four dimensions:
00:03:083 - to 00:04:271 - should be mapped
theres no way you leave that space empty
00:06:647 - to 00:07:835 - same here
00:17:340 - why sliderend here? it is the same sound as here 00:17:934 -
00:19:716 - 00:28:924 - why is this unmapped?
00:33:974 (3) - nc
00:34:568 (11) - ^
and so on, i dont want to focus on it
just fix them urself, basically how it works: nc emphasizes any structure/flow/rhythm/melody/interval change.
for streams i would stick to putting an nc on every 9th note.
00:45:558 - unmapped beat
00:43:182 - ^
00:43:330 - ^
00:57:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i dont understand this strucutre, it basically doesnt fit to the melody, and i dont really understand which of the soundstracks you were choosing by making that stream
01:00:113 (1) - same here, the piano is moving by waves, meanwhile your stream is stuckked to the dull trumpet
01:02:490 (1) - ^
01:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - why you divided them by 4?
listen carefuly:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6309059 basically try to do this and listen what happens
i know theres a tiny sound at 01:14:741 - 01:15:038 - 01:15:335 - etc
but idk, i'd change the way of making that stream
it looks decent tho.
01:18:232 (2) - what the hell? 01:18:306 - you are missing the blue tick for some reason.
01:18:529 (3) - dude remap it
01:18:900 - and 01:19:048 - cmon
02:09:024 (1,2,3) - ds seems random
02:18:826 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this shud not be like that, remap.
it simply doesnt fit to the melody.
02:23:282 (1,2) - this shud be remapped as well, just fking listen to the melody, its way different than the rest of the song
02:24:470 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here you can use your "stairs" pattern
02:35:310 - here you can use 02:01:599 (13) - this
03:02:489 - unmapped, id suggest to use a kickslider
03:02:786 (3,1) - remap
the sound interval starts at 03:03:083 - this sliderend (like wtf, u shud never do something like this)
and
03:03:182 (1) - this can be sliderkick stream or some shit
03:04:865 (1,2,3,4) - is it necessary to use overlaps there? that spacing felt weird
03:09:617 (1,2,3) - spacing dude, same melody, same patterns, wtf.
03:11:994 (1,2,3) - same shit
03:14:370 (1,2,3,4) - same shit
03:16:746 (1,2,3,4) - same shit
03:19:122 (1,2,1) - same shit
03:31:895 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this feels really awkward
03:39:320 (1,2,3,4) - why sliders there? they basically doesnt fit there.
03:53:578 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:58:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why you changed your patterns here all of the sudden? same melody as before.
but yea, still.
remap it.
04:04:271 (1,2,3,4) - whyyyyyyyyy
04:09:766 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - you shud increase the spacing here by following the melody.
Over dimensions:
remap.
00:35:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this shudnt be like this, listen to the melody
00:41:103 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - what the point of this object placement?
00:51:647 (7,8,1,2) - i dont like this transition, it fucks reading.
00:54:618 (4,5,6) - ^
i would suggest: http://puu.sh/rGVlZ/22b62eaf2c.jpg
01:04:643 (14,15,16,1,2) - just remap it, its really fked up.
01:18:306 - 01:19:048 - this sound different, please remap to the actual melody.
01:21:648 (3,5) - you should emphasize it somehow.
01:42:885 (14) - nc? its super obvious
01:55:658 (7,1,3,5,7) - structure? wtf
02:06:350 (11,12) - this jumps is way too wide
02:53:282 (1) - this shud be at 39/230
02:55:064 (7) - 20/224
02:55:361 (1) - 26/0
02:57:737 (1,3,5) - ctrl+g it
02:58:628 (7,8,9,10,11) - this spacing is out of place, lower it.
03:09:024 (1,2) - swap them?
04:02:935 (15,1) - dude spacing, move the (15) sliderend to the right lmao
also i didnt mention NC shit, just find it urself.
dont overpass 8 number in ur combos.
ok thats it.
the map is cool, but you shud remap a big part of it to make it consistent and logical in regards to melody.
its m4m so you shud mod my map, you know which one.
00:03:083 - to 00:04:271 - should be mapped
theres no way you leave that space empty
00:06:647 - to 00:07:835 - same here
00:17:340 - why sliderend here? it is the same sound as here 00:17:934 -
00:19:716 - 00:28:924 - why is this unmapped?
00:33:974 (3) - nc
00:34:568 (11) - ^
and so on, i dont want to focus on it
just fix them urself, basically how it works: nc emphasizes any structure/flow/rhythm/melody/interval change.
for streams i would stick to putting an nc on every 9th note.
00:45:558 - unmapped beat
00:43:182 - ^
00:43:330 - ^
00:57:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i dont understand this strucutre, it basically doesnt fit to the melody, and i dont really understand which of the soundstracks you were choosing by making that stream
01:00:113 (1) - same here, the piano is moving by waves, meanwhile your stream is stuckked to the dull trumpet
01:02:490 (1) - ^
01:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - why you divided them by 4?
listen carefuly:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6309059 basically try to do this and listen what happens
i know theres a tiny sound at 01:14:741 - 01:15:038 - 01:15:335 - etc
but idk, i'd change the way of making that stream
it looks decent tho.
01:18:232 (2) - what the hell? 01:18:306 - you are missing the blue tick for some reason.
01:18:529 (3) - dude remap it
01:18:900 - and 01:19:048 - cmon
02:09:024 (1,2,3) - ds seems random
02:18:826 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this shud not be like that, remap.
it simply doesnt fit to the melody.
02:23:282 (1,2) - this shud be remapped as well, just fking listen to the melody, its way different than the rest of the song
02:24:470 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here you can use your "stairs" pattern
02:35:310 - here you can use 02:01:599 (13) - this
03:02:489 - unmapped, id suggest to use a kickslider
03:02:786 (3,1) - remap
the sound interval starts at 03:03:083 - this sliderend (like wtf, u shud never do something like this)
and
03:03:182 (1) - this can be sliderkick stream or some shit
03:04:865 (1,2,3,4) - is it necessary to use overlaps there? that spacing felt weird
03:09:617 (1,2,3) - spacing dude, same melody, same patterns, wtf.
03:11:994 (1,2,3) - same shit
03:14:370 (1,2,3,4) - same shit
03:16:746 (1,2,3,4) - same shit
03:19:122 (1,2,1) - same shit
03:31:895 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this feels really awkward
03:39:320 (1,2,3,4) - why sliders there? they basically doesnt fit there.
03:53:578 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:58:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why you changed your patterns here all of the sudden? same melody as before.
but yea, still.
remap it.
04:04:271 (1,2,3,4) - whyyyyyyyyy
04:09:766 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - you shud increase the spacing here by following the melody.
Over dimensions:
remap.
00:35:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this shudnt be like this, listen to the melody
00:41:103 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - what the point of this object placement?
00:51:647 (7,8,1,2) - i dont like this transition, it fucks reading.
00:54:618 (4,5,6) - ^
i would suggest: http://puu.sh/rGVlZ/22b62eaf2c.jpg
01:04:643 (14,15,16,1,2) - just remap it, its really fked up.
01:18:306 - 01:19:048 - this sound different, please remap to the actual melody.
01:21:648 (3,5) - you should emphasize it somehow.
01:42:885 (14) - nc? its super obvious
01:55:658 (7,1,3,5,7) - structure? wtf
02:06:350 (11,12) - this jumps is way too wide
02:53:282 (1) - this shud be at 39/230
02:55:064 (7) - 20/224
02:55:361 (1) - 26/0
02:57:737 (1,3,5) - ctrl+g it
02:58:628 (7,8,9,10,11) - this spacing is out of place, lower it.
03:09:024 (1,2) - swap them?
04:02:935 (15,1) - dude spacing, move the (15) sliderend to the right lmao
also i didnt mention NC shit, just find it urself.
dont overpass 8 number in ur combos.
ok thats it.
the map is cool, but you shud remap a big part of it to make it consistent and logical in regards to melody.
its m4m so you shud mod my map, you know which one.