delete 00:53:180 (53180|2) -
00:58:880 (58880|2,58880|3,58955|0,58955|1,59030|3,59030|2,59105|0,59105|1,59180|2,59180|3,59255|0,59255|1,59330|3,59330|0,59330|2) - see previous point about jumptrills
01:01:730 - 01:02:780 - they're not sightreadable SVs, make sure they add up to 1 next time because
01:03:155 - note missing here
01:04:805 (64805|1,64805|0) - no sound here
01:05:330 (65330|1) - no sound here
01:06:005 (66005|0) - no sound here
01:06:530 (66530|2) - etc etc you know by now check the rest of this section
01:11:930 (71930|3,71930|0,72005|1,72005|2,72080|3,72080|0,72155|1,72155|2,72230|0,72230|3) - could just be jumpstream
notes missing 01:19:955 - 01:20:555 - 01:21:155 -
01:28:580 (88580|3,88617|2,88655|1,88692|0,88880|0,88917|1,88955|2,88992|3) - what are these?
01:31:580 - think you're missing some drums in this beat 01:31:430 - to 01:31:730 -
01:33:380 (93380|3,93380|0,93417|2,93455|1,93492|0,93530|3,93530|1,93530|2,93680|0,93680|3,93717|1,93755|2,93792|3) - wat