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VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [OsuMania]

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00:18:644 (18644|1) - 00:21:253 (21253|3) - 01:55:166 (115166|3) - 노트 하나씩 추가하시는게 어떨까요
00:36:334 (36334|0) - ~ 00:36:905 (36905|3) - 요 부분이 수정이 필요할 거 같기도 하고 KEEP해도 될거 같기도 하고.. 2 134 2 134 2 134 트릴로 가는것도 좋지 않을까 생각해요 한번 고려해주셨으면 합니다
00:36:905 (36905|3,45709|1,45709|0,45709|2) - 하나 빼시는 게 키음상 더 자연스럽지 않을까..싶네요

수고하세요!
Seulgi
Hi

아따 BG 참한 처자들이네

[Rem's ADVANCED]

00:20:274 - 여기 이거 어떰? 박수(?) 소리 나는데

00:25:492 - 2 에 숏놋 추가하고 그 뒤에 00:25:818 (25818|1) - 이 노트는 1로 이동 시키는게 어때

00:45:872 - 요부분 음이 좀 커서 2놋 해도될거같은데? 3에 숏놋 추가 해도 될듯

[leqek's EXHAUST]

00:22:883 - ~ 00:23:861 - 00:20:274 (20274|0,20600|1,20927|3) - 여기랑 저기랑 보컬(?)이 같은데 롱놋이 달라. 통일시키쇼

00:47:340 (47340|1) - 3 로 이동, 이동하는게 더 자연스러울거 같아

01:27:774 (87774|2) - 4 로 이동, 치기 더 편하게!

[MAXIMUM]

00:27:774 (27774|3) - 이거 롱놋으로 바꾸는게 어떰

이런식으로, 또는 00:27:937 - 이 부분에 노트 하나 추가 (첫번째 방안은 딴 부분 롱놋이 아니라서 어색할까봐 두가지 방안을 들고왔뜨 ㅠㅠ)



막난은 능력안되서 못건들것솤ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

노래 조아따 GL :D ~~~~
Wonki


처음
00:06:905 (6905|1) - 이거왜 00:08:046 - 여기까지가아니냐 저까지가 더좋은거같어

01:36:905 - 여기는 1놋추가해도 무난할듯 심볼

00:19:296 (19296|1) - 3으로 옮기쇼 이부분보면 너무 12에집중되있음

00:36:416 (36416|1,36579|1,36742|1) - 2성에서 3연타는 좀그렇지않을까요 00:36:579 (36579|1) - 4이동추천

00:45:220 - 음빠짐

00:47:014 (47014|1) - 위와같음 3이동

01:01:524 (61524|0,61524|1,61687|3,61687|2) - 이거보단 http://puu.sh/tiskP/b43fe37b98.jpg 이게 나을듯

01:05:274 (65274|0) - 심볼없기때문에 4스냅이있을경우 2노트는 자제하는게 좋다고봄

01:14:568 - 심볼있음

01:17:177 - ^

01:22:883 (82883|2,82883|1) - 롱놋에선 2노트는 좀무리인듯

에리
00:36:579 (36579|0,36579|1,36660|2,36742|3,36742|0) - http://puu.sh/tistM/5634a71ef1.jpg

00:48:644 (48644|3,48807|1,48970|3) - 2,4,2가나을듯

01:57:448 - ~01:57:774 - 여기사이 동탁이는 일부러 비운거?

마지막
HP 8.5 자비좀

00:10:655 (10655|1,10736|0,10818|1) - 1,2,1 이더좋을듯

00:12:611 (12611|2,12611|0,12693|3,12693|1,12774|0,12774|2,12937|1,12937|3,13100|0,13100|2,13264|1,13264|2,13427|1,13427|3,13427|0) - 컨트롤 h가어떠냐 00:12:122 (12122|0,12285|0,12448|0,12611|0,12774|0) - 이거땜시 바꿔주면 좋을거같다

00:25:818 (25818|3,25818|2,26144|2,26144|1,26144|3,26144|0) - 롱놋 어떰 보컬음 따라가서

01:06:742 (66742|1,66742|3,66742|2,66742|0,67231|2,67231|0,67231|1,67231|3) - 롱놋괜찮을듯

01:37:231 (97231|0,97231|3,97231|1,97883|1,97883|0,97883|2,98046|1,98046|0,98046|2) - 이짧은롱놋 가뜩이나 어려울텐데 3놋까지 넣어야겠니

01:59:731 (119731|3,119731|2,120057|2,120057|1,120057|3,120057|0) - 보컬롱놋 어떰
Soul Evans
Soul's Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

General


  1. BPM: Okay
  2. Offset: Okay
  3. AiMod: Okay
  4. Tags: Okay
  5. BG: Okay
  6. Kiai: Okay
  7. Metadata: Okay
  8. Folder’s problem: None
  9. Hitsound: you should probably hurry finishing hitsounds and removing the hitsound diff
  10. Timing: Okay
  11. Other: Okay
    [MAXIMUM]
  12. 00:12:611 - I see you're following the anchor thing for the sounds to emphasize it in here 00:10:818 (10818|3,10981|3,11144|3,11307|3,11470|3,11633|3,11796|3,11959|3) - So maybe you can make the pattern like this so that the second anchors on the left can be consistent : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7073294
  13. 00:15:383 - Pattern is kinda dull so i'd advise making it like this or changing it to something else :
  14. 00:15:872 - maybe add a note there on column 1, it suits the anchor thing with 00:15:383 - and the pattern i suggested
  15. 00:16:035 - This is weird, it has a three note chord while the rest of the sections similar to this has regular chords such as 00:16:687 - 00:17:340 - 00:17:992 - etc.
  16. 00:18:644 - i can't seem to understand what's so special about this section to have it not include a chord/keeping it consistent with the rest
  17. 00:21:253 - same here, i don't know if this is intentional or you're missing a chord
  18. 00:22:720 - This and 00:23:046 - has too loud beats to be a single note, maybe you should make them chords and make some pattern using them
  19. 00:28:753 (28753|1,28916|2) - Fun to play on Ctrl+H instead of that pattern
  20. 00:44:731 (44731|0,44894|0,45057|0,45220|0,45383|0) - Maybe try avoid anchors
  21. 00:50:600 - Make these a 3-note chord so that it can act well with 00:50:274 - since it's a similar beat
  22. 00:56:796 (56796|3,56959|3,57122|3,57285|3,57448|3) - Don't know if this is intentional or not
  23. 01:13:753 (73753|1,73916|1,74079|1,74242|1,74405|1,74568|1,74731|1,74894|1,75057|1,75220|1) - Anchors wheeee
  24. 01:36:905 - These LNs are kinda not optimized and doesn't play well, you might need to change that with self modding, or ask Juan for suggestions
  25. 01:39:840 - my advise would kinda ask to make the jacks more combo-able, basically try and make them in index focused kinda
  26. 01:48:644 - Idk man, i kinda feel like this could be re-patterned to play out better and more interesting
Goodluck <3
leqek

Ramuchi wrote:

Hi

아따 BG 참한 처자들이네

[leqek's EXHAUST]

00:22:883 - ~ 00:23:861 - 00:20:274 (20274|0,20600|1,20927|3) - 여기랑 저기랑 보컬(?)이 같은데 롱놋이 달라. 통일시키쇼
이해 안간다

00:47:340 (47340|1) - 3 로 이동, 이동하는게 더 자연스러울거 같아 첵스

01:27:774 (87774|2) - 4 로 이동, 치기 더 편하게! 첵스


막난은 능력안되서 못건들것솤ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

노래 조아따 GL :D ~~~~

Wonki wrote:



에리
00:36:579 (36579|0,36579|1,36660|2,36742|3,36742|0) - http://puu.sh/tistM/5634a71ef1.jpg 첵스

00:48:644 (48644|3,48807|1,48970|3) - 2,4,2가나을듯 첵스

01:57:448 - ~01:57:774 - 여기사이 동탁이는 일부러 비운거? 추가함
Topic Starter
Aruel
Thanks for SoYeon, Ramuchi, Wonki, Soul Evans for mod! sorry for non replying cuz I forgot what I changed ;_; thanks!
Akasha-
Rasis my waifu
Grace also sexy and I want them both la
Topic Starter
Aruel

Raymond wrote:

Rasis my waifu
Grace also sexy and I want them both la
Ho Ray Kyoka
Critical_Star
Gaymond
Kyousuke-

Critical_Star wrote:

Gaymond
riunosk

1 2 3 4
novice kudosu
01:17:014 (77014|3) - maybe move to 3? 3 seems sliiiiightly empty
01:22:231 (82231|0,82720|1) - maybe flip so 1 doesnt look too empty
not exactly good at easy diffs - w-
rem's advanced kudosu
01:01:361 (61361|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability?
01:01:524 (61524|1,61606|2,61687|3) - flip if ^ is applied
01:37:394 (97394|2,97475|1,97557|2) - maybe rearrange it into a troll for playability? preferably 432 (if applied might need to rearrange following notes)
le cake's exhausting kudosu
01:04:459 - o _o? missing note? maybe error?
01:34:296 (94296|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability
01:36:986 - maybe add a note here so the stream start has more flow and sounds like it has the stream sound here anyway
01:39:840 (99840|0,99840|2,99921|3,99921|1) - what are the jumptrills here for? i only hear the snare, only a single jump is needed on the white line
01:42:611 - continue stream? maybe do the same for the whole section?
01:51:742 (111742|1) - maybe move to 1 for less focus on 2
MAXIMUM KUDOSU
00:18:644 - wad happened to the 1/2 minijack thingy pattern
00:47:992 (47992|0,48155|0,48318|0,48481|0) - is this intended?
00:48:481 - col 3 seems to have quite a bit of focus here..
00:53:209 (53209|3,53372|3,53535|3,53698|3) - ^^
01:43:345 (103345|2,103427|2) - why the minijack?
01:52:557 - continue 1/2 minijack pattern?
LEFT GIRL IS IMPOSSIBLY CUTE LET ME HUG AND/OR PET THANKS
Topic Starter
Aruel

riunosk wrote:


1 2 3 4
novice kudosu
01:17:014 (77014|3) - maybe move to 3? 3 seems sliiiiightly empty
01:22:231 (82231|0,82720|1) - maybe flip so 1 doesnt look too empty
not exactly good at easy diffs - w-
rem's advanced kudosu
01:01:361 (61361|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability?
01:01:524 (61524|1,61606|2,61687|3) - flip if ^ is applied
01:37:394 (97394|2,97475|1,97557|2) - maybe rearrange it into a troll for playability? preferably 432 (if applied might need to rearrange following notes)
le cake's exhausting kudosu
01:04:459 - o _o? missing note? maybe error?
01:34:296 (94296|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability
01:36:986 - maybe add a note here so the stream start has more flow and sounds like it has the stream sound here anyway
01:39:840 (99840|0,99840|2,99921|3,99921|1) - what are the jumptrills here for? i only hear the snare, only a single jump is needed on the white line
01:42:611 - continue stream? maybe do the same for the whole section?
01:51:742 (111742|1) - maybe move to 1 for less focus on 2
MAXIMUM KUDOSU
00:18:644 - wad happened to the 1/2 minijack thingy pattern
00:47:992 (47992|0,48155|0,48318|0,48481|0) - is this intended?
00:48:481 - col 3 seems to have quite a bit of focus here..
00:53:209 (53209|3,53372|3,53535|3,53698|3) - ^^
01:43:345 (103345|2,103427|2) - why the minijack?
01:52:557 - continue 1/2 minijack pattern?
LEFT GIRL IS IMPOSSIBLY CUTE LET ME HUG AND/OR PET THANKS
NOVICE all accepted and MAXMUM has fixed few thingg, thanks!
leqek

riunosk wrote:


1 2 3 4

le cake's exhausting kudosu
01:04:459 - o _o? missing note? maybe error? check
01:34:296 (94296|2) - maybe move to 2 for playability check
01:36:986 - maybe add a note here so the stream start has more flow and sounds like it has the stream sound here anyway change LN
01:39:840 (99840|0,99840|2,99921|3,99921|1) - what are the jumptrills here for? i only hear the snare, only a single jump is needed on the white line Put note for guitar
01:42:611 - continue stream? maybe do the same for the whole section? check
01:51:742 (111742|1) - maybe move to 1 for less focus on 2 guitar jack

LEFT GIRL IS IMPOSSIBLY CUTE LET ME HUG AND/OR PET THANKS
Critical_Star
meow

General

HS of NOVICE is using drum while other difficulty is using soft so u should make it consistent

remember to remove Hitsound difficulty

MAXIMUM

00:06:579 (6579|0) - This LN should finish 00:06:742 - here as refer 00:05:601 (5601|0,5927|2) - this LNs

00:07:394 (7394|0) - It should finish 00:07:720 - here if you followed vocal

00:31:850 (31850|0) - maybe move it 2 ? for prevent this
00:31:687 (31687|0,31850|0,32014|0,32177|0) - jack?

01:01:606 - I think you will need a note in here like you added drum HS.

01:37:068 - https://puu.sh/tFj9r/08d97e8fc3.jpg this is right snapping for me, what do you think?

01:48:644 - idk this one is good to play...it's pretty awkward for me, maybe use a single note is the best I think

01:57:448 - Same as 01:01:606 -here~

[leqek's EXHAUST]

00:25:818 - You can add one more note for drum and finish of this section~

01:01:606 - Missing note I think? there's a drum HS so it's pretty awkward to skip

01:37:068 - ~ 01:39:187 - Please refer MAXIMUM difficulty

[Rem's ADVANCED]

00:41:959 (41959|2) - I think it doesn't need a note here, like harder difficultes there is no note in here too

01:05:274 (65274|3,65356|2,65437|1) - Could be more balance if it becomes 1-2-3 stairs!

01:37:394 (97394|2,97475|1,97557|2) - Wrong snapping like I pointed put in MAXIMUM, but it's fine to go if you use just 1/2, using 1/6 on normal is overed I think

01:43:264 - Cymbal missing?

01:54:187 - Should be double like you did on 01:52:231 - 01:52:883 - 01:53:535 -

[NOVICE]

00:36:416 (36416|2,36579|1,36742|0) - like 4-1-2-3? these are drum and 00:36:253 (36253|3) - this is bass only so make some difference?
Remuring

Critical_Star wrote:

meow

General

HS of NOVICE is using drum while other difficulty is using soft so u should make it consistent

remember to remove Hitsound difficulty

[Rem's ADVANCED]

00:41:959 (41959|2) - I think it doesn't need a note here, like harder difficultes there is no note in here too ok

01:05:274 (65274|3,65356|2,65437|1) - Could be more balance if it becomes 1-2-3 stairs! ok

01:37:394 (97394|2,97475|1,97557|2) - Wrong snapping like I pointed put in MAXIMUM, but it's fine to go if you use just 1/2, using 1/6 on normal is overed I think ok

01:43:264 - Cymbal missing? ok

01:54:187 - Should be double like you did on 01:52:231 - 01:52:883 - 01:53:535 - ok
All fixed owo
Topic Starter
Aruel
All fixed meow thanks MOE ET CS 'W'

(Waiting leqek)
leqek

Critical_Star wrote:

meow

General

HS of NOVICE is using drum while other difficulty is using soft so u should make it consistent

remember to remove Hitsound difficulty

[leqek's EXHAUST]

00:25:818 - You can add one more note for drum and finish of this section~ check

01:01:606 - Missing note I think? there's a drum HS so it's pretty awkward to skip check

01:37:068 - ~ 01:39:187 - Please refer MAXIMUM difficulty check
Critical_Star
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EDIT : rebubble after removing the hitsound diff
Topic Starter
Aruel
Thank you for bubble MOE ET CS 'W'W'W'W'W'W'
Akasha-
(: HEAVENLY CHICKEN
Illya X Ram Li
i love this songs owo
Akasha-
Hello there, I'm here for qualify check (LOL look at the time, I've been late for 2 months, I'm sorry)

Overall, everything are pretty good to go now, I will just point some of my opinion just in case

[MAXIMUM]
00:13:753 (13753|1,14079|1) - for this, I know you're follow vocal on here, but it's kinda weird to combine it with these cymbals sound 00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|0,13916|3,14242|3,14242|2,14242|0) -
00:23:698 (23698|1) - it should be on 3rd for 00:17:992 (17992|2,18155|2,18318|3,18318|1,18481|2) -
00:24:024 (24024|1) - it's better to remove the note on here, the they drum feeling would be easier to catch and recognize it
00:36:497 (36497|0,36660|0,36823|0) - this is just weird, it's fine but it's kinda weird to combine drum and the chiptune sound at the bg, i would recomended to remove the 1/4 and make the drum pattern more diversity
00:38:372 - remove a note on here for the conflict on 00:27:937 -
00:46:524 - you missed a note for drum here
00:38:372 (38372|1,63236|2,63725|0) - I think no sound here
01:05:274 (65274|3,65274|0,65356|2,65356|1,65437|3,65437|0) - hmm, these are drum, but not 01:05:519 (65519|2,65519|1) - , what do you think?
01:05:764 (65764|2,65927|1,66090|2,66253|3,66416|2,66579|1) - this is kinda eh ... I like the main sound and present by this: http://puu.sh/v0agd/8cc339fe44.jpg
01:26:796 (86796|2,87122|2) - same as before
01:18:155 (78155|0,78155|3,78155|2) - suddenly 3 notes here for drum is kinda weird
01:21:090 - try to fill a short hold for vocal here instead for cymbal for conflict on 01:18:644 -
01:34:948 - hmmm, 1/6 to me
01:37:149 (97149|1) - sound like should be on 1/8 01:37:190 -
01:38:535 - on here, snap on 01:38:576 - 01:38:637 - 1/16 in my opinion
01:57:530 (117530|2) - random drum?
01:57:937 (117937|1) - same reason before

[leqek's EXHAUST]
00:41:144 - Should be jack like 00:40:818 (40818|1,40981|1) - this for consistent.
00:50:111 - Has a guitar sound, you can add a note in here like you did on 00:53:372 - here
01:35:030 - Why didn't you try to use 1/4 here? not using 1/4 is not intend I think because you also did on 01:33:562 (93562|1) - here

[Rem's ADVANCED]
00:21:253 - There's no meaning to be double.
(00:17:340 - ~ 00:18:318 -) (00:22:557 - 00:23:861 - ) They are definitely same part but different note usage? Is there any meaning of it?
00:55:329 (55329|0,55492|0) - A jack must be 00:55:166 - 00:55:329 - this spot. 00:49:948 (49948|3,50111|3) - Reference.

[NOVICE]
00:36:253 - You should better to try a stair pattern here, really fit with this part
01:13:753 - Must be double like you did double on all of drums

IRC
2017-03-12 15:00 Fresh Chicken: I'm here boi
2017-03-12 15:00 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is away: Kinda afk
2017-03-12 15:01 Fresh Chicken: there is something i want to ask
2017-03-12 15:01 Fresh Chicken: I just used 1/4 snapping for guitar but this is kinda faint snapping so hmm
2017-03-12 15:02 Fresh Chicken: Need to ask to someone who can judge this like u
2017-03-12 15:02 Kuo Kyoka: i will mod maximum diff
2017-03-12 15:02 Kuo Kyoka: which part
2017-03-12 15:02 Kuo Kyoka: np me the map again please
2017-03-12 15:02 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1168656 VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [MAXIMUM]]
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: 00:47:340 - Here
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: Just this one, nothing others lol
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: you know rasis is gay right?
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: ok i will redl
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: sure I know
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: with Grace
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: grace gay
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: nostalgia
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: that heavenly map next to this map
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/847857 Yooh - Seraphim]
2017-03-12 15:04 Fresh Chicken: oh shit I forgot that lol
2017-03-12 15:04 Fresh Chicken: Yeah I should revive that too
2017-03-12 15:04 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:340 - on here
2017-03-12 15:04 Kuo Kyoka: what you need to know too
2017-03-12 15:04 Kuo Kyoka: you mean ghost notes?
2017-03-12 15:05 Fresh Chicken: 1/4 snap is fine or not, just want to know. Current QAT is avaliable to use arbitrary snapping but well, this part could be ghost note so I need your opinions
2017-03-12 15:05 Fresh Chicken: yap, just not sure
2017-03-12 15:05 Kuo Kyoka: just pull, qat dont know anyway
2017-03-12 15:05 Kuo Kyoka: jk
2017-03-12 15:05 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2017-03-12 15:06 Fresh Chicken: LOL
2017-03-12 15:06 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:910 - on here have sound
2017-03-12 15:06 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:073 - 00:48:236 - dont have imo
2017-03-12 15:07 Kuo Kyoka: mp3 is kinda hard to recognizes them well
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: Yeah but that is intended because a guitar sound finishes there and I mainly focused on guitar, not vocal, and revoved!
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: yap
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: No album
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: ;_;
2017-03-12 15:07 Kuo Kyoka: i heard the harp sounds from there, i mean like ocean sounds
2017-03-12 15:08 Kuo Kyoka: but kinda hard to notice
2017-03-12 15:08 Kuo Kyoka: well yeah, but soon sdvx album
2017-03-12 15:08 Fresh Chicken: hmm yap
2017-03-12 15:08 Kuo Kyoka: which remind me why there is no sdvx III album but have II album
2017-03-12 15:09 Kuo Kyoka: 00:49:704 - no
2017-03-12 15:09 Fresh Chicken: yaa hehe
2017-03-12 15:09 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:725 - no
2017-03-12 15:09 Kuo Kyoka: anyway, i deleted all notes to check mp3 easier so maybe i will make mistake here
2017-03-12 15:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:889 - no
2017-03-12 15:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:193 -
2017-03-12 15:10 Fresh Chicken: deleted all
2017-03-12 15:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:356 - kinda no, you can notice the sound on here is delayed, on 1/8 i guess
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:519 - how about this?
2017-03-12 15:12 Fresh Chicken: hmm but I'd like to keep on here, cuz 1/8 is too awkward and arbitrary snapping is useable now
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:008 -
2017-03-12 15:12 Fresh Chicken: 00:50:519 - here is removed
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:334 -
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:660 -
2017-03-12 15:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:52:639 - 00:52:802 - 00:53:128 -
2017-03-12 15:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:291 -
2017-03-12 15:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:617 - kinda hard to notice
2017-03-12 15:14 Fresh Chicken: -Alright removed all
2017-03-12 15:14 Fresh Chicken: hmm
2017-03-12 15:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:943 -
2017-03-12 15:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:595 -
2017-03-12 15:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:921 -
2017-03-12 15:16 Kuo Kyoka: 00:55:247 - 00:55:410 - 00:55:736 -
2017-03-12 15:17 Kuo Kyoka: 00:55:818 (55818|0,55899|1,55981|3,56062|2,56144|0,56144|3,56225|1,56307|0,56307|2,56307|3,56389|1,56470|2,56552|0,56633|1,56715|2) - the rest on here, i can hear 1/2 only! but not sure about myself too but 00:56:878 (56878|2,56959|3,57041|2,57122|3,57122|0,57204|1,57285|3,57285|2,57367|1,57448|0,57448|3,57530|2,57611|0,57611|1,57693|2) - 1/4 does exists
2017-03-12 15:18 Fresh Chicken: alright all remoived
2017-03-12 15:19 Kuo Kyoka: any more part you're unsure?
2017-03-12 15:19 Fresh Chicken: nah it's all
2017-03-12 15:19 Fresh Chicken: Thanks you so much
2017-03-12 15:19 Fresh Chicken: <3
2017-03-12 15:20 Kuo Kyoka: ok i will be back for the mod later on
2017-03-12 15:20 Kuo Kyoka: np

Overall it's a nice map
Also guitar snaps is killng me
Call me back soon
Remuring

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hello there, I'm here for qualify check (LOL look at the time, I've been late for 2 months, I'm sorry)

Overall, everything are pretty good to go now, I will just point some of my opinion just in case

[Rem's ADVANCED]
00:21:253 - There's no meaning to be double. ok remove
(00:17:340 - ~ 00:18:318 -) (00:22:557 - 00:23:861 - ) They are definitely same part but different note usage? Is there any meaning of it? There was no other meaning. So 00: 17: 340 ~ ~ 00: 18: 318 - changed to the same pattern as this pattern and 00:23:861 - I added a note here
00:55:329 (55329|0,55492|0) - A jack must be 00:55:166 - 00:55:329 - this spot. 00:49:948 (49948|3,50111|3) - Reference. I changed the pattern after making a reference

Overall it's a nice map
Also guitar snaps is killng me
Call me back soon
Topic Starter
Aruel

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hello there, I'm here for qualify check (LOL look at the time, I've been late for 2 months, I'm sorry)

Overall, everything are pretty good to go now, I will just point some of my opinion just in case

[MAXIMUM]
00:13:753 (13753|1,14079|1) - for this, I know you're follow vocal on here, but it's kinda weird to combine it with these cymbals sound 00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|0,13916|3,14242|3,14242|2,14242|0) - hmm I think it's fine owo
00:23:698 (23698|1) - it should be on 3rd for 00:17:992 (17992|2,18155|2,18318|3,18318|1,18481|2) -
00:24:024 (24024|1) - it's better to remove the note on here, the they drum feeling would be easier to catch and recognize it
00:36:497 (36497|0,36660|0,36823|0) - this is just weird, it's fine but it's kinda weird to combine drum and the chiptune sound at the bg, i would recomended to remove the 1/4 and make the drum pattern more diversity - Those 3 notes emphasised drum already so I think this is fine
00:38:372 - remove a note on here for the conflict on 00:27:937 -
00:46:524 - you missed a note for drum here - Because I thought drum of this part is kinda weak
00:38:372 (38372|1,63236|2,63725|0) - I think no sound here
01:05:274 (65274|3,65274|0,65356|2,65356|1,65437|3,65437|0) - hmm, these are drum, but not 01:05:519 (65519|2,65519|1) - , what do you think?
01:05:764 (65764|2,65927|1,66090|2,66253|3,66416|2,66579|1) - this is kinda eh ... I like the main sound and present by this: http://puu.sh/v0agd/8cc339fe44.jpg - I think current one is fine
01:26:796 (86796|2,87122|2) - same as before ^
01:18:155 (78155|0,78155|3,78155|2) - suddenly 3 notes here for drum is kinda weird
01:21:090 - try to fill a short hold for vocal here instead for cymbal for conflict on 01:18:644 - Ya I know but I have no choice cuz above pattern and below has 3 so it must have a jack if I use LN
01:34:948 - hmmm, 1/6 to me - Actually it's 1/8 with 01:35:030 - here
01:37:149 (97149|1) - sound like should be on 1/8 01:37:190 -
01:38:535 - on here, snap on 01:38:576 - 01:38:637 - 1/16 in my opinion - ya I just skipped them because it would be too complex
01:57:530 (117530|2) - random drum?
01:57:937 (117937|1) - same reason before

[leqek's EXHAUST]
00:41:144 - Should be jack like 00:40:818 (40818|1,40981|1) - this for consistent.
00:50:111 - Has a guitar sound, you can add a note in here like you did on 00:53:372 - here
01:35:030 - Why didn't you try to use 1/4 here? not using 1/4 is not intend I think because you also did on 01:33:562 (93562|1) - here

[Rem's ADVANCED]
00:21:253 - There's no meaning to be double.
(00:17:340 - ~ 00:18:318 -) (00:22:557 - 00:23:861 - ) They are definitely same part but different note usage? Is there any meaning of it?
00:55:329 (55329|0,55492|0) - A jack must be 00:55:166 - 00:55:329 - this spot. 00:49:948 (49948|3,50111|3) - Reference.

[NOVICE]
00:36:253 - You should better to try a stair pattern here, really fit with this part
01:13:753 - Must be double like you did double on all of drums

IRC
2017-03-12 15:00 Fresh Chicken: I'm here boi
2017-03-12 15:00 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is away: Kinda afk
2017-03-12 15:01 Fresh Chicken: there is something i want to ask
2017-03-12 15:01 Fresh Chicken: I just used 1/4 snapping for guitar but this is kinda faint snapping so hmm
2017-03-12 15:02 Fresh Chicken: Need to ask to someone who can judge this like u
2017-03-12 15:02 Kuo Kyoka: i will mod maximum diff
2017-03-12 15:02 Kuo Kyoka: which part
2017-03-12 15:02 Kuo Kyoka: np me the map again please
2017-03-12 15:02 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1168656 VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [MAXIMUM]]
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: 00:47:340 - Here
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: Just this one, nothing others lol
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: you know rasis is gay right?
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: ok i will redl
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: sure I know
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: with Grace
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: grace gay
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: nostalgia
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: that heavenly map next to this map
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/847857 Yooh - Seraphim]
2017-03-12 15:04 Fresh Chicken: oh shit I forgot that lol
2017-03-12 15:04 Fresh Chicken: Yeah I should revive that too
2017-03-12 15:04 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:340 - on here
2017-03-12 15:04 Kuo Kyoka: what you need to know too
2017-03-12 15:04 Kuo Kyoka: you mean ghost notes?
2017-03-12 15:05 Fresh Chicken: 1/4 snap is fine or not, just want to know. Current QAT is avaliable to use arbitrary snapping but well, this part could be ghost note so I need your opinions
2017-03-12 15:05 Fresh Chicken: yap, just not sure
2017-03-12 15:05 Kuo Kyoka: just pull, qat dont know anyway
2017-03-12 15:05 Kuo Kyoka: jk
2017-03-12 15:05 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2017-03-12 15:06 Fresh Chicken: LOL
2017-03-12 15:06 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:910 - on here have sound
2017-03-12 15:06 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:073 - 00:48:236 - dont have imo
2017-03-12 15:07 Kuo Kyoka: mp3 is kinda hard to recognizes them well
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: Yeah but that is intended because a guitar sound finishes there and I mainly focused on guitar, not vocal, and revoved!
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: yap
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: No album
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: ;_;
2017-03-12 15:07 Kuo Kyoka: i heard the harp sounds from there, i mean like ocean sounds
2017-03-12 15:08 Kuo Kyoka: but kinda hard to notice
2017-03-12 15:08 Kuo Kyoka: well yeah, but soon sdvx album
2017-03-12 15:08 Fresh Chicken: hmm yap
2017-03-12 15:08 Kuo Kyoka: which remind me why there is no sdvx III album but have II album
2017-03-12 15:09 Kuo Kyoka: 00:49:704 - no
2017-03-12 15:09 Fresh Chicken: yaa hehe
2017-03-12 15:09 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:725 - no
2017-03-12 15:09 Kuo Kyoka: anyway, i deleted all notes to check mp3 easier so maybe i will make mistake here
2017-03-12 15:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:889 - no
2017-03-12 15:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:193 -
2017-03-12 15:10 Fresh Chicken: deleted all
2017-03-12 15:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:356 - kinda no, you can notice the sound on here is delayed, on 1/8 i guess
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:519 - how about this?
2017-03-12 15:12 Fresh Chicken: hmm but I'd like to keep on here, cuz 1/8 is too awkward and arbitrary snapping is useable now
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:008 -
2017-03-12 15:12 Fresh Chicken: 00:50:519 - here is removed
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:334 -
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:660 -
2017-03-12 15:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:52:639 - 00:52:802 - 00:53:128 -
2017-03-12 15:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:291 -
2017-03-12 15:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:617 - kinda hard to notice
2017-03-12 15:14 Fresh Chicken: -Alright removed all
2017-03-12 15:14 Fresh Chicken: hmm
2017-03-12 15:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:943 -
2017-03-12 15:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:595 -
2017-03-12 15:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:921 -
2017-03-12 15:16 Kuo Kyoka: 00:55:247 - 00:55:410 - 00:55:736 -
2017-03-12 15:17 Kuo Kyoka: 00:55:818 (55818|0,55899|1,55981|3,56062|2,56144|0,56144|3,56225|1,56307|0,56307|2,56307|3,56389|1,56470|2,56552|0,56633|1,56715|2) - the rest on here, i can hear 1/2 only! but not sure about myself too but 00:56:878 (56878|2,56959|3,57041|2,57122|3,57122|0,57204|1,57285|3,57285|2,57367|1,57448|0,57448|3,57530|2,57611|0,57611|1,57693|2) - 1/4 does exists
2017-03-12 15:18 Fresh Chicken: alright all remoived
2017-03-12 15:19 Kuo Kyoka: any more part you're unsure?
2017-03-12 15:19 Fresh Chicken: nah it's all
2017-03-12 15:19 Fresh Chicken: Thanks you so much
2017-03-12 15:19 Fresh Chicken: <3
2017-03-12 15:20 Kuo Kyoka: ok i will be back for the mod later on
2017-03-12 15:20 Kuo Kyoka: np

Overall it's a nice map
Also guitar snaps is killng me
Call me back soon
No reply means fixed!

Thanks Kuo gay <3
leqek

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hello there, I'm here for qualify check (LOL look at the time, I've been late for 2 months, I'm sorry)

Overall, everything are pretty good to go now, I will just point some of my opinion just in case

[leqek's EXHAUST]
00:41:144 - Should be jack like 00:40:818 (40818|1,40981|1) - this for consistent. Check
00:50:111 - Has a guitar sound, you can add a note in here like you did on 00:53:372 - here Check
01:35:030 - Why didn't you try to use 1/4 here? not using 1/4 is not intend I think because you also did on 01:33:562 (93562|1) - here Check



Overall it's a nice map
Also guitar snaps is killng me
Call me back soon
Akasha-
dont forget you need to fix offset

around +10ms or -10ms i forgot but i think it was +10ms
Topic Starter
Aruel
All things are applied! Thanks gay <3
Akasha-
VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Qualified
(Grace for life)

Congratulations!
Topic Starter
Aruel
2017-04-02 00:04 Kuo Kyoka: well ok
2017-04-02 00:04 Fresh Chicken: long time no see
2017-04-02 00:04 Fresh Chicken: even in a minute
2017-04-02 00:04 Fresh Chicken: jk lol
2017-04-02 00:04 Kuo Kyoka: not many things left but
2017-04-02 00:04 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is away: no request
2017-04-02 00:05 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahahahahaha
2017-04-02 00:05 Fresh Chicken: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7711505
2017-04-02 00:05 Fresh Chicken: That away was really fit
2017-04-02 00:05 Fresh Chicken: lol
2017-04-02 00:05 Kuo Kyoka: anyway
2017-04-02 00:05 Kuo Kyoka: anywayyyyyyyyyyyyy
2017-04-02 00:05 Fresh Chicken: yaaa
2017-04-02 00:06 Kuo Kyoka: lets sex
2017-04-02 00:06 Kuo Kyoka: joking
2017-04-02 00:06 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/v5GRZ/a0922cae43.jpg
2017-04-02 00:06 Fresh Chicken: YES
2017-04-02 00:06 Kuo Kyoka: storyboard hitsound delayed
2017-04-02 00:06 Fresh Chicken: oh fuck
2017-04-02 00:06 Kuo Kyoka: hahahahahaha
2017-04-02 00:06 Kuo Kyoka: nothing many things left to discuss but ... no request
2017-04-02 00:07 Kuo Kyoka: i will point some
2017-04-02 00:07 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1170196 VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [Rem's ADVANCED]]
2017-04-02 00:07 Fresh Chicken: oh Rem's one
2017-04-02 00:07 Kuo Kyoka: 00:58:110 - well, feeling like it's missing something, maybe add a note
2017-04-02 00:08 Kuo Kyoka: 01:22:893 - add a note on 2?
2017-04-02 00:08 Fresh Chicken: fuck he is playing starcraft now
2017-04-02 00:08 Kuo Kyoka: lol
2017-04-02 00:08 Kuo Kyoka: can you fix for him
2017-04-02 00:08 Kuo Kyoka: 01:45:393 (105393|0,105393|1) - 2 notes on here?
2017-04-02 00:08 Fresh Chicken: wait let me get premission from him
2017-04-02 00:09 Fresh Chicken: ok done
2017-04-02 00:09 Kuo Kyoka: 00:36:263 (36263|0,36263|2) - there is two notes on a single bass which is weird
2017-04-02 00:10 Fresh Chicken: 01:45:393 - definitely miss, removed 00:58:110 - added 01:22:893 - seems he doesn't want to use 2 note with LN 00:36:263 - removed
2017-04-02 00:11 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-04-02 00:11 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1170796 VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [NOVICE]]
2017-04-02 00:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:46:045 (46045|0) - i think it's better on 00:45:882 -
2017-04-02 00:12 Kuo Kyoka: for the cym
2017-04-02 00:12 Fresh Chicken: ya ture
2017-04-02 00:12 Fresh Chicken: done
2017-04-02 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: 01:17:513 -
2017-04-02 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: how about this
2017-04-02 00:13 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/v5HhR/f0c409f431.jpg for drum
2017-04-02 00:15 Fresh Chicken: changed like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7711594 this
2017-04-02 00:16 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-04-02 00:16 Kuo Kyoka: 01:24:197 - add note
2017-04-02 00:16 Kuo Kyoka: 01:25:502 - same
2017-04-02 00:16 Kuo Kyoka: for lik01:13:763 (73763|2,73763|0,75067|2,75067|1) -
2017-04-02 00:16 Fresh Chicken: yuup
2017-04-02 00:18 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1170849 VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [leqek's EXHAUST]]
2017-04-02 00:18 Kuo Kyoka: 00:24:034 (24034|2) - same on MAXIMUM
2017-04-02 00:19 Fresh Chicken: hmm?
2017-04-02 00:19 Fresh Chicken: no notes there lol
2017-04-02 00:19 Fresh Chicken: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7711637
2017-04-02 00:19 Fresh Chicken: *already
2017-04-02 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: i mean
2017-04-02 00:20 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1170849 VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [leqek's EXHAUST]]
2017-04-02 00:20 Fresh Chicken: `oh
2017-04-02 00:20 Fresh Chicken: done
2017-04-02 00:20 Fresh Chicken: leqek is drunk now
2017-04-02 00:20 Fresh Chicken: cuz I was drinking with him
2017-04-02 00:20 Fresh Chicken: lol
2017-04-02 00:21 Kuo Kyoka: 00:29:252 - add note? feel like missing here
2017-04-02 00:21 Kuo Kyoka: on 2
2017-04-02 00:21 Kuo Kyoka: leqek is drunk hhh
2017-04-02 00:21 Fresh Chicken: 00:26:480 (26480|1,26480|0) - Seems he intended that all of like this
2017-04-02 00:21 Fresh Chicken: 00:27:784 (27784|2,27784|3) - ^00:30:393 (30393|2,30393|0,30393|1) -
2017-04-02 00:21 Kuo Kyoka: hhhhhh
2017-04-02 00:21 Fresh Chicken: hhhhhh
2017-04-02 00:22 Kuo Kyoka: 01:18:654 (78654|3) - missing F
2017-04-02 00:22 Fresh Chicken: added
2017-04-02 00:22 Kuo Kyoka: oh
2017-04-02 00:24 Kuo Kyoka: 01:27:988 (87988|2) - this
2017-04-02 00:24 Kuo Kyoka: 01:27:784 - i mean this
2017-04-02 00:25 Fresh Chicken: 01:27:784 - hmm this is kinda intended for all difficulties, I couldn't feel much crush feelings on there
2017-04-02 00:25 Kuo Kyoka: snap not 1/4
2017-04-02 00:25 Fresh Chicken: oh
2017-04-02 00:25 Fresh Chicken: umm maybe this is fine
2017-04-02 00:25 Fresh Chicken: let me show you a case like this
2017-04-02 00:26 Kuo Kyoka: 01:27:866 - 01:27:988 - on 1/8
2017-04-02 00:26 Kuo Kyoka: 01:28:192 - 1/4
2017-04-02 00:26 Kuo Kyoka: 01:28:274 - to 01:28:437 - 1/6
2017-04-02 00:26 Fresh Chicken: t/515176/start=45
2017-04-02 00:26 Fresh Chicken: hmm
2017-04-02 00:26 Fresh Chicken: ok ill fix it
2017-04-02 00:27 Kuo Kyoka: aa?
2017-04-02 00:27 Fresh Chicken: like current mania accept wrong snapping for playable now
2017-04-02 00:27 Fresh Chicken: but never mind I'll fix this snappinmg
2017-04-02 00:28 Kuo Kyoka: umm nope
2017-04-02 00:28 Kuo Kyoka: this is 184 bpm
2017-04-02 00:28 Kuo Kyoka: 01:34:958 - still pretty sure this is 1/6 tho
2017-04-02 00:29 Fresh Chicken: 01:35:040 - Actually they are 1/8
2017-04-02 00:29 Fresh Chicken: I just didn't want to make 1/8 on there cuz it's kinda complex
2017-04-02 00:30 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-04-02 00:30 Fresh Chicken: hoho
2017-04-02 00:31 Kuo Kyoka: 01:37:404 (97404|1) - i think should be on 01:37:384 - 1/16
2017-04-02 00:31 Fresh Chicken: oh sure
2017-04-02 00:33 Fresh Chicken: Applied on MXM too
2017-04-02 00:33 Kuo Kyoka: 01:37:567 (97567|1,97567|0,97649|3) - this hmm
2017-04-02 00:34 Kuo Kyoka: should be on 1/16 dont you think
2017-04-02 00:34 Kuo Kyoka: 01:37:547 -
2017-04-02 00:34 Fresh Chicken: 1/16 is guitar but drum is on 01:37:567 - here, but not much feels like 1/16 while playing so this one would be fine I guess
2017-04-02 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: 01:38:219 - on here
2017-04-02 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: 01:38:219 - 01:38:328 - 1/12
2017-04-02 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: 01:38:423 - 1/16
2017-04-02 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: 01:38:518 - 1/12
2017-04-02 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: 01:38:566 - 1/16
2017-04-02 00:36 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2017-04-02 00:38 Fresh Chicken: 01:38:219 - 01:38:138 (98138|0) - it's fine I think 01:38:423 - fixed 01:38:545 - This is kick so it would be fine
2017-04-02 00:39 Fresh Chicken: Do you know how to finish LNs in 1/12 that starts on 1/16
2017-04-02 00:39 Fresh Chicken: lol
2017-04-02 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: 01:38:817 - 01:38:899 - 01:38:980 - 1/1201:39:116 - 01:39:157 - 1/8
2017-04-02 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: well i dont know
2017-04-02 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: unless we have 1/32 lolol
2017-04-02 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: i know a way
2017-04-02 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: but it need to edit the osu file
2017-04-02 00:40 Kuo Kyoka: but it's unrankable so
2017-04-02 00:41 Fresh Chicken: lool
2017-04-02 00:41 Fresh Chicken: ya then I'll just change that to normal
2017-04-02 00:42 Kuo Kyoka: ok that's it only
2017-04-02 00:44 Fresh Chicken: ya all snapping issues that you pointed out are fixed
2017-04-02 00:45 Fresh Chicken: updateed
2017-04-02 00:46 Kuo Kyoka: from normal to hard is a little big
2017-04-02 00:47 Fresh Chicken: yeah I pointed that to leqek but hmm he can't reduce his diff well
2017-04-02 00:47 Fresh Chicken: so I just said "Just don't over 1.5 gap"
2017-04-02 00:47 Kuo Kyoka: 01:27:866 - this one
2017-04-02 00:47 Kuo Kyoka: so early imo http://puu.sh/v5Jbz/30fee9a47d.png
2017-04-02 00:47 Fresh Chicken: oh prefect
2017-04-02 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: well ok
2017-04-02 00:48 Kuo Kyoka: diff gap wont be a problem if it's fine tho
2017-04-02 00:49 Fresh Chicken: ok updated
2017-04-02 00:50 Kuo Kyoka: remember
2017-04-02 00:50 Kuo Kyoka: KONMAI is sb

Thanks Kuo boi <3
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