[Warpyc's Insane]
00:07:241 (2,3,4,5) - this part felt very weird moving into 00:08:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - , maybe re-arrange the pattern?
00:42:311 (6,7,8,9,10) - warpyc jumps(tm) pattent pending, it feels a bit out of place in the map, to improve it maybe you could curve or even stack the triple?
01:16:959 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - think these should be curved too in order to go with the flow of the rest of the section..
01:37:241 (4,5) - curve these like you did with 01:37:663 (8,9) - ? purely for aesthetics.
02:04:917 (9) - make this sliderend quieter? At the moment it's offputtingly loud considering the only sound here is a very soft drum hit.
02:08:402 (10,11) - Have you considered removing these 2? Feels a bit weird adding the quiet cymbal to the stream. And also the fact that none of the other diffs do it.
[Shinenite's Insane]
00:08:086 (4,5,1) - Consider making this triangle more like the one that comes right after it
00:11:043 (4,5) - Weird how you mapped 00:12:945 (8) - this but not the note between these, imo
00:17:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - see how this forms like a zigzag but then 8 ruins the pattern? Recommend changing it so that it's similar to laon's name (a series of w's)
00:19:917 (5) - held sound but nothing between this and next note? Recommend slider or a note at 20:128 for the held sound there up to you
00:25:198 (5) - Consistency between pauses is good yes but here the bakground trumpets have an intense moment starting at 00:23:719 (1) - so leaving gaps kinda undermines that intensity. Recommend mapping a note here, same at 01:05:762 (5,6) -
00:41:466 (3,4,5,6) - If these made some sort of shape it would look nice in my opinion.... maybe some sort of rectangle or something. Also the spacing drop from 4 to 5 feels a bit strange and unnecessary
(minor) 00:52:029 (5,6) - blanket things
00:55:410 (9) - This should follow the flow from 7 to 8 and point more upwards imo, it's a weird movement to go from 7 to 8 and then 8 to 9 to follow the sliderpath which is almost perpendicular to the expected flow
01:14:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks untidy without neat symmetry imo :c Make it so! Like 01:19:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:16:325 (2,3) - again spacing drop. try to arrange these to make nicer looking shapes or patterns, it makes the map look more polished
01:29:212 (10) - long slider in kiai feels underwhelming, consider mapping to lyircs here for a tiny bit
01:42:522 (8,9,10) - considering ctrl+g ing the slider and stacking the triple on top of what is currently the sliderend. Btter flow imo!
01:46:114 (10) - Feels VERY underwhelming to have massive sliders here imo. Doing something with 1/2 here might be better imo
01:50:762 (3,4,5,6,7) - The noise to which this is mapped continues for a while, maybe another two notes?
01:53:508 (2,4,6) - The visual spacing between these is unsightly at BEST. HEAVILY recommend moving 6 down further along with 5 to look a bit better
01:56:255 (4,1) - Pause feels strange, recommend slider or note to cover the sudden gap. This pause doesn't have the same emphasis as 01:54:987 (1,2) - is why i ask
02:07:241 (2) - Random slider? Full notes like 02:05:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - except for the triple is recommended personally, much better feel in an Insane
02:09:987 (6) - What Simon would say.
00:07:241 (2,3,4,5) - this part felt very weird moving into 00:08:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - , maybe re-arrange the pattern?
00:42:311 (6,7,8,9,10) - warpyc jumps(tm) pattent pending, it feels a bit out of place in the map, to improve it maybe you could curve or even stack the triple?
01:16:959 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - think these should be curved too in order to go with the flow of the rest of the section..
01:37:241 (4,5) - curve these like you did with 01:37:663 (8,9) - ? purely for aesthetics.
02:04:917 (9) - make this sliderend quieter? At the moment it's offputtingly loud considering the only sound here is a very soft drum hit.
02:08:402 (10,11) - Have you considered removing these 2? Feels a bit weird adding the quiet cymbal to the stream. And also the fact that none of the other diffs do it.
[Shinenite's Insane]
00:08:086 (4,5,1) - Consider making this triangle more like the one that comes right after it
00:11:043 (4,5) - Weird how you mapped 00:12:945 (8) - this but not the note between these, imo
00:17:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - see how this forms like a zigzag but then 8 ruins the pattern? Recommend changing it so that it's similar to laon's name (a series of w's)
00:19:917 (5) - held sound but nothing between this and next note? Recommend slider or a note at 20:128 for the held sound there up to you
00:25:198 (5) - Consistency between pauses is good yes but here the bakground trumpets have an intense moment starting at 00:23:719 (1) - so leaving gaps kinda undermines that intensity. Recommend mapping a note here, same at 01:05:762 (5,6) -
00:41:466 (3,4,5,6) - If these made some sort of shape it would look nice in my opinion.... maybe some sort of rectangle or something. Also the spacing drop from 4 to 5 feels a bit strange and unnecessary
(minor) 00:52:029 (5,6) - blanket things
00:55:410 (9) - This should follow the flow from 7 to 8 and point more upwards imo, it's a weird movement to go from 7 to 8 and then 8 to 9 to follow the sliderpath which is almost perpendicular to the expected flow
01:14:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks untidy without neat symmetry imo :c Make it so! Like 01:19:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:16:325 (2,3) - again spacing drop. try to arrange these to make nicer looking shapes or patterns, it makes the map look more polished
01:29:212 (10) - long slider in kiai feels underwhelming, consider mapping to lyircs here for a tiny bit
01:42:522 (8,9,10) - considering ctrl+g ing the slider and stacking the triple on top of what is currently the sliderend. Btter flow imo!
01:46:114 (10) - Feels VERY underwhelming to have massive sliders here imo. Doing something with 1/2 here might be better imo
01:50:762 (3,4,5,6,7) - The noise to which this is mapped continues for a while, maybe another two notes?
01:53:508 (2,4,6) - The visual spacing between these is unsightly at BEST. HEAVILY recommend moving 6 down further along with 5 to look a bit better
01:56:255 (4,1) - Pause feels strange, recommend slider or note to cover the sudden gap. This pause doesn't have the same emphasis as 01:54:987 (1,2) - is why i ask
02:07:241 (2) - Random slider? Full notes like 02:05:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - except for the triple is recommended personally, much better feel in an Insane
02:09:987 (6) - What Simon would say.