1. Basic (1,27 stars, 73 notes)
2. Origin (2,04 stars, 130 notes)

-Fluffy wrote:

Hi!,
From my modding queue
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I don't see anything wrong with the maps.
Maybe change the spinner at the end since the song ends in a beat.

Kisses wrote:

why?

Kisses wrote:

why?

1. Хитсаунды вообще непонятно расставлены. На половине слайдеров они стоят сначала, на половине - в конце, в другой части вообще не стоят, етц. Последний спиннер заглушить, у тебя там почти пустота.
2. Думаю, повторный "Hero" с тэгов можно убрать.
3. В чём прикол ставить слайдерпоинты на слайдеры и не юзать их?

1. В целом выглядит нормально, но после превью-поинта довольно грязно, в основном из-за большой плотности объектов и низкого СВ, из-за чего ты пытаешься курвить слайдеры 00:54:098 (2) - 00:58:464 (2) - 01:15:926 (2) , что их лучше не делает, им самое то быть либо прямыми, либо как 01:02:829 (3) , где курв есть, но не так сильно заметен, из-за чего выглядит приятно, tl;dr проблема лишь в маленьком св.
2. 01:16:472 (3) - странно, несколько секунд назад ты мапал этот же момент по-другому. Мне кажется, что данные паттерны нужно поменять местами, ибо ближе к концу трек становится всё сильнее и сильнее.

1. 00:31:724 (4,1) - бланкет
2. 00:37:181 (1) - не выделяешь гитару на половине пути (или там укулеле, хрен знает), так что слайдер можно закончить на 00:38:273 , как в изике.
3. 00:59:828 - и снова странности - в изике данный звук был вполне кликабельным.
4. 01:16:472 (1,2) - тоже самое, что описывал в изике, и выше.
5. 01:18:655 (1) - странно, почему ты оставляешь этот слайдер 3/2, если , во-первых, звуков там нет, во-вторых, это не сходится с концепцией следующего паттерна 01:20:837 (1) .
6. Насчёт шейпов - слайдеры типа 00:50:278 (1) - лучше выглядели в изике, т.е. через красную точку, здесь же они кривоваты.

squirrelpascals wrote:

Helno, from modding queue. I liek orchestral stuff on osu

general

• Since you choose to mute slider ticks, I think you should add a sliderslide so that there's some kind of feedback at all. You can take something simple like the default soft-sliderslide and just make it a lot quieter on audacity, then use that. I've done this already so if you want the file you can poke me in game
You should've checked map more carefully, I've done exactly the same thing to the second half of the song. By the way, good catch, I like this idea.

• You have some unused inherited points that you should probably remove (im looking at stuff like this 01:26:840 - ) I let Shmi do with this.

• Sometimes you silence a slidertick on a slider and sometimes you don't. Make this consistent throughout the map (or if you mean to play the slidertick to play on a certain instrument, then its probably okay) I silenced these sliderends which haven't had a strong enough sound on it. For instance, 00:56:554 - etc. But I've noticed there are definitely some sliderend which have to be silenced.

squirrelpascals wrote:

Helno, from modding queue. I liek orchestral stuff on osu

general

• You have some unused inherited points that you should probably remove (im looking at stuff like this 01:26:840 - ) it isn't a real problem

Melancholy

• 01:12:652 - two timing point exist at the same time

• 00:28:450 (1) - ctrl+j on this will result in better flow

• 00:45:913 (1) - put this under 6? better flow again haha I think the current position is more logical to read since it continues previous movements

• 01:16:472 (1) - 01:17:563 (2) - make these two the same curve? not essential but it will look nice at least it looks nice with the current variant

• 01:29:569 - this is a better place to end the spinner imo. its fast yes, but nothing is really audible after this. not sure about it tbh w8ing for QAT's opinion

Basic

• 00:58:464 (2) - curving this to the left would go better with these other curvy aesthetics that surround it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7820314 indeed

idk this is pretty good. most of the general stuff applies here ofc

Good luck!

DTM9 Nowa wrote:

Sup, mod from private requ

GeneralAdd "osu!" as the source. I have no idea myself why is it like so but it is This song wasn't created for osu!, it was FEATURED by osu!, so the source should be empty

As Namki has helped with hitsounding (and is responding to mods ect.) his/her name could be added to the tags hitsounders aren't allowed to be added to tags. we can add people to tags only if they mapped sth, made sb, but not hs.

Not sure if the tags "of", "a" and "Hero" are necessary as those are included in the title already this is a name of the album so it's great

Did you intentionally not hitsound some of the objects, like for example here 00:41:547 - ? Could you explain why have you made choices like so because this 00:37:181 - is hitsounded and i can not really see any kind of specific difference between them

Basic
The spacing is not exactly constant, the changes are small and theoretically unnoticeable but might aswell note it out 0.000001 changing aren't issues lol

00:10:988 (3) - The sliderhead|followpoint|red anchor forms a bit tighter curve than the red anchor|followpoint|slidertail so to visually polish stuff out you could adjust the followpoints generally. And since you flipped this 00:28:450 (3) - from the other one, you could polish it similarly this is everyone's own opinion, in my opinion it's great

00:30:633 (1,2) - Subjective, these two could be little bit more curved so the pattern would look visually connected overall (And maybe even take the next slider 00:32:816 (3) - bit better into the pattern) they were good imo but well did sth

00:50:278 (3,1) - Stacking stuff under sliderheads is never a good idea even though there are two beats in between the objects. Though this is kinda inconsistant with 01:07:741 (3,1) - these two so could you change one of them to be like the other one? (preferably change the stacked one) Maybe the 1 ( 00:52:461 (1) - ) would not need to be as far away as the 1 here 01:09:923 (1) - as the melody between the objects on the second pattern is much more active but atleast some spacing would do good for 00:52:461 (1) - anyway

01:05:012 (5) - The 5 really feels disconnected from the combo it's a part of ( 01:01:192 (1,2,3,4) - ), maybe you could place it so it'd be in the middle of the following slider 01:05:558 (1) - . It would connect it with the combo it's a part of instead of the next combo

01:27:386 (1) - Idk did you change something on this spinner already but it really feels like it ends on absolutely nothing. Maybe you could explain why does it end where ever it ends and why it would be a better choice to end it there instead of 01:29:569 - for example which is pretty much the last audible beat of the song said above

Melancholy
00:10:169 (4,5,6) - You could space these three little bit more than the generally used DS as they are placed on little bit higher tone beats (unless you want to strictly stay on the specific DS like normals usually do) This diff was mapped for consistent DS, so I won't increase DS anywhere.

00:18:627 (3,4) - These could be turned into hitcircles by one way or another since the changes in the melody ( 00:18:900 - 00:19:173 - 00:19:446 - ) would support that kind of mapping and so the whole pattern would be consistant with the other similar patterns prior to this one ( 00:00:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for ex.) and the patterns after that one ( 00:21:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - )

00:54:644 (1) - Couldn't the loop here be just circular normally without the red anchor? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7843761 This is everyone's own opinion, so I don't want to change it.

If you want to use exactly that kind of a slider:

294,198,54644,6,0,B|274:242|282:306|302:342|302:342|430:318|350:198|286:278|286:278|234:310|191:312|146:278,1,490,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:12:106 (1) - you possibly could use similar solution for this one nah

00:58:464 (3) - Sliders used on this kind of beats could be just two hitcircles since atleast imo the second beat 00:58:737 - is little bit stronger and kinda feels weird if it's not an active note I placed many 1/2 circles only on piano sounds, there aren't any piano sounds so it would be inconsistent

00:59:009 (1,2,3) - You could polish the visuals here aswell because currently the 2 is not exactly aligned with either of them. I personally would move the 2 upwards so it'd be clearly off the path of 1 and then move the 3 so the circularity of it would connect with the 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7843812 like so I don't see any real diference, so no.

Seems like SquirrelP already pointed out the two timing points

Well done, really nice looking overall. If you still want to return that one mod i'd have a set ready in couple of days~ :>

Good luck

[Jenn] wrote:

• Melancholy
  00:50:278 (1) - i personally believe if this going to have a drum like sound, it should be more quiet. 25~35% maybe. the drum sound really sticks out a little to loud vs the quiet and clam
  01:21:929 (2) - i have to disagree on this overlap, there's enough room for the slider to be alone, looks a bit odd the slider is straight compared to the rest of the map full of curving sliders indeed
  
  sorry for such a short mod, there wasnt much i found