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Yousei Teikoku - Astral Dogma

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Vanilla
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Vanilla
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on czwartek, 18 maja 2017 at 18:53:06

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Astral Dogma
Source: PAX VESANIA
Tags: ghotic lolita metal japanese jmetal marathon
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6567kb
Play Time: 05:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Blooming World (5,7 stars, 1559 notes)
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Astral Dogma
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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(not hitsounded)

for grave i think

last update - 18/05/2017
Last edited by Vanilla , edited 70 times in total.
Shocola
287 posts
Joined July 2015
Shocola
i cant denied it, the jump is feels good

2lazy2mod

00:09:476 (1,2) - try making it look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6124037
00:12:143 (1,2) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6124045
00:14:809 (1,2) - blanket
00:27:893 (1) - dafuq ?
01:54:809 (2) - ^
01:46:476 (2,3,4) - blanket each other
00:37:476 (1,2,3,4) - instead of making it like this try copy past it using "ctrl + c" and than "ctrl + shift + r" and rotate it 90
00:48:809 (6,7) - ^ copy it and do a 360 rotate
01:37:976 (3,4,5,6) - flow ?
01:40:309 (1,2) - ^ better make this a normal slider
01:55:643 - 01:56:309 - there can still be some note here
01:58:476 (1,2) - overlaps
02:47:976 - note ?
01:24:643 (3,5) - put the (5) inside (3)

kds pls
-Liddell
75 posts
Joined May 2015
-Liddell
random mod from #modreqs
i like yousei teikoku songs so i tried to mod this one :)

SPOILER
00:34:809 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I feel like this part doesn't seem consistent with the following parts of the intro. the song's intro is consistent all throughout but this part's mapping does not feel part of your following sliders.

01:19:476 (5,6,7) - mapped wrong. try this one


01:35:476 (2,3) - this one should be a triple (that bass)
01:36:809 (4,5) - same here. actually it's all throughout the map :)
01:38:143 (4,5) - same. it goes on and on haha. just listen to it and map those parts with a triple so that it feels better.
01:41:643 (1,2,3) - you did it here correctly~

02:05:476 - stream should start here

yo wtf the chorus is lit man :D

02:14:143 (8) - ctrl+g (flow)
02:14:309 (9) - ctrl+g (flow)

02:36:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - it looks like you're a saten fan hahaha

02:41:809 (9,1,2) - mapped wrong? try this instead


02:52:143 - there should be a note here

03:31:809 (8,9) - ctrl+g (flow)

03:33:393 - i feel like stream should end here and 03:33:476 (9,10,11) should be a slider instead

03:49:964 (1) - you went too early for this slider. reduce the repeating length and move it at white tick 03:50:131 and put a note at 03:49:964 so that it does not feel incomplete

03:51:797 (5,6,1,2) - i have a better idea for this one. you want to emphasize the ASTO-RAL since it's a powerful line. try this one


04:02:131 (3,4) - these circles feel weird to be placed at the side since the pattern you have plays at the middle. continue your shape pattern on the middle instead :)

04:08:131 (7) - try removing this since you're mapping the vocal line in this part and there's no vocals here
04:12:131 (5) - same

04:30:464 (4) - rotate 90 degrees cw for pattern and flow

04:45:131 (8,9) - ctrl+g (floooow)

05:03:297 (1) - this one feels early again. move to white tick 05:03:464 and add note instead at 05:03:297

05:27:547 (6) - yo don't put claps on blue ticks since it sound so wrong. :(
05:28:047 (2) - same
05:28:714 (2) - same
05:29:547 (2,4) - same
05:30:214 (2) - same
05:31:214 (4) - same :(


good luck
-NeBu-
435 posts
Joined March 2014
-NeBu-
cześć, m4m:

00:08:809 (8) - ten slider taki troche chujowy, zakręć go bardziej bo idzie do nikąd
00:09:476 (1,2) - te dwa troche też brzydkie, nadaj troche okrągłości (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6449376)
00:12:143 (1,2) - ^ ale to up dla Ciebie
00:13:476 (3,4,5,6,7) - niepotrzebny overlap
00:14:059 (7) - za tą 7 od białej kreski do 00:14:476 (8) - wstawiłbym slidera
00:16:309 (2) - ten ala trójkąt raczej w drugą stronę
00:17:476 (1) - w drugą stronę zrób wygląd tego slidera i zrób mały dystans tej dwójki 00:17:976 (2,3) - od niego
00:23:309 (2,3,4) - trochę takie ctrl+c ctrl+v z overlapem 00:23:309 (2,4) - zrób tak, że 00:23:309 (2) - wychodzi od slidera w górę, 3 zostaw i ctrl+g na 00:24:643 (4) - i daj jego początek na koniec 00:23:309 (2) - (nie mówiąc, że trochę rotacja tych sliderów też nie pasuje, ale to napraw na swój sposób)
00:36:143 (5) - NC
00:40:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ten part moim zdaniem nie trzyma się niczego, tylko dziwny jęk w tle, zrób przynajmniej ten dystans o wiele mniejszy między kółkami.
01:02:643 (8) - overlap juz taki niepotrzebny troche
01:03:143 (2) - ^
01:10:143 (6,7) - ctrl+g ten rytm, bo następny slider jeszcze jako tako pasuje
01:12:143 (1) - overlap
01:12:643 (3) - blanket do ^
01:16:143 (7) - NC
01:20:143 (9) - chyba tu czegos zapomniałeś (ogólnie aż do 01:29:476 (1) - tego momentu moim zdaniem nie powinno być tych przerw)
01:23:809 (7,8,9) - po prostu nie, jak juz to normalny triple
01:31:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nadaj 01:31:643 (2) - jakiejś rotacji w prawo/lewo, 01:32:143 (5) - temu to samo i 01:31:809 (3) - lekko przenieś w dół zza tej 1
01:53:476 (6) - ten slider troche taki niedojebany xD
01:54:809 (2) - ^
02:30:809 (1,2,3,4) - kopnięty ten kwadrat trochę
02:32:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ogolnie to rytm do dupy, ten triple powinien się zacząć na 02:32:809 (6) -
02:34:476 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:42:809 (1) - ...
02:48:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - te dwa kwadraty też chyba na oko robione aniżeli ctrl+shift+d
02:49:476 (9) - NC
03:16:143 (3) - za krotki
03:17:309 (4) - a ten znow niedojebany
04:02:797 (7) - NC
04:03:797 (13) - ^
04:56:131 (10) - ^

ogólnie to mega duzo do zmiany tutaj jest, ale trochę za dużo, więc raczej zostawiłbym to i za jakiś czas zremapował ~~
gl!
iaeqb
9 posts
Joined July 2014
iaeqb
gitara
00:14:809 (1) - slider tb ucieka z siatki wez go pierdolnij w prawo troche ok
00:25:143 (7) - ^
00:27:976 (4) - ty tak kurwa serio xDDDDDDDD
00:39:476 (2) - slider za nisko
01:00:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - daj tu nowe kombo na ten strim juz a jak chcesz tak zostawic to wez ten slider przesunij troche bardziej w prawo (ale nie tak zeby byl bezposrednio pod strumyczkiem)
01:05:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wyprostuj ten strim troche, taki koslawy tu nie pasuje imo
01:10:893 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - tutaj tez to jakos tak nienaturalnie skreca
01:16:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - tu jest zajebiscie doszlem sb
01:29:976 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - wiekszy spacing miedzy tymi 1 2 1 2 , zeby trzeba bylo faktycznie tak jakby wiesz "szarpnac" penem
01:32:643 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
01:44:309 (1,2) - zrob troszke szybsze te slidery, w sensie spoko sa takie spowolnione ale sa troche za bardzo
01:55:309 (1,2,3,4) - zbyt proste to jest, jak juz sie trzymasz takiej zasady ze lekko skrecaja te kolka w danym segmencie (np tu 01:53:809 (1,2,3,4) - )
to juz sie tego trzymaj
02:03:976 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ten slider sie powinien konczyc troche blizej poczatku tego strimka tez imo
02:08:309 (5,6,7) - za duza przerwa na te kolko, na hr bedzie wkurwiac
02:20:143 (1,4,6,8,1,2) - no troche sie machnales z tymi sliderami xD
02:45:476 (1,2) - o kurwa xDDDDDDD usun to
03:22:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - po chuj te kolka tak na koniec zestackowales? zrob rownomiernie do konca
03:58:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - stoisz w miejscu praktycznie z tymi "jumpami" gosciu, mamy 2k17 kurwa nowa meta wzbogac je jakos kulturowo i wgl (ja np bym co kazde *durururururu* zwiekszyl spacing)
04:47:476 (5,6,7) - za szybkie sa te slidery, agrywalne na sightread
04:58:143 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ZA MALY SPACING ZNOWU KURWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
05:04:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - na odwrot bym zrobil ten stream, najpierw stoi prawie w miejscu a potem sb rozwija ok
05:14:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - oplulem sie kurwa sokiem dzieki xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
05:14:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - fajnie ze taki spaced i wgl wowowowo rozwijanie trudnosci mapy wraz z tym jak daleko jestes, ale ten triple to jest jakas porazka genetyczna no kurwa blagam cie gosciu xDDDDDD, przedluz go po prostu (ps te ostatanie strimy juz po tym sa fajne kc)
polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
polka
wanna m4m with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/550486

You could mod any 4 diffs including hobbe's advanced plz
Vanilla
Topic Starter
Vanilla

PolkaMocha wrote:

wanna m4m with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/550486

You could mod any 4 diffs including hobbe's advanced plz

sorry but i just started trying to mod, and i really dont know how to mod slow and easy songs, :<
polka
1,125 posts
Joined March 2014
polka

- Vanilla - wrote:

PolkaMocha wrote:

wanna m4m with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/550486

You could mod any 4 diffs including hobbe's advanced plz

sorry but i just started trying to mod, and i really dont know how to mod slow and easy songs, :<
Its cool! Thanks anyway
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