1. Basic (1.23 stars, 129 notes)
2. Intermediate (1.82 stars, 178 notes)

iYiyo wrote:

Heyaa o/

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  [general]

1. disable widescreen support on Normal
2. I do believe Normal diff should be called Easy instead. Consider changing it Don't think so, name is just a indication, the top diff of this map is more like a Hard as to its complexity regarding rhythms.
3. Maybe add a 4th color combo? A yellow one would fit good imo.
4. AR feels a bit too high for both diff imo. Maybe reduce them in 1 or 2 each?
   
   [Letter]
5. 00:12:135 (2,3) - improve blanket slightly?
6. 00:45:925 (4) - maybe you can curve this a bit so it flows smoother to the next slider?
7. 01:09:924 (4) - same as before? The transition can be clearer imo.
8. 00:33:609 - add whistle? has same sound as 00:32:346 -
9. 00:38:661 (4) - ^?
10. 00:43:714 - ^
11. 00:46:240 - ^
12. 00:48:767 - ^
13. 01:14:977 (5,2) - slight overlap you might want to fix?
14. 00:54:293 - whistle?
15. 00:55:082 (7) - ^
16. 01:07:082 - whistle here instead of 01:06:766 - ?
17. 01:20:029 - clap here and whistle 01:20:345 - here instead?
18. 01:08:977 - remove whistle? don't here whistle sound tbh D:
19. 00:56:977 - 00:57:608 - 00:59:503 - 01:00:135 - 01:03:924 - 01:07:714 - 01:10:240 - 01:14:029 - 01:15:293 - 01:17:187 - 01:19:714 - 01:25:398 - 01:27:924 (4) - aaa don't know why I'm poiting everyone xD I think you get the idea. Maybe you're following another music instrument, but at least I think you should check all these whistle and more after them. Some of them were inconsistent and others were missing imo.
20. 01:43:398 (1) - make them symmetric? http://puu.sh/tB8lo/4c3b6a05df.jpg Not necessary imo
21. 01:47:187 (3,1) - stack their tails?
    
    [Normal]
22. 00:18:767 (3,4,1) - maybe make this a more linear pattern? idk just nitpicking xd
23. 00:56:661 (5) - move last node a bit upwards so the blanket is a bit better?
24. 01:20:029 (2,3) - right now AiMod is complaining about DS being higher than normal. And I do agree xd moving 01:20:029 (2) - a bit downwards wouldn't hurt anyone.
25. 01:32:029 (4,1) - They feel way to close to each other for and Easy diff which might confuse players a bit. Maybe rotate 01:33:293 (1) - in -10° more or less?
26. 01:37:714 (4,1) - similar as before, the body of the slider is too close to 01:37:714 (4) - . Maybe you'd want to curve the slider a bit?

Well I'm not that good with low diffs Hope it helps though. GL!

1. I think that this mapset deserves another difficulty, a harder one, there are tons of important sounds skept on the actual harder difficulty, which, imo, is not great for the mapset

1. There's a huge gap difference between the Normal and the Letter difficulty, which is a problem when it comes to me. Normal uses mostly 1/1 rhythm with some 2/1 sliders - those sliders are also weird because they cover a high amount of different sounds, making it a bit random in the rhythm perspective. eg: 01:45:924 (3) - here we can clearly notice 1/4 sounds on the drums, bells and a 1/2 rhythm. I know this is only an Normal Easy, but it deserves more rhythm complexity - Letter difficulty abuses of 1/2 through all the difficulty, so I think you should add some 1/2 atleast to the Normal difficulty.
2. Other than that it's fine.

1. 00:15:609 - It's clear to me that you're following the vocals here, so, I think, you should make this vocal note clickable, so the player can actually notice that you're going for the vocals, making it easier for them to notice that not all the drum beats will be followed on this difficulty.
2. 00:18:767 (1,3) - I think this is very tricky, don't you think? The full overlap make it too hard to read for beginners.
3. 00:31:398 - If you compare this section from this difficulty and from the Normal one, you'll easily notice the rhythm gap we have between these difficulties.

1. 00:52:083 - Perhaps placing the preview point here would be better to include
2. I agree with iYiyo, the Normal diff should be called Easy for the following reason: The diff is mapped at half-BPM with only 1/1 gaps. Hence, if this diff would be double the BPM it is already is, it would be mapped at 190 BPM with 2/1 gaps, which are normal circumstances for an easy. Even is it has constant 1/1 rhythm, it feels like an easy, so I recommend changing the diff name to Easy.
3. And here I agree with Lumael, the mapset has much more to offer than what the highest diff has to offer and adding a harder diff would make the most out of what the song supports.
4. And the diff gap is pretty big between Normal and Letter because you only have 1/1 gaps unlike in Normal where you have already 1/4 diff gaps. Even for a slow song, this diff gap is pretty big

1. 00:01:083 (1) - I'd use a less edgy slider here since the part is rather calm and should have softer sliders unlike this edgy slider
2. 00:31:398 (1) - Maybe add a whistle on the tail because you have a kick there
3. 00:50:977 (4,5,1) - Making these more linear would be better imo, it kinda stands out here and linear objects for the "build-up" might look better
4. 00:55:398 (3,4,5) - Maybe Ctrl+G rhythm to emphasize each "noi" (or whatever that is)?
5. 00:56:661 (5,1) - 01:16:871 (5,1) - Blankets could be improved imo, it is noticeable in-game so I recommend that you fix it too
6. 01:45:293 (2) - This rather edgy flow doesn't feel very fitting, 93|329 would work better to make it flow over more because there is no big need to use such edgy flow
7. Nice diff ^^

1. 00:01:083 (1,2) - This sharp zig-zag flow doesn't fit here imo, it is a very calm part and should require softer flow. Instead you use rather sharp flow, which doesn't fit here imo, try making these two sliders flow into each other
2. 00:14:977 (4,5) - Perhaps a hitcircle + a 1/2 slider starting from here 00:15:609 - would work better since you're following the vocals. Also, a long slider here 00:14:977 (4) - doesn't really fit if you're following the vocals since nothing is really being held. Same goes for 00:27:609 (2,3) -
3. 01:33:450 (1) - A spinner doesn't fit here imo, although you're following the held vocals, there are other vocals that deserved to be followed imo which would represent the intensity better, I suggest you follow those
4. Flow looks good in this diff, gj

• General

1. Looking at the way it was mapped, probably, changing the name of the Normal diff into the Easy diff would be best. Since you were using a pretty low slider velocity in this difficulty and small distance snap (below 1x) plus, you were using 1/1 sliders for most of the section, which resulted into 1.02 Star Difficulty. So, calling this as an Easy diff would be best ;3
   
   
2. Probably add more difficulty? Since the drums from the main music are pretty, um.... jumpy? (I dunno what word should I use. I'm sooo sowwy ;w;). Especially at the kiai time, the music got pretty up-beat and some parts of it could be potentially made into the jumps. Moreover, the gap between the slider velocity between these two difficulties are pretty high -> (Normal : 1,10 ; Letter : 1,70 which resulted on 0,60 gap difference). And I had an experience when my map got disqualified twice because the gap of the slider velocity between Hard and Insane difficulty was more than 0,50 (pretty sad experience uwu ;w;). So, adding like one more difficulty which is slightly harder than the latest difficulty could balance the spread of this map. Or, adding one more difficulty which is slightly harder than the easiest difficulty that could shorten the slider velocity gap also would be nice \owo/ and it could avoid the probability of being disqualified like what has happened to me *sob*
   
   
3. How about adding soft-slidertick by using your soft-hitclap? So that the upbeats like 00:58:556 (1) ; 01:01:082 (3) ; etc in Normal diff wouldn't get skipped
   
   
4. Oh, btw, that background is sooooo endearingly cuuuuuuuuteeeeeee >////w////< I've got this FREE! vibes for some reasons xd

• Normal

1. 00:50:977 (4) - Change this 1/1 slider into two notes instead? It would be nice if the downbeat at 00:51:609 is clickable
   
   
2. 01:09:924 (2) - ^
   
   
3. 01:09:293 (1) - Add whistle in soft sampleset (through the timing setup panel) to emphasize the soft bell sound from the main music
   
   
4. 01:25:713 (3,4) - Improve this blanket by putting 01:26:976 (4) into x:133 y:303
   
   
   
5. 01:16:871 (5) - Improve this blanket by making 01:18:134 (1) a little bit less curvy
   
   
6. 01:29:503 (1) - Add whistle in soft sampleset (through the timing setup panel) to emphasize the soft bell sound from the main music
   
   
7. 01:30:135 (2) - Same suggestion like 00:50:977 (4) and 01:09:924 (2)
   
   
8. 01:49:714 (2) - Add whistle at the head of this slider to emphasize the drum. Because, even if the drum from the main music for this upbeat was pretty soft, but it still could be heard clearly
   
   
9. Very nice diff

• Letter

1. 00:02:346 (2) - How about flip this slider vertically (ctrl + j), then put it at x:316 y:224 ? It would make the transition towards the next slider -> 00:03:609 (1) a lot softer, and it wouldn't destroy the spacing consistency either
   
   
   
2. 00:07:398 - How about adding a note here? Since the violin-like sound from the main music is pretty strong at this upbeat
   
   
3. 00:20:030 (3) - Um, unstack this note? Because its placement right now is kind of hard to recognize. And I also missed it during the test-play. So.....
   
   
4. 01:01:714 (3) - How about changing this 1/2 repeated slider into 1/4 repeated slider + a note instead? Because, up to this point during the kiai time, you kept consistently mapping the music for most of this section instead of the vocal.
   
   Moreover, using 1/2 repeated slider at this part would make the emphasize for the drum beat of the main music sounds a little bit off
   
   
5. 01:11:819 (3) - Change this 1/2 slider into 1/4 repeated slider or 1/4 slider + a note instead? Since the strong clap beat at 01:11:977 got skipped
   
   
   
   
6. 01:20:661 (1) - How about flip this slider horizontally (ctrl + H) then ctrl + G this slider and put it at x:110 y:348 afterwards? Because, putting the sharp angle near the head of this slider would emphasize the vocal a lot better than putting it near the tail
   
   
7. 01:32:029 (3) - Same suggestion as 01:11:819 (3)
   
   
8. 01:33:450 ~ 01:35:819 How about mapping this part instead of putting the spinner just like what you did in Normal diff? So that it would keep the consistency between these two diffs. Moreover, the drum beats from the main music for this part are still strong, and putting a spinner would make many of them got skipped
   
   
9. 01:37:872 - Add a note + whistle to emphasize the drum
   
   
10. 01:42:135 (3) - Same suggestion as 01:11:819 (3)
    
    
11. Very nice diff \owo/

ZhongRen wrote:

那啥 bg左下角的水印能去掉吗【】