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congrats~
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00:24:066 (3,2) - random overlap
00:24:066 (3) - i dont get why you use that curve in the middle
00:26:030 (6,1) - shouldnt stack cuz downbeat 00:26:209 - is very strong.
00:26:834 - overmapped? i dont really hear a 1/4 here
00:28:887 (7,3,4,5,8) - very messy overlap, aesthetics seems bad.
00:46:119 (8) - also overmapped imo
00:46:030 (7,5) - overlap here is messy.
00:53:352 (1,6) - why not stack?
01:01:566 (7,8) - idk why you choose to have such a big spacing at this place. It is obvious that 01:01:387 (6,7,8) - the spacing should be around the same, and while 01:01:923 (1) - has a strong downbeat you choose to ignore and use a much smaller ds. Doesnt really make much sense as far as im concerned
01:03:887 (4,6) - very poor blanket
01:04:780 (1,4,6) - overlap is messy
01:10:494 (1,2) - this is inconsistent with 00:59:066 (1,2) - ,i think you need to increase ds.
01:11:744 (5,1) - also need to remove stacking
00:29:691 (4) - 100% overmapped, if you intend to follow high pitch sounds you should map 00:29:155 - 00:29:869 - instead.
00:53:352 (1,2) - 01:04:780 (1,2) - imo their distance is way too small cuz you used them in kiai section. They are almost as small as 00:00:495 (1,2) - in terms of ds...
I have deep concern about the aesthetics on this diff. You use a lot of overlaps and most of them are random and inconsistent...which would no doubt make the diff messy.
00:13:709 (2,5,2) - etc
00:17:459 (6,1,2,3) - 00:21:923 (1,3,1) - etc
I hope you can consider my points above.
00:24:066 (3,2) - random overlap
00:24:066 (3) - i dont get why you use that curve in the middle
00:26:030 (6,1) - shouldnt stack cuz downbeat 00:26:209 - is very strong.
00:26:834 - overmapped? i dont really hear a 1/4 here
00:28:887 (7,3,4,5,8) - very messy overlap, aesthetics seems bad.
00:46:119 (8) - also overmapped imo
00:46:030 (7,5) - overlap here is messy.
00:53:352 (1,6) - why not stack?
01:01:566 (7,8) - idk why you choose to have such a big spacing at this place. It is obvious that 01:01:387 (6,7,8) - the spacing should be around the same, and while 01:01:923 (1) - has a strong downbeat you choose to ignore and use a much smaller ds. Doesnt really make much sense as far as im concerned
01:03:887 (4,6) - very poor blanket
01:04:780 (1,4,6) - overlap is messy
01:10:494 (1,2) - this is inconsistent with 00:59:066 (1,2) - ,i think you need to increase ds.
01:11:744 (5,1) - also need to remove stacking
00:29:691 (4) - 100% overmapped, if you intend to follow high pitch sounds you should map 00:29:155 - 00:29:869 - instead.
00:53:352 (1,2) - 01:04:780 (1,2) - imo their distance is way too small cuz you used them in kiai section. They are almost as small as 00:00:495 (1,2) - in terms of ds...
I have deep concern about the aesthetics on this diff. You use a lot of overlaps and most of them are random and inconsistent...which would no doubt make the diff messy.
00:13:709 (2,5,2) - etc
00:17:459 (6,1,2,3) - 00:21:923 (1,3,1) - etc
I hope you can consider my points above.
alot of the overlaps you pointed out aren`t visible in game, btw some triplets are `overmapped`for emphasize as most of mappers do nowadays, dark explained that to me in game
Try viewing with Hit-animation on. A lot of those overlaps aren't visible in game and don't actually contribute to cluttering the map. Some of the points on stacking/not stacking seem valid though, as well as spacing choice.
Yeah you are right, some overlaps aren't really visible.
About the overlap, I agree with some, but not all.
So here's the shortened mod
About the overlap, I agree with some, but not all.
So here's the shortened mod
I also highly suggest that you should delete 00:12:994 (6) - in normal cuz the sound actually starts on blue tick as you did in hard insane and top diff. That will be too hard for Normal.My Angel Azusa wrote:
top diff
00:24:066 (3) - i dont get why you use that curve in the middle
00:26:030 (6,1) - shouldnt stack cuz downbeat 00:26:209 - is very strong.
00:26:834 - overmapped? i dont really hear a 1/4 here. Natsu said it's for emphasise, but imo what you should emphasise is 00:26:923 (4) -
00:46:119 (8) - also overmapped imo
00:53:352 (1,6) - a bit nazi cuz invisible, but i still think better to stack
01:01:566 (7,8) - idk why you choose to have such a big spacing at this place. It is obvious that 01:01:387 (6,7,8) - the spacing should be around the same, and while 01:01:923 (1) - has a strong downbeat you choose to ignore and use a much smaller ds. Doesnt really make much sense as far as im concerned
01:03:887 (4,6) - very poor blanket
01:10:494 (1,2) - this is inconsistent with 00:59:066 (1,2) - ,i think you need to increase ds.
01:11:744 (5,1) - also need to remove stacking
00:29:691 (4) - 100% overmapped, if you intend to follow high pitch sounds you should map 00:29:155 - 00:29:869 - instead.
00:53:352 (1,2) - 01:04:780 (1,2) - imo their distance is way too small cuz you used them in kiai section. They are almost as small as 00:00:495 (1,2) - in terms of ds...
And i still dont like the aesthetics but anyways...might be fine, there are much worse maps in ranked section so guess its fine.
Topic Starter
im at the university so will try to answer when im back
thanks for checking beforehand!
thanks for checking beforehand!
Kiss Kiss
00:50:852 (2) - why does this have a finish, sounds like you just copied an object with a hitsound and forgot about it
Topic Starter
My Angel Azusa wrote:
top diff
00:24:066 (3) - i dont get why you use that curve in the middle i use different kind of sliders to represent the 1/2 vocals, like 00:02:816 (6) - ,00:05:673 (6) - ,00:33:352 (1) - , doing the same slider for everything would be boring
00:26:030 (6,1) - shouldnt stack cuz downbeat 00:26:209 - is very strong. (idk if what im going to say have any sense lol) i feel the stacks gives other kind of enphasis for the kicks, instead of doing everything a jump, like i do for example in the triplets, or here 00:49:780 (1,2,3,4) -
00:26:834 - overmapped? i dont really hear a 1/4 here. Natsu said it's for emphasise, but imo what you should emphasise is 00:26:923 (4) - 00:26:923 (4) - the slider here is for the vocals, and the triples is to keep consistency with the others(every triple start on a red tick). Same for 00:29:602 (3,4,5) -
00:46:119 (8) - also overmapped imo on purpose for emphasis
00:53:352 (1,6) - a bit nazi cuz invisible, but i still think better to stack upss yeah, this was my mistake
01:01:566 (7,8) - idk why you choose to have such a big spacing at this place. It is obvious that 01:01:387 (6,7,8) - the spacing should be around the same, and while 01:01:923 (1) - has a strong downbeat you choose to ignore and use a much smaller ds. Doesnt really make much sense as far as im concerned i dont see what's wrong with 01:01:566 (7,8) -, for most of the jumps i keep increasing the the ds as the pattern go forward. i felt a bit more intense this part so decided to increase a bit more here. About 01:01:923 (1) - yeah the ds could be increase a bit but kept a lower ds because using a similar ds like 01:01:566 (7,8) - seems wrong and too difficult since im starting a new pattern and 01:02:280 (2) - ds would has been wrong too
01:03:887 (4,6) - very poor blanket yeah could be improve...
01:10:494 (1,2) - this is inconsistent with 00:59:066 (1,2) - ,i think you need to increase ds. nice catch, yeah ds should be a bit bigger
01:11:744 (5,1) - also need to remove stacking followed the same logic i said before but since this is a finish maybe you're right
00:29:691 (4) - 100% overmapped, if you intend to follow high pitch sounds you should map 00:29:155 - 00:29:869 - instead. explained on 00:26:834 -
00:53:352 (1,2) - 01:04:780 (1,2) - imo their distance is way too small cuz you used them in kiai section. They are almost as small as 00:00:495 (1,2) - in terms of ds... I liked how they represented the vocal on this part so repeated this pattern for some consistency
I also highly suggest that you should delete 00:12:994 (6) - in normal cuz the sound actually starts on blue tick as you did in hard insane and top diff. That will be too hard for Normal. This sound is kinda weird, it actually sounds like if it starts on a yellow tick, but decided to go for the blue tick on highest diffs, for the normal i thought the slide could work ether way starting on the white stick or leave it in blank, decided to go for the slider.
And i still dont like the aesthetics but anyways...might be fine, there are much worse maps in ranked section so guess its fine.
Thanks for taking your time to check this.!Okorin wrote:
00:50:852 (2) - why does this have a finish, sounds like you just copied an object with a hitsound and forgot about it This is actually on purpose. if you compare 00:50:852 - with 00:53:709 -, the second sounds more empty for me. idk if it's the echo or the kick gives more emphasis, but i can hear something here.
For 01:02:280 - since it's lessss notorious decided to not go for the finish
A map could always be improve. If any of this point is really necessary I'd be glad to ask for unqualifed to fix it.
Oh damn, I guess I'm late to clear this request, poke me if you need anything else lol
taking this down because you actually seem to want to do some of these
about the two finishes at the beginning of the kiai: they still sound really noisy especially the 2nd one, and 01:02:280 (2) - is basically repeating 00:50:852 (2) - if im not mistaken and doesn't have one so the first one looks out of place if you look at the whole map
about the two finishes at the beginning of the kiai: they still sound really noisy especially the 2nd one, and 01:02:280 (2) - is basically repeating 00:50:852 (2) - if im not mistaken and doesn't have one so the first one looks out of place if you look at the whole map
Topic Starter
Thanks Okorin! I did the following changes:
00:53:352 (1,6) - fixed stack
01:01:744 (8,1) - increased ds
01:03:887 (4,6) - improved blanket (i think lol)
01:10:494 (1,2) - fixed ds
01:11:744 (5,1) - removed stack
00:53:352 (1,2) - 01:04:780 (1,2) - increased ds a bit
00:50:852 - removed finish on every diff
I hope this works!
Updated~
00:53:352 (1,6) - fixed stack
01:01:744 (8,1) - increased ds
01:03:887 (4,6) - improved blanket (i think lol)
01:10:494 (1,2) - fixed ds
01:11:744 (5,1) - removed stack
00:53:352 (1,2) - 01:04:780 (1,2) - increased ds a bit
00:50:852 - removed finish on every diff
I hope this works!
Updated~
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Update~
Edit: contacted my angel azusa and said it's ok to moving on.
Waiting for natsu and gero
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