1. Cup (1.18 stars, 146 notes)
2. Easy (1.49 stars, 130 notes)
3. Expert (5.01 stars, 399 notes)
4. Hard (3.07 stars, 270 notes)
5. Insane (3.95 stars, 319 notes)
6. Normal (2.09 stars, 177 notes)
7. Platter (2.82 stars, 256 notes)
8. Salad (1.86 stars, 188 notes)

1. As far as I know osu! doesn't support .mp4 files or in case that this has been changed in the previous updates, take in mind that some users doesn't use it and they're in the fallback version, so I'd highly suggest you to change it by an .avi file instead.
2. What do you think about to swap the BGs per difficulties to get a image variation? that could be great in my opinion.
3. Your Preview Time is inconsistent in all difficulties, take a look at them and try to be consistent with the place where you've settled it.
4. The Video file has audio and is not completely muted which causes that the folder weight increases more than it should be.
5. Try to be more careful the next time that you pick up custom hitsounds, there's like 5ms as delay in some of them, I'd like you to get new ones or otherwise fixing the currently ones.
6. The end time in all difficulties are different each other, in cases such as GDs is perfectly fine but since you've mapped all of them it doesn't apply in this case.

1. 00:47:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The whole section flows well, but the Combo pattern is techincally so much aside your other NC patterns, so... How about to use NCs in 00:47:418 (3,5,7,9) - I'm pretty sure that you'll like the view result, since it makes the pattern feels more comfortable for the eyes, and also it fit with the music which is also good.
   
   I've had fun playing this, this was really enjoyable difficulty.

1. 00:03:993 (3,4) - Just be more careful when you use jumps like this, overall the difficulty itself is really well done, but sometimes in such parts like this one, what I'm mean is that emphasis is overdone due that there's nothing stronger or different to highlight in the mapping.
   So yeah, basically I'd like suggest you to recheck it by yourself and fix them because there are many to point out in here.

• Great.

1. 00:05:982 (4,5,6,7,1) - The only thing that I've found in this difficulty is the 1/2 stacks in the notes, somehow it bring a high level of inconsistencies, and therefore makes the patterns look without some structure at all, in addition it makes look them less aesthetic than the they are actually.

1. 00:40:458 (3,4,1) - This pattern looks really great is it, but there's something that bother me a little bit ,and that could be considered an issue, the pattern itself (being specific) the slider end makes it look like the tail is the start of the slider when it's not the start of it, I'm pretty sure that it probably will be confusing for newbies, could you consider to change it by something else?
   
   Well done.

• This difficulty is basically a joke for me, I'd like to suggest you remove it because it doesn't even has good settings or patterns in nowhere.

xXRosalineXx wrote:

i tried but it was hard for me to find problems cause its so good

Doing till hard since i don't know how to (correctly) map anything or play anything higher

Easy

Personal opinion but this is a really fast sv for an easy.

00:19:242 (3,4) - the gap is a little bit off but like a teensy tiny bit fixed
00:21:894 (3,4,1) - i don't like the way 3 blankets 1 the end of 3 is a bit off (this is probably me though) yea its a bit off, fixed xD
00:48:082 (2) - blankets a bit flat here fixed
00:59:684 (4) - what is this, is this on purpose? yes its ok purpose. a little bit variation here is nice

its so hard to mod a map that's actually good

Normal

00:35:651 - i think there could be a circle here if you place it properly
00:38:303 - same with here ^^ both of them should be ok here imo, bcoz throughout this part, the red ticks is full of sounds. so if i didnt map the other parts, its best that i dont map this part too

this diff was too guud crap i dunno what to do

Hard

00:08:303 (4) - i think this could've been less diagonallee i'll keep this for now, it looks fine to me
00:44:105 (4) - why do you keep having these barely overlaps i dunno whether you wanted them there or not yes i wanted them, they looks cool xD
01:01:672 (2,3) - the curve on 3 doesn't match with 2 well you should curve 2 as well yea nice idea, fixed
01:12:114 - it would also be appropriate to have a circle here if you wanted i better leave it as it is, bcoz i didnt have circle on other parts of the song which have the same rhythm

im sorry i tried

-Jordan- wrote:

M4M from your mod queue

Go through all your difficulties and Resnap all notes, a lot are slightly off. (Also move the uninherited timing points they are all of slightly also. If you don't when you resnap, some objects will not be in the intended timing section and have the wrong volumes and SV.)i've fix this when another modder tell me XD thanks anyway

Is the extra timing point at the very beginning of the map really necessary? yea, i heard theres a slight different snapping at 00:02:005 -

[Easy]

00:00:698 (1,2) - Use different slider shapes here for the lead in, compared to the rest of your map? would like to keep this for now, it's ok imo


00:19:242 (3) - Lessen the curve on these so instead of it following the next sliders head, it follows the curve of the next slider as a whole, like this. i think more curve here will be better for the transitioning to the next slider


00:48:745 (3) - Why is this part of its own combo? Remove the NC possibly. fixed

00:59:684 (4) - You can make this more curved. The slight curve doesn't look nice imo. you're right, fixed!


Double check your hitsounding at the end of the map starting from the second half of the second Kiai. I believe you forgot to place slider whistles for the whole ending. (All diffs) fixed

01:27:530 (1) - Add whistle on slider head and slider end to compliment finish? (All diffs)sure do

[Normal]

00:07:143 (7) - I don't think you need to add these circles in the Kiai sections, it seems overdone with the 2 doubles that close to each other, with nothing in the music to really justify it, unlike here 00:31:010 (7,1) - . remove circle on all of those kiai parts which have same rhythm

00:59:021 (1) - NC? alright

00:59:684 (6) - More curve also? i think its curve enough already xD

Sorry that's all I can find your mapping is on point!

[Hard]

00:01:360 (3,4) - This is really confusing, I think that you should shorten 00:01:692 (4) - by 1 repeat. should be ok here bcoz 00:02:005 (1) - has low spacing to indicate the 1/4 beat there.

00:19:242 (1) - Stack on 00:18:414 (2) - . fixed

00:39:795 (3,4,1) - Were these intended to be slightly off? they seems fine to me though ><

00:48:413 (5,1) - Switch NC and bring them closer. 00:48:745 (1) - NC on (1) is better imo, since the downbeat is at there. and the jump was to emphasize the strong beats there

00:57:032 (3) - 00:59:021 (1) - Sudden strange slider shapes, I think that if you want to use these, use them more throughout your map just don't suddenly introduce them.

01:20:900 (1) - Slightly off again. i don't see anything here though

01:27:530 (1,2) - Should have a bigger jump than 01:27:364 (5,1) - for emphasis.its ok here, since both of them have nearly the same strong beats.

[Insane]

00:19:242 (1,2) - Doesn't look nice how they are slightly touching. I suggest this. curve (2) following the slider end of (1) instead


00:21:894 (1) - Why did you SV change here? I also think It'd be better to map this slider as just a 1/2 slider and a circle. the slightly different sound on that part suggest for a sv changes imo. and i'll keep this abit simple, so 1/1 slider is ok here, since i use 3/4 slider +1 circle already in the highest diff

00:55:706 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is harder to read than it needs to be. So, replace 00:56:038 (5,6) - with 1/2 slider? its nice to read here with ar9 imo. and i want to emphasize all of the piano sounds there

01:12:612 (4) - Stack on 01:12:115 (2) - . fixed

01:12:943 (1,2,3) - Same as with 00:19:242 (3) - in Easy diff. blanketing with the slider head gives smoother flow imo

01:20:900 (1) - Ok I really like the SV change here because the music actually gives it a reason to be here. this is actually the same as the one u mention above lol

The ending of this map is really easy compared to some other portions. I think you should replace some of the sliders with some 1/2 jumps. i actually use the same rhythm here with the first and 2nd kiai. and the same jump on same rhythm too, but i'll definitely think of this

[Don't Say Lady]

00:13:608 (5) - Make these sliders in the Kiai more tilted, or perfectly straight. (Actually just all sliders like this in general.) they're fine imo, still in flow xD

00:32:171 (4,1,2) - I think that because of the change in combo, 00:32:502 (1,2) - should be visually different. will think about this, bcoz of the vocal feels same here, the same pattern works fine too ><

00:33:829 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is so cool! Why don't you use it for the next section too 00:36:481 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ? they're same actually lol, xD

00:47:087 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Seems overly hard to read, can be fixed by removing the NC at 00:47:751 (1) - 00:47:751 (1) - . someone suggest me to NC them, but yeah NC seems better for reading for me too ><

00:48:414 (1,2) - This jump should be visually different from those before it since it is entering a new musical pattern. Maybe. will think about this, bcoz i think the new musical pattern starts at 00:48:745 (1) -

00:48:746 (1) - Remove NC? the strong downbeat is here

01:11:451 (8,9,1) - I don't think this should be a triple. ya, fixed

01:22:060 (8,9,1) - Same. But now I see you maybe trying to make it more intense compared to the previous iteration of this section, the jump patterns are already enough I don't think you need the triples too. this time its a beat there, i didnt mistake it this time xD , the previous one has no beat compare to this haha

01:22:226 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Use that cool unravelling pattern from earlier! would prefer to have variation on patterns xD

Really well polished map with a fun top difficulty. Good luck with this set!

DilPil111 wrote:

Hello there! Here is your mod from my queue (t/555101/start=15)

Also I love this song :S

Don't Say Lazy

01:00:347 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't fit the song very well a little bit of intense will be nice imo, since this is the hardest diff xD

Wow! The map was pretty quality! Would you mind if I made a GD? sorry i already got a full spread here, and i plan to make it my solo mapset xD

Lazy:
00:23:220 (1,2,3) - ctrl + G ? for more sound difference impact
00:25:872 (1,2,3) - ^
00:33:828 (1,2,3) - ^
00:36:480 (1,2,3) - ^
01:22:225 (1,2,3) - ^ (create triple)
01:24:877 (1,2,3) - ^
01:27:529 (1,2) - this circles pushed me to this idea

00:21:894 (1) - maybe make this slider form like this ? 01:20:899 (1) -
01:13:938 (5) - overlap
00:55:043 (1) - ^
01:04:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - u can start jumps upper level and flow to low level(vocal high>low)
01:04:987 (1,2,3,4) - also think this need more spacing..

Irreversible wrote:

lazy

Monstrata wrote:

Don't Say Lazy

00:14:933 (5) - This doesn't flow well compared to the rest of the pattern thats flowing counterclockwise. Was expecting something like a ctrl+G but that doesn't give great aesthetics. Maybe you can find a solution here? But current flow doesn't work imo. i've tried to fix this while following the counterclockwise flow there
00:31:176 (1,2) - Blanket fixed
00:35:817 (4,5,1,2) - The overlap looks bad because the slider isn't related to the previous two patterns. I would NC 4 and move it somewhere else and make it a unique pattern. changed this, and NC for other part with same rhythm too
01:13:606 (3,5,1) - The overlap looks prettty bad imo... TBh All your 3/4 slider overlaps look pretty bad. You really don't need to space them that close together. You can use 1.00x DS like this: and it would look perfectly fine, and play perfectly fine. Honestly this applies to stuff like 00:54:711 (5,1) - 01:03:330 (5,1) - etc... the DS is really unnecessary. Use regular structure or something it would look and play better. yup, fixed them, i treat like normal spacing now, looks better xD

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I think your treatment of 3/4 sliders isn't good. If you can fix that then I can potentially help this set.

Insane

00:37:806 (1,2) - The shapes are really different unnecessarily. Make 1 a curve too? fixed

Clean diff.

Hard

00:09:297 (3,4,1) - The structure here looks pretty bad/ I would just do something like this:
yup seems better

Idea

01:05:650 (3,4,1) - Same, stuff like this, look at the borders. fixed

strive for something like this

01:10:954 (3) - Stack with 4 instead so there's a movement on the white tick fixed and the earlier part with the same rhythm too
01:27:032 (4,5,1,2) - Poor arrangement imo. The flow going after the repeat is kinda bad. Try this: yea looks good, fixed

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Generally, you could use a blanket mod on this diff imo xD. Some blankets are kinda off, and i dont feel like going through them as a BN. i've check through the diff for a few times and fix what i can, hopefully its better now?

Normal

00:03:330 (4,5,6) - Spacing is a bit inconsistent here. opss fixed
00:29:353 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This is so dense. Can you cut down on the density here, its way more difficult than the kiai. 00:29:850 (4,5) - Can probably be just 2 circles that are 1/1 apart on white ticks. fixed

Try this rhythm. it's simpler and matches the intro better imo

00:32:004 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^Same idea. TOo dense imo fixed
01:20:898 (4) - Make this two 1/2 sliders? It's okay for this to be denser. fixed

Easy

Fine

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I think highest diff could use some work on 3/4 sliders, and Normal could use some work on the rhythms I mentioned. Other than that, promising set.