wasinkingspeedq wrote:

m4m mina is mine

General
Tags ? Thanks to Firetruck

Easy
00:17:010 (1) - 00:23:770 (1) - whistle is enough, no need finish since 00:16:587 (4) - the strong finish is here (check other diffs) V
00:19:968 (4) - missing finish V
00:33:489 (4) - in my opinion you should clap on this circleV
00:35:601 (3) - clap instead whistle V
00:51:658 (2) - the blanket is terrible, this can be improved V
02:42:362 - try adding spinner from here to 02:44:052 - ? V
02:57:573 - add a circle ? X I like it like this, it feels better imo

Normal
01:04:756 (2) - this slider should be like this to match with nayeon's voices like you did on sana's parts It's ok X
01:42:362 (5) - X
01:16:165 (4) - the reason same as ab ve to match with jihyo's voices X
02:29:263 (4) - is this necessary to add finish ? it isnot makesense In the other diffs (which I copied the sounds from) have a stream with finishes there
02:46:587 (4) - the tail of this slider should add clap, 02:53:770 (3) - also this circle V
02:47:855 (6) - ^^ V
02:57:573 - same reason as other diffs X

Advanced
00:13:418 (4,1) - This pattern looks quite hard for advanced, try to avoid this because I think this is unrankable pattern in advanced, just add a circle on red tick V
01:52:080 (2) - This is terrible man, pls adjust the position of this slider or do something like this! V
02:57:573 - same as ez and nm diff X it's k
this diff is so cool. IKR ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Hard
02:18:700 (1) - this repeat slider overlap with 02:17:855 (3) - is it okay ? I don't see anything wrong
02:47:010 (4) - 02:47:432 (1) - 02:49:545 (2) - 02:52:503 (1) - 02:53:770 (4) - clap ? V (some we're added)
02:57:573 - reason same as other diffs X
02:58:630 (6) - New combo ? X

That's all for OOH-AHH , I decided to leave Insane and Think about it TWICE because I have not enough experience for mod these. forgive me heart.

Firetruck wrote:

if u want tags here u go
THE STORY BEGINS JYP entertainment 나연 정연 모모 사나 지효 미나 다현 채영 쯔위 Sana Nayeon Momo Dahyun Mina Jeongyeon Jihyo Chaeyeong Tzuyu K-pop Kpop

WORSTPOLACKEU wrote:

Think about it TWICE

00:14:052 (2,4) - Stack or make overlap that fits others in your map. Done

00:18:489 (7) - I think a kickslider is unnecessary, would go with a note! Done

00:24:616 (5,7) - Blanket seems bit off. Done

00:30:742 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You don't want to go for the 1/6 with vocals here and the next part? Not really done, but I can't just change the whole section

00:48:278 (5,6,7) - This feels misplaced, song is more intense on the slider and empty when you put the jumps, other way around would be good. This needs changing but I'm not yet sure whether I should change it as you recommend or in another more adequate way
02:20:179 (8) - Increase spacing. Well, as far as I could


Insane


01:07:714 (1) - This doesn't fit with the rest, voice and flow is smooth and this slider is a lonely sharp one! I really don't see what's wrong with it

01:54:616 (1) - I would NC here instead! I guess you're right, but maybe 2 by 2 notes will be NC? (won't change it for now until I decide whether it's appropriate or not

02:01:587 (7,1) - This is supposed to be the biggest jump but it's not, it feels like you could rearrange the whole jump pattern so it's equal and fitting the end jump, either biggest jump there or antijump, right now it's a mash of different spacings with no meaning. Well, I did something, but dunno if it's what you meant
03:02:644 (1,2,3) - The 3rd slider feels disconnected and the "woo-ah woo-ah" feeels distorted that way, like you start smth further away somehow, place it in a way that fits the other sliders? Also 03:03:911 (4) - is too far away considering how you space those hits in your mapping. I think I resolved this


Hard Advanced and Easy

I don't see major problems and I am not that good at modding easier difficulties sadly.. I don't see big problems tho, the flow is there, the patterns are good and it is spaced evenly and tidy! How can you see when you haven't checked them?

Very cool map can't wait to go top 50 on the top diff HDDT when?

CALL ME NEXT TIME U MAKE KPOP MAP I WILL GD oi, nais

• 00:13:207 (5) - NC here and maybe change the direction of the stream on that part Because if you listen closely to the music on that note music changes
  
  00:36:024 (4,5) - slider instead of 2 circles?
  
  00:41:306 (4,5,6,7,8) - no reason to have that much DS but if u wan t those jump maybe put NC on the circle where DS changes
  
  00:52:503 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - maybe space them little bit on every NC ? ( won t be that hard its 142 BPM streams)
  
  01:11:939 (3) - maybe NC Because u changed the shape of the sliders and music changes
  
  01:23:348 - why u didn't map this part?
  
  01:31:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this part can be mapped like this one 01:29:686 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - same melody only different words
  
  01:37:714 (6) - NC?
  
  01:44:475 (6) - same
  
  01:49:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this part looks better than first its not over mapped that much
  
  01:56:306 (7) - maybe place this one like this? http://prntscr.com/d7kxtr
  
  02:15:742 (1) - maybe change the direction of the stream on this circle not on this one 02:15:531 (3) like this 03:11:094 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
  
  02:21:235 (3) - NC ?
  
  02:21:658 (4,1) - blanket is not perfect
  
  02:20:813 (2,3,4) - idk this part doesn't look so nice try to space them more or change the sliders you have a lot of space on the screen move them around they are pretty much on the same place
  
  02:29:686 (1,2,3,4) - maybe increase DS on those
  
  02:55:038 (4) - put this one on x:80 y:208 so you have blanket and better DS
  
  03:21:658 (3,5,1) - make this part like this maybe? http://prntscr.com/d7mgiu why? Because it looks nicer and it emphasizes the 03:22:503 (1) since she screamed on that slider

Invertable wrote:

Deal is a deal M4M
I'l try my best to mod this because its really hard xd
Last diff mod

• 00:13:207 (5) - NC here and maybe change the direction of the stream on that part Because if you listen closely to the music on that note music changes
  
  00:36:024 (4,5) - slider instead of 2 circles?
  
  00:41:306 (4,5,6,7,8) - no reason to have that much DS but if u wan t those jump maybe put NC on the circle where DS changes
  
  00:52:503 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - maybe space them little bit on every NC ? ( won t be that hard its 142 BPM streams)
  
  01:11:939 (3) - maybe NC Because u changed the shape of the sliders and music changes
  
  01:23:348 - why u didn't map this part?
  
  01:31:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this part can be mapped like this one 01:29:686 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - same melody only different words
  
  01:37:714 (6) - NC?
  
  01:44:475 (6) - same
  
  01:49:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this part looks better than first its not over mapped that much
  
  01:56:306 (7) - maybe place this one like this? http://prntscr.com/d7kxtr
  
  02:15:742 (1) - maybe change the direction of the stream on this circle not on this one 02:15:531 (3) like this 03:11:094 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
  
  02:21:235 (3) - NC ?
  
  02:21:658 (4,1) - blanket is not perfect
  
  02:20:813 (2,3,4) - idk this part doesn't look so nice try to space them more or change the sliders you have a lot of space on the screen move them around they are pretty much on the same place
  
  02:29:686 (1,2,3,4) - maybe increase DS on those
  
  02:55:038 (4) - put this one on x:80 y:208 so you have blanket and better DS
  
  03:21:658 (3,5,1) - make this part like this maybe? http://prntscr.com/d7mgiu why? Because it looks nicer and it emphasizes the 03:22:503 (1) since she screamed on that slider

Ok that is it hopefully this mod will help you and sry because i didn't mod your hard but i really don t know what to say about it xd I can t mod/map hard diffs #FeelsBadMan

-Harpuia- wrote:

Hello! M4M ( =w=)/

[General]

1. THE STORY BEGINS is already in the source. Delete the one in the tags. aye

[Easy]

1. 00:22:080 (3) - Blanketting this on 00:19:968 (4) - seems a good idea. Flow wouldn't be much of a problem here.
2. 00:28:418 (2) - Minor problem. This isn't stacked properly with 00:25:461 (3) - slider-end.
3. 00:33:489 (4,1) - I think it's better to have these two stacked on to 00:30:109 (4,1) - . It looks cleaner that way. You may want to adjust 00:31:799 (2,3) - .
4. 00:33:489 (4,2) - Fix stack.
5. 00:43:630 (4,2) - Fix stack.
6. 00:45:742 (3,4) - Better have a blanket with these two.
7. 00:55:883 (3,1) - For me, this overlap looks bad .-.
8. 01:00:531 (4,1) - Fix blanket.
9. 01:18:277 (2,3) - Considering the flow 01:18:277 (2) - has from red to white anchors, the flow between 01:18:277 (2,3) - seems off.
10. 01:19:545 (3,3) - Remove overlap. It looks kinda bad since 01:22:080 (3) - partly appears as 01:19:545 (3) - is still going. good call
11. 01:35:179 (4,2) - This seems... off. Aesthetically speaking. Consider using stacks.
12. 02:00:109 (1,2) - 02:07:714 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
13. 02:14:052 (2,3) - Better, imo, if you'd blanket the slider-end of (2) a bit more by the first white to red anchors part of (3).
14. 02:45:742 (2) - Position the first red anchor a bit to the left to fix blanket.
15. 02:50:813 (3) - I don't know, but this is a weird looking shape for me. Consider revising.
16. 02:57:573 - Awkward sudden pause. Putting a circle here may fix that. Please do that on the others as well, if ever you apply this.
17. 03:02:643 (1,4) - Consider stacking.

Did this and that


[Normal]

1. 00:13:630 (1,2) - They seem to have a... weird? flow?
2. 00:14:475 (2,3) - Fix blanket here.
3. 00:20:390 (1,2) - Suggestion. Try making this into two 1/2 sliders. One signaling the effect, then the other for the vocal.
4. 00:41:094 (2,3) - Blanket thing.
5. 00:43:630 (5) - Putting this on 00:40:672 (1) - seems good for aesthetic purposes. You may want to adjust 00:42:362 (4,1) - .
6. 00:51:235 (2,3) - Blanket thing.
7. 00:56:306 (5) - I highly suggest making this a wave slider o:
8. 02:15:742 (4) - This looks, um... Weird.
9. 03:12:785 (1,5) - Properly stack these two here.

did pretty much nothing

[Advanced]

1. 00:26:728 (5) - Considering the significant-ish sound here, I think this should be unstacked?
2. 00:44:475 (2,3) - Bad flow here. The motion just kinda breaks right before 00:44:897 (3) - because of the position of the (2) slider-end. I recommend having changes here.
3. 00:55:883 (1) - A straight slider seems nice here.
4. 01:06:024 (1,2) - Blanket thing

nothing

[Hard]

1. 00:26:728 (1,1) - This is an awkward change in DS. This should have the same DS as 00:25:461 (1,1,1,1) - . Do just like what you did in 00:13:630 (1) - .
2. 01:49:968 (1,2,3,4) - I just noticed that there is no consistency between this & 00:40:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - . 01:49:968 (1,2,3,4) - have increasing DSs while the others don't.

did some stuff.

[Insane]

1. 00:17:010 (1,2,1) - A bad overlap here imo. Consider having some more space between 00:17:010 (1,2) - and 00:17:855 (1) - .
2. 00:48:911 (7) - Insignificant sound here, and yet a higher DS than 00:48:700 (6) - . A lower DS really fits this note.
3. 00:51:235 (2,3,4) - This is too linear imo. Consider revising this.
4. 01:00:954 (6) - What happened to the NC here?
5. 01:00:954 (6) - Another one, this should have emphasis imo.
6. 01:10:883 (4,1) - Bad flow imo. There should be something done to the slider or something.
7. 02:05:179 (1) - Stack with the red anchor of 02:03:489 (1) - .
8. 02:08:982 (3,4) - Yet another too linear flow.
9. 02:16:587 (1,1) - Not kinda sure with the overlaps here.

this and that

[TWICE]

1. 00:44:897 (5) - Should deserve more DS imo, considering the vocal here.
2. 01:11:517 (2,3,4) - I don't know. I'm not sure. But for me, this is an awkward flow.
3. 02:02:855 (3,1) - I've already noticed this on the previous parts, but I really find the pause here off. Since the thing you're following is still going and you decided to cut off 02:02:961 - .
4. 03:08:137 (3,4,5) - Flow too linear.

I don't really much have time right now, but I did the best that I could. I hope it helped. awkward flow fixed

Good luck!

Arutsuki wrote:

this is the best example why i should always check the map before agreeing to m4m rip

pp diff

00:13:313 - the bass sound here should be mapped, make 00:13:207 (5) - into a slider or something
00:40:249 (6) - space this more from 00:39:827 (5) -
01:07:714 (1) - doesnt seem to fit, almost every other slider is a round turn
01:31:904 (7,9) - why are these here? no sound
01:59:263 (3,4) - spacing too small
02:45:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - this shouldn't be 1/4, use only 4 notes or 2 kicksliders in 1/6

faster ar pp diff

00:14:052 (2,3,5,6,3,4) - why different spacing than 00:20:813 (3,4,6,7,3,4) - ? same voice pitch
00:32:855 - this is the correct rhythm if you wanna follow the voice properly, you should also change that on the triples
00:43:630 (3,4) - this is just weird imo
00:53:665 - add another note here
01:00:531 (8,9,10,11) - overmapped
01:14:052 (8,9,10,11) - ^
02:09:827 (8,9,10,11) - ^^
02:23:348 (8,9,10,11) - ^^
03:05:601 (8,9,10,11) - ^^^
03:19:123 (8,9,10,11) - ^^^
01:21:235 (1,2) - these should both end on the second blue ticks
01:31:904 (6,8) - no sound again delete
02:45:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/6 like in diff above
02:58:630 (6) - oh look nc
03:08:348 (4,5) - this spacing makes 0 sense

agusch wrote:

Hello! u modded my map when your queue was closed, I know I'm a little bit late but here I leave u a short mod, hope it helps you

Easy

1. 00:32:221 (3,4) - space issue fixud
2. 03:20:390 (2,3) - I feel this flow uncomfy to play, maybe it's me it's you

Normal

1. 00:50:813 (1,3) - that overlap is annoying, it covers the beginning of the slider body and the slider-hitcircle in-game you don't see that

Hard

1. 02:17:855 (3,1) - it's a terrible idea that back arrow hidden behind the sliderbody probably, but I can't just change the whole section.

Insane

1. 01:07:714 (1) - totally random slider imo, don't know why u chose that shape cuz it's awesome.
2. 01:56:728 (1,2) - this is really hard to play without having a 100 on the slider 1, and it's the only part of the song where u placed a note with a ridiculous big DS (more than 6.0). What are you exactly trying to emphasize there with such a big ds?
3. 02:08:559 (1,2,3,4) - I felt this flow weird to play

did most

Think about it TWICE

1. 00:23:982 (2) - weird to play and overmaped imo, try deleting that 2

did it

Good Luck!

Norman wrote:

[General]

1. Meaningless green lines to delete.

1. Resnap all difficulty, beats are 1ms Unsnapped
   

Cleared

[Easy]

1. 03:24:615 (3) - Slider something like this picture?
   SPOILER

   

Done

[Hard]

1. 01:20:813 (1) - it's followed vocal.

Good call again

[Insane]

1. 01:30:531 (1) - Use ctrl+g,more better flow for me.
   
   SPOILER

   

OK

[Think about in TWICE]

1. 00:57:996 (2,3,4) - Slider something like this picture?, That looks good very much!
   SPOILER

   

I like my sliders better
Sorry my little mod But did my best.

[[Pika]] wrote:

just a really unnecessary stats mod
[Easy]
would recommend CS2.5 here because noobs and bad aim you know that 2.5 is smaller than 2 right?
[Normal]
personally i'd do ar4 but idk spread is better like that
[Advanced]
OD5 might be a little high, maybe OD4 or OD4.5 It's perfect
[Hard]
i dont usually use cs4 in hards, make it 3.8 or something (not necessary) Why would you point it out if not necessary?
[Insane]
would bump to OD7.5 or OD8, and there's no reason why this shouldnt be AR9 unless you want people to DT it lol this would ruin my diff spread
[TT]
would do AR9.3 or AR9 and HP6.5I have no such diff

1. Unused HS as MA says : soft-hitclap2.wav
2. HS with length less than 100 ms :
   1. soft-sliderslide.wav :0.32ms
   2. soft-slidertick.wav: 0.32ms

   Random Criteria wrote:

   Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file

1. 01:03:911 (4,1,2) - The stack can cause a lot of reading problems especially for an E icon difficulty
2. 01:21:235 (1,2) - You dont need to make this part so dense with circles , using a 1/1 slider will be better because the song is really calm here while you used two 1/1 circles in only intense parts before
3. 02:42:362 (1,1) - Recovery time in easies must be atleast 4 beats and in this case its 3 only , you could safely remove 02:42:362 (1,1) - and it wont affect gameplay much
4. 02:57:573 - tbh it feels really empty here so yea adding a circle would be better

1. 01:22:925 - The sound here is actually very important and just like in easy it should be click able in this difficulty as well , The rhythm here could be changed a bit for example the sound is at 01:22:397 - while the circle is at 01:22:292 - and it doesnt make much sense like that. What i would do is http://puu.sh/uNhv8/e85305152b.jpg the rhythm will fit perfectly and is best for gameplay as well
2. 02:57:573 - Same as in easy

1. holy so dense, its so full of 1/2 so u could increase the ar by .5
2. 01:50:813 (1) - Remove NC
3. 02:47:221 (5,1) - Stacking these two is bad because 02:47:432 - has much louder sound than 02:47:221 - so stacking it under other note doesnt give it spacing emphasis
4. 02:53:982 (5,1) - Same
5. 02:57:573 - Same like other diffs and for the higher diffs also start nc from here, You dont need to worry about having a combo for two notes only because in case of 02:50:813 (1) - the combo has a single note only
6. 03:10:883 (4,1) - Ya same stack thing as two suggestions earlier , also you never stacked these two in the rest of the kiais so its aestheticaly incosistent as well
7. 03:24:404 (4,1) - Same

1. 00:12:362 (1,1,1) - Trust me you dont need this nc spam at alllll / same for 00:25:884 (1,1,1) - and others if they exist
2. 00:29:263 (3,5) - Stack lol
3. 00:42:362 (1,1,1,1) - aaah 1/1 antiflow for 3 star diffs is not really fine you could leave them DS'd and that way it will be more friendly to play for hard level players . same for 01:51:658 (1,1,1,1) - and others zz
4. 00:44:897 (3,4) - You will want to change (4) into 2 circles because 3 has vocal on head while 4 has vocal on both head and tail so the vocal on tail doesnt get emphasized this way . The vocal is very loud also
5. 01:03:911 (5,6) - Even if the vocal takes a turn 01:04:756 (1) - i still dont think you should Break NC consistency as you never used this concept earlier in the whole diff/ same for others
6. 01:21:235 - Why are you even ignoring this beat while its mapped in the lower diffs lol
7. 01:30:848 (4,5) - Stack
8. 01:32:221 (6,7) - Should use same rhythm as 01:30:531 (3,4,5) - because they are same , Actually the sounds at 01:32:221 - are even intenser then why is it mapped with simpler rhythm
9. 01:49:123 (1,1,1) - Oh my volk did u just increase the spacing to 2x . I mean i know its 1/3 , DONT make it look like 1/2 or 1/4 . its 1/3 , make it look like 1/3 by using default DS EVEN if the overlap
10. 02:17:644 (2,3) - Why is there a DS increase while there is none for 02:04:334 (3) - 00:55:038 (3) - etc :thinking: theres no sound at 02:17:855 - that needs extra ds anyway
11. 02:20:179 (4,1) - Leave them DS'd instead of stacking to emphasize the louder sound at 02:20:390 - as i mentioned in advanced as well
12. 02:44:052 (1) - First of all this spinner is short af and secondly half beat recovery is NOT enough for a hard difficulty as described in RC

1. 00:13:313 - Leaving this is pretty meh since its mapped in hard as well so dont do simpler rhythms in complexer diffs . even a 1/4 slider would be fine
2. 00:17:116 (2,3) - Dont make your 1/4 look like 1/2 in term of spacing , for instance 00:16:587 (6,7) - 00:17:116 (2,3) - these two patterns are next to each other and the visual spacing between both is same also but one of them is 1/2 while other is 1/4 which is'nt cool at all
3. 00:19:968 (5) - Should space it more to emphasize cymbal
4. 01:21:235 - Same as in hard
5. 02:30:531 - Also add a circle here , same reason as before

1. Your AR is too op rn , Its only 140 bpm , no more than ar 9 should be necessary
2. 00:53:770 (1) - If you really want to emphasize this sound than 00:53:558 (3) - Making it a kickslider will emphasize it even more because that way the beat at 00:53:665 - will be mapped as well. same for others as well
   00:57:996 (2,3,4) - they are too close lol could be misread as 1/4 easily