Nakano Azusa(CV:Taketatsu Ayana) - Joyful Todays · forum

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Left 2017-02-06T04:42:52+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 4월 6일 목요일 at 오전 11:31:40

Artist: Nakano Azusa(CV:Taketatsu Ayana)
Title: Joyful Todays
Source: けいおん！！
Tags: k-on!! BetaStar TaMul Akitoshi joker- joker Koiyuki Minakami Yuki cut version character song
BPM: 115
Filesize: 10319kb
Play Time: 01:11
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Normal (2.1 stars, 113 notes)
Easy (1.38 stars, 71 notes)
Insane (4.18 stars, 259 notes)
joker's Hard (3.34 stars, 222 notes)
Koiyuki's Extra (5.28 stars, 316 notes)
Shiawase (5.78 stars, 333 notes)

Download: Nakano Azusa(CV:Taketatsu Ayana) - Joyful Todays
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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8th
with joker-, Akitoshi, Koiyuki
hitsounded by TaMul
storyboarded by Sidetail

Last edited by Left 2019-06-30T16:24:47+00:00, edited 82 times in total.

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2017-02-06T04:58:54+00:00

The real angel Azusa

Left

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Left 2017-02-06T06:22:00+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
The real angel Azusa

not that megadere hentai girl

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2017-02-06T11:11:14+00:00

Left wrote:
xxdeathx wrote:
The real angel Azusa
not that megadere hentai girl

but she's the most cute and moe character ever

Left

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Left 2017-02-06T11:23:39+00:00

ehhhh????

sahuang

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sahuang 2017-02-06T13:44:29+00:00

^^

Beomsan

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Beomsan 2017-02-06T17:47:29+00:00

most cute and moe sahuang 😉👌👌

Gaia

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Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-02-07T15:16:16+00:00

Left cheating on chitose

Left

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Left 2017-02-07T15:24:05+00:00

Gaia wrote:
Left cheating on chitose

Left's waifu SEASON 2

Gaia

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Gaia 2017-02-07T16:19:14+00:00

chitose ntr

Shadren

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Shadren 2017-02-09T15:07:48+00:00

Hi m4m

General:
Plz fix hitsound's delay soft-hitclap2.wav
and soft-hitfinish5.wav
Off wildscreen supp in insane hard normal easy diffs

My Angel Azusa:
00:00:487 (1,2,3) - dont think that beginning with line patterin when kicks a bit different is good idea (just imo)
00:17:835 (6) - wanna suggest just nc this. 00:17:964 (1) - but this nc revoke 00:18:226 (3) - and this nc. will be more consistancy throw your previous emphazes 00:17:835 (6,1,2) - and this 3 notes sounds simmilar
00:25:791 (1,2) - cntrl+g mby? this will make more impact and spacing will be more intuativety while playing
00:30:357 (2,3) - spacing looks a bit randomly
00:40:922 (4) - nc?
00:53:574 (4,1) - dont understand why this sapcing less than previously. you always emphaze this beat with hard jump.

Thats all what i can suggest for this. very cool rythmic very cool structured. nice diff

Insane:
00:00:487 (1,2,3) - as i told in "My Angel Azusa" diff
00:07:791 (1,2,3) - why not reverse slider as previously? xd
00:13:009 (1,2) - i think better emphaze this moment with some spacing cuz 2 hard beats repeated
00:17:183 (1,2) - same
00:17:704 (3,4,5) - mby line jump pattern?
01:05:182 (1,2) - as i told

joker's Hard:
00:26:574 - this timeline unsnapped
00:24:487 (1) - there not 1\6 rythmic. i think smthing goes wrong 00:32:835 (1) - cuz here same. so change sv or shape
01:09:617 - if you use that big tick rate, you can always hs this ticks owo
00:32:835 (1) - im rly disagree with dat big sv gaps. (0.85 will be okay like in further)

Aikitoshi's normal:
01:10:400 (1) - recommend ti fix this spinner first of all. too shortm i think it's unrankable
00:08:574 (2) - sounds a bit weird
00:53:704 (5) - nc this?
Other looks okays, but im disagree with some rythmic moments. Like smthing got emphazed, smthing not. But overall rythmic structure good.

Easy:
01:10:400 (1) - same as i told in normal diff

Cool mapset. Best of luck~

Last edited by Shadren 2017-02-10T01:56:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

meii18

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meii18 2017-02-09T15:42:22+00:00

m4m from your q

[general]
i wonder why are there 2 offsets http://puu.sh/tVqka/5c0d9fd4be.jpg.
seems like soft-hitclap2 have a little delay so i fixed it for you http://puu.sh/tVrqD/7f5c8c595c.wav.
talking about tags, Tamul is TaMul and also add 'Minakami Yuki' to tags since it is Koyuki's previous name.
tbh, it shouldn't be space between 竹達 and 彩奈 proof.
idk why the widescreen support is enabled since there's no any SB nor video so consider disabling it.
imo slider tick rate 4 doesn't fit really well so maybe slider tick rate 1 or 2 would fit better if i'm not wrong.

[easy]
why hp 4? ;w; set the hp to 2 instead since it is the easiest diff of the set.
00:04:539 (4) - this slider plays somehow forced and uncomfortable especially for target players. i would map a wave slider or a curved slider instead so the player would play it more comfortable and not forced anymore.
00:37:539 (4) - missing whistle.
00:38:582 (5) - same as above ^.
00:41:191 (3) - shouldn't be a nc here since here's the new stanza?
00:44:321 - shouldn't be SC:4 instead of SC:2 just for the sake of consistency with the clap from 00:41:191 (3) -'s tail?
00:50:452 (2) - maybe missing whistle on repeat.
00:52:539 (4) - same as above ^.
01:01:539 (4) - missing whistle and it breaks the consistency with 00:59:452 (2) -.
01:08:321 (3) - missing clap on tail.

will continue later just got an annoying headache...

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2017-02-18T17:05:46+00:00

something i wanna mention:
1, i checked aimod that it shows the mp3 is higher than 192kbps, mby u need to change the mp3
2, i wanna add my old username "minakami yuki" to tags, well "[ ]" one is not needed lol

and the diff may be a bit higher than 5 stars, well i will nerf something if necessary or be pointed out by mods
here's my diff, sry for a bit late

SPOILER

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ArtistUnicode:中野 梓(CV.竹達 彩奈)
Creator:Left
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1. I fixed with no offset change
2. yeap
3. no problem~

thx!

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Shadren wrote:
Hi m4m

General:
Plz fix hitsound's delay soft-hitclap2.wav
and soft-hitfinish5.wav
Off wildscreen supp in insane hard normal easy diffs

My Angel Azusa:
00:00:487 (1,2,3) - dont think that beginning with line patterin when kicks a bit different is good idea (just imo) well
00:17:835 (6) - wanna suggest just nc this. 00:17:964 (1) - but this nc revoke 00:18:226 (3) - and this nc. will be more consistancy throw your previous emphazes 00:17:835 (6,1,2) - and this 3 notes sounds simmilar bad in look
00:25:791 (1,2) - cntrl+g mby? this will make more impact and spacing will be more intuativety while playing dats also nice, consider it
00:30:357 (2,3) - spacing looks a bit randomly 00:30:487 (3) - strong sound, 00:30:487 (3,4,1) - 00:30:226 (1,2,4) - triangle
00:40:922 (4) - nc? well
00:53:574 (4,1) - dont understand why this sapcing less than previously. you always emphaze this beat with hard jump. i didnt, maybe HS will be fixed later

Thats all what i can suggest for this. very cool rythmic very cool structured. nice diff

Insane:
00:00:487 (1,2,3) - as i told in "My Angel Azusa" diff
00:07:791 (1,2,3) - why not reverse slider as previously? xd dont have to, I don't want consistency here
00:13:009 (1,2) - i think better emphaze this moment with some spacing cuz 2 hard beats repeated yea
00:17:183 (1,2) - same ^
00:17:704 (3,4,5) - mby line jump pattern? wel
01:05:182 (1,2) - as i told ^
Easy:
01:10:400 (1) - same as i told in normal diff eh

Cool mapset. Best of luck~

thx~

Irohas

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Irohas 2017-02-22T15:43:24+00:00

hi, few suggestions

insane

00:07:922 - i wondered why didn't map the blue tick only here
cool diff

joker

00:34:270 (3) - that sv change seems a bit unexpected, i think that's not really necessary to have a big change in the sv imo
01:11:444 (5,6) - slider-sliderslide would be good imo ):
00:44:835 (1,2) - what about ctrl+g manually those? cause currently, how you did the flow, feels that 00:44:574 (5,1,2) - have same sounds and i think if you ctrl+g those it would increase the readability (woah explain is a such hard thing xd)
00:57:878 (1) - whistle is missing on its head
00:24:487 (1) - fail? xd

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easy seems fine to me, gl!

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Irohas wrote:
hi, few suggestions

insane
00:07:922 - i wondered why didn't map the blue tick only here no reason, fixed
cool diff XD thx
easy seems fine to me, gl!

thx for mod!

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2017-02-23T09:33:24+00:00

uwu

Easy

00:29:704 (4) - slidertail touching on hp bar with default skin, maybe changing the angle on 00:28:661 (3) - would help for keeping the flow while u can put 00:29:704 (4) - in lower way
00:48:357 (4,1) - bLaNKeT

Akitoshi's Normal

kys

joker's Hard

00:00:682 - 多分Overmap, 114514回繰り返したけどなにも聞こえなかったしInsane~Extraもここ置いてなかったし多分これでいけるんじゃ？ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7401255
00:24:487 (1) - と 00:32:835 (1) - 違ってるの私きになります
00:42:748 (4) - これだけ微妙にずれてるかも... x:36|y:124?

Insane

00:06:617 (1) - 00:07:791 (1) - sTaCk
00:13:009 (1,2) - ^
00:44:313 (1,2,3) - this linear flow is evil when u placed circles on previous part, i mean 00:44:052 (4,5) - since u mapping as like 230bpm here ;;

Koiyuki's Extra

00:55:661 (1) - idk what on the reverse 00:55:922 - is following, while the audible one is on 00:56:052 -

sahuang

nerf AR?
maaaybe add nc on 00:17:704 (4) - and 00:18:226 (3) - instead, so you can keep consistency with prev pattern 00:16:139 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and can NC as finish on 00:18:226 -
00:57:748 (1) - 00:58:791 (1) - idk about cymbals on slidertick, you can also put circle on 00:57:748 - and put 1/4 slider on 00:57:878 - just to hit those cymbals

clean map

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/505076 mod only Expert pls

and also i fixed sth

a

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Reillia

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Joined August 2014

Reillia 2017-02-24T01:07:29+00:00

모딩 퀄 최악이죵

[Aki]
00:55:661 (1,3) - stack missss

[joker-]
00:24:487 (1) - rip lenght
00:43:531 (2,3) - i can't figure out why change ds bigger than before. 00:43:531 (2) - this is 1/8 reverse slider so 00:43:531 (2,3) - increase ds is difficult for player.

[인센]
00:06:617 (1,1) - 스택?
00:07:791 (1,3) - 3을 1 머리에 스택하는거보단 꼬리에 스택하는게 더 좋을거같아욥 피니시 사운드가 있기때문에 좁은 ds는 살짝 어색하게 느껴졌

[막난]
00:23:313 (4,4) - 4가 3꼬리에 스택되면서 이 두개 스택이 좀 이상하게됬는데 고치시는게..?
00:35:444 (2) - 아래로 한두틱 내려서 00:34:922 (1,2) - 보기좋은 스택을 만드는건 어떨가요
00:39:096 (1,2) - ^

우엉

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Left 2017-02-24T01:21:17+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:

uwu

Easy

00:29:704 (4) - slidertail touching on hp bar with default skin, maybe changing the angle on 00:28:661 (3) - would help for keeping the flow while u can put 00:29:704 (4) - in lower way ok
00:48:357 (4,1) - bLaNKeT heY no intention here

Insane

00:06:617 (1) - 00:07:791 (1) - sTaCk yeap
00:13:009 (1,2) - ^same
00:44:313 (1,2,3) - this linear flow is evil when u placed circles on previous part, i mean 00:44:052 (4,5) - since u mapping as like 230bpm here ;;rip I'm pro at linear flow

sahuang

nerf AR? 9.6
maaaybe add nc on 00:17:704 (4) - and 00:18:226 (3) - instead, so you can keep consistency with prev pattern 00:16:139 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and can NC as finish on 00:18:226 - ok
00:57:748 (1) - 00:58:791 (1) - idk about cymbals on slidertick, you can also put circle on 00:57:748 - and put 1/4 slider on 00:57:878 - just to hit those cymbals I agree with this and thought about it. but don't wanna change pattern so will change HS later with Tamul

clean map

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/505076 mod only Expert pls

and also i fixed sth

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thx for mod and updated

[C u r i] wrote:
모딩 퀄 최악이죵

[인센]
00:06:617 (1,1) - 스택? ㅇㅋ
00:07:791 (1,3) - 3을 1 머리에 스택하는거보단 꼬리에 스택하는게 더 좋을거같아욥 피니시 사운드가 있기때문에 좁은 ds는 살짝 어색하게 느껴졌 그렇네요

[막난]
00:23:313 (4,4) - 4가 3꼬리에 스택되면서 이 두개 스택이 좀 이상하게됬는데 고치시는게..? 음 의미를 모르겠음
00:35:444 (2) - 아래로 한두틱 내려서 00:34:922 (1,2) - 보기좋은 스택을 만드는건 어떨가요 윽 언젠가 고칠게요
00:39:096 (1,2) - ^

우엉

모딩 ㄳㄳ

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-02-24T03:30:48+00:00

@Curi that's what I've fixed on my previous post xd thx

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Eir_DELETED 2017-02-24T22:44:57+00:00

[C u r i] wrote:
[joker-]
00:24:487 (1) - rip lenght
00:43:531 (2,3) - i can't figure out why change ds bigger than before. 00:43:531 (2) - this is 1/8 reverse slider so 00:43:531 (2,3) - increase ds is difficult for player.

Irohas wrote:
hi, few suggestions

joker
00:34:270 (3) - that sv change seems a bit unexpected, i think that's not really necessary to have a big change in the sv imo
01:11:444 (5,6) - slider-sliderslide would be good imo ):
00:44:835 (1,2) - what about ctrl+g manually those? cause currently, how you did the flow, feels that 00:44:574 (5,1,2) - have same sounds and i think if you ctrl+g those it would increase the readability (woah explain is a such hard thing xd)
00:57:878 (1) - whistle is missing on its head i dont need it on here
00:24:487 (1) - fail? xd

Shadren wrote:
Hi m4m
joker's Hard:
00:26:574 - this timeline unsnapped
00:24:487 (1) - there not 1\6 rythmic. i think smthing goes wrong 00:32:835 (1) - cuz here same. so change sv or shape
01:09:617 - if you use that big tick rate, you can always hs this ticks owo
00:32:835 (1) - im rly disagree with dat big sv gaps. (0.85 will be okay like in further)

Akitoshi wrote:
uwu
joker's Hard
00:00:682 - 多分Overmap, 114514回繰り返したけどなにも聞こえなかったしInsane~Extraもここ置いてなかったし多分これでいけるんじゃ？ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7401255
00:24:487 (1) - と 00:32:835 (1) - 違ってるの私きになりますこれどうなってたの？、こっちで結構いじってたからわかんねｗ
00:42:748 (4) - これだけ微妙にずれてるかも... x:36|y:124?

Almost all fixed!
@left
can you add "slider-sliderslide.wav" ? i agree with Irohas's suggestion about "01:11:444 (5,6) - slider-sliderslide would be good imo ):"

I will finish storyboard asap. sorry!

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Juiceys

530 posts

Joined June 2016

Juiceys 2017-02-25T01:43:47+00:00

Insane:
01:05:704 (1,2,3) - This is the same sound why change the pattern if it was the same on the previous noises?
00:13:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

Hard:
00:24:487 (1) - Even though you're mapping the instruments I feel like the vocals at this point are MUCH more prominent then the instruments and this slider should be mapped to the vocals instead
00:55:791 (1,2) - Why the sudden flow break? It the sound here isnt very apparent in the song

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Left 2017-02-25T07:25:52+00:00

@juiceys true, fixed

@joker- updated

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2017-02-25T21:10:41+00:00

hi

[general]

disable widescreen support on every diff
check aimod. Right now it's causing conflict with joker's diff

[my angel azusa]
00:14:313 (1,2) - stack better?
00:30:226 (1,2,3,4) - Idk but From all your mapping, this pattern was the one that most called my attention. Mainly because it doesn't have a good defined structure in terms of symmetry D: maybe you'd want to copy 00:30:226 (1) - and ctrl+h? https://puu.sh/ujDHB/9f6f52ab5e.jpg
00:50:313 (1) - shouldn't this be a NC? Would help reading too imo.
00:52:531 (1,2) - Since they are kick-slider you should take into account the slider leniency :d That means it'd be better (imo) to set the DS while thinking they're single circles. Therefore I think you should increase the distance a bit between them.
01:08:835 (1) - add clap? feels a bit empty + you did 01:04:661 (1) - here
01:02:313 (2,3,4) - Not a big issue imo but... since you are doing 00:10:139 (1,2,3) -, 00:14:313 (1,2,3) - & 01:06:487 (1,2,3) - all these curved slider, the linear slider feels a bit inconsistent imo. Try to do both pattern at the end similar?

[koiyuki]
00:01:530 (1,3,1,3) - Here you use good choice of 1/4 imo since it fits good with the sound it supports, but then you suddenly got to circles and 1/2 00:05:704 (1,1,1) - + leaving some empty places which don't really play good imo since they're skipping sounds you mapped before. Personally I'd go with the first pattern you did in this section. (00:01:531 - to 00:05:704 - )
00:25:531 (1) - I don't really think this nc is necessary since 00:24:487 (1,2,1) - all of these are following same rhythm + same DS. Also you didn't add nc 00:33:878 (3) - here.
01:06:226 (1) - nc? you did for previous aswell

[insane]
looks good

[joker's]
00:34:139 (2,3) - this could play/follow music a bit better imo. Since you are using some 1/8 slider reverse on the diff which fits fine imo, you could try to rearrange the rhythm of this into something like this? https://puu.sh/ujHfS/74bedcc7aa.jpg With that you'll also help by making this 00:34:400 - beat clickable. Try it out!
00:42:748 (4,5,1) - maybe reduce ds a bit? so it's similar as 00:43:531 (2,3) - etc

Okay that's all from me. Sorry if it doesn't help for being too short :d

Idk if you remember but I asked for a m4m on your Q but I never modded first :s Take this as a free NM!

GL o/

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-02-25T21:33:59+00:00

hi!

My Angel Azusa
00:09:878 (1,1) - you can safely remove the nc here, not really needed

00:30:487 (3,4) - spacing is pretty huge here compared to your previous jumps, 00:30:617 (4) - especially this

00:44:965 (1,1,1) - nc spam not needed here
nice diff
[]
Koiyuki
00:01:269 (3,4) - this can be a 1/4 slider tbh, like 00:01:400 (4) - hasn't got such an impact compared to 00:01:139 (2) - this

00:42:878 (2,3) - please reduce the spacing between those two, otherwise poeple will 00:43:270 (1,2) - missread that rythmn tbh

00:55:661 (1) - what are you even trying to follow here ? you skip vocals and drums nice! xd

01:11:444 (4) - nc ?
[]
Insane
01:06:226 (1,2) - this is pretty missreading when you have pattern like 01:04:139 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this just before.. consider unstacking and using large spacing instead. Like you did 01:10:400 (3,1) - here.
[]
joker
01:11:444 (5) - nc?
really cool hard!
[]
normal and easy are ok

gl!

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Left 2017-02-26T04:35:01+00:00

@Sotarks all fixed thx for mod~

iYiyo wrote:
hi

[notice][list]
[general]
[*]disable widescreen support on every diffwill add SB

[my angel azusa]
[*]00:14:313 (1,2) - stack better? YEAH
[*]00:30:226 (1,2,3,4) - Idk but From all your mapping, this pattern was the one that most called my attention. Mainly because it doesn't have a good defined structure in terms of symmetry D: maybe you'd want to copy 00:30:226 (1) - and ctrl+h? https://puu.sh/ujDHB/9f6f52ab5e.jpg
[*]00:50:313 (1) - shouldn't this be a NC? Would help reading too imo. pattern NC
[*]00:52:531 (1,2) - Since they are kick-slider you should take into account the slider leniency :d That means it'd be better (imo) to set the DS while thinking they're single circles. Therefore I think you should increase the distance a bit between them. yeah i did. but antijump pattern
[*]01:08:835 (1) - add clap? feels a bit empty + you did 01:04:661 (1) - here HS = Tamul
[*]01:02:313 (2,3,4) - Not a big issue imo but... since you are doing 00:10:139 (1,2,3) -, 00:14:313 (1,2,3) - & 01:06:487 (1,2,3) - all these curved slider, the linear slider feels a bit inconsistent imo. Try to do both pattern at the end similar? well no consistency needed in there
[insane]
looks good
Okay that's all from me. Sorry if it doesn't help for being too short :d

Idk if you remember but I asked for a m4m on your Q but I never modded first :s Take this as a free NM!

GL o/

thx for mod!

Leaf

100 posts

Joined February 2012

Leaf 2017-02-26T05:29:31+00:00

from ingame

[Koiyuki's Extra]
00:26:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - there is confusion when playing 00:26:835 (2) - put it somewhere else
00:59:444 (2,3,4,5,1) - i like this pattern

00:52:531 (1) - I think this position is not good

[sahuang]
00:47:965 (3,4,5) - 플레이할때 삘이 좀 이상했음 왓다갔다 하는 노트 추천

ㅎㅇ

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2017-02-26T07:27:12+00:00

Akitoshi

Akitoshi wrote:
Koiyuki's Extra
00:55:661 (1) - idk what on the reverse 00:55:922 - is following, while the audible one is on 00:56:052 - fixed

iYiyo

iYiyo wrote:
hi
[koiyuki]
00:01:530 (1,3,1,3) - Here you use good choice of 1/4 imo since it fits good with the sound it supports, but then you suddenly got to circles and 1/2 00:05:704 (1,1,1) - + leaving some empty places which don't really play good imo since they're skipping sounds you mapped before. Personally I'd go with the first pattern you did in this section. (00:01:531 - to 00:05:704 - ) well i just like to use different patterns every part
00:25:531 (1) - I don't really think this nc is necessary since 00:24:487 (1,2,1) - all of these are following same rhythm + same DS. Also you didn't add nc 00:33:878 (3) - here. fixed
01:06:226 (1) - nc? you did for previous aswell ok

Sotarks

Sotarks wrote:
hi!
Koiyuki
00:01:269 (3,4) - this can be a 1/4 slider tbh, like 00:01:400 (4) - hasn't got such an impact compared to 00:01:139 (2) - this i'd like to keep

00:42:878 (2,3) - please reduce the spacing between those two, otherwise poeple will 00:43:270 (1,2) - missread that rythmn tbh lol i dont think so

00:55:661 (1) - what are you even trying to follow here ? you skip vocals and drums nice! xd xd fixed

01:11:444 (4) - nc ? no

Leaf

Leaf wrote:
from ingame

[Koiyuki's Extra]
00:26:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - there is confusion when playing 00:26:835 (2) - put it somewhere else i think guys can play this diff wont be confused lol, in fact it's just a stack
00:59:444 (2,3,4,5,1) - i like this pattern
00:52:531 (1) - I think this position is not good en so?

thanks for modding

asdfg

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Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Left 2017-02-26T07:39:11+00:00

Leaf wrote:
from ingame

[sahuang]
00:47:965 (3,4,5) - 플레이할때 삘이 좀 이상했음 왓다갔다 하는 노트 추천
ㅎㅇ
노래랑 맞아서 킵하는 부분

모딩 ㄳㄳ!

Koiyuki Updated

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2017-02-26T20:52:44+00:00

2 weeks late lol also rip my headphones
also slider track override is not consistent through the diffs.

[general]
unused hitsound: soft-sliderslide.wav
you can enable epilepsy warning since the sb contains few strobes.

[sb]
unused files (probably):
SB\button\0069.png
SB\button\006b.png
SB\button\0070.png
SB\button\0073.png
SB\lyrics\_000.png
SB\lyrics\_001.png
SB\lyrics\_002.png
SB\lyrics\_003.png
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[akitoshi's normal]
00:10:922 (3) - blanket.
00:53:704 (5) - nc for better readability and remove the nc from 00:54:226 (1) - .
nice diff

[joker-'s hard]
00:43:531 (2) - would prefer to use just a regular 1/4 offbeat slider since that one with repeat doesn't fit pretty well imo.
00:45:878 (2) - tbh, having this slider as an 1/4 slider and adding a note on 00:46:139 - would work with the instruments much better than before tbh.
00:46:661 (4) - it kinda disturbs me to see that 1/4 tick which is the strongest is not clickable. you can replace this 1/4 offbeat slider with two notes instead in order to make that stronger 1/4 tick clickable.
00:47:183 (6,1) - this rhythm sounds pretty weird imo. moreover, that 1/4 tick is pretty stronger and it needs more emphasis and (6)'s tail doesn't not evem give enough emphasis. try this rhythm for instance http://puu.sh/ukPIP/6ef4391d3f.jpg. (1) is supposed to start from that 1/4 tick to make the stronger vocal more noticeable and (6)- can be only a note so this rhythm would work pretty well imo.
00:47:965 (2) - having a rhythm like this would work pretty well because having (4)'s tail on that stronger 1/4 tick you will make the vocals more noticeable imo. http://puu.sh/ukQDi/8c6a0ec72d.jpg
00:50:444 (3,4,5) - to make the both vocal and instruments more noticeable, doing a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/ukR9C/56de40b712.jpg would work much better because you'll give more emphasis to that 1/4 tick which is pretty stronger.

pretty nice diff but the rhythms in kiais needs to be improved tbh.

[insane]
00:05:183 (3,4) - idk why the spacing of this pattern is more higher in comparison with 00:03:096 (3,4) -. the snares are the same at the both patterns: they're not really stronger so consider lowering a bit the spacing here.
00:23:965 (3,4) - tbh, this doesn't flow pretty well if you see how the cursor's movement looks a bit weird. just ctrl+g (4) and then move it to 80|292 for instance to get a better flow but don't forget to fix the spacing between 00:24:226 (4) - and 00:24:487 (1) - afterwards!
00:45:357 (1,2) - i think this is the only 1/4 stack in this whole diff if i'm not wrong so maybe unstack (2) from (1)'s tail just to avoid any confuse?

00:46:270 - that 1/4 tick is pretty louder and the vocal tho which makes me kinda sad to not see it clickable which would have given more emphasis. just move the end of 00:46:009 (4) - to 00:46:139 - and then put on that 1/4 tick an note to make that tick clickable and giving more emphasis to the vocal.
00:46:661 (2,3) - the spacing between 00:46:400 (1) - and 00:46:661 (2) - is kinda equal but between these sliders idk why the spacing became more and more bigger. maybe make the spacing lower as you did for 00:46:400 (1) - and 00:46:661 (2) -? because (3)- makes part of 00:46:400 (1) - and 00:46:661 (2) - pattern tbh.
00:47:444 (1) - the nc shouldn't be here because i don't see any new stanza here tbh. it should be on 00:47:313 (5) - instead.
00:50:444 (1) - if you listen carefully the vocals you'll need two 1/4 sliders instead of a 2/4 offbeat slider which slightly ignores the vocals and the instruments tho. having a rhythm like this https://puu.sh/ul5ML/30e2a24e24.jpg would work pretty well with both the instruments and vocal and it won't ignore the vocal anymore.
00:58:791 (1,2) - better get rid of this 1/2 stack as you did for 01:00:878 (1,2) - .
01:03:617 (3,4) - pretty weird to see that you used big spacing where the snares are not stronger enough. i would suggest to make the spacing more lower since here's stronger to give more emphasis and more build-up effect.

[koiyuki's extra]
00:00:617 (2,3,4,5) - on the triplets, the drums are more dominant than the drum from 00:00:617 (2) - which is not kinda pretty louder tbh so that's why having the spacing between (2) and the triplets more lower than (1) and (2) so consider making the jumps between the triplets and (2)- bigger in order to give more emphasis to the dominant drums.
00:02:444 (3,1) - suggest to swap the ncs here since the new stanza is on 00:02:444 (3) -.
00:04:531 (3) - same^
00:41:183 (1,2,1,2) - the instruments are not really stronger here so better avoid doing screen jumping which does not even fit the music's pace here. same goes for 00:42:748 (1,2,3,4) -.
00:52:531 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - i know that you wanted to make this pattern gimmicky but don't you think it could confuse the player? it took me few times to get used with this pattern to be honest plus because of low stack leniency it could trick some players because of its readability so better find another way to make a pattern which should be more readable imo.

[my angel azusa]

Ranking Criteria wrote:
A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.

your diff's name is related to sahuang's new username so consider changing it to 'Joy' for instance.
can't find anything here. a pretty funny diff to play tbh.

that's all for now. a good map nothing else to say but pay more attention on rhythm in higher diffs.
good luck!
edit: no kudosu please.

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2017-02-27T17:31:22+00:00

~~placeholder~~

edit - 2/28 mod

[Easy]

Lower SV and higher DS might have been better but its too late now so w/e

slider tick rate 2? 4 seems very excessive

00:24:487 (1) - remove NC? you switched from NC every 2 measure to 1 measure here
00:32:835 (1) - same here, maybe its ok if you did it for this to stand out

00:45:357 (1,2) - this change to 3/4 gap instead of 1/1 gap might be confusing

[Akitoshi]

nice

[joker]

00:00:747 (3) - drum is strong on all 3 beats, so use clap for 00:00:813 - too?
00:11:835 (8,1) - dont like the flow here, seems tough for a hard. if you dont change at least fix blanket
00:29:835 (5,6,7) - looks nicer if the gap between 5 and 6 is the same for the gap between 6 and 7
00:41:183 (1) - maybe use 1.0 SV since its not as intense as 00:43:270 (1) - since its still part of the build-up
00:44:835 (1,2) - .9SV? for contrast with the following faster section
00:47:313 - make clickable for vocal? you can make 00:46:922 (5) - have a reverse and add a circle on 00:47:313 -
00:55:270 (7,8) - ^

nice hard!

[Insane]

00:01:531 (1) is the same as 00:03:617 (1) - in the music, so why aren't they hitsounded the same?
00:11:965 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - current patterning makes it so that the first 3 sliders are part of one pattern, and the 4th slider isn't really part of that group, would make more sense if the first two sliders were one pattern and the last two sliders were a different pattern. Same for when this happens at the end of the map
00:34:661 (5) - could be 2 circles for the 2 claps? wont be too hard or anything
00:46:009 (4) - better if 00:46:270 - is clickable due to the strong vocal imo. you can shorten 00:46:009 (4) - to be a 1/2 slider and add a circle.
00:52:531 (1,2) - why did you silence the tails? kinda weird
00:59:835 - Similar to above, should be clickable because of the vocal

[Koiyuki]

00:01:008 (1,2) - are much more intense than 00:01:269 (3,4), so its better if you space them out to represent that
00:01:530 (1) - why does this have 2 claps but 00:03:617 (1) - not?
00:13:400 (3,4) - kinda weird to me, 00:13:531 - should be clickable right? its certainly stronger than 00:13:400 - the head of the slider.
00:34:922 (1,1,1) - cool pattern, but make sure everything stacks perfectly
00:49:270 (2,3,1) - flows a bit off, i think rotate 00:49:531 (1) - clockwise a little
00:55:791 (1) - missing hitsound on 00:56:313 - ?
01:01:791 (1,2) - ctrl+g these makes for better flow imo.
01:05:574 (3,4) - same as before, not a fan of this because 01:05:704 - should be clickable over 01:05:574 -

[My angel]

00:01:530 (1) - i said on the other diffs too, why does this have a hitsound but not the other ones (like 00:03:617 (1) - )
00:14:052 (4) - NC should be here? then remove NC on 00:14:313 (1) -
00:18:226 (6) - should have the NC
00:34:270 (3,4,5,6,7) - dont really like this, 00:34:661 (6,7) - have the most intensity of all of these but its all mapped with the same spacing and angle, doesnt really fit
00:56:444 (2,1) - blanket
00:57:748 (1) - super disorienting to have the finish hit-sound in the middle of the slider, better if you make it clickable

nice diff

Gl!!

Last edited by Izzywing 2017-02-28T18:55:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2017-02-27T19:36:34+00:00

hi~
hitsound mod req from Left via in-game

i check mainly top diff. when you take my opinion, apply them on lower diffs too.
the opinions which isn't written reasons, mostly it means "same way as the song".

[Azusa]

00:34:139 (1,2,3) - set S:C2 clap
00:52:531 - this is just my preference tho, i wanna add clap here. it'd be better to emphasize each heads of 00:52:531 (1,2) - i think.
00:53:313 (2,3,4) - you need clap on these listening to the song.
01:01:139 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - add clap on all. it'll also work as emphasis of these jumps.
01:09:357 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this is the correct way for the song. try it.
1. 01:09:357 (1) - S:C4 whistle
2. 01:09:487 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - S:C2 claps on all
3. 01:09:878 (1) - also add whistle

---------------------

also, some attentions on other diffs.

make silenced soft-sliderslide6 and 7.
00:52:661 - add whistle on the diffs which uses slider snapped here.
(joker's) 00:00:813 - is this missing clap intentional?
(Koiyuki's) 00:55:791 (1) - need hitsound

--------------------

that's it
i like the atmosphere of this hitsounding, gj

gl o/~

Eir_DELETED

Eir_DELETED 2017-02-28T11:55:01+00:00

Juiceys wrote:
Hard:
00:24:487 (1) - Even though you're mapping the instruments I feel like the vocals at this point are MUCH more prominent then the instruments and this slider should be mapped to the vocals instead
00:55:791 (1,2) - Why the sudden flow break? It the sound here isnt very apparent in the song cuz of inserted 1/1 break. just a my preference

iYiyo wrote:
hi

[joker's]
00:34:139 (2,3) - this could play/follow music a bit better imo. Since you are using some 1/8 slider reverse on the diff which fits fine imo, you could try to rearrange the rhythm of this into something like this? https://puu.sh/ujHfS/74bedcc7aa.jpg With that you'll also help by making this 00:34:400 - beat clickable. Try it out! i wanna follow melody
00:42:748 (4,5,1) - maybe reduce ds a bit? so it's similar as 00:43:531 (2,3) - etc
GL o/

Sotarks wrote:
hi!
joker
01:11:444 (5) - nc? hmm... if someone point out it, I'll apply
really cool hard! thanks :3

gl!

ByBy wrote:
2 weeks late lol also rip my headphones
also slider track override is not consistent through the diffs.

[general]
unused hitsound: soft-sliderslide.wav really? used my diff on last part
you can enable epilepsy warning since the sb contains few strobes.

[sb]
unused files (probably):
SB\button\0069.png
SB\button\006b.png
SB\button\0070.png
SB\button\0073.png
SB\lyrics\_000.png
SB\lyrics\_001.png
SB\lyrics\_002.png
SB\lyrics\_003.png
SB\lyrics\_004.png
SB\lyrics\_005.png
SB\lyrics\_006.png
SB\lyrics\_007.png
SB\lyrics\_008.png
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SB\lyrics\_00b.png
SB\lyrics\_00c.png
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SB\lyrics\glow\_00b.png
SB\lyrics\glow\_00c.png
SB\lyrics\glow\_00d.png
SB\lyrics\glow\_00e.png All removed

[joker-'s hard]
00:43:531 (2) - would prefer to use just a regular 1/4 offbeat slider since that one with repeat doesn't fit pretty well imo.
00:45:878 (2) - tbh, having this slider as an 1/4 slider and adding a note on 00:46:139 - would work with the instruments much better than before tbh.
00:46:661 (4) - it kinda disturbs me to see that 1/4 tick which is the strongest is not clickable. you can replace this 1/4 offbeat slider with two notes instead in order to make that stronger 1/4 tick clickable.
00:47:183 (6,1) - this rhythm sounds pretty weird imo. moreover, that 1/4 tick is pretty stronger and it needs more emphasis and (6)'s tail doesn't not evem give enough emphasis. try this rhythm for instance http://puu.sh/ukPIP/6ef4391d3f.jpg. (1) is supposed to start from that 1/4 tick to make the stronger vocal more noticeable and (6)- can be only a note so this rhythm would work pretty well imo.
00:47:965 (2) - having a rhythm like this would work pretty well because having (4)'s tail on that stronger 1/4 tick you will make the vocals more noticeable imo. http://puu.sh/ukQDi/8c6a0ec72d.jpg
00:50:444 (3,4,5) - to make the both vocal and instruments more noticeable, doing a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/ukR9C/56de40b712.jpg would work much better because you'll give more emphasis to that 1/4 tick which is pretty stronger. i'd like to pick up strong drum sound on upbeat

thzz wrote:
(joker's) 00:00:813 - is this missing clap intentional? ですね、入れました

no reply means applied
thanks all guys!

https://puu.sh/unAxe/4ecb86d40a.zip
added some effect on sb

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

Left 2017-02-28T13:51:58+00:00

O cant update until 3/4 ;w;

Down

Featured Artist

643 posts

Joined July 2014

Down 2017-03-01T14:21:48+00:00

와.. 스토리보드보고 아즈사 미연시 하는줄 알았습니다..... 역시베타님

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-03-02T03:54:15+00:00

fixed with ByBy's mod, thanks

a

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