CDFA wrote:

IT'S TIME

General:
Title should be capitalized, so it says "Burn It Up." fixed
Would this be cut ver or like is this a legit short ver? fixed
Idunno, it seems like a LOT of copy-paste.

Insane:
00:31:900 (7) - Flip this so it blankets (6)? I think it already seems good
00:35:962 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It might make more sense to have the normal hitsounded parts be the larger spaced parts while the soft hitsounded parts as the smaller spaced super lol, fixed
00:40:650 (4) - Even this up so it makes a pretty triangle with (2) and (3) I don't think it's a good idea:c
00:42:525 (1) - Is there a reason to have this slowdown? not really, feels good to me
00:44:087 (5,6,7) - AAAH decreased the distance
00:46:275 (6) - ANTI-JUMPS OH NO if you can't read it you should keep playing the hard (?
00:52:993 (2) - Move this to avoid overlap. I like overlap
00:54:087 (5,6,7) - changed something
00:57:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - THIS SPACING INCREASE OH NO it totally fits
01:08:775 (1) - There's so much more you could do with this. For an insane diff, this slider is unfitting it fits in my opinion, the slowdown feels good because the rhythm stops there
01:28:775 (6) - ^ yeah you're probably right here, but idk how to change it, if you give me some idea I'll change
Apply the copy-pasted stuff here yeah
02:09:634 (6,7,8) - I literally have so much trouble hearing this in the music. Along with the misleading spacing, this pattern is quite literally impossible to read. I will ask for some test plays, if some of them gets a 100 here I'll change

Hard:
00:33:150 (2) - Move this so there isn't overlap? why u hate overlap ;_;

Normal:
I feel like a lot of the map is incredibly repetitive, following the background drums. Try following the vocals at times I'll try

Easy:
Tick Rate 1?
It's fine I guess but it's very 1/1y, which is really bad and boring ;A;. I'll try to do something but 1/1 is the best way for beginners

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hola o/

Mod como lo pediste, bueno, solo seran algunas observaciones, ya que el mapa esta bien hecho en mi opinion.

[Hard]
00:47:993 (2,3) - El spacing aqui es demasiado grande x,x no creo que un salto pequeño vaya mal en una hard
01:57:993 (2,3) - ^ no creo que un salto pequeño vaya mal en una hard

[Insane]
00:35:493 (8) - Tal vez NC aqui ok lo agrege en el slider anterior
00:42:525 (1) - No estoy seguro si este slider esta bien con esa velocidad. ya pensare en algo
00:52:525 (1) - ^
01:52:525 (1) - ^
02:02:525 (1) - ^
00:49:087 (5) - NC aqui para marcar el cambio de spacing, ademas que queda con el "No pares~". hecho
01:59:087 (5) - ^ hecho
02:09:400 (5) - Tal vez NC aqui para intentar marcar el cambio de 1/4 a 3/8. hecho

Easy y Normal se ven bien, creo seria todo de mi parte, kds solo si fue util para ti >.<
Buena suerte o/

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey. Mod from my Queues



nothing much to say here. Nice mapset and nice song c:

General

1. actually I think 100% volumen is a bit loud :/ maybe reduce 80% and on the 80% to 60%? completely enough done

Easy

1. nothing to say here

Normall

1. nothing much to say here just some suggestions here
2. 01:00:025 (1,2) - wrong spacing yes but it is easier to read imo
3. 01:01:275 (3,4) - same here
4. 01:02:525 (1,2,3,4) - and also same here
5. 01:10:025 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I wouldntmake spacing like this^^

Hard

1. 00:24:712 (5) - this Note sound a bit off here.may make a long slider from here until 00:24:712 (5)? sound much better imo fixed
2. 00:33:150 (2) - I wouldnt overlap this slider. it looks ugly imo. Ctrg + H with fixing spacing? second time that someone tell this, changed
3. 00:50:337 (2,3) - make a blanket like this here http://puu.sh/3kdti.jpg. it make the pattern better seems better as it is in my opinion
4. 00:51:587 (2,3) - same here
5. 01:01:275 (4,5) - here the same. I would make blanket here. look more better
6. 01:21:275 (4,5) - ^ ?
7. 01:23:775 (4,5) - ^
8. 02:00:337 (2,3,2,3) - same as 00:50:337^^^^

Insane

1. 00:52:993 (2) - move it to x 256 y 216 to make it central with (3,4) nu:c
2. 02:02:993 (2) - same here move it central with (3,4)

That's all C: also nice map and good luck to get it ranke <3

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Ok, Here I am (No hay ganas de hablar en ingles, lo hago en español xD)

[Easy:]

• 00:30:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - Se siente muy vacia esta seccion, en cuanto a hitsounds. Me parece que juegan bien los claps en los on-beats 2,4 (al menos en esta seccion), deberias intentar agregarlos okay
• 00:36:275 (2,3) - Yo agregaria soft whistles en estas notas, siguen bien la voz en mi opinion okay
• 00:40:025 - 01:00:025 - Este kiai se torna demasiado aburrido, solo el Normal hitsound, sin ninguna adicion. Como no te gustan los whistles, deberias intentar algun que otro clap alguna vez, cuando quede mejor con la cancion, pero no tiene sentido dejarlo sin hitsounds (bueno, basicamente deberias agregar mas claps en toda la dificultad, intenta ver donde se sienten mas coherentes y agregalos por ti solo) okay
• 00:50:025 (1,2) - Variar un poco el ritmo no esta mal en una Easy, el constante 1/1 tambien hace aburrido el mapa. Viendo que el BPM es bajo, podrias usar un patron como este ritmicamente (ya que no seria complicado por esta razon), y podrias ubicar las notas mas o menos como te voy a mostrar en el screenshoot, rompiendo un poco la simetria No me gusta la idea, se supone que estas dificultades son para jugadores nuevos, que no han jugado antes, si quieres mas variacion de ritmo, sube una dificultad!

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• 00:52:525 (3) - Esto es medio raro, no termina de seguir la musica completamente. Te sugiero que hagas algo mas o menos a lo anterior (no centres tu mapeo solo en la simetria ) hice algo diferente
• 01:30:025 (3) - Siento que el Normal finish juega mejor que el soft. Podrias reducirle un poco el volumen si lo sientes alto okay
• 01:50:025 - 02:08:775 - Segui las sugerencias que te di en el primer kiai, ya que usaste copy/paste okay
• 02:10:025 (6) - Me parece que un New Combo aca, jugaria bien de bien, principalmente viendo la distancia que hay con la nota anterior en el timeline okay

- A pesar de que no me gusta mucho el copy/paste, aca no esta tan mal usado. En general esta bien la dificultad, solo que necesita mas hitsounds

[Normal:]

• 00:36:275 (2,3) - Mismo que en la Easy, me convencen mas los soft whistles okay
• 01:30:025 (7) - Normal Finish en lugar del soft okay

- Omg.. Nada mas para decir . Esta bien de bien esta diff.

[Hard:]

• 01:30:025 (7) - Normal Finish en lugar del soft okay

- Esto esta pasando? wtf?? Todo bien para mi

[Insane:]

First of all, I'd like to say thanks to Frostmourne and SapphireGhost for their testplay

• Settings:
--> Deberias usar HP7 y OD8 para esta cancion, se siente mejor (HP-1 , OD+1) okay

• 00:40:337 (2,3,4) - Creo que seria mejor mantener el spacing consistente entre estas 3 notas, ya que hace el patron mas constante a la hora de jugar el mapa, asi que propongo mover (3) a x:404 y:336 okay
• 00:41:587 (2,3,4) - (^) okay
• 00:42:525 (1) - Estos cambios de velocidades son realmente innecesarios, ya que no siguen nada en la musica. Vas a ver que cuando eliminas esa linea verde que tenes con 0.50x todo fluye mejor, asi que deberias eliminarla (btw, sugerencia hecha por SG, la cual yo estoy de acuerdo) ya me acostumbre a ellos D: creo que si aumento un slider tick seran mucho mas faciles de leer ^^
• 00:52:525 (1) - (^) ^
• 01:19:243 (7,8,9) - Teniendo este 3-plet una vez sola en el mapset es algo raro y hasta puede llegar a ser algo confuso (incluso para esta diff.). Me parece una mejor idea, cambiar estas 3 notas por un slider en 1/8 en su lugar, me parece que los jugadores se van a guiar mejor por esto y siento que el flow va a ser mayor (De acuerdo con Frost btw) Bueno yo pedi un monton de test plays, y nunca se confundieron aqui, y creo que un slider no queda bien ..
• 01:30:025 (7) - Normal Finish en lugar del soft okay
• 01:50:337 (2,3,4) - Manten el spacing consistente entre estas 3 notas pls (Bueno, basicamente aplica todo lo que te dije en el primer kiai, you know, copy/paste ) okay

- Todo lo demas parece estar bien, yo lo siento bien y ellos no tuvieron problemas tampoco. Les pedi testplay porque andaba dudando acerca de unos patrones aca, pero todo parece estar bien.

Medio corto este mod xD..
Todo parece estar bastante bien, solo deberias agregar mas hitsounds en Easy principalmente.
Hablame cuando este todo listo y actualizado

Gonzvlo wrote:

Deberías moverlo a Pending, supongo o3o

eldnl wrote:

• 00:42:525 (1) - Estos cambios de velocidades son realmente innecesarios, ya que no siguen nada en la musica. Vas a ver que cuando eliminas esa linea verde que tenes con 0.50x todo fluye mejor, asi que deberias eliminarla (btw, sugerencia hecha por SG, la cual yo estoy de acuerdo) ya me acostumbre a ellos D: creo que si aumento un slider tick seran mucho mas faciles de leer ^^

eldnl wrote:

Ok, quite los slowdown, pero no agregue el new combo, me parece que queda mal D:

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ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Yo creo que le faltan más tags... osea, reggaeton solo está bien escrito, pero seguro muchos buscaran por regeton, regateon, y similares xD

-Cloudchaser wrote:

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Yo creo que le faltan más tags... osea, reggaeton solo está bien escrito, pero seguro muchos buscaran por regeton, regateon, y similares xD

Yo lo encuentro innecesario. Reggaeton es la única manera de escribirlo.

1. Hard: Perhaps consider NC-ing 01:30:025 (5) also on Hard for beauty (extra color) before the break
2. Easy: Also perhaps use 0.8x spacing on 00:27:525 (3,1) as you previously did to make it more intuitive for beginners (:

Niva wrote:

Umm... Well, I checked this and the opening's timing is very off orz (you can notice that 00:22:525 (1) comes in very early compared to the vocals, especially 00:22:568 (1,2,3) on Hard) The vocals are off but the instrumental feels perfectly fine with offset 25 that's why there are sliders instead of notes:p

I got offset 68 here and another timing section at 30025, this should do (~+40ms offset from your original one, then resetted on 30025 where the bass comes) - also with this timing some notes, such as 00:27:984 (2) and 00:29:234 (5) would land perfectly in 1/3 xD I'm pretty sure this song only have a single timing, as I said before, the voice is off but the instrumental is okay with the actual timing.

Map-wise all is good though, just two things I'd like to note:

1. Hard: Perhaps consider NC-ing 01:30:025 (5) also on Hard for beauty (extra color) before the break Could be but I haven't added a new combo on any other difficulty, I'll keep this as it is to be consistent.
2. Easy: Also perhaps use 0.8x spacing on 00:27:525 (3,1) as you previously did to make it more intuitive for beginners (: I'm not sure about this, it could work but then the next spacing will feels really weird, so I'll keep this as well.

(feel free to contact me afterwards for recheck though eldnl :3)

1. First offset 25 -> 68 (or around 78 if according to the timing confirmed by Byaku and UWS)
2. Second offset (new timing section) 30025

1. 00:22:577 (1/1)
2. 00:22:577 (1/8)
3. 00:22:993 (1/6)
4. 00:23:202 (1/1)
5. 00:23:436 (1/8)
6. 00:23:618 (1/6)
7. 00:23:827 (1/1)
8. 00:24:061 (1/8)
9. 00:24:217 (1/8)

1. 00:22:528 (1) - Snap to white tick
2. 00:29:247 (5) - Start on 00:29:208 (1/8), end on white tick
3. 00:29:703 (6) - Move to 00:29:755 (6), as you did in Hard

SPOILER

1. Timing is still off. I'm not 100% confident with mine, but give it a try and see what you think.

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:

1. Timing is still off. I'm not 100% confident with mine, but give it a try and see what you think.

Regardless, you should really get someone who's very good at timing to look over it. I'll give it a proper mod when timing is all good. From what I can see, you shouldn't have to use 1/8, 1/12 or 1/16 to get the beats or vocals to snap right, 1/4 and 1/3 should be enough.

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YGOkid8 wrote:

that's true, but considering what eldnl has mapped to, i didn't see any reason 1/8+ beat snap divisors should be used. i found the vocals quite easily mapped to 1/4 and 1/6 after adjusting timing.

anyway i'm about to sleep now (should've been to sleep a while ago), so i'll give the map another check tomorrow. eldnl, please apply lolcubes' timing by then~

pimpG wrote:

artist for that map is wrong https://osu.ppy.sh/s/45744

according to wikipedia, the featured artist is "Wisin & Yandel"

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wisin_%26_Yandel

its also how its writen on the album cover
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Los_V ... _Cover.jpg

in the RKellyVEVO its mentioned as "Wisin and Yandel" but i think the correct is the above mentioned

wcx19911123 wrote:

pimpG wrote:

artist for that map is wrong https://osu.ppy.sh/s/45744

according to wikipedia, the featured artist is "Wisin & Yandel"

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wisin_%26_Yandel

its also how its writen on the album cover
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Los_V ... _Cover.jpg

in the RKellyVEVO its mentioned as "Wisin and Yandel" but i think the correct is the above mentioned

seems the artist need to be confirmed, just saying

lolcubes wrote:

Also you have wrongly snapped notes at the beginning of your Insane, didn't check other diffs.
00:23:205 (2,3,4) - Judging by the spacing these should be on 1/3 ticks. fixed
00:28:048 (2) - This should be on a 1/3 tick, also fix the spacing. fixed
01:18:780 (6) - This slider is ??? it should be shorter by 1/6. Also 01:19:248 (7,8,9) - is unreadable, really really dodgy ticks used here. I suggest instead of 3 circles you make a short repeater since combining 1/6 and 1/8 is really awkward and nearly unplayable correctly. I think this is fine.

Some weird patterns (00:58:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) that are really hard to read, but eh that's okay I guess, I would recommend to make the spacing smaller.

I guess that's all.

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:

1. Timing is still off. I'm not 100% confident with mine, but give it a try and see what you think.

Regardless, you should really get someone who's very good at timing to look over it. I'll give it a proper mod when timing is all good. From what I can see, you shouldn't have to use 1/8, 1/12 or 1/16 to get the beats or vocals to snap right, 1/4 and 1/3 should be enough.

Due to the bpm, 1/6 and 1/8 are actually quite expected for songs like this, just saying.

EDIT:
After further checking (I just did a quick offset check before instead of detailed check), I have noticed some oddities with the timing I provided, I have fixed it now.
BPM 96 Offset 20080 (don't use 80, it's not correct, plus that part isn't mapped anyway) I don't think it is necessary.
BPM 96 Offset 28779 I used 28790 and it seems to work pretty well.
BPM 96 Offset 30029 fixed

This should be perfect imo:


Used OD10 to test, didn't get a single 100 haha (50s were that 1/8 triple which I just can't read correctly lol), got some lame misses though.

Also because the timing is correct now, there is an issue with a pattern in your insane (again, didn't check other diffs):
00:28:777 (4,5) - This can no longer fit on 1/3 ticks well, regardless of the vocals. This was a miss on my part and I am sorry for that, there is a simple way to fix it though. This has been fixed with the second offset imo, you can check :p
Check it out here:

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By putting them on 1/4 ticks they fit perfectly, they complement the vocals well and they also follow the true rhythm here, which also requires adding an extra circle at the end.

Gabe wrote:

in spanish, "Y" means "and"/"&". It should be better to go with the cover which is "Wisin & Yandel" fixed

ezek wrote:

*keeps waiting*

Loooctav wrote:

Will you try to rank this someday?