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Miku Sawai - Colorful. (AnimeVer.)

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Agatsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on March 10, 2017 at 4:28:08 PM

Artist: Miku Sawai
Title: Colorful. (AnimeVer.)
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた
Tags: saenai heroine no sodate kata saekano ed ending tv size akitoshi corinn misure
BPM: 153
Filesize: 21400kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Corinn's Normal (1.92 stars, 161 notes)
  2. Easy (1.31 stars, 96 notes)
  3. Misure's Hard (2.97 stars, 249 notes)
  4. Reflection (3.77 stars, 308 notes)
Download: Miku Sawai - Colorful. (AnimeVer.)
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#2
by me
by Misure
by Corinn
by me

mp3 and video from Momoka's mapset

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Metaku
Hi! from #modreqs :D

Easy


00:43:316 (3,4) - Maybe 2/1 + circle instead as the vocals stop here?
00:57:434 (1) - Ctrl + h would look better imo and wouldn't go counter flow
01:22:532 (3) - Ctrl + j for flow? *shrug*

Corinn's Normal


01:25:865 (1) - This spinner placement just feels kind of... Weird. I get why you would want to end it with spinner but the vocals are strong in the end and I'd say you should just map it normally like in easy

Over all a solid diff not much to say

Misure's Hard

00:18:218 (1) - Rotate 15o clockwise?
00:34:297 (4) - Shorten to red tick and circle to blue tick?
00:51:748 (2) - Curve slider tail a bit up for aesthetics?
00:37:042 (1,2,3) - This kinda bothered me. First you have the snare as passive sound then on the next slider it's active. You do this in many places and imo you should stick with one, either use it on slider ends/ repeats or the heads. (Unless you're following vocals) Just something I wanted to point out. Good diff in general tho :P

Reflection

OD 8 seems a bit high for a diff under 4*, also hp 6,2 seems kinda random so maybe just use 6 instead

00:03:120 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think you should remove the repeats from the slider and just move the 2 1/4 sliders back accordingly and then add 2 notes before 00:04:101 (1) - Looking something like this. This would emphasize the strong last two sounds before the slider and would play better imo.
00:06:846 (9,10) - Ctrl + j both for better flow?
00:16:552 (7) - There's no sound here
00:21:356 (1) - Quite sure this should be just 1/4
00:27:630 (1) - Rotate slider end to left for flow?
00:47:532 - Missing a note?
01:12:140 (3) - I think just 1/2 would fit here better
01:14:199 (4) -Very weak sound here so maybe a 1/4 slider here instad of continuous stream?
01:13:905 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why new combo these but not 01:24:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ?

I like this one. Seems like it would be good for dt :P

Nice set in general, hope to see it ranked soon :)
Topic Starter
Agatsu

Metaku wrote:

Hi! from #modreqs :D

Easy


00:43:316 (3,4) - Maybe 2/1 + circle instead as the vocals stop here? ok
00:57:434 (1) - Ctrl + h would look better imo and wouldn't go counter flow ok
01:22:532 (3) - Ctrl + j for flow? *shrug* the flow is fine

Reflection

OD 8 seems a bit high for a diff under 4*, also hp 6,2 seems kinda random so maybe just use 6 instead fix

00:03:120 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think you should remove the repeats from the slider and just move the 2 1/4 sliders back accordingly and then add 2 notes before 00:04:101 (1) - Looking something like this. This would emphasize the strong last two sounds before the slider and would play better imo. fixed
00:06:846 (9,10) - Ctrl + j both for better flow? i want more variety in the sliders
00:16:552 (7) - There's no sound here there is but it's very faint
00:21:356 (1) - Quite sure this should be just 1/4 oh yes
00:27:630 (1) - Rotate slider end to left for flow? nah, it's fine as it is
00:47:532 - Missing a note? i dont want to make a long stream in non-kiai;w;
01:12:140 (3) - I think just 1/2 would fit here better vocal emphasis
01:14:199 (4) -Very weak sound here so maybe a 1/4 slider here instad of continuous stream? there's already a triple 01:13:513 (2,3,4) - so the player doesnt need another triple
01:13:905 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why new combo these but not 01:24:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? fixed

I like this one. Seems like it would be good for dt :P

Nice set in general, hope to see it ranked soon :)
thx :)
Misure

Metaku wrote:

Misure's Hard

00:18:218 (1) - Rotate 15o clockwise?
:arrow: did something
00:34:297 (4) - Shorten to red tick and circle to blue tick?
:arrow: it will be hard for a hard diff so I'd like to keep it
00:51:748 (2) - Curve slider tail a bit up for aesthetics?
:arrow: umm not a problem imo
00:37:042 (1,2,3) - This kinda bothered me. First you have the snare as passive sound then on the next slider it's active. You do this in many places and imo you should stick with one, either use it on slider ends/ repeats or the heads. (Unless you're following vocals) Just something I wanted to point out. Good diff in general tho :P
:arrow: I just try to catch white kick, but will considerate more :P
thanks for your modding!

Codesu
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60572
Countdown: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Colorful.(AnimeVer.)
TitleUnicode:カラフル。(AnimeVer.)
Artist:Sawai Miku
ArtistUnicode:沢井美空
Creator:Agatsu
Version:Misure's Hard
Source:冴えない彼女の育てかた
Tags:saenai heroine no sodate kata saekano ed ending tv size akitoshi corinn misure
BeatmapID:1189233
BeatmapSetID:552947

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kappaToast
Reflection


00:06:454 (4,5,6,7) - In y opinion you should turn that stream up side down becouse its pretty uncomfortable for new players.

00:30:767 (1) - i peffer to make that slider go right down becouse it dosent flow with the movment.

00:49:591 (1) - ^ ^ ^ (but up side down).

00:38:218 (5) - x:352 y:128 becouse it needs some space.

00:49:591 (1) - some weird rotation shift. Please change it up.



Easy

00:08:611 (4) - here is to close to 00:07:238 (3) move it to x:432 y:208 becouse it would be much easier to read (use "Distance Snap")

01:11:552 (1) - Ctrl + H and put it back in the original place.



- pls dont kill me... :?
Topic Starter
Agatsu

kappaToast wrote:

Reflection


00:06:454 (4,5,6,7) - In y opinion you should turn that stream up side down becouse its pretty uncomfortable for new players. fixed

00:30:767 (1) - i peffer to make that slider go right down becouse it dosent flow with the movment. it flows fine

00:49:591 (1) - ^ ^ ^ (but up side down). ^

00:38:218 (5) - x:352 y:128 becouse it needs some space. it has enough space

00:49:591 (1) - some weird rotation shift. Please change it up. i want the pattern to be at an angle instead of a straight line



Easy

00:08:611 (4) - here is to close to 00:07:238 (3) move it to x:432 y:208 becouse it would be much easier to read (use "Distance Snap") i cant move it any further because of distance snap

01:11:552 (1) - Ctrl + H and put it back in the original place. sure



- pls dont kill me... :? yes
thx for modding!
Akitoshi
@Metaku deleted spinner and added notes, thanks

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-NanoRIPE-
nope

[Easy]
00:07:238 (3) - make the slidertail on the red tick cause it would make sense than on the white tick imo
00:34:689 (3) - im feel this slider would be great if you ctrl j it cause it would make the flow a bit smoother than before
00:52:728 (2) - straight slider for better imo cause this slider looks make the flow a bit odd
00:54:297 (1) - 3/2 reverse slider? cause the rhythm goes well when i put that slider (emphatize to vocal and drum)
01:01:748 (1) - clap here? cause i hear drum sound here even though the volume is low
01:17:826 (1) - curve this a bit for make better blanket with the previous object
01:20:179 (4) - same as 00:34:689 (3) -

[Normal]
00:52:728 (4,5) - ctrl g this for vocal
01:01:748 (1) - same as easy

neic

[Hard]
00:17:238 (3,1) - bad overlap cause the overlap really noticable on gameplay and the overlap not structured
00:34:297 (1) - just make this slider ended on the red tick cause too dense and it doesnt fit with the rhythm even though this slider you follow vocal

note : maybe put some jump especially on the kiai time? for decrease the gap with the top diff

good

[Reflection]
00:27:630 (1) - ctrl h for better flow between (1,2,3)
00:29:787 (3,1) - avoid this overlap? im just dont like it xd
01:00:669 (1) - im prefer you del this spinner and add some object instead (follow the vocal) cause im feel odd with this spinner (idk how to explain this one lol)
01:08:807 (2,3) - blanket it? for make it neat ~

thats it from me
GL!
Topic Starter
Agatsu

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

nope

[Easy]
00:07:238 (3) - make the slidertail on the red tick cause it would make sense than on the white tick imo which?
00:34:689 (3) - im feel this slider would be great if you ctrl j it cause it would make the flow a bit smoother than before i like it more when it's has more circular flow
00:52:728 (2) - straight slider for better imo cause this slider looks make the flow a bit odd ok
00:54:297 (1) - 3/2 reverse slider? cause the rhythm goes well when i put that slider (emphatize to vocal and drum) fixed
01:01:748 (1) - clap here? cause i hear drum sound here even though the volume is low it already has whistle and finish so it'd sound weird for a clap to also be there
01:17:826 (1) - curve this a bit for make better blanket with the previous object ok
01:20:179 (4) - same as 00:34:689 (3) - .

[Reflection]
00:27:630 (1) - ctrl h for better flow between (1,2,3) fixed
00:29:787 (3,1) - avoid this overlap? im just dont like it xd it's fine
01:00:669 (1) - im prefer you del this spinner and add some object instead (follow the vocal) cause im feel odd with this spinner (idk how to explain this one lol) it gives the player resting time after the jumps
01:08:807 (2,3) - blanket it? for make it neat ~ ok

thats it from me
GL!
thx nano :)
Trust
from queue

[Easy]

  1. 00:27:630 (3) - Clap instead of whistle on the tail to correspond with the drum?
  2. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle here seems like enough, the finish isn't accentuating anything significant
  3. 00:38:611 (1) - Same as above
  4. 00:54:297 (1) - Missing clap on the tail
  5. 00:55:865 (2) - Same as above
[Corinn's Normal]

  1. 00:24:493 (5) - Move this slider down a few grids so it can be more in line with distance snap
  2. 00:28:807 (7) - Clap here is more fitting with the drum
  3. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle sounds fine here as there is no cymbal for the finish to emphasize. Meanwhile you can use a finish on 00:33:709 (4)
  4. 00:57:434 (1) - Same here, finish seems like too much
[Misure's Hard]

  1. 00:34:297 (4,5,6) - This is strangely undermapped for a Hard difficulty. The drums play in triplets so consider mapping the red ticks. You could use a rhythm like this that would fit well for a Hard diff:
  2. 01:27:238 (1) - NC?
[Reflection]

  1. 00:08:218 (4,5,6) - The snap here is 1/6. You may want to use a slider to cover it.
  2. 00:41:356 (6) - Missed a clap for the drum
  3. 01:14:003 (2,3,4) - Add claps to these notes like you had at 01:24:885 (1,2,3,4) so your streams are consistent in hitsounding
gl
Akitoshi

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

[Normal]
00:52:728 (4,5) - ctrl g this for vocal
01:01:748 (1) - same as easy cymbals is enough here i guess

Trust wrote:

[Corinn's Normal]

  1. 00:24:493 (5) - Move this slider down a few grids so it can be more in line with distance snap
  2. 00:28:807 (7) - Clap here is more fitting with the drum
  3. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle sounds fine here as there is no cymbal for the finish to emphasize. Meanwhile you can use a finish on 00:33:709 (4)
  4. 00:57:434 (1) - Same here, finish seems like too much
no reply = fixed, thanks boiz

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Misure
in hard, for 00:34:101 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd like to follow the strong drum, so keep it for now
others fixed

Thanks both for modding!

Codesu
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Artist:Sawai Miku
ArtistUnicode:沢井美空
Creator:Agatsu
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Source:冴えない彼女の育てかた
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Topic Starter
Agatsu

Trust wrote:

from queue

[Easy]

  1. 00:27:630 (3) - Clap instead of whistle on the tail to correspond with the drum? it'd ruin consistency
  2. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle here seems like enough, the finish isn't accentuating anything significant there is a strong cymbal here
  3. 00:38:611 (1) - Same as above ^
  4. 00:54:297 (1) - Missing clap on the tail fixed
  5. 00:55:865 (2) - Same as above fixed
[Reflection]

  1. 00:08:218 (4,5,6) - The snap here is 1/6. You may want to use a slider to cover it. doesn't sound like it :/
  2. 00:41:356 (6) - Missed a clap for the drum it sounds weird with a clap cuz it a softer drum sound than the rest
  3. 01:14:003 (2,3,4) - Add claps to these notes like you had at 01:24:885 (1,2,3,4) so your streams are consistent in hitsounding it'd sound bad because there's already claps on 01:13:513 (2,3,4) -
gl
thanks :)
Trust

Agatsu wrote:

  1. 00:08:218 (4,5,6) - The snap here is 1/6. You may want to use a slider to cover it. doesn't sound like it :/
I wouldn't suggest it if I didn't know for a fact this is the case. Refer to this exact timestamp in Misure's diff and the Insane of sodarose's mapset and see for yourself.

Agatsu wrote:

  1. 00:32:336 (1) - Just a whistle here seems like enough, the finish isn't accentuating anything significant there is a strong cymbal here
There isn't. That's just the finish you put there.
Topic Starter
Agatsu
fixed both!
_sponez
Hello! I am from mod queue.

  • [Corinn's Normal]
  1. 00:11:748 - Here would like once again to press. I would add here a circle or 00:11:552 (3) changed in the slider.

    [Misure's Hard]
  2. 00:21:650 (2) - I would add here a circle.

    [Reflection]
  3. 00:13:709 (2) - maybe better move to x=357 and y=330?

    Nothing else is found. Good luck!
Misure
@Dron4ik_G: it's more consistent with this rhythm imo so keep it :P

thanks for your modding!
Ryuusei Aika
from queue

Easy
01:17:042 (4,1) - this blanket can be improved
00:10:375 (2) - nc here?

other diffs are already 10/10 for me
gl xd
Topic Starter
Agatsu

Dron4ik_G wrote:

Hello! I am from mod queue.

  • [Reflection]
  1. 00:13:709 (2) - maybe better move to x=357 and y=330? nah

    Nothing else is found. Good luck!

Ryuusei Aika wrote:

from queue

Easy
01:17:042 (4,1) - this blanket can be improved fixed
00:10:375 (2) - nc here? no cause the nc on 00:09:983 (1) - already covers it

other diffs are already 10/10 for me
gl xd
thanks!
A r M i N
q

[Reflection]

00:15:081 (1,2) - space those more to emphasize (2)
00:25:081 (3,4) - blanket
00:44:689 (6,1) - ^
00:48:414 (2,3) - space those more
00:48:611 (3,4) - blanket
00:51:552 (2,3) - space more
00:51:748 (3,4) - blanket
00:54:689 (2,3) - ^
00:57:826 (2,3) - ^
01:03:316 (4,3,4,5) - stack those (disable stacking http://puu.sh/tZFtk/478dd3b591.png)
01:21:748 (4,1) - blanket

[Misure]

dang, solid

[Aki]

Nothing

[Easy]

gud

I hope I helped ^^
Topic Starter
Agatsu

A r M i N wrote:

q

[Reflection]

00:15:081 (1,2) - space those more to emphasize (2)
00:25:081 (3,4) - blanket
00:44:689 (6,1) - ^
00:48:414 (2,3) - space those more
00:48:611 (3,4) - blanket
00:51:552 (2,3) - space more
00:51:748 (3,4) - blanket
00:54:689 (2,3) - ^
00:57:826 (2,3) - ^
01:03:316 (4,3,4,5) - stack those (disable stacking http://puu.sh/tZFtk/478dd3b591.png)
01:21:748 (4,1) - blanket

I hope I helped ^^
fixed all thx :)
Chalwa
Hello! From my queue! I modded it 3 days ago, when i was offline so many points can be fixed!
[General]
  1. In all diffs you have got a timing point and inherited points with other volume. I mean 00:00:964 this part. You have a inherited point you put 60% volume, but in the same point you put a timing point where you have 50% volume. You should to remove inherited point when there isn't any SV change.
  2. I think this green Combo4 colour really doesn't fit to all BGs which you used. To be honest something like 50,105,109 is really better, cause you haven't got any light green in all BGs. My colour have a girl from left in backgrounds you used on Easy and Insane diffs.
[Easy]
  1. You must remove some inherited points, because they are useless and aren't changing anything. This points are: 00:09:983 -, 00:10:375 -, 00:35:473 -.
  2. 00:39:395 (2,3) - To be honest i dont like transition you made here. In my opinion you can make it smoothier, like on screen which i put in box. I think i made flow more comfortable for newbies. Because I'm modding your map with no network I must write you where you should make a nodes in 00:40:179 (3) slider. First grey node make at 112/276, then make a red node at 128/228 and then a grey node at 152/180. Then you should to move 00:41:356 (4) to 188/76 to fix DS.
  3. 00:57:434 (1) - In my opinion you can make a curve here, because i personally don't like when you make a many straight sliders in one point, cause it can be too hard for newbies.
  4. Really nice diff
[Corinn's Normal]
  1. The same thing as Easy with inherited points, so I won't write the same thing two times.
  2. 00:14:689 (4) - I think you can make a circle here, because it's a little weird where you have 1/2 spam in similliar sounds, but you made two other rhythms. To avoid 1/2 spam i prefer you to make a circle against slider which i wrote.
  3. 00:27:238 (4) - Same as above,so won'twrite the same thing.
  4. 00:58:022 (2) - What do you think about made a Ctrl + J 00:57:434 (1) slider for make a natural movement here. It's a little suggestion, because it's only making a little better look, cause pattern now is still nice.
  5. 01:22:336 (4,5) - In my opinion you should to make a 1/1 slider here, because it's hard to follow this rhythm. I think it's better if you doesn't make a second object clickable.
  6. 01:24:885 (2) - It's really confusing why did you put a clap sound in end of slider when it's nothing to emphasize from that loud hitsound.
[Misure's Hard]
  1. 00:08:218 (4) - I think this slider can be a bit complicated. 1/6 beats in Hard diff are a bit too hard. You cna make two circles on red and white tick what will be much more readable than this 1/6 double-repeated slider.
  2. 00:29:591 (2) - What do you think about move this to 31/96 to improve flow a bit? I think a circle what will make 00:29:199 (1,2,3) is more comfortable to aim.
  3. The best diff in map imo.
[Reflection]
  1. 00:21:944 (4) - To be honest this 1/8 slider is overmapped. I can only hear here 1/4 sound, so you should to make here 1/4 double-repeated slider. Altrough it's less funnier to play, but better for read.
  2. 00:38:611 (1,4) - This overlap doesn't looks good, i think it's a bit random. My suggestion is make in this slider a little to up for avoid this a bit ugly overlap.
  3. Also good diff.
END!
I really like your mapping style! Also GDs are fine. It was really hard to catch something, so you should to get BN :)
GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
Agatsu

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! From my queue! I modded it 3 days ago, when i was offline so many points can be fixed!
[General]
  1. In all diffs you have got a timing point and inherited points with other volume. I mean 00:00:964 this part. You have a inherited point you put 60% volume, but in the same point you put a timing point where you have 50% volume. You should to remove inherited point when there isn't any SV change. fixed
  2. I think this green Combo4 colour really doesn't fit to all BGs which you used. To be honest something like 50,105,109 is really better, cause you haven't got any light green in all BGs. My colour have a girl from left in backgrounds you used on Easy and Insane diffs. the combo colours relate to the video and there's a light green colour shown frequently
[Easy]
  1. You must remove some inherited points, because they are useless and aren't changing anything. This points are: 00:09:983 -, 00:10:375 -, 00:35:473 -. fixed
  2. 00:39:395 (2,3) - To be honest i dont like transition you made here. In my opinion you can make it smoothier, like on screen which i put in box. I think i made flow more comfortable for newbies. Because I'm modding your map with no network I must write you where you should make a nodes in 00:40:179 (3) slider. First grey node make at 112/276, then make a red node at 128/228 and then a grey node at 152/180. Then you should to move 00:41:356 (4) to 188/76 to fix DS. did something similiar
  3. 00:57:434 (1) - In my opinion you can make a curve here, because i personally don't like when you make a many straight sliders in one point, cause it can be too hard for newbies. fixed
  4. Really nice diff
[Reflection]
  1. 00:21:944 (4) - To be honest this 1/8 slider is overmapped. I can only hear here 1/4 sound, so you should to make here 1/4 double-repeated slider. Altrough it's less funnier to play, but better for read. sure
  2. 00:38:611 (1,4) - This overlap doesn't looks good, i think it's a bit random. My suggestion is make in this slider a little to up for avoid this a bit ugly overlap. i really like them overlapped
  3. Also good diff.
END!
I really like your mapping style! Also GDs are fine. It was really hard to catch something, so you should to get BN :)
[color=99aa99]GOOD LUCK![/color]
thanks chalwa!
Akitoshi

Dron4ik_G wrote:

  • [Corinn's Normal]
  1. 00:11:748 - Here would like once again to press. I would add here a circle or 00:11:552 (3) changed in the slider. too much already

Chalwa wrote:

[Corinn's Normal]
  1. The same thing as Easy with inherited points, so I won't write the same thing two times. not really an issue but k
  2. 00:14:689 (4) - I think you can make a circle here, because it's a little weird where you have 1/2 spam in similliar sounds, but you made two other rhythms. To avoid 1/2 spam i prefer you to make a circle against slider which i wrote. current one is fine as the bpm is low enough to catch up the player with few 1/2 spams.
  3. 00:27:238 (4) - Same as above,so won'twrite the same thing. ^
  4. 00:58:022 (2) - What do you think about made a Ctrl + J 00:57:434 (1) slider for make a natural movement here. It's a little suggestion, because it's only making a little better look, cause pattern now is still nice. i still prefer the counterflow w
  5. 01:22:336 (4,5) - In my opinion you should to make a 1/1 slider here, because it's hard to follow this rhythm. I think it's better if you doesn't make a second object clickable. vocals, since 01:20:963 (1,2,3) - is following vocals too
  6. 01:24:885 (2) - It's really confusing why did you put a clap sound in end of slider when it's nothing to emphasize from that loud hitsound. there's a drum, trust me
i added some hitsounds i guess
thanks

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Misure

Chalwa wrote:

[Misure's Hard]
  1. 00:08:218 (4) - I think this slider can be a bit complicated. 1/6 beats in Hard diff are a bit too hard. You cna make two circles on red and white tick what will be much more readable than this 1/6 double-repeated slider.
    :arrow: will take more advice from others about this :P
  2. 00:29:591 (2) - What do you think about move this to 31/96 to improve flow a bit? I think a circle what will make 00:29:199 (1,2,3) is more comfortable to aim.
    :arrow: kk fixed
  3. The best diff in map imo.
    thanks www
thanks for your modding!

Codesu
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William K
Hi, as requested :3

[General]

  1. AiMod said:
    1. Tags Conflict with another diffs.
    2. Audio file conflicts with Corinn's Normal
    3. Don't forget to put spacing at the Romanized Title "Colorful. (AnimeVer.)"

[Reflection]

  1. 00:03:905 (7,8) - I think those two ticks here has a same instrument with 00:03:316 (4,5) - without anything added in it? I recommend making a kick slider like 00:03:316 (4,5) - as they sound pretty much the same each other.
  2. 00:04:689 (2) - This has no right to be emphasized or spaced more than 00:04:689 (2,3) - since it's pretty weird that the strong sound is spaced less than a weaker sound. How about emphasizing 00:04:885 (3) - , by making the spacing from 00:04:101 (1,2) - smaller but 00:04:689 (2,3) - bigger. Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7337896 Suggesting this as it is similar to the current one.
  3. 00:10:277 - How about nerfing the volume here to about 20%-30% so it gives more impact to the cymbals at 00:10:375 - ? And the sound at 00:10:277 - isn't really important too.
  4. 00:11:356 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Personally, I don't really like the 1/2 rhythm spams as the part is pretty calm and 1/2 rhythm just feels too dense. As you're following the vocals more here than the instruments, I recommend making 00:12:532 (4) - a 1/1 slider like you did at 00:15:669 (3) - and 00:10:964 (3,4) - which has 1/1 rhythm gaps. And also, take a look at 00:25:081 (3) - they're similar each other.
  5. 00:15:081 (1,2) - How about a CTRL+G on rhythm here? It will follow the vocals more if the 1/2 slider is on 00:15:277 - imo.
  6. 00:17:042 (2) - The emphasis given here doesn't give enough impact to the drums as they're similarly spaced, and it's also lower than the others at 00:19:395 (4) - and 00:18:611 (2) - in terms of spacing.
  7. 00:21:748 (2) - If this is a single note to make players that it's a drum, then 00:21:356 (1) - this should be divided into two kick sliders for the drums at 00:21:552 - .
  8. 00:24:885 (2) - Miss emphasis here? You did an emphasis to 00:12:336 (3) - which has a similar section. I suggest emphasizing for consistency.
  9. 00:32:728 (2) - Should've been spaced more for emphasis. Look at 00:33:513 (4) - for instance.
  10. 00:59:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These jumps are pretty questionable, because it's spaced so large when the music isn't as intense as the kiai. Not even the kiai has a large spacing like this, or isn't as hard as this as the kiai is filled with sliders.
[]
Emphasis from 00:35:473 - to 00:48:022 - are questionable on some parts like for example, you emphasized the drums at 00:37:826 (4) - by enlarging the spacing but at 00:36:258 (3) - you gave a default spacing you used. And also at 00:39:199 (2) - too, you gave a large spacing for this note and you gave a default spacing for 00:39:395 (3) - even though 00:39:395 (3) - is stronger than the note before. I recommend checking this part as you've been emphasizing drums from the start of the difficulty.

[Hitsounding]

  1. 00:03:218 (3) - Miss clap?
  2. 00:03:709 - Miss clap too.
  3. 00:40:964 - Miss clap too.
  4. 00:16:356 (5) - Miss clap?
  5. 00:21:552 - Miss clap.

That's all, I guess. GL!
Topic Starter
Agatsu

William K wrote:

Hi, as requested :3

[General]

  1. AiMod said:
    1. Tags Conflict with another diffs.
    2. Audio file conflicts with Corinn's Normal
    3. Don't forget to put spacing at the Romanized Title "Colorful. (AnimeVer.)"

[Reflection]

  1. 00:03:905 (7,8) - I think those two ticks here has a same instrument with 00:03:316 (4,5) - without anything added in it? I recommend making a kick slider like 00:03:316 (4,5) - as they sound pretty much the same each other.
  2. 00:04:689 (2) - This has no right to be emphasized or spaced more than 00:04:689 (2,3) - since it's pretty weird that the strong sound is spaced less than a weaker sound. How about emphasizing 00:04:885 (3) - , by making the spacing from 00:04:101 (1,2) - smaller but 00:04:689 (2,3) - bigger. Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7337896 Suggesting this as it is similar to the current one.
  3. 00:10:277 - How about nerfing the volume here to about 20%-30% so it gives more impact to the cymbals at 00:10:375 - ? And the sound at 00:10:277 - isn't really important too.
  4. 00:11:356 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Personally, I don't really like the 1/2 rhythm spams as the part is pretty calm and 1/2 rhythm just feels too dense. As you're following the vocals more here than the instruments, I recommend making 00:12:532 (4) - a 1/1 slider like you did at 00:15:669 (3) - and 00:10:964 (3,4) - which has 1/1 rhythm gaps. And also, take a look at 00:25:081 (3) - they're similar each other.
  5. 00:15:081 (1,2) - How about a CTRL+G on rhythm here? It will follow the vocals more if the 1/2 slider is on 00:15:277 - imo.
  6. 00:17:042 (2) - The emphasis given here doesn't give enough impact to the drums as they're similarly spaced, and it's also lower than the others at 00:19:395 (4) - and 00:18:611 (2) - in terms of spacing.
  7. 00:21:748 (2) - If this is a single note to make players that it's a drum, then 00:21:356 (1) - this should be divided into two kick sliders for the drums at 00:21:552 - .
  8. 00:24:885 (2) - Miss emphasis here? You did an emphasis to 00:12:336 (3) - which has a similar section. I suggest emphasizing for consistency.
  9. 00:32:728 (2) - Should've been spaced more for emphasis. Look at 00:33:513 (4) - for instance.
  10. 00:59:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These jumps are pretty questionable, because it's spaced so large when the music isn't as intense as the kiai. Not even the kiai has a large spacing like this, or isn't as hard as this as the kiai is filled with sliders.
[]
Emphasis from 00:35:473 - to 00:48:022 - are questionable on some parts like for example, you emphasized the drums at 00:37:826 (4) - by enlarging the spacing but at 00:36:258 (3) - you gave a default spacing you used. And also at 00:39:199 (2) - too, you gave a large spacing for this note and you gave a default spacing for 00:39:395 (3) - even though 00:39:395 (3) - is stronger than the note before. I recommend checking this part as you've been emphasizing drums from the start of the difficulty.

[Hitsounding]

  1. 00:03:218 (3) - Miss clap?
  2. 00:03:709 - Miss clap too.
  3. 00:40:964 - Miss clap too.
  4. 00:16:356 (5) - Miss clap?
  5. 00:21:552 - Miss clap.

That's all, I guess. GL!
fixed all thx :)
Yahuri
NM from queue ^-^

General
-the background is the same as an already ranked map, you could change it for more differentiation :P https://osu.ppy.sh/s/529594 (but flipped wait what)

Corinn's Normal
00:09:983 (5) - add drum-finish here?
00:35:081 - ^
00:47:630 - ^
01:00:179 - ^
01:25:277 (3) - ^ both head and tail
00:44:101 (4) - how about moving the red anchor here 00:44:395 - to emphasize drum?
00:53:121 (5) - change to 1/2 reverse slider to catch the drum here 00:53:316
01:04:493 - could change up the rhythm a bit here to emphasize the "mawaru mawaru" suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7354927 (if you dont like the NC pattern you could also try a slider-circle variation)
01:17:042 - ^ "meguru meguru"
01:22:728 (5) - change to 1/2 slider for the drum here 01:22:924

Reflection
00:03:709 (5,1) - the DS here is too big imo, make it similar to 00:00:767 (3,1) ?
00:05:865 (2,3) - i think you can space this out more for emphasis on guitar and drum
00:08:414 - add drum-finish hitsound?
00:09:983 - ^
00:16:454 - ^
00:21:846 - ^
00:21:944 - ^
00:22:140 (3,4,1) - ^ ok i wont point out more of that, but if you do add extra drum stuff then apply to all diffs
00:23:513 (3,4) - this pattern is weird imo because the 1/1 spaced stack never occurs anywhere else in the map. also, theres a sound here (guitar i think?) 00:23:316 - 00:23:905 which also occurs at 00:24:885 - 00:25:473. i think you should use the same rhythm as here 00:24:885 (2,3)
00:49:983 (2,3) - space out more for emphasis on the melody and clap
00:53:513 (4,5) - space out for vocals and clap
00:53:120 (2,3) - ^
00:54:689 (2,3) - ^
00:57:826 (2,3) - ^
00:57:238 (6,1) - ^ for vocals and finish hitsound
00:51:748 (3,2) - stack?
00:54:101 (6,7) - add claps
01:14:689 (1,2,3) - 1-2 should have lower or same DS as 2-3 imo because 2 only has vocals, while 3 has vocals and a kick drum
01:23:513 (4,5) - space out more for emphasis on vocals + clap. suggestion: stack 5 on tail of 01:22:728 (2)

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Agatsu

Yahuri wrote:

NM from queue ^-^

General
-the background is the same as an already ranked map, you could change it for more differentiation :P https://osu.ppy.sh/s/529594 (but flipped wait what) i like my flipped bg (= v =)

Reflection
00:03:709 (5,1) - the DS here is too big imo, make it similar to 00:00:767 (3,1) ?
00:05:865 (2,3) - i think you can space this out more for emphasis on guitar and drum
00:08:414 - add drum-finish hitsound?
00:09:983 - ^
00:16:454 - ^
00:21:846 - ^
00:21:944 - ^
00:22:140 (3,4,1) - ^ ok i wont point out more of that, but if you do add extra drum stuff then apply to all diffs not a big fan of drum-finish
00:23:513 (3,4) - this pattern is weird imo because the 1/1 spaced stack never occurs anywhere else in the map. also, theres a sound here (guitar i think?) 00:23:316 - 00:23:905 which also occurs at 00:24:885 - 00:25:473. i think you should use the same rhythm as here 00:24:885 (2,3)
00:49:983 (2,3) - space out more for emphasis on the melody and clap
00:53:513 (4,5) - space out for vocals and clap
00:53:120 (2,3) - ^
00:54:689 (2,3) - ^
00:57:826 (2,3) - ^
00:57:238 (6,1) - ^ for vocals and finish hitsound
00:51:748 (3,2) - stack?
00:54:101 (6,7) - add claps
01:14:689 (1,2,3) - 1-2 should have lower or same DS as 2-3 imo because 2 only has vocals, while 3 has vocals and a kick drum
01:23:513 (4,5) - space out more for emphasis on vocals + clap. suggestion: stack 5 on tail of 01:22:728 (2)

Good luck~
no reply=fixed
thx!
Akitoshi

Yahuri wrote:

Corinn's Normal
00:09:983 (5) - add drum-finish here?
00:35:081 - ^
00:47:630 - ^
01:00:179 - ^
01:25:277 (3) - ^ both head and tail used drum clap instead except the first one, sounds strange for my ears lo
00:44:101 (4) - how about moving the red anchor here 00:44:395 - to emphasize drum? nah looks ugly if I do that D:
00:53:121 (5) - change to 1/2 reverse slider to catch the drum here 00:53:316 prioritizing vocal, and also for the intensity of the objects too.
01:04:493 - could change up the rhythm a bit here to emphasize the "mawaru mawaru" suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7354927 (if you dont like the NC pattern you could also try a slider-circle variation) uhm Actually I mapped them based on lyrics too... that "mawaru mawaru" is literally repeating so reverse here is making enough sense.
01:17:042 - ^ "meguru meguru" ^
01:22:728 (5) - change to 1/2 slider for the drum here 01:22:924 consistency with 01:20:963 (1,2) - regardless of skip-beat
thank you!

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Monstrata
Reflection

Adding soft whistles on parts like 00:10:964 - 00:12:532 - to follow vocals would be nice. You consistently map this vocal melody with stuff like 00:17:238 - 00:18:807 - 00:20:375 - etc... so this would benefit your rhythm choice. Anyways if you like this idea apply it to other diffs too as you see fit.
00:23:513 - Applies here and elsewhere! You probably have the pattern now.
00:32:336 (1) - Feels like it could be a bit lower for more emphasis, considering the spacing of 3>4
01:21:356 (2,3) - This sounds more like a 1/2 slider. The red tick doesn't seem deserving of a circle.

Misure's Hard

00:00:964 - Red and green timing points conflict.
00:53:120 (3,4) - This spacing increase seemed kind of random. You don't relaly use jumps that often so heres an odd place to put a jump.
00:53:513 (4,5,6) - With stacking enabled, the visual spacing is a bit off. Try moving 00:54:102 (6,7,1) - down a bit to account for the stacking.

Corinn's Normal

00:00:964 - Red and green timing points conflict. You can get Agatsu to fix I think.

Easy

AR 4 is too high imo. Use AR 3.
HP 3 is a bit high too. Usually I see this on high bpm Easies that are like 1.8 stars ish. I recommend HP 2, and HP 3.5 on Normal to balance the spread.

[]

Clean map, you can call me back.
Misure

Monstrata wrote:

Misure's Hard

00:00:964 - Red and green timing points conflict.
00:53:120 (3,4) - This spacing increase seemed kind of random. You don't relaly use jumps that often so heres an odd place to put a jump.
:arrow: umm I'd like to keep it cautz of rhythm change (ahh I mean it turns stronger afterwards) so it may fit here as the transform part with a small jump
00:53:513 (4,5,6) - With stacking enabled, the visual spacing is a bit off. Try moving 00:54:102 (6,7,1) - down a bit to account for the stacking.

Others fixed, thanks Mr. Mons :)


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241,186,72532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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