Hi, from my modding queue
General
- OD8.5 seems a bit too much for that star rating, I'd suggest OD8 at max
- Slider tick rate 2 is unnecessary imo, 1 is enough
- Try to keep your NCing consistent through the map: NC every big white tick unless there is a SV change
- About the storyboard: You could change the colour of the lyrics because right now they are too similar to the "circle" sprites things and it's kinda hard to read the lyrics sometimes (for example 02:55:482 ), also some lyrics are offscreen so try to recheck them in 800x600 resolution + letterboxing
Endless
Good luck! (awesome song btw)- 01:28:636 (1,2) - For aesthetics purposes you could make the shapes consistent, same for 02:40:227 (5,6) - 04:01:363 (1,3,5) -
- 01:35:113 (7,1) - Why is the spacing so low suddenly?
- 01:39:545 (1,2,3) - The spacing between 01:39:715 (2,3) - should be bigger than the spacing between 01:39:545 (1,2) - because 01:39:886 (3) - has a stronger sound
- 01:47:727 (1) - You NCed but the combo colour is the same as the previous combo? wtf it's the first time that I see this haha did you edit something in the notepad? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7165956 (if you did edit something in the notepad you should be aware that it's unrankable)
- 02:00:000 (1) - The spacing should be bigger to emphasize that sound (you even put a finish) so maybe CTRL+G?
- 02:03:238 You should add a note here to fit the music better, it feels really empty and awkward without it
- 02:21:818 (1) - CTRL+G to emphasize better
- 02:30:852 (3) - Overmapped, there is no sound here in the music, same for 02:31:363 (1) - 02:48:494 (6,8) - 02:51:562 (4,6) - 02:53:437 (2) - 02:55:142 (3) - 02:57:528 (2) - 02:59:403 (5) - 03:10:482 (6) - 03:59:573 (6) - 04:05:028 (8) - 04:07:755 (6) - 04:15:937 (6) - (There are probably more but I'm too lazy to point them out)
- 02:32:215 (1) - You should put that note here 02:32:045 instead since the piano sound is way stronger than the vocals that are becoming more quiet
- 02:43:465 (6,1) - The flow is awkward to play here, try to rotate 02:43:636 (1) - by 15 degrees or something
- 02:56:420 (3,4) - Why not just stack them? It's kinda confusing to play /read right now
- 03:15:340 (1,1) - NCs are unnecessary here, same for 05:48:750 (1) - 05:52:500 (1) -
- 05:57:954 (1,1) - Remove NCs and put it here 05:58:636 (3) - instead