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Charlotte

Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2017-01-13T17:03:47+00:00

23:53 Pnkmjp: こんばんは。今お時間大丈夫でしょうか？
23:53 Charlotte: 大丈夫ですよ
23:54 Charlotte: dl中
23:55 Pnkmjp: ありがとうございます
23:56 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1166557 Yui Horie - PRESENTER (TV Size) [Kantan]]
23:58 Charlotte: Hit音でかくないでしょうか? Volume下げたほうが良いです
23:59 Charlotte: 00:00:816 - 80%?
00:01 Pnkmjp: なるほど 変更しました
00:05 Charlotte: 00:31:014 - 65 00:37:372 - 75 00:59:623 - 85
00:06 Charlotte: 00:28:233 - ここのじわじわ下がるvolumeは上記と合わせて調整して下さい
00:08 Charlotte: すみません 00:43:729 - 70 00:44:127 - 75のほうがより良いかな
00:10 Charlotte: 00:56:445 -  ここは個人的になくていいかも 01:25:054 - kiai 終端75
00:10 Charlotte: 01:29:623 - 65ぐらいからじわじわ下げると良さそう?
00:12 Charlotte: volume関連こんな感じでしょうか...そんなにvolume調整上手いわけではないんですがｗ
00:13 Pnkmjp: いえ･･･ Volume調整これが初めてなので参考にさせてもらいます！
00:13 Pnkmjp: 少し手間取っているので少々お待ちください･･･
00:14 Charlotte: 大丈夫です
00:17 Charlotte: KantanとOniだけでまずは大丈夫なので変更したら一度更新しておいて下さい。
00:17 Charlotte: 軽食食べてきますので10分前後で戻ります
00:25 Pnkmjp: いってらっしゃいです
00:25 Pnkmjp: 更新しました。目を通してくれれば幸いです
00:25 Charlotte: 戻りました
00:30 Charlotte: 00:15:915 (2,3) - d k D?
00:31 Charlotte: 00:18:299 (4,5,6,7) - ここなのですが　00:17:504 - ここにk追加。00:18:696 - d追加　00:19:094 - k　00:19:491 - 削除
00:32 Charlotte: こっちのほうがしっくりきませんか? どうでしょうか?
00:34 Pnkmjp: 両方変更しました！！！！！！！
00:36 Charlotte: 00:22:272 - k
00:37 Charlotte: 00:22:670 - ここは削除するかしないかお任せします
00:37 Charlotte: 00:23:862 - add k
00:39 Pnkmjp: 削除はしない方向でいきます
00:39 Pnkmjp: k ok
00:40 Charlotte: 00:23:862 - やっぱりd でここから k k d
00:40 Charlotte: 00:24:657 - ここから k k d
00:41 Charlotte: 00:25:849 - ここ削除
00:41 Pnkmjp: k k d ok
00:42 Pnkmjp: k k d k k ってKantan的に大丈夫ですか？
00:42 Charlotte: お手数ですが一度ここまででアプデかけてもらえますか?
00:43 Pnkmjp: simashita
00:44 Charlotte: 00:16:312 - k入れますか。d k D kで単調感が否めない
00:46 Charlotte: 00:23:862 - ここやはりkに戻していただいて 00:24:657 - ここdのほうがd k dで合いますね　00:25:849 - ここ削除
00:47 Pnkmjp: hh変更しました
00:49 Charlotte: 00:33:796 - 削除 00:34:193 - k
00:50 Charlotte: 曲で一番穏やかなパートで1/1-3連は不要な気がするのと取るほどの音がない
00:50 Pnkmjp: なるほど 変更しました
00:50 Charlotte: 00:40:551 - k
00:51 Pnkmjp: 変更しました
00:54 Charlotte: 00:42:935 - d 00:43:332 - k追加?
00:54 Charlotte: 00:46:114 (18,19) - vocal拾うならここと同じパートです
00:55 Pnkmjp: 追加しました！！！！！
00:55 Charlotte: pnkmさん何時まで起きてますか?
00:56 Pnkmjp: ４~5時前には寝ようと思ってます
00:56 Charlotte: ちょっと風呂入ってきていいですかね? 
00:57 Pnkmjp: いってらっしゃ～い
00:57 Pnkmjp: ！！
00:57 Charlotte: 戻ったらやります^^
01:32 Charlotte: back
01:32 Pnkmjp: hi
01:41 Charlotte: editでcrashしてまして、今戻りました;w;
01:41 Pnkmjp: あら・・・；；； おかえりなさいです；ｗ；
01:44 Charlotte: 00:54:855 - addd 00:55:650 - addk
01:44 Pnkmjp: ok
01:50 Charlotte: 01:29:226 (70) - finish不要
01:50 Pnkmjp: 分かりました
01:54 Charlotte: 01:28:829 - ここに Dで　01:29:226 (70) - ここfinishやはり入れてください
01:55 Pnkmjp: D finish 入れました
01:56 Charlotte: 00:00:816 - ここの緑線消して下さい
01:56 Charlotte: 赤線のvolを80%で
01:57 Pnkmjp: なるほど･･･　 消しました
01:59 Charlotte: 00:37:372 - ここ70で　00:43:729 - ここ75 vol
01:59 Charlotte: 00:44:127 - ここの緑線は消してもいいと思います

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-01-13T17:10:57+00:00

Charlotte wrote:

IRC LOG

23:53 Pnkmjp: こんばんは。今お時間大丈夫でしょうか？
23:53 Charlotte: 大丈夫ですよ
23:54 Charlotte: dl中
23:55 Pnkmjp: ありがとうございます
23:56 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1166557 Yui Horie - PRESENTER (TV Size) [Kantan]]
23:58 Charlotte: Hit音でかくないでしょうか? Volume下げたほうが良いです
23:59 Charlotte: 00:00:816 - 80%?
00:01 Pnkmjp: なるほど 変更しました
00:05 Charlotte: 00:31:014 - 65 00:37:372 - 75 00:59:623 - 85
00:06 Charlotte: 00:28:233 - ここのじわじわ下がるvolumeは上記と合わせて調整して下さい
00:08 Charlotte: すみません 00:43:729 - 70 00:44:127 - 75のほうがより良いかな
00:10 Charlotte: 00:56:445 -  ここは個人的になくていいかも 01:25:054 - kiai 終端75
00:10 Charlotte: 01:29:623 - 65ぐらいからじわじわ下げると良さそう?
00:12 Charlotte: volume関連こんな感じでしょうか...そんなにvolume調整上手いわけではないんですがｗ
00:13 Pnkmjp: いえ･･･ Volume調整これが初めてなので参考にさせてもらいます！
00:13 Pnkmjp: 少し手間取っているので少々お待ちください･･･
00:14 Charlotte: 大丈夫です
00:17 Charlotte: KantanとOniだけでまずは大丈夫なので変更したら一度更新しておいて下さい。
00:17 Charlotte: 軽食食べてきますので10分前後で戻ります
00:25 Pnkmjp: いってらっしゃいです
00:25 Pnkmjp: 更新しました。目を通してくれれば幸いです
00:25 Charlotte: 戻りました
00:30 Charlotte: 00:15:915 (2,3) - d k D?
00:31 Charlotte: 00:18:299 (4,5,6,7) - ここなのですが　00:17:504 - ここにk追加。00:18:696 - d追加　00:19:094 - k　00:19:491 - 削除
00:32 Charlotte: こっちのほうがしっくりきませんか? どうでしょうか?
00:34 Pnkmjp: 両方変更しました！！！！！！！
00:36 Charlotte: 00:22:272 - k
00:37 Charlotte: 00:22:670 - ここは削除するかしないかお任せします
00:37 Charlotte: 00:23:862 - add k
00:39 Pnkmjp: 削除はしない方向でいきます
00:39 Pnkmjp: k ok
00:40 Charlotte: 00:23:862 - やっぱりd でここから k k d
00:40 Charlotte: 00:24:657 - ここから k k d
00:41 Charlotte: 00:25:849 - ここ削除
00:41 Pnkmjp: k k d ok
00:42 Pnkmjp: k k d k k ってKantan的に大丈夫ですか？
00:42 Charlotte: お手数ですが一度ここまででアプデかけてもらえますか?
00:43 Pnkmjp: simashita
00:44 Charlotte: 00:16:312 - k入れますか。d k D kで単調感が否めない
00:46 Charlotte: 00:23:862 - ここやはりkに戻していただいて 00:24:657 - ここdのほうがd k dで合いますね　00:25:849 - ここ削除
00:47 Pnkmjp: hh変更しました
00:49 Charlotte: 00:33:796 - 削除 00:34:193 - k
00:50 Charlotte: 曲で一番穏やかなパートで1/1-3連は不要な気がするのと取るほどの音がない
00:50 Pnkmjp: なるほど 変更しました
00:50 Charlotte: 00:40:551 - k
00:51 Pnkmjp: 変更しました
00:54 Charlotte: 00:42:935 - d 00:43:332 - k追加?
00:54 Charlotte: 00:46:114 (18,19) - vocal拾うならここと同じパートです
00:55 Pnkmjp: 追加しました！！！！！
00:55 Charlotte: pnkmさん何時まで起きてますか?
00:56 Pnkmjp: ４~5時前には寝ようと思ってます
00:56 Charlotte: ちょっと風呂入ってきていいですかね? 
00:57 Pnkmjp: いってらっしゃ～い
00:57 Pnkmjp: ！！
00:57 Charlotte: 戻ったらやります^^
01:32 Charlotte: back
01:32 Pnkmjp: hi
01:41 Charlotte: editでcrashしてまして、今戻りました;w;
01:41 Pnkmjp: あら・・・；；； おかえりなさいです；ｗ；
01:44 Charlotte: 00:54:855 - addd 00:55:650 - addk
01:44 Pnkmjp: ok
01:50 Charlotte: 01:29:226 (70) - finish不要
01:50 Pnkmjp: 分かりました
01:54 Charlotte: 01:28:829 - ここに Dで　01:29:226 (70) - ここfinishやはり入れてください
01:55 Pnkmjp: D finish 入れました
01:56 Charlotte: 00:00:816 - ここの緑線消して下さい
01:56 Charlotte: 赤線のvolを80%で
01:57 Pnkmjp: なるほど･･･　 消しました
01:59 Charlotte: 00:37:372 - ここ70で　00:43:729 - ここ75 vol
01:59 Charlotte: 00:44:127 - ここの緑線は消してもいいと思います

Thanks for modding

nyanmi-1828

445 posts

Joined August 2015

nyanmi-1828 2017-01-16T07:07:53+00:00

こんにちは～フロムPMです

　M4M

General

Kantan : OD=3 HP=7　HP:8というのは少し高いと思います。
Futsuu : OD=4 HP=6　Muzuと同じなのはどうかと…
Muzu : OD=4.5 HP=5　これはOniとの差を付ける提案です。同じでももちろん問題はないですが、低BPMということも考えて4.5がいいかなと思いました。
Oni : OD=5 HP=5　これは完璧かと

Kantan

00:18:696 - Delete?　サビとイントロの密度が同等になってしまっているので、その密度調整のため
00:25:054 - ^

00:30:219 - スピナーここで終わらせていいと思います。回転の回数を少なくすることでこのあとのノーツの叩きやすさが上がるからです。

00:40:153 - Delete?　次の赤線に置かれているノーツで十分パターンの変化は出来ているのでここは消しても問題ないです。
01:23:067 - ^?　Kantanでの1/1の5連は難しいと思います
01:29:226 - ^?　一つ前のノーツが赤線に置かれているため、ここを省略してもリズムを取ることが可能です。

Futsuu

00:03:796 - Delete?　ここは無理に置かなくてもいいと思いました。Futsuuまでは基本のリズムで構成したほうが初心者にやさしい譜面になると思います。

00:19:491 (12,13) - Delete?　ここには1/2ノーツを置くような音はないため削除が可能です
00:25:849 (24,25) - ^?　同様にここも同じことが言えますが、上の所よりも曲全体の音が大きくなっているため、25のみの削除なども可能です。

00:26:842 - same as 00:03:796

00:32:206 - add k?　少し全体の音が小さいので1/2を置くことはおすすめしませんが、00:36:378 - とのパターンとしてここにkを置くことができます。また、00:31:014 (1) - から00:35:782 (7) - まで、1/1しか配置されていないので、アクセントの面でも追加をおすすめできます。

00:37:769 (12,14) - 00:39:359 (17,19) - 00:41:544 - Delete?　サビと密度が同等になっています。音取りや叩きやすさを重視しても、ここは省略できる点です。

00:51:478 - same as 00:03:796

00:55:849 (49,50) - Delete?　これより前の1/2の休憩として、またここはあまり音もなく、ボーカルの直前で終わっているのでここは削除できます。

01:04:590 - same as 00:03:796

Muzu

00:06:776 (17,18) - Delete?　音的に必要ないかと…
00:40:253 - ^?　これは理由はないですが何となく1/2の方が流れがいいかなと

00:43:729 - add d or 00:46:908 - Delete?　どっちも音ないゾ＾～

Oni

全体的に見るといい譜面ですが、MuzuとOniの難易度の差が広い気がします。Innerを追加しこの難易度の難しさを下げることで、Spread的によくなると思います。
00:06:676 - 00:13:829 - 00:15:219 (7,11,13) - 00:16:610 - 00:19:590 (12,14) - 00:25:749 (36,40) - 00:35:981 - 00:43:034 - 00:56:147 (65,67) - 01:01:908 - 01:06:478 - 01:06:875 (37,39) - 01:08:067 - 01:08:465 (45,47) - 01:14:226 (68,72) - 01:15:021 - 01:17:902 - 01:22:968 -
これら全てが削除できます。手間をかけるのはすみませんが、一つずつ確認してみていただければ嬉しいです。

00:40:352 - k?　00:37:968 (34,35,36) - は1/4のdkd、その後に1/2のdkdと続いていたので、ここも1/4のdkkの後に1/2のdkkを続けたほうがいいと思いました。（パターン

00:41:743 (54,55) - Ctrl+G?　ボーカルの声の高さ的に

01:15:517 - k?　理由は上に同じです

BG◎◎◎◎◎◎◎
Oniでの圧倒的語彙力のNASA^^;

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yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-01-16T10:35:03+00:00

nyanmi-1828 wrote:
こんにちは～フロムPMです　M4M

General
Kantan : OD=3 HP=7　HP:8というのは少し高いと思います。
Futsuu : OD=4 HP=6　Muzuと同じなのはどうかと…
Muzu : OD=4.5 HP=5　これはOniとの差を付ける提案です。同じでももちろん問題はないですが、低BPMということも考えて4.5がいいかなと思いました。
Oni : OD=5 HP=5　これは完璧かと
FutsuuのOD4HP6はok
MuzuはOD5HP5で行きたいです
　

Futsuu
00:03:796 - Delete?　ここは無理に置かなくてもいいと思いました。Futsuuまでは基本のリズムで構成したほうが初心者にやさしい譜面になると思います。
おう消してやるぜ

00:19:491 (12,13) - Delete?　ここには1/2ノーツを置くような音はないため削除が可能です
00:25:849 (24,25) - ^?　同様にここも同じことが言えますが、上の所よりも曲全体の音が大きくなっているため、25のみの削除なども可能です。
ピアノのﾃﾚﾃﾚﾃﾝがあるので十分に置くような音あります。1/2のあと休憩も入れてあるので問題ないかと。

00:26:842 - same as 00:03:796
ok

00:32:206 - add k?　少し全体の音が小さいので1/2を置くことはおすすめしませんが、00:36:378 - とのパターンとしてここにkを置くことができます。また、00:31:014 (1) - から00:35:782 (7) - まで、1/1しか配置されていないので、アクセントの面でも追加をおすすめできます。
まぁあり

00:37:769 (12,14) - 00:39:359 (17,19) - 00:41:544 - Delete?　サビと密度が同等になっています。音取りや叩きやすさを重視しても、ここは省略できる点です。
00:41:544 - delete 流石に1/2使わないとFutsuuっぽさが出ないしちょっといじくった

00:51:478 - same as 00:03:796
ok

00:55:849 (49,50) - Delete?　これより前の1/2の休憩として、またここはあまり音もなく、ボーカルの直前で終わっているのでここは削除できます。
00:54:458 - deleteで密度調整

01:04:590 - same as 00:03:796
01:04:590 (15) - move 01:04:193 - 密度あまり変えたくないしtriplet増やしました
Muzu
00:06:776 (17,18) - Delete?　音的に必要ないかと…
まぁok
00:40:253 - ^?　これは理由はないですが何となく1/2の方が流れがいいかなと
ここ悩んだんですよね、でも消した方がよさそうだ

00:43:729 - add d or 00:46:908 - Delete?　どっちも音ないゾ＾～
vocalに合わせたほうが統一感あるのでaddちなみにdrumを取ると音があるのと無いのがわかります。

BG◎◎◎◎◎◎◎
Oniでの圧倒的語彙力のNASA^^;

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futsu

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-01-18T14:05:27+00:00

nyanmi-1828 wrote:
こんにちは～フロムPMです　M4M

General
Kantan : OD=3 HP=7　HP:8というのは少し高いと思います。
- Keep.
Futsuu : OD=4 HP=6　Muzuと同じなのはどうかと…
Muzu : OD=4.5 HP=5　これはOniとの差を付ける提案です。同じでももちろん問題はないですが、低BPMということも考えて4.5がいいかなと思いました。
Oni : OD=5 HP=5　これは完璧かと

Kantan
00:18:696 - Delete?　サビとイントロの密度が同等になってしまっているので、その密度調整のため
00:25:054 - ^

00:30:219 - スピナーここで終わらせていいと思います。回転の回数を少なくすることでこのあとのノーツの叩きやすさが上がるからです。
- 少し悩みましたが他diffと同じくしたいのでno change 他の人に言われたら変更します。
00:40:153 - Delete?　次の赤線に置かれているノーツで十分パターンの変化は出来ているのでここは消しても問題ないです。
01:23:067 - ^?　Kantanでの1/1の5連は難しいと思います
- ここ消すと違和感感じるのでno change
01:29:226 - ^?　一つ前のノーツが赤線に置かれているため、ここを省略してもリズムを取ることが可能です。
- 01:28:829 - のノーツを消しました。

Oni
全体的に見るといい譜面ですが、MuzuとOniの難易度の差が広い気がします。Innerを追加しこの難易度の難しさを下げることで、Spread的によくなると思います。
00:16:610 - 00:25:749 (36,40) - 00:35:981 - 00:43:034 - 01:01:908 - 01:06:478 - 01:06:875 (37,39) - 01:08:067 - 01:08:465 (45,47) - 01:14:226 (68,72) - 01:22:968 -
これら全てが削除できます。手間をかけるのはすみませんが、一つずつ確認してみていただければ嬉しいです。
- わざわざありがとうございます。上に残っているものはkeepで
00:06:676 - 00:13:829 - 00:15:219 (7,11,13) - 01:15:021 - 01:17:902 - を削除しました。
また、00:19:590 (12,14) - は 00:19:795 - を、 00:56:147 (65,67) - は 00:56:345 - を削除しました。

00:40:352 - k?　00:37:968 (34,35,36) - は1/4のdkd、その後に1/2のdkdと続いていたので、ここも1/4のdkkの後に1/2のdkkを続けたほうがいいと思いました。（パターン
- no change
00:41:743 (54,55) - Ctrl+G?　ボーカルの声の高さ的に
- 00:41:941 - は後ろの音を取っているのでno change

01:15:517 - k?　理由は上に同じです
BG◎◎◎◎◎◎◎ わかるなあ～～ほんまに◎◎◎◎◎◎◎
Oniでの圧倒的語彙力のNASA^^;

Ranked頑張ってください！

modありがとうございました！！！

Hantsuki

178 posts

Joined November 2013

Hantsuki 2017-01-20T09:11:59+00:00

NM from my queue

[Kantan]

00:21:478 (9) - d

[Futsuu]

00:02:405 (4) - d
01:28:829 (38,39) - what about kk?

[Oni]

01:14:524 (78) - k
01:14:623 (79) - d
01:14:723 (80) - k
01:23:465 (123,124) - don't you think there should be k k?
01:28:829 (145) - D
01:29:226 (146) - K

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-01-20T10:47:32+00:00

desireofpainx wrote:
NM from my queue

[Futsuu]
00:02:405 (4) - d umm... keep
01:28:829 (38,39) - what about kk? no change. vocal and Ease of doing

thank you for modding :3

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-01-23T09:22:11+00:00

desireofpainx wrote:
NM from my queue

[Kantan]
00:21:478 (9) - d
- no change
[Oni]
01:14:524 (78) - k
- no change
01:14:623 (79) - d
- no change
01:14:723 (80) - k
- no change
01:23:465 (123,124) - don't you think there should be k k?
01:28:829 (145) - D
- no change
01:29:226 (146) - K
- no change

Thank you for Modding

[R]

1,050 posts

Joined November 2013

[R] 2017-01-23T19:37:54+00:00

yo

[General]
place Finisher at first note

[Futsuu]
00:20:683 - change dong to unify part with 00:22:272 -
00:26:842 - add don to emphasize kat forward
00:34:590 - add note ? to make same pattern with 00:32:206 - or you can move 00:34:988 - to 00:34:789 - will match the vocal sound
00:36:180 - delete or move 00:35:385 - to make piano sound in 00:36:378 - clear
00:38:166 - delete and 00:37:968 - change kat, pattern will be nice
00:39:756 - delete and 00:39:359 - | 00:39:557 - add note for a good flow
00:42:140 - place a note instead of slider, kantan have note here

[Muzukashii]
00:06:974 - add note ?
00:10:153 (1) - spinner can end in 00:13:332 - and start placing note in 00:13:531 - comparing futsuu and muzukashii gap, doesn't have any different pattern here
00:22:074 - add kkk ?
00:34:193 - move 00:34:392 - macth with vocal
00:33:994 - change kat , pitch has drop in 00:34:193 -
00:45:517 (53,54,55) - invert, 00:45:517 - has different pitch with 00:45:120 -
00:55:253 - delete ? give a bit break
01:05:782 - add note here , here you has placing note 01:07:372 -

01:09:160 - maybe you can follow the oni pattern, the pattern bit akward and 01:09:955 (39,40,41) - not good to place triplet

[Oni]
00:01:014 - delete
00:01:610 - change kat
00:06:180 (24,25) - change kat to give a variety
00:07:968 - change don
00:26:147 - delete and place 00:26:246 - finisher instead
00:31:710 (4,5) - delete, part still calm imo
00:33:796 (15,16,17) - change k k d
00:31:014 (1,1,2,3) - delete ?
00:53:663 - or 00:53:862 - change kat to unify part with 00:53:266 -

maybe just that from me
good luck

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-01-24T11:56:10+00:00

[R] wrote:
yo

[General]
place Finisher at first note wwwww ok

[Futsuu]
00:20:683 - change dong to unify part with 00:22:272 -
ok
00:26:842 - add don to emphasize kat forward
no, I want to give blank.
00:34:590 - add note ? to make same pattern with 00:32:206 - or you can move 00:34:988 - to 00:34:789 - will match the vocal sound
add d
00:36:180 - delete or move 00:35:385 - to make piano sound in 00:36:378 - clear
delete
00:38:166 - delete and 00:37:968 - change kat, pattern will be nice
ok
00:39:756 - delete and 00:39:359 - | 00:39:557 - add note for a good flow
ok
00:42:140 - place a note instead of slider, kantan have note here
ok

[Muzukashii]
00:06:974 - add note ?
ok,add d
00:10:153 (1) - spinner can end in 00:13:332 - and start placing note in 00:13:531 - comparing futsuu and muzukashii gap, doesn't have any different pattern here
ok
00:22:074 - add kkk ?
ok
00:34:193 - move 00:34:392 - macth with vocal
00:33:994 - change kat , pitch has drop in 00:34:193 -
ok
00:45:517 (53,54,55) - invert, 00:45:517 - has different pitch with 00:45:120 -
ok
00:55:253 - delete ? give a bit break

I think it is unnatural how to use blanks. I changed the pattern slightly.

01:05:782 - add note here , here you has placing note 01:07:372 -
ok

01:09:160 - maybe you can follow the oni pattern, the pattern bit akward and 01:09:955 (39,40,41) - not good to place triplet
Changing pattern slightly. made a little blank.

maybe just that from me
good luck

thank you for modding :3

futsu

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-01-28T15:01:52+00:00

[R] wrote:
yo

[General]
place Finisher at first note

[Oni]
00:01:014 - delete
- no change
00:01:610 - change kat
- no change
00:06:180 (24,25) - change kat to give a variety

00:07:968 - change don

00:26:147 - delete and place 00:26:246 - finisher instead

00:31:710 (4,5) - delete, part still calm imo
- well... i prefer this rhythm
00:33:796 (15,16,17) - change k k d
- i hear this melody ddk
00:31:014 (1,1,2,3) - delete ?
- no change
00:53:663 - or 00:53:862 - change kat to unify part with 00:53:266 -
- changed 00:53:862 -

maybe just that from me
good luck

thank you for modding !

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

toara_fict 2017-02-06T03:30:30+00:00

NM

All diff

00:59:623 (1) - add Finish

Good Luck

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-06T03:32:06+00:00

toara_fict wrote:
NM

All diff

00:59:623 (1) - add Finish かえましたW

Good Luck

kiai timeのところ少しいじりました
thanks for modding ^-^

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-07T01:33:50+00:00

toara_fict wrote:
NM

All diff

00:59:623 (1) - add Finish　あ

Good Luck

@Pnkmjp 変えておいて

kouzuki_karen

948 posts

Joined March 2013

kouzuki_karen 2017-02-08T04:24:48+00:00

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Last edited by kouzuki_karen 2017-02-21T11:27:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Diva Days

291 posts

Joined October 2016

Diva Days 2017-02-09T04:53:51+00:00

[General]

The preview time line didn't snap on white line

[yzrin's Futsuu]

00:23:862 (22) - move to 00:24:061 as u did it at 00:41:147 (21)
at kiai time - better follow vocal, u just made only some notes follow vocal. cuz the most of Futsuu notes followed background sounds.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

Start - If Followed background sound, u missed some notes like u did it at 00:03:200

00:05:186 - better change to k ddd, This well follow vocal and what u want to follow.
00:08:564 - forgot d here

00:10:153 (1) - since it's Muzukashii, should change to notes.
: There's one idea to me if u can't add note here.

D___d D____D___d D and at end make it ddd

00:53:862 - better follow vocal, change it to kkk
01:26:643 (56) - move to 01:26:445 and change to k

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-09T09:14:35+00:00

Diva Days wrote:

[General]

The preview time line didn't snap on white line

[yzrin's Futsuu]

00:23:862 (22) - move to 00:24:061 as u did it at 00:41:147 (21)
no, 00:41:147 - The sound is clear.
but, 00:23:862 - I would like to take this as a drum.

at kiai time - better follow vocal, u just made only some notes follow vocal. cuz the most of Futsuu notes followed background sounds.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

Start - If Followed background sound, u missed some notes like u did it at 00:03:200

I think that it is better to keep density even if not so clear.

00:05:186 - better change to k ddd, This well follow vocal and what u want to follow.
vocal kkd is better
00:08:564 - forgot d here
lol

00:10:153 (1) - since it's Muzukashii, should change to notes.
: There's one idea to me if u can't add note here.

D___d D____D___d D and at end make it ddd
I think that it is good with spinner.

00:53:862 - better follow vocal, change it to kkk
change dkk
01:26:643 (56) - move to 01:26:445 and change to k
As the pattern collapses, ease of hitting is impaired.

thank you for modding.

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58602
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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GridSize: 32
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TitleUnicode:PRESENTER (TV Size)
Artist:Yui Horie
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:Pnkmjp
Version:yzrin's Muzukashii
Source:DOG DAYS
Tags:elements garden nakamura kanata ending yuzu__rinrin
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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-09T15:11:24+00:00

update

frukoyurdakul

638 posts

Joined December 2015

frukoyurdakul 2017-02-09T18:21:33+00:00

Hello from my modding queue.

Note: The preview point of the map is not snapped.

I need to say something now, I can't mod kantan pretty well compared to higher diffs, so if you want you can skip all of the suggestions about it.

Kantan

01:06:776 (43) - How about moving this note to 1/4 back?

01:08:365 (45) - ^

01:21:080 (62) - I think you can move this note to 01:20:882 - here.

Futsu is pretty good.

yzrin's Muzukashii

00:22:868 - How about adding two dons here in 1/4? It will support the drum sound.

00:56:743 - Maybe you can add a don here.

00:57:438 (102,103,104) - I've tried reversing the colors here and it sounded good.

01:28:531 - Adding dk in 1/4 here will fit to the outro of the song imo. It also support vocals.

Oni

I think you can use Od=6 or 5.5 here to make a difference between muzu and oni diffs.

00:01:412 (4,5) - Ctrl + g? The second sound is higher than the first one.

00:02:802 (9) - How about moving this one to 00:02:703 - here? The keyboard sound is here.

00:03:200 (11,12) - Instead of making these with finishers, I think you can use small kats to support the vocal since there is no crash cymbal sounds.

00:05:087 (18) - Not sure about this one, but i tried a kat here and it sounded good for me. It is for variety.

00:09:160 (40) - You can move this one to 00:09:061 - here to match the keyboard sound.

00:09:756 - Maybe add a d here, since there is a slight keyboard sound also. But in this way, it looks good too.

00:22:868 - How about adding two d notes in 1/4 starting from here to make a ddd triplet? With this way the drums are filled in the diff properly.

00:43:332 (6,7,8,9) - I'll suggest a whole different thing for these notes. Now, how about changing 00:43:332 (6,7) - these notes to kat, 00:43:729 (8) - removing this finisher and adding finisher to 00:44:127 (9) - this? I think it will emphasize the keyboards and drums together with this way.

00:45:120 (13) - Adding a finisher will sound good. It also emphasizes the high pitch keyboards here.

00:50:683 (37) - Filling a finisher to support the crash cymbal will be a good idea.

00:52:272 (44) - Changing this one to DON will also support the crash cymbal here. I said don for variety, if it's not good enough you can keep it as a kat.

00:53:266 (48) - I recommend a finisher here too.

01:04:193 (24) - This vocal sound is the lowest compared to 01:02:802 (19,20,21,22,23) - these notes so i recommend you to change it to a don.

01:08:166 (48) - The vocal is low compared to 01:08:266 (49) - this note. There is also a slight kick sound to put the note as a don.

01:09:756 (57) - Kat maybe? The vocal is pretty high.

01:17:405 (93) - A kat will sound good there.

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-10T07:56:34+00:00

frukoyurdakul wrote:
Hello from my modding queue.

Note: The preview point of the map is not snapped.

I need to say something now, I can't mod kantan pretty well compared to higher diffs, so if you want you can skip all of the suggestions about it.

Kantan
01:06:776 (43) - How about moving this note to 1/4 back?

01:08:365 (45) - ^

01:21:080 (62) - I think you can move this note to 01:20:882 - here.
- no change

Oni
I think you can use Od=6 or 5.5 here to make a difference between muzu and oni diffs.
- umm... keep...

00:01:412 (4,5) - Ctrl + g? The second sound is higher than the first one.

00:02:802 (9) - How about moving this one to 00:02:703 - here? The keyboard sound is here.

00:03:200 (11,12) - Instead of making these with finishers, I think you can use small kats to support the vocal since there is no crash cymbal sounds.

00:05:087 (18) - Not sure about this one, but i tried a kat here and it sounded good for me. It is for variety.
- no change

00:09:160 (40) - You can move this one to 00:09:061 - here to match the keyboard sound.

00:09:756 - Maybe add a d here, since there is a slight keyboard sound also. But in this way, it looks good too.

00:22:868 - How about adding two d notes in 1/4 starting from here to make a ddd triplet? With this way the drums are filled in the diff properly.

00:43:332 (6,7,8,9) - I'll suggest a whole different thing for these notes. Now, how about changing 00:43:332 (6,7) - these notes to kat, 00:43:729 (8) - removing this finisher and adding finisher to 00:44:127 (9) - this? I think it will emphasize the keyboards and drums together with this way.

00:45:120 (13) - Adding a finisher will sound good. It also emphasizes the high pitch keyboards here.
- no change

00:50:683 (37) - Filling a finisher to support the crash cymbal will be a good idea.

00:52:272 (44) - Changing this one to DON will also support the crash cymbal here. I said don for variety, if it's not good enough you can keep it as a kat.
- keep

00:53:266 (48) - I recommend a finisher here too.

01:04:193 (24) - This vocal sound is the lowest compared to 01:02:802 (19,20,21,22,23) - these notes so i recommend you to change it to a don.

01:08:166 (48) - The vocal is low compared to 01:08:266 (49) - this note. There is also a slight kick sound to put the note as a don.

01:09:756 (57) - Kat maybe? The vocal is pretty high.
- no change

01:17:405 (93) - A kat will sound good there.
- no change

thank you for modding

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-12T09:54:39+00:00

frukoyurdakul wrote:
Futsu is pretty good. thanks ><

[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:22:868 - How about adding two dons here in 1/4? It will support the drum sound.
No change.
I think it's a good idea. But I'd like to get an easy-to-understand melody.

00:56:743 - Maybe you can add a don here.
ok,changed

00:57:438 (102,103,104) - I've tried reversing the colors here and it sounded good.
nice idia.

01:28:531 - Adding dk in 1/4 here will fit to the outro of the song imo. It also support vocals.
keep...
At muzu I feel a little discomfort.
I will change it when another modder points out.

thank you for modding~
@Pnkmjp sorry late.　許せ

Otakumojp

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-12T10:50:42+00:00

update

zigizigiefe

952 posts

Joined March 2013

zigizigiefe 2017-02-13T00:41:02+00:00

from my queue o/

[Muzukashii]

00:23:465 (35,36) - CTRL+G,because first sound is low,second is high,also that would be fit.
00:26:246 (46,47,48,49,50) - Add finisher,sounds are too strong imo
00:45:120 (52) - That sound is strong,too.Why didn't you add finisher :/
01:09:557 (38) - Move to 01:09:458 - for better vocal emphasis
01:25:451 (52) - There is no drum sound.
01:27:835 (60) - Same above

[Oni]

00:03:200 (11,12,13,14) - Strong drum sounds.So add finisher pls
00:31:412 (1) - There is no any vocal,piano or drum sound.
00:40:551 (48,51,54) - That's just suggestion..Drum sounds are too strong,try it with finisher.
01:03:200 - Add a note here if you wanna emphasize vocal here,that would be better.
01:03:796 - ^
01:23:465 (126) - ddkdkkkkk pattern isn't good.Use more common pattern,like ddkdkkkkd
01:24:061 (128,129,130,131) - These notes for vocal emphasis is unnecessary for here.

I guess that's it,Good Luck

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-13T07:15:42+00:00

zigizigiefe wrote:
from my queue o/

[Muzukashii]
00:23:465 (35,36) - CTRL+G,because first sound is low,second is high,also that would be fit.
ok
00:26:246 (46,47,48,49,50) - Add finisher,sounds are too strong imo
m,ok
00:45:120 (52) - That sound is strong,too.Why didn't you add finisher :/
wwwww ok
01:09:557 (38) - Move to 01:09:458 - for better vocal emphasis
ok
01:25:451 (52) - There is no drum sound.
deleted
01:27:835 (60) - Same above
Move to 01: 27: 736 - in order to pick up vocal
I guess that's it,Good Luck

thank you for modding~

w

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toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

toara_fict 2017-02-13T19:59:01+00:00

No kds.

[

General]

Romanised Artist : Yui Horie -> Horie Yui
全難易度 01:32:405 - spinのおわりここじゃない？

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[

Kantan]

00:57:835 (31,32) - finishで色そろえていいと思う

それだけ

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[

Futsuu]

00:10:153 (1) - spinの終わり違和感

それだけ

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[

Muzukashii]

00:18:696 (17) - change d ( kkddkでいいかなって )
00:45:120 (52) - finishにするかkにするかしたいかな個人的にはkかなって感じ
00:55:253 (93,94,95) - swap ( kkdでいいかな後ろの音的に )

Nice diff.

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[

Oni]

00:22:074 (23,24,25) - change dkd or kkd is better.
00:25:849 (40) - change k ? ( 正直どっちでもいいと思う)
00:40:352 (47) - change k ( 後ろの音あがってる )
00:47:306 (23) - change K ( 00:44:127 (9) - 合わせて )
00:47:703 (24,25,26,27) - change kddk oe dkdk ( 00:48:100 (26) - ここはdだとおもう )
00:52:272 (44) - change d ( 00:50:683 (37) - 00:53:266 (48) - 音の高さそんな変わらない )
00:53:862 (50,51,52,53) - ここの２連打くどいとおもうからこんな感じでいいんじゃない？ ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316326 )
00:57:835 (72,73,74) - add finishでもいいかと
01:01:213 - add k ( 01:01:610 (11,12,13,14,15) - ここが違和感なくなるとおもう )
01:02:306 (17) - move 01:02:504 (18) - & 01:02:405 (17) - ここからddk
01:10:948 - ここから３連打のdddでも追加していいんじゃない？ kiaiだし音はあるし
01:13:928 - add d & 01:13:729 (77) - change k ( 01:01:213 - ここと同じ理由 )
01:15:120 (87,88,89) - swap. ddkでいいのでは
01:22:471 (121) - ここから https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316392 これでもいいかと Vocalでとりたくないならそのままで

割と主観だから全部変えなくていいと思う

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ざっくりとしか見てないからこんな感じで

頑張れクソガキ

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-14T01:56:39+00:00

toara_fict wrote:
No kds.

[ General]
Romanised Artist : Yui Horie -> Horie Yui
できるならHorie YuiがいいけどそーすあるからYui Horieとかいうクソダサい感じになってる
http://king-cr.jp/artist/horie/

全難易度 01:32:405 - spinのおわりここじゃない？
むずとfutsuに適用

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[ Futsuu]
00:10:153 (1) - spinの終わり違和感
違和感あるけど打数調整したいんご...

それだけ
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[ Muzukashii]
00:18:696 (17) - change d ( kkddkでいいかなって )
ok
00:45:120 (52) - finishにするかkにするかしたいかな個人的にはkかなって感じ
上でfinishにしてたらしい、pnkmjpの更新遅れ

00:55:253 (93,94,95) - swap ( kkdでいいかな後ろの音的に )
ok

Nice diff.
　アリガトウ_(:3 」∠)_

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ざっくりとしか見てないからこんな感じで

頑張れクソガキ

arigatoara_fict

悲報(F)

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Pnkmjp(M)

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256,192,16710,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,17107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,17306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,17703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18100,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,18299,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,18498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,18696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,18895,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,19292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,19392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,19491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,19690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,19888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20286,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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288,224,20882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,21080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,21279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,21478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,22074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,22173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,23465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-14T17:12:45+00:00

zigizigiefe wrote:
from my queue o/

[Oni]
00:03:200 (11,12,13,14) - Strong drum sounds.So add finisher pls
- added finisher to 11,12,14
00:31:412 (1) - There is no any vocal,piano or drum sound.
- no change
00:40:551 (48,51,54) - That's just suggestion..Drum sounds are too strong,try it with finisher.
- added finisher to 00:41:941 (54) -
01:03:200 - Add a note here if you wanna emphasize vocal here,that would be better.
- added d
01:03:796 - ^
- added d
01:23:465 (126) - ddkdkkkkk pattern isn't good.Use more common pattern,like ddkdkkkkd
- i think it is high pitch. no change
01:24:061 (128,129,130,131) - These notes for vocal emphasis is unnecessary for here.
- umm... keep
I guess that's it,Good Luck

thank you for modding !!

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-14T17:35:21+00:00

toara_fict wrote:
No kds.

[ General]
Romanised Artist : Yui Horie -> Horie Yui
- これまでのRankedのやつ見てみたらHorie Yui多かったし変更！

全難易度 01:32:405 - spinのおわりここじゃない？
- カエタ
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Kantan]
00:57:835 (31,32) - finishで色そろえていいと思う
- K K にした
それだけ
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

[ Oni]
00:22:074 (23,24,25) - change dkd or kkd is better.
- kkd にした

00:25:849 (40) - change k ? ( 正直どっちでもいいと思う)

00:40:352 (47) - change k ( 後ろの音あがってる )

00:47:306 (23) - change K ( 00:44:127 (9) - 合わせて )

00:47:703 (24,25,26,27) - change kddk oe dkdk ( 00:48:100 (26) - ここはdだとおもう )
- d k d k に変えました

00:52:272 (44) - change d ( 00:50:683 (37) - 00:53:266 (48) - 音の高さそんな変わらない )

00:53:862 (50,51,52,53) - ここの２連打くどいとおもうからこんな感じでいいんじゃない？ ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316326 )

00:57:835 (72,73,74) - add finishでもいいかと

01:01:213 - add k ( 01:01:610 (11,12,13,14,15) - ここが違和感なくなるとおもう )

01:02:306 (17) - move 01:02:504 (18) - & 01:02:405 (17) - ここからddk

01:10:948 - ここから３連打のdddでも追加していいんじゃない？ kiaiだし音はあるし

01:13:928 - add d & 01:13:729 (77) - change k ( 01:01:213 - ここと同じ理由 )

01:15:120 (87,88,89) - swap. ddkでいいのでは
- うーんちょっと違和感ある感じしたから kkk にした

01:22:471 (121) - ここから https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316392 これでもいいかと Vocalでとりたくないならそのままで
- そのままにしたい

割と主観だから全部変えなくていいと思う
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

ざっくりとしか見てないからこんな感じで

頑張れクソガキ

modありがとナス！

komasy

621 posts

Joined October 2012

komasy 2017-02-17T15:17:43+00:00

M4Mです! mod超初心者ですが、よろしくお願いします。

Oni

00:03:200 (11,12) - 00:03:994 (14) - delete finish? そんな強い音なっていないのに加え周りとの雰囲気を考えたときに結構浮いているような印象を受けました

00:22:670 (26) - delete finish? 上の理由に加え1/4と隣接した同色なのでプレイ感の向上を図る目的もあります

00:23:465 (31) - change to k? 4小節前の1/2のddkdから縁の量を増やして変化を付けるという目的と00:24:855 (35,36,37) - がkkdだから視覚的な面で綺麗にするという目的です

00:31:014 (1) - delete? ここからはボーカル合わせになっていることを考えるとここに音符を置くのは少し違和感を感じました。

00:31:809 (3) - delete? ボーカルがないのと、静かな部分なので密度を下げてほかの場所を盛り上げる役割です

00:32:206 (4,5) - ctrl+g? ボーカルの高低です。(ctrl+g後、00:32:206 (4) - をkにするのもありだと思います)

00:33:299 (9) - change to d and 00:33:398 (10) - delete? ^^

00:38:166 (33) - change to k and move to 00:38:266 - ? ボーカル合わせを進めることで統一感の増加に加え軽快な気持ちで叩くことができるかもしれません

00:38:763 (36) - change to k? ボーカルの高低です。キック音から外れることになりますが、あんまり目立たないので…

00:39:756 (42) - move to 00:39:855 - ? ^^の提案を受けた場合は変更することをお勧めします~

00:40:551 (46) - and 00:41:147 (49) - add finish? この付近の小節で縁大音符を置くことでパートの代わり際としてぴったりだと思います

00:44:425 - add k? ここは好みです　個人的にはこうしたほうが00:44:723 (12) - の音が際立って好きです

00:47:604 - ^

00:48:696 (30) - change to d? 00:47:902 (27,28,29) - ここがkdkなので変化を付けたいです

00:55:451 (62) - change to k? ドンが三回単音で続くのは若干寂しい…？

01:01:213 (9) - move to 01:00:617 - こっちの方が伴奏のリズムを気持ちよくフォローできると思います。

01:03:398 (23) - change to k? ボーカルの高低をフォロー。

01:04:392 (28) - changeto k? ここもやっぱりボーカルをフォローしたい。01:04:988 (32) - ここも同じくカツになっているので…

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41) - change to kddk? この配置だと両端のkがボーカルにぴったりだと思います。

01:07:074 (44) - change to d? こちらの方が聞こえがいいと思います。

01:07:868 (49) - move to 01:08:067 - ^^と^の部分とリズムパターンを統一したほうがいいと思います

01:13:332 - 01:13:431 - にadd kし、01:13:431 (78) - をchange to k 、そして01:13:729 (79) - をchange to dして01:13:928 (80) - をdelete?
つまり01:13:133 (77) - から、「k kkk d kkdkdkd 」というのはどうでしょうという提案です。01:01:213 (9) - を変更した場合はこちらもそれに合わせるといいと思います

01:14:623 (87) - delete? ピアノの音小さくなっていっているし、5連に収めておいた方が纏まりがいいと思います。

01:14:921 (88) - change to k? ボーカル　この提案を受けた場合は01:15:120 (89,90) - をchange to dd?

01:22:570 - 個人的にadd kです。ボーカル鳴っているためです。ここはお好みで

01:25:849 (144) - change to k?

01:27:041 (149) - ここadd d して01:27:438 (150) - をchange to kというのはどうでしょうか

Muzukashii

00:56:842 (101) - 1/4一個分左にmove?　ここはどうしても違和感を感じました

01:03:398 (13) - change to k? ボーカルの高低に合わせる目的です

01:05:385 - や 01:05:584 - にadd k? 休符を短くして流れを崩したくない感じです

01:08:961 (38) - delete?　次の付点リズムに向けて

01:16:114 (19) - ^^^

Futsuu

00:03:200 (5) - change to k?

00:06:378 (10) - change to k?

01:03:200 - add d?

01:04:988 (17) - finisherもありだと思います
01:05:981 (18) - ^
01:10:749 (30) - ^
01:11:345 (31) - ^
01:12:339 (1) - ^
01:18:697 (18) - ^
01:20:286 (21) - ^
01:28:829 (39,40) - ^

01:15:915 (12) - add d?

01:29:226 (40) - change to k?

Kantan

00:24:657 (14) - change to k?

00:44:921 (16) - add d and 00:45:120 (16) - move to 00:45:319 - ?　00:46:114 (17,18) - ここと合わせ簡易的なリズムに？

00:49:292 - add k?

01:29:226 (75) - move to 01:29:027 - ?

GOOD LUCK!!!

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-18T11:21:00+00:00

komasy wrote:
M4Mです! mod超初心者ですが、よろしくお願いします。

[Muzukashii]
00:56:842 (101) - 1/4一個分左にmove?　ここはどうしても違和感を感じました
音聞き取り間違えてますね...直しました、changed

01:03:398 (13) - change to k? ボーカルの高低に合わせる目的です
パターン被るのでdd k d に変更しました。

01:05:385 - や 01:05:584 - にadd k? 休符を短くして流れを崩したくない感じです
わかるけどキープで。自分としてはMuzuplayerにも休憩を与えたいです。

01:08:961 (38) - delete?　次の付点リズムに向けて
no change.難所作りです。ただ坦々とプレイしたって面白くないじゃないですか。kiaiなのでいくらか許容されると思います。

01:16:114 (19) - ^^^
ok

[Futsuu]
00:03:200 (5) - change to k?
no change. なんで

00:06:378 (10) - change to k?
no change. なんで

01:03:200 - add d?
no change. 休みを潰したくありません。

01:04:988 (17) - finisherもありだと思います
01:05:981 (18) - ^
01:10:749 (30) - ^
01:11:345 (31) - ^
01:12:339 (1) - ^　ok
01:18:697 (18) - ^
01:20:286 (21) - ^
01:28:829 (39,40) - ^
その他no change. なぜFinishをつける意味があるか理解できませんでした。別につけなくてもいい音だと思います。

01:15:915 (12) - add d?
no change. 休みを潰したくないです。

01:29:226 (40) - change to k?
no change. 音程そのままなんですけど。

GOOD LUCK!!!

modありがとうございました

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-19T23:35:55+00:00

komasy wrote:
M4Mです! mod超初心者ですが、よろしくお願いします。

Oni
00:03:200 (11,12) - 00:03:994 (14) - delete finish? そんな強い音なっていないのに加え周りとの雰囲気を考えたときに結構浮いているような印象を受けました
- 他よりも強い音がなっているように感じたのでfinishを置きました。他のmodder様に同じところ言われたら変更します。

00:22:670 (26) - delete finish? 上の理由に加え1/4と隣接した同色なのでプレイ感の向上を図る目的もあります
- No change.

00:23:465 (31) - change to k? 4小節前の1/2のddkdから縁の量を増やして変化を付けるという目的と00:24:855 (35,36,37) - がkkdだから視覚的な面で綺麗にするという目的です

00:31:014 (1) - delete? ここからはボーカル合わせになっていることを考えるとここに音符を置くのは少し違和感を感じました。
- ピアノの音がなっているしno change

00:31:809 (3) - delete? ボーカルがないのと、静かな部分なので密度を下げてほかの場所を盛り上げる役割です
- ここは個人的に3連打にしたい… Keep

00:32:206 (4,5) - ctrl+g? ボーカルの高低です。(ctrl+g後、00:32:206 (4) - をkにするのもありだと思います)
- Keep

00:33:299 (9) - change to d and 00:33:398 (10) - delete? ^^
- 上の理由と同じくKeep

00:38:166 (33) - change to k and move to 00:38:266 - ? ボーカル合わせを進めることで統一感の増加に加え軽快な気持ちで叩くことができるかもしれません
- change to k ここに2連を置くのは違和感を感じました。

00:38:763 (36) - change to k? ボーカルの高低です。キック音から外れることになりますが、あんまり目立たないので…

00:39:756 (42) - move to 00:39:855 - ? ^^の提案を受けた場合は変更することをお勧めします~
- No change

00:40:551 (46) - and 00:41:147 (49) - add finish? この付近の小節で縁大音符を置くことでパートの代わり際としてぴったりだと思います

00:44:425 - add k? ここは好みです　個人的にはこうしたほうが00:44:723 (12) - の音が際立って好きです
- メッチャ悩みましたがkeepさせていただきます。

00:47:604 - ^
- 同上

00:48:696 (30) - change to d? 00:47:902 (27,28,29) - ここがkdkなので変化を付けたいです

00:55:451 (62) - change to k? ドンが三回単音で続くのは若干寂しい…？

01:01:213 (9) - move to 01:00:617 - こっちの方が伴奏のリズムを気持ちよくフォローできると思います。

01:03:398 (23) - change to k? ボーカルの高低をフォロー。
- Keep

01:04:392 (28) - changeto k? ここもやっぱりボーカルをフォローしたい。01:04:988 (32) - ここも同じくカツになっているので…

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41) - change to kddk? この配置だと両端のkがボーカルにぴったりだと思います。

01:07:074 (44) - change to d? こちらの方が聞こえがいいと思います。
- No change.

01:07:868 (49) - move to 01:08:067 - ^^と^の部分とリズムパターンを統一したほうがいいと思います
- 同じ4連というのも少しアレなのでここは少しアレンジを効かせました。他のmodder様に指摘されたら変更します。

01:13:332 - 01:13:431 - にadd kし、01:13:431 (78) - をchange to k 、そして01:13:729 (79) - をchange to dして01:13:928 (80) - をdelete?
つまり01:13:133 (77) - から、「k kkk d kkdkdkd 」というのはどうでしょうという提案です。01:01:213 (9) - を変更した場合はこちらもそれに合わせるといいと思います
- 01:13:133 (77) - を change to d 01:13:332にadd k 01:13:431 (78) - をchange to kしました。

01:14:623 (87) - delete? ピアノの音小さくなっていっているし、5連に収めておいた方が纏まりがいいと思います。
- ピアノの音がそこまで小さくないのでNo change.

01:14:921 (88) - change to k? ボーカル　この提案を受けた場合は01:15:120 (89,90) - をchange to dd?
- No change.

01:22:570 - 個人的にadd kです。ボーカル鳴っているためです。ここはお好みで
- No change.

01:25:849 (144) - change to k?

01:27:041 (149) - ここadd d して01:27:438 (150) - をchange to kというのはどうでしょうか
Kantan
00:24:657 (14) - change to k?

00:44:921 (16) - add d and 00:45:120 (16) - move to 00:45:319 - ?　00:46:114 (17,18) - ここと合わせ簡易的なリズムに？
- 難易度が難易度なのであまり難しい配置を置きたくないです。00:45:120 (16) - は周りの間隔があいているかつ強い音がなっているので置いています。

00:49:292 - add k?
- Keepさせてください。

01:29:226 (75) - move to 01:29:027 - ?
- No change.
GOOD LUCK!!!

modありがとうございました！

Waribashi

638 posts

Joined January 2013

Waribashi 2017-02-20T00:21:08+00:00

こんにちは。MODします。（主観的な指摘が主です）from gamechat
[Kantan]
スピナーの終了地点を00:30:617 (18) - から00:29:425 (18) - に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。次のノーツにスピナーが貼り付いてて少々忙しないかもしれません。
[yzrin's Futsuu]
01:17:504 (16) - delete (サビの同じリズム箇所(01:04:789 (1) - 01:11:147 (30) - )をとってなくて敢えてここを取る必要はないかなと感じました。)
[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:37:769 (24,25) - change to k d (変えるのなら00:39:359 (30,31) - ここも)
01:01:809 (6) - change to d (「響けば」の「ば」をとるのならば音階的に下がっているよう聞こえるのでここはkより低いdで取るべきだと思います。）
[Oni]
00:22:670 (26) - change to d (こ↑こ↓よくわかんなかったです)
00:31:710 (2,3) - delete (静かなパートということもあり密度をそれに合わせる形にしたほうがいいと感じます。）
00:33:299 (8,9) - delete (上と同様)
00:34:789 (14) - change to d
00:52:272 (44) - change to D
00:58:630 (75) - delete (ここを切ることによって前のドラムのキレの良さを再現できると思います）

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね；；；
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います！good luck

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-02-20T02:24:58+00:00

KitajimaYN wrote:
こんにちは。MODします。（主観的な指摘が主です）from gamechat

[yzrin's Futsuu]
01:17:504 (16) - delete (サビの同じリズム箇所(01:04:789 (1) - 01:11:147 (30) - )をとってなくて敢えてここを取る必要はないかなと感じました。)
keep... あえて取らなくてもいいけど... voとりたさ... ん～...
[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:37:769 (24,25) - change to k d (変えるのなら00:39:359 (30,31) - ここも)
changed. なるほど、ここ一帯こねくり回しましたここ結構いい感じなのでfutsuuもchangeしました。
01:01:809 (6) - change to d (「響けば」の「ば」をとるのならば音階的に下がっているよう聞こえるのでここはkより低いdで取るべきだと思います。）
dの方が理にかなってるんですけど、kの方が良い説ある気がする（？）

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね；；；
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います！good luck

modありがとうごじゃいました

Fu

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-02-27T10:15:40+00:00

KitajimaYN wrote:
こんにちは。MODします。（主観的な指摘が主です）from gamechat
[Kantan]
スピナーの終了地点を00:30:617 (18) - から00:29:425 (18) - に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。次のノーツにスピナーが貼り付いてて少々忙しないかもしれません。
- 確かにギリギリで叩ききったプレイヤーが次のノーツでミスをしてしまう可能性も無しではないので短くしました。
[Oni]
00:22:670 (26) - change to d (こ↑こ↓よくわかんなかったです)
- 他より音強いから～って置いたんだけど今見たらこれわっかんねえな戻しました。
00:31:710 (2,3) - delete (静かなパートということもあり密度をそれに合わせる形にしたほうがいいと感じます。）
- なるほど fixed !
00:33:299 (8,9) - delete (上と同様)
- fixed
00:34:789 (14) - change to d
- No change
00:52:272 (44) - change to D
- fixed
00:58:630 (75) - delete (ここを切ることによって前のドラムのキレの良さを再現できると思います）
- fixed

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね；；；
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います！good luck

modありがとうございました！！返信遅れて申し訳ないです ;3

gaston_2199

1,140 posts

Joined February 2015

gaston_2199 2017-03-01T19:19:41+00:00

Hi!
NM from my queue~

[

Kantan]

00:22:670 (11) - Kat for consistence as 00:16:312 (3) -
00:25:054 - You can add kat here to follow the melody
00:25:451 (15) - This change to kat for the same reason as above (only if you accept)
00:31:014 (1,2) - Why not change to kat? Because the sound is sharper than this 00:37:372 (7,8) -
00:53:266 (26,27,28,29,30) - How about dkkdd? 00:54:061 (27,28) - I listen these notes turn up the volumen, so maybe change to kat
01:10:352 (48) - These notes 01:09:160 (46,47,49,50) - you follow the vocal. In my opinion it's sounds good if you delete 01:10:352 (48) - to emphatizes better the vocal

[

yzrin's Futsuu]

How about change the diff name to "yuzu's Futsuu"? Only my opinion c:

00:02:008 (3) - This note is unnesesary, no destacable sound. Maybe move to 00:03:597 - to follow the vocal?
00:03:994 (6) - Kat? vocal
00:23:465 (21,22) - Change to don? This 00:23:465 (21) - is the same that 00:17:107 (7) -, and this too 00:23:862 (22) - but the tone is more low than 00:17:504 (8) -

[

yzrin's Muzukashii]

00:32:802 (7) - Move this to 00:32:604 - to follow the piano, is better.
00:33:398 (9) - The same as above, move to 00:33:200 -
00:34:193 - Add kat to follow piano?
01:10:153 (41,43) - Delete this, because is the same than here 01:09:160 (37,38,39) - and emphatize the vocal

[

Oni]

00:10:153 (45) -Change to don?
01:23:465 (133,134) - Change to don? In the others diff was always don

That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~

crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-01T21:49:18+00:00

gaston_2199 wrote:
Hi!
NM from my queue~
[ Kantan]
00:22:670 (11) - Kat for consistence as 00:16:312 (3) -
- i think it is low pitch. No change
00:25:054 - You can add kat here to follow the melody
- ok
00:25:451 (15) - This change to kat for the same reason as above (only if you accept)
- I think it is the same as pitch with 00:27:041 (18) -
00:31:014 (1,2) - Why not change to kat? Because the sound is sharper than this 00:37:372 (7,8) -
- ok
00:53:266 (26,27,28,29,30) - How about dkkdd? 00:54:061 (27,28) - I listen these notes turn up the volumen, so maybe change to kat
- ok :3
01:10:352 (48) - These notes 01:09:160 (46,47,49,50) - you follow the vocal. In my opinion it's sounds good if you delete 01:10:352 (48) - to emphatizes better the vocal
- ok
[ Oni]
00:10:153 (45) -Change to don?
- I follow the vocal. I think this pitch is high
01:23:465 (133,134) - Change to don? In the others diff was always don
- ok changed
That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~

Thank you for modding !!

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-03-02T01:30:41+00:00

gaston_2199 wrote:
Hi!
NM from my queue~
[ yzrin's Futsuu]
How about change the diff name to "yuzu's Futsuu"? Only my opinion c:
00:02:008 (3) - This note is unnesesary, no destacable sound. Maybe move to 00:03:597 - to follow the vocal?
ok
00:03:994 (6) - Kat? vocal
ok
00:23:465 (21,22) - Change to don? This 00:23:465 (21) - is the same that 00:17:107 (7) -, and this too 00:23:862 (22) - but the tone is more low than 00:17:504 (8) -
change d k

[ yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:32:802 (7) - Move this to 00:32:604 - to follow the piano, is better.
00:33:398 (9) - The same as above, move to 00:33:200 -
changed it a little by myself.
00:34:193 - Add kat to follow piano?
If it is piano sound, I think that this is correct.
01:10:153 (41,43) - Delete this, because is the same than here 01:09:160 (37,38,39) - and emphatize the vocal
ok.

That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~

thanks for modding ~

フつ

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crim

207 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

crim 2017-03-02T09:22:13+00:00

update

Remus

452 posts

Joined July 2015

Remus 2017-03-03T14:34:50+00:00

Hello.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

00:21:875 - miss don here. There is drum sound.
00:27:637 - i think that you should put here kat/don here to not miss very loud instrumental. Move spinner a bit further.
00:30:617 - miss loud sound again. As we know, Muzu isn't diff where you can put anything you want, so you should use any of your opportunities here(i mean use any your chance to emphasize the sound).
00:45:517 (53,54,55,56) - what about dkkd here?
00:48:696 (66,67,68,69) - well, you made it further, so last suggestion SeemsGood.
00:56:842 (101) - move it to 00:56:743. Imo, sounds better.
01:29:623 - as i said before

[Oni]

00:27:637 - i mentioned it in Muzu. Better to map and move spinner a bit.
00:33:796 (9) - kat for better rhytm.
01:04:392 (28) - the same reason as above. Lack of kats sometimes looks weird, when before/after this part there much of them(kats). Stability is always good, so better to fix here.
01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86) - kkkdk?
01:21:875 (121,125) - the same as above, but here you can skip this, because it is looks nice even without kats.
01:29:623 - if you decided to fix that moment before, fix here too.

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.

yuzu__rinrin

943 posts

Joined July 2014

yuzu__rinrin 2017-03-04T10:15:05+00:00

Remus wrote:
Hello.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:21:875 - miss don here. There is drum sound.
ok
00:27:637 - i think that you should put here kat/don here to not miss very loud instrumental. Move spinner a bit further.
When putting the notes there will be uncomfortable at the beginning of the spinner.
00:30:617 - miss loud sound again. As we know, Muzu isn't diff where you can put anything you want, so you should use any of your opportunities here(i mean use any your chance to emphasize the sound).

It is best to start a notes from here
00:45:517 (53,54,55,56) - what about dkkd here?
I think kddk is better.
00:48:696 (66,67,68,69) - well, you made it further, so last suggestion SeemsGood.
00:56:842 (101) - move it to 00:56:743. Imo, sounds better.
ok
01:29:623 - as i said before
no

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.

thank you for modding :3

q

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