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Alvaro Soler - Sofia (Speed Up Ver.)

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Nowaie
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Nowaie
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 19 April 2017 at 15.05.31

Artist: Alvaro Soler
Title: Sofia (Speed Up Ver.)
Tags: RedOne Tauchert Latin Eterno Agosto ezek Big Cat
BPM: 146,79
Filesize: 6458kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,53 stars, 152 notes)
  2. ezek's Normal (2,07 stars, 286 notes)
  3. Hard (3,13 stars, 435 notes)
  4. Sin Tu Mirada Sigo (4,21 stars, 575 notes)
Download: Alvaro Soler - Sofia (Speed Up Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2

Redl if dl before 17. april 2017

Easy - Me
Normal - ezek (Big Cat) <3
Hard - Me
Sin Tu Mirada Sigo - Me


The classic thank you box
GD

ezek (Big Cat)


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Last edited by Nowaie , edited 63 times in total.
_DT3
1,403 posts
Joined October 2015
_DT3
Lovely map <3
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
pls revive :c

:D
Nowaie
1,021 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nowaie
let's do dis
Hikomori
840 posts
Joined November 2015
Hikomori
Español boi uwu

also nice map
_orange
440 posts
Joined September 2015
_orange
hi, M4M

[Easy]

Check AIMod
00:43:073 (2,1) - Spacing problem
01:35:396 (1,2) - Slight spacing problem
01:52:564 (5,1) - Swap NC? You're doing it every 2 downbeats so why not on 5
02:01:557 (7) - NC?
02:13:820 (4) - Ctrl H and move it back to the original position for flow

[ezek's Normal]

Check AIMod
01:20:272 (6,1) - Spacing's too far here
02:01:148 (3,1) - Slight spacing error

[Hard]

00:22:431 (5,6,7) - 00:20:795 (2,3) - Why not map these the same? They sound similar to me
00:26:723 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Same
00:38:576 (2,3,4) - 00:40:212 (2,3,4) - The spacing between the two triplets are slightly different
01:39:074 (2,3,4) - 01:40:710 (2,3,4) - ^ Also this is the same as that part with half the spacing for some reason
00:56:154 (1,2,3,4) - It would be nice if you could do something like 00:36:533 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like it represents the song better
like this
02:12:185 (3,4) - These should be identical sliders like the same parts before and after this (eg. 02:10:550 (3,4) - 02:15:455 (3,4) - )

[Glance of Light]

00:59:016 (6,7) - Make this into a slider like 00:47:570 (6) - and other parts like that
01:10:053 (3,4,5) - 01:11:688 (3,4,5) - Make these rhythms the same by putting the slider first on the second one
01:13:323 (3,5,1) - Lining these up would look better
01:15:264 (4) - I think you could remove this note, theres just a slight vocal thing if you were following that, but i don't think you need this
01:36:213 (4,2,4) - Fix this stack
02:01:557 (1) - This should be a lot less further away from the previous note than 02:01:353 (7) - this because 1 is a lot softer
02:06:054 (5,6,1) - Spacing error
02:37:121 (3) - Why is there a huge spacing spike here?
02:56:333 (5,6) - This should be the same as these 01:57:469 (1,2,3,4) - 00:56:971 (1,2,3,4) - Also make sure you NC the 5th note if you change that

That's all I found, it's very well mapped!
gl with the mapset :)
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache

_orange wrote:

[ezek's Normal]

Check AIMod fixed error in the artist~
01:20:272 (6,1) - Spacing's too far here damn, that's a big mistake from my part, fixed!
02:01:148 (3,1) - Slight spacing error fixed~
Thanks fur the mod! :3

Here's my update:
Meow
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: sofia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 34899
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 61059,67600,141178,147719,150171
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Sofia (Speed Up Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Sofia (Speed Up Ver.)
Artist:Alvaro Soler
ArtistUnicode:Álvaro Soler
Creator:DTM9 Nowa
Version:ezek's Normal
Source:
Tags:RedOne Tauchert Latin Pop Spanish Eterno Agosto
BeatmapID:1227262
BeatmapSetID:508657

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Alvaro.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,61259,66475
2,141378,146594
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Nowaie
1,021 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nowaie

_orange wrote:

hi, M4M

[Easy]

Check AIMod fucking 1ms bug
00:43:073 (2,1) - Spacing problem Oh yeah what the fuck even happened there lmao, fixed
01:35:396 (1,2) - Slight spacing problem Fixed
01:52:564 (5,1) - Swap NC? You're doing it every 2 downbeats so why not on 5 Yeah... Ncing on the 2 makes more sense anyway
02:01:557 (7) - NC? The 7 still kinda belongs to the same pattern and it's mapped on the vocal that starts from the 6 ut it's emphasized as there is alot more going on (cymbal hit). So because it's still theoretically on the same pattern i don't think a NC is necessary
02:13:820 (4) - Ctrl H and move it back to the original position for flow It kinda follows the not-so-flowing style™ over the sliders 02:12:185 (2,3,4) - so is flow something i necessarly want for that slider? I don't personally think so, so i'll deny this one

[Hard]

00:22:431 (5,6,7) - 00:20:795 (2,3) - Why not map these the same? They sound similar to me Mostly the personal feeling that this 00:23:044 (7) - feels just that much stronger so having it mapped under a sliderend would just feel wrong
00:26:723 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Same
00:38:576 (2,3,4) - 00:40:212 (2,3,4) - The spacing between the two triplets are slightly different 01:39:074 (2,3,4) - 01:40:710 (2,3,4) Also this is the same as that part with half the spacing for some reason That doesn't really matter, the triplets feel the same and that is enough for me
00:56:154 (1,2,3,4) - It would be nice if you could do something like 00:36:533 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like it represents the song better I'll try it
like this
02:12:185 (3,4) - These should be identical sliders like the same parts before and after this (eg. 02:10:550 (3,4) - 02:15:455 (3,4) - ) I'd want to have a little bit different sliders on the vocals. Here 02:15:864 (4) - for example the slider is flipped completely instead of havin this 02:17:091 (3,4) - kind of continious movement

[Glance of Light]

00:59:016 (6,7) - Make this into a slider like 00:47:570 (6) - and other parts like that Fixd
01:10:053 (3,4,5) - 01:11:688 (3,4,5) - Make these rhythms the same by putting the slider first on the second one Fixd
01:13:323 (3,5,1) - Lining these up would look better Maybe but they are supposed to be lined in these patterns 01:13:323 (3,4,5) - 01:13:732 (5,6,1) -
01:15:264 (4) - I think you could remove this note, theres just a slight vocal thing if you were following that, but i don't think you need this The fast xzx change is what represents the vocals the best. It does not exactly follow the vocals but, like i already said, it representes them the best
01:36:213 (4,2,4) - Fix this stack Fixd
02:01:557 (1) - This should be a lot less further away from the previous note than 02:01:353 (7) - this because 1 is a lot softer Sure it may be softer but it's mapped on a vocal + cymbal so it has alot more going on thus i think it's theoretically justified
02:06:054 (5,6,1) - Spacing error Fixd
02:37:121 (3) - Why is there a huge spacing spike here? Idk, moved little bit closer
02:56:333 (5,6) - This should be the same as these 01:57:469 (1,2,3,4) - 00:56:971 (1,2,3,4) - Also make sure you NC the 5th note if you change that Done

That's all I found, it's very well mapped! ^_^
gl with the mapset :)
Thanks a ton fam
Hpocks
444 posts
Joined January 2015
Hpocks
[General]
IMO, a countdown isnt really needed here, especially with a well established metronome in the song before any notes appear. You can disable this in the Song Setup panel under Design.

[Glance of Light]
00:12:620 (4) - Try to avoid 1/2 (1/2 beat length) sliders on red ticks, because sliders like this put the tail (the non clickable part of the slider) on the white tick, which is more significant than red ticks. As a general rule of thumb, white ticks should be clickable over red ticks, especially in a song that consistantly uses 1/2 beats. This is easily fixed by adding a pattern like this http://prntscr.com/eh9rja
00:24:066 (4) - The same situation here as above. 00:24:270 - should especially be clickable because of the extra clap in the background. You can just make 00:24:066 (4) - a circle.

02:25:981 (1) - This is perfectly fine and playable. If anyone tells you otherwise, they are wrong. (Source: I played it and had no issues with it and was surprised when I saw it wasnt on a white tick when I went into edit mode)

Very clean map! Nothing much to complain about. Good luck on rank!
Nowaie
1,021 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nowaie

Hpocks wrote:

[General]
IMO, a countdown isnt really needed here, especially with a well established metronome in the song before any notes appear. You can disable this in the Song Setup panel under Design. Ah f--k, i though i already disabled it >.<

[Glance of Light]
00:12:620 (4) - Try to avoid 1/2 (1/2 beat length) sliders on red ticks, because sliders like this put the tail (the non clickable part of the slider) on the white tick, which is more significant than red ticks. As a general rule of thumb, white ticks should be clickable over red ticks, especially in a song that consistantly uses 1/2 beats. This is easily fixed by adding a pattern like this http://prntscr.com/eh9rja
00:24:066 (4) - The same situation here as above. 00:24:270 - should especially be clickable because of the extra clap in the background. You can just make 00:24:066 (4) - a circle.

That is a great thumb rule but it does not apply always. Here tbh both ways can be justified but specifically to me the "having a clickable on the white" makes little bit more sense i'll change both

02:25:981 (1) - This is perfectly fine and playable. If anyone tells you otherwise, they are wrong. (Source: I played it and had no issues with it and was surprised when I saw it wasnt on a white tick when I went into edit mode) I think that is because these three 02:21:178 (1,1,1) - kinda force you to listen to what they are following. A 1/4 difference won't really show off when the notes are spaced like that thus it feels pretty much the same as the other gaps

Very clean map! Nothing much to complain about. Good luck on rank!
Thanks a lot man :>
Rad-
595 posts
Joined June 2011
Rad-
Hello! From my qu.

WELL, this is a hard map for me to judge tbh, because it feels overall so perfect, i really enjoyed playing all diffs and i definately play the map on my own from time to time, it's really that good!

So i'll just be extremely nitpicky here, as overall the map quality is very high.

Normal:
00:48:796 (3,4) - This pattern looks a bit too close and it confused me the first time, it's not bad on its own ofc since there are other places you did the same rhythmically, but just this in particular felt too close than the rest, just place it more to the right/up and should be perfect.
01:00:242 (5,6) - Maybe give these sliders a bit more curve to them? Felt too fast because of the spacing between them.
01:01:059 (1) - Fix distancing
01:45:206 (1,2) - ^
02:38:960 (3) - Stack this one better
02:55:311 (4) - Fix distance a bit

Hard:
01:39:074 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - Make these distances the same as the other triples for consistency
02:00:331 (2,3,4) - Same

Insane:
02:21:280 - Increase the volume here, it's too silent, something like 25 just so it gives more feedback to the player.

That's all i could find really, sorry if my mod was too small, but overall the quality of the map seems fine to me. Favorited.
Nowaie
1,021 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nowaie

Rad- wrote:

Hello! From my qu.

WELL, this is a hard map for me to judge tbh, because it feels overall so perfect, i really enjoyed playing all diffs and i definately play the map on my own from time to time, it's really that good! Good training for your modding skills and so on :>

So i'll just be extremely nitpicky here, as overall the map quality is very high.

Hard:
01:39:074 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - Make these distances the same as the other triples for consistency Done
02:00:331 (2,3,4) - Same ^

Insane:
02:21:280 - Increase the volume here, it's too silent, something like 25 just so it gives more feedback to the player. I'll pump it up to 20 for now

That's all i could find really, sorry if my mod was too small, but overall the quality of the map seems fine to me. Favorited. Not finding much is a good thing tbh so dw about that, it just shows that the map is pretty gud
Thanks a lot for your mod :>
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache

Rad- wrote:

Normal:
00:48:796 (3,4) - This pattern looks a bit too close and it confused me the first time, it's not bad on its own ofc since there are other places you did the same rhythmically, but just this in particular felt too close than the rest, just place it more to the right/up and should be perfect. Okay, I readjusted the spacing so the pattern is more clear~
01:00:242 (5,6) - Maybe give these sliders a bit more curve to them? Felt too fast because of the spacing between them. Hmm, I think they should be easy this way beause they follow a clear path even though is speedy. There's no sv or spacing change when compared to a previous pattern with curved sliders (00:52:066 (2,3,4) - ); players at this level should be adjusting for small challenges anyway.
01:01:059 (1) - Fix distancing the distance is correct, it just appears as inconsistent because there's a slight sv change at that point
01:45:206 (1,2) - ^ not really an issue, but fixed~
02:38:960 (3) - Stack this one better oh, my bad, fixed~
02:55:311 (4) - Fix distance a bit oki doki
Thanks fur the mod!

ezek's shitmapping 2017
osu file format v14

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Tags:RedOne Tauchert Latin Pop Spanish Eterno Agosto
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iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo
such good modder DTM9 Nowa

catchy song


  • [general]
  1. Since Hard is 3.13 and has 6 HP, I think it'd be better if you raise HP on Insane till 6.5 or so.

    [Diiiime SoooofiaaAAaaAA (Insane)]
  2. 00:10:372 (1,2,3,4) - Just aesthetics but I think you can improve this pattern here. Maybe a square or a pentagon could fit better.
  3. 00:12:007 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't really feel like this unique pattern+nc is really needed for this section. Mainly because 00:18:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - here you do some normal rhythm (aside from that SV change which fits nicely).
  4. 00:31:219 (7,1) - Visually speaking this is not really confortable. Why not doing some symmetry? Would match good since you did something similar 00:26:314 (1,1) - here.
  5. 00:38:985 (5,6) - Maybe blanket those? Also would help by reducing the distance just a bit.
  6. 00:48:796 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+h +j this would help the flow imo. Right now 00:48:388 (3,1) - this distance feels very awkward since it's breaking the actual circular pattern. https://puu.sh/uOR68/0cb3806d87.jpg
  7. 01:29:673 (5,6) - According to your whole mapping style so far, this single circles+empty spaces don't really fit imo. I highly recommend you to stay consistent with other parts. For example you could follow what you did 01:31:309 (5,6,7) - here.
  8. 01:33:761 (1,2,1) - Not a real issue, but maybe you'd want to keep consistency for the pre-kiai section. I prefer those unstack circles tbh.
  9. 01:47:557 (4,5) - nazi but stack isn't perfect.
  10. 01:53:382 (1,1,1) - Not really fan of 3 slider stack tbh. Right now feels too much imo D:
  11. 02:03:192 (1,1) - Since this section is calmer than before, I think you should try adding some 1/1 slider instead of having pure 1/2 spam. It also follows the whistles quite good so yeah

    [Hard]
  12. 01:00:650 (5,6,1) - maybe do perfect triangle?

    okay couldn't find much tbh :d

    [ezek's]
  13. 00:14:868 (3,4) - Podrías mejorar el blanket un poco. 00:10:372 (1,2) - Acá por ejemplo te quedó ok_hand
  14. 00:33:263 (1,2) - Estaría genial si stackearas esos 2 (conjunto con el resto del pattern) Así quedaría más estructurada la distancia entre 00:33:263 (1,1) - imo D:
  15. 00:45:526 (2) - Podrías hacer que este slider siga una figura un poco más curva? Así fluiría mejor hacia el siguiente slider y quedaría mejor visualmente imo.
  16. 00:47:161 (5,6) - Si bien lo dejas como blanket, encuentro que sería mejor si le haces ctrl+h al reverse, ya que actualmente el cambio de flow es un poco abrupto a mi parecer.
  17. 01:08:417 (2,3,4) - Se están overlapeando levemente D: Según tu mapeado en esta sección deberían tener un poquiiiito de espacio.
  18. 01:10:052 (5,6) - Y aquí creo que deberías reducir el DS un poco.
  19. 01:18:228 (2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/uP0Z7/35c86677bc.jpg ¿? Parecido a 00:10:372 (1,2,3) - estos sweet blankets.
  20. 02:01:557 (1,2) - 02:03:192 (1,2) - Ayyy
  21. 02:44:070 (1,2) - También podrías mejorar este blanket.

    Buena diffs con blankets zukulentos. Para las partes non-kiai podrías echarle una segunda mirada al spacing, que al ser tan pequeño, pequeños detalles se hacen bastante notorios.

    [Easy]
  22. 00:17:730 (5,6) - This distance is not a 1/1 like 00:11:189 (5,1) - this one, so it really might confuse newbie players. They will think the note comes earlier when it really does not. Highly recommend you to move it a bit upwards. (00:24:679 (5,6) - Here feels way better imo) (AiMod also complains about that xd)
  23. 00:52:884 (1) - 01:53:382 (2) - 02:52:245 (1) - nc there should be consistent.
  24. ^same for 02:58:786 (1) - 01:59:922 (4) - 00:59:424 (4) -

Okay that's all from me. Hope it helps! GL o/
Last edited by iYiyo , edited 1 time in total.
Nowaie
1,021 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nowaie

iYiyo wrote:

such good modder DTM9 Nowa

[notice]

  • [general]
  1. Since Hard is 3.13 and has 6 HP, I think it'd be better if you raise HP on Insane till 6.5 or so. Oh wait what the f happened with teh insane's HP drain xD, fixed

    [Diiiime SoooofiaaAAaaAA (Insane)]
  2. 00:10:372 (1,2,3,4) - Just aesthetics but I think you can improve this pattern here. Maybe a square or a pentagon could fit better. hmm i'm not 100% sure about this, first of all creating a pentagon or square would be kinda hard without reworking the whole pattern and everything around it and secondly tbh i value structure over aesthetics. The current pattern has two triangle sections 00:10:372 (1,2,3) - 00:10:780 (3,4,5) - with some structure from outside the initial patterns 00:09:963 (4,3) - (blanket) and between the patterns 00:10:372 (1,2,4) - (4 in the middle of 1 and 2). I will probably change 00:10:576 (2,4,5) - 00:10:576 (2,4,5) - these to be somewhat similar to the 00:10:372 (1,2,4) - but i don't really see a reason to hugely improve the aesthetics since i value structure so much more
  3. 00:12:007 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't really feel like this unique pattern+nc is really needed for this section. Mainly because 00:18:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - here you do some normal rhythm (aside from that SV change which fits nicely). Yeah i guess you are right about that, though i think it kinda looks dumb so i'll just make another pattern to replace it which is going to be repeating the same pattern twice thus making the NC thingy mentioned here good for the readability
  4. 00:31:219 (7,1) - Visually speaking this is not really confortable. Why not doing some symmetry? Would match good since you did something similar 00:26:314 (1,1) - here. I have personally grown to like that kind of sliders. They feel pretty much the same as these 00:26:314 (1,1) - so we are only talking about this visually thus it comes down to personal preference and i really like that kind of patterning with sliders overall so.. :s
  5. 00:38:985 (5,6) - Maybe blanket those? Also would help by reducing the distance just a bit. Alrighty, done
  6. 00:48:796 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+h +j this would help the flow imo. Right now 00:48:388 (3,1) - this distance feels very awkward since it's breaking the actual circular pattern. https://puu.sh/uOR68/0cb3806d87.jpg It's kinda supposed to repeat like so, the vocals are repeating and so does the mapping
  7. 01:29:673 (5,6) - According to your whole mapping style so far, this single circles+empty spaces don't really fit imo. I highly recommend you to stay consistent with other parts. For example you could follow what you did 01:31:309 (5,6,7) - here. Yeah you are kinda correct here... made it to have similar rhythm as 00:29:175 (5,6) -
  8. 01:33:761 (1,2,1) - Not a real issue, but maybe you'd want to keep consistency for the pre-kiai section. I prefer those unstack circles tbh. Variety is nice sometimes, i'll keep 'em
  9. 01:47:557 (4,5) - nazi but stack isn't perfect. Sieg fixd
  10. 01:53:382 (1,1,1) - Not really fan of 3 slider stack tbh. Right now feels too much imo D: aaaa idk what to put there .-. it works kinda fine like it's currently... if this gets noted out later on i'll probably do something to it
  11. 02:03:192 (1,1) - Since this section is calmer than before, I think you should try adding some 1/1 slider instead of having pure 1/2 spam. It also follows the whistles quite good so yeah I guess that would work...? nvm it works like a dream, thanks a sh-t ton

    [Hard]
  12. 01:00:650 (5,6,1) - maybe do perfect triangle? Hmm... i'd want to have little bit less spacing on the last note since it's mapped on little bit "softer" beat in the song imo so i'd prefer to keep the not-so-perfect-triangle beacuse of that ^_^

    okay couldn't find much tbh :d

    [Easy]
  13. 00:17:730 (5,6) - This distance is not a 1/1 like 00:11:189 (5,1) - this one, so it really might confuse newbie players. They will think the note comes earlier when it really does not. Highly recommend you to move it a bit upwards. (00:24:679 (5,6) - Here feels way better imo) (AiMod also complains about that xd) fixed
  14. 00:52:884 (1) - 01:53:382 (2) - 02:52:245 (1) - nc there should be consistent. Fixed all of the NC stuff
  15. ^same for 02:58:786 (1) - 01:59:922 (4) - 00:59:424 (4) -
Thanks a lot :>
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache

iYiyo wrote:

[ezek's]
  1. 00:14:868 (3,4) - Podrías mejorar el blanket un poco. 00:10:372 (1,2) - Acá por ejemplo te quedó ok_hand oki
  2. 00:33:263 (1,2) - Estaría genial si stackearas esos 2 (conjunto con el resto del pattern) Así quedaría más estructurada la distancia entre 00:33:263 (1,1) - imo D: me gusta esa forma de pensar, pero no quiero cambiar los patrones anteriores para ajustar este ya que me gusta la manera que fluyen, asi que solo acerque el patron de stack a la nota lo mas que pude~
  3. 00:45:526 (2) - Podrías hacer que este slider siga una figura un poco más curva? Así fluiría mejor hacia el siguiente slider y quedaría mejor visualmente imo. oki
  4. 00:47:161 (5,6) - Si bien lo dejas como blanket, encuentro que sería mejor si le haces ctrl+h al reverse, ya que actualmente el cambio de flow es un poco abrupto a mi parecer. estoy de acuerdo, aplicado~
  5. 01:08:417 (2,3,4) - Se están overlapeando levemente D: Según tu mapeado en esta sección deberían tener un poquiiiito de espacio. que picky xD pero bueno, arreglado ya que es verdad ~
  6. 01:10:052 (5,6) - Y aquí creo que deberías reducir el DS un poco. no veo el por que~
  7. 01:18:228 (2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/uP0Z7/35c86677bc.jpg ¿? Parecido a 00:10:372 (1,2,3) - estos sweet blankets. aplicado~
  8. 02:01:557 (1,2) - 02:03:192 (1,2) - Ayyy no se que quieres decirme con eso, pero hice un cambio en la estructura ya que el patron se miraba algo desorganizado~
  9. 02:44:070 (1,2) - También podrías mejorar este blanket. oki
Buena diffs con blankets zukulentos. Para las partes non-kiai podrías echarle una segunda mirada al spacing, que al ser tan pequeño, pequeños detalles se hacen bastante notorios.
Gracias x el mod! ^w^
10/10 excelente mod!

Update
I saw your drawing, Nowa :u
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 34899
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Sofia (Speed Up Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Sofia (Speed Up Ver.)
Artist:Alvaro Soler
ArtistUnicode:Álvaro Soler
Creator:DTM9 Nowa
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Source:
Tags:RedOne Tauchert Latin Pop Spanish Eterno Agosto
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BeatmapSetID:508657

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
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[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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294,83,119309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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444,315,127689,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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265,233,130550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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369,44,131981,1,2,0:0:0:0:
369,44,132185,2,0,P|319:15|266:75,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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155,279,139543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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51,226,156712,2,0,P|20:204|1:165,2,77.0000023498536,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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447,233,158347,2,0,L|437:148,2,77.0000023498536,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,246,158960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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134,106,159982,2,0,P|146:49|164:26,2,77.0000023498536,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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430,335,174493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,57,175311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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161,158,176333,2,0,P|119:153|86:136,2,77.0000023498536,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,149,177151,6,0,B|381:144|381:144|481:171,2,154.000004699707,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,165,178172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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162,274,178786,2,0,B|111:279|111:279|11:252,2,154.000004699707,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,241,179808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,213,180012,6,0,L|391:209,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,206,180421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Nowaie
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Nowaie

ezek wrote:

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Ayumiita
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Ayumiita
Log thingy thing mod thingy thing
SPOILER
20:10 DTM9 Nowa: Would you have time to mod sofia quickly :o
20:10 Lucyyyyyyy: sure
20:10 Lucyyyyyyy: in chat here ?
20:10 DTM9 Nowa: Sure that would work just fine
20:11 Lucyyyyyyy: you want me to mod all diffs. or a specific one
20:11 DTM9 Nowa: Just choose by yourself
20:11 Lucyyyyyyy: kk i skip easy then, because im not too good with them
20:14 Lucyyyyyyy: 00:14:868 (4) - im not sure about that one, maybe its me but i think you could do 2 stacked circles instead. Because imo it doesnt seems fitting, his voice is one the white and red one strong so yeah but its not a needed change at all just personal preference
20:14 Lucyyyyyyy: im at the hard diff btw
20:14 DTM9 Nowa: yea i know
20:15 Lucyyyyyyy: xD should have said that earlier xD
20:15 DTM9 Nowa: Tbh that would fit the hard diff much better
20:15 DTM9 Nowa: fixed
20:16 Lucyyyyyyy: give me a second need to restart osu (i have a wierd sound bug)
20:17 DTM9 Nowa: alrighty
20:17 DTM9 Nowa: I'll give you the full log when you are done
20:17 Lucyyyyyyy: kk
20:22 Lucyyyyyyy: 02:35:894 (1,2,3,4) - im not a big fan of this patter. You mapped the others kias better at this part. Maybe trying to do something with less back and fourth stuff would fit better imo.
20:23 Lucyyyyyyy: 02:55:515 (1,2,3,4) - ^
20:23 DTM9 Nowa: I'll try to make them better they just had place to map something similar to the other patterns
20:23 DTM9 Nowa: cx
20:24 Lucyyyyyyy: well its your choice
20:24 Lucyyyyyyy: xD
20:24 Lucyyyyyyy: i just dont htink its fits well there and fits well in a hard diff
20:24 DTM9 Nowa: Consistancy never hurts tbh'
20:25 Lucyyyyyyy: 03:00:012 (1) - meeeehh Imo the tick it ends on is too strong
20:25 Lucyyyyyyy: maybe do a 1/2 slider and a circle
20:25 Lucyyyyyyy: or slider slider but i dont like the reversed one, it lets the last tick look so weak
20:26 DTM9 Nowa: Yee i'll try that
20:26 Lucyyyyyyy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622478
20:27 Lucyyyyyyy: maybe something like this
20:27 Lucyyyyyyy: could fit well
20:27 Lucyyyyyyy: it ends when he stops with the aaaaaa
20:27 Lucyyyyyyy: xD
20:28 DTM9 Nowa: Personally a 1/2 slider|hitcircle works better since i haven't really mapped the hold sound in any other occasion
20:28 DTM9 Nowa: 01:01:059 (1) - like this one
20:28 Lucyyyyyyy: oh
20:28 Lucyyyyyyy: yeah forgot about that
20:28 Lucyyyyyyy: okay i´ll move to the
20:29 Lucyyyyyyy: Glance of Light
20:29 DTM9 Nowa: I'll fix the 4 hitcircle patterns while you find some filth on it
20:30 Lucyyyyyyy: i need to test play it short
20:33 Lucyyyyyyy: 00:34:081 (1) - im not sure why you start a nc here, imo its pointless
20:33 DTM9 Nowa: Mostly to divide the stream from the stacks
20:33 Lucyyyyyyy: wait a second xD hahaah 00:39:803 (1,2,3,4,5) - here
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: im not sure
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: if its me with badplaying but
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: i played this like there where 1/2 gabes after each slider
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: im not sure how i passed it like that without a 100
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: but maybe itsb ecause of the low bpm
20:35 DTM9 Nowa: The spacing should be enough to tell that they are 1/4
20:35 DTM9 Nowa: imo
20:35 DTM9 Nowa: They may be little tricky but it's kinda intended
20:35 Lucyyyyyyy: okay okay
20:37 Lucyyyyyyy: 00:56:154 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this looks awesome xD and really played awesome gj on that one
20:37 DTM9 Nowa: ayy
20:37 DTM9 Nowa: Thanks to you for liking it
20:37 DTM9 Nowa: xd
20:39 Lucyyyyyyy: 01:33:761 (1,2,1) - is /= to 00:33:263 (1,2,1) - maybe it would be nice to keep it the same
20:39 Lucyyyyyyy: at one there arent stacked and at the other they are
20:40 DTM9 Nowa: I kinda like making stuff little bit differently on the same beat patterns (sometimes)
20:41 Lucyyyyyyy: okay okay
20:41 DTM9 Nowa: I'd say it's not that bad since they both share the sort of V shape
20:42 DTM9 Nowa: 01:33:761 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - and the other pattern + stream
20:42 DTM9 Nowa: The other one was just easier to form through stacking
20:42 Lucyyyyyyy: 01:53:382 (1,1,1) - mayebe move 01:55:017 (1) - this one to the right aswell so it follows this moving idea, even so its not the same as the sliders before, but i think that would look and play abit better
20:43 DTM9 Nowa: I may have reworked that pattern already
20:43 DTM9 Nowa: mind sending a screenshot of it?
20:44 Lucyyyyyyy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622629
20:45 DTM9 Nowa: Yeaah i kinda reworked that already since i got an idea to get rid of the triple stack
20:45 DTM9 Nowa: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622642
20:46 Lucyyyyyyy: okay okay
20:46 Lucyyyyyyy: 02:29:149 (1,2,1,2) -
20:47 Lucyyyyyyy: you mapped at first vocal and sound (02:29:149 (1,2) - )
20:47 Lucyyyyyyy: but how about you make it like at
20:47 Lucyyyyyyy: 02:30:171 (1,2) -
20:47 Lucyyyyyyy: and map two guitar
20:48 DTM9 Nowa: There is a kind of an echo there
20:48 DTM9 Nowa: i guess
20:48 Lucyyyyyyy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622658
20:48 Lucyyyyyyy: i think that would fit better imo
20:49 DTM9 Nowa: Hmm
20:50 DTM9 Nowa: I guess i'll suit the three notes
20:50 DTM9 Nowa: but i want to keep the movement little bit tighter
20:50 Lucyyyyyyy: okay okay
20:50 DTM9 Nowa: since the song is not that hardly going at it at that point
20:50 Lucyyyyyyy: i have nothing else :3
20:51 DTM9 Nowa: ayy
_Meep_
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Nowaie
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Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Nowaie

Lucyyyyyyy wrote:

Log thingy thing mod thingy thing
SPOILER
20:10 DTM9 Nowa: Would you have time to mod sofia quickly :o
20:10 Lucyyyyyyy: sure
20:10 Lucyyyyyyy: in chat here ?
20:10 DTM9 Nowa: Sure that would work just fine
20:11 Lucyyyyyyy: you want me to mod all diffs. or a specific one
20:11 DTM9 Nowa: Just choose by yourself
20:11 Lucyyyyyyy: kk i skip easy then, because im not too good with them
20:14 Lucyyyyyyy: 00:14:868 (4) - im not sure about that one, maybe its me but i think you could do 2 stacked circles instead. Because imo it doesnt seems fitting, his voice is one the white and red one strong so yeah but its not a needed change at all just personal preference
20:14 Lucyyyyyyy: im at the hard diff btw
20:14 DTM9 Nowa: yea i know
20:15 Lucyyyyyyy: xD should have said that earlier xD
20:15 DTM9 Nowa: Tbh that would fit the hard diff much better
20:15 DTM9 Nowa: fixed
20:16 Lucyyyyyyy: give me a second need to restart osu (i have a wierd sound bug)
20:17 DTM9 Nowa: alrighty
20:17 DTM9 Nowa: I'll give you the full log when you are done
20:17 Lucyyyyyyy: kk
20:22 Lucyyyyyyy: 02:35:894 (1,2,3,4) - im not a big fan of this patter. You mapped the others kias better at this part. Maybe trying to do something with less back and fourth stuff would fit better imo.
20:23 Lucyyyyyyy: 02:55:515 (1,2,3,4) - ^
20:23 DTM9 Nowa: I'll try to make them better they just had place to map something similar to the other patterns
20:23 DTM9 Nowa: cx
20:24 Lucyyyyyyy: well its your choice
20:24 Lucyyyyyyy: xD
20:24 Lucyyyyyyy: i just dont htink its fits well there and fits well in a hard diff
20:24 DTM9 Nowa: Consistancy never hurts tbh'
20:25 Lucyyyyyyy: 03:00:012 (1) - meeeehh Imo the tick it ends on is too strong
20:25 Lucyyyyyyy: maybe do a 1/2 slider and a circle
20:25 Lucyyyyyyy: or slider slider but i dont like the reversed one, it lets the last tick look so weak
20:26 DTM9 Nowa: Yee i'll try that
20:26 Lucyyyyyyy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622478
20:27 Lucyyyyyyy: maybe something like this
20:27 Lucyyyyyyy: could fit well
20:27 Lucyyyyyyy: it ends when he stops with the aaaaaa
20:27 Lucyyyyyyy: xD
20:28 DTM9 Nowa: Personally a 1/2 slider|hitcircle works better since i haven't really mapped the hold sound in any other occasion
20:28 DTM9 Nowa: 01:01:059 (1) - like this one
20:28 Lucyyyyyyy: oh
20:28 Lucyyyyyyy: yeah forgot about that
20:28 Lucyyyyyyy: okay i´ll move to the
20:29 Lucyyyyyyy: Glance of Light
20:29 DTM9 Nowa: I'll fix the 4 hitcircle patterns while you find some filth on it
20:30 Lucyyyyyyy: i need to test play it short
20:33 Lucyyyyyyy: 00:34:081 (1) - im not sure why you start a nc here, imo its pointless
20:33 DTM9 Nowa: Mostly to divide the stream from the stacks
20:33 Lucyyyyyyy: wait a second xD hahaah 00:39:803 (1,2,3,4,5) - here
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: im not sure
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: if its me with badplaying but
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: i played this like there where 1/2 gabes after each slider
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: im not sure how i passed it like that without a 100
20:34 Lucyyyyyyy: but maybe itsb ecause of the low bpm
20:35 DTM9 Nowa: The spacing should be enough to tell that they are 1/4
20:35 DTM9 Nowa: imo
20:35 DTM9 Nowa: They may be little tricky but it's kinda intended
20:35 Lucyyyyyyy: okay okay
20:37 Lucyyyyyyy: 00:56:154 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this looks awesome xD and really played awesome gj on that one
20:37 DTM9 Nowa: ayy
20:37 DTM9 Nowa: Thanks to you for liking it
20:37 DTM9 Nowa: xd
20:39 Lucyyyyyyy: 01:33:761 (1,2,1) - is /= to 00:33:263 (1,2,1) - maybe it would be nice to keep it the same
20:39 Lucyyyyyyy: at one there arent stacked and at the other they are
20:40 DTM9 Nowa: I kinda like making stuff little bit differently on the same beat patterns (sometimes)
20:41 Lucyyyyyyy: okay okay
20:41 DTM9 Nowa: I'd say it's not that bad since they both share the sort of V shape
20:42 DTM9 Nowa: 01:33:761 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - and the other pattern + stream
20:42 DTM9 Nowa: The other one was just easier to form through stacking
20:42 Lucyyyyyyy: 01:53:382 (1,1,1) - mayebe move 01:55:017 (1) - this one to the right aswell so it follows this moving idea, even so its not the same as the sliders before, but i think that would look and play abit better
20:43 DTM9 Nowa: I may have reworked that pattern already
20:43 DTM9 Nowa: mind sending a screenshot of it?
20:44 Lucyyyyyyy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622629
20:45 DTM9 Nowa: Yeaah i kinda reworked that already since i got an idea to get rid of the triple stack
20:45 DTM9 Nowa: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622642
20:46 Lucyyyyyyy: okay okay
20:46 Lucyyyyyyy: 02:29:149 (1,2,1,2) -
20:47 Lucyyyyyyy: you mapped at first vocal and sound (02:29:149 (1,2) - )
20:47 Lucyyyyyyy: but how about you make it like at
20:47 Lucyyyyyyy: 02:30:171 (1,2) -
20:47 Lucyyyyyyy: and map two guitar
20:48 DTM9 Nowa: There is a kind of an echo there
20:48 DTM9 Nowa: i guess
20:48 Lucyyyyyyy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622658
20:48 Lucyyyyyyy: i think that would fit better imo
20:49 DTM9 Nowa: Hmm
20:50 DTM9 Nowa: I guess i'll suit the three notes
20:50 DTM9 Nowa: but i want to keep the movement little bit tighter
20:50 Lucyyyyyyy: okay okay
20:50 DTM9 Nowa: since the song is not that hardly going at it at that point
20:50 Lucyyyyyyy: i have nothing else :3
20:51 DTM9 Nowa: ayy

_Meep_ wrote:

https://puu.sh/uToEc/cb0ecb4ad7.txt
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_DT3
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_DT3
IRC
21:39 _DT3: So here we go
21:40 _DT3: 00:07:102 (1) - Just asking, is that buzz (sliderslide) at the start of the slider intentional? Sounds weird imo
21:40 DTM9 Nowa: I gotta stalk jerod but alrite
21:40 _DT3: lool
21:40 DTM9 Nowa: No it's not intentional
21:40 DTM9 Nowa: lol
21:40 DTM9 Nowa: there we g
21:40 DTM9 Nowa: o
21:41 _DT3: 00:09:963 (4) - Hmm, shouldn't there be more emphasis for this than for 00:10:372 (1) - ? Or at least equal
21:43 DTM9 Nowa: tbh i didn't even really emphasize the other one
21:44 DTM9 Nowa: I guess i can pull the hitcircle bit closer since it doesn't really change the pattern
21:44 _DT3: I mean, since the DS seemed to be a near exact difference of 0.1 I thought it was intentional
21:44 _DT3: Ye
21:45 _DT3: 00:11:598 (6) - Well, this is a bit more noticable imo because you have that contrast from 00:10:985 (4,5) - to 00:11:189 (5,6) - 
21:45 _DT3: Oh and I do need to eat NOW .-.
21:45 DTM9 Nowa: lmao
21:46 _DT3: I might still be back but I'll have to see
21:46 DTM9 Nowa: 00:12:007 (1) - the 1 here is little bit stronger than the other beats imo thus i moved it little bit further away
21:47 _DT3: Oky
21:47 _DT3: Just quickly before I eat: 00:19:774 (1) - the part after the red tick could be a biit bigger imo, it's pretty small rn
21:48 _DT3: But up to you
21:50 DTM9 Nowa: It's there just to set the players to the mindset the next object is in the other way than the initial part of the faster slider (head|red anchor)
21:50 DTM9 Nowa: Idk is the length of it too big of a deal
22:15 _DT3: Ok back
22:16 _DT3: It just looked a bit aesthetically weird to me
22:18 DTM9 Nowa: I personally like that kind of sliders (and i have used it here aswell 01:20:272 (1) - )
22:18 _DT3: Yes true
22:19 DTM9 Nowa: hmm
22:20 DTM9 Nowa: I just don't think it's that big of a deal, sure i could do something to it as it doesn't really change the pattern but i just do not see it as necessary
22:20 DTM9 Nowa: aesthetically it looks fine to me
22:21 _DT3: Ok
22:21 _DT3: 00:29:175 (5) - Hmm, about the kinds of rhythms used here, is there a logic behind the differences in rhythm? Because one time you use 2 1/2 sliders, and then 1/1 sliders although the song sounds pretty similar in those parts (00:22:635 (3,4) - )
22:22 DTM9 Nowa: tbh i don't even know
22:22 DTM9 Nowa: lol
22:23 _DT3: lol
22:24 DTM9 Nowa: I'll change the ones here 00:22:635 - since i use the 1/1 slider later on aswell
22:24 _DT3: Ok
22:27 DTM9 Nowa: oke done
22:28 _DT3: 00:43:074 (1,2,3) - I mean, to me it feels like this ah-ah-ah isn't emphasized enough although it's pretty strong/different from the rest of the sonmg
22:28 _DT3: But idk how I would so that really
22:28 _DT3: Oh also, different rhythm used in the 2nd kiai, specific reasons?
22:29 DTM9 Nowa: Fixing de shiet on 2nd and 3rd kiai
22:29 DTM9 Nowa: the last ah should be a hold
22:30 _DT3: Yeah, I noticed that ~ My actual problem how it doesn't stand out from the rest of the diff because imo it deserves to :o
22:31 DTM9 Nowa: It's not that different imo
22:31 DTM9 Nowa: ;/
22:31 _DT3: Up to you
22:33 _DT3: 00:54:109 (2) - Again, personal thing but this is the same as the other sliders before although it is different in the song itself :o
22:34 _DT3: Could maybe highlight more in some way? (Sorry for not suggesting a way to fix, don't have any ideas rn ;;)
22:36 _DT3: 02:06:360 (5) - Just quickly before we return to the first kiai was this hitcircle to highlight the rrrr? Cause I can't hear any too distinct sounds here
22:36 _DT3: Oh and another thing
22:37 DTM9 Nowa: It works little bit better as a triple as the song kinda sounds like that in full speed
22:37 _DT3: There apparently are many inconsistencies between the diffs (what MA told me)
22:37 _DT3: Like tags, unicode artist, countdown 
22:37 DTM9 Nowa: >.>
22:37 _DT3: Nvm only those
22:38 _DT3: Might be cause didn't update 
22:38 _DT3: But idk
22:38 DTM9 Nowa: It doesn't show stuff like that
22:38 DTM9 Nowa: for me
22:38 _DT3: Ye, nvm
22:38 _DT3: Now I'm embarrased cause it was due to not updating .-.
22:39 DTM9 Nowa: All of the "oy" sounds are little bit descending, i don't really know how i'd represent that. The vocals generally feel like they should be played in a sort of repeated loosely-circular movement or back and forth movement
22:40 _DT3: Well ok
22:41 _DT3: What I maybe thought was to just to change the shape of 00:53:701 (1,2) - to indicate that the song is different there too
22:41 _DT3: But again, only personal prefference
22:43 DTM9 Nowa: How do you exactly see them as different from the two other ones?
22:44 DTM9 Nowa: Sure they are lower but every single one of the "oy"s is little bit lower than the one before
22:44 _DT3: Well, the first one isn't exactly different, but since you grouped together 00:53:701 (1,2) - , 00:54:109 (2) - feels different to me
22:46 DTM9 Nowa: What about decreasing the SV by a little bit
22:46 _DT3: Oh that is a much better idea, yeah
22:47 DTM9 Nowa: Not much at all but just a little bit to indicate the difference
22:47 _DT3: Yeah
22:47 DTM9 Nowa: Since the oy kinda ends faster unlike the others are like "oyyy" but the last one is like "oy"
22:47 _DT3: Exactly
22:48 DTM9 Nowa: fixing dat for other kiais quickly
22:48 _DT3: Yep
22:48 _DT3: Was about to remind xd
22:49 DTM9 Nowa: alrighty
22:50 _DT3: I mean, the only thing I could maybe notice in the kiai was the fact that the angle between sliders on patterns like 00:57:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - change with every pattern but it's really not too big of a deal
22:51 DTM9 Nowa: I'll move the 4|5 little bit to the right
22:53 _DT3: 01:07:600 (1,2) - Ok, now out of the kiai, even if it seems a bit monotonous then, this should be the same rhythm as 00:07:102 (1,2) - imo to keep consistency
22:55 DTM9 Nowa: Need to find a way to deal with it
22:55 DTM9 Nowa: one sec
22:57 DTM9 Nowa: Found a way
22:57 DTM9 Nowa: \w/
22:58 _DT3: \w/
22:59 _DT3: Wtf I can't find much more
22:59 _DT3: So nice and consistent \w/
23:00 _DT3: 02:31:398 (3,4,5,6) - Well here, now I can hear that 02:31:500 (4) - is overmapped tho :o
23:00 DTM9 Nowa: wee
23:01 DTM9 Nowa: There is a kinda silent piano thingy
23:01 _DT3: Aaah
23:01 _DT3: Yeeah
23:01 DTM9 Nowa: or guitar thingy
23:01 _DT3: Hear it now
23:01 DTM9 Nowa: kinda hard to figure it out
23:01 DTM9 Nowa: lol
23:03 _DT3: But tbh, it feels weird that you mapped it there but not previously because it sounds just as intense as in that case (like 02:30:682 - ) 
23:05 _DT3: 02:42:843 (3) - Must have been a mistake but it feels weird to have a sudden 1/4 slider :o
23:05 DTM9 Nowa: I was mid-fixing that
23:05 DTM9 Nowa: lol
23:05 _DT3: lool
23:05 _DT3: But seriously, the diff is awesome, nothing else to say :o
23:07 _DT3: I think that means that the mod is done~
23:07 DTM9 Nowa: one sec
23:07 DTM9 Nowa: gotta write a thing
23:07 _DT3: Can I post then? :o
23:08 DTM9 Nowa: 02:21:178 (1,1,1,1) - pianos (least intense overall, least intense following), 02:27:719 (1,1,1,2,3,1,2) - vocals that stand out over other vocal thingys ( 02:28:536 (1) - vs 02:28:332 - ) and then more intense following for the last measure to get people back into the more intense style
23:08 DTM9 Nowa: that's how i see it

I'll mod the other diffs at a later point
This is a great diff though, so for now, GL!
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
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Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
[General]

  1. 02:21:178 - An unsnapped green line in ezek's Normal and Hard.
[Easy]

  1. 00:52:066 (1,2,3) - 01:52:564 (1,2,3) - Should be aesthetically consistent since I assume you used slider shapes to express vocals?
  2. 02:08:098 - Overall I'm not a fan of rhythm choice on this since it's pretty much a calm part yet the rhythm density here is probably the highest throughout the diff, also it kinda lacks rhythm variations with 1/1 things everywhere.
[ezek's Normal]

  1. AR5.5 seems a bit overdone imo considering the BPM isn't that high and the rhythms aren't that complex.
  2. 00:09:554 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Any reason for having different rhythms on this compared to 00:16:095 (5,6,1) - 01:11:687 (2,3,4) - etc?
  3. 00:23:453 (1,4) - The blue ticks aren't that prominent to map imo and the way you used 3/4 repeat sliders here kinda devalues on things you do with vocals like 00:20:182 (1) - 00:26:723 (1) - etc.
  4. 00:29:993 (1) - This too I guess, my point also applies to the second verse as well.
  5. 01:18:841 (3,4) - Not stacking them for the sake of aesthetics is kind of inconsistent imo since you never unstack these for aesthetics in other places.
  6. 01:59:922 (1) - Remove NC ?
  7. If what you're trying to do in the last kiai is to mix the things you used in earlier kiais, then I would like to see some aesthetics from the first kiai being applied here too, stuff like 00:34:898 (1,2,3) - 00:41:438 (1,2,3) - cuz what you did on these 02:34:259 (1,2,3) - etc isn't much different from the second kiai so it kinda contradicts your concept of mixing things.
[Hard]

  1. 00:36:533 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kind of inconsistent with other patterns cuz you used back and forth movement on this one rather than rotation like 00:56:154 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:37:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - which idk why
  2. Generally the diff is fine but I don't like some inconsistencies which you did them to avoid going off-screen like 00:14:868 (4,5) - 01:45:615 (2,3,4) - etc.
[Glance of Light]

  1. 00:20:182 (1,2) - 00:21:817 (1,2) - Why are you using these when the rest is like 00:26:723 (1,2,3) - 01:22:315 (1,2,3) - 01:27:221 (1,2,3) - and tbh these repeat sliders don't reflect vocals really well.
  2. 00:31:628 (1,2,3,4) - 01:32:126 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent rhythm-wise. (but personally I like the first one better since using a 5-circle-stream kinda devalues 00:34:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:34:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - which are more intense)
  3. 01:11:278 (2,3) - Not really discernible between stanzas since they're both sliders + their placements look like they're in the same pattern but musically they aren't.
  4. 02:08:098 (1,4,5) - The placements of these implies like they're in the same pattern but actually you never include 02:08:098 (1) in a pattern on other places like 02:01:557 (1) - 02:09:734 (1) so it’s inconsistent aesthetically.
  5. 02:30:580 - Adding a circle here would simplify the background sound better, but up to you I guess.
  6. 02:31:500 (4) - Not a fan of using 1/4 rhythms in such a calm part tho. With that aside, 02:31:704 - would be a more significant beat to map.
  7. 00:38:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:37:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I wish these patterns could've had a more consistent concept, like 00:38:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:39:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't even have the same flow which idk why since you seems to have a more solid flow concepts on parts like 00:34:898 - 00:41:438 - 01:35:397 - etc.
Yeah can still be improved in terms of minor details, good luck~
Nowaie
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Topic Starter
Nowaie
Fixed pretty much everything w

Electoz wrote:

00:38:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:37:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I wish these patterns could've had a more consistent concept, like 00:38:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:39:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't even have the same flow which idk why since you seems to have a more solid flow concepts on parts like 00:34:898 - 00:41:438 - 01:35:397 - etc. Improved this, i do not want to have exactly similar patterns as it would get too repetitive

02:08:098 (1,4,5) - The placements of these implies like they're in the same pattern but actually you never include 02:08:098 (1) in a pattern on other places like 02:01:557 (1) - 02:09:734 (1) so it’s inconsistent aesthetically. This just happened as i want to have these 02:07:689 (1,1) - like they are
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache

Erectoz wrote:

[ezek's Normal]

  1. AR5.5 seems a bit overdone imo considering the BPM isn't that high and the rhythms aren't that complex. changed to 5.0
  2. 00:09:554 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Any reason for having different rhythms on this compared to 00:16:095 (5,6,1) - 01:11:687 (2,3,4) - etc? Yeah, I jst don't wanna have much 1/2 sliders so it's not too hard for the targeted players. Plus I really don't see why having them different would be bad; it brings more variety and makes the map less boring. Also, since "the BPM isn't that high," I don't expect people getting confused over that~
  3. 00:23:453 (1,4) - The blue ticks aren't that prominent to map imo and the way you used 3/4 repeat sliders here kinda devalues on things you do with vocals like 00:20:182 (1) - 00:26:723 (1) - etc. Personally I prefer to have those blue ticks covered. To differentiate the instrumental from the vocals I use circles instead of 1/1 sliders on the instrumental part~
  4. 00:29:993 (1) - This too I guess, my point also applies to the second verse as well. same
  5. 01:18:841 (3,4) - Not stacking them for the sake of aesthetics is kind of inconsistent imo since you never unstack these for aesthetics in other places.
  6. 01:59:922 (1) - Remove NC ? oki doki
  7. If what you're trying to do in the last kiai is to mix the things you used in earlier kiais, then I would like to see some aesthetics from the first kiai being applied here too, stuff like 00:34:898 (1,2,3) - 00:41:438 (1,2,3) - cuz what you did on these 02:34:259 (1,2,3) - etc isn't much different from the second kiai so it kinda contradicts your concept of mixing things. okay, I worked a bit on this matter
Thanks for the mod!

update
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oh no! I just roleplayed pls don't kill me Nowa senpai!!!!111

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Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
M4M from my queue, sorry for the delay

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
preview point unsnapped, plz reset to 00:34:898 - in all diffs
you should better change your bg to .jpg format to make your file size smaller
I think ending the last kiai at 03:00:421 - seems more fitting, it's not a must-do though

Easy
01:06:040 - drag the breaktime back to natural
02:06:538 - 02:26:159 - ^

ezek's Normal
you can remove the unused inherited points like 00:19:774 - 00:26:314 - and on
01:18:228 (2,3,4) - doesn't flow really naturally in a Normal imo, maybe you can rework this pattern to make the flow not so twisted
01:55:834 (3) - missing whistle on head
02:01:557 (1) - probably need a finish for the cymbal beat
02:03:192 (1,5) - move NC from 1 to 5 and remove NC from 02:06:462 (1) - for consistency
02:08:098 (1) - a finish fits better than a clap on head imo
02:19:748 (1) - this spinner might be a bit too short for a Normal diff, consider to replace it with circles and sliders instead
02:33:850 (1) - a whistle may sound nice with the vocal

Hard
00:34:081 (1,2) - turning the volume down for these drumbeats may give a better emphasize to the heavy beat at 00:34:898 (1) - . they're currently too loud and have small difference with the kiai which I think is not really good. same for the points before latter kiais and same things in Insane diff
nothign else, I generally really like this diff

Glance of Light
just curious about how's the diff name related to the song
01:25:177 (6) - why 3/4 here, it's inconsistent with 00:24:679 (6) - and doesn't play so good imo. plz try 1/2 slider instead
01:33:761 (1,2) - the claps sound really unsatisfying here, better remove them?
02:18:726 (7,8) - it's not that I'm against the shape but these two red node sliders look really unfitting considering how all the other sliders in the map are like. maybe just use white node curve slider instead

that's all
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