Yui Horie - PRESENTER [Taiko] · forum

yuzu__rinrin

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-12T09:54:39+00:00

frukoyurdakul wrote:
Futsu is pretty good. thanks ><

[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:22:868 - How about adding two dons here in 1/4? It will support the drum sound.
No change.
I think it's a good idea. But I'd like to get an easy-to-understand melody.

00:56:743 - Maybe you can add a don here.
ok,changed

00:57:438 (102,103,104) - I've tried reversing the colors here and it sounded good.
nice idia.

01:28:531 - Adding dk in 1/4 here will fit to the outro of the song imo. It also support vocals.
keep...
At muzu I feel a little discomfort.
I will change it when another modder points out.

thank you for modding~
@Pnkmjp sorry late.　許せ

Otakumojp

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-12T10:50:42+00:00

update

zigizigiefe

952 posts

Joined March 2013

zigizigiefe 2017-02-13T00:41:02+00:00

from my queue o/

[Muzukashii]

00:23:465 (35,36) - CTRL+G,because first sound is low,second is high,also that would be fit.
00:26:246 (46,47,48,49,50) - Add finisher,sounds are too strong imo
00:45:120 (52) - That sound is strong,too.Why didn't you add finisher :/
01:09:557 (38) - Move to 01:09:458 - for better vocal emphasis
01:25:451 (52) - There is no drum sound.
01:27:835 (60) - Same above

[Oni]

00:03:200 (11,12,13,14) - Strong drum sounds.So add finisher pls
00:31:412 (1) - There is no any vocal,piano or drum sound.
00:40:551 (48,51,54) - That's just suggestion..Drum sounds are too strong,try it with finisher.
01:03:200 - Add a note here if you wanna emphasize vocal here,that would be better.
01:03:796 - ^
01:23:465 (126) - ddkdkkkkk pattern isn't good.Use more common pattern,like ddkdkkkkd
01:24:061 (128,129,130,131) - These notes for vocal emphasis is unnecessary for here.

I guess that's it,Good Luck

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-13T07:15:42+00:00

zigizigiefe wrote:
from my queue o/

[Muzukashii]
00:23:465 (35,36) - CTRL+G,because first sound is low,second is high,also that would be fit.
ok
00:26:246 (46,47,48,49,50) - Add finisher,sounds are too strong imo
m,ok
00:45:120 (52) - That sound is strong,too.Why didn't you add finisher :/
wwwww ok
01:09:557 (38) - Move to 01:09:458 - for better vocal emphasis
ok
01:25:451 (52) - There is no drum sound.
deleted
01:27:835 (60) - Same above
Move to 01: 27: 736 - in order to pick up vocal
I guess that's it,Good Luck

thank you for modding~

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Title:PRESENTER (TV Size)
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Artist:Yui Horie
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
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toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

toara_fict 2017-02-13T19:59:01+00:00

No kds.

[

General]

Romanised Artist : Yui Horie -> Horie Yui
全難易度 01:32:405 - spinのおわりここじゃない？

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[

Kantan]

00:57:835 (31,32) - finishで色そろえていいと思う

それだけ

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[

Futsuu]

00:10:153 (1) - spinの終わり違和感

それだけ

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[

Muzukashii]

00:18:696 (17) - change d ( kkddkでいいかなって )
00:45:120 (52) - finishにするかkにするかしたいかな個人的にはkかなって感じ
00:55:253 (93,94,95) - swap ( kkdでいいかな後ろの音的に )

Nice diff.

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[

Oni]

00:22:074 (23,24,25) - change dkd or kkd is better.
00:25:849 (40) - change k ? ( 正直どっちでもいいと思う)
00:40:352 (47) - change k ( 後ろの音あがってる )
00:47:306 (23) - change K ( 00:44:127 (9) - 合わせて )
00:47:703 (24,25,26,27) - change kddk oe dkdk ( 00:48:100 (26) - ここはdだとおもう )
00:52:272 (44) - change d ( 00:50:683 (37) - 00:53:266 (48) - 音の高さそんな変わらない )
00:53:862 (50,51,52,53) - ここの２連打くどいとおもうからこんな感じでいいんじゃない？ ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316326 )
00:57:835 (72,73,74) - add finishでもいいかと
01:01:213 - add k ( 01:01:610 (11,12,13,14,15) - ここが違和感なくなるとおもう )
01:02:306 (17) - move 01:02:504 (18) - & 01:02:405 (17) - ここからddk
01:10:948 - ここから３連打のdddでも追加していいんじゃない？ kiaiだし音はあるし
01:13:928 - add d & 01:13:729 (77) - change k ( 01:01:213 - ここと同じ理由 )
01:15:120 (87,88,89) - swap. ddkでいいのでは
01:22:471 (121) - ここから https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316392 これでもいいかと Vocalでとりたくないならそのままで

割と主観だから全部変えなくていいと思う

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ざっくりとしか見てないからこんな感じで

頑張れクソガキ

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-14T01:56:39+00:00

toara_fict wrote:
No kds.

[ General]
Romanised Artist : Yui Horie -> Horie Yui
できるならHorie YuiがいいけどそーすあるからYui Horieとかいうクソダサい感じになってる
http://king-cr.jp/artist/horie/

全難易度 01:32:405 - spinのおわりここじゃない？
むずとfutsuに適用

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[ Futsuu]
00:10:153 (1) - spinの終わり違和感
違和感あるけど打数調整したいんご...

それだけ
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[ Muzukashii]
00:18:696 (17) - change d ( kkddkでいいかなって )
ok
00:45:120 (52) - finishにするかkにするかしたいかな個人的にはkかなって感じ
上でfinishにしてたらしい、pnkmjpの更新遅れ

00:55:253 (93,94,95) - swap ( kkdでいいかな後ろの音的に )
ok

Nice diff.
　アリガトウ_(:3 」∠)_

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ざっくりとしか見てないからこんな感じで

頑張れクソガキ

arigatoara_fict

悲報(F)

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Pnkmjp(M)

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-14T17:12:45+00:00

zigizigiefe wrote:
from my queue o/

[Oni]
00:03:200 (11,12,13,14) - Strong drum sounds.So add finisher pls
- added finisher to 11,12,14
00:31:412 (1) - There is no any vocal,piano or drum sound.
- no change
00:40:551 (48,51,54) - That's just suggestion..Drum sounds are too strong,try it with finisher.
- added finisher to 00:41:941 (54) -
01:03:200 - Add a note here if you wanna emphasize vocal here,that would be better.
- added d
01:03:796 - ^
- added d
01:23:465 (126) - ddkdkkkkk pattern isn't good.Use more common pattern,like ddkdkkkkd
- i think it is high pitch. no change
01:24:061 (128,129,130,131) - These notes for vocal emphasis is unnecessary for here.
- umm... keep
I guess that's it,Good Luck

thank you for modding !!

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-14T17:35:21+00:00

toara_fict wrote:
No kds.

[ General]
Romanised Artist : Yui Horie -> Horie Yui
- これまでのRankedのやつ見てみたらHorie Yui多かったし変更！

全難易度 01:32:405 - spinのおわりここじゃない？
- カエタ
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Kantan]
00:57:835 (31,32) - finishで色そろえていいと思う
- K K にした
それだけ
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Oni]
00:22:074 (23,24,25) - change dkd or kkd is better.
- kkd にした

00:25:849 (40) - change k ? ( 正直どっちでもいいと思う)

00:40:352 (47) - change k ( 後ろの音あがってる )

00:47:306 (23) - change K ( 00:44:127 (9) - 合わせて )

00:47:703 (24,25,26,27) - change kddk oe dkdk ( 00:48:100 (26) - ここはdだとおもう )
- d k d k に変えました

00:52:272 (44) - change d ( 00:50:683 (37) - 00:53:266 (48) - 音の高さそんな変わらない )

00:53:862 (50,51,52,53) - ここの２連打くどいとおもうからこんな感じでいいんじゃない？ ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316326 )

00:57:835 (72,73,74) - add finishでもいいかと

01:01:213 - add k ( 01:01:610 (11,12,13,14,15) - ここが違和感なくなるとおもう )

01:02:306 (17) - move 01:02:504 (18) - & 01:02:405 (17) - ここからddk

01:10:948 - ここから３連打のdddでも追加していいんじゃない？ kiaiだし音はあるし

01:13:928 - add d & 01:13:729 (77) - change k ( 01:01:213 - ここと同じ理由 )

01:15:120 (87,88,89) - swap. ddkでいいのでは
- うーんちょっと違和感ある感じしたから kkk にした

01:22:471 (121) - ここから https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316392 これでもいいかと Vocalでとりたくないならそのままで
- そのままにしたい

割と主観だから全部変えなくていいと思う
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

ざっくりとしか見てないからこんな感じで

頑張れクソガキ

modありがとナス！

komasy

621 posts

Joined October 2012

komasy 2017-02-17T15:17:43+00:00

M4Mです! mod超初心者ですが、よろしくお願いします。

Oni

00:03:200 (11,12) - 00:03:994 (14) - delete finish? そんな強い音なっていないのに加え周りとの雰囲気を考えたときに結構浮いているような印象を受けました

00:22:670 (26) - delete finish? 上の理由に加え1/4と隣接した同色なのでプレイ感の向上を図る目的もあります

00:23:465 (31) - change to k? 4小節前の1/2のddkdから縁の量を増やして変化を付けるという目的と00:24:855 (35,36,37) - がkkdだから視覚的な面で綺麗にするという目的です

00:31:014 (1) - delete? ここからはボーカル合わせになっていることを考えるとここに音符を置くのは少し違和感を感じました。

00:31:809 (3) - delete? ボーカルがないのと、静かな部分なので密度を下げてほかの場所を盛り上げる役割です

00:32:206 (4,5) - ctrl+g? ボーカルの高低です。(ctrl+g後、00:32:206 (4) - をkにするのもありだと思います)

00:33:299 (9) - change to d and 00:33:398 (10) - delete? ^^

00:38:166 (33) - change to k and move to 00:38:266 - ? ボーカル合わせを進めることで統一感の増加に加え軽快な気持ちで叩くことができるかもしれません

00:38:763 (36) - change to k? ボーカルの高低です。キック音から外れることになりますが、あんまり目立たないので…

00:39:756 (42) - move to 00:39:855 - ? ^^の提案を受けた場合は変更することをお勧めします~

00:40:551 (46) - and 00:41:147 (49) - add finish? この付近の小節で縁大音符を置くことでパートの代わり際としてぴったりだと思います

00:44:425 - add k? ここは好みです　個人的にはこうしたほうが00:44:723 (12) - の音が際立って好きです

00:47:604 - ^

00:48:696 (30) - change to d? 00:47:902 (27,28,29) - ここがkdkなので変化を付けたいです

00:55:451 (62) - change to k? ドンが三回単音で続くのは若干寂しい…？

01:01:213 (9) - move to 01:00:617 - こっちの方が伴奏のリズムを気持ちよくフォローできると思います。

01:03:398 (23) - change to k? ボーカルの高低をフォロー。

01:04:392 (28) - changeto k? ここもやっぱりボーカルをフォローしたい。01:04:988 (32) - ここも同じくカツになっているので…

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41) - change to kddk? この配置だと両端のkがボーカルにぴったりだと思います。

01:07:074 (44) - change to d? こちらの方が聞こえがいいと思います。

01:07:868 (49) - move to 01:08:067 - ^^と^の部分とリズムパターンを統一したほうがいいと思います

01:13:332 - 01:13:431 - にadd kし、01:13:431 (78) - をchange to k 、そして01:13:729 (79) - をchange to dして01:13:928 (80) - をdelete?
つまり01:13:133 (77) - から、「k kkk d kkdkdkd 」というのはどうでしょうという提案です。01:01:213 (9) - を変更した場合はこちらもそれに合わせるといいと思います

01:14:623 (87) - delete? ピアノの音小さくなっていっているし、5連に収めておいた方が纏まりがいいと思います。

01:14:921 (88) - change to k? ボーカル　この提案を受けた場合は01:15:120 (89,90) - をchange to dd?

01:22:570 - 個人的にadd kです。ボーカル鳴っているためです。ここはお好みで

01:25:849 (144) - change to k?

01:27:041 (149) - ここadd d して01:27:438 (150) - をchange to kというのはどうでしょうか

Muzukashii

00:56:842 (101) - 1/4一個分左にmove?　ここはどうしても違和感を感じました

01:03:398 (13) - change to k? ボーカルの高低に合わせる目的です

01:05:385 - や 01:05:584 - にadd k? 休符を短くして流れを崩したくない感じです

01:08:961 (38) - delete?　次の付点リズムに向けて

01:16:114 (19) - ^^^

Futsuu

00:03:200 (5) - change to k?

00:06:378 (10) - change to k?

01:03:200 - add d?

01:04:988 (17) - finisherもありだと思います
01:05:981 (18) - ^
01:10:749 (30) - ^
01:11:345 (31) - ^
01:12:339 (1) - ^
01:18:697 (18) - ^
01:20:286 (21) - ^
01:28:829 (39,40) - ^

01:15:915 (12) - add d?

01:29:226 (40) - change to k?

Kantan

00:24:657 (14) - change to k?

00:44:921 (16) - add d and 00:45:120 (16) - move to 00:45:319 - ?　00:46:114 (17,18) - ここと合わせ簡易的なリズムに？

00:49:292 - add k?

01:29:226 (75) - move to 01:29:027 - ?

GOOD LUCK!!!

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-18T11:21:00+00:00

komasy wrote:
M4Mです! mod超初心者ですが、よろしくお願いします。

[Muzukashii]
00:56:842 (101) - 1/4一個分左にmove?　ここはどうしても違和感を感じました
音聞き取り間違えてますね...直しました、changed

01:03:398 (13) - change to k? ボーカルの高低に合わせる目的です
パターン被るのでdd k d に変更しました。

01:05:385 - や 01:05:584 - にadd k? 休符を短くして流れを崩したくない感じです
わかるけどキープで。自分としてはMuzuplayerにも休憩を与えたいです。

01:08:961 (38) - delete?　次の付点リズムに向けて
no change.難所作りです。ただ坦々とプレイしたって面白くないじゃないですか。kiaiなのでいくらか許容されると思います。

01:16:114 (19) - ^^^
ok

[Futsuu]
00:03:200 (5) - change to k?
no change. なんで

00:06:378 (10) - change to k?
no change. なんで

01:03:200 - add d?
no change. 休みを潰したくありません。

01:04:988 (17) - finisherもありだと思います
01:05:981 (18) - ^
01:10:749 (30) - ^
01:11:345 (31) - ^
01:12:339 (1) - ^　ok
01:18:697 (18) - ^
01:20:286 (21) - ^
01:28:829 (39,40) - ^
その他no change. なぜFinishをつける意味があるか理解できませんでした。別につけなくてもいい音だと思います。

01:15:915 (12) - add d?
no change. 休みを潰したくないです。

01:29:226 (40) - change to k?
no change. 音程そのままなんですけど。

GOOD LUCK!!!

modありがとうございました

フツ

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-19T23:35:55+00:00

komasy wrote:
M4Mです! mod超初心者ですが、よろしくお願いします。

Oni
00:03:200 (11,12) - 00:03:994 (14) - delete finish? そんな強い音なっていないのに加え周りとの雰囲気を考えたときに結構浮いているような印象を受けました
- 他よりも強い音がなっているように感じたのでfinishを置きました。他のmodder様に同じところ言われたら変更します。

00:22:670 (26) - delete finish? 上の理由に加え1/4と隣接した同色なのでプレイ感の向上を図る目的もあります
- No change.

00:23:465 (31) - change to k? 4小節前の1/2のddkdから縁の量を増やして変化を付けるという目的と00:24:855 (35,36,37) - がkkdだから視覚的な面で綺麗にするという目的です

00:31:014 (1) - delete? ここからはボーカル合わせになっていることを考えるとここに音符を置くのは少し違和感を感じました。
- ピアノの音がなっているしno change

00:31:809 (3) - delete? ボーカルがないのと、静かな部分なので密度を下げてほかの場所を盛り上げる役割です
- ここは個人的に3連打にしたい… Keep

00:32:206 (4,5) - ctrl+g? ボーカルの高低です。(ctrl+g後、00:32:206 (4) - をkにするのもありだと思います)
- Keep

00:33:299 (9) - change to d and 00:33:398 (10) - delete? ^^
- 上の理由と同じくKeep

00:38:166 (33) - change to k and move to 00:38:266 - ? ボーカル合わせを進めることで統一感の増加に加え軽快な気持ちで叩くことができるかもしれません
- change to k ここに2連を置くのは違和感を感じました。

00:38:763 (36) - change to k? ボーカルの高低です。キック音から外れることになりますが、あんまり目立たないので…

00:39:756 (42) - move to 00:39:855 - ? ^^の提案を受けた場合は変更することをお勧めします~
- No change

00:40:551 (46) - and 00:41:147 (49) - add finish? この付近の小節で縁大音符を置くことでパートの代わり際としてぴったりだと思います

00:44:425 - add k? ここは好みです　個人的にはこうしたほうが00:44:723 (12) - の音が際立って好きです
- メッチャ悩みましたがkeepさせていただきます。

00:47:604 - ^
- 同上

00:48:696 (30) - change to d? 00:47:902 (27,28,29) - ここがkdkなので変化を付けたいです

00:55:451 (62) - change to k? ドンが三回単音で続くのは若干寂しい…？

01:01:213 (9) - move to 01:00:617 - こっちの方が伴奏のリズムを気持ちよくフォローできると思います。

01:03:398 (23) - change to k? ボーカルの高低をフォロー。
- Keep

01:04:392 (28) - changeto k? ここもやっぱりボーカルをフォローしたい。01:04:988 (32) - ここも同じくカツになっているので…

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41) - change to kddk? この配置だと両端のkがボーカルにぴったりだと思います。

01:07:074 (44) - change to d? こちらの方が聞こえがいいと思います。
- No change.

01:07:868 (49) - move to 01:08:067 - ^^と^の部分とリズムパターンを統一したほうがいいと思います
- 同じ4連というのも少しアレなのでここは少しアレンジを効かせました。他のmodder様に指摘されたら変更します。

01:13:332 - 01:13:431 - にadd kし、01:13:431 (78) - をchange to k 、そして01:13:729 (79) - をchange to dして01:13:928 (80) - をdelete?
つまり01:13:133 (77) - から、「k kkk d kkdkdkd 」というのはどうでしょうという提案です。01:01:213 (9) - を変更した場合はこちらもそれに合わせるといいと思います
- 01:13:133 (77) - を change to d 01:13:332にadd k 01:13:431 (78) - をchange to kしました。

01:14:623 (87) - delete? ピアノの音小さくなっていっているし、5連に収めておいた方が纏まりがいいと思います。
- ピアノの音がそこまで小さくないのでNo change.

01:14:921 (88) - change to k? ボーカル　この提案を受けた場合は01:15:120 (89,90) - をchange to dd?
- No change.

01:22:570 - 個人的にadd kです。ボーカル鳴っているためです。ここはお好みで
- No change.

01:25:849 (144) - change to k?

01:27:041 (149) - ここadd d して01:27:438 (150) - をchange to kというのはどうでしょうか
Kantan
00:24:657 (14) - change to k?

00:44:921 (16) - add d and 00:45:120 (16) - move to 00:45:319 - ?　00:46:114 (17,18) - ここと合わせ簡易的なリズムに？
- 難易度が難易度なのであまり難しい配置を置きたくないです。00:45:120 (16) - は周りの間隔があいているかつ強い音がなっているので置いています。

00:49:292 - add k?
- Keepさせてください。

01:29:226 (75) - move to 01:29:027 - ?
- No change.
GOOD LUCK!!!

modありがとうございました！

Waribashi

638 posts

Joined January 2013

Waribashi 2017-02-20T00:21:08+00:00

こんにちは。MODします。（主観的な指摘が主です）from gamechat
[Kantan]
スピナーの終了地点を00:30:617 (18) - から00:29:425 (18) - に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。次のノーツにスピナーが貼り付いてて少々忙しないかもしれません。
[yzrin's Futsuu]
01:17:504 (16) - delete (サビの同じリズム箇所(01:04:789 (1) - 01:11:147 (30) - )をとってなくて敢えてここを取る必要はないかなと感じました。)
[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:37:769 (24,25) - change to k d (変えるのなら00:39:359 (30,31) - ここも)
01:01:809 (6) - change to d (「響けば」の「ば」をとるのならば音階的に下がっているよう聞こえるのでここはkより低いdで取るべきだと思います。）
[Oni]
00:22:670 (26) - change to d (こ↑こ↓よくわかんなかったです)
00:31:710 (2,3) - delete (静かなパートということもあり密度をそれに合わせる形にしたほうがいいと感じます。）
00:33:299 (8,9) - delete (上と同様)
00:34:789 (14) - change to d
00:52:272 (44) - change to D
00:58:630 (75) - delete (ここを切ることによって前のドラムのキレの良さを再現できると思います）

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね；；；
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います！good luck

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-20T02:24:58+00:00

KitajimaYN wrote:
こんにちは。MODします。（主観的な指摘が主です）from gamechat

[yzrin's Futsuu]
01:17:504 (16) - delete (サビの同じリズム箇所(01:04:789 (1) - 01:11:147 (30) - )をとってなくて敢えてここを取る必要はないかなと感じました。)
keep... あえて取らなくてもいいけど... voとりたさ... ん～...
[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:37:769 (24,25) - change to k d (変えるのなら00:39:359 (30,31) - ここも)
changed. なるほど、ここ一帯こねくり回しましたここ結構いい感じなのでfutsuuもchangeしました。
01:01:809 (6) - change to d (「響けば」の「ば」をとるのならば音階的に下がっているよう聞こえるのでここはkより低いdで取るべきだと思います。）
dの方が理にかなってるんですけど、kの方が良い説ある気がする（？）

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね；；；
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います！good luck

modありがとうごじゃいました

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-27T10:15:40+00:00

KitajimaYN wrote:
こんにちは。MODします。（主観的な指摘が主です）from gamechat
[Kantan]
スピナーの終了地点を00:30:617 (18) - から00:29:425 (18) - に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。次のノーツにスピナーが貼り付いてて少々忙しないかもしれません。
- 確かにギリギリで叩ききったプレイヤーが次のノーツでミスをしてしまう可能性も無しではないので短くしました。
[Oni]
00:22:670 (26) - change to d (こ↑こ↓よくわかんなかったです)
- 他より音強いから～って置いたんだけど今見たらこれわっかんねえな戻しました。
00:31:710 (2,3) - delete (静かなパートということもあり密度をそれに合わせる形にしたほうがいいと感じます。）
- なるほど fixed !
00:33:299 (8,9) - delete (上と同様)
- fixed
00:34:789 (14) - change to d
- No change
00:52:272 (44) - change to D
- fixed
00:58:630 (75) - delete (ここを切ることによって前のドラムのキレの良さを再現できると思います）
- fixed

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね；；；
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います！good luck

modありがとうございました！！返信遅れて申し訳ないです ;3

gaston_2199

1,140 posts

Joined February 2015

gaston_2199 2017-03-01T19:19:41+00:00

Hi!
NM from my queue~

[

Kantan]

00:22:670 (11) - Kat for consistence as 00:16:312 (3) -
00:25:054 - You can add kat here to follow the melody
00:25:451 (15) - This change to kat for the same reason as above (only if you accept)
00:31:014 (1,2) - Why not change to kat? Because the sound is sharper than this 00:37:372 (7,8) -
00:53:266 (26,27,28,29,30) - How about dkkdd? 00:54:061 (27,28) - I listen these notes turn up the volumen, so maybe change to kat
01:10:352 (48) - These notes 01:09:160 (46,47,49,50) - you follow the vocal. In my opinion it's sounds good if you delete 01:10:352 (48) - to emphatizes better the vocal

[

yzrin's Futsuu]

How about change the diff name to "yuzu's Futsuu"? Only my opinion c:

00:02:008 (3) - This note is unnesesary, no destacable sound. Maybe move to 00:03:597 - to follow the vocal?
00:03:994 (6) - Kat? vocal
00:23:465 (21,22) - Change to don? This 00:23:465 (21) - is the same that 00:17:107 (7) -, and this too 00:23:862 (22) - but the tone is more low than 00:17:504 (8) -

[

yzrin's Muzukashii]

00:32:802 (7) - Move this to 00:32:604 - to follow the piano, is better.
00:33:398 (9) - The same as above, move to 00:33:200 -
00:34:193 - Add kat to follow piano?
01:10:153 (41,43) - Delete this, because is the same than here 01:09:160 (37,38,39) - and emphatize the vocal

[

Oni]

00:10:153 (45) -Change to don?
01:23:465 (133,134) - Change to don? In the others diff was always don

That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-01T21:49:18+00:00

gaston_2199 wrote:
Hi!
NM from my queue~
[ Kantan]
00:22:670 (11) - Kat for consistence as 00:16:312 (3) -
- i think it is low pitch. No change
00:25:054 - You can add kat here to follow the melody
- ok
00:25:451 (15) - This change to kat for the same reason as above (only if you accept)
- I think it is the same as pitch with 00:27:041 (18) -
00:31:014 (1,2) - Why not change to kat? Because the sound is sharper than this 00:37:372 (7,8) -
- ok
00:53:266 (26,27,28,29,30) - How about dkkdd? 00:54:061 (27,28) - I listen these notes turn up the volumen, so maybe change to kat
- ok :3
01:10:352 (48) - These notes 01:09:160 (46,47,49,50) - you follow the vocal. In my opinion it's sounds good if you delete 01:10:352 (48) - to emphatizes better the vocal
- ok
[ Oni]
00:10:153 (45) -Change to don?
- I follow the vocal. I think this pitch is high
01:23:465 (133,134) - Change to don? In the others diff was always don
- ok changed
That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~

Thank you for modding !!

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-03-02T01:30:41+00:00

gaston_2199 wrote:
Hi!
NM from my queue~
[ yzrin's Futsuu]
How about change the diff name to "yuzu's Futsuu"? Only my opinion c:
00:02:008 (3) - This note is unnesesary, no destacable sound. Maybe move to 00:03:597 - to follow the vocal?
ok
00:03:994 (6) - Kat? vocal
ok
00:23:465 (21,22) - Change to don? This 00:23:465 (21) - is the same that 00:17:107 (7) -, and this too 00:23:862 (22) - but the tone is more low than 00:17:504 (8) -
change d k

[ yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:32:802 (7) - Move this to 00:32:604 - to follow the piano, is better.
00:33:398 (9) - The same as above, move to 00:33:200 -
changed it a little by myself.
00:34:193 - Add kat to follow piano?
If it is piano sound, I think that this is correct.
01:10:153 (41,43) - Delete this, because is the same than here 01:09:160 (37,38,39) - and emphatize the vocal
ok.

That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~

thanks for modding ~

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-02T09:22:13+00:00

update

Remus

452 posts

Joined July 2015

Remus 2017-03-03T14:34:50+00:00

Hello.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

00:21:875 - miss don here. There is drum sound.
00:27:637 - i think that you should put here kat/don here to not miss very loud instrumental. Move spinner a bit further.
00:30:617 - miss loud sound again. As we know, Muzu isn't diff where you can put anything you want, so you should use any of your opportunities here(i mean use any your chance to emphasize the sound).
00:45:517 (53,54,55,56) - what about dkkd here?
00:48:696 (66,67,68,69) - well, you made it further, so last suggestion SeemsGood.
00:56:842 (101) - move it to 00:56:743. Imo, sounds better.
01:29:623 - as i said before

[Oni]

00:27:637 - i mentioned it in Muzu. Better to map and move spinner a bit.
00:33:796 (9) - kat for better rhytm.
01:04:392 (28) - the same reason as above. Lack of kats sometimes looks weird, when before/after this part there much of them(kats). Stability is always good, so better to fix here.
01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86) - kkkdk?
01:21:875 (121,125) - the same as above, but here you can skip this, because it is looks nice even without kats.
01:29:623 - if you decided to fix that moment before, fix here too.

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-03-04T10:15:05+00:00

Remus wrote:
Hello.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:21:875 - miss don here. There is drum sound.
ok
00:27:637 - i think that you should put here kat/don here to not miss very loud instrumental. Move spinner a bit further.
When putting the notes there will be uncomfortable at the beginning of the spinner.
00:30:617 - miss loud sound again. As we know, Muzu isn't diff where you can put anything you want, so you should use any of your opportunities here(i mean use any your chance to emphasize the sound).

It is best to start a notes from here
00:45:517 (53,54,55,56) - what about dkkd here?
I think kddk is better.
00:48:696 (66,67,68,69) - well, you made it further, so last suggestion SeemsGood.
00:56:842 (101) - move it to 00:56:743. Imo, sounds better.
ok
01:29:623 - as i said before
no

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.

thank you for modding :3

q

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-06T16:57:57+00:00

Remus wrote:
Hello.

[Oni]
00:27:637 - i mentioned it in Muzu. Better to map and move spinner a bit.
- No change
00:33:796 (9) - kat for better rhytm.
- ok
01:04:392 (28) - the same reason as above. Lack of kats sometimes looks weird, when before/after this part there much of them(kats). Stability is always good, so better to fix here.
- ok
01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86) - kkkdk?
- umm... keep...
01:21:875 (121,125) - the same as above, but here you can skip this, because it is looks nice even without kats.
- No change
01:29:623 - if you decided to fix that moment before, fix here too.
- No change

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.

Thank you for modding

Tomoka Rin

Former osu! Champion: #1

378 posts

Joined June 2009

Tomoka Rin 2017-03-06T16:58:25+00:00

IRC savelog

00:18 Sanawieck: そういえばなんですけどmodって出来ますか？
00:21 *Sanawieck is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)]
00:21 Sanawieck: 前自分がやった感じのやつです！
00:21 Tomoka Rin: おおお
00:22 Tomoka Rin: やってみる
00:24 Tomoka Rin: えっと
00:24 Sanawieck: ＞ｗ＜ｂ
00:25 Tomoka Rin: ちょっと気になるところはね
00:26 Sanawieck: うん
00:26 Tomoka Rin: 01:03:994 (25,26) - ここdk、01:04:789 (31) - ここもkかな
00:28 Sanawieck: 01:03:994 (26) - ここｋにした！ 01:04:789 (31) - は後ろのドラム音取りたいからkeepにしたい
00:28 Tomoka Rin: うん
00:28 Sanawieck: dk に変えた！
00:31 Tomoka Rin: あと
00:31 Tomoka Rin: 00:40:749 (45) - ここ、kならどう
00:32 Tomoka Rin: dもいいけど
00:33 Tomoka Rin: ここはおすきにｗ
00:34 Sanawieck: とても悩む…ｗｗｗ
00:36 Sanawieck: 音程どおりにしたいのでここはdでいきます！
00:36 Tomoka Rin: うん...さっきも悩んでるｗ
00:37 Sanawieck: ｗｗ
00:40 Tomoka Rin: 　01:13:729 (80) -
00:41 Tomoka Rin: ここdになったら
00:42 Tomoka Rin: 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) -
00:43 Tomoka Rin: 元のはpianoについてる、https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499712
00:43 Tomoka Rin: これ変えたらもいいと思う
00:44 Tomoka Rin: あくまで個人的な意見けどｗ
00:44 Sanawieck: kkdkddk良い！！ｗｗ
00:44 Sanawieck: 変えたw
00:46 Tomoka Rin: 01:22:670 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) -
00:46 Tomoka Rin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499737
00:48 Tomoka Rin: 最後は01:28:829 (156) - kもdもいいよ、お好きにｗ
00:49 Sanawieck: うーんkeepで;;;
00:51 Tomoka Rin: はい(*ﾟ▽ﾟ)ﾉ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: 以上だ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: いい譜面やリズムと思うよ
00:51 Sanawieck: ありがとー！！！
00:52 Sanawieck: 嬉しい＞ω＜

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-06T17:02:42+00:00

Tomoka Rin wrote:
IRC savelog
00:18 Sanawieck: そういえばなんですけどmodって出来ますか？
00:21 *Sanawieck is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)]
00:21 Sanawieck: 前自分がやった感じのやつです！
00:21 Tomoka Rin: おおお
00:22 Tomoka Rin: やってみる
00:24 Tomoka Rin: えっと
00:24 Sanawieck: ＞ｗ＜ｂ
00:25 Tomoka Rin: ちょっと気になるところはね
00:26 Sanawieck: うん
00:26 Tomoka Rin: 01:03:994 (25,26) - ここdk、01:04:789 (31) - ここもkかな
00:28 Sanawieck: 01:03:994 (26) - ここｋにした！ 01:04:789 (31) - は後ろのドラム音取りたいからkeepにしたい
00:28 Tomoka Rin: うん
00:28 Sanawieck: dk に変えた！
00:31 Tomoka Rin: あと
00:31 Tomoka Rin: 00:40:749 (45) - ここ、kならどう
00:32 Tomoka Rin: dもいいけど
00:33 Tomoka Rin: ここはおすきにｗ
00:34 Sanawieck: とても悩む…ｗｗｗ
00:36 Sanawieck: 音程どおりにしたいのでここはdでいきます！
00:36 Tomoka Rin: うん...さっきも悩んでるｗ
00:37 Sanawieck: ｗｗ
00:40 Tomoka Rin: 　01:13:729 (80) -
00:41 Tomoka Rin: ここdになったら
00:42 Tomoka Rin: 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) -
00:43 Tomoka Rin: 元のはpianoについてる、https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499712
00:43 Tomoka Rin: これ変えたらもいいと思う
00:44 Tomoka Rin: あくまで個人的な意見けどｗ
00:44 Sanawieck: kkdkddk良い！！ｗｗ
00:44 Sanawieck: 変えたw
00:46 Tomoka Rin: 01:22:670 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) -
00:46 Tomoka Rin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499737
00:48 Tomoka Rin: 最後は01:28:829 (156) - kもdもいいよ、お好きにｗ
00:49 Sanawieck: うーんkeepで;;;
00:51 Tomoka Rin: はい(*ﾟ▽ﾟ)ﾉ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: 以上だ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: いい譜面やリズムと思うよ
00:51 Sanawieck: ありがとー！！！
00:52 Sanawieck: 嬉しい＞ω＜

IRCありがとう！！！！！

update !

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-04-07T11:30:52+00:00

Sorry, I can't mod your because i don't mod graveyard beatmap

davidminh0111

1,335 posts

Joined January 2017

davidminh0111 2017-04-08T00:25:04+00:00

Hello from my modding queue:
Oni:
00:35:782: Remove this
01:14:226 (83, 85): Remove this
01:15:517: Add Drum

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-04-10T01:33:50+00:00

davidminh0111 wrote:
Hello from my modding queue:
Oni:
00:35:782: Remove this
- No change
01:14:226 (83, 85): Remove this
- No change
01:15:517: Add Drum
- No change

Thanks for modding

Ozu

647 posts

Joined July 2011

Ozu 2017-04-19T08:17:12+00:00

( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD

[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat

[ Kantan ]

00:44:127 (15) - D? there isn't any notes around here so eazy to play big note, and sound is emphasized here.
00:47:306 (19) - ^

01:05:981 (42,43,44,45) - k k d d? to lay down offbeat burden.

01:28:829 (71) - add d seems OK. not difficult, fit very nice.

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

01:05:981 (17,18,19) - looks like just 1/4 ddk because of bgm.

*suggestion 1*
01:06:378 (18) - delete
*suggestion 2*
01:05:981 (17,18,19) - dkd
*suggestion 3*
01:06:180 (18) - add d <- most i like

01:07:570 (20,21,22) - ^

[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

Perfect to me~♪(*´∀｀)

[ Oni ]

00:19:690 (13) - k? if you don't want to k, how about 00:19:888 (14,15,16,17) - kkdk?

00:45:120 (13) ,00:48:299 (27) - K? Big note is love <3

01:24:259 (136,137,138) - little much d in this stream. change here like kdd so that avoid one color.

01:28:829 (156,157) - D K?

sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-04-19T09:00:57+00:00

404 AccNotFound wrote:
( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

01:05:981 (17,18,19) - looks like just 1/4 ddk because of bgm.

*suggestion 1*
01:06:378 (18) - delete
*suggestion 2*
01:05:981 (17,18,19) - dkd
*suggestion 3*
01:06:180 (18) - add d <- most i like

01:07:570 (20,21,22) - ^

no change,
I tried it variously. However, I decided that the shape of the current form is a form that the rhythm and the break are moderately taken.

I thought that Futsuu players should do the one-step difficult rhythm as well.

[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

Perfect to me~♪(*´∀｀)
( ˘ω˘ )thank you( ˘ω˘ )

sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~

thank you for modding ~

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-04-21T16:41:53+00:00

404 AccNotFound wrote:
( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD

[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat

[ Kantan ]

00:44:127 (15) - D? there isn't any notes around here so eazy to play big note, and sound is emphasized here.
00:47:306 (19) - ^

01:05:981 (42,43,44,45) - k k d d? to lay down offbeat burden.

01:28:829 (71) - add d seems OK. not difficult, fit very nice.

- All changed :3

[ Oni ]

00:19:690 (13) - k? if you don't want to k, how about 00:19:888 (14,15,16,17) - kkdk?
- No change

00:45:120 (13) ,00:48:299 (27) - K? Big note is love <3
- umm... keep

01:24:259 (136,137,138) - little much d in this stream. change here like kdd so that avoid one color.
- ok

01:28:829 (156,157) - D K?
- changed d K

sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~

Thank you for modding !!

Karee Pan

185 posts

Joined December 2015

Karee Pan 2017-04-25T16:41:14+00:00

Hey!
From my queue.

[ Kantan ]

00:46:114 (17,18,19,20) - Sounds like this should be d k K d . Also mirrors the previous pattern nicely.
01:21:080 (61) - move to 01:20:882
01:22:272 (63) - Consider deleting this. It seems tough for Kantan

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

00:36:577 (11) - Sounds like a d to me.
00:43:531 - Looks like a good spot to keep the doubles going with a d, If applied, then i would also delete 00:46:908 (35) for consistency.
01:07:570 (20) - Maybe switch to k ? Even though the vocals stay the same the guitar pitch rise makes this sound better as a k to me

[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

00:31:412 (2) , 00:33:001 (8) , 00:36:180 (20) - I don't see any reason for these notes in a very calm part of the song
00:36:577 (20) - d sounds better to me
01:03:398 (13) , 01:16:114 (19) - k like the previous pattern to follow the vocal ?

[ Oni ]

00:19:491 (11) - Melody says d, bassdrum says d, gotta be a d.
00:19:888 (14) - To me k sounds better and flows alot better
00:22:670 (26) - k imo
00:25:650 (38,39,40,41,42) - I would go with dkkdk for some variety, might be just my preference.
01:27:339 - Could add a note

Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it

Best of Luck!

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-04-26T14:51:35+00:00

Karee Pan wrote:
Hey!
From my queue.

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

00:36:577 (11) - Sounds like a d to me.
I think kk is better.
00:43:531 - Looks like a good spot to keep the doubles going with a d, If applied, then i would also delete 00:46:908 (35) for consistency.
ok
01:07:570 (20) - Maybe switch to k ? Even though the vocals stay the same the guitar pitch rise makes this sound better as a k to me
I would like to make the map even simple according to vocal.

[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

00:31:412 (2) , 00:33:001 (8) , 00:36:180 (20) - I don't see any reason for these notes in a very calm part of the song
I erased it a little.
00:36:577 (20) - d sounds better to me
k
01:03:398 (13) , 01:16:114 (19) - k like the previous pattern to follow the vocal ?
I use a different color scheme to avoid duplication. 01:12:637 (2,3,4,5) -

Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it
Best of Luck!

thank you for modding~ :3

hutsuu

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-04-27T09:28:25+00:00

Karee Pan wrote:
Hey!
From my queue.

[ Kantan ]

00:46:114 (17,18,19,20) - Sounds like this should be d k K d . Also mirrors the previous pattern nicely.
- changed k d D k
01:21:080 (61) - move to 01:20:882
- ok
01:22:272 (63) - Consider deleting this. It seems tough for Kantan
- ok

[ Oni ]

00:19:491 (11) - Melody says d, bassdrum says d, gotta be a d.
- ok
00:19:888 (14) - To me k sounds better and flows alot better
- umm... keep
00:22:670 (26) - k imo
- No change
00:25:650 (38,39,40,41,42) - I would go with dkkdk for some variety, might be just my preference.
- No change
01:27:339 - Could add a note
- ok

Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it
Best of Luck!

Thank you for modding !!

Arrival

1,418 posts

Joined June 2012

Arrival 2017-05-14T02:14:34+00:00

Hello

[Kantan]

00:29:325 - This green line is useless as it is, leave the whole slider at 75% volume or reduce it from 75 to 65 graduatelly.

00:50:087 (22,24) - Consider putting these notes as finishers. Choice is yours

01:06:676 (43,45) - Avoid mapping blue ticks on Kantan. Although I see you want to map the vocals, there are also dominant sounds on 01:06:577 - and 01:08:166 - which sould be prioritized since we're on the easiest difficultu of the set. Put these 2 notes on the previous red ticks.

01:28:829 (70) - Add this as a finisher too

Really tired i'll do the rest tomorrow. PM me in game if I forget

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-05-14T07:29:11+00:00

Arrival wrote:
Hello

[Kantan]

00:29:325 - This green line is useless as it is, leave the whole slider at 75% volume or reduce it from 75 to 65 graduatelly.
- ok

00:50:087 (22,24) - Consider putting these notes as finishers. Choice is yours
- Add finisher to 00:50:683 (23) -

01:06:676 (43,45) - Avoid mapping blue ticks on Kantan. Although I see you want to map the vocals, there are also dominant sounds on 01:06:577 - and 01:08:166 - which sould be prioritized since we're on the easiest difficultu of the set. Put these 2 notes on the previous red ticks.
- ok

01:28:829 (70) - Add this as a finisher too
- ok

Really tired i'll do the rest tomorrow. PM me in game if I forget

Thank you for modding

Arrival

1,418 posts

Joined June 2012

Arrival 2017-05-17T20:25:22+00:00

Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .

[Futsuu]

00:51:279 - 00:52:868 - I'd suggest to add 2 kats here to reflect more the intensity of the part, as it is it is a bit undermapped, even for a futsuu.

01:16:908 (14,15,16,17) - Swapping these to k d d k would definetly fit better for the vocals than d k k d.

[Muzukashii]

00:15:319 (2) - This note doesn't fit on any sounds and makes the pattern too long overall. Please delete it.

00:49:888 (69) - Considering the 3/2 snapping of these notes 00:50:385 (71,72) - I'd recommend deleting this note to make a small 1/1 break. Furthermore, this 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - is mapping to the instruments and not the vocals, making this note quite unfitting to the pattern.

01:05:584 - The break here is pretty big and breaks a bit the density of the kiai, also considering you mapped these 2 notes 01:07:173 (29,36) - .

[Oni]

00:01:014 - Weird to play, there is no actual beat here. I'd suggest simply deleting this note.

00:07:372 (32) - The density increase is pretty weird here, and the map is swapping from beats to piano without break which sounds odd. So same here, deleting this note would be necessary.

00:10:153 (44) - No finisher here although there are at 00:10:948 (47,50,53) - ?

00:15:021 - 00:15:815 - Add notes here to represent the build up better !

00:16:710 - 00:27:438 - This part feels a bit underwhelming compared to the build up. Consider adding a bit of density.

00:51:180 - 00:52:769 - What about triplets here ?

00:56:445 (67) - Either put a triplet or add a note at 00:56:345 - to emphasize the build up -> Here is though what I'd have made for this part
-> 00:55:054 -

I think there is a good flow with the doublets and quads, and it fits the song pretty well.
If you do this I don't recommend putting a finisher at 00:56:445 (70) - though.

00:58:829 (75,76,77,78) - What about only letting this note : 00:59:226 (77) - ? It would make a way better emphasis on the vocals than every note here.

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think you should use the same structure as 01:07:769 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - . As it is its a bit awkward, the second structure feels definetly better.

01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - I understand you want to be along woth the piano here, however this feels a little bit sudden considering the density of the kiai and how you mapped it without thinking of the piano before, most of all folowing the vocals. I'd recommend deleting this note 01:14:425 (85) - .

01:24:061 (134,136) - Maybe removing these notes would make a better emphasis ?

That's all for now, call me back.

Last edited by Arrival 2017-05-18T00:38:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-05-17T23:01:17+00:00

Arrival wrote:
Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .
fixed.

[Futsuu]

00:51:279 - 00:52:868 - I'd suggest to add 2 kats here to reflect more the intensity of the part, as it is it is a bit undermapped, even for a futsuu.
ok, changed~

01:16:908 (14,15,16,17) - Swapping these to k d d k would definetly fit better for the vocals than k d d k.
ok, changed kd-dk

[Muzukashii]

00:15:319 (2) - This note doesn't fit on any sounds and makes the pattern too long overall. Please delete it.
ok, deleted.

00:49:888 (69) - Considering the 3/2 snapping of these notes 00:50:385 (71,72) - I'd recommend deleting this note to make a small 1/1 break. Furthermore, this 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - is mapping to the instruments and not the vocals, making this note quite unfitting to the pattern.

Certainly break is necessary.
But I think that I do not need a 1/1 interval break.
deleted 00:50:385 (71) -

For 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - , no change as a pattern of consistency. 00:45:517 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55) -

01:05:584 - The break here is pretty big and breaks a bit the density of the kiai, also considering you mapped these 2 notes 01:07:173 (29,36) -
ok
01:05:385 - add d
01:05:584 - add k

You should hear a high sound. I picked it up.
01:07:173 -
01:08:763 -

That's all for now, call me back.

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crim

207 posts

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Topic Starter

crim 2017-05-18T11:03:36+00:00

Arrival wrote:
Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .
- ok

[Oni]

00:01:014 - Weird to play, there is no actual beat here. I'd suggest simply deleting this note.
- ok

00:07:372 (32) - The density increase is pretty weird here, and the map is swapping from beats to piano without break which sounds odd. So same here, deleting this note would be necessary.
- ok

00:10:153 (44) - No finisher here although there are at 00:10:948 (47,50,53) - ?
- added finisher

00:15:021 - 00:15:815 - Add notes here to represent the build up better !
- 00:15:021 added d 00:15:815 added k

00:16:710 - 00:27:438 - This part feels a bit underwhelming compared to the build up. Consider adding a bit of density.
- added little notes

00:51:180 - 00:52:769 - What about triplets here ?
- changed ddk

00:56:445 (67) - Either put a triplet or add a note at 00:56:345 - to emphasize the build up -> Here is though what I'd have made for this part
- it's difficult to 00:56:345 add note. no change
-> 00:55:054 - I think there is a good flow with the doublets and quads, and it fits the song pretty well.
If you do this I don't recommend putting a finisher at 00:56:445 (70) - though.
- change it

00:58:829 (75,76,77,78) - What about only letting this note : 00:59:226 (77) - ? It would make a way better emphasis on the vocals than every note here.
- it's unnatural to me. so deleted 00:58:829 (75,76,77,78)

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think you should use the same structure as 01:07:769 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - . As it is its a bit awkward, the second structure feels definetly better.
- ok changed

01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - I understand you want to be along woth the piano here, however this feels a little bit sudden considering the density of the kiai and how you mapped it without thinking of the piano before, most of all folowing the vocals. I'd recommend deleting this note 01:14:425 (85) - .
- ok

01:24:061 (134,136) - Maybe removing these notes would make a better emphasis ?
- it's unnatural to delete these notes. no change

That's all for now, call me back.

Thank you Arrival !!!!

Arrival

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Arrival 2017-05-24T14:10:40+00:00

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2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: 01:11:345 (49) - Remove this note in kantan so we have a 4/1 break in the kai
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: for new players
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: and I think everything is good

~~Do it and call me~~Done.

Everything seems good now. Good luck !

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-05-24T14:19:19+00:00

Arrival wrote:
irc log
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: 01:11:345 (49) - Remove this note in kantan so we have a 4/1 break in the kai
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: for new players
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: and I think everything is good

~~Do it and call me~~Done.

Everything seems good now. Good luck !

Arrival <3 Thank you !!

yuzu__rinrin

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yuzu__rinrin 2017-05-24T15:23:32+00:00

thanks Arrival :3

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