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Saki Kabata - LONELY ROLLING STAR [Taiko]

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OzzyOzrock
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, March 8, 2017 at 1:10:39 AM

Artist: Saki Kabata
Title: LONELY ROLLING STAR
Source: 塊魂
Tags: Katamari Damacy Fortissimo Yohihito Yano 矢野義人
BPM: 170
Filesize: 8584kb
Play Time: 05:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Oni (4.18 stars, 1636 notes)
Download: Saki Kabata - LONELY ROLLING STAR
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Charlotte
MY FAVORITE GAME

_yu68
hi.
mod from m4m

[Oni]
1.00:14:289 - 00:17:113 - 00:19:936 - change to don? as keynote 1/1 d k d k ...
2.01:17:995 (345,346) - ctrl+g? rut prevention in kdkd...
3.02:21:613 (633,634) - ctrl+g? break so simple dk
4.03:01:054 - change to kat, and 03:01:319 - change to don ? emphaisize drum sound
5.03:23:907 (991,992) - ctrl+g? ^
6.03:52:407 (1117,1118,1119,1120,1121,1122) - change to kat? rut prevention in dddd...

good luck :3

P.S.
change to HPDrain:4 ?
stars is low + many notes
yassu-
M4M

General
・bit rate more than 192kbps. please lower 192kbps following

・there is notes that has not been placed in line. prease resnap all notes.

・HP change to 5?

Oni
・00:17:466 change to d fit to sounds

・00:20:466 change to d ^

・00:24:348(96,98) change to k fit to voices

・00:45:525(184,185) Ctrl+G fit to sounds

・00:59:289(249,262,275) Ctrl+G ^

・01:07:848(289,291) Ctrl+G ^

・01:53:466 change to d ^

・01:56:466 change to d ^

・02:04:760 change to d ^

・02:07:760 change to d ^

・02:31:230(673,674,675,676,677) change to kkk k d 02:28:407 arrangement pattern

・02:48:877 change to k 01:24:172 pattern

・04:17:466(46,47) Ctrl+G fit to voices

・05:41:113 add k and spiner end point move to 1/2← thaer is hear a sound

kiai is very fun! good lack~ :D
Nofool
not even m4m just trying to be done with what i owe you for the few mods u did for me in TNA time..

[Oni]
* - 00:22:407 (88,89,90,91,92) - k d k kkd instead or idk but why would you miss - 00:22:760 - when you've been following that sound and missing drum beats on the whole previous part.
* - 00:45:525 (184,185,186,187,188,189) - k ddkkd ?? - 00:45:525 (184) - sounds like - 00:44:995 (182) - only here, unlike all the other similar spot.
* - 00:47:465 (195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - kinda sounds like shit tbh, doesn't reflect the song's rhythm. I know you wanted to make something different from previous part so... try something like d kd dkkd instead of dk dk dkd there ? and adapt the same for the rest.
* - 01:16:319 (336,337) - is this really needed ? id remove to emphasize main melody.
* - firs kiai seems overdone man idk, for the very first structures id have removed - 01:27:172 (385,386) - / - 01:29:113 (397,398) - for example. And then the same on the rest, idk too much triplets for nothing (that song is empty af anyways).
* - 02:22:054 - uhhh leaving this empty plays awkward, add something and remove the previous finisher if you don't like having notes after finishers (not like that one really is deserved anyways).
* - 02:34:760 (695) - move to - 02:34:583 - as k, remove - 02:35:995 (703) -, move - 02:37:583 (713) - to - 02:37:407 - as k. Somewhat fits better the vocal etc imo, missing - 02:34:583 - like you did just seems weird to me, at least more than missing - 02:37:583 (713) - instead like what i suggested.
* - second kiai same man looks overdone but i don't even have good idea that could fit what you did.. but some stuff like removing - 03:09:348 (896) - and making - 03:09:524 (897) - a d to fit the vocal looks obvious idk. . . (just an example).
* - 04:00:877 - does this part really deserve to suddenly get back to 0.8 SV ?? this is as calm as the previous notes, even more noticeable at - 04:14:995 - part, we almost sleeping there. You can make a greater speed up later by also using - 04:22:760 (53,54,55) -.
* - 04:31:936 (11,12,13,14) - ddd k fits more vocal AND drums.
* - now that i notice it id have legit used like a spinner instead of - 04:33:877 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - and a slider instead of - 04:39:525 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76) -. Wouldnt be thaaaat weird actually. . . idk i cant keep up with that kiai either anyways.
* - 05:15:701 (265) - from there its ok...
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

well not like it actually needs to be legit u bn u rank
Skull Kid
[General]
Reduce hitsound volume to 70-80%
04:29:113 - Change the sv to 1x
05:15:701 - Finish the kiai here

[Oni]
00:13:054 (48) - Change to k. This would be consistent with 00:01:760 (9) -
00:15:877 (60) - Change to k. This would be consistent with 00:04:584 (19) -
00:18:701 (72) - Change to k. This would be consistent with 00:07:408 (29) -
00:34:760 - The rhythm from the 00:23:466 - repeats here. Why did you don't repeat the same notes?
01:11:907 (311) - Delete
01:12:083 - Add a d
01:59:466 - The same from beginning
02:21:348 (630,631,632,633,634) - dkdkd?
02:36:613 (707) - Delete
02:36:966 - Add a k
02:40:936 (735) - Change to d
02:49:407 - The rhythm from the 01:24:701 - repeats here. Why did you don't repeat the same notes?
03:12:260 (914) - Change to d
03:12:348 (915) - Change to k
03:34:848 (1059) - Change to d
03:34:936 (1060) - Change to k
05:26:819 (333) - Change to k
nice map
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock

_yu68 wrote:

hi.
mod from m4m

[Oni]
1.00:14:289 - 00:17:113 - 00:19:936 - change to don? as keynote 1/1 d k d k ... I think using k for the song is nicer.
2.01:17:995 (345,346) - ctrl+g? rut prevention in kdkd... I like kdkd better ;o;
3.02:21:613 (633,634) - ctrl+g? break so simple dk I think I used dkddk for variation
4.03:01:054 - change to kat, and 03:01:319 - change to don ? emphaisize drum sound I think variation is nicer here
5.03:23:907 (991,992) - ctrl+g? ^ ^
6.03:52:407 (1117,1118,1119,1120,1121,1122) - change to kat? rut prevention in dddd... True, but because it's simple I think it's ok to keep quiet :(

yassu- wrote:

[b]M4M

General
・bit rate more than 192kbps. please lower 192kbps following AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

・there is notes that has not been placed in line. prease resnap all notes. Done

・HP change to 5? Yeah!

Oni
・00:17:466 change to d fit to sounds I don't want pitch here.

・00:20:466 change to d ^ ^

・00:24:348(96,98) change to k fit to voices Trying to make different variation

・00:45:525(184,185) Ctrl+G fit to sounds I don't think it fits

・00:59:289(249,262,275) Ctrl+G ^I don't think it fits

・01:07:848(289,291) Ctrl+G ^I don't think it fits

・01:53:466 change to d ^ I don't think it fits

・01:56:466 change to d ^ I don't think it fits

・02:04:760 change to d ^ I don't think it fits

・02:07:760 change to d ^ I don't think it fits

・02:31:230(673,674,675,676,677) change to kkk k d 02:28:407 arrangement pattern

・02:48:877 change to k 01:24:172 pattern Breaks pattern consistency

・04:17:466(46,47) Ctrl+G fit to voices Not folliwing voice

・05:41:113 add k and spiner end point move to 1/2← thaer is hear a sound ha?

Nofool wrote:

not even m4m just trying to be done with what i owe you for the few mods u did for me in TNA time..

[Oni]
* - 00:22:407 (88,89,90,91,92) - k d k kkd instead or idk but why would you miss - 00:22:760 - when you've been following that sound and missing drum beats on the whole previous part. TRUE
* - 00:45:525 (184,185,186,187,188,189) - k ddkkd ?? - 00:45:525 (184) - sounds like - 00:44:995 (182) - only here, unlike all the other similar spot.
* - 00:47:465 (195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - kinda sounds like shit tbh, doesn't reflect the song's rhythm. I know you wanted to make something different from previous part so... try something like d kd dkkd instead of dk dk dkd there ? and adapt the same for the rest.
* - 01:16:319 (336,337) - is this really needed ? id remove to emphasize main melody. i think it compliments previous triplets
* - firs kiai seems overdone man idk, for the very first structures id have removed - 01:27:172 (385,386) - / - 01:29:113 (397,398) - for example. And then the same on the rest, idk too much triplets for nothing (that song is empty af anyways). Lightened but not by much
* - 02:22:054 - uhhh leaving this empty plays awkward, add something and remove the previous finisher if you don't like having notes after finishers (not like that one really is deserved anyways). fixed but still empty
* - 02:34:760 (695) - move to - 02:34:583 - as k, remove - 02:35:995 (703) -, move - 02:37:583 (713) - to - 02:37:407 - as k. Somewhat fits better the vocal etc imo, missing - 02:34:583 - like you did just seems weird to me, at least more than missing - 02:37:583 (713) - instead like what i suggested. i dont agree!
* - second kiai same man looks overdone but i don't even have good idea that could fit what you did.. but some stuff like removing - 03:09:348 (896) - and making - 03:09:524 (897) - a d to fit the vocal looks obvious idk. . . (just an example). vocal is hardly used in kiai since there's so little
* - 04:00:877 - does this part really deserve to suddenly get back to 0.8 SV ?? this is as calm as the previous notes, even more noticeable at - 04:14:995 - part, we almost sleeping there. You can make a greater speed up later by also using - 04:22:760 (53,54,55) -. it's not as calm as the previous part
* - 04:31:936 (11,12,13,14) - ddd k fits more vocal AND drums. but it'd suckl!?
* - now that i notice it id have legit used like a spinner instead of - 04:33:877 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - and a slider instead of - 04:39:525 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76) -. Wouldnt be thaaaat weird actually. . . idk i cant keep up with that kiai either anyways. STOP VOCALS
* - 05:15:701 (265) - from there its ok... .
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

well not like it actually needs to be legit u bn u rank

Skull Kid wrote:

[General]
Reduce hitsound volume to 70-80% it's already so quiet
04:29:113 - Change the sv to 1x no way!
05:15:701 - Finish the kiai here the true outro of the song comes after so kiai lets this be emphasized nicer

[Oni]
00:13:054 (48) - Change to k. This would be consistent with 00:01:760 (9) - Not doing any of these because you seem to not know much about variation, evidenced by early versions of your Reality Check map.
00:15:877 (60) - Change to k. This would be consistent with 00:04:584 (19) -
00:18:701 (72) - Change to k. This would be consistent with 00:07:408 (29) -
00:34:760 - The rhythm from the 00:23:466 - repeats here. Why did you don't repeat the same notes?
01:11:907 (311) - Delete
01:12:083 - Add a d
01:59:466 - The same from beginning
02:21:348 (630,631,632,633,634) - dkdkd?
02:36:613 (707) - Delete
02:36:966 - Add a k
02:40:936 (735) - Change to d
02:49:407 - The rhythm from the 01:24:701 - repeats here. Why did you don't repeat the same notes?
03:12:260 (914) - Change to d
03:12:348 (915) - Change to k
03:34:848 (1059) - Change to d
03:34:936 (1060) - Change to k
05:26:819 (333) - Change to k
nice map
FINALLY.
Surono

OzzyOzrock wrote:

ROLLING STOOOOOOOOOOONE
OzzyOshBurn demmm
Chromoxx
Talked a lot and fixed some stuff over discord voice, irc log isn't too big but at least it's there.

- xoxo Gossip Girl

irc
2017-01-27 11:06 Chromoxx: 01:26:423 (381) - change to d, dkd feels very weird here
2017-01-27 11:07 Chromoxx: and the other ones too for consistency
2017-01-27 11:08 OzzyOzrock: tru, done
2017-01-27 11:08 Chromoxx: 01:29:247 (398) - etc
2017-01-27 11:08 Chromoxx: 03:12:306 (912,913) - ctrl G, this stream feels kinda weird
2017-01-27 11:10 Chromoxx: 03:21:394 -
2017-01-27 11:11 Chromoxx: 04:30:571 -
Skull Kid

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Not doing any of these because you seem to not know much about variation
yay
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock

Skull Kid wrote:

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Not doing any of these because you seem to not know much about variation
yay
HAHAHAHA I KNOW RIGHT THAT WAS SO RUDE WTF
Raiden
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that ozzy ending is nice except 05:14:865 (256,257,258,259,260,261) - bitch dont make me hit kat with the offhand

bubble 2!!!
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock

Raiden wrote:

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that ozzy ending is nice except 05:14:865 (256,257,258,259,260,261) - bitch dont make me hit kat with the offhand

bubble 2!!!
I'M SORRY IT'S JUST A GOOD DRUM FILL TO FINISH WITH PLEASE UNDERSTAND
Raiden
i understand but my hands with down syndrome don't!!!!!!

bubbled 2
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

  • [General]
  1. Source: 塊魂
  2. Tags: Katamari Damacy Fortissimo Yohihito Yano
  3. You may snap the preview point at 02:50:247 -
  • [Oni]
  1. 01:16:629 (339,340) - consider swapping these notes to d k to follow the snare there ?
  2. 01:17:776 - maybe add d here ? The 1/2 pattern here looks rather repetitive.
  3. 02:10:100 - adding k here would cohere with the way you mapped 00:22:806 -
  4. 02:21:923 (635) - you may move this note to 02:22:100 - as the beat is more noticeable there.
  5. 02:48:923 (771) - maybe k as you did at 01:24:218 (372) - for pattern consistency ?
  6. 03:41:159 (1087) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  7. 05:21:394 (300) - same as 03:41:159 (1087) -
  8. 05:26:600 - add d and 05:26:776 - add k ? This could mark the end of the last kiai nicely.
You may call me back after that~ :D
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

  • [General]
  1. Source: 塊魂
  2. Tags: Katamari Damacy Fortissimo Yohihito Yano
  3. You may snap the preview point at 02:50:247 -
  • [Oni]
  1. 01:16:629 (339,340) - consider swapping these notes to d k to follow the snare there ?
  2. 01:17:776 - maybe add d here ? The 1/2 pattern here looks rather repetitive. 01:17:953 - Added k here to avoid awkward ddks
  3. 02:10:100 - adding k here would cohere with the way you mapped 00:22:806 -
  4. 02:21:923 (635) - you may move this note to 02:22:100 - as the beat is more noticeable there.
  5. 02:48:923 (771) - maybe k as you did at 01:24:218 (372) - for pattern consistency ?
  6. 03:41:159 (1087) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
  7. 05:21:394 (300) - same as 03:41:159 (1087) -
  8. 05:26:600 - add d and 05:26:776 - add k ? This could mark the end of the last kiai nicely.
You may call me back after that~ :D
All applied! Thanks a lot Nardo :3
Nardoxyribonucleic
The map looks fine now with nicely arranged patterns. What a good relaxing song here.

Approved~
Topic Starter
OzzyOzrock
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